Mm, I agree, the sound effect was really the only decent option there to signal that MH had collapsed. I found it effective - and appropriate, too.
So, Dark Sage is not big on the compassion thing. I suppose, in a rather cold-blooded way, it would make sense to push MH to his limits - you know, to see what they have to work with. But it also shows what kind of regard they have for him: not much. Is he just a useful pawn in their power play? Possibly.
A good page nonetheless. I like where this is going. And ... did that comment of yours mean what I think it means? I don't think I want to say after my last hat-eating incident ... I'll just ponder this one quietly, then.