I like that poem LilyPichu. tough time to quit the quatrain when you're talking about 4 natures >_<, with the natures getting cut in half then reuniting at four at the end, there's a lot of cool structural stuff you could do throughout the poem to reflect that.

k, i've changed style recently. here's a random one-
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how to sing

switch the shucks, this rustle
glisten to the sun rays scorching
soaking obsidian

connect the necks
one to the next

soulful moan, the long day gone
throat the notes, no no they home
fervor reverberates