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Crystal Tears
25th May 2006, 04:28 PM
[font=Sylfaen][size=10pt]Kingdom Heartless: Preview

It’s too far gone
I can’t turn around
I have to leave
This Battleground
It hurts too much
To keep this up
I lost my Heart
I lose my luck
It shouldn’t have
To end this way
But I need to close the door
And run away
So many things
I should have said
But now its goodbye forever
And I have fled

The door was shut… Finally, he glanced down at his hands. He couldn’t see them, in fact, he couldn’t see anything. Everything was so dark… Cold, and unforgiving, but he could still hear her, her calls through the wall. He felt a single tear drip slowly down his face.

Rain… Rain… What have you done… RAIN…. RAIN…..

The voice, it was growing louder, but it was fading as well, a soft hue of light illuminated from behind him, curiously he turned.

“Naminé…”

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K, well after hitting major writers block on my other fic, I began writing this one. It's mainly a way to get random ideas and thoughts that wouldn't work well with my other one. It evolved into a fic, that’s loosely based on Kingdom Hearts.

Opinions are welcomed ^^'' and very much appreciated.

And Credit goes to my dear friend Megan for the lovely poem.

Mystic_clown
26th May 2006, 10:07 PM
Hmm, I can't wait for this. I know this is based of an RPG in the RPG forums, but I wonder if you'll stick with that plot or try something else. This will be interesting.

Hyperness is a Good Thing
27th May 2006, 12:21 AM
Heya CT! You should post a longer preview, this is such a small glimpse, nifty poem though. ^_^
I'll be waiting for you to get this fic up! ^_^