Umbreon Versus Umbrella Song

[DaBlackBandit]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d954Jjx0ifA

I'm not really sure where to put this, but this is something I made, it's a rough cut, and it probably needs to be edited better with the words and lyrics, but I would like some comments now, please if possible. This is the Umbrella Song, and I couldn't find any (well not a lot of Umbrella) through out Pokemon, so I substituted for Umbreon. Thank You very much.

[Lady Vulpix]

If you want to fix something from your previous post, edit it. Don't make a new post. I've done it for you this time, but from now on please use the http://www.pokemasters.net/forums/images/buttons/edit.gif button.

As for the video... is it just my computer or does the sound become extremely loud for a split-second every three seconds or so?