2ra: Journey Through Hoenn!

[2ra]

Chapter 1: Wrong Forecast!

Hello, my name is 2ra, and I come from a large town by the sea called Sootopolis, which is where I am currently located. I have lived here all my life, and have waited many years to get my first Pokemon. Ever since last year, that longing for a Pokemon grew even more, as last year, I was enrolled in the Pokemon Academy here in Sootopolis, one of the very best Pokemon Academies.

I've studied there for the past year, and today, I just turned thirteen. My friends, Daniella and Andrew, also got to school with me, and are in the top of my class, me being third to them.

Andrew always dreamed of getting a Treecko as a starter, and Daniella always wanted a Mudkip, yet I never decided what I wanted, but eventually Daniella convinced me into wanting to get a Torchic.

Mrs. Platt, my teacher, is about to make an announcement, so I better start listening, as yesterday she said that this announcement would be very important and that we should listen carefully....
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"Hello class!" Mrs. Platt said, walking inside the dull classroom, just like in the old days, some creaky old chairs, and a dusty old blackboard, which oddly was a bright blue, with the teachers desk right in front of it.

"I LOVE what you're wearing!" Daniella said, looking at Mrs. Platt, she was wearing a lime green shirt and come capris.

"Why thank you Daniella, but I must get to the important announcement!" Mrs. Platt said, sitting down in her desk and ruffling around all the papers on her desk, you could tell she wasn't very organized.

"Why here it is!" Mrs. Platt said, taking out a sheet of paper out of a giant pile and then her blue eyes stared at the class, especially Daniella.

"What is it?" Andrew asked, as he gets very anxious, very quick.

"Yesterday, I got a message from your Principal, Mr. Bonilla...." Mrs. Platt started to say, but got interrupted by many sighs, as many people didn't like Mr. Bonilla, as he was an old crank who seemed to be age ninety.

Ignoring the sighs, Mrs. Platt told the class "As I was saying, Mr. Bonilla told me that the top three people in this class will get their starting Pokemon, and can leave the school at once to become Pokemon Trainers!"

The class stared at Mrs. Platt, speecless, until 2ra spoke out "So which three people will get a Pokemon?"

"Good question 2ra! Hmmm......lets see...." Mrs. Platt replied, looking through her papers.

"Ah here it is! Let see....the person with the highest Grade Point Average is..... Daniella with a score of 3.999" Mrs. Platt said, smiling at Daniella, and she smiled back.

"Who else?" Jimmy asked, which was a surprise because Jimmy rarely talked.

"After Daniella, the person with the highest Grade Point Average is Andrew with a 3.75 and..." Mrs. Platt said, the suspense grew as everyone but Daniella and Andrew were interested in who was the third person to get thgeir first Pokemon.

"And the third person is?!?" 2ra asked Mrs. Platt.

"The third person is 2ra with a Grade Point Average of 3.699" Mrs. Platt said, everyone but the three called were disappointed, and 2ra almost fell out of his seat.

"2ra, Daniella, Andrew; please come with me" Mrs. Platt told them, leading them outside of the class and into a large room that was used for Pokemon battles.

"We have one more test until you get your Pokemon" Mrs. Platt said, pointing to a table with 3 Pokeballs on it.

"ANOTHER test?!" Andrew said, as he was impatient and wanted his Pokemon already.

"Yes, each of you must choose a Pokeball and battle with the Pokemon inside, that will decided the order in which each of you get your starting Pokemon and will show you if you need work with battling" Mrs. Platt said.

Daniella ran over to the table and chose the Pokeball in the middle, Andrew the one on the far right, and 2ra on the far left. They then gathered up in front of Mrs. Platt and wondered who was going to be against who.

"Ok, lets see, the first battle is Daniella versus Andrew, both of you please enter the arena" Mrs. Platt said, and as she turned around, they were both in the arena.

"Pokeball go!" Daniella said, throwing her Pokeball, which contained a Ludicolo.

"Luda! Luda!" Ludicolo said, dancing around, which made Daniella want one.

"Pokeball go!" Andrew said, except in a mocking way, throwing his Pokeball that contained a Shiftry.

"Try!" Shiftry said, kncoking Ludicolo off balance and angering Daniella.

"Ludicolo! Silence that Shifty with your Hydro Pump!" Daniella said.

Ludicolo stopped dancing and his lips turned a bright blue, then shot a large blast of water at Shiftry, but it didn't hurt it too much. Shiftry shook its body a bit, and it was dry again.

"Shiftry attack with Nature Power!" Andrew told Shiftry, it conserving its power.

Shiftry the suddenly jumped up in the air and shot a rainbow-colored leaf at Ludicolo, scratching it a bit, but otherwise Ludicolo was okay.

"What was that?" 2ra asked Mrs. Platt.

"That was a Magic Leaf, a grass attack that always hits." Mrs. Platt replied.

"Ludicolo use your Nature Power too!" Daniella said, and Ludicolo jumped up in the air as well.

Ludicolo then started to glow and shot a Solarbeam at Shiftry, knocking him out, making Daniella the winner.

"Shiftry return" Andrew said, as he ran over to where Mrs. Platt was.

"2ra it's your turn against Daniella" Mrs. Platt said, and 2ra ran over to where Andrew was and threw his Pokeball containing Grumpig.

"Grrrrr" Grumpig said, waiting for Daniella to make her move.

"Ludicolo use your Pineapple-Shaped body and attack with Body Slam!" Daniella said, and Ludicolo slammed Grumpig.

"Grumpig use your Bounce attack!" 2ra said, and Grumpig jumped up and shot down to where Ludicolo was, but right at that time Ludicolo shot a Hydro Pump, which hit on contact and knocked out Grumpig in one hit.

"Grumpig return" 2ra said, returning Grumpig and Daniella returning Ludicolo.

"Well then, Daniella picks first, then Andrew, then 2ra, as Andrew had a better grade than 2ra" Mrs. Platt said, taking back the three Pokeballs, and leading them into the next room.

"Hello!" Prof. Birch said.

"Prof. Birch?!" 2ra, Daniella, and Andrew asked in shock, as he was usually in Littleroot Town.

"Yes, Prof. Birch was on visit and came over to give you three your first Pokemon" Mrs. Platt said, throwing her red hair back and then she walked outside of the room.

"Here are three Pokemon, choose well, as tthe Pokemon you choose will decide your journey!" Prof. Birch said, taking out three Pokeballs.

"I'll take Mudkip!" Daniella said, taking the blue Pokeball and then walking outside where Mrs. Platt was.

"I'll take Treecko!" Andrew said, taking the green Pokeball and walking outside with Daniella.

"2ra, you get the last Pokeball" Prof. Birch said, 2ra taking it, thinking that it was Torchic, and ran outside where Daniella and Andrew were, they had already let out Treecko and Mudkip.

"2ra, lets see your Torchic!" Daniella told 2ra.

"Ok! Pokeball Go!" 2ra said, throwing his white Pokeball.

"Cast-form!" the Pokemon said.

"Wh-What happened to Torchic?" 2ra asked, and Prof. Birch came out of the room he was in.

"That's a Castform, Torchic have become very rare lately, and I havn't been able to get a hold of many. Castform is a strange Pokemon that changes with the weather, and if you train it right, it can even control the weather!" Prof. Birch said, handing 2ra a Pokedex so that he wouldn't be so disappointed.

"Well, I must get going" Prof. Birch said, and walked out of the room.

"Castform!" Castform said, hugging Daniella.

"Aww how cute!" Daniella said, her green eyes lighting up.

"Well, I guess we should get going" Andrew said, returning his Treecko, Daniella and 2ra also returning their Pokemon.

"Your parents left something for you" Mrs. Platt said, as she left the room.

Right by the door, were three backpacks, each one labeled with the owners name, a whie one for 2ra, a blue on for Daniella, and a green one for Andrew. Next to the backpacks was a latter and it read....

Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 2: Boarding S.S. Aqua!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif

[Dragon_Claw]

Wow, this is a great fic so far. It reminds me of another fic, where they got a Pokémon from a camp.

I'm glad they didn't had to take the Pokémon they battled with, seeing as all of those Pokémon suck, xcept for Ludicolo (Quack!)

I like the thingy with the pics at the bottom, it might come in handy, seeing I don't know all the new Pokémon.

Try to post as many pictures as possible

[2ra]

Thanks! Hopefully, many people will read this fanfic.

I'll add Chapter 2 in a little while, I'll try to put up at least one chapter a day ^_^

As for the pictures, I change em when they catch more Pokemon or Pokemon evolve, so don't worry, there'll be pictures ^_^

[totodilelover]

That was a really good chapter. I like how she got a cast-form instead of torchic thats really cool. I cant wait to read you next chapter!

[2ra]

2ra is a guy :P Yea, I wanted to make a few twists, and theres a lot more coming soon....whoops said too much :P

[totodilelover]

Im really really sorry about that when i wrote that i was so sleepy cause I just woke up. I mean I like how he gets cast-form.

[2ra]

Yea, I know I was half alseep when I wrote that fic lol

I'll be starting Chapter 2 soon ^_^

[Dewgongtears]

Very Cool 2ra you have improed a lot. This stiry is getting to be very good. I can't wait till I read the next chapter.

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, our heroes got their first Pokemon after having a few battles. Daniella chose Mudkip, Andrew chose Treecko, and 2ra chose Torchic, but instead got a Castform! Their teacher and Prof. Birch left and thier stuff was near the door, including a note that read...

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Dear Kids,

We were told yesterday that today, you were going to get your starting Pokemon, so we packed your stuff in your backpacks that should be near this letter. We are so proud of you, and made sure that you had everything. Daniella, we left you your PokeNav, and Andrew we left you your Pokemon Guide. We took the liberty of buying you a few Potions and Poeballs as well. Good luck on your journey and come visit us!

Love,
All Your Parents

P.S. Attached to this letter are 3 S.S. Aqua boat tickets to Littleroot, it leaves today at 3:00!

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"Wow! 3 Tickets to Littleroot!" 2ra said, flashing the tickets and giving one ot Daniella and one to Andrew.

"Wait a second, what time is it......IT'S 2:55! Hurry lets go!" Daniella said, picking up her backpack.

"But, the harbors all the way accross town!" Andrew said, and 2ra and him picked up their backpacks too and they all ran out of the school and towards the harbor.

"We're not going to make it!" 2ra yelled, as they were halfway there and it was already 2:58.

"Hurry this way!" Andrew said, jumping over a ledge and falling onto the beach, right by the harbor and saving a lot of time.

"Hurry!" Daniella said, jumping the ledge with 2ra and all three running towards the harbor.

"It's 3:00! Jump!" Daniella said, and all three of them jumped from the Harbor onto the boat, Daniella almost falling into the water, but Andrew saved her, and along with 2ra, pulled her up onto the ship.

"Hey! You aren't supposed to go on here!" the man on the harbor yelled, as he thought they were trying to go on the ship for free, but they just flashed their tickets, and the man shut up.

For the first time, our heroes noticed what the ship looked like, it seemed new, as it looked unused, and was a bright blue with the words S.S. Aqua painted on the sides. There, in front of Daniella were some stairs, and Daniella who is very curious walked down, only to find herself in the Sailors Cabin and get food thrown at her.

"Hey! This is our Cabin! Your cabins are down the other stairs!" one of the Sailors said, and Daniella ran up the stairs, almost tripping and followed 2ra and Andrew into the stairs adjacent to the one she entered.

"Hello and welcome to the S.S. Aqua! I am the Captain of this ship, Mr. Briney! May I please see your tickets?" Mr. Briney asked.

Our heroes flashed their tickets and Mr. Briney said "Oh great! Welcome aboard! Peeko show them to their rooms!"

"Peek!" Peeko said, and then flew off in front of a room.

"Bye" our heroes said, and they followed Peeko and opened the door to their room.

Peeko flew back to Mr. Briney, who left somwhere, and 2ra and Daniella stared in the room. There were three beds of course, two regular ones and one small one, and out of votes, 2ra was stuck in the small bed. There was a green-ish wallpaper with Wingull prints and one t.v. on the wall at the far end, it was one of those flat screen ones.

"Ah, time to rest!" Andrew said, jumping on his bed.

"Mudkip Go!" Daniella said, and Mudkip jumped onto her bed.

"Good Idea! Castform go!" 2ra said, and Castform started floating in the air.

"Treecko Go!" Andrew said, and Treecko started running around.

"Reeeeck!" Treecko said, as he almost tripped on the floor.

"Cast! Cast!" Castform said, as it enjoyed floating around, and then it hugged 2ra.

"Mudkip! Mud!" Mudkip said, trying to tell Daniella that it wanted to battle, but Daniella didn't understand and though Mudkip wanted to eat something.

"Hey Daniella! How about we have a battle?" 2ra asked....

Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 3: Battle Aboard!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif

[totodilelover]

That was a good chapter! It could have been a little longer but it was great. The next chapter looks good a battle! Keep writing! Keep up the good work!:D :yes:

[2ra]

Lol I wrote that Chapter pretty fast, but I tried to make it as long as I could -_- Cuz I didn't want to get inot the battle until the next chapter lol So I added things like Treecko almost tripping and Castform floating lol

Next chapter is gonna be up later today...hopefully lol :P

[Dewgongtears]

2ra good chapter, the chapter sems like a very good one too. Maybe I know a few things......but I won't say. I can't wait for your next chapter.

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, the protagonists of this fanfic read the letter their parents had left them, and went off in a hurry to the harobr, as they had received boat tickets to Littleroot. They barely made it on the boat, and inside, they met Mr. Briney, the captain of the S.S. Aqua and Peeko, his Wingull. As they enter their room, everyone sends out their starters and 2ra challenges Daniella to a battle....
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"Are you sure about this?" Daniella asked 2ra.

"Yes I'm sure, I want a rematch from our last battle at the school!" 2ra said.

"Alright, Mudkip its time for our first battle!" Daniella said.

"Mudkip!" Mudkip said and it ran off Daniellas bed and onto the floor.

"Castform come over here, we're having a battle!" 2ra said, Castform obeying and it floated near Mudkip.

"Mudkip use Water Gun!" Daniella said.

Mudkip shot a trickle of water at Castform, but Castform dodged it, and instead the water struck the wallpaper, ruining it. Daniella then noticed what she had done and felt embarrassed.

"Mudkip, no water attacks, as the last one ruined the wallpaper! Use tackle!" Daniella said, and Mudkip charged at Mudkip, and at the same time, Castform used his own Tackle and they both hit smack into each other and both fell to the floor.

"Castform use Ember!" 2ra said, and Castform shot a few embers at Mudkip, but it dodged and lit the wall on fire!

"Mudkip hurry use Water Gun on the wall!" Daniella yelled.

"You too Castform!" 2ra said, and both Pokemon shot water at the fire, extinguishing it, and causing the room to be filled with smoke.

"Uh, hi!" a boy said, as there was a hole between both rooms and you could see into the others room.

"Oh, I'm so sorry!" 2ra said.

"It's ok, my name is Wally!" Wally told them, walking through the hole in the wall.

"So what are you doing?" Wally asked them.

"Oh, we're having a battle..." Daniella started to say, but she was quickly interrupted by the PA system.

"Hello this is your captain, Mr. Briney, we are currently near Pacifidlog, and should reach Littleroot in about two days..." Mr. Briney started to say, but was interrupted.

".........help.....To protect the world from devastatio....Jessie not now! Okay, okay, seems Mr. Briney is ill, we'll be taking over.." was heard on the PA system.

"Well back to the battle! Castform tackle!" 2ra said, and Castform shot itself towards Mudkip, making Mudkip shoot over to the Wallys room.

"Mudkip are you okay?" Daniella asked, and Mudkip got back up and ran over to Castform and shot a blast of water at him, this time hitting it and causing a lot of damage.

"Castform use Tackle!" 2ra and Castform charged at Mudkip, knocking it out.

"Mudkip you did great, now have some rest on my bed" Daniella said, and Mudkip jumped back up on her bed.

"Treecko?" Treecko said, as he was surprised thata green Pokemon appeared from Wally's room.

The green-haired Pokemon seemed to have no eyes, as its hair was so long, and it looked like it had a red ribbon in its hair and a long white dress. The Pokemon then winked at Treecko, who suddenly got nervous and ran behind Andrew.

"What is that?" Andrew asked.

"Oh, that's my Ralts, Ralts come over and introduce yourself!" Wally said, and Ralts levitated over next to Wally.

"Everyone this is your captain speaking! Please come up onto the dock, as we have something very important to say" someone on the speaker said, and it strangely sounded like a Pokemon was talking.

"Well lets go" Wally said, everyone following him, but before, returning their Pokemon, and all four trainers walked up the stairs to the dock.

They hadn't noticed it when they were in their rooms, but it had started to rain, and the other five trainers up there were soaking wet. Suddenly, out of the Captains Cabin walked out three people, well two people and one Pokemon.

"To protect the world from devastation!" the one on the left said.

"To unite our peoples within our nation!" the other said, but no one could see where they were as they were hidden in shadows.

"To denounce the evils of truth and love!" the left one said.

"To extend our reach to the stars above!" the right one said.

"Jessie!"Jessie said, walking out of the shadows, and you could see that she had long red hair and blue eyes, and she was wearing a white uniform with a big "R" on it.

"Hey you're not the captain!" 2ra said, he didn't know it, but he said what everyone was thinking, as those three were NOT the captain, but the question is, where is he?!
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 4: Unexpected Detour!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/ralts.gif

P.S. I wrote this really fast, as I just came back from 5 hours of shopping and 3 hours of being either eating or staying inside the car -_- I wanted to post this up today though, so I hurried a bit and made this chapter.

[totodilelover]

That was a really good chapter. That was funny when castform got the wall on fire and then it got more ruined. Then when mudkip used water gun and it ruined the wall. That was great kepp writing more!!

[Sailor Scorpio]

this has been really good so far please post more 2ra

[Dragon_Claw]

normally I don't like reading trainers fics, but this is a very unique one

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, 2ra challenged DAniella to a battle, Castform versus Mudkip. On the PA System, Briney was replaced, and that raised suspicion, but the battle continued. When Castform burned a hole through the wall, our heroes met Wally and his Ralts, and then 2ra won the battle. Something else was heard that told everyone to go up to the dock, and after returning their Pokemon, our heroes went up, to find out that the people there were not the captain, but imposters...
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"How dare you interrupt us?!" Jessie yelled.

"James!" James said, and he stepped out of the shadows, you could see that he had the same basic uniform as Jessie, with short blue hair and green eyes, and it suddenly stopped raining.

"Team Rocket blasts off at the speed of light!" Jessie said.

"Surrender now or prepare to fight, fight, fight!" James said.

"Meowth that's right!" a Meowth said, jumping up from behind Jessie and James, except this Meowth could talk like humans!

"Give us all you Pokemon, or we'll have to take them by force!" Meowth said, and then a giant Meowth-shaped balloon appeared in the air, and Meowth climbed up a latter to the top.

"Never!" one of the trainers said.

The trainers were mad, and so each of the five threw their only Pokeballs with them, containing Solrock, Lunatone, Seedot, Lotad, and Torchic.

"That's a good idea Castform go!" 2ra said, and threw his Pokeball with Castform.

"Treecko go!" Andrew said, and Treecko appeared before him.

"Mudkip go!" Daniella said, excpet she hadn't noticed, but Mudkip had come out of his Pokeball, and she threw and empty Pokeball.

"Hahaha! Arbok go!" Jessie said, and a giant snake appeared on board.

"Weezing! I choose you!" James said, and the repulsive Pokemon appeared next to Arbok.

"James, who's driving this ship?" Jessie asked, and James suddenly ran over to the Captains Cabin.

"Arbok use Poison Sting! Weezing attack with Sludge!" Jessie said, and they both shot their attacks at Seedot and Lotad, knocking them both out, and then Meowth captured them in a net from the balloon.

"Arbok use another Poison Sting!" Jessie said, and Arbok opened his mouth and shot a dozen stingers at Castform.

"Castform use Powder Snow!" 2ra said, and Castform shot ice particles at Arbok, freezing the stringers and sending them towards Arbok, but it slapped them back with his tail and they hit Lunatone and Solrock, knocking both out, and then Meowth captured them as well.

"Treecko use Quick Attack!" Andrew said, and Treecko ran over to Arbok and charged at it, knocking Arbok into Jessie, so she returned it.

"Wobbuffet go!" Jessie said, throwing her Pokeball, and out came a blue, wobbly Pokemon.

"Torchic use Ember!" one of the other trainers said, and Torchic shot a few embers at Wobbuffet, but it quickly used Mirror Coat, and shot them back at Torchic, knocking him out, and Meowth capturing him as well, leaving only three Pokemon.

"Treecko use Absorb!" Andrew said, and it tried to absorb Wobbuffets energy, but Wobbuffet used Mirror Coat, and shot the Absorb at Mudkip, kncoking it out as well.

"Weezing use Sludge on Treecko!" Jessie said, and Weezing shot a blast of sludge at Treecko, knocking him out as well, and Meowth then stealing both Mudkip and Treecko before they could be returned.

"Castform use Powder Snow!" 2ra said, and Castform shot ice particles at Weezing and Wobbuffet, freezing him and Wobbuffet solid.

"Me-OWTH!" Meowth said, as no one had noticed, but he jumped off the balloon, and scratched Castform from above, knocking him out as well.

Meowth then quickly ran up the latter and caught Castform, leaving no Pokemon left. James then called over Jessie, and they started to talk, and both came out, both returning their Pokemon.

"Well, we shoulf get going, and just for your information, we have no idea how to drive boats" James said, and both of them climbed up the latter and joined Meowth.

"Not so fast!" Wally said, throwing two of his Pokeballs, containing Ralts and Swablu.

"Ralts use Confusion on that balloon and stop it in its tracks! Swablu fly up there and peck at the net!" Wally said, and Ralts hair suddenly stood up, revealing its eyes, and they suddenly turned red, a red light then embedded the balloon and stopped it from going any farther.

Swablu then flew up in the air and started pecking at the net, but Ralts couldn't hold on much longer.

"Swa!" Swablu said, as it was pecking at the next, slowly but surely breaking the net.

"Ralts hold on!" Wally said, and then Ralts lost control, and the red light disappeared and the balloon was free again, and they started to float off, faster than Swablu could fly.

"RALTS!" Ralts said, and it started to glow and grow larger, and when the light faded, Ralts was no longer there.

"What's that?" 2ra asked, taking out his Pokedex, which identified it as Kirlia.

"Wow! Ral- I mean Kirlia use Confusion!" Wally said, and Kirlias hair stood up, and Team Rocket was pulled back towards the ship, and Swablu pecked more at the net, finally breaking it and then all the Pokemon fell onto the ship.

Kirlia then shot up into the air and used a Psychic attack on Team Rocket, making them blast off.

"Team Rocket's Blasting Off Again.." Team Rocket said, as they were blasting off and disappeared in the distance.

"Thank you Wally!" everyone told him, as they were happy they got their Pokemon back.

The trainers left back to their rooms, but then Daniella remembered someything and said "What about the captain?!" and everyone ran over to the Captains Cabin, including the Pokemon.

"Mr. Briney!" Wally said, and he ran over to him, he was tied up to a chair, but Wally untied him and Mr. Briney was gasping for air.

"We're off course!" Mr. Briney said, and just as he said that, the boat rumbled and crashed, as they had hit land.

Everyone one board, ran outside onto the dock, and Mr. Briney was right, this wasn't Littleroot....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 5: Corphish Colony!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

[Cyrus]

I like it, a new form for an old story.

[Shade the Light Gym Leader]

Shade Hey. I just finished reading this thing, and I love it! *subscribe*

By the way, I'm gonna spoil the next chapter and say that they landed in S---

*is shot*

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

wow. I'm impressed. there are a lot of Pokemon fics i've read, and I don't think there are many better than this one. just one word of advice: don't use Team Rocket too much. Team Rocket is the main reason the anime isn't that good: repetitiveness. as far as I've seen though, this story has good changes of pace in each chapter.

[totodilelover]

Good chapter! I like hot ralts evolved really good. When they evolve you should use a little more detail but the rest is good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, Team Rocket stole everyones Pokemon after losing a battle, but then Wally and Ralts joined forces and Ralts evolved into Kirlia. With the help of Swablu, the Pokemon were freed and Team Rocket went blasting off, and the boat suddenly crashed onto land, with our heroes running outside to find out that they were not in Littleroot..
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"Mr. Briney where are we?" Wally asked, his brown hair waving a bit, as there were many breezes.

"Well, according to my PokeNav, we're in Slateport" Daniella said, putting back her PokeNav into her backpack.

"Oh! I forgot to get my backpack!" 2ra said, but just as he said, that Andrew came running up the stairs with his and 2ra's bags.

"Thanks Andrew!" 2ra said, taking his backpack.

"Well, what are we going to do now?" Andrew asked.

"Well, I guess you'll have to start, your journey here, as the boat is in bad shape, and it can take months to fix it" Mr. Briney said, and everyone on board understood, as there was a giant hole in the hull of the boat.

"Oh, and Daniella, I saw that hole in your room, I guess Team Rocket did that" Mr. Briney said, winking at Daniella, and Daniella started giggling.

"Bye Mr. Briney!" Wally said, walking off the boat.

"Hey Wally wait up!" 2ra exclaimed, and Daniella and Andrew followed.

"Wally, why don't you come with us?" Andrew asked.

"Sure!" Wally replied, and everyone was on their way to Slateport, but first they had to get through this giant beach!

Everyone returned their Pokemon to their Pokeballs, and started the long walk from the shore over to Slateport. There were many people on the beach, from surfers, to tubers, to people who just loved to tan. The sunlight had come out by this time, and it was a beautiful day to stay at the beach.

"I could just stay here all day" Daniella said, and she started daydreaming about her staying on the beach, and by the time she stopped, everyone was way in front of her and she ran over to where they were, leaving her without breath.

"Hey look, theres a Beach House! Lets go in and rest!" Daniella said, and she ran over to where it was and quickly sat in a red stool, situated in the middle of the room.

"Hey, Daniella! Don't run away like that!" Wally said, as he was the first to run into the house.

"Hello and Welcome to the Soda Shack! My name is Darren, may I help you with something?" Darren asked, his giant mustache shaking as he talked, freaking out Daniella.

Darren was wearing a baggy, hawaiian-looking shirt and some navy blue shorts, which seemed weird as he looked like has was in his late forties.

"No thanks" Daniella said, and by that time, 2ra and Andrew walked in through the door.

"Then you must be here for the Corphish Catching Contest!" Darren told Daniella.

"Corphish Catching Contest?!" 2ra asked.

"Yes, every year, we have a Corphish Catching Contest, we give you one Corphish Ball and you must walk around the beach and try to catch a Corphish in ten minutes. Then, we look at all the Corphish, and the best looking one wins a prize." Darren said, which intrigued 2ra and Daniella into joining.

"How do we enter?" Daniella asked Darren.

"Well, I can sign you up if you want!" Darren replied, winking at Daniella, which freaked her out even more.

"I wanna enter too! Hey, Wally, Andrew; you wanna enter too?" 2ra asked, but they said no, and Darren walked over to the counter to his laptop, and entered 2ra and Daniella into the contest.

"Both of you have been entered inot the contest, it will be starting in a few minutes, here take this Corphish Ball" Darren said, handing a Corphish ball to Daniella, and then 2ra.

"Thanks!" they both said, receiving the Pokeball.

"Oh, and by the way, you are not allowed to use your Pokemon to weaken them!" Darren said.

"Me and Wally'll stay here and relax while you two comptete" Andrew said, slumping in his chair.

"The contest is about to start!" 2ra said, he and Daniella running outside.

"The Corphish Catching Contest is about to begin! Get your Pokeballs ready! On your mark, get set, GO!" a man in front of a podium said, he had on an explorer-looking type of hat with a bright red shirt, some red shorts, and red sandales.

"I need to hurry and find a Corphish!" 2ra said.

The contest started, there were about twenty people participating, and all twenty looked around everywhere for a Corphish, Daniella finding one, but it ran off, and when she tried to chase it, she fell face-first into the sand. 2ra couldn't find any, and was frantically looking around for one, Daniella doing the same, until they both knocked into each other.

"Hey! Watch where you're going!" Daniella said.

"No, you watch it...Hey! There's a Corphish!" 2ra said, and ran after the Corphish, only to find out that there were two Corphish and that they were twins.

"Corphish Ball go!" 2ra said, and threw his ball at one of the twins, the ball wobbling a bit, but 2ra ended up catching it.

"My turn! Corphish Ball go!" Daniella yelled, and this Corphish was easier to catch, as the Pokeball didn't even wobble, it was automatically caught.

"Yeah! We both caught Corphish!" 2ra and Daniella exclaimed in happiness.

"The Corphish Catching Contest has ended! Now for the judging part! Please enter the Soda Shack as the judging will begin shortly!" the man from before said on a megaphone.

Everyone in the contest quickly ran over to the Soda Shack, and the judging promptly began when all twenty people who participated were inside.

"Ok, to start out, which of you caught a Corphish, lets see by a show of hands!" Darren said, and only three people raised their hands, two of them being 2ra and Daniella.

"Will the three of you please come up front, and the rest of you may take a seat and watch the results!" Darren said, and the three people walked up to where the counter was.

"Please release your Corphish!" Darren said, and the three contestants obeyed and sent out their Corphish.

"Dabol, that is your name right?" Darren asked.

"Yes, that's me and this is my Corphish" Dabol said, but Corphish used his claws at pinched Dabol, which made him scream and mistakingly throw Corphish out the window.

"Corphish, I'm so sorry!" Dabol said, running outside to join his Corphish.

"Well, I guess there are two contestants left" Darren said.

Everyone gazed at the two Corphish left, and saw that they were twins immediately, as they looked exactly alike, and then, since they were both the same, it would have to be a tie.

"Yes ladies and gentleman, this year, we have a tie! To settle this, both Corphish will battle outside, the winning Corphish will be pronounced the winner of this contest!" Darren said, and Daniella and 2ra walked out side with their Corphish and the battle began.

"Let me start this off! Corphish use Vicegrip!"Daniella said, and her Corphish used its claws and clamed 2ra's Corphish, who then clamped at Daniella's Corphish in agony.

"Fish!" both Corphish said.

"Corphish get out of there and use your Bubblebeam!" 2ra told Corphish, and he used his claws on Daniella's Corphish to get off of the clamp of its claws and crawled back and shot bubbles at Corphish, but it used its claws to pop the bubbles before it reached him.

"Corphish use your own Bubblebeam!" Daniella said, and Corphish shot Bubbles at 2ra's Corphish, but it quickly used Protect to avoid the attack.

"Use Bubblebeam again!" 2ra said.

Corphish then use its hind legs to stand up a bit taller and shot a ton of bubbles at Daniella's Corphish, this time hurting Corphish. Daniella then tried harder and told her Corphish to use Vicegrip, but 2ra's Corphish used Protect again.

"Corphish, we need to finish this fast!" Daniella said, and then Corphish's claw started to glow silver and it swiped 2ra's Corphish with it, knocking it out.

"Wow! Corphish learned Metal Claw!" Daniella said, and 2ra congratulated her on her victory.

Both Corphish then shook claws and both were returned to their Pokeballs, Darren then began to speak again.

"Two twins forced to battle, one became victorious, and that was Daniella's Corphish, Daniella please come here" Darren said, and Daniella walked up to him and received a Deep Sea Scale.

"Daniella, please take this Deep Sea Scale" Darren said as he handed it to Daniella.

"Thank you!" Daniella said, and she quickly got off stage because she got nervous.

"Congratulations Daniella!" Wally said.

"Yeah! That was a great battle!" Andrew added.

"Well where are we going now?" Daniella asked, and then Darren came up to them.

"Sorry for butting in, but I think you should head over to Mauville, there a gym there" Darren said, and then went inside his Soda Shack.

"Hmm, Mauville is north of Slateport, and to get to Slateport, we have to go through the Slateport Marketplace" Andrew said, looking at his Pokemon Guide.

"Well then, what are we waiting for? Lets go to the Marketplace!" 2ra said.
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 6: The Parting of Ways!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

Ok, as you saw today, Dabol was featured, in future contests, I will be adding people who want to be in my story, so if you want to be in, please let me know, first come, first serve! Also, please tell me an information like a description and what name you want!

[Dabol]

:confused: O Comon! u had to give me something embarassing on my first apperance -.- *psst* ur making me look bad :mad:

[Cyrus]

Good chapter, it is rare to see the main character lose repeatedly. Keep up the good work.

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

I wouldn't mind being put in too ^^; but woo! Crawdunat(sp?) is one of my favorite R/S pokemon! keep up the good work!

[totodilelover]

Hey this was a really good chapter but like at the contest part you could have added more detail. Can't wait till the next chapter!

[Kecleon]

great story... keep it up

[Dragon_Claw]

good story, but u should try not to get all to over-used Pokémon, and not let them catch Pokémon the same time (I speak from experience, I don't say you're doing that, but you have to be carefull)

The contest was very original, and again it was very well written. Can't wait until the next chapter

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, our heroes landed in Slateport after their ship was hijacked by Team Rocket. 2ra and Daniella entered a Corphish Catching Contest, and each caught a Corphish! They tied, so both Corphish battled, but suddenly Daniella's Corphish learned Metal Claw, and Daniella won the contest, winning her a Deep Sea Scale. Now, our heroes have just entered the Slateport Marketplace....
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"So this is the Slateport Marketplace! I've been wanting to go here and shop for the longest time!" Daniella said, and she quickly ran over to the tents and started shopping.

"Daniella! Wait up!" Andrew yelled, ans Daniella was runing around looking for things to buy.

"Ooooooh! Theres Pokemon Dolls! I've wanted some for the longest time!" Daniella said, and she ran over to a dark green tent and walked inside, to find a young girl, who was around her early twenties, she had frizzy blue hair and dull grey eyes.

She was wearing a dark green dress, and greeted Daniella then saying "May I help you?"

"I was wondering if you had any Mudkip Dolls?" Daniella asked, and then 2ra, Wally, and Andrew came inside.

"Sure, we have one left" the lady said, and Daniella quickly took out her money and bought it, which intrigued Andrew.

Andrew then asked for a Treecko Doll, and the salesman took one of from a shelf and then Andrew quickly paid for it, Daniella still staring at her Mudkip Doll, it had bright blue skin, dots for eyes, and orange cheeks, making it really look like a Mudkip.

"How cool! My own Treecko Doll!" Andrew said, and looked at it carefully, when you squeeze its red belly, its yellow eyes popped out and it said "Treecko!"

Andrew and Daniella put their Dolls into their backpacks and then 2ra asked for a Castform Doll, but there weren't any left, as they had just sold the last one a few minutes ago, and there wasn't another shipment until next week.

"By any chance are you going to the Pokemon Trading Convention?" the lady asked 2ra.

"What's that?" Wally asked.

"Well, once a month we have Pokemon Trading Conventions where people can trade their Pokemon, if you want to participate, all you have to do is go to the end of this Marketplace, its being held there right now!" the lady said, and all four people ran over to the convention, which wasn't too far away.

"Hey we made it!" 2ra said, and he saw a flock of people around a giant block-shaped white machine where people would trade their Pokemon.

"Hi! Its the people from the Corphish Contest! Everyone move aside and let them enter!" a boy, who was about the ago of twelve, with bushy brown hair, brown eyes, with glasses; he was about five feet tall and was a bit chubby.

He had on a pair of blue jeans and a blue sweater, and he walked over to Daniella and said "Hi my name is Pablo!"

"Oh hi! My name is Daniella!" Daniella replied.

"My dad runs the Pokemon Trading Conventions, so I help him out sometimes" Pablo said, putting his Pokeball inside the machine so that he could talk to Daniella.

Daniella started talking to Pablo, and 2ra got bored and started walking around, but then a boy that was wearing all black who was currently running, ran into 2ra, knocking off his Pokeball with Corphish and putting it into the trading machine.

The boy didn't even notice, as he kept on running, and 2ra lay on the ground, Daniella just noticing what happened.

"Are you ok?" Daniella said, helping 2ra up, and he quickly took his Pokeball and started to run off after the person who pushed him.

"Hey wait up!" Daniella said, and she ran after 2ra, with Andrew following, and Wally running after Andrew.

"Hey you! You pushed me back there! I Challenge you to a battle!" 2ra yelled, turning over the boy who pushed him and finding out that he looked familiar.

"Fine! I accept your challenge! Go Duskull!" the boy said, and he threw his Pokeball, Duskull appearing and floating around, making faces at 2ra.

"Go Corphish!" 2ra said, and he threw his Pokeball, but it wasn't Corphish.

This Pokemon was orange, just like Corphish, but had no claws. It had three yellow feathers on its head and two beady, black eyes, it had small wings as hands and it had a small, tender body.

"Chi!" the Pokemon said, and 2ra recognixed it, as he always wanted one.

"Hey! What happened to Corphish? Why is it a Torchic?" 2ra asked, and then remembered how his Pokeball entered that Trading Machine.

"Well, lets get on with this battle! Duskull attack with Night Shade!" the boy said, and Duskull shot a purple blast of energy from its hands and hit Torchic.

"Torchic use Peck!" 2ra said, and Torchic advanced on Duskull and pecked at its body, but Duskull used its ghostly powers to turn invisible and avoid the attack.

"Duskull use Mean Look!" the boy said, and Duskulls eyes turned a dark green and Torchic was surrounded in a green light, which stopped it from moving.

"Torchic get out of there and use Flamethrower!" 2ra yelled, and Torchic got out of the asphyxiating gaze and opened its mouth, but it didn't know how to use Flamethrower so it used Ember, which hit Duskull and did a lot of damage.

"Duskull use Curse!" the boy said, and Duskull pinched itself with a needle and a dark figure loomed over Torchic, scaring it and draining its energy at the same time.

"Torchic use your Ember!" 2ra told Torchic, and it shot a few embers at Duskull, but it suddenly got its energy drained again and it started to feel weak.

"Chiiiiiic!" Torchic said in agony, as it started to feel even weaker.

"Duskull finish it off with Night Shade!" the boy said, and Duskull shot a blast of energy and Torchic, but it quickly dodged it and started to glow.

"CHIC!" Torchic said, as it used all its power and shot embers at Duskull, which knocked it out in one hit.

"Duskull return!" the boy said, and then ran off again, entering Slateport.

"Wow that was a great battle!" Wally said, and 2ra returned Torchic.

"I'll miss Corphish, but I also like Torchic!" 2ra said, and then someone tapped him on the back.

"Hey! You're the one I traded with! Please take care of my Torchic!" Pablo said, handing him a Torchic Doll.

"Please take this as well" Pablo said.

"I don't know what to say, but thanks" 2ra said, and Pablo then ran off, back into the Slateport Marketplace.

"We'll meet again" Pablo said, just after leaving.

"2ra, I have to tell you something" Wally said.

"What?" 2ra asked

"Well, I've decided to leave your group and go on my own journey" Wally replied.

"Yea, I've been meaning to do that too" Andrew said.

"Well, I'll miss you both, but if that's your choice, I respect it" 2ra said, and both Andrew and Wally left the group, on the way to each of their own journies.

2ra and Daniella waved goodbye to their friends, and went back on there way to Slateport City....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 7: The Beauty that is Beautifly!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

A you read, today, Pablo was featured, which is one of this fanfics readers! For the next chapter, I'll be needing three people, so if oyu want to participate, please contact me! Be sure to tell me your description and your name, as I have to describe you! Next chapter coming tomorrow ^_^

[Shade the Light Gym Leader]

Shade Hey all. Nice chapter! I liked the part that I was in. ;)

And I'm 5' 4''! :o

[Dabol]

awesome story

[totodilelover]

Hey this is a really good chapter. It is really funny and cool how 2ra gets torchic! That was really good. I cant wait for the next chapter!

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, 2ra mistakingly traded his Corphish for a Torchic in the Slateport Marketplace and battled with a Duskull, Torchic coming out the winner. Just as they were leaving Slateport Marketplace, Andrew and Wally decided to go on their own journies, leaving only 2ra and Daniella in the group. Now, both have just entered Slateport City...
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"So what is there to do in Slateport?" 2ra asked Daniella.

"Well, accoridng to my PokeNav, there isn't much, but we might as well start out by going to the Pokemon Center! It's just accross this park" Daniella replied, and she put away her PokeNav.

Today was a bright sunny day, and Slateport looked brimming with energy, yet calm at the same time. Many people roamed the streets, but there was also many trees and the calming ocean all around it. Gentle breezes came once in a while, which would refresh you, making Slateport an ideal place to relax. The clock struck twelve, and 2ra and Daniella quickly ran over to the Pokemon Center, the sunlight making Daniella's eyes hurt a bit, so she put on her Pokemon Glasses, which were glasses with dark lenses and a blue frame with a small Mudkip on each side.

"Hahaha" 2ra laughed, as he saw Daniella with those glasses.

"Grrr..." Daniella said, and she put her glasses back into her backpack and shielded her eyes away from the sun.

"Hey look its a Wurmple!" Daniella yelled, and she quickly ran over a block or two over to a tall tree with a small, red bug Pokemon.

"Wurm" the Pokemon said, and 2ra not knowing what it was, took out his Pokedex.

"Wurmple, the Bug Pokemon. Using the spikes on its rear end, WURMPLE peels the bark off trees and feeds on the sap that oozes out. This POKéMON's feet are tipped with suction pads that allow it to cling to glass without slipping." Dexter said, and 2ra then put his Pokedex back into his backpack, and Daniella kept staring at it.

"Wurmple you're mine!" Daniella said, throwing her Pokeball with Corphish.

"Co-Phish!" Corphish said, and started clamping its claws.

"Corphish attack with Bubblebeam!" Daniella said, and Corphish shot bubbles at Wurmple, knocking it out of the tree.

"Wurm!" Wurmple said in agony as it was falling.

"This is your chance Corphish! Use Metal Claw!" Daniella said, and Corphish's claw started glowing and it swiped Wurmple.

"Pokeball G.." Daniella started to say, but then Wurmple started glowing, its red body changing into a circular shape, spikes all over its body, and a very pale color.

"Hey! Wurmple evolved into Silcoon!" Daniella said, throwing her Pokeball.

The Pokeball lay on the floor, vibrantly moving, it looked as if Silcoon was coming out, but just then, it stopped, Silcoon was caught! Daniella then ran over and took her Pokeball, and she started walking towards the Pokemon Center to heal all her Pokemon.

"Daniella wait up!" 2ra said, running after her.

"No, you hurry up!" Daniella said, rolling her eyes, as she was determined today.

Eventually, they left the park, and entered the Pokemon Center, a large building painted all white with a red rook, nothing special on its own. They walked inside and Daniella ran up to the nurse.

"I need my Pokemon healed, chop chop! And make it fast!" Daniella told Nurse Joy, and she surprisingly took her Pokeballs.

"Nurse! Please wait! Can you heal my Pokemon too?" 2ra asked politely, and the Nurse nodding her head so he handed her his Pokeballs.

The nurse quickly healed all the Pokemon and handed 2ra and Daniella their Pokeballs back respectively, and Daniella then quickly ran outside, 2ra running after her.

"Daniella whats wrong with you? The nurse is here to help us!" 2ra scolded, and Daniella just kept on running.

"I've finally made it!" Daniella said, as she stod before a building, which looked like the Pokemon Center, but with a block-like shape and it was a lot larger.

"Where are we?" 2ra asked Daniella.

"This is the Contest House! I've been wanting to enter for the longest time!" Daniella replied, and she walked through the door, 2ra behind her.

Daniella ran up to the counter and then said "I'd like to enter my Pokemon into the Pokemon Beauty Contest!" handing her three Pokeballs to the lady at the counter, her red eyes and red hair with pale skin standing out, but you couldn't see what she was wearing.

"Hmm, well if you want to enter the Beauty Contest, the only Pokemon you have that is eligable is Silcoon" the lady said, and Daniella quickly nodded, and took back her Pokeballs.

"You will be contestant Number Four, please follow me!" the lady said, and she lead 2ra and Daniella into a room filled with people, all sitting around a large stage with four seats and two judges, Daniella sitting in the fourth seat.

"Welcome! This Beauty Contest is about to start! Contestant Number One, please approach the center" a man dressed all in black and with hardly any hair and a white mustache said.

The first contestant walked up to the center of the stage and let out his Pokeball, it contained a Corphish, and the crowd seemed surprised that a Corphish was entered, nobody clapping.

"Second Contest! Please walk to the center!" the judge said, and the second contest walked up to the center and let out her Wurmple, receiving a few claps.

"Third.." the judge said, and a girl, about Daniellas age, which is about thirteen, walked up to the center of the stage, her gray eyes shining, and her green hair standing out, since she was wearing a blue tank top and a pair of jeans.

The girl threw her Pokeball, and out came a Beautifly, a butterfly Pokemon, the crowd roaring, as they really like how beautiful it looked.

"Fourth Contestant!" the judge said, and Daniella walked up to the stage and released her Silcoon, getting a lot of claps, but not as much as Beautifly.

"Let the contest begin!" the judge said.

"Beau!" Beautifly said, as it used Gust on the stage, refreshing them, and they started clapping.

"Sil" Silcoon said, using Harden, which strangely, got more aplause than Beautifly and Gust.

"Phish!" Corphish said, using its Harden too, but as it was already used, no one clapped.

"Urmp!" Wurmple said, shooting a String Shot at the crowd, which angered them.

"Ok, we've ran out of time!" the judge said, and he and his assistant walked up to the center of the stage, in front of the contestants.

"We have our results!" the judge said, Daniella didn't win....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 8: Beast and the Beautifly!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/silcoon.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

[Dabol]

kool story cant wait till next story :wave: Hi Mom and Dad:wave:

[Dewgongtears]

I have not posted in a long time I know. But this story is getting very good. Very nice chapters 2ra. Keep the good work up.

[2ra]

Hey, sorry about not posting any new chapters -_- Hopefully, I'll post one soon :P

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, 2ra and Daniella entered Slateport City, and while walking through a park to go to the Pokemon Center, Daniella caught a Silcoon and entered it in a Beauty Contest, but Daniella wasn't the winner...
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"The winner is Contestant 3 and her Beautifly with a score of..." the judge said, or what Daniella heard anyway, as she ran off the stage and outside, her dreams of winning a Beauty Contest were shattered into a million small shards.

"Daniella!" 2ra yelled out, as he was running behind her and just got outside.

"Me and Silcoon WILL win.." Daniella said under her breath.

"Are you ok?" 2ra asked Daniella, but she ignored him and started running towards the Pokemon Center.

"Daniella wait up!" 2ra yelled, as he was starting to get tired of running around everywhere.

Daniella ran inot the Pokemon Center and 2ra followed after, when he entered, Daniella was handing her Pokeballs to Nurse Joy again.

"Daniella.." 2ra started to say, but Daniella quickly interrupted him.

"Daniella what? I will not rest until I win that contest! Me and Silcoon WILL win, if it's the last thing I do!" Daniella told 2ra, taking her Pokeballs back, and then looking at a boy who was getting a Pokeball back too.

Daniella walked over to the boy, as she knew she had seen him before, as he was the only boy she had ever seen with aqua colored hair and aqua colored eyes. She couldn't put her finger on it, but she kept on walking.

"Hi, my name is Daniella! Wanna battle?" Daniella asked the boy.

"Uh, sure.... My name is Dabol, lets go outside to battle" the boy replied in a nervous tone of voice.

"Hey, you're that boy from the Corphish Catching Contest!" 2ra said, and Daniella threw her Pokeball with Silcoon.

"Coooooon" Silcoon said.

"Yea, Daniella was the winner of that contest! Well, this'll be a one on one Pokemon battle" Dabol said, throwing his Pokeball with Corphish.

"Phish Phish Phi!" Corphish said, as it crawled over to Silcoon.

"Silcoon use Poison Sting!" Daniella said, and Silcoon shot stingers at Corphish, but Corphish wasn't too affected.

"Corphish attack with Bubblebeam!" Dabol said.

"Phi!" Corphish said, as it shot a blast of bubbles at Silcoon, but Silcoon quickly used Harden and withstood the attack.

"Silcoon attack with Tackle!" Daniella said, and Silcoon shot itself at Corphish, his spikes hurting Corphish.

"Corphish use Vicegrip!" Dabol said, but Silcoon used Harden again, so it wasn't affected again.

"Corp!" Corphish said, as his claw started glowing, and it swiped Silcoon, but this time Harden didn't work.

"Wow Corphish! You learned Metal Claw!" Dabol said.

"Yea...just like mine did. Silcoon Tackle!" Daniella told Silcoon and it charged at Corphish, but Corphish used Metal Claw before Silcoon could tackle it.

"Silcoon try Poison Sting!" Daniella said, and Silcoon shot stingers at Corphish, but it wasn't too affected and it jumped up in the air and swiped Silcoon with Metal Claw.

"PHIIIIII" Corphish said, as it started to glow, its small tender body changing into a larger body, it was the same color, and look like a giant crawfish, his eyes staring at Silcoon.

"Wow! Corphish evolved into Crawdaunt! Attack with Knock Off!" Dabol said, and Crawdaunt used his pincer and knocked Silcoon, Silcoon barely hanging on.

"Silcoon, you can beat that Crawdaunt!" Daniella exclaimed.

"SILCOOOOOOOON!" Silcoon said, and it suddenly started glowing, its hardened, circular body changing into a beautiful butterfly, its wings flittering in the air and its long mouth looming in the air.

"I..I..I got a Beautifly!" Daniella said in astonishment, and Beautifly flittered ts wings and shot a blast of wind at Crawdaunt, knocking it into Dabol.

"Crawdaunt attack it with Metal Claw!" Dabol said, and Crawdaunts claw started glowing, and it tried to swipe Beautifly, but it flew out of the way and Metal Claw hit a rock, shattering it to pieces.

"Beautifly use Absorb!" Daniella told Beautifly, and green bubbles went from Crawdaunt to Beautifly, absorbing Crawdaunts energy.

"Crawdaunt Bubblebeam!" Dabol yelled and Crawdaunt shot bubbles at Beautifly, but it wasn't affected too much.

"Beautifly finish it with Absorb!" Daniella said, and Beautifly absorbed all of Crawdaunts energy.

"Crawdaunt..return" Dabol said, returning his Pokemon.

"Beautifly you were great! It's time to enter that contest!" Daniella said, and she ran over to the Contest House, with 2ra and Beautifly following her.

"Oh, its you again, would you like to enter a Beauty Contest again?" the lady at the counter said, and Daniella nodded and they both entered a different contest hall.

"Beauti!" Beautifly said, as it flew in behind Daniella, and they both went on stage, 2ra looking on.

"We have just gotten our fourth contestant! Let the contest begin!" the judge said, and the other three trainers sent out their Pokemon, and Daniella was surprised that Dabol and Crawdaunt were in this contest.

"Contestant one and Crawdaunt, please show your appeal!" the judge said, and Crawdaunt shot bubbles at the crowd, giving it a high rating.

"Contestant two and Skitty, please show your appeal!" the judge said, and Skitty tried to attract the crowd, but they shouted things like "Wrong Contest!"

"Contestant three, lets see your appeal!" the judge said, and the winner of the last contests Beautifly used Gust, which got the crowd going.

"And last, but not least, fourth contestant show us your appeal" the judge said, and Daniella's Beautifly used Gust as well.

"Well, we're out of appeal time!" the judge said, and he held a paper with all the scores as he walked up to the center of the stage.

"Well, it was hard to choose between both Beautifly's, but Daniella and Beautifly are the winners!" the judge said, hading Daniella a Kings Rock and giving Beautifly a ribbon.

"I WON!" Daniella screamed out, enjoying her triumph.

"Well, we should get going" 2ra told her, and they both walked back into the lobby.

"Daniella, I just wanted to say, you were great!" Dabol said, and he walked outside, with 2ra and Daniella following behind.

The sun was setting, as 2ra and Daniella walked outside and started to leave Slateport, on their way to the next town and the first gym!
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 9: Tricks of the Trade!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/beautifly.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

[Dewgongtears]

A great battle, Two evolutions in one chapter, a very good chapter indeed. And Daniella won the contest I fell happy for her. Good Job 2ra.

[Dabol]

Two Losses in one day -_- o well great chapter

[Cyrus]

Good chapter, keep up the good work.

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

woo! good chapter! just keep them coming!

[Shadow Djinn]

OK, the chapters are good and all, but they're too many ands. You need some more description with the pokemon too. Dont just say, Corpish used a Metal Claw and Silccoon tackled it.. You could say:

The white cocoon smashed into Corpish, but the red lobster quickly swiped at it with it's glowing claws.


"Crawdaunt Bubblebeam!" Dabol yelled and Crawdaunt shot bubbles at Beautifly, but it wasn't affected too much.
Could be:

" Crawduant! Bubblebeam!" Dabol yelled. Crawduant nodded, and opened its claws. They shot out blue bubbles that peppered Beautifly's wings, but it didn't do much damage to the butterfly pokemon.

[2ra]

ok thanks for the constructive criticism *hopes he spelled that right* -_-

[Dragon_Claw]

I really liked that chapter. but why do you still have Wally's and Andrew's Pokémon underneath your stories? Will they make a come-back?

And one thing I didn't get from a older chapter of yours, do Wally and Andrew travel together or alone?

[2ra]

PokeRuler: They each go on their seperate journies, and to answer why they're still on the list, you'll find out in a few more chapters :P

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, Daniellas Silcoon evolved after a battle with a Crawdaunt, and after she won, she went over to the Beauty Contest, and ended up beating the Beautifly that beat her before. Now, our heroes our on their way out of Slateport and to the first gym!
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The sun was setting, and 2ra and Daniella walked out of Slateport City, saying their goodbyes to such a great city in which they had such great times. As they walked out of Slateport, there was a big change of scenery, from a large, seaside city; to a long road full of vegetation and greenery. In the greenery were seen many Electrike, and they shot sparks into the air for no reason, but it was a beautiful sight, a light blue electricity just shooting up into the air.

"Hey look! It's a radio tower!" Daniella said, pointing up towards a large grey building with a closed sign on the front door.

"Awwww too bad its closed!" 2ra said, and both people went on walking.

2ra and Daniella then kept on walking, and 2ra mistakingly stepped on an Electrike, causing him to get shocked, and the Electrike running off. They continued walking after 2ra was feeling okay, and it was really getting dark, so they decided to stay in a small wooden house along the road.

"Hello?" 2ra asked, turning the knob and finding out that it was open, and as he walked inside he was greeted by an elderly man, about the age of forty, dressed all in white.

"Hello, are you here for my Trick Challenge?" the man asked, and the suddenly, he disappeared in thin air, leaving open a slot behind a red Torchic poster.

"Should we go inside?" Daniella asked 2ra.

"Sure why not? It's not like we have anything better to do" 2ra said and both people walked inside the poster, leaving the dull room before, and walking inside a large blue room, filled with water and underwater chambers.

"What is this?" 2ra asked, but as he turned back, the hole in the wall suddenly disappeared and they were trapped inside.

"What are we going to do now?" Daniella asked.

"Well, you might as well accept my challnge" a hologram said, it was the same man from before, just in hologram form.

"Challenge?" Daniella asked the hologram.

"Yes, collect the three hidden pearls and place them on top of the tablet in the middle chamber to receive a prize, as well as your liberty" the hologram said, and it suddenly disappeared, just like before.

"Well, if we have to" Daniella said, throwing her Pokeballs with Mudkip and Corphish.

"Corp!" the crab Pokemon said, and it jumped in the water.

"Kip!" Mudkip said, and it jumped in the water as well.

"Well, if we must find those pearls, we have to go underwater" Daniella said, jumping inside the water next to her Pokemon, splashing 2ra with water.

2ra jumped in the water without hesitation, and grabbed onto Corphish as it dove underwater, the crystal clear water letting you see perfectly. Daniella and Mudkip then dove underwater as well and both Pokemon swam around in the purified water.

"Where are the pearls?" Daniella asked, but couldn't be heard underwater, so she just stopped talking and both people looked on, they had just entered the middle chamber from above.

The middle chamber was the most exquisite thing that 2ra and Daniella had seen, it was full of crystalline, which made it glow and stand out. In the center was a giant sapphire with three slots for the pearls. Daniella and 2ra then quickly swam up to get some air and dove down again with their Pokemon.

A few Horsea were swimming inside the water, and one of them tickled Daniella, making her lose grip of Mudkip and be left behind, but Mudkip quickly swam back to get her, and everyone swam even deeper, going below the middle chamber, and into a darkened room.

Inside the room was nothing, but a shining light coming from above at the far end of what seemed to be an underwater corridor. Corphish then swam over to the light and jumped up, falling on a large rock, and Mudkip followed.

"We seem to be in a hidden chamber" 2ra said, and as he turned he saw a boy in his bathing suit run towards him.

The boy had on a dark green bathing suit, with green sandales and green puffy hair. He had green eyes and had a Green Pokeball with him, as well as something clenched in his left hand, but you couldn't tell what it was.

"Hey you!" the boy said, and he slipped on the floor, falling in front of 2ra.

"Who are you?" Daniella asked.

"My name is Jimmy, and I'm here taking the Trick Challenge, I won't let you advance on me! So I challenge you to a battle!" Jimmy said, pointing his small fingers at Daniella.

"Fine I accept your Challenge! Mudkip it's time to battle!" Daniella said, and Mudkip ran up in front of Daniella.

"Pokeball Go!" Jimmy said, throwing his Green Pokeball.

The Pokeball opened quickly, and outside came a bright silvery light, but it quickly subsided and left was a dark green Pokemon, his hands looked fragile and he was standing on his hind legs, which were lighter than his lillypad head.

"My Lombre will destroy you!" Jimmy said, pointing his right hand at Daniella, but keeping his left hand clenched.....
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Preview of Next Time:

Andrew Special - Chapter 10: Static Electrike!


Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/beautifly.gif
Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gif
Wally: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/kirlia.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/swablu.gif

[Dewgongtears]

Oh, good chapter. So the trick house now. Well lookes like the next chapter will be pretty good. Good Work.

[Dabol]

EXCELLENT STORY (MY CAPS BUTTON IS STUCK :( )

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

not bad. a little short, but still a nice chapter.

[Kecleon]

I'm finally in the story!!!i wonder if I had a secoindary Pokemon? hope it's kecleon, good job tube-ra keep up the good work

[Dragon_Claw]

I agree that it's a bit of a small story, but still it's cool.

Andrew special? Yay! Andrew was one of the coolest characters (together with 2ra)

[2ra]

Since this isn't really in the 2ra Journey, there will not be a Narrator part for this, but I wanted to use this space to explain how the Specials Work. Once in a while, there will be a special of a character, currently the only specials are Wally and Andrew; of the people who are main characters, but left on their own journey. So Special Chapters are about their own journies, which informs you of what happens while they're gone ^_^
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"Treeck!" Treecko said, jumping around.

"Treecko, we had a lot of training! You're becomonig a very strong Pokemon, and next time we meet 2ra, we'll beat him, together!" Andrew told Treecko.

The small gecko jumped around some more, Andrew seeing this, returned his Treecko to its Pokeball, and kept on walking out of Slateport City. Andrew looked up into the sky and the moon was shining brightly, with a few sparks appearing from somewhere unknown.

"Trike" an Electrike said, walking through a bush and then shooting sparks into the air.

"Heh, what a cool looking Pokemon" Andrew said to himself.

As Andrew walked a few steps away from where he saw the Electrike, he got shocked by one he stepped on, and he wasn't too sure if we wanted an Electrike anymore.

Andrew walked around stunned from the Electrikes shock, and stumbled on a rock, falling to the floor. As Andrew started getting up, he saw the Radio Tower, with a giant crowd surrounding it.

"Hmm, I wonder what's happening" Andrew said, running towards the crowd, and finding his way over to the center.

The crowd was surrounding a man, around his early twenties, in a maroon t-shirt and shiny blue pants. He had grey eyes and dark brown hair, which looked black to me, but he insisted it was brown.

"Okay okay, I am Digi Des, but this interview is OVER" Digi said, and he walked out of the center of the crowd, towards the Radio Tower door.

"Maybe I can learn something inside this Radio Tower" Andrew said, following Digi inside the Tower.

As Andrew walked inside, he saw that it was deserted, the lights were off, and desks were full of papers. Andrew sent out Treecko, and both of them looked inside, as they were both curious.

"Lets see what the Pokemon Guide has to say" Andrew said, taking out his Pokemon Guide out of his Green Backpack.

"Treecko!" the gecko said, as his bright yellow eyes stared at a dark corner.

"What's there Treecko?" Andrew asked, taking his attention away from his book and looking at the dark corner.

Two eyes appeared from the dark corner, and suddenly an Electrike jumped out and started shooting sparks everywhere. Andrew and Treecko managed to avoid the electricity, and then Electrike ran up a flight of stairs.

"Follow that Pokemon!" Andrew told Treecko, and they both started running up the stairs, trying to catch up to Electrike.

"TRIKE!" Electrike said, as it noticed he was being followed.

Electrike finished running up and turned around, facing Andrew and Treecko. The moonlight shone through a window, and Electrike shot sparks at Andrew and Treecko, but they kept running up. Electrike, left with few choices on what to do, fled from where he was.

"Follow him!" Andrew said, and he followed Electrike into a room at the end of the corridor, where Digi Des was also located.

"Hi!" Digi said as Andrew entered, and Electrike jumped up on a stool and started to shoot sparks again.

"Hi Digi!" Andrew said, pointing towards the Electrike.

"Oh, that. That's an Electrike that roams around here, its static keeps messing up the air waves and I was going to be on the air, until Electrike messed up the waves" Digi said, Electrike still shooting sparks.

"So who does it belong to?" Andrew asked, and Treecko started towards Electrike.

"That Electrike is a wild Pokemon, if you catch it, I'll be very greatful" Digi said, and Treecko suddenly tackled Electrike, making it shoot of out the window and fall outside.

"Get that Electrike!" Andrew yelled, and he quickly jumped down the stairs and ran outside to where Electrike had fallen.

"Elect!" Electrike said as it shot sparks at Treecko.

The gecko suddenly shot up after getting hit by Spark, and used Nature Power, allowing Treecko to shoot spores out at Electrike, poisoning it in one hit. Electrike shot sparks at Treecko, but the gecko quickly dodged it.

"Treecko finish it with Absorb!" Andrew told Treecko.

Treecko absorbed some of Electrikes energy, and the gecko shot its body at Electrike, but the static paralyzed it. Both Pokemon, paralyzed, tackled each other and both fell on the ground, badly hurt.

"Pokeball go!" Andrew yelled, his Pokeball sucking in Electrike, catching Andrew a new Pokemon.

"Great Battle!" Digi said, handing Andrew a few Potions, which healed Electrike and Treecko.

"YES! I caught a Electrike!" Andrew said, looking at his Electrike and thanking Treecko for helping him catch it.

"I want to thank you, as now I will be able to go on the air!" Digi said, and he walked inside the tower.

By now, the sun was coming up, and Andrew along with both of his Pokemon, walked onto Mauville, towards their own journey through the Hoenn League.
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 11: Clamperls Pearl!

Current Pokemon:

Andrew: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/treecko.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/electrike.gif

[Dabol]

It was cool how Nature Power turned into stun spore when i use it, it mostly turns into Swift -.- wonder y i could get stun spore wit Nature Power

[Dewgongtears]

Very cool chapter indeed. I like that he has an Electrike, a eletric pokemon cool. I can't wait till your next chapter.

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

yay! I'm a radio operator guy! lol. pretty good chapter. keep up the good work.

[GeneChildMewtwo]

This story is coming along well. Although a little more description wouldn't hurt (as Dark Templar 8 said) since things sometimes seem to move very quickly. One example is the chapter with the Beauty Contest. There seem to be a lot of things happening in a short time. It seems too fast at some points.

It's still a good fic, so don't give up! It's still fun to read. It reminds me of the Anime (in a good way), and it seems to have that kind of feel about it. I also like how there are chapters that cover what Andrew (and Wally later it seems) are doing. Wally's one of my favorite Ru/Sa characters so having him in the story is neat. ^_^ Also incorporating the readers into the story seems like an interesting idea.

Well, that's it for now. Keep it up!

[Hanada Tattsu]

Good chapters, sounds real cool. I like the Trick House, much cooler than in the game.

[2ra]

Narrator: Last time, 2ra and Daniella left Slateport City on their way to Mauville, when they reached a house. Inside was the Trick Master, a mysterious man with various tricks. They accepted his challenge and ended overwhelmed. They have to find three pearls to advance, and they havn't even found one! Now, Daniella was challenged with a Lombre trainer, and the battle is about to start...
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"Ombre!" Lomre yelled, the lilypad started to glow as Mudkip stared in amusement.

"Mudkip destroy his Lomre with Water Gun!" Daniella yelled.

The small kipper then opened his small, cute, mouth and shot a blast of water at Lomre, but it wasn't too effective, as Lombre continued to glow.

"Lombre use Nature Power!" Jimmy told Lombre.

"Lom Lom!" Lombre said, as the lilypad jumped into the water and started splashing around, which made Jimmy embarrassed.

"Guess Nature Power here is the equivalent of a Splash attack.." Daniella said, trying not to laugh, as the Lomre still was splashing around in the water, which looked hilarious.

Daniella then suddenly bust out, laughing at Lombre, which angered the lilypad and it used Absorb on Mudkip, draining its energy.

"Kip" Mudkip said in agony as his energy was being drained.

"Too bad I had to stop at the Move Deleter in Lilycove, because the only moves Lombre knows now are Nature Power and Absorb..." Jimmy said under his breath.

"Lombre keep using Absorb!" Jimmy told the lilypad.

As soon as he heard that, Lombre jumped on top of a rock, and suddenly started draining tons of Mudkips energy, the little kipper yelling in agony, as he could not battle much longer.

"Mudkip! Try a Tackle attack!" Daniella said.

Mudkip then charged at the lilpads face, and it tackled it, making Lombre lose its concentration and its Absorb backfire, draining his own energy.

"Mudkip! We found Lombres weakness, now Tackle his face again!" Daniella yelled.

The kipper followed its masters orders and charged at the lilypads face, but it quickly used absorb again and drained Mudkips energy, stopping the Tackle.

"Mudkip! You can beat it!" Daniella yelled, and Mudkip then suddenly started glowing.

Mudkip started glowing in a silver-ish light, and it looked like it was about to evolve! Daniella ran up to it and stared at her Pokemon, awaiting it to change shape and evolve into Marshstomp, as that would give her the power to defeat Lombre.

"MUDKIP!" Mudkip then yelled, still glowing, as it shot water towards the ground, suspending it in the air.

"Uh oh, if that Mudkip evolves..." Jimmy said, as he knew he would lose if it evolved into Marshstomp.

"ACK, I got mud on my new shoes!" 2ra yelled, as the ground was now muddy from Mudkips water.

Mudkip then stopped glowing, putting a large grin on Jimmys face, Mudkip didn't evolve.

"Ahhh what happened?!" Daniella yelled, as she was expecting for Mudkip to evolve.

"KIP!" Mudkip yelled, as it jumped back to the ground and took some mud and shot it at Lombre, the lilypads eyes covered in mud.

"Lombre finish it with Absorb!" Jimmy said.

Lombre then tried to absorb Mudkips energy, but without it being able to see, it absorbed its own energy, weakening itself and healing Mudkip.

"Mudkip use Mud Slap again!" Daniella told Mudkip, and the little kipper shot tons of mud at Lombre, covering its whole body with mud.

"Lombre use Nature Power!" Jimmy said.

The lilypad then jumped into the water and started splashing, getting rid of all the mud it had on it. Its lilypad head then started glowing and it used Absorb, draining Mudkips energy again.

"Mudkip finish it with Water Gun!" Daniella yelled.

Mudkip then shot a blast of water at Lombre, dunking him inside the water, and as he surfaced, he was knocked out.

"Lombre.....return..." Jimmy said, falling to the ground and putting both his hands on the sides of his head.

"Ahhh, my Amulet of Clam!" Jimmy yelled, as it fell out of his left hand and onto Mudkip, who took it to Daniella.

"Well, I guess I won't be needing that anymore, that Amulet has many special abilities, and should help you out in tight situations..." Jimmy said, as he then dived into the water and swam off in tears.

"Mudkip you did great!" Daniella told Mudkip, hugging the little kipper and taking the Amulet from it.

"Hey 2ra, I think we should go..." Daniella started to say, when a Clamperl jumped out of nowhere and Clamped onto Daniellas hand.

"Ahhh! Corphish use Metal Claw on it!" Daniella yelled in agony.

The crabs claw then hit Clamperl, knocking it off Daniellas hand, and that's when they noticed that the Clamperl was trying to get the Amulet and that it was holding one of the three pearls.

"You want it?" Daniella said, holding out the amulet.

The clam the jumped up and charged towards the amulet, but Daniella quickly pulled it up, and the Clamperl crashed onto a rock, knocking it out.

"Quickly, take the pearl!" 2ra said.

Corphish then crawled over to Clamperl, and carefully took the pearl and handed it to 2ra, as he was in charge of keeping the pearls.

"Hmm" Daniella said, as this was the first time she had seen the pearl and amulet in detail.

The amulet was a silver chain basically, with a large amulet encrusted with silver, diamonds, and sapphire. You could tell it was real, as the silver didn't rust underwater. The pearl was like every other pearl, just one difference, and that was that this pearl was tinted blue.

"Lets go!" 2ra said, as everyone dove inside the water and started swimming again, 2ra seeing Corphish then started missing his own.

They were in the same corridor as before, except they noticed a crossing that they hadn't noticed before, one leading to the left and one to the right. Mudkip and Corphish swam over to the one on the right, so everyne followed them.

They had entered another corridor, this one darker and duller than the one before. There was an entrance all the way at the end, so Mudkip and Corphish swam over to the exit, but were blocked by a wild Octillery...
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 12: Octillery Artillery!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/beautifly.gif

[Dragon_Claw]

nice chapter, but I wonder why Mudkip started glowing.

By the way, try to make it bigger next time

[2ra]

Why Mudkip was glowing? It could have been because it learned Mud Slap in that battle....or maybe something else....

You'll find out soon enough :P

[Dewgongtears]

AH I wanted Mudkip to evolve, MArshtomp i so cool. But either way it was a very good chapter but it could have been a little longer. Still a good job!

[Dabol]

roflmao so funny roflmao :D

[Hanada Tattsu]

Cool chapter!

I kinda wish May had caught Clamperl, as she has a Deep Sea Scale or something like that, doesn't she?

[Dragon_Claw]

may? Wrong story, no?

[Hanada Tattsu]

Originally posted by PokéRuler
may? Wrong story, no?

Yeah, LOL, I meant Daniella.

Also, what happened to this fic?

[2ra]

Sorry, I've been real busy lately -_-

[Darien Shields]

Look, really, I hate to be a downer here, and admitadly I've only read chapter one, but the rest looked similar (riddled with enters, filled with dialogue, etc.) so I've got to ask the fated question.

Why do you all like the fic so much?

Is it that it's a trainer fic? I mean, if any of you have read Weak Might, I dare say it's better than this (No offense 2ra, but you're not as 'senior' as Shadowed Mewtwo), why haven't you replied to it? I mean, there are other trainer fics out there, and from what I've sampled there are a good few high quality ones. Maybe it's the simplicity. Do you find other fics hard to read because of all the long descriptions? Is the fast paced plot here appealing? Or perhaps, you all know 2ra in real life and he/she is stunningly good looking and you want to impress him/her by reading the fic. Ah, maybe I should read more, just to justify me, but I don't like reading it. I tried, I failed. I did not enjoy reading it, I found a Runpapa beating Datengu annoying and horrible, but perhaps that's just because I hate Runpapa. But still. Would someone fancy answering my question? And please, don't take this to be flame, and even if you do take it to be so, don't just flame back, it's annoying for one person to do it, even by accident, but... Fight fire with water, not more fire. So anyway, yes, kindly explain what makes this thing so much better than all other fics you've read.

[Dragon_Claw]

I've been reading this from the start, and I really like how it's written. And If you don't like reading this, then don't. I don't think any of the readers or 2ra HIMself appreciates somebody who says: 'I tried reading this, but I failed.'

I think you didn't read many chapters, as you can see it get's better and better. I like it that it doesn't has a super long dialogue (sp?) and that it doesn't take as long as the anime.

I really like many kinds of fics, as I'm following: Tracey's quest, 2ra: Journey threw Hoenn, To Be A Master, Electric Buggy To Victory, From Rookie To Champions - The Indigo Road, and I'm writing my own fic, Becoming A Hoenn Champion. Maybe you're a drama queen that only likes those stories with a super long plot about how bad their life is.

And I don't know 2ra in real life, I don't even know his name. I only know he's a male and a darn good writer. That goes the same for everybody else their fic I'm reading, seeing I live in the Netherlands.

So one more time, if you really hate this fic so much, just don't read it and don't reply

Thank you

[2ra]

PokeRuler: Thanks, and no none of the people who read my fic know me in real life, they read it becasue they want to. I'll be adding a new chapter this friday, I'll be really busy this whole week -_-

[Darien Shields]

EDIT: I'm in no way a "Drama Queen" as you suggested Poke Ruler, and like happy fics all the same. My dislike for this fic is mainly the english employed.

Okay Poke Ruler, I tried reading chapter II, but my computer crashed, so I skipped to chapter nine when everything came back together. Now, I would've moved onto ten or eleven, but I wanted to show you what I found confusing in Chapter 9. No need to take offense, perhaps I'm just dense, perhaps English isn't my first language, or whatever, I just wanted to show you all this because I definately didn't think it got better as it progressed.

I'm Not trying to insult this fic or stop you from reading it, I just want answers, as to why everyone enjoys it so much in the first place

First of all, I don't know about the pokemon world, but even if I was hiking around, I don't just go up to wooden houses to demmand a place to stay. Second of all, I think an old man locking kids up in his house is suspicious to say the least, not to say Illegal. And third, the whole underwater + 3 Pearls thing seems very Zelda: The Wind Waker to me (In case you haven't played, the entire games based on being on the sea, and you must collect three magic pearls for a majour plot event.) Call me Paranoid if you will.

Onwards with actual things that confused me...

causing him to get shocked, and the Electrike running off.
That's just bad grammar.

so they decided to stay in a small wooden house along the road.
And the road is just riddled with small wooden houses now? Not too bad, but "and they decided to see if they could stay in a small wooden cabin they saw on the roadside, rather than sleep in the wild."

leaving open a slot behind a red Torchic poster.
I just don't understand what this means. They could see through the poster? The slot was in the poster?

walked inside the poster,
Okay, what's happening here? I'll assume he means through the poster, because, hell, you can't really go inside a poster, unless you're like, really thing, and I mean thinner than paper. Okay, they go through it. Do they tear it or what? Generally, posters are solid, you know? You can't just take a stroll through them... Is it a psychic extra dimensional poster? Is that how they're "in" it? That would explain it, but you should say something like that, you know, describe it, "as they approached they realised that the poster was not a two dimensional picture, but a window into another room, or so it appeared."

it jumped in the water.
Nothing wrong with this, but you've already said
a large blue room, filled with water and underwater chambers.
meaning they're already underwater. And that they have gills. So what, is their a pool of water in the water? I've got to wonder...

"Where are the pearls?" Daniella asked,
Whoa, this girls got skill, she can speak, Under Water! Who cares if no one can hear her, whenever I try, I end up Blubbering Incoherently and choking to death.


"We seem to be in a hidden chamber" 2ra said, and as he turned he saw a boy in his bathing suit run towards him.
Stop me if they're not in water anymore, and you know, I just, went blind for a short peroiod of time and missed it, but it seems that not only is he speaking under water, and doing even better than Daniella by being heard, but also, theirs a child runnig, in water. I thought it was pretty damn deep.

[2ra]

Well to ansrew your questions, it was a scroll-like poster with a torchic on it on the wall, it had a hole through the poster and they walked through there. The room wasnt totally filled with water, they were on solid ground and before them was the water, thus the diving. When they entered the chamber, it wasn't underwater, it was above the water, jus that the only way to get there is by going underwater. Inside the chamber theres air, the only water there is the tunnel to go down underwater again.

[2ra]

Ok, I just wanted to say that all new chapters are going up soon, probably this Saturday, since school is ending soon. Very big surprises coming soon, so please stay tuned! I have given spoilers to a few people on aim, but I will not tell you who :P All I can say is that there is going to be a lot of surprises and a lot of gym battles!

P.S. A Politoed makes an appearance soon.....

[mistysakura]

Um, it's not bad, but I'm confused about some things. For instance, why it says "Narrator:" when the whole thing is narrated by the narrator anyway. (Mental note: must have some words not starting with 'narrat' in my sentences...)

I agree with Darien Shields, [edited out because I think I was being too harsh] Try cutting down on the dialogue and a bit more description, still.
Now for the complimentary part! There's some sort of description, and not everything happens according to the plot. You have some interesting things in there, like the pearl challenge. But it still reminds me a bit too much of a merge of the game and the anime.

Uh... what do I say? :wave:

[2ra]

LoL thanks for readin! See I actually listen when people are nice! I'll try and make it more descriptive and longer lol

[2ra]

Last time: DAniella was in a tough spot against a Lombre, but when Mudkip learned Mud Slap, Daniella found the flaw to the Lombres strategy and won the battle. They found the first of three pearls after aquiring the Amulet of Clam. Now, 2ra and Daniella dove underwater again, and are being blocked by an Octillery.
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2ra and Daniella stared before them, their passageway was being blocked by a large red octopus. Its tentacles swivled around as it stared into the eyes of Daniella, but before the octopus could lock onto Daniella, it was hit by a blast of water from her starting Pokemon-- Mudkip.

"Octill!" Octillery said, as it was pushed back into the wall of the room behind him, letting 2ra and Daniella go foward a bit.

The next room seemed to be the home of Octillery, as Remoraid were scattered all around the small room. 2ra was about to run out of air, when the octopus charged at the crab Pokemon, shooting 2ra and Corphish into the air, and into another chamber full of air.

"2ra are you alright?" Daniella asked with worry in her voice as she surfaced with her Pokemon.

Daniella and Mudkip swam over to the side of the pool they were in and got out, both of them running over to where 2ra was, when Corphish suddenly noticed something behind Daniella.

"Phhhhhiii" Corphish said, the crab wandering over to what seemed to be a clam-Pokemon.

This clam was different than the one that was seen before, as this ones shell was filled with spikes, and as it opened up, you could see a black pearl in the middle, which started Corphish and it ran over behind Daniella.

"Cloyster!" the clam said, its shell starting to glow and vibrate as it shot what seemed to be spikes and 2ra and Daniella, when a blast of water shot at the spikes, redirecting them towards the wall.

2ra and Daniella turned around, only to see that the octopus that had blocked them before had used its special attack, Octazooka, to protect them.

"Octa!" the octopus said.

Cloyster then started to glow again, and was about to shoot more spikes, when Octillery shot a rainbow beam at Cloyster, confusing it on the spot. The clam dawdled around, its eyes looking like spirals.

"Kip Kip!" Mudkip said, slowly walking over to Octillery, who shook hands with Mudkips tail, which Daniella thought was cute and thought it was one of those Kodak moments.

As soon as the two water Pokemon stopped shaking hands, or whatever you want to call it, the octopus jumped back into the water and swam away.

"Hey look behind that Cloyster!" Daniella said, pointing to a small box that was hidden before.

The box seemed to be very old, it had scratches all over the fine finish, it was one of those wooden boxes that no young person these days would be caught carrying around. Daniella picked it up and opened it up, which made one of those creaky sounds that would happen when you walk around one of those old abandoned houses.

Inside was a red pearl, the same size as the one before, which lead 2ra and Daniella to think it was one of the three pearls that were needed. Daniella grabbed the pearl and tossed the box, which hit Cloyster in the face, knocking it out of its confusion.

"Uh oh.." Daniella said, realizing the big mistake she had just made.

Cloyster then shot a blast of ice and 2ra, which was blocked by Corphish and its Metal Claw, surprising the clam. It then shot more beams of ice, but Daniella's crab Pokemon just kept using its claws to block the beams away from 2ra and Daniella.

"Phish!" Corphish said, its claw scratching at the clams shell, knocking it out in one hit.

Cloyster then jumped into the water and swam off, just like Octillery, but this time it was because the clam was a coward. Corphish scuttled back over to where 2ra was, and picked up what seemed to be a rope which lead over to the next room, which was above where they were now.

"Lets go!" Daniella exclaimed, returning Corphish and Mudkip to their Pokeballs and grasping the rope.

What 2ra and Daniella didn't know is that as they were climbing the rope into the next chamber, they weren't alone, they were being watched...
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 13: Corphish Reunion!

Current Pokemon:

2ra: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/castform.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/torchic.gif
Daniella: http://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/mudkip.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/corphish.gifhttp://media.ign.com/boards/images/icons/beautifly.gif

[Hanada Tattsu]

Wow, Great chapter!

I really loved it, the description was great!

Keep up the great work! ^_^

[2ra]

Thanks Hanada! I tried to make it more descriptive, but this chapter was kinda short -_- I'll try to make the next chapter longer, by the way I was planning on putting it up today, but no one other than Hanada has replied lol

[RJdude]

Good fic, 2ra. 2ra is kind a weird name for a main character, but oh well. The fic seems to be focasing on Daniella now, but that's okay.

[2ra]

Well, 2ra's Pokemon arent too water friendly.... at the moment lol Something'll happen for 2ra in the enxt chapter....woops that was a spoiler -_-

[2ra]

Last time: 2ra and Daniella were being blocked by a giant Octillery, but after a Water Gun attack, it blasted off, and 2ra and Daniella ended up in an air filled room with a large Cloyster. After some battling, 2ra and Daniella got a hold of the second pearl, leaving just one more left, and then started to climb a rope into the next chamber, but what they didn't realize is that they weren't alone....
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"Phew! That was a long hike!" Daniella said as she had just reached the next chamber, but it was only really like three feet.

As you could tell, Daniella wasn't very athletic, she used to spend her Saturdays sitting on her couch watching Saturday Morning Cartoons all day, but what she didn't notice was that they were Saturday MORNING Cartoons, not All Day Saturday Cartoons, so she would sit and wait all day long just waiting for some cartoons to show up until she either fell asleep or got up to eat.

2ra, who was more fit than she was, quickly climbed up behind her, almost grabbing her leg instead of the rope, and both of them almost toppled over, but luckily, 2ra held on so they didn't fall, even though it wasn't a large drop.

"Its dark in here" 2ra said, which startled Daniella, as she had a deep secret that she hadn't even told 2ra and Andrew yet.

"Yea.." Daniella said, holding in her fear and trying to act normal, she started smiling, and started to walk, but she tripped and fell on top of a small red crab, similar to hers.

"Corph!" the crab said, its pincer lunging towards Daniella's hair.

"Ahhh!" Daniella yelled, as the Corphish clamped onto her hair, and she tried to get it off her, but it wouldn't let go.

"2ra, get this off of me!" Daniella yelled, and 2ra and Daniella both tugged at the Corphish, but it just wouldn't let go.

"Corphish return" someone said in the distance, the voice seeming familiar to the two trainers.

The crab suddenly disappeared as it was embedded in a red light, and a beam of light shot back towards next to Daniella, which freaked her out and she jumped over to the side, jumping smack into a wall.

Daniella slowly fell to the floor, 2ra running over to where she was and asking if she was okay, it was hard to see, and Daniella wouldn't reply at all, which started to worry 2ra. He tried everything, but she just wouldn't wake up, but 2ra felt her breathing, so he knew she was alive.

What 2ra hadn't noticed was that a lamp seemed to be walking towards him, and by the time he noticed, the lamp was right in his face and he jumped back, crushing Daniella's Amulet of Clam by mistake.

"Hey it's you!" the voice said, 2ra recognizing it, but just couldn't put his finger on it.

"Vulpix I choose you!" the voice said, and a large flash of light appeared from what seemed to be a Pokeball, but 2ra couldn't be sure.

A shadowy shape appeared in front of the stranger, and it shot flames into the air, lighting up the room, and 2ra was shocked at who it was-- Pablo, the person who has 2ra's Corphish!

2ra now saw what a Vulpix looked like, it was a strange fox Pokemon that was a reddish-brown color and had an orange tail that had curls at the end. Its eyes were brown as well, and it seemed to be gentle, as its eyes gleamed with great love and trust for its owner.

"Huh? What happened?" Daniella said, gently getting up off the rock she was laying on.

"Daniella, this is Pable, remember him?" 2ra asked Daniella.

Daniella quickly nodded and shot a smile at Pablo, which seemed eerily freaky. She stepped back a bit and said hello, but Daniella stepped up, putting him in an uncomfortable situation. Pablo's back pocket then started to glow and it shot a beam of red light, a crab Pokemon appearing next to him.

"Why you little!" Daniella exclaimed, charging over to the crab Pokemon, which quickly scutted next to 2ra, which made Daniella crash into a rock.

"Grrrr...." Daniella said beneath her breath, her face filled with rage.

The crab seemed delighted to be with his old owner, and 2ra was glad to see his Corphish again. Both enjoyed each others company and Pablo saw that, his face seemed sadenned though.

"I'll get back at that Corphish! I challenge Corphish and you to a match, 2ra hurry up and be the referee!" Daniella exclaimed, and 2ra started saying all the rules.

"This will be a one on one Pokemon Battle, no time limit. BEGIN!" 2ra exclaimed and the battle began.

"Mudkip go!" Daniella said, as 2ra had gone too fast and she had forgotten to pick her Pokemon.

"Corphish use Metal Claw!" Pablo told Corphish.

The crab Pokemon nodded and its claw suddenly started glowing in a silvery light, then charged over to Mudkip swiping at its face, but the kipper quickly jumped out of the way and doged the attack.

"Mudkip use Mud Slap!" Daniella exclaimed, the kipper shooting a shot of mud at Corphish, the mud clogging up the crabs claws, making it unable to use them.

"Just a minor setback. Corphish destroy it with Bubble attack!" Pablo said.

Corphish then didn't even listen to its owner, which made 2ra uneasy. Instead, the crab tried using its pincers on its owner, scratching Pablo's shoes. Horror shone on Pablo's face as he saw what Corphish had done.

"No! Those are new shoes!" Pablo yelled, startling both Corphish and Mudkip.

"Mudkip use Water Gun!" Daniella said.

Upon hearing this, the kipper jumped up and landed on top of Corphish, and then shot a blast of water at it, knocking it out in one hit. Pablo then sank to the ground, his face covered by his hand. Daniella returned her Mudkip, and then ran over to Pablo, who seemed to be crying, but was really laughing.

"Daniella that was a great duel! Here take this.." Pablo said, handing her the third pearl, a yellow pearl that seemed to glow with the red one she had in her possession.

"2ra, I also want you to have this, take back your Corphish, it's been lonely without you and you deserve to keep it" Pablo said, handing 2ra and Pokeball containing Corphish, after he returned it of course.

"Well, I must be going.." Pablo said, and in an instant, he and Vulpix jumped down to the chamber before and they were out of sight.

"Corphish, it's great to have you back" 2ra said, talking to his Pokeball, which seemed psychotic to Daniella and she started laughing, until she saw her Amulet crushed on the floor.

"Wh-Wh-WHAT Happened to my Amulet?!?!" Daniella yelled, turning towards 2ra, who smiled and jumped down into the chamber under them.

"Why you! Come back here!" Daniella yelled, jumping down into the next room, crashing flat onto the floor, with 2ra laughing at her.

"You know what? I'm in such a good mood that we're getting out of here that I'm going to pretend I didn't see that" Daniella told 2ra in a clam voice, and as he turned around she made a face at him and stuck her tongue out.

"What was that Daniella?" 2ra asked, as he had seen her.

"Nothing, it was nothing" Daniella replied, she had a giant grin on her face.

Now that all three pearls were collected, 2ra and Daniella can finally get out of this twisted house....right? Wait till next time and see!
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 14: Exotic Milotic!

[2ra]

Chapter 13 of 2ra: Journey Through Hoenn is up! Link in my signature! :P

[mistysakura]

Improvement rules!
Now what? I should write a longer post...
I like Daniella's character, because she's not perfect as some fics seem to portray people.

[Dragon_Claw]

It was nice, but i've seen you write better. the stories are a little short, and I agree that 2ra isn't doing that much anymore.

And I'd like to see more of Castform, I think you used it once, and I'm getting a little tired of that mudkip.

And, why do you have six Pokémon in your sig. I hope you aren't giving every Pokémon that will be caught there

[RJdude]

Hm... hey have all three pearls now. I wonder what it'll open. Oh well. It was an oaky chapter, kinda weird that Pablo just had the third pearl, but that's okay. Write more.

[2ra]

Misty: Thanks ^^ lol
PokeRuler: Well, its a Water Challenge, so technically its for Water Pokemon, since Fire types aren't too good in Water, and I dont know if Castform can go underwater lol, BUT Castform should appear in the next Chapter along with Beautifly! :P
RJ: Yes, something wil happen, there is still one more challenge left....and its really big...o.o :P

[The Silver Storm]

Hey 2ra :wave:, great fic. Though it has improved it could still use a bit more description. I think that Daniella needs to stop taking all the battles, after all, this is a fanfic about 2ra....

[2ra]

Well, a lot of thin gs are happening to 2ra soon, and Daniella won't battle much, so I gave her most of the battles here to make up for it a bit. As for the images, theres a limit on the amount, and it wouldn't let me add more, so I had to take it down -_-

[Hanada Tattsu]

That was a great chapter, Roman!

It was good, and I'm glad 2ra got Corphish back, I kinda wish he would have got it back, LOL.

So the trick house saga finally ends, or does it?

[2ra]

Last time: 2ra and Daniella found themselves in a dark room, where they saw one of their old friends, Pablo with 2ra's Corphish! Daniella challenged him to a battle, and after beating him, 2ra got his Corphish back and Daniella got a hold of the third pearl. Now, we find them on their way to the giant sapphire near the entrance...
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The chamber that 2ra and Daniella were currently situated in was the one where they had met that giant clam, but with the help of Corphish and Octillery, they were able to defeat it. Now, the room was empty, no one to be seen except a Clamperl that seemed to be sleeping in one corner of the room.

"Corphish and Mudkip! I Choose You!" Daniella said as she threw two Pokeballs.

Both the kipper and crab Pokemon appeared next to Daniella, and 2ra seeing this, threw his own Pokeball containing his own crab Pokemon. Both Corphish upon seeing each other scuttled over to each other, they had not seen each other for a long time.

"Daniella lets go!" 2ra said.

The two trainers and the three Pokemon jumped into the water, only to find that something was wrong, the passageway in which they had gone through had been blocked by a large rock, which made Daniella uneasy.

Both crabs used their claws and pointed towards the other end of the room, a light shone in the water, which meant that there seemed to be another chamber there. Thw two trainers then swam over there and looked up, only to find that it was a flood light. 2ra then saw what seemed to be a staircase beneath them, so everyone swam down and they couldn't believe where they were.

They were in a large passageway with a light coming from the end, so with the help of thier Pokemon, 2ra and Daniella reached the end, they had reached the entrance!

2ra then swam up to the surface, with Daniella following and indeed they were near the entrance, on the wall nearest to them was that poster they had somehow entered through, yet weren't able to escape, as well as the giant sapphire in the center of the pool.

"We're getting out of here!" 2ra exclaimed, only to find out that he was alone and he dove into the water again, as Daniella had done so already and he was being left behind.

There was one big difference this time than the first time they had entered the underwater chamber with the sapphire, this time, no Pokemon were to be seen, and the sapphire seemed to eerily glow once in a while, but 2ra decided that he was just seeing things.

As 2ra swam over to the sapphire, he saw that Daniella was already there, and she had put the Red and Yellow pearl in it, just one pearl needed to complete it, and that was the Blue Pearl 2ra had in his possession. 2ra quickly place his Pearl on the sapphire and the ground started to rumble, the sapphire moving aside and showing a secret underwater chamber that lead to a place unknown.

The two trainers quickly swam inside the passageway and found themselves in an even larger room than before, they were about knee deep in water, and at the end was another poster, just like the one they had seen before. In the center was a small platform, it was the size of one of those large carpets, but compared to the size of the room, it looked like the size of a penny.

2ra and Daniella quickly swam over to the platform and helped their Pokemon on top of it, as it was level like three feet above the water for some strange reason. As everyone was on the platform, a large booming voice was heard throughout the room, a voice that they had never heard before.

"You fools, well I shouldn't call you that, because you helped us, but you have no idea what you have done!" the voice said, a shiver running down everyones back.

"Now that the three pearls have gathered, we shall be able to flood the entire world!" the voice said, and suddenly a giant beast submereged out of the water.

Corrrr" both Corphish said, they were also scared and stayed close to their masters.

It seemed like a sea snake, one of the largest Pokemon that the two trainers had seen. It seemed to have long hair, its body a light pink and it had a blue and pink tail as well. It's hair moved side to side as it roared and shot a large blast of water at 2ra and Daniella, causing them and their Pokemon to fall into the water.

"Milotic!" the sea snake yelled, shooting more blasts of water towards 2ra and Daniella, causing them to plunge deep in the water.

Both trainers quickly swam up alongside their Pokemon and looked around, there was nothing to be seen. As 2ra and Daniella swma towards the platform again, they felt something grasp onto their legs and pull them down into the water.

Both trainers faces were filled with horror, Milotic had pulled them to the bottom of the pool, which has more than just a few feet underwater, and it stared at them straight in the face. Both trainers struggled out of the sea snakes grasp, but it was useless, the tail of the beast wouldn't let go, and soon 2ra and Daniella would be left without air, ending thier journies forever....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 15: The Plans of Team Aqua!

This one was kinda short, but the next chapter will wrap up this Trick Master Saga, and everything will come together. Right now it is kind of a mystery, but just wait.

[RJdude]

Cool, a Big Milotic. I wonder if someone will catch it.

[SNOTS FUBAR]

Nice fic 2ra. I like it. Keep on going. Nice cliff hanger.

[Dabol]

EXCELLENT AWESOME (ps when am i gonna show? ;) )

[2ra]

Lol Thanks for reading my fic! ^^ I'll post the next chapter sometime this week, if not, on Saturday :P Depends on how tired I am from school -_-

I've been getting questions about this, about what Politoed has to do with my fic and why its in my signature. To answer that, Politoed will be appearing in the near future and it's in my signature because it will appear many times in the future :P

Also, I've been asked about spoilers about any future twists, but all I'm saying is that there will be a VERY big twist in the near future.

[The Silver Storm]

now that was short. Even compareed to another fic i know. its still great.

[2ra]

Hey o.o I'm home sick from school so I might be able to put up a new chapter today! ^^ Also, I made a quick banner for this fic, it's in my signature lol :P

[TriggerHappyBlastois]

*chants* Put it up! Put it up! very interested in what happens next(even though you already told me just about everything:rolleyes:

[2ra]

Last time: After activating the three pearls, 2ra and Daniella were lead into an underwater chamber, the largest of them all. Inside a strange voice called them fools and a giant Milotic attacked them, pulunging them deep into the water, and with very few minutes till the end....
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"Millllll!" the sea snake roared, it sounded like cackling more than a roar, as it squeezed the last bit of air from the lungs of 2ra and Daniella.

Both trainers quickly looked at each other and said their goodbyes, the water started to enter their mouths, the end was near. Both of them blanked out, without air they were goners, their lives passing before their eyes.

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Daniella saw her past, it showed when she was around the age of three, she had her hair in ponytails and at the time was wearing a pink bow and one of those little dresses that girls used to wear in the sixties, it was striped with yellow marks, which used to remind her mother of Skitty.

Daniella was walking through some woods, she had never known where she was, but she knew that there was a giant staue of a Mudkip nearby. She had been lost for hours, and the sun was starting to set when three pairs of glaring eyes stared on at Daniella, frightnening her and causing her to trip and fall on what seemed to be a small kipper Pokemon, it had orange cheeks and a blue body.

"Mudki!" the creature said, leading Daniella towards a large chamber located inside of a mountain.

Inside, stalactites and stalagmites joined together to create one of those halls with columns on either side, which amused Daniella. At the end was a creature like the one who lead her there, though it was much lager.

"Swamp" the creature said, handing Daniella what seemed to be a red pearl.

Daniella stared on at the pearl, the smaller creature then lead her outside, when she found herself ambushed by a group of Pokemon that seemed to be the ones that had startled her before.

"Weave me awone!" Daniella yelled, she burst in crying, the Pokemon coming closer and closer...
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"Daniella! Daniella?!" Wally said, he was kneeling over Daniella and seemed to have given her mouth to mouth, as she spit out a large amount of water, getting Wally's face all wet.

"Uh, what happened?" Daniella asked Wally, as she had forgotten what had happened.

"Well I was on my way to Mauville, when I saw this house and a lot of people were crowding around, they were all wearing blue clothes and looked like pirates. They invited me in and I found myself trapped in here. I found some diving equipment for Kirlia and me and we both dived down, when we saw that secret passageway through which you entered. We saw both of you plunge into the water, and Kirlia swam over to help, both of your Corphish started pinching at Milotic, causing it to let go, and then Kirlia managed to teleport you back up to the surface just in time." Wally said quickly, he was out of breath from all the excitement.

2ra lay still next to Daniella, and upon her seeing this, she started giving 2ra mouth to mouth. As he woke up, his vision was blurry and he thought he was kissing Mary Jane, Daniella rival from school. Daniella seeing this slapped 2ra, knocking some sense into him.

"WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?!" Daniella yelled, waiting for 2ra to answer.

"Uh, guys I don't think.." Wally started to say, when he was quickly interuppted by Daniella.

"Stay out of this!" Daniella yelled, Wally stepping back and falling into the water.

Just as Wally came back onto the platform, the sea snake showed its ugly face, or shall I say pretty face? It shot a blast of water at the trio of trainers, but with the help of Kirlia, they were able to teleport out of the way and onto another platform.

"Castform Go!" 2ra said, throwing his Pokeball inm the air and his ghost-looking Pokemon appeared.

The small blob then floated towards 2ra, and his crab jumped out of the water and onto the platform, along with Daniella's kipper and crab. Kirlia quickly joined the other Pokemon, making it five Pokemon against one.

"Castform attack with your Water Gun!" 2ra yelled.

The weather Pokemon quickly shot a stream of water at Milotic, causing it to topple over and crash into a column that held up the ceiling. The column started to crack, but the sea snake quickly dived into the water, giving it an unfair advantage.

"Beautifly I choose you!" Daniella said.

A red beam of light appeared above Daniella, and her butterfly Pokemon appeared out of nowhere and quickly flew over to where the darkest water was and started to use Stun Spore, causing Milotic to rise and roar in agony.

"Now! Double Water Gun Attack!" 2ra and Daniella said.

Both the kipper and weather Pokemon then shot a stream of water which combined into one, with the strength of a Hydro Pump attack. The water shot straight at Milotics face, causing it to crash into another column, this time causing it to topple, and parts of the roof fell into the pool, causing water from above to seep into the chamber they were situated in.

"Kirlia, quickly teleport us over to where that poster is!" Wally said, and in the blink of an eye the three trainers and their Pokemon were in front of the poster.

2ra quickly ripped the poster off the wall and in its place was another poster, this one seemed to be a hologram though. He jumped through it and everyone followed, resulting in everyone falling on top of 2ra.

"I'm....alright" 2ra said, as it looked like everyone didn't care that they fell on top of him.

Hey look!" Wally said, pointing to an old man tied up in a chair.

The man was the same they had seen before, but this time in real life, as before you could tell they were holograms. Daniella quickly ran over and slipped and fell next to him, so Wally ran over and untied him.

"Ouch" 2ra and Daniella said as both of them got up and walked next to Wally.

"Why did you trap us in here?" 2ra asked the old man.

"Children, you have made a grave mistake! I am the true Trick Master!" the old man said, causing the trainers to get confused.

"What? What are you talking about?" Daniella asked the Trick Master.

"Well, it all started many years ago when I had received three pearls, a blue, red, and yellow pearl..." the Trick Master started to say, which triggered something in Daniella mind and she remembered that the old Pokemon had given HER the pearl!

"I had to safekeep them, if they fall into the wrong hands the world can be destroyed. Team Aqua found out that I had these pearls and wanted them for themselves. They kidnapped me and so that they wouldn't take the pearls I gave them to some of the trainers who were in the Trick House at the time." the Trick Master said.

"But why didn't you use thier power to stop them?" Daniella asked the Trick Master.

"Well, the power is very destructive and I can't take chances! Eventually, the three pearls were hidden and Team Aqua could not find them. That was when you came, they tricked you into thinking that if you could find the three pearls you would be freed, but they lied.." the Trick Master said, he then stood up and showed them a tablet that was at the end of the room.

"This tablet depichts an old war, between the Pokemon of the land and of the water. The three pearls were used and it almost caused the destruction of the world! Eventually, the Pokemon made peace and decided to hide the pearls. But now that Team Aqua has them, well I don't know what will happen." the Trick Master said, he then walked over to a door and opened it.

"Team Aqua must have stolen the Pearls, and the only thing that can stop them is the Amulet of Clam, which is in this room" the Trick Master said, looking inside and then shock filling his face, the amulet was gone!

"Uh oh...I kinda crushed that amulet a while ago..." 2ra said.

"Well then we are doomed, nothing can stop the power of the pearls, you just have to learn how to use them, or they may backfire" the Trick Master said.

"Here, all of you go on this pad, it will teleprt you to the entrance" the Trick Master said, and everyone obeyed, walking on what seemed to be a mat with swirly marks on it and they were teleported to where they started, in front of the Torchic Poster, and indeed, the Pearls were stolen....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 16: Cycle-delic!

This was the ending of the Trick Master Saga, and now back to the Journey Through Hoenn!

[RJdude]

Good job. Danellia's memories were nice. Keep up the good work.

[Hanada Tattsu]

Great chapter, I really liked it!

Team Aqua's freaky, and so is Milotic! Keep it up!

[totodilelover]

You did a good chapter. I have seen improvement from your other chapters. I wonder what happens in the next chapter, I thought they were going to die but they didn't. I hope 2ra and Daniella get the perals back.

[2ra]

Yes, this won't be the only time there will be flashbacks, and there might be something else with the pearls, but you'll just have to wait and see!

I've been asked if 2ra catches all the Pokemon that are in my signature, the answer is no, if you want to find out why they are there you'll just have to wait and see as well! :P

As for when the next chapter is posted, it will probably be sometime this week, if not this Saturday :P

And yes, Politoed will have a big role, I've been asked so many times I decided to answer it now lol

[totodilelover]

Hope you all enjoy this one. It's not that exciting but it’s good. The next chapter will be out soon since I don't got school till Tuesday. The next chapter will be Chapter 19: HOT HOT HOT. Then south pacific will start soon after. So here it is....


Chapter 18: Fire Pokemon Alike!

Special Guest: 2ra: Castform and Cyndaquil

Dan once again continues his pokemon journey with his new pokemon growlithe. He is walking done the path with growlithe in his hand he was thinking what his old friends were doing.

“Well, growlithe I know I wont be lonely anymore. I got you and your really cute and a nice pokemon. IM going to make you a big powerful growlithe one day and you will be the best of the best.” Dan said looking down at the young growlithe.

He was walking and seen a bench up ahead and decided to sit down for awhile. He walked up and placed his bag on the bench and sat down. He put the baby growlithe to the side on the bench and they sat there.

He looked around and up ahead he could see a sign. “Welcome to Firo Town, home of the best Fire Gym.”

“Wow, growlithe were already at the next town. This is really great. Now I can go battle for my third badge.” Dan said all anxiously with a huge smile. “Will have to get all ready and prepare for the gym battle. Are you hungry?” asked Dan to growlithe.

The growlithe shook its head up and down with its tongue out. Dan went and opened his bag that was to the right of him. Growlithe was on the left of him watching Dan open the bag up. He took out a small bag of food that Joey had given him after she won the food for life.

He tore open the bag with his teeth. He ripped off the rest of the bag after he tore it a little. He placed the top of the bag in his bag and reached in side the pokemon food bag and took out a piece. He moved his hand near growlithe and fed it to it.

“Do you like it?” asked Dan to the hungry puppy pokemon.

The fire dog ate the piece like it has never eaten anything prior to today. Dan smiled happily that growlithe liked the food. He reached in the bag and grabbed a few more. On the front of the bag a charmander eating some of the food and the charmander looked happy and strong. Dan placed the three pieces next to growlithe for it to eat.

Dan patted the pokemon on the head and said “I hope you liked that because that’s all we got for now. But will make due.”

Dan rolled up the bag and placed it back in his bag. The skies were a clear blue and the sun was shining bright still. Dan closed his bag back up and stood up. He placed the bag on his shoulders and picked up growlithe which had just finished eating.

“Hello over that at the bench!” said a distant voice.

“Hello? Who are you?” asked Dan all confused.

“Hi, my name is 2ra, IM a pokemon trainer. Who are you?” asked 2ra as he was walking up to Dan.

“Hi 2ra, my name is Dan and I am too a pokemon trainer. Where are you from?” asked Dan when 2ra finally reached Dan by the bench.

“Well IM from Sootopolis town but right now IM traveling in the region of Hoenn, I decided to come here and visit for a little bit. Where are you from?” 2ra asked Dan.

“Cool, IM from Porlic town which is here in the Niagra region. It’s pretty cool here but the trainer’s are tough.” replied Dan to his new friend 2ra.

The two shook hands and started walking to walk towards Firo town. They pashed the welcoming sign and seen the town was an amazing place. The town had read, orange, and yellow buildings. People have fire looking flowers and the grass was even red. It seemed to be a very quiet town. Not a lot of people were around.

2ra started walking over to the right and Dan followed. As they were walking on the black path to who knows were Dan was wondering where they were going. Then 2ra turned and went into someone’s yard and knocked on the brown wooden door.

“2ra what are you doing? Do you even know who these people are?” asked Dan all bewildered.

“I know these people, there my aunt and uncles house.” replied 2ra staring at Dan like he was thick skulled for knocking on some random persons door.

“O…..ok, I thought you were yea ok.” Dan said looking all brainless and cross eyed.

The door opened up showing two welcoming looking citizens. Growlithe got frightened as well as ducking its head down into Dan. Dan petted it and walked up to the door where 2ra was standing.

“Well hello 2ra, it’s been a long time since we seen you. Look how big and tall you got. How are things going?” asked his aunt.

“Things are going great right now. This is my friend Dan; we just meet a few minutes ago but he’s really cool and stupid.” 2ra said laughing at Dan.

“Well, that’s very good. Why don’t you two come in and stay the night?” asked the uncle who had a short beard and mustache.

2ra and Dan walked into a magnificent house. It was a one story house with a fire place in the middle. It looked to be an all around fire place. There were four main rooms. On one side of the fire place was the living room which they could see, the second place was the master bedroom, the third place was the guest room, and the last place was the bathroom. Over to the far side of the living room was the kitchen. They did not have a dinning room because they didn’t need one. They had little tables by the sofa in the living room.

“You have a nice place here.” Dan said politely.

“Thank you so much young man. IM glad you like it.” replied the aunt with brown curly hair at shoulder length.

“Well you boys want to hear a story and I suggest you take out a fire pokemon if you have one.” 2ra’s aunt said.

Dan and 2ra followed the aunt and uncle into the living room. It had four lights with one on each side of the room. There was a nice black chair where the uncle sat and a nice brown char where the aunt sat. On another side was a big red couch where Dan sat at one end and 2ra sat at the other.

Dan didn’t have any other fire pokemon besides growlithe so he didn’t need to take one out. 2ra went into his pocket and grabbed a pokeball. He threw it into the air but not to high. The red and white ball opened up releasing a light. The light let out a pokemon on to the floor and it was a Cyndaquil.

“Cool a Cyndaquil. My friend Joey has one.” Dan said.

“Thanks, it’s a good pokemon.” 2ra replied watching Cyndaquil stretch out and jump on to 2ra’s lap.

“Ok now that the fire pokemon are out let’s get this story started.” said the aunt.

“Long, long ago in this town lived a young man named Cory. He was about 7 years old. He had very loving parents named Lola and Frank. They were a typical loving family. They did everything together. The town was known as Loovly Town until one night.
An evil man that is still un named that came here with a giant fire pokemon. He wanted to buy the town but the people didn’t want him to have it. He got very angry and had the giant fire pokemon burn the whole town. Everything burned down all the people but Cory’s made it. Cory survived because he was outside and seen the pokemon aim a fire blast at his house.

He seen it burn and the bone chilling screams from inside. He ran away and found other people with out homes watching there town burn down. From then on the town was known as Firo Town because of that tragic night.

Since then Cory said he will train and have fire pokemon and one day find the man that did that and use his pokemon to defeat him.” 2ra’s aunt said out of breath sitting in the brown chair.

“See kids, this town has an important history and to use your pokemon for battles not to hurt or kill anyone. Fire pokemon are at this time extremely well-liked now.” the uncle added.

Dan and 2ra realized how bad it was back then and why they took their fire pokemon out. The lesson was to teach them to not be cruel and use your pokemon for hurt and destruction.

“What happened to Cory?” asked Dan.

“Cory, well he is now the Firo Town mayor and gym leader.” replied the aunt.

“Oh. Well that’s where IM going next. It’s going to be my third gym battle. Do you know how many pokemon he has?” asked Dan in shock.

“Well I know he has a Flareon. But I think he has 2 other pokemon. IM not to sure on that but I know he has at least one. You don’t see him use his pokemon that much. He is a great leader and mayor to us all. He wasn’t the leader until a few days ago. The old one had an accident and had to leave for a while. So till the gym leader Floric comes back Cory is the leader.” 2ra’s uncle said.

“Oh…I bet he’s tough to beat.” 2ra said as he was petting cyndaquil in his arms.

“Fire pokemon are all the same just with different strengths and looks. They all have a desire but if you treat them bad they will be bad and do what that mans pokemon did. Right?” 2ra said and asked.

“That is pretty much right. I think you got the idea. Well it’s getting late and IM tired.” 2ra’s uncle said as his wife agreed.

They got off their chairs and headed to out of the living room and walked to their bedroom. Dan and 2ra stayed in the living room talking.

“So Dan you’re going to have to battle him. Do you think you can win?” asked 2ra.

“I think I’ll win. I have marshstomp, golbat, hoothoot, growlithe, and an aron. Aron won’t work that good since its part steel. Golbat and marshstomp are really strong and I think they will work really well.” Dan replied.

“You got an aron?” asked 2ra.

“Yea, I found an egg and it hatched and aron was in it. Why?” asked Dan wondering why he was surprised that he had one.

“Aron can evolve into a very strong pokemon. I think its called arggon. Something likes that.” 2ra said making Dan seem dumb.

“O, I never knew that. That’s cool to know. Thanks!” Dan said all proud that he will have another very strong pokemon.

“Anytime, just thought you knew that already but guess you didn’t.” 2ra said back to Dan. “New topic, what do you think about that story we heard tonight?”

“I think that it was sad that Cory lost his parents. Do you know what that could do to a kid? Living a life thinking that you will one day you might find the person. All that guilt you didn’t try to help. Then all the anger and pain that is hurting you inside. That has to suck badly.” Dan said in a very serious voice.

“Yea, I agree with you on that. Poor guy, right in front of his house and that all happening.” 2ra said in a sad voice.

“Well, it is getting late and I have a big day tomorrow I think Egg go to sleep now.” Dan said as he walked on to the floor.

“Your right. Good night!” said 2ra as he laid down on the couch.

Dan sat on the floor and slipped off his bag. He put growlithe down for a minute. He opened his bag and took out his sleeping bag. He rolled it out and moved into it. He laid in it and grabbed growlithe and put him in the sleeping bag to. Growlithe stuck its head out and rolled onto its side. Then they fell asleep.



Hope you liked it!
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[2ra]

Last time: 2ra and Daniella were saved by Wally and Kirlia from Milotic, and with the teamwork of 2ra and Daniella, they were able to beat Milotic. Behind a poster they met the Trick Master, whowas tied to a chair and told the trainer trio that they had been tricked. Now, the three trainers are about to leave the Trick House and go on back into their journies to become Hoenn Masters...
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"So, how do we get outta here?" 2ra asked Daniella and Wally, with them responding by just shrugging.

"Castform come on out!" 2ra exclaimed, as he threw his white Pokeball into the air.

The Pokeball shot a red laser out, and a red figure started to form above 2ra. As the laser stopped, the Pokeball fell into 2ra's hand and Castform took the place of that figure. Castform, delighted to be out of its Pokeball, started hugging 2ra, which he found embarrassing.

"Cas! Cast!" the weather Pokemon said as it was hugging 2ra.

"Uh yeah..." 2ra said, since he didn't know what to say and just blurted out anything.

"Am I interrupting anything?" the Trick Master said, appearing out of nowhere just like before.

"Oh hey!" Daniella said, walking up to the Trick Master and trying to hug him, but it was a hologram and she went right through and fell into the water.

"Meh" Daniella sighed as she got out of the water.

"I have a present for you, its on the counter of the next room. Just go through the poster to get there" the Trick Master said.

As the Trick Masters hologram disappeared, the three trainers walked through the poster, although this time they broke through it like how they first entered, it seems the posters are changed for new ones once in a while. Wally spotted the counter right away, it was on their left and on top of it was a small piece of paper, which Daniella quickly snatched.

"Hmm, it says here that these are four tickets, but it is unknown for what..." Daniella said, throwing away the paper and keeping the four tickets.

"Lets get out of here" Wally said, and the three trainers, along with Castform, walked outside.

The weather was normal, like usual, cloudy weather with a few breezes or two, nothing that they had'nt seen so far. Castform seemed weird, so 2ra returned it to its Pokeball, and the three trainers were off.

"How much longer until Mauville?" 2ra asked, but again, the other two trainers just shrugged.

The trainers kept walking, until just a few blocks away from Trick House they saw a large building being surrounded by a crowd. Daniella, being the most curious of the three, walked over, with 2ra and Andrew following.

"What's all the commotion?" Daniella asked one of the people in the crowd, but to her surprise it was Andrew!

"Daniella! Hey! They're lending bikes here to go on Cycle Road, the fastest was to Mauville" Andrew told Daniella.

"Hey Andrew!" 2ra and Wally said as they saw him.

"Hey!" Andrew said, which was annoying Daniella, as most of the words being said were hi or hey.

"Lets get over to the front" Daniella said, sneaking around until she made it to the front of the line.

"I'd like a Bicycle please!" Daniella said, but was interrupted by 2ra, Wally, and Andrew saying; "Us Too!"

"Sure, a cloaked man said, handing the four trainers a bicycle each.

2ra was given a pink bicycle, so not only was he embarrassed by Castform hugging him, but now this. Daniella was given an orange bike, which she liked because it reminded her of Mudkips cheeks. Andrew and Wally both got green bikes, and 2ra begged them to trade bikes with him, but they denied his offer.

"Cycle Road here we---" Daniella started to say, but her shoelaces got intertwined with he bikes and her flipped over and fell.

"Let's go!" 2ra said, ignoring Daniella and going on.

The four trainers rode their bikes on the road, it had started to rain a bit, which pulled them off course sometimes, but eventually, after like twenty minutes, the four trainers almost made it to the end, when they were blocked by four people on their own bicycles.

All four looked alike, shaved heads, with chokers around their necks. They had oval faces and all four smirked as they stopped the four friends from advancing on the Cycle Road.

"You aren't getting past us, unless you defeat us in a four on four battle!" the leader said, you could tell because he had a badge that said leader, which didn't seem like something they would wear by the way.

"Fine!" the four trainers said, each throwing one Pokeball.

"Swab!" Wally's Pokemon said, stretching its wings and flying up into the air.

"Treee!" Andrew's Pokemon said.

The two Pokemon seemed to get along well, as the gecko shook its tail with the birds powdery wings.

"Torc!" and, "Mud" were also heard, but Treecko didn't pay much attention.

"Well then! Magnemite Go!" the four men said, with four magnets appearing before them.

Likewise, the kipper and chick got along well, which seperated the team of the four trainers in half, Torchic and Mudkip; and Treecko and Swablu; unlike the other people whose all four Pokemon worked together.

"Torchic attack Magnemite with your Ember!" 2ra said.

The small chick Pokemon shot a powerful blast of fire at Magnemite, making its eye turn angry, but you could tell it was becoming very weak.

"Mudkip attack!" Daniella said, with Mudkip nodding its small cute face and shooting a stream of water at the same Magnemite 2ra had attacked.

What Daniella didn't notice was that the kippers attack backfired, the stream shot a blot of electricity straight at Mudkip, weakening it more than it weakened Magnemite. Treecko, without Andrew saying anything, Tackled another Magnemite; and Swablu pecked at the same Magnemite that Treecko attacked.

"But I didn't tell you to attack..." Andrew said under his breath.

"Magnemite! Together attack and destroy Swablu with Thundershock!" the four men said.

The Magnemite then concentrated their energy and each shot a blast of electricty at Swablu, but luckily Torchic blocked two of the attacks, barely saving Swablu.

"Swa?" Swablu said in astonishment, as Torchic had saved it.

"Treecko use Quick Attack!" Andrew said.

Treecko then quickly jumped into the air and tackled Magnemite instead, causing Magnemites static to paralyze Treecko. Swablu, seeing its friend got hurt used Mirror Move and shot electricity at Magnemite, which powered it up even more.

"Torch" Torchic said as it shot even more fire from its beak at Magnemite, leaving it barely hanging on.

"MUUUUUUDDDDDDDDKKKKKIIIIPPPPPPP!" Daniella's Mudkip said as it started glowing again.

Mudkip started glowing in a blu-ish light this time, it jumped into the air and shot a blast of Mud from its mouth at Magnemite, causing it to faint.

"Magnemite return!" one of the four men said, then rode off in his bicycle, leaving only three Magnemites left.

"Wow! Mudkip learned Mud Shot!" 2ra exclaimed.

"Grrrr..." the three men said, when their Magnemite started to act weirdly, they started attracting to each other and combined as one, evolving into Magneton!

"Magneton!" the large magnet said as it shot a blast of shockwaves at Treecko, knocking it into Andrew.

"Mudkiiiiii" the kipper said as it shot a blast of mud at the large magnet, knocking it out in one hit.

"Grrrrrr. Magneton return...." one of the three said, but they started fighting over who got to keep Magneton, and the four trainers, after returning their Pokemon, snuck away and left Cycle Road, leaving their bikes at the end.

"I believe this is.....yes it's Mauville!" Wally said, awakening a doubt in 2ra....what if he lost?!
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 17: A Shocking Ending!

[totodilelover]

This was a good chapter. You are getting longer more descriptive chapters. It was a good battle in it. Keep on writing.

[2ra]

Thanks, I'm trying to be more descriptive ^_^

As for Politoed, not many more Chapters until it appears.

I'm planning on posting Chapter 17 later today, then 18 tomorrow, 19 either tomorrow or Monday, and if I posted 19 on Sunday I'll post 20 on Monday lol

So there might be a total of 5 chapters done this week, maybe even more! =D

[RJdude]

Good chapter. So Mdkip has a new move... I wonder if it'll evolve soon.

[Hanada Tattsu]

Great chapter, Roman!

Cool, Mudkip learning Mud Shot was well described. You're getting much better, keep it up, can't wait for more!

[2ra]

Last time: 2ra, Daniella, and Wally; after getting four tickets from the Trick Master; met up with Andrew and entered the Cycle Road where they were challenged by four men. Eventually the four trainers won and left Cycle Road, to find themselves in Mauville!
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"We're here! We're finally here!" Daniella said as she ran towards the near Pokemon Center, which reminded 2ra of what she did last time.

"Ack!" Daniella said, her face turning pale and filled with fear as a black puppy appeared before her.

"What's wrong? It's just a baby Poochyena!" Andrew said, petting the small dog Pokemon, but Daniella just kept walking back.

The dog Pokemon barked a bit, but mostly it was calm. It seemed to like Daniella, and started to walk towards the girl. It was no use, Daniella kept walking back until she climbed up a tree, but to her surprise Poochyena followed her up! A large crash was heard as Daniella weighed a bit too much for the branch she was on and it broke, Daniella falling on the ground.

"Pooch!" the puppy said, licking on Daniella's leg, but she just freaked out and started running away.

"Daniella wait up!" the three trainers said as they ran after her, luckily they were faster and managed to catch up to her.

"What's wrong? It was just a harmless Poochyena!" 2ra told Daniella, but she was still freaked out.

"Uh hey look! The Pokemon Center is right here!" Daniella said as she ran over and walked inside, she was really trying to change the subject.

"Welcome to the Pokemon Center! How may I help you?" Nurse Joy asked the four trainers, and she was handed ten Pokeballs, so Chansey had to help her out.

"Chansey!" the happiness Pokemon said, Daniella always wondered where the Chansey came from.

The four trainers sat impatiently on a bench, the only one that wasn't being occupied, and the four were cramped so they pushed Daniella off and she started screaming at the three guys.

"Why'd you do that for!?!" Daniella yelled.

"Uh, hey look it's one of those video phones!" 2ra said, changing the subject as she had done before.

It was one of those advanced things that 2ra wasn't too sure about, it had a screen with a phone hanging next to it, which somehow reminded 2ra about a computer. He sat in the chair in front of the machine and the three trainers stood behind him, watching the screen.

"Hurry up! Call someone!" Daniella told 2ra.

"Okay okay! Uh I think it's like this..." 2ra said as he put a coin in a slot on the side of the green machine and it started making noises.

"Uh oh" 2ra said, as the machine turned on and the screen suddenly went blank.

"2ra are you stupid or something?! Press Enter on that keyboard!" Daniella yelled.

"Okay..." 2ra said as he spotted a small keyboard in a drawer and type in Enter, which made the computer turn off and explode!

The phone machine started malfunctioning, and then suddenly blew up, blowing a circuit and then the lights suddenly turning off. Nurse Joy quickly ran over to the "phone machine" as 2ra thought it was called.

"That's not a phone device! That controls the Pokemon Centers light system!" Nurse Joy scolded 2ra.

"But it wasn't my fault! Daniella made me press enter!" 2ra told Nurse Joey, and he eyes quickly shifted to Daniella.

"I have sick Pokemon to take care of! And..." Nurse Joy started to say, but she was interrupted by a tall man who was bearing some sort of mask.

"I'll take care of this!" the man said, revealing his Pokemon, a Manectric.

2ra had never seen one, but his Pokedex told him that Manectric are one of the strongest electric Pokemon and have enough electricity to power up cities. As 2ra put away his Pokedex, the electric Pokemon shot a blast of electricity at the computer, which somehow turned the lights back on in the Center.

"Thank you!" Nurse Joy said, forgetting what Daniella had done and started walking towards the infirmary room.

"Wow that was close" Andrew said, he decided to talk since he hadn't said anything today.

"Wally? Wally?!" the three trainers asked as they looked for Wally.

They found Wally on one of the REAL phone devices, and he seemed to be talking to Prof. Birch. Wally was telling Prof. Birch about his Pokemon when Prof. Birch saw 2ra, Daniella, and Andrew and decided to greet them.

"Hey kids! How are your Pokemon?" Prof. Birch asked the trainers, but since they all talked at once Prof. Birch couldn't understand what they were saying.

"Okay...2ra, Wally told me about how you caught a Corphish and I needed to ask you if I could study it" Prof. Birch said, ignoring what the trainers had said before.

"Uh, for what?" 2ra asked Prof. Birch.

"Well, I'm conducting a research project about Corphish and need one" Prof. Birch said, which angered Daniella.

"Hey! I have a Corphish too and mine is way stronger!" Daniella sneered, as she thought she had the best Corphish in the world and the thought of Prof. Birch choosing another one was insulting.

"Well, 2ra's Corphish seems larger than yours Daniella" Prof. Birch told her.

"Okay Prof. I'll give it to you once I get it back!" 2ra said, and that's when Nurse Joy came out and handed them their Pokeballs.

2ra took his Pokeball with Corphish, said goodbye, and placed it in a small machine next to the phone device that transported Pokeballs. Corphish was then seen on the Prof. screen, and the connection was lost.

"I hope Corphish will be okay" 2ra said, when he remembered where he was.

"Oh right! Let’s go to the gym!" 2ra said.

"I'll stay here" Wally said, so the three trainers left and went outside.

The sun was still shining so Daniella wasn't too scared as they walked towards the gym, which was just behind the Pokemon Center. It was a large white building with a yellow roof and electric marks all over the building, which appealed to Andrew.

2ra, Daniella, and Andrew walked inside to find themselves in a large maze of electricity, like one of those lines at Disney, where you had to walk a certain way and didn't allow you to go to other places. The maze was pretty easy, as the three trainers were out of it in a few minutes and found themselves in the battling arena.

At the end was a man with a Manectric, and upon seeing the trainers, he said, "Welcome to my gym! Which of you wants to challenge the mighty Wattson?"

The voice was familiar to them, and they decided that it was the man from the Pokemon Center and 2ra replied, "I am."

"Well then let’s start!" Wattson said.

"This will be a two on two Pokemon battle! The Gym Leaders may not switch Pokemon, but the challenger may! No Time Limit! BEGIN!" the referee said which couldn't really be seen because he was in a maroon cloak.

"Magneton I choose you!" Wattson said, and a large magnet appeared before him.

"Magggggg" the magnets said, storing their energy for an attack.

"Hmm, a Magneton eh? Torchic I choose you!" 2ra said as he threw his Pokeball and his chick Pokemon appeared.

"CHI" the chick said as it opened its beak and shot embers at Magneton, but it quickly countered with Metal Defense and protected itself.

"Magneton use SonicBoom!" Wattson told his Pokemon.

The magnets eyes locked onto Torchic and shot a blast of sonic waves at it, blasting it in the air. The chick quick shot flames at Magneton, and then at the ground to help stop its fall.

"Torchic use Peck!" 2ra told Torchic.

The chick Pokemon obeyed its trainer and started pecking at Magneton, but it quickly used Metal Defense again, causing Torchic's break to get hurt.

"Chic" the chick said in agony.

"Magneton finish it with Thunderbolt!" Wattson said.

The magnet quickly attracted electricity to its body from the electric entrance and shot a powerful blast of electricity at Torchic, almost knocking it out.

"Come on Dexter..." 2ra said as he looked through his Pokedex about Torchic's moves.

"Torchic knows Ember, Peck, Scratch, and Fire Spin" Dexter said, which gave 2ra and idea.

After he put away his Pokedex, 2ra yelled, "Torchic! FIRE SPIN!"

The chick then shot a ring of a fire around Magneton, not allowing it to move and then knocking it out.

"Magneton is unable to battle!" the referee said as Wattson returned his Magneton and signaled his Manectric to go.

"You may have defeated Magneton, but not Manectric! Attack Torchic with Spark!" Wattson told Manectric.

The electric Pokemon then made a ball of electricity to protect it, or so it seemed, and it advanced on Torchic, shocking it and knocking it out.

"Torchic is unable to battle!" the referee said.

As 2ra returned his Torchic to its Pokeball, he took his white Pokeball and grasped it in his hand. As he threw it in the air, Castform appeared before him, and he was confident that he would defeat Manectric with it.

"Castform use Ember and follow up with Powder Snow!" 2ra said, and Castform shot embers at Manectric, which burned it a bit and then shot powder at the electric Pokemon, freezing it in one hit.

"Manectric use Spark!" Wattson said, and suddenly the ice exploded into shards of ice and Manectric was normal again.

Suddenly, Manectric charged at Castform, paralyzing at and knocking it out as well.....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 18: Weather Issues!

[RJdude]

Aww, poor 2ra. Why did he have to lose? Oh well, I'm sure he'll beat Wattson in their rematch.

[2ra]

Uh yea, I hope 2ra wins his re-match *wink* :P

Bye Bye Krabb-I mean Corphish! lol

This is beginning to remind me of Ash and how he lost in Dewford lol

Thanks for Reading RJ! :P

I got behind schedule so I MIGHT post Chapter 18 today, if not tomorrow lol

[Dragon_Claw]

I really liked this chapter. Altough Brendon from 'To Be A Master' by Mister_Mayor lost here too, so I tought: Oh well, I can still do it. Because I was planning this too, but now you've done it in the exact same place, I guess I'll have to do it somewhere else.

Edit: By the way, when did Andrew come back. I don't get how he just appeared.

[2ra]

Andrew came back in chapter 16 in Cycle-Delic they met him near the Cycle Road entrance lol

[Hanada Tattsu]

Great chapter, 2ra!

I like the idea of Wattson with a Manectric, I also like the idea of 2ra losing, I wonder what happens next...

[totodilelover]

Well this is the chapter im stopping at and then in a couple of weeks around the end of July I will start right back up with new and better chapters. Just think of this as a season finale. Mods please don't close this just let it go down and I will find it later. I have decided to do FAITH instead of South Pacific so check that out. But for now here it is. PLease enjoy it.



Chapter 19: Hot Hot Hot

Dan closed his eyes and finally went to sleep after gearing the story of Firo Town. He was very tired and had to get sleep for his big battle tomorrow. In his head so many things were going around.

“I can’t believe IM going to battle for my third badge tomorrow……alone. I really wish Joey and Matt were with me. But they went their separate ways. I wonder if they battled the leader yet.

Who should I use tomorrow? I know I’ll definitely use marshstomp and golbat. But who will be my third pokemon? I have hoothoot, aron, and growlithe. Aron is weak against fire so that wont work.

Hoothoot is pretty strong and it might be able to do it. It hasn’t had that much battle time but that might be a good or bad thing. Growlithe could do it but it’s not that strong yet. It’s only a baby pokemon and it hasn’t even battled yet.

It is going to be a hard day tomorrow. But let’s hope that golbat and marshstomp can do it. “Dan dreamed all night worrying about how he can win.

The moon started to fade away in the night sky and the sun started rising up. It was a new day and Dan’s gym battle. 2ra woke up and seen that Dan was gone but there was a note on the floor. And it read…


2ra,
Sorry I left with out saying bye. I went to go train with growlithe this morning. Ill see you when it is over. You are a great new friend. Well I need to do a lot of work if I am going to win. I’ll talk to you soon.

~Dan

P.s. Thank your aunt and uncle for lettering me stay over.

2ra read it and went back to sleep on the couch. Dan was out in a field battling a trainer with his growlithe. It was a small area with just grass and dirt.

“Growlithe try an ember attack.” Dan shouted to his new pokemon.

Growlithe opened its mouth and let out a small burst of flames hitting the other pokemon. The pokemon got pushed back a little.

“Nincada, use a poison sting now.” shouted the trainer.

The nincada opened its mouth and released a bunch of short needles that had purple at the top and shot them at growlithe.

“Growlithe dodge it and use ember on the needles.” Dan shouted.

Growlithe dodged the needles and opened its mouth and shot an ember at them burning them to ash.

“Nincada come on and try a little and use tackle attack!” screamed the crazy trainer.

“Growlithe use tackle attack to.” Dan said to his puppy pokemon.

The two pokemon ran towards each other and jumped and tackled each other. They both flew back onto the grass. They both struggled to get up but they both managed to get up.

“Good job!” Both trainers screamed.

“Growlithe use an ember attack again.” Dan said.

“Nincada use poison sting again.” the other trainer shouted.

Nincada and Growlithe both opened their mouths. Growlithe let out a jet of red and orange flames while nincada let out a bunch of poisoned needles. The two attacks collided but the ember was stronger and burned the needles and headed for nincada. The ember hit nincada and caused it to fall back.

“Great job growlithe, I think you did it.” Dan said with a big smile on his face.

“Nincada, get up and use leer now.” the trainer shouted.

The nincada was all charcoaled looking and was laying there. Then growlithe walked over and touched it and jumped on it to see if it was still alive. As it jumped on it nincada moved over and growlithe fell down.

“Good job nincada, now use scratch attack.” shouted the man.

“Growlithe get up and move away and use growl.” Dan shouted.

Growlithe started to roll to the right when nincada use scratch but it missed a little but did hit growlithe a little. Growlithe slowly got back up and started to growl really loud.

“Nincada don’t listen to it.” Nincada’s trainer said.

“Growlithe after that use ember and tackle together.” Dan shouted out to the fire colored pokemon.

“Nincada try and dodge it.” the trainer said.

Growlithe started to shot an ember out at nincada but missed it so it ran towards it but nincada moved away from it. Growlithe fell and tumbled down on the ground.

“Growlithe, can you go on.” Dan shouted.

The pokemon shaked its head a little and stopped moving. It had fainted. Since Dan didn’t catch it he threw a pokeball out and caught it. The ball opened up releasing a light that sucked it into the ball. The ball shut and shaked five times and stopped. The ball went back to Dan’s hands.

“Good battle kid. Bye.” The trainer said as he went off.

“Yup, good battle. Bye.” Dan said sadly.

“Its ok growlithe, you did your best out there. Plus you never battled before.” Dan said as he talked to the pokemon inside the ball.

He walked back to town and went to the pokemon center. HE walked past a few little houses and could see the pokemon center up a head. He reached the door and went inside. It was a nice day out even though it was supposed to rain later on. It was about 8:30 in the morning.

“Hi, welcome to the pokemon center. Would you like me to heal your pokemon for you?” asked the pretty nurse.

“Yes please.” Dan replied.

“Ok please give me your pokeballs.” the nurse said.

“Ok.” Dan said as he placed growlithes ball on the table. Then he went into his pocket and grabbed his other pokemons pokeballs.

“Ok, your pokemon will be ready shortly.” The nurse said as she walked into the back room and placed the pokeballs into a machine.

“Ok, I will be on the phone in the waiting room.” Dan said as he walked away and went to the phone.

He walked over past the seating area to a little table with a green phone on it. He picked it up and dialed the professor’s number. The phone started to ring and some picked it up.

“Hello, this is Tara speaking. How may I help you?” Tara asked.

“Hi Professor, its Dan.” Dan replied.

“Hi Dan! It’s been a long time since we talked. How are things going for you?” Tara asked.

“Things are going pretty good. Matt, Joey, and I all decided to go are separate ways for awhile.” Dan replied.

“Oh…well I had a feeling you would all get sick of each other sooner or later.” Tara laughed. So how is pokemon collecting going?”

“It is going great! So far I have marshstomp, aron, hoothoot, a shiny golbat, and a baby growlithe.” Dan said all happy.

“Wow, you have some new and interesting pokemon. I can’t wait to see that golbat. Do you think I could take a look at it one day?” Tara asked in a nice voice.

“Well, after I win my next badge I guess you could look at it because golbat is strong and I need a strong pokemon for my next battle.” Dan replied.

“That is great thanks a lot. If you let me borrow that I will let you borrow one of my pokemon till I decide to give it back. How does that sound?” Tara asked.

“Ok, that sounds far enough.” Dan replied.

“Ok then it is settled. I will borrow golbat for awhile and I will let you borrow one of my pokemon for a while. Ok Dan well I got to go I have another call coming in. I will talk to you soon. Bye!” Tara said as she hung up.

“Bye!” Dan said as he hung up and wondering what pokemon will she let him borrow.

“Young man, your pokemon are ready to be picked up.” the nurse said to Dan.

“Ok, IM coming.” Dan said as he got up from the chair and walked over to the front desk.

Dan reached the desk and the nurse brought out his five pokeballs. “Your pokemon are all in a good condition. I am surprised to see a shiny pokemon in there. It is rare seeing them around here.” The nurse told Dan as she handed him his pokemon.

“Thanks, it was hard to find. So they are pretty rare to find?” Dan asked the nurse.

“Yes, they are very rare. One of the trainers in this league have a shiny pokemon. I think it is Ash the final trainer here you will have to battle. It is a very powerful pokemon.” the nurse added.

“Wow, do you know what pokemon it is?” Dan asked.

“I think it might be a noctowl. I am not sure he has two but he only uses one of them. Well I hope you do well at the gym here.” The nurse said with a smile.

“Thanks! Well I got to go. Bye!” Dan said with a smile as he slipped his pokeballs into his pocket.

“Bye. Good luck!” the nurse shouted as Dan walked away and out the door.

Dan walked out side with the doors closing behind him. It was starting to get cloudy out and he wanted to get to the gym as fast as he could. HE looked around and there were no signs anywhere.

“The gym has to be somewhere around here.” Dan thought to himself.

He started walking around the streets to see if he could find anyone or the gym. He started walking down a street called flare drive. He walked around and he seen a big building but it was just the mall there.

He continued walking down till he reached the mall. By the time he got there it was starting to rain. He looked and looked but he couldn’t find it any where. He looked on the ground and on a side walked that was going east and west had fire foot prints on the black paved walkway. He decided to follow them to the west side.

He followed the fire prints around the mall and it lead to a large house thing that looked like a volcano but it wasn’t. He knew he had found the gym. He walked up to it and opened the door to it. It was a giant red and orange battle field with torches everywhere.

He walked in and said “Hello? Is anyone in here? I am here to battle for my third badge.”

“Welcome to my gym. I am Cory the gym leader here.” The leader said and all the lights came on.

“Hi, I am Dan. Let’s have a battle.” Dan shouted as he walked up to the battle field.

“Ok, then. We will use three pokemon and no time limit. Let’s begin, pokemon go!” Cory shouted as he walked up to the battle field.

“Golbat I choose you!” Dan shouted.

The two trainers flung their pokeballs up into the air. The black pokeball opened up releasing a black light. Out of the black light came a bunch of sparkles and golbat. The white and red ball released a light that let out Slugma.

“Golbat fly high and use a gust attack on Slugma.” Dan shouted.

“Slugma use flamethrower attack now.” Cory shouted.

Slugma opened its lava covered mouth and let out a jet of orange and red flames at golbat. Golbat dodged it and started to flap its wings rapidly. A small tornado came out hitting slugma. The slugma got pushed back a little but it was still ready strong.

“Good job slugma use smokescreen now!” Cory shouted to slugma.

“Golbat dodge it by flapping away the smoke and surprise it with a wing attack.” Dan shouted up to golbat in the volcano shaped gym.

Slugma opened its magma covered mouth again and let out a huge stream of black smoke. Golbat flew into the smoke directly down. Then it started to flap its wings and the smoke cleared away. Then golbat seen the slugma and flew closer and flapped its wings on it. The slugma didn’t see it coming. It flew back and hit the ground.

The lava pokemon got back up and was still hanging on. Golbat flew back up into he air were it was safe.

“Great job golbat now use confuse ray.” Dan shouted.

“Slugma use your confuse ray back at it.” Cory shouted to his lava pokemon.

Golbats eyes started to glow a deep dark purple. Slugma’s eyes started to glow a dark purple too. They both let out a huge beam of dark purple light at each other. Both purple beams collided and made an explosion.

“Slugma!” Cory shouted.

“Golbat!” Dan shouted.

The big explosion made the air full of dust. The dust slowly dispatched and revealed the two pokemon on the ground. Golbat slowly started to get up and fly. Slugma just moved around and slowly got up as well. The pokemon were both confused and walking around like crazy drunks.

“Golbat snap out of it and use bite attack.” Dan said to his confused pokemon.

“Slugma, try and dodge its attack and use flamethrower.” Cory shouted to his dizzy pokemon.

Golbat waddled over and bite the slugma that was trying to get away but it didn’t realize it bit its wing as well. The golbat shirked in pain as it did it. It moved its wing and bit the slugma again.

“Slugma come on and use flame thrower.” Cory shouted.

“Golbat use leech life.” Dan said.

Golbat continued betting it and started to suck the life out of it. As it did that slugma opened its mouth and let out some flames. But as golbat was sucking its life it got weaker. It soon stopped shooting flames out and it fainted. Golbat let go of it and was out of confusion.

“Slugma return. I choose you magmar!” Cory shouted as he took slugma’s pokeball and threw it in the air to return it.

The red and white pokeball opened up and a light came out. The light sucked slugma back into the pokeball. The ball closed and went back to Cory’s hand. He slipped it in his pant pocket and took out another ball.

He threw the red and white ball into the air. The ball opened up releasing a light that let out magmar. The ball closed and went back into Cory’s hand.

“Magmar use flamethrower on the bat.” Cory shouted.

“Golbat fly up and use super sonic!” Dan shouted up to the flying pokemon.

The red pokemon with a large bump like thing on his head opened its mouth and let out a stream of red and orange flames at golbat. Golbat didn’t know how fast they would come and the flames hit golbat. Golbat flew back and hit the wall. It was barely moving it tried and flew up. It opened its mouth and screeched out blue rings that went down and hit magmar. Magmar started to wobble around and act like a fool.

“Magmar snap out of it and use a fire punch when it comes down again.” Cory yelled.

“Golbat be careful and use wing attack on magmar now.” Dan shouted.

Golbat flew down and started to hit the magmar with its wings. As it was doing it magmar stood there and kept wobbling back and forth it was so confused. Then it snapped out of it and its fist became flames.

“Golbat watch out!” Dan shouted loudly.

Golbat looked back at Dan and magmar threw its flaming fist at golbat making it fall back. The golbat hit the ground hard. It struggled to get up but it fainted.

“Great job golbat, return. I choose you growlithe!” Dan shouted as he took golbats ball out of his pocket.

He threw golbats ball into the air and it opened up releasing a light. The light touched golbat and sucked it back into the ball. The pokeball shut and went back to Dan’s hand. He put the pokeball back into his pocket and grabbed growlithes pokeball.

He threw it into the air as it opened up. It released a light that let out growlithe. The light went back in and shut. The pokeball went back into Dan’s hand and he put in his pocket.

“Growlithe use ember attack now!” Dan shouted to the pup.

“Magmar use flamethrower now.” Cory shouted.

Growlithe opened its little mouth and released a ball of flames at magmar. Magmar opened its mouth and released an on going jet of flames at growlithe. The two fires collided and the fire ball hit the flamethrower and blew up knocking growlithe back a little. The flamethrower kept coming and hit growlithe even worse.

“Great job magmar. Finish it off with head butt.” Cory shouted.

“Growlithe use tackle.” Dan shouted.

The two pokemon ran towards each other. Magmar had its head down and growlithe was running as fast as it could. They collided and both flew backwards and hit the ground. Magmar got up with little struggle but growlithe stayed down. Growlithe fainted.

“Good job growlithe, return. Pokemon go!” Dan shouted.

He took out growlithes pokeball and threw it in the air. The red and white pokeball opened up letting out a light that sucked growlithe back into it. The ball closed up and went back to Dan’s hand. He placed the pokeball back into his pocket and took out his third ball.

He took it out and threw it in the air. The ball opened up and let out a light. The light let the pokemon out and the light went back into the ball. The ball shut and went back to Dan’s hand.

“Ah this battle will finally get interesting.” Cory shouted. “This is a real challenge now.”

“Marshstomp use water gun now.” Dan yelled out to the swamp fish pokemon.

“Magmar use your head butt to knock it over.” Cory shouted.

Marshstomp opened its big blue mouth and released an on going stream of crystal clear water. It shot out of its mouth and went for magmar but it ducted to do a head butt. Marshstomp seen magmar coming towards it with its head down. It lowered its head and pointed its water gun at the magmar.

“Magmar watch out!” Cory yelled to magmar.

“Keep going marshstomp keep hitting it with water gun.” Dan said with a smile.

“Marshstomp kept pumping out jet after jet of water at the magmar. The water kept hitting it but magmar kept going towards marshstomp. Marshstomp opened its mouth water released even more water. The water jet got so strong it pushed magmar back far and made it fall back and tumble around.

“Magmar get up!” shouted Cory. “Use flamethrower.”

“Marshstomp finish it off with mud shot.” Dan shouted.

Marshstomp started to lick the field to gather up some dirt so its body could make more. It started to do something in its mouth and then it started shooting balls of mud out. One, two, three, and four shots of mud came out and hit the magmar. Magmar struggled to get up but fell face down. Magmar fainted.

“Magmar you did a great job! Return.” Cory said.

“You did an awesome job marshstomp. Get ready Flareon is coming.” Dan shouted out to his swamp fish pokemon.

“Ah so you know my last pokemon. Well it’s strong and stronger than yours.” Cory shouted as he took back out magmar’s pokeball.

He threw magmar’s ball into the air and the white and red pokeball opened up releasing a light. The light hit magmar and sucked it back into the ball. The ball closed and went back to Cory’s hand.

He placed the pokeball back into his pocket. He took out another pokeball and threw it in the air. The red and white ball opened up and released a light. The light hit the ground letting out flareon. The light went back in the ball causing it to shut and going back to Cory’s hand.

“Marshstomp use mud slap on flareon.” Dan shouted.

“Flareon use sand attack on marshstomp.” Cory shouted.

The two pokemon turned around and started kicking stuff at each other. Marshstomp was spraying water and the ground and kicking the dusty muddy ground at flareon. Flareon was also kicking dust but at marshstomp using its hind legs. All the dust created a giant dust bowl. The two pokemon couldn’t see a thing.

“Marshstomp use water gun attack now!” Dan shouted.

“Flareon use flamethrower now.” Cory shouted.

The two powerful pokemon each let out a powerful attack. Flareon open its small mouth and started to release a stream of hot red and orange flames at marshstomp. Marshstomp released a jet of blue water at flareon. The two powerful jets of water and fire collided. The attacks kept pushing back and fourth with one another. The water gun started to push the flamethrower back and back and finally the water gun hit flareon and pushed the fire pokemon back.

“Great job marshstomp! Use mud shot!” Dan shouted.

“Flareon get up and use quick attack.” shouted Cory.

Marshstomp started to move stuff in its mouth again and got ready to shoot mud balls at flareon. Flareon got up and started to move fast and run around marshstomp. Marshstomp started to shoot the mud at flareon but it was to fast. Finally flareon got close and ran by and hit marshstomp one, two, and three times. Marshstomp fell back on to its back.

“Great job flareon, now use tackle.” Cory shouted out to flareon.

“Marshstomp get up and use tackle too.” Dan shouted to his water/ground pokemon.

Marshstomp slowly but got back up on its feet. It looked up and seen flareon running towards it and marshstomp then started to run towards each other. Their heads collided and they were head to head. They kept pushing at each other and trying to make the other fall.

“Come on marshstomp, you can do it. I believe in you!” Dan shouted.

“Flareon come on and push that fish on its back.” Cory shouted.

The pokemon heard what their trainers were saying and it made them push harder. First marshstomp was sliding back and then flareon was sliding back. This kept going on for a little bit. The pokemon were starting to look very tired.

“Come on marshstomp, finish flareon off with water gun.” Dan shouted.

“Flareon use flamethrower.” Cory shouted.

Marshstomp jumped back and opened its blue mouth and let out a blue jet of water. The water almost hit flareon but flareon opened its mouth and released a jet of flames at marshstomp. They two attacks caused a giant explosion making the pokemon both fall back.

“Flareon get up and use tackle.” Cory shouted.

“Marshstomp are you ok? If you are, use a water gun attack again.” Dan shouted.

The smoke cleared from the blast and showed Marshstomp standing and flareon down. Flareon fainted and Marshstomp won.

“You did it marshstomp!” Dan shouted.

“You did a great job flareon, return.” Cory said.

Marshstomp ran over and hugged Dan’s leg. Dan picked it up and hugged it tight. Cory took out flareon’s pokeball and threw it in the air. The red and white pokeball opened up releasing a light that touched flareon and sucked it back into the ball. The ball closed and went back to Cory’s hand. He placed the ball back into his pocket.

“Well, Dan I didn’t expect you to win but you did. You proved me wrong and you deserve the Flame Badge!” Cory said as he walked across the battle field to Dan.

“Thank you a lot. I tried but I thought you were going to win and I would lose.

“Well we both proved are selves wrong today now here is your third Niagra league badge!” Cory said reaching Dan and placing the badge in his hand.

“Wow, thank you again. Bye!” Dan said as he slipped the badge into his pocket and walked out the door.

“You’re very welcome!” Cory said waving bye to Dan as he left the gym.

Dan walked outside to find out it was still raining but not as bad. He walked around the mall and headed back to the pokemon center with a giant smile on his face.



Hope you all liked this!
:D :wave: :yes:

[pokemonrule13]

You have grown as a writer. I can see you are working on using more description. I have read you first and last chapter. I been doing that with a few now. I am going to copy and paste the rest so I can read it when I get off line. I like 2ra a lot he seems like a cool character. To bad he didn't win his gym battle. Torchic should kick some electric butt next time. Torchic is a great pokemon. I hope your storys get better and better with every chapter you do.

[2ra]

Last time: 2ra and friends entered Mauville, where they healed their Pokemon and had a talk with Prof. Birch. He asked 2ra for his Corphish as he needed to do research, and after 2ra gave it to him, the trainers were off to the Gym. Wattsons first Pokemon was Magneton, which after some effort from Torchiic, was beaten. Next round was a Manectric VS. Torchic, but Manectric was just to strong. Manectric used Spark on both Torchic and Castform, knocking both out in one hit...
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"Castform is unable to battle...Wattson is the Winner!" the referee announced.

"Castform return" 2ra uttered as Daniella and Andrew ran over to him.

"It's okay, it's only your first gym! You'll have better luck next time" Andrew and Daniella said.

"You know, you can challenge me again after you do some training. I must go now..." Wattson said as he suddenly turned around and walked through a door that was located behind him.

"Yeah I guess so, I've got to go training!" 2ra exclaimed.

The three trainers then walked back through the maze and walked outside. The weather seemed strange, but 2ra didn't pay attention as he only wanted to train his Pokemon. 2ra was the first to enter the Pokemon Center, with Daniella and Andrew following.

"Please Heal my Pokemon!" 2ra told Nurse Joy as he handed her his two Pokeballs.

"Sure thing, you didn't happen to lose to Wattson did you?" Nurse Joy asked.

"Yeah, that's why I'm here" 2ra replied.

"Many trainers come here after battling Wattson, if you need training, you should head north towards the desert lands, many trainers go there" Nurse Joy said as she left into the infirmary room.

"Hey 2ra!" Wally said as he spotted him.

"Hey Wally" 2ra said, without as much enthusiasm as Wally though.

The four trainers stood in silence, which made them feel awkward so they decided to look through their things. Daniella's Blue Backback contained some clothes, her PokeGear, which she had totally forgotten about; some food, and her Mudkip Doll which he started hugging until she saw everyone was staring at her so she stopped.

2ra's White Backback contained his Torchic Doll that was given to him, his Pokedex, and some clothes, but not as much as Daniella. Andrew was about to look through his stuff when Nurse Joy came back with 2ra's Pokeballs.

"Here you go! All better!" Nurse Joy said as she handed 2ra his Pokeballs back.

"Come on let's go train!" 2ra said, when Nurse Joy quickly stopped him.

"It's getting dark, maybe you should stay here until morning" Nurse Joy told the trainers.

The four trainers quickly nodded and Nurse Joy lead the way to a corridor filled with rooms. She pointed to Room 25, and the three trainers walked inside and locked the door. Their room had Hoppip wallpaper with two bunkbeds. Daniella quickly ran towards the top of one of the bunkbeds, but she fell off the ladder and landed smack on the plain white floor.

"I get the top!" 2ra quickly said as he ran over to the bed Daniella wanted.

"Fine I'll get the other bed!" Daniella said, but Andrew quickly beat her to it, so Wally and Daniella had the beds on the bottom.

The four trainers quickly fell asleep in their Hoppip beds, and in the morning, the four trainers were awakened by Nurse Joy.

"Time to wake up!" Nurse Joy said as she ringed a bell.

"Ugh, what time is it?" 2ra asked as he squinted.

"I dunno" Daniella replied as she got up from bed, everyone bursting in laughter.

"What?" Daniella asked, when she got out of bed and looked at herself in the mirror.

Daniella looked in shock as her red hair had been puffed up and it looked like she was wearing an afro.
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"Okay, not that we're ready let's go train!" 2ra said.

The four trainers had by now bathed and changed their clothes. Daniella's blue eyes and red hair matched her red tanktop and light blue skirt. Her tanktop read "Daniella" in bold pink letters, and she was wearing gold earings with small trinkets at the ends, shaped like Mudkips.

2ra was in a greenish mood, so he decided to wear some green shorts with a green t-shirt that had a picture of a Torchic on it. It actually didn't look that bad, although Daniella laughed at him the first time she saw him.

Andrew's brown hair and green eyes seemed weird with what he was wearing. He had on a blue t-shirt with a Treecko on it and some red jeans, which were odd because 2ra and Daniella had never seen red jeans before.

2ra's black hair moved around with the wind, which was weird because the wind didn't blow very often in Mauville. The four trainers then walked away from the Pokemon Center and were met with two paths, one north and one east. 2ra, taking Nurse Joys advice decided to go north, and they found themselves in a grassland.

All they could see was grass everywhere, except for a small house and sand dunes far away. The house wasn't as far as they had thought, only a mile away at most, although it seemed like a zillion miles away, except 2ra does seem to exaggerate alot.

As they had a closer look at the house, it was very small, that is why they thought it was so far away. It seemed like a normal house, a brown roof and white walls, the only odd thing was that there wasn't a door to be seen.

The three trainers stared on at the house, when suddenly a girl appeared out of the ground on what seemed to be an elevator.

She seemed to be around the age of our heroes, 13 or so. She had blonde hair in pigtails with small pink ribbons on the ends and green eyes. She was wearing one of those small dresses little girls wore in the 60's, it was a plain blue and she had on small shoes that looked as if they were made for a 5 year old.

"Hey! My name is Ronda how about yours?" Ronda asked Andrew.

The three trainers introduced themselves, and the small girl explained that he house was a ground level once, but an underground cavern collapsed under her house and it sunk deep into the ground. The house was eventually rebuilt, but somehow, the house was sinking again, so they decided to make an elevator to go back up to ground. Ronda invited the three trainers down, but they declined as 2ra said he needed to train, but just like the anime, it rarely happens.

"Well then, I challenge you to a match right here, right now!" Ronda told 2ra, as the weather suddenly changed and it started raining.

"Fine! Castform I choose you!" 2ra said as he threw his White Pokeball.

"Caaaaaaaaasssssssssss!" Castform said as it appeared.

"Huh? What happened to Castform?" 2ra asked, as Castform looked differently.

The Weather Pokemon was different, it looked like a giant drop of water instead of a ghost-like figure. Ronda didn't seem surprised, as she knew a lot about Castform and about their hidden abilities.

"That's Castforms Water Form, Castform change with the Weather" Ronda said as she threw her own Pokeball, which was a shock to everyone.

Rondas Pokemon was also a Castform! The two droplets stared on at each other, with 2ra still not believing what he was seeing.

"Castform use Water Gun!" Ronda said.

Ronda's droplet aabsorbed water from the rain and shot a stream of water at Castform, but it was quickly frozen by 2ra's Castforms Powder Snow.

"Grrr..." 2ra said, he knew this would be a hard battle.

"Cas!" Ronda's Castform said as it shot flames at 2ra's Castform, but it was quickly extinguised by the rain.

"TACKLE ATTACK!" both trainers said, and both droplets charged at each other, but to the trainers surprise, the two droplets combined to create on large droplet of water!

"Ohhhhh! I get it now! That's why Castform is the WEATHER Pokemon!" Daniella said, interrupting the battle, as well as embarrasing Andrew and 2ra.

The weather then quickly changed as the blazing sun showed its fury, causing both Castform to change into small Suns themselves, seperating themselves from each other.

"Castform Ember!" 2ra said, and his Sun Pokemon shot flames at Ronda's Castform, causing a ton of damage to her Castform.

"Uh oh! The weathers changing again!" Andrew said, then he walked back and he almost tripped on Wally.

The weather quickly changed to hailing, and both Castforms turned into solid ice. 2ra's ice cube tackled Ronda's ice cube and sent it flying into the air, knocking it out in one hit.

"Good Battle, if you want to train more, you should keep on going" Ronda said as she went back onto the elevator and went back down underground.

The three trainers then saw her Castform was still outside and then Ronda quickly went back up and picked up her Castform that she had forgotten, smiled and then went back onto the elevator.

"Castform you were great!" 2ra said as he went over to hug his ice cube, when he noticed Castform was cold and almost dropped it.

"Go Kirlia!" Wally said and his partner appeared next to him.

"CAST!" Castform exclaimed as it snuck up behind Kirlia and hugged it, startling and causing it to teleport everyone over to what seemed to be a desert.

"According to this we're just above Mauville, Kirlia must've teleported us to the sand dunes, but what-what is that?" Daniella said as she looked up and saw a large pyramid in front of them....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 19: Trapped in the Arena!

[RJdude]

Good chapter. It was nice seeing 2ra discoved Castform's powers. I hope he uses it more. And I wonder what's inside the pyramid...

[DannyBoy]

Good chapter. Now she knows about castform and its changes. Thats a good thing and it will help her out in her gym battle. Your starting to get longer and descriptive chapters keep it up.

[2ra]

you mean him? lol 2ra is a guy O.o

[DannyBoy]

Yes, sorry I made that mistake again. Im such a dork. Sorry about it. I mean Him.

[Hanada Tattsu]

Wow, great battle and a great chappie!

Daniella is so ignorant, lol, and funny. Hmm, I wonder what's in the pyramid? Write more!

[Everoy]

I like your fanfic. I bet Castform has a crush on Kirlia, otherwise why did it hug her?

[2ra]

Castform is hug happy lol it hugs a lot of people and pokemon lol

[pokemonrule13]

Good chapter! I really liked that battle and how castform changed and 2ra was really happy. Castform is getting really strong since the beginning. When you posting your next chapter?

[Everoy]

When is the next chappie coming?

[2ra]

Okay, let me explain. All this week I've had exams and I've been busy, and I have exams until Wednesday, the last day of school. The next chapter will be up on Saturday. Then on Thursday I startmy summer vacation, and I'm planning on posting at least one chapter per day, so I will get al ot of chapters done over the summer.

[Venasaur89]

Hi!

I have finally catched up. I just started reading ur fic 2 weeks ago and can't stop reading! This is a gr8 fanfic. The thing that makes this trainer fic special from other fanfics is that you have added a lot of descriptions and the plot is very detailed. Also, that you update almost everyday.
I think it should be both trainer fic, 2ra's and Daniella's because Daniella sometimes acts like the main person.

Keep it up......
And good luck on ur exams!

[2ra]

Thanks, I'm halfway done with my exams, anyways as for the Daniella thing, just wait and see, next chpater will be up tomorrow.

[2ra]

Last time: 2ra and friends left Mauville and met Ronda and her Castform. After an intense battle, 2ra was the winner, but suddenly Kirlia got scared by Castform and ended up teleporting everyone into the desertlands north of Mauville, just in front of a large pyramid...
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"CAASSS!" the Weather Pokemon exclaimed as it quickly floated over to Kirlia and hugged it.

"Kirrr" Kirlia yelled as it struggled away from Castform.

"Castform, return" 2ra said, his Pokemon quickly disappearing into his Pokeball, leaving Kirlia at peace.

Wally returned his Kirlia as well, and the four trainers stood in silence for a while. Andrew kept looking at Daniella, but she didn't notice as she was looking towards the pyramid instead. 2ra decided to let his Torchic out, so he threw his Pokeball, revealing the chick Pokemon.

"Chhhiiccc" the chick Pokemon said as it stretched its small feathers.

The four trainers still stood in silence until Torchic started pecking at Daniella's foot so she walked back, but Torchic kept pecking at her. A large growl was then heard from the pyramid, startling Torchic and causing it to stop pecking, to Daniella's relief.

"Torc!" the chick Pokemon said as it quickly scampered into the pyramid, to everyones shock.

"Uh oh!" the four trainers said as they quickly ran behind Torchic into the large pyramid.

It seemed eerie inside the pyramid, it had fog lifting from an unknown place inside, which sometimes made it hard to see. The walls were exactly like the outside, made of yellow-ish stone that has been broken down over the years, but just this one chamber on the bottom floor for such a big pyramid, which seemed unreasonable to the four trainers.

Right at the entrance was Torchic, it seemed to be looking towards the ground, as if searching for something, which puzzled 2ra at what his Pokemon was doing.

"Torchic?" 2ra asked, as his Pokemon quickly looked up and scrambled over to 2ra.

All of a sudden, a lump appeared right where Torchic was standing, and started moving around, carrying Torchic away from 2ra. Torchic quickly walked off, and the lump was revealed to be a Pokemon! It was bright orange with a few white spots, its head was like a venus flytrap in a way.

2ra quickly took out his Pokedex and Dexter said, "Trapinch, the Ground Pokemon. When this Pokemon clamps on something, it probably won't let go. It has very sensitive hearing."

"So Trapinch eh? I'm going to catch it!" Andrew said as he released his Gecko Pokemon.

"Eeeeck" the gecko Pokemon said as it charged towards the Pokemon, but it quickly dug underground to dodge the attack.

"Aww I wanted that and you scared it away!" 2ra remarked.

"Trraappp!" Trapinch said as it quickly jumped up from under Treecko and shot it into the air.

"You had your chance, now it's mine! Torchic Fire Spin!" 2ra told his Torchic.

The chick Pokemon the shot flames all around Trapinch, burning it a bit, but it quickly dug underground again, avoiding the flames. Torchic then had an idea.

"CCCCCCCCHHHHHHIIIIII" the chick Pokemon said as it jumped to where Trapinch was last seen, and quickly followed its underground path.

A bright light appeared from underground, and the ground collapsed in a blast of flames, with Trapinch in the center, knocked out by Torchic's flames. Torchic appeared next to Daniella and started pecking at her again, making her drop her Pokeball with Mudkip.

"Mudd!" the kipper Pokemon said as it joined its trainer.

"Mudkip Water Gun!" Daniella told her kipper Pokemon.

Mudkip then shot a blast of mud at the flames, but that wasn't enough, Water power was needed to put out this fire. Torchic pecked harder at Daniella, so she quickly told her Mudkip to use another Water Gun, but it just used another Mud Shot instead.

"Trrraaappp" the Trapinch yelled in agony.

"WATER GUN!" Daniella said, and this time Mudkip shot a blast of water at the fire, extinguishing it in the blink of an eye, but Trapinch lay there in the middle unconcious.


"Trapinch!" 2ra yelled as he quickly jumped in the crater that was left and slid down to where Trapinch was.

2ra quickly picked up Trapinch and started climbing up, but he kept sliding down. Daniella knew what she needed to do and let out her Butterfly Pokemon to help him get up.

"Beautifly!" the butterfly Pokemon said as it picked up 2ra and slowly helped him up the crater.

"Thanks Beautifly, Trapinch are you okay?" 2ra asked Trapinch, but there was no answer.

"My turn! Electrike I choose you!" Andrew said as he threw his Pokeball and his electric Pokemon appeared and shot blasts of electricity at Trapinch to revive it.

"You can do it Electrike!" the four trainers said, Electrike shooting electricity at full power.

"Trrraaaapppp!" the ground Pokemon yelled.

"Trapinch is back!" 2ra said, as the Pokemon started growling again.

"Electrike Return!" Andrew said as he returned his Electrike to its Pokeball, Trapinch staring at Torchic.

"Beautifly, you better come back too" Daniella said as she returned her Butterfly Pokemon to its Pokeball.

"Let's resume this battle!" 2ra told Torchic.

The battle began after that accident, but this time, Trapinch couldn't use it's digging strategy. Before Torchic knew what happened, Trapinch used Faint Attack and hit Torchic, proving that not only can it defend, but be a strong attacker as well.

"Torchic counter it with Fire Spin!" 2ra exclaimed, his Torchic surrounding Trapinch in flames again.

"TRRRAAAPPP!" Trapinch said as it summoned a Sandstorm, the sand mixing with the fog to create one bad situation.

Not only did it block 2ra's view of the battle, but it even extinguished the Fire Spin Trapinch was currently in. Trapinch then advanced on the chick Pokemon and started chewing on it's leg, Torchic unable to loosen the Ground Pokemons grasp.

"RRRRROOOOOOCCCCCKKKKK!" was heard throughtout the chamber, causing Trapinch to lose control over the Sandstorm and letting its guard down, a perfect chance for Torchic.

"Chhhhhhh!" Torchic yelled as it shot embers at Trapinch, knocking it onto one of the walls of the chamber, opening up another secret chamber next to it.

"Pokeball Go!" 2ra exclaimed as he threw his Pokeball at Trapinch.

The Pokeball wobbled a bit, but it was obvious Trapinch would be caught after it battled so much. 2ra quickly ran over and took his Pokeball, he was glad that Trapinch was on his team.

"So what's in that other chamber?" Wally asked, but everyone just shrugged.

Just like before, Torchic ran over intothe next chamber, with everyone following as well. This chamber looked the same, with just a few differences, there were giant stairs that took you to the top of the chamber.

The four trainers and their Pokemon quickly ran up the stairs, with Daniella almost falling down a few times. As they reached the top, it looked like it was a giant temple. The walls had heiroglyphics all over it, and there was a large pool in the center, sunlight entered the room, there must be a hole at the tip of the pyramid. At the end, there was a door that had strange marking on it, and torches on either end, both needed to be lit.

"2ra, right here, right now, I challenge you to a match!" Daniella said, she then started walking towards the pool to start the match, when her untied shoes made her trip and falls straight into the pool of water.

"I accept your challenge!" 2ra exclaimed as he walked over to his place.

The match was set, 2ra versus Daniella, in a mysterious rematch in a pyramid, but what was that growl they kept hearing?!

Find out next time. :P
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 20: A Friendy Rematch!

[RJdude]

Good chapter. It looks like 2ra has a new Pokemon now, I hope he uses it. I wonder who will win the rematch between 2ra and Danellia...

[2ra]

Season 1 of 2ra: Journey Through Hoenn ends in 3 Chapters, the Second Season will start right after, starting with Ch 23. Many surprises await in the second season!

Yes, I know the first season was kinda short, but it's going to have to be short then :P The other seasons aren't as short as this one was.

As for the name, it will stay the same throughout Hoenn *cough*

Next Chapter will be up either later today, tomorrow, or Thursday :P I have exams on Monday-Wednesday, and Wednesday is the last day of school, so there will be a new chapter everyday :P

[Hanada Tattsu]

Great chappie!

So 2ra caught a Trapinch, cool! Also, I wonder who wins... and what is that growl?

[The Silver Storm]

COOL!!!!! sorry I haven't been around, viruses. Though its a bit obvious who or make it what is making all the noise. They are in Houen and are hearing a Pokémon say "Rock"....Now I wonder who that is.... :rolleyes:

[2raJourney]

Uh what do you think it is? Regirock? Uh that is uh ridiculous, uh yea O.o It could be a Pikachu for all we know, yea a Pikachu...

This is 2ra by the way, there was a thundertorm and it fried my laptops modem and I forgot the pass to 2ra so I'm here until my new modem ships in lol

As for the new chapter that is supposed to come out today, I'll try working on it now, I'm on my regular slow computer now so I don't like working on it, but I'll try! :P

[2raJourney]

Okay, I've decided to postpone the chapters as this computer is very annoying and the internet turns off very quickly for some reason.

Until the modem comes I shall be planning future chapters, I have planned up to 31, but I need to plan more lol

Thanks for your cooperation, and for that I'll give you a very small spoiler on Chapter 21, it's called Flooding Memories. As for when the chapters will be up, I am not sure, it depends on when my modem comes.

It should come sometime this week, hopefully today or tomorrow. But don't worry, I'll try and get up to date as I had the chapters planned by date so if I don't get it today, I'll catch up by posting more than 1 chapter per day until I'm back on track.

I had planned that Season 1 would end this Saturday, but with this I don't know exactly when it will end. Season 2 has many, many surprisesand many things you probably wouldn't expect.

As for when Season 2 starts, it should start in Chapter 23 with a very big surprise, and Season 1 ends with another big surprise too :P Well, I'm not spoiling anymore because some people don't like spoilers lol If you have any questions please feel free to post or pm them to me :P

Thanks again,

-2ra

[Venasaur89]

Don't worry! we can wait.

I wonder wat are all those surprises about.

well, time will tell.....

[The Silver Storm]

ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!! Pikachu :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: yeah right.... If its the electric rat I'll shoot it!!!! (I hate Pikachu a lot, stupid show, stupid Ash).

I can wait....I hope.

[2raJourney]

UPDATE!

Okay, that stupid modem hasn't come, and to tell you the truth, I havn't been thinking about what happens in the fututre, because I have a list, but it's on my laptop.

Omg, I jus noticed it's on Word and that still works xD Okay, time to brainstorm o.o Hopefully it'll come today, because if it doesn't, it won't come until Monday or maybe even later.

Again, sorry for the inconvenience -_- To make up for it, if you have aim, pm me your screen name and I'll spoil some stuff for ya lol :P

"Politoed Politoed!" *claps hands*

Uh yea o.o Um that's uh a spoiler o.o *runs away clapping his hands* o.O;;

[2ra]

YES! My modem FINALLY came, and Im back on my laptop =D Next chapter will be out tomorrow, and depending on how I feel I might put up more than 1 chapter tomorrow.

[pokemonrule13]

Hey, Ive read most of the chapters accept the ones you post while I was gone and I caught up to all of them but 19 and they were all good. Then I came back and read 19 and that was really good. Sorry about your modem, IM glad you got it back so you can keep on writing more chapters. You really have grown since your first chapter. I really liked when you got Trapinch. That was a great part. I also liked the battle with Wattson but it sucks that you lost I hope you can win the next time!

[PikachuRocks]

I've read this for ages as a silent reader and may i just say the pokemon catching is spread out but there are too many fillers.other than that this fanfic gets a 8/10(so far) in my style of rating.Great job 2ra.

-Pikachurocks-

[2ra]

Lol I had thought there were no fillers so far:
1: Starters
2: Board the boat
3: Battle 2ra vs. Daniella
4: Team Rocket appears, Land in Slateport
5: Corphish caught
6: Torchic caught
7: Silcoon caught
8: Silcoon evolves
9: Trick Master Saga
10: Andrew catches Electrike
11: Trick Master Saga
12: Trick Master Saga
13: Trick Master Saga
14: Trick Master Saga
15: Trick Master Saga
16: Cycle Road
17: Wattson Match
18: 2ra learns of Castforms abilities
19: Trapinch caught

[2ra]

Last time: After a long battle in the pyramid, 2ra was able to catch Trapinch. Torchic then led the trainers to another chamber where Daniella challenged 2ra to a battle…
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“Let’s go Castform!” 2ra exclaimed as he threw his white Pokeball.

“Caaasssss!” Castform exclaimed as it started floating up towards the ceiling.

“Castform get back here!” 2ra yelled.

“Mudkip, it’s your turn!” Daniella told her Pokemon and it jumped into the water.

“Caaasstfffooorrmm!” Castform said as sunlight seeped through the tip of the pyramid, changing it into its fire form.

“Kiippp!” the kipper said as it shot a stream of water at the sun-like Pokemon, which made it topple over and lose its balance.

“Castform use Water Gun!” 2ra told his weather Pokemon.

“Mudkip use your Water Gun!” Daniella said.

The two water attacks then clashed in the center of the field, causing everyone to get wet. Suddenly, it started raining and Castform suddenly changed into a droplet of water.

“Castform dive underwater!” 2ra yelled.

The droplet jumped into the water and quickly spotted the kipper nearby, who upon seeing the droplet shot a blast of mud at Castform, making it fly out of the water and cloud up the water.

“Mudkip use Tackle!” Daniella told her kipper, but the weather suddenly changed to hot sunny weather, which also made Castform change again.

“Mudddd” Mudkip yelled in agony as it was burned by Castform’s warm body.

“Castform use Ember!” 2ra yelled, when the weather changed to raining again and the attack was extinguished.

The droplet jumped into the water again, which seemed to have cleared up a bit, and spotted the kipper again. This time the droplet absorbed the surrounding water and shot a massive stream of water at Mudkip, knocking it into the corner.

Castform then quickly changed into its ice form, which made it float up to the top and appear above the water.

“Wait a second! Castform use Powder Snow!” 2ra told his ice cube as it released some breath which froze the water into ice, trapping the kipper inside.

“Mudkip no!” Daniella yelled.

“Castform use Ember on the ice!” 2ra said.

The ice cube then shot embers at the surface, which made a small hole melt, allowing Mudkip to arise onto the surface. Castform then shot its icy breath at Mudkip which knocked it out, as well as freezing all the water again.

“Mudkip is unable to battle! Castform wins!” Andrew exclaimed as Daniella returned her kipper to its Pokeball and threw another one.

“Beeeeeaaaauuu!” her butterfly Pokemon said as it fluttered its wings.

“Castform return! Go Torchic!” 2ra said as he returned his weather Pokemon.

“Chiii!” the chick said as it jumped onto the ice.

“Darn, I thought he was going to use Trapinch…. Beautifly use Absorb!” Daniella told her butterfly Pokemon.

Little bubbles started to leave Torchic and go towards Beautifly, but Torchic quickly used Ember and the bubbles quickly carried the flames right at Beautifly.

“Fllllyyy!” the butterfly said as it dropped onto the ice.

“Torchic use Peck!” 2ra exclaimed.

The chick then charged at the butterfly and started pecking it, but by mistake it pecked the ice and both Pokemon fell into the water.

“Torchic get outta there!” 2ra yelled.

Both Pokemon managed to get out of the water, and as Torchic was about to shoot flames at Beautifly, Beautifly tackled it and knocked Torchic back, causing its flames to hit 2ra and some of it even going over to two torches that were not lit.

The torches glistened, and light filled the room as three Nosepass appeared out of nowhere and started dancing around the temple.

“What are they doing?” Wally asked.

‘NOOOOOSSSSSEEEEEEE!” the three rocks suddenly said as they started glowing and the door at the end of the temple started glowing.

The door slowly opened, revealing a large Pokemon that was unknown to the four trainers, but all they knew was that this Pokemon was the thing making all those rock noises….

What will happen next? See what happens, next time (either today or tomorrow :P)
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 21: Flooding Memories

[DannyBoy]

You did a pretty good chapter. It had good description in the battle. The length was a little shorter than the others but ok. Good battle with Mudkip and Castform. Castofrm changed a lot to win. Keep it up!

[Venasaur89]

Interesting.....

Who might that pokemon be?/? Probably a legendary such as Regirock.


Keep it up...

[Hanada Tattsu]

Cool chappie!

Wow, Castform beat Mudkip, cool! I thought 2ra would use Trapinch, but he used Torchic. It was a draw.

It was short, but that can't be helped sometimes. Well, write more, can't wait for the next chapter!

[Everoy]

Yippee! Castform roxors, LOL! I liked that chappie lots.

[Venasaur89]

Hi 2ra... wat happened???

No update for more than a week... Are you alright??

[2ra]

Okay, the reason I havn't posted anything new is that I'm busy with schoolwork, YES SCHOOLWORK. I got homework over the summer, I have to read these 2 books and its really anoying and takes up time.

That is what is taking up my writing time, so I'll need to finish that before I can write this. This fic involves a lot of thinking so I have to do them in the mornings when I'm fresh lol Thats why I started out on Saturdays.

Sorry about that, I'm just so busy, and I need time to relax -_-

[Venasaur89]

hi...

no need to rush//

Just write a chapter whenever you get time to.

You get SUMMER VACATION Homework????

[DannyBoy]

Its ok, I know how you feel. I have to read two books also for englosh. Venasaur person, when you get into middle school or high school you always have to read at least two book and write a essay, book report, or answer questions and it sucks.

[Hanada Tattsu]

Oh, okay man. Take your time, don't rush on accord of time, we can wait.

Take your time, and most of all, good luck!

Relax, take your time, and don't rush. :)

[Venasaur89]

Originally posted by IloveX-TINA
Its ok, I know how you feel. I have to read two books also for englosh. Venasaur person, when you get into middle school or high school you always have to read at least two book and write a essay, book report, or answer questions and it sucks.

I am going to 9th grade.... but still I never got any homework...

Maybe that's because I live in NC/

[2ra]

Authors Note: From now on, I will not be posting a "Last Time:" because most of you don't read it anyways :P I have changed the Season Finale from 23 to 21 for a new plot I will be starting which will start now. You may not believe it, but I've also been busy being a journalist on another site and a fanfic writer on another, so that kinda squeezed out time for this. So I had to go slower on my other fanfic and quit the journalism thing so I could continue this. What I'm getting at is that with all that practice, and reading that book, I've become a better writer (hopefully :P) Well, without further ado, let Season 2 of 2ra: Journey Through Hoenn begin!
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The four trainers stared on as the giant beast slowly, but surely, walked out of the door as if coming out of a portal, and revealed itself. It looked like a giant rock basically, but when it came closer, it was revealed that it was several rocks that joined together to look like a humungous rock. 2ra didn't hesitate to quickly take out his Pokedex, poiting it towards the Pokemon just few feet away from them.

The Pokedex's screen went black and started to sound like static from a television when the channel wasn't working too well, but suddendly, it blurted out "Regirock" and turned off.

"Regirock?" 2ra asked.

Upon hearing it's name, Regirock walked closer, but was halted by a scream from above. The four trainers, and even Regirock looked up as a small cat-Pokemon fell through the roof of the pyramid, and on top of Daniella.

"Get it off me! Get it off me!" Daniella yelled as she squirmed and tried to get out of the cat's grasp.

"Get her off me! Get her off me!" the cat Pokemon said, which surprised everyone that it could talk.

"Hey, you're the brats!" Meowth told the trainers as he recognized them.

"And you're the Meowth from Team Rocket" Andrew sneered.

The four trainers stood in silence as Regirock stood still, so Daniella decided to return her Beautifly to its Pokeball and when 2ra was about to return Torchic, the rock unleashed it's power, creating a large Earthquake.

The rocks from the pyramid fell as the Earth opened and ate the four trainers alive. The pyramid lid in ruins, as all that was left was Regirock, who would have a smirk on his face if he had one, but all Regirock had was some sort of braille.
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"Whizzz!" a small pink Pokemon said as it poked Meowth, trying to wake him.

Three more of the same Pokemon appeared, and all four started poking the strangers. The first to wake being Wally, who quickly tried to get the others to wake, but they just wouldn't.

Wally started poking Daniella, and he thought he woke her, but all she said was, "Mom, I don't want to go to school today.." and she fell asleep again.

"EVERYONE WAKE UP!" Wally yelled, surprising everyone and waking them up as well.

"What's the problem?" 2ra asked as he rubbed his face with his hands.

"Yeah, why'd you have to wake us up?" Daniella asked.

"Whismur?" Meowth asked as he noticed the four Pokemon.

"Whizzzzz!" the Whismur said as they gathered around Wally.

The four trainers then noticed why Wally had woken them. They now found themselves in an underground cave, and without food, they would surely perish if they didn't find they're way out. The walls were crooked, which seemed to be naturally made, but how were some of the walls narrow like walls in a house?

"Treecko I choose you!" Andrew said as his green Pokeball left his hand and his gecko Pokemon appeared.

"Treeeee-ckooo?" the gecko asked.

"Treecko asks where we are, and these Whismur here are sayin' that we're in danger, but what kind of danger can we be in here?" Meowth asked as he started chuckling.

"Mudkip come on out!" Daniella said as she threw her blue Pokeball, which strangely hit her own forehead and Mudkip appeared in her arms.

As Daniella let Mudkip onto the ground, the four trainers walked on, into the endless maze which they currently found themselves in. Their path was full of other Whismur, who gladly greeted the trainers as they walked on.

"Whizz!" the Whismur on their way said, which seemed like that was the only possible thing they could say.

"Hey, this gives me an idea! I'm gonna catch that Whismur!" Daniella said, but she almost tripped over a Whismur and edned up falling on Wally.

"You, know it's not that bad being with you guys, at least you don't scream at me like Jessie or blast us off much like those twerps, because of them I got seperated from Jessie and James" Meowth said.
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"Wobbuffet!" the blue blob said as it appeared out of its Pokeball and ended up on top of Jessie, who found herself on the ground, with James nearby.

"Grr...not again! Those twerps defeated our Robot, and when we came back, they didn't even let us say our motto!" Jessie exclaimed as she knocked Wobbuffet off her.

"Dearest, look there's a Zangoose!" James told Jessie.

"Cacnea Come on Out!" James said as he threw his Pokeball and his cactus appeared.

"Cacc!" the cactus said as it started hugging James, causing a searing pain in James' back.

"Not me! Cacnea use Spike Cannon!" James told his Pokemon.

The cactus Pokemon shot a flurry of needles at Zangoose, but it' used its claws to avoid all of the spikes. Cacnea then jumped towards Zangoose and used Spike Jab, knocking Zangoose behind a few trees.

To James surprise, instead of one, four Zangoose appeared out of the bushes and attacked with Slash, but were hurt themselves by the spikes on Cacnea.

"Seviper and Dustox I choose you!" Jessie said as she let out her moth and snake Pokemon.

"Wobbuffet you get in there too, but Dustox, you stay back and watch" Jessie said as she started hugging her Dustox.

"Cacnea use Poison Sting!" James told his cactus.

The cactus shot a few stingers at the four Zangoose, but instead of running away, they just stayed there and took the attack. James, surprised at this, asked Jessie why they just stood there.

"I don't know, ask Meowth. Meowth! Get over here!" Jessie yelled, but Meowth was nowhere to be seen.

The Zangoose then slashed their way through Cacnea and Sevipers defenses and knocked both of them out, leaving only Wobbuffet, who when was about to be slashed, used Counter to defend itself.

"Wobba!" the blob said as a Zangoose appeared from behind and slashed it, knocking it out as well.

The five Zangoose stared on at Team Rocket, who started panicking as the Zangoose ran over to them and used Slash, knocking them into the air as they blasted off.

"Team Rocket's blasting off for the second time today!" they said as they disappeared from view.
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"We've been walking for hours and still nothing!" 2ra said.

"Well theres nothing we can do, but keep on walking until we find the exit" Andrew replied.

"Well, niether of us is happy about it" Wally said, with Daniella nodding.

"Torchic Torch!" the chick Pokemon said as it started pecking at Daniella again, knocking her into Wally again.

"Eheheh, sorry" Daniella said with a smile.

"I think we should stop and rest" Daniella said.

"Yeah, did any of us bring food?" 2ra asked with a sign of hunger on his face.

"I have some" each of the four trainers replied, which lifted a weight from their concious.

"At least we have plent of food" Meowth said as it started licking its lips.

The four trainers sat down, and started rummaging through their backpacks, revealing a ton of food and even drinks. For about ten minutes, the trainers were delighted as they stuffed food in their mouths, only to be interrupted by a few Whismur.

"Whizz!" the pink Pokemon said.

"They keep saying we're in danger" Meowth told the trainer,s but they weren't phased at all.

"I think we should stop eating and save some food, we don't know how long we'll be in here for" Wally said, wih everyone, except maybe Meowth, agreeing.

The trainers went off again on their walk to find an exit, when a musty smell filled the room, the caves were musty, but not like now, the foul stentch seeming to be closer than before.

The corridors, if that is what you would call them, were still full of Whismur, which kind of surprised the trainers as to how many Whismur were in this place.

Wally walked behind everyone else, when darkness seemed to approach him in this already dark cave. He shuddered at the thought, and looked back, but there was nothing except for the Whismur, and they seemed harmless, so he just kept on walking.

"We've reached a fork in the road" Meowth said, and the trainers look at each other to decide which way to go.

2ra and Daniella pointed to the right, and Meowth and Andrew pointed to the left, which made it a tie, so 2ra decided to break the tie with Wally's vote.

"Wally?" 2ra called, but there was no reply, Wally was not coming, and all that could be heard was the whispering of the Whismur....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 22: Keep Your Sabl-Eye on the Prize!

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[Venasaur89]

Hi!!

Great chapter...... I knew it its gonna be regirock!!

Whats with Wally???... is he lost??

[2ra]

Not exactly, you'll see what happens as the fic goes on, this is a 6 chapter plot I made up ^^ All I'm saying is its like that mystery book "And Then There Were None" :P

It may seem weird now, but wait until 22 or 23 comes out and it will become a bit clearer ^^

[Hanada Tattsu]

Finally, another chapter!

Cool, I liked it! Regirock is evil, LOL, it really is. So, I'm surprised that Daniella and 2ra recalled Beautifly and Torchic, I though that they would battle them.

I wonder why there are so many Whismur there, what do they have to do with Regirock?

And its very cool how Meowth is following the group, I wonder if J&J will ever reunite with Meowth?

I wonder what happened to Wally?

Great chapter!

[DannyBoy]

Good Chapter! I thought it was funny when meowth fell on Dainelle and she was screaming. Regirock is bad! I tink torchic wants Wally and Dainelle to hook up lol. Good length and ok description. Keep it up!

[GeneChildMewtwo]

Well, I haven't replied to this story in a while, but I have been reading it. Sorry for not replying more often.

I'd like to say, that this recent chapter shows that you've come a long way from the beginning. Things are better described, and it seems to flow beter than the earlier chapters. And it seems you'll keep on going with this story, so I'm sure it will just keep getting better. ^_^

It seems kind of odd to me that Meowth would just be content with joing the others, but he is very good at changing his attitude for self preservation. I guess the wierd thing to me is actually the fact that everyone else seems to not mind Meowth's presence even though he almost stole Pokemon from the majority of the group. If I was face to face with the person (or Pokemon in this case) that almost took my friends from me, I'd be a bit irate. Although, at the same time, after the whole Regirock thing, they're probably all worrying about survival more than any grudges currently. Although, even though I find it a little odd, It's still fun to have Meowth along for the ride, at least while it lasts.

As for Regirock, It seems he's a bit evil, or at least sadistic. Well, that's an intersting departure from the usual "Legendaries are Guardians of the Earth" thing. I didn't expect that at all. ^_^

Where did Wally go? Did the Whismur kidnap him or something? Well, I guess as the plot unfolds the reason all those Whismur are there will become apparent.

Well, I'll try to reply a bit more regularly from now on. Glad to see you're still with it, keep up the good work! :wave:

[2ra]

Yup, everyone says legendaries are all good, but why must they use their power for good? I wanted to portry that in this plot ^^

[2ra]

Authors Note: The second season, which started with Chapter 21, will be called 2ra: Legends Come True. Jus so you know ^^ Anyways, no thry don't really think of Meowth as a crook right now, as they are only thinking about their survival for the moment. Well, now lets get to Chapter 22 =D
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The three trainers stood in silence as they awaited Wally, but it was no use, nobody ever came. They started to worry about their friend Wally, where could he have gone? He wouldn't just wander off like that in the situation they were in, so something could've happened to him.

"I think we should keep going" Andrew, regrettingly, told the other two.

"Yeah, I think we're going to need all our Pokemon on this" 2ra said as he threw two Pokeballs containing Castform and Trapinch.

"Trrrrrrrr" the ant pit Pokemon said as it started jumping, but saw the expression on 2ra's face and quickly stopped.

"Chic!" the chick Pokemon said as it ran over to 2ra.

"It's okay Torchic, we'll get out of here, Daniella, Andrew, you should release your Pokemon too" 2ra told the other two, almost whispering for some strange reason.

"Right" the two trainers said as they released their Pokemon.

"Electrike, you and Treecko stay by me and don't wander off" Andrew told his two Pokemon.

"Beautifly, Corphish, and Mudkip you do the same" Daniella told her Pokemon as well.

"Well, I'll stay by your guys too I guess" Meowth said as he felt left out.

"We still have that dilemma of which way to go" 2ra said, but Torchic quickly ran over to the right and the others followed.

"Chic Chi!" the chick said as it ran into a trap.

The three trainers stood still as the ground below them collapsed and they all fell down into an unknown chamber. This chamber was just like the pyramid, made of some sort of bricks, which surprised the trainers.

"So this is part of the pyramid..." Andrew said.
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Wh-Where am I?" Wally asked as he looked around him.

Wally found himself in a glade, fragrances wafting around which tantalized the senses. The grass was the greenest Wally had ever seen, and the sun shined brightly on him. The soft breezes carried Wally towards a tree, and he sat under it, it's shade seeming perfect for Wally.

"I don't know how I got here, but it sure seems great" Wally said as Kirlia appeared next to him and handed him a bouquet of flowers.

"Kirl!" the Pokemon exclaimed as it pointed behind Wally, where there was a garden of flowers.

"Swabl!" the bird Pokemon said as it pushed Wally towards the garden.

Wally and his two Pokemon walked over to the garden and Wally basically thrusted his nose right into one of the flowers, only for his nose to be covered in pollen, which he was unaware that he was allergic to.

"Achoo! Excuse me" Wally said, but he kept on sneezing and sneezing as if in a never-ending cycle.

"Kirlia, Swablu help me!" Wally exclaimed, but the two Pokemon disappeared in thin air, shocking Wally and knocking him back into the tree.

The tree shook as Wally fell to the ground, still sneezing. What was unknown to Wally was that Beedrill lived in that tree and that he was in for the chase of his life.

"Ahh!" Wally yelled as black-striped yellow bees started to chase him.

Wally ran with all his strength and speed, but he wouldn't be able to avoid them forever, and when he stopped, he would be eaten alive by the Beedrill, his dream becoming his worst nightmare...
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"How dare those Zangoose! They scratched my BEAUTIFUL FACE!" Jessie yelled, startling a few Taillow in the closest tree and causing them to fly off into the breeze.

"What beautiful face? I don't see it" James replied, only to be eyed at by Jessie and slapped silly.

"How dare you! Oh no, my hair! They cut my beautiful hair!" Jessie screamed as she held a piecve of her red hair in her hands.

"Wobbuffet!" her psychic Pokemon said, saluting Jessie, but she just returned it to its Pokeball.

"I'm going to destroy those Zangoose if it's the last thing I do!" Jessie yelled.

By this time, only Jessie and James were on a strange beach, as they had returned all their Pokemon and it seemed to be deserted. Jessie kept on babbling about her plans, while James took off his Team Rocket suit and changed into his bathing suit and went into the water.

This certain beach seemed to be abandoned, the murky water and almost-black sand indicated that. As James swam farther away, he soon found that he could not go any further as he would surely drown, so he decided to swim back.

"Pedo!" was heard as James was dragged down into the depths of the ocean, Jessie still babbling about revenge, not even noticing that James was in danger.

"Help!" James said just before he was plunged into the water.

"And then I'll use the Robo-Mecha Wobbuffet to destroy those Zangoose, right James? James?!" Jessie asked as she noticed James was no longer next to her...
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Dear Diary,

Once that Torchic of 2ra's led us into this chamber, we decided to rest a bit, and in this time I have decided to write a diary entry on a piece of paper I took from Andrew's backpack. I hope nobody finds this, as I will be putting my true feeling on this paper.

2ra, Daniella, and Andrew aren't as bad as I thought, I thought they would react strangely to me joining them after what I did to them, and for that I am grateful, but I feel like ice cream on a hot dog, I don't belong here. I miss Jessie and James, even though they do put me through many things and stress me out, not to mention tying me up, but I they are my only real friends.

I'm not really bad, it's just that humans....they've done a lot of things to me that have hardened my heart. When I was just a small cat, I was full of hopes and dreams, but the humans crushed them and threw it in my face. I have suffered a lot in my life, and that was what turned me to a life of crime.

Sometimes I do things I dn't want to do, as I know in my heart that deep down I am good, but I feel that I must steal, or at least try to, as if being rebellious. I'd like to say I'm sorry to 2ra, but I just can't find myself to say it. Well, we're leaving soon, so I have to stop writing. -Meowth
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"Well, we should get going, come on Meowth" 2ra told everyone, and they were off to finding the exit again.

The trainers reached the end of the chamber, and were led back into the musty caves, but no Whismur were to be found, or should they have looked before they talked, because just as 2ra thought it was weird that there were no Whismur around, a few started appearing, and whispering was heard again.

This time, the trainers looked carefully at the Whismur, they were a bright pink with blue ears and blue toes, which seemed weird because Whismur have orange toes and ears. The trainers ignored them and kept on walking, only to be blocked by a large tablet, which was in a strange language unknown to the trainers.

"It says Four Little Children trying to get free, a small whisper and then there were three" Andrew said, as if in a trance.

"Andrew, you can read this?" Daniella asked.

"Wait a second, when Wally disappeared, the Whismur kept whispering....this must mean WE ARE THE FOUR TRAINERS!" 2ra exclaimed, sending a shiver down the spines of the three trainers.

"Wait, there's more....Three Little Children thinking what to do, eyed at by diamonds and then there were two" Andrew replied.

"So we must beware diamonds?" 2ra asked as if this were a joke.

"This is ridiculous, one person disappears and we all freak out, nothing is going to happen" Daniella told the other two.

"We must hurry and find the exit, before anything else happens..." Andrew said..
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"Honey, whats wrong?" a tall man with blonde hair, blue eyes, and an oval shaped head asked.

"Oh, it's just that my mothers intuition is acting up..." a lady, who had the same qualities as her husband, except her head wasn't shaped like an oval, replied.

The man sat next to his wife and started to caress the face of his wife, telling her that it's all right, and that their child would be fine, she may be lazy and clumsy, but she can take care of herself. The wife agreed and stood up, walking towards the fireplace where she had pictures of her beautiful daughter.

"I miss her so much" the lady told her husband.

"I feel the same way, it seems like she was a child a few days ago, and now she's on her journey and we must respect that" the man replied.

"I just can't..." the wife said as she quickly ran outside, with her husband following.

"Honey, please, come back inside, our daughter, Daniella, will be just fine..." the man tolf her, and she reluctantly walked back inside and stared at the picture of her daughter...
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"There's no way out of this room, we have to get another strategy" 2ra told the others, as they found that they were blocked, and the only way they could go was back, and that would bring them back to where they started.

"I say we try and go back to that crossing, that must be the answer" Andrew said.

Andrew and 2ra started walking away from the tablet, when Daniella quickly noticed that Mudkip, Beautifly, and Corphish were gone, and walked back to the tablet to find them.

"Mudkip? Corphish? Beautifly?!" Daniella yelled, but nothing happened.

Daniella walked right next to the tablet, only to be surprised by a Sableye that popped up from the ceiling, smiling upside down, on Daniella, causing her to scream.

"Wait was that Daniella?" 2ra asked Andrew.

Andrew quickly nodded and the two trainers quickly ran back to the tablet, only to find that no one was there, all but a small Sableye walking on the walls and Daniella's bandana.

"Eyed at by diamonds and then there were two..." Andrew said and both trainers know that whatever happened to Daniella is the same thing that happened to Wally....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 23: An Unown Enemy!

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[DannyBoy]

Ok CHapter! The upside down Sableye reminds me of something but I don't know what. Wally and Dainella are missing cause of two pokemon. I wonder what else is going to happen. Good length and ok description. Keep it up.

[2ra]

I had to cram a lot of stuff into one chapter ^^ Theres like 3 cliffhangers O_O Anyways, thanks for reading ^^ New chapter in a few days O.o Lol everyone kept telling me to post a new chapter :P Whatever I posted it, now I've gotten 22 over with =D

[Venasaur89]

Hi!!

THis is the BEST chapter in the whole story yet....

It was great... with full of suspense!!

Keep it up...!

[GeneChildMewtwo]

Interesting. I wonder what 2ra and his friends have gotten themselves into? It seems someone's pulling strings from behind the scenes...

I really liked the Meowth's diary thing you did, as it was an interesting way to get insight into what he's thinking about. I really liked his "ice cream on a hot dog" analogy. ^_^

Well, as always, I look forward to the next chapter. Keep it up!:wave:

[Hanada Tattsu]

Great chappie!

That was really good, I really liked it! One of the best chapters yet!

Wow, Daniella's mon does have a mother's instinct, 'cause now Daniella's gone. Keep it up!

[2ra]

Sorry I havn't posted a new chapter, my browser was messed up, but is fixed now and I don't write on weekends :P

New chapter will be up on Monday or so, and I'll give a little preview just like they do with AG, just a small preview of stuff ^^

After the disappearance of Daniella, 2ra and Andrew now believe in the prophecy that the tablet holds, and they look at the tablet again, which reveals that there is more text, meaning the doom of another trainer.

Well, that's pretty dim right now, I didn't want to spoil it a lot, just put an incy wincy one xD Anyways, if you have any questions please feel free to ask =D

[2ra]

Hey, I'm back! I've been on vacation so I havn't been able to post up a new chapter ._. I'll start working on the next chapter right now! What chapter was it now? ._. *checks*

Anyways, to make up for it, I'll try to post up a new chapter today, and another tomorrow, if I have time >.< I just finished reading the 6th Movie Plot and I thought it was really good and thought that Jirachi wasn't even in my fic so I'll have to squeeze it in somewhere as it is now my favorite Pokemon, too bad for Masato though, he thought he actually had a life-long friend, but it was taken away from him, never to be seen again ;.;

Okay, I dont want to spoil the movie for those who didnt read it, so I'm not saying anymore, I must start writing now! Bye bye! :P

[Darien Shields]

Hey 2ra!
Haven't seen you about the reviewin' org, don't you want a review? We haven't sorted out delegation yet, so I don't have anything fixed to do, so I could take yours straight away if you asked... And trust me, I can be fair. And you would be able to flash your new rating around and whatnot... It might take me a while to read through all of your fic, but I'm sure I could make a pretty comprehensive review. I'm sure your fans out there (points to all those people who have been replying) want to see you have a review and get your just desserts...

Mwahahaha, Mwhahahahah! Ha-ha...

Oh, should have waited till you were gone to do that, umm, well, Ignore the Laughing. And if you want anyone but me to review your fic it'll take a while because everyone else is working their way through the priority listing.

Just say the word twobie, and I'll have it up in a matter of days...

[2ra]

Authors Note: Sorry it took so long to post a new chapter, I had written up to chapter 30, but a certain someone deleted them by mistake and I had to start over >.< Darien, sure rate it O.o I've been slacking off with my schoolwork, so now I have less than a month to read two books and write an essay for each >.< I procrastinate too much, but hey, thats me ._. I need to get out of that habit when I enter high school, I hope its not as hard as everyone says o.o Okay, enough about me, and lets get on with this story!
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"Huh? What happened?" Daniella asked as she started to open her eyes, her vision blurred, as she started to get up.

Daniella found herself in a meadow, surrounded by healthy green grass, just near a humungous lake which left nothing to desire. There was no one in sight, just Daniella and this strange place she was in. The slight breezes and aromas that filled the air tantalized Daniella's tastebuds, which she found to be very strange indeed.

"The last I remember was that Pokemon, its devilish eyes staring at me, as if I had done it wrong" Daniella whispered.

As Daniella stood up, she started to walk, but with her vision blurred, she looked like she was wobbling more than walking and crashed into a tree.

"How'd this tree get in the way? Ugh, I'm going to get bruises with all the things that happen to me!" Daniella yelled, only to walk into a trap, like one that Team Rocket is used to make, a hole in the ground.

"Why me?!" Daniella yelled as she picked herself up and off the ground, but how was she going to get up?

As Daniella stood in the pit which she found herself in, she looked on at the walls, they seemed man-made, a perfect circle, but something didn't seem right. As she kept looking on, she felt as if the walls were closing in on her, but she convinced herself she was being claustraphobic.

"Yes, I'm just a bit claustraphobic..." Daniella told herself, as she started to look up and into the sky.

The clouds seemed to soothe Daniella, calming her down a bit, but it still wasn't enough. Daniella started to panic, running around in circles until she was dizzy.

As Daniella twirled around in the daze she brought upon herself, she managed to catch sight of a butterfly, hovering int the sky above her, bringing back the memory of why she went back to that tablet where she found that Pokemon that somehow brought her into this oblivion.

"Beautifly? Is that you?" Daniella said as she walked into the walls that were surrounding her.

Daniella managed to snap out of the daze and quickly lurched towards the sky, only to fall down into the pit again. Daniella then called at the butterfly Pokemon, asking it for help, but all the butterfly did was flutter its wings and stare at the girl before it.

"Beautifly? Help me!" Daniella yelled and she fell and burst in tears, crying her heart out, missing her Pokemon, friends, and family.

The butterfly, as if snapping out of a trance, started blinking, turnings its head to the left and right, wondering how it managed to come to the place where it was currently situated in.

"Beautifly?" Daniella asked as she saw her butterfly Pokemon land next to her, ready to help its trainer.

"Thank you so much, Beautifly" Daniella said as she held onto her butterfly Pokemon as it slowly, but surely, lifted Daniella out of the pit and onto the land.

As Daniella started petting her butterfly Pokemon, she started thinking, if Beautifly was here, maybe Mudkip and Corphish were too, but how would she manage to find them in this place?

"Come on Beautifly, we must find the others" Daniella said as she stood up, only to find a cat Pokemon looming around in the shadows....
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"James? JAMES?!" Jessie started to ask as she looked around the beach, but the blue haired imbessile was nowhere to be found.

"Wo-Wobbuffet!" the patient Pokemon said as it started poiting towards the ocean with its petite hands.

Jessie lay there clueless while her Wobbuffet kept screaming, trying to point Jessie to where James was, but it was no use, Jessie was too hard headed.

"Wobbuffet, will you stop making so much noise? I'm trying to find James!" Jessie screamed, quieting Wobbuffet.

The two sat on the beach as Jessie looked on at the ocean, only to see James scuttling around in the water like a child first learning to swim, being chased by a giant shark Pokemon. Jessie quickly jumped up and ran towards James, throwing a Pokeball out into the ocean, only to hit James the face and cause him to faint and start to drown.

"Seviper get in there! Use your Poison Fang!" Jessie told her snake.

The snake Pokemon upon hearing this lurched towards the shark Pokemon, biting into its rock-heard skin, but managing to poison it, causing it to run off.

"Seviper, go get that imbessile out of the water!" Jessie yelled as her snake dove into the the water, coming up with James after a few minutes and bringing him onto the land.

"James, JAMES?!" Jessie yelled as she started slapping James to try and revive him, but it was no use.

"Wobbuffet!" the blob said as it pointed at James' mouth, managing to get its message to Jessie, but it only disgusted her.

"Me? Do I have to?!" Jessie asked as her two Pokemon nodded and she had no choice, leaning down over James, her lips touching his as she started to blow into his mouth, as well as pushing on his chest.

After a few breaths, James spit water Jessie's face, angering her as she started to slap James silly. As James got up, he asked what had happened, but there was no reply from Jessie as she just blushed.

"Wobbuffet!" the blob Pokemon said as it pointed at Jessies lips, and then at James, but Jessie quickly returned it to its Pokeball before James could get what Wobbuffet was saying....
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"Daniella?!" 2ra yelled as he looked for her, but there was no trace of her except her red bandana with white plokadots.

"She's gone, they took her...." Andrew said, but it only confused 2ra.

"Who is they?" 2ra asked Andrew.

"It doesn't matter, we're alone now, we must get out of here before the next part of the prophecy comes true" Andrew said as if in a trance as he walked up to the tablet.

"Two little children trying to get done, a wail of a tail and then there was one...." Andrew said before he turned back, the tablet opening, opening up another chamber.

"So, you mean there was more? And what is it with all the chambers?" 2ra asked, but Andrew just ignored him and walked inside.

Inside this chamber, rocks that were perfectly aligned were the walls, with a large pool in the center, a key in the center which seemed to open a door somewhere, it seemed important as it seemed to radiate.

"Hey, where's Meowth?!" 2ra asked, but decided to shut up because no one was going to listen to him.

The two trainers stood before the pool in the center of the chamber as a riddle appeared before them, as if a reflection in the water.

The riddle read, "What is the end of time and space, the beginning of the end, and the start of everything?"

The two trainers looked puzzled as they thought about the riddle, but nothing came to mind. As 2ra looked on at his Pokemon behind him, he decided to start petting them, making Trapinch and Castform laugh while Torchic ran around in circles around 2ra.

"Andrew, aren't you going to at least talk to your Pokemon, they aren't at fault you know" 2ra told Andrew, but he neglected to answer, all he said was E....
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"Must...escape...from...Beedrill..." Wally said as he was out of breath, he had been running for a while, and his body felt heavy, his breath as dry as a desert.

As Wally kept running, his body started to droop, he couldn't go much longer as he collapsed, this seemed like the end as he took a whiff of the aromatic wind as he prepared for the worse as the Beedrill finally caught up to him and were about to strike.

As Wally braced himself, closing his eyes as a tear ran down his cheek as he was about to be pinched with the needles of those bugs, but nothing happened. Wally opened his eyes slowly to find his Kirlia in front of him, using Refllect to block the Beedrill from hurting its trainer.

"Kirlia? But, I thought...thank you..." Wally said as he hugged Kirlia and they were both teleported over to a large meadow.

The psychic Pokemon twirled around as it started to dance around in the grass, Wally enjoying his faithful Pokemons dance steps.

"Kirlia, since when could you dance?" Wally asked, but Kirlia just shrugged and kept on dancing gracefully in the grass.

"Hey, Kirlia, I think we have to find our friends" Wally said as he thought about Swablu and the others.

"Kirrrrr" the psychic Pokemon said as it started twirling around and teleported Wally and itself into a nearby tree.

"Wow, look at the view Kirlia, hey wait a minute, isn't that......Daniella?!" Wally asked....
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"James, we have to get going!" Jessie yelled as she returned Seviper to its Pokeball and started to walk.

"Okay, okay, are we going to look for Meowth?" James asked as he started walking behind her.

"Fine, have it your way, but right after, we're having revenge on those Zangoose who ripped my hair off!" Jessie said she put on a malicious smile.

"Without our Meowth balloon, we won't be able to look for Meowth" James said, but Jessie didn't seemed phased as she took out a remote control from her back pocket and pressed a large red button on the all black control, causing a Dugtrio machine to appear before them, with a drill under each Diglett.

"We still have this? We havn't seen this since what? The beginning of Johto?" James asked.

"Yes, yes, I got it fixed, and now it's time to find Meowth" Jessie said as she started running towards the large machine and jumped in through a door on the top of Dugtrio.

"Hey, how do we know Meowth is underground?" James asked, but noticed Jessie was about to leave, so he quickly started chasing after it and managed to jump on just before Dugtrio dug underground....
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The two trainers stood still as small rocks appeared from in front of Andrew towards the center of the pool, a pathway right ot the key.

Andrew quickly jumped on the rocks, not even caring if he fell in, until he reaced the center of the pool, and grabbed the key, causing a black void to take the place of where the key was, making rocks from the ceiling fall into the pool and awaken the beast within.

As 2ra looked on, a large blue whale appeared before the two trainers, its large body splashing around, causing large waves to hit the two trainers.

"Huh? What..happened?" Andrew said as he snapped out of the trance he was in and fell to the ground, his Treecko and Electrike running from beehind 2ra and onto the rocks, but it was no use, the waves pushed the two Pokemon back and away from Andrew.

"Andrew!" 2ra yelled, getting through to Andrew, making him turn around and look at 2ra, who was with his Pokemon, trying to protect them from the waves.

"2ra, no!!" Andrew screamed as the large whale let out a wail and slammed 2ra with its large tail, the Pokemon looking on in horror as 2ra was being crushed by the large whales attack.

"Cast!" the weather Pokemon said as it quickly shot an icy cold wind at the whale, followed by a bite of the ant pit, and embers from the chick Pokemon, but it was no use, the whale continued to crush 2ra.

Up from a large rock, a mysterious man sent a bolt of electricity at the whale, frying it in one hit and causing it to retreat, as it lifted it's tail, 2ra was nowhere to be found.

"A wail of a tail and then there was one..." Andrew said as he looked on in horror, now only he and the Pokemon were left, but it seemed that Castform, Trapinch, and Torchic seemed to be missing as well.

"Andrew!" an old man said as he jumped from above and landed next to Andrew, he seemed to be familiar, but Andrew couldn't put his finger on it....
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Preview of Next Time:

Chapter 24: The End of the Line!

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[GeneChildMewtwo]

So, I'm a bit later than I meant to be... But I'm back again. This chapter was interesting. It moved around a lot, since there were so many people to follow around, but you handled it pretty well. I would comment about some of the story related things... but since I talked to you earlier, I already know a bit more about that than I should. ^_^

Well, there's still a lot I don't know, and I'll be waiting to see it. Keep it up! :wave:

[Hanada Tattsu]

This is getting freaky, but it's a great chapter! Now, 2ra's gone along with Castform, Torchic, and Trapinch, after being abused by a Wailord, and now only Andrew's left. I wonder who that wierd guy is...?

I think Wally's Kirlia is going to evolve soon. Hmm...

Keep it up!

[Venasaur89]

Oh, finally a new chapter after a more than a month! In the meantime, I have meade a story too, and its going gr8!

Anyways, the chapter was pretty cool. The length was okay, no spelling/grammer errors, but the characters are still stuck in the there? Kinda boring...I hope the next chapter is better.

Keep it up!

[2ra]

Lol I actually posted this a few weeks ago, but no one replied e.e Anyways, this plot ends in the next chapter where there is a resolution :P

Although, I have just started high school and am a bit stressed out with all my homework and issues so I can only post in weekends and stuff, I'm taking a college class and some classes for 10th graders and stuff o.o

[Venasaur89]

yeah, I noticed it but didn't had time to read it. You know what? I am a freshman as well. yeah, classes are kinda hard, and now i only get about one and a half hour for computer.

[2ra]

Hello everyone! If you havn't noticed, I have not posted a new chapter on this fan fic recently, and the reason for that is, I am quitting this fic. I'm sorry for all those who were readers of this story, but I lost interest to tell you the truth, but do not fret! (xD)

I have been planning on making a new fic in which I will apply all of the things I've been learning over the past weeks in my English class, my increased vocabulary, and a better plot to the fic. Although I do not have a name for it, I think you all deserve at least a small preview, if I could give you one >.<

Well, it doesn't really matter, cause I'm planning on starting it sometime this week, most probably either: Today, Tomorrow, or Friday ^^ Again, I'm sorry for disappointing you if I have and hopefully you'll read my new fic? :P

[Venasaur89]

Ohh well, I was expecting that. THat's good that you aren't permenantly closing this fic, so you can continue it later if you want.

If you are making a new fic, I'll be sure to check it out!

[2ra]

Yep, right now I'm currently planning out the first chapter, and what happens in it. I have so much stuff planned, I just have to see how much of it is in the first chapter.

In this fic, I'm trying not to use overused Pokemon and give them personalities, other than just dancing around and battling o.o Give them flaws and preferences ^^

The only spoiler, if you can even call it a spoiler, I can give you is that my avatar has to do with it o.o This fic will involve 2ra, Daniella, and Andrew in a different story, although their names might change, I'm just not sure ^^

Um...what else? o.o This fic will take place in an all new region, all I'm saying is "red" lol

[Venasaur89]

YEah, I will be sure to check it out. Is it a trainer fic?

Well, thanks for the birthday wish!

[2ra]

Joyeux Anniversaire!
Feliz Cumpleanos!
Happy Birthday!

Lol, I can say it in the three languages I know :P

As for the trainer fic question, I can't really tell you, cause it would kinda spoil the surprise :P

I can tell you that there will be many battles though o.o

[Venasaur89]

THanks! which languages are these? SPanish? french?

No problem! I will just find it out.