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Mancetric_Trainer
17th August 2003, 09:23 PM
Hello.

Well I deleted my other thread so I can post this.
I revised my story by improving detail and grammar I will also try to make the chapters longer.

I want to thank all the people who read my fiction so far and for posting your reviews. I no I got to chatper 10 but im going to be posting the revised versions a little faster so I could catch up to where I left off.

Now I hope more people review and read my story.
Well here's chapter one:

Episode 1: Double Delay

This adventure begins in the town of littleroot, where pokemon trainers have set off before in hope to become pokemon masters, breeders are even grand pokemon contest winners. This time two trainers are stepping up to the challenge to become pokemon masters. These two fifthteen year olds will finally set on there adventure, late of course stalled by helping there single mother with the family and her illness, yes THERE mother; these two trainers are twins, Dave and Daylena. Packing there essentials and saying goodbye to there mother and family they set off to the professor's lab two pick up there pokemon for there adventure.

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The sun was beaming down on the small town of littleroot; Dave and Daylena were walking the short distance to the professor's lab.

"Torchic maybe Mudkip?! I still don't know what pokemon im going to start with,” Daylena said to Dave.

"I know im gonna get torchic, it's a fire type so I think it would good to start with, " Dave said looking to his twin.

“True" said Daylena just to agree.

Coming up two a large two story white building the twins were happy to know they would finally get to set off on there pokemon adventure. They both were a little nervous as they approached Birch's lab. Stepping in they saw all types of machinery and a bulky man talking to a scientist.

"Birch! Hey where here for are pokemon!” Dave said excitedly

Birch smiled.

"Dave..Daylena im glad you could make it, im sure you wouldn't miss today"

Daylena spoke up and stepped toward birch

"Yea so where's are pokemon? Mudkip please,”

"So you decided which pokemon you wanted huh sis?” Dave said to his twin.

"Yea if you're getting a fire type im going with the water type,” she said with a wink.

Birch motioned them into another room, Dave and Daylena followed hoping to see there new pokemon. Dave started to think about his grand adventures finally being able to travel from home, while Daylena thought of all the great battles with her strong pokemon she would have.

Birch quickly turned around, a frown exposed on his face.

"I just remembered a van is bringing a few of the starting pokemon for new trainers, so sadly im all out at the moment" Birch said looking to the two disappointed trainers.

Dave and Daylena sighed in unison.

"Well can we go wait outside for the truck, where really looking forward for are new pokemon," Dave said looking to birch.

"Sure" Birch said cheerfully.

The twins ran outside and sat on the porch of the lab, waiting for the truck to arrive so they could start there adventure.

"Hmmm maybe trecko," Daylena said quietly to herself.

"You're still thinking of which pokemon you want!" Dave said yelling.

Daylena stood up.

"Well I have to make sure it's a strong pokemon," she said angrily.

A van started to bustle down a dirt road heading for the lab, Dave jumped up and the twins smiled as the van came closer, suddenly two pokemon rolled out of the bushes in the path of the truck seeming to be playing with each other. The two small pokemon rolled around pouncing one another, one red with a plus sign on each cheek, while the other was blue with minus signs on each cheek.

Professor Birch rushed out of his lab in confusion

"What's all the ruckus?!” he said looking around.

The van still sped down the road toward the two pokemon, them not knowing the danger they were in. Dave and Daylena looked at one another and raced toward the pokemon in front of the truck; the driver swerved the truck out the path of the twins and shot into the nearby bushes.

"You guys were almost killed!" Daylena yelled at the two small pokemon.

The pokemon seemed freighted by all the commotion and the truck flying into the bushes they began slump onto one another and fainted into a small heap on the floor. Professor birch ran up handing the twins pokeballs

"Here take these and catch them and get them off the road, we must check the van and the pokemon" Birch exclaimed.

Dave took the pokeball and threw it at the red pokemon, while Daylena threw it at the blue pokemon. The pokeballs shook and let out a soft ting.

Taking the newly caught pokemon they ran into the vegetation along with professor birch and saw the van smashed up on a tree, the driver out of the car confused and dazed.

"Everyone get the pokemon out of the van and back into the lab we must make sure there ok" Birch ordered.

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Later that day the twins sat in the lab waiting on the status of the pokemon, there adventure delayed once again, suddenly they remembered the pokemon they caught earlier that day.

Dave held the pokeball in his hand and looked at it.

"I wonder what this pokemon is. I didn't really get a good look at it,"

Daylena nodded

"Me neither how about we find out?"

Just as they were about to find out what these new pokemon were professor birch stepped out of the medical room with a grim look upon face.

"The pokemon are doing well but might have to stay for a few more days for observation, im sorry im sure this will delay your journey once again,”

The twins looked at one another with a look disappoint on there faces.

"Maybe we can use these new pokemon we caught today! Dave said remembering the pokemon.

“He’s right," Daylena said as she interrupted.

"We can use these as are starters this way we can leave today…as planned,"

Professor birch rubbed his chin thoughtfully and smiled

"How can I say no to such determination I know you guys will make great pokemon masters"

With that the whole town gathered to say goodbye to the two newest littleroot trainers.
Dave and Daylena didn’t know what adventures they might encounter and what challenges they might meet. Heck, they don't even know what pokemon they have, but that is for another day..another adventure.

Mancetric_Trainer
17th August 2003, 09:26 PM
Here's chapter 2.

Episode 2: Scooch for the Pooch

The twins begin there journey leaving the city of littleroot, they decided to take a rest near a grassy road with high rock formations that surrounded them and a small pond nearby, the road is headed for the nearest gym leader. Setting up camp, they thought about the commotion of the previous day and the two new pokemon they caught then realizing they still didn't know what they were!

Putting her hair back into her two round ponytails Daylena chatted with Dave.

"How much longer before we get to the first gym leader I can't wait to get my first badge," Daylena said with confidence.

Dave slid his red long sleeve jacket over his plain white shirt and replied.

"Well maybe we should find out what pokemon we have first I think that might just be a tad important,“ Dave said sarcastically.

Daylena nodded and they both opened there packs and grabbed there pokeballs, looking at one another they raised there pokeballs and tossed them.

"Go pokeball!" the twins yelled in unison.

The pokeballs flew from there hand and landed on the ground, Dave pokeball shot out a red beam that formed into a very small red pokemon and Daylena’s formed a small blue pokemon. The pokemon quickly grabbed one another with frightened looks on there faces, ears twitching one with a plus sign for a tail the other a minus sign for a tail.

Daylena held in a laugh.

"Uh….don't worry little guys we won’t hurt you...im Daylena and that's my twin Dave,”.

Dave busily looked through his bag and pulled out a large book, skimming through it he found the picture of the two pokemon that stood before him.

"Plusle and minun," he said reading the book.

"There Electric type pokemon, there also classified as the cheering pokemon. They love cheering there partner on,"

Dave closed his book and the twins stepped closer to there newfound electric pokemon.

"I have a hunch they might know each other," Daylena said.

Dave nodded.

"Yea maybe there related…maybe even twins….hello plusle….minun, were your trainers,"

The two pokemon shivered in fear as they held each other staring at the twins, Dave and Daylena stood confused by there new pokemon actions and didn’t understand why they showed such fear of them, maybe still startled from the earlier day. Suddenly a crisp howl was heard not to far away.

Daylena jumped.

"What was that!"

Minun and Plusle scurried up a nearby tree in as the twins got back to back.

Dave gulped.

"What was that…,"

Another howl erupted even closer then the last time, seeming to be getting closer and sounding more numerous.Daylena slowly turned toward the nearby bushes and suddenly froze in fear as she saw two glowing eyes in the bushes, then four, then six, the eyes growing in numbers.

"Da….da...Dave…," Daylena tried to cough up her words, but was still frozen in fear.

"Maybe it was nothing Daylena…maybe we are imagining?” Dave said in a worried voice.

Dave soon realized it was something more then that when the glowing eyes seemed to surround them.
A grey streak then flew out of the bushes, its fur flying through the air and its teeth exposed

"Daylena don't move! Some poochyena won’t attack if you don’t run" Dave said quietly yet sternly.

Daylena ignored him and dashed from Dave's side and tried to climb up a near by tree when two poochyena hopped out in front of her a third hoping behind her. Daylena did a small turn and looked to Dave.

"Help…me…," she said.

Dave stepped one foot toward Daylena when the first poochyena bit at his foot taking a hold of it.

"OW!" Dave yelled in pain.

The two small pokemon looked from atop the tree when plusle took a stand. The small pokemon instructed his small friend to stay put and patted him on the head. Plusle then hopped from atop the tree and let out a growl attack. All the poochyena turn toward the pokemon and began to charge at him.

"Plusle! No!....try....try a thunderwave attack! "Dave shouted.

The plusle first looked at Dave with a blank expression then looked up at its small partner it then clenched its tiny fist. Sparks began to form on its small plus cheeks and a small wave of electric energy blasted from his cheeks and struck some of the poochyena. The poochyena shuddered in pain and came to a stop from the paralyzing attack.

"Good job plusle!" Dave said.

Dave quickly picked up plusle and called for Daylena, Daylena rushed over to the nearby tree that was holding minun.

"Minun please! Come out of the tree you can trust me,” she yelled to minun as the poochyena began to recover.

Minun looked down at Daylena, tears forming in its eye; it then looked to Dave and plusle. He saw that plusle seemed to be safe and decided to trust Daylena and hopped from the tree and flew into Daylena arms.

Dave and Daylena began to run as the poochyena ran toward them howling, there pack growing in number. As the twins were running they tripped on the uneven ground of the Forrest and tumbled down a large hill, hitting rocks and twigs as the slid down.

"Daylena are you okay,” Dave said wincing in pain as he stood up.

"I think so. But where's plusle and minun?!" she said as she patted herself off.

They looked around and saw plusle and minun lying on the ground nearby, light bruises and scratches on them. The twins rushed over to them when the group of poochyena came from up the hill, the twins hopped in front of the two hurt pokemonknowing they were in a dead-end. The poochyena growled as the slowly walk toward them. The twins clenched there fist preparing to protect there pokemon when unexpectedly plusle and minun hopped in front of the twins, the twins looked at each other and grinned.

"Thunderwave!!" The twins said in unison.

Sparks began buzz from plusle and minun as there eye's squinted, they both threw up there hands and shot a white and blue wave of sparking energy toward the poochyena. The poochyena shuddered and winced in pain running in fear as the sparks of electricity jumped from there body. The pokemon escaped but one poochyena seemed to be fully paralyzed, Daylena then grabbed a pokeball from her bag and tossed it at the paralyzed pokemon. The pokemon ball began shaking and hopping around on the grass and then came to a stop.

"What did you do that for!" Dave shouted at her.

"I thought we were suppose to catch pokemon...even ones that were about to kill us heh heh" Daylena responded.

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Back at camp Dave and Daylena packed up to continue there adventure, plusle and minun rested atop one another nearby. Daylena put her new pokemon in her bag, Dave still thinking she made a wrong decision catching the poochyena. After finishing Dave picked up his plusle and Daylena picked up minun deciding not to return them to there pokeballs and instead to hold there new friends. They continued on the road not knowing what adventure they would run into next.

Mancetric_Trainer
17th August 2003, 09:28 PM
Ok i'll post more chapters later but for now chapter 3.

Episode 3: Lesson from Aggression

The day was early and a warm breeze filled the air, the twins are continuing there journey to challenge the first gym leader for there badge. Minun sits atop Daylena's head, taking a nap while Daylena daydreams about the battle the previous day wondering if she could have done better. Meanwhile plusle happily skips next to Dave trying to keep up with his large steps, Dave busy pondering about the adventure he had yesterday wondering about what might happen next, hoping for more. Without warning a young boy hops onto the dirt road grasping his small cap making sure it doesn't fall off.

"Hello! I'm Terren are you guys trainers!" the young boy said excitedly

Dave blinked at the boy while Daylena grasped her chest in fright.

"You nearly scared me to death! Can't people greet people normally these days?" Daylena said yelling at the young boy

Terren tipped his hat.
"Oh sorry im just excited, im a new trainer and im looking for someone to battle,"

Dave stepped up to the small boy and smiled.

"Were new trainer's im Dave and this is my twin sister Daylena. I guess I could battle you,"

Daylena stepped up and pushed Dave causing him to fall on his bum, not even noticing him.

"No no I wanna battle, let me test my strength!” she said doing a little dance.

Dave sighed and looked to plusle.

"No no. Go right ahead Daylena “Dave said rolling his eyes.

The twins and the brave trainer walked shortly off the main road into a clear grassy area. Dave sat angrily on the ground awaiting the battle while plusle picked up a small brown leaf and began swaying it back and forth cheering for Daylena. Daylena looked to plusle and smiled throwing him a peace sign.

"That's right plusle im gonna win this!" Daylena said happily.

"Pokeball go!" The boy said throwing his pokeball in the center of the field.

His pokeball hit the ground and the beam of light formed into a small blue and orange creature its mouth opening releasing a "Mudkip!"

Daylena swooned.
"Oooo mudkip but I have no fear, let me take this out"
Daylena pulled a pokeball from her pack while minun steadily waited next to her. Daylena then threw the pokeball it letting out a grey dog like pokemon. The poochyena looked around and set its eyes on minun and let out a small growl at it, minun jumped up and ran behind Daylena in fear.

"No silly dog! Minun is your friend! That's your foe!" Daylena said pointing at the small mudkip.

Terren pointed at poochyena
"Mudkip use tackle attack!"

Poochyena started to slowly walk toward minun when it was quickly hit by mudkip's tackle attack, making poochyena wince.

"ack!" Daylena shouted

"Poochyena get up and use a tackle attack!"

"Dodge and use growl attack! "

Poochyena angrily charged at mudkip, mudkip then hopped to the side dodging poochyena's attack. Mudkip then opened its small mouth and let out a growl attack at poochyena, it shuddering from the sound.

"Wrong wrong wrong!” she said as she stomped angrily.

"Try another tackle attack poochyena!"

"Mudkip use mud slap, now!"

Poochyena flicked his bushy tail and angrily charged at mudkip once again, mudkip then jumped back and let a ball of mud shot out of its mouth splashing into poochyena’s face covering his eyes. Without the command of Daylena poochyena tried to tackle mudkip missing from his lowered accuracy caused by the mud and slammed into a tree.

"Mudkip finish with a tackle!"

Mudkip ran and crashed into poochyena, poochyena slid through the grass coming to a stop and fainted pitifully onto the ground. Daylena eyes opened wider and she slumped down onto the floor and returned poochyena.

"Uh that's ok. Cause im not done! Minun get in there, now! " Daylena said a sadness in her voice

Minun hopped into the center of the field and looked at Mudkip ready to battle. Plusle started to sway the leaf even harder and started to cheer loudly for minun while Dave curiously looked at minun’s sudden boost of energy while plusle yelled at him.

"Minun use a thundershock attack! Now now now!”

"Mudkip use tackle attack! "Terren yelled

Minun blinked and a confused look flushed over its face seeming as if he didn’t know what to do while mudkip started to come at him speeding.

Dave stood up and yelled to Daylena.
"Try a different attack! I do not think they learn that attack! "

Daylena nodded to her twin
“Minun thunderwave!"

Minun blue cheeks began to spark and a wave of blue electricity shot from his cheeks and hit Mudkip yet mudkip seemed to be unaffected by the attack completely. The Mudkip then struck minun, sending him flying back.
"What….happened?" Daylena said in confusion

"Don't you know? Mudkip is also a ground type not just a water type so it has a good resistance against electric attacks," Terren said speaking up.

Daylena snapped her fingers.
"Darn! I knew that! minun use tackle!"

"mudkip let's finish this, use water gun!"

Minun slowly got and prepared for a tackle attack when a burst of water flew into its face, causing minun to do cartwheels flying back, soaking his short fur. Minun eyes swirled in pain and he fainted from mudkip’s powerful attack. Daylena once again slumped onto the ground with her head slumped over, she then began mutter under her breath. Plusle ran over to minun grabbing him and let out squeaks trying to wake his friend up while Terren's mudkip jumped into his arms.

"Great job Mudkip," Terren said petting his pokemon.

Dave sadly looked to Daylena as she stayed motionless, a tear falling to the ground.

Terren smiled.
"Hey Daylena you tried no need to be a sore loser!”

Daylena looked up with an expression of evil on her face; she appeared next to Terren her face growing three times as large.

"Look here you little pip squeak! I am! Not a sore loser! You may have won me luckily this time! With cheating of course! Nevertheless, it will never! Ever! Happen again!"

Terren froze and gave a blank look when a dust cloud appeared. Terren was running in the distance in fear from Daylena’s outbreak. Daylena then ran and picked up minun and continued to run into a nearby forest as tears flew from her eyes.

"Daylena wait!" Dave cried out.

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Dave walked into the forest, plusle sadly walking next to him. Dave soon came up to a flat rock overlooking a pond, Daylena was sitting on it with her head down and minun curled up on her lap. Dave slowly walked up to her and took a seat next to her.

"I bet you think im a sore loser to….don’t you?" Daylena said still looking down.

"I would never think that Daylena. Never,” he said responding.

"I promised mom that I would be a pokemon master for her. How can I do that when I can’t even win a simple battle" Daylena said as she held back her tears.

"Daylena….you know there ups and downs when being a trainer, there always ups and downs in everything. When mom had that disease she won it, this time you lost a battle….one thing mom didn't do was give up and breakdown, Daylena I know your stronger then this and I know we will both be pokemon masters together though….there will be a lot of losses along the way "

Daylena broke into a smile.

"You know what bro. You are right…….hopefully you will be there for me through all of this,"

Dave smiled "you know I will"

Daylena and Dave hugged and so do minun and plusle. The sun began to set and Dave and Daylena decided to stay and enjoy the sunsetwhile sitting upon the rock. Thinking about the lessons they learned today and what new lessons they will learn in the future along there journey, but one thing they know they will learn them together.

Mancetric_Trainer
18th August 2003, 04:06 AM
Ok I'll try to slow down this time around.
Thanks for replying.

Here's chapter four! plz review!

Episode 4: Ghost of a chance Part 1

The burning campfire lit up the night sky, it letting off a dark smoke that stood out against the bright stars. Dave and Daylena were cuddled up in there sleeping bags, plusle and minun on there sides. The twins were in a deep sleep and were resting from a long day of walking trying to get to the nearest town, but instead decided to set up camp. The silence was broken when the sound of breaking branches filled there camp.

Dave sat up with a tired look on his face and poked Daylena.

“Daylena did you hear that?” he said quietly trying not to scare her.

Daylena let out a loud snore; plusle was already awake and crawled to Dave, a concerned look on his face.

“Plusle I hear something I think we should go check it out” Dave said picking up his small friend.

They stepped deeper into the woods following the sounds he heard earlier, a gust of cold wind brushed over him and plusle. His vision was lightly impaired by the darkness but Dave wandered deeper into the woods, he looked back every so often at the camp checking up on Daylena and minun.

“Maybe it was nothing plusle lets head back, “Dave said to plusle wanting to get back to his warm sleeping bag.

Dave turned around and jumped back in fear, plusle diving into his shirt. Before him was a small girl with long black hair and an old plain white dress. The girl blinked with large green eyes and held a pokemon with both hands in her arms, the pokemon almost the same size as her, its head green with a red flap sticking out. Dave knew this pokemon, the psychic type ralts.

“You scared me little girl what are you doing out so late? “ Dave said breathing hard.

The small girl stepped closer to Dave.

“Hello my name is Eliza and im ten years old and this is my best friend ralty“said the small girl cheerfully.

Dave mustarded a smile and tried to talk to the little girl.

“Um hi Eliza you sure gave me freight but it’s a little late for you to be out maybe you should get home even if uh ralty is with you“he said nicely to the small girl.

Plusle slowly poked his head out of the shirt to see what is going on while Dave began to head back to the camp to catch some sleep, he didn’t want slow down Daylena who is in a rush.
Not looking back, he made it to camp and prepared to get back into his sleeping bag when a gust of cold wind breezed on the back of his neck. Turning around he saw young Eliza, tears in her eyes and holding her small ralts, which woke up Daylena.

“What’s going on here who are! “ Daylena said in a sleepy grunt.

Eliza stepped closer.

“Please help me…please come and help me and my friends, “she said in a soft voice.

The twins looked at one another, puzzled about what she could be talking about, Daylena stood up picking up minun who was also awoken by the noise.

“What do you need help with little girl? Are you okay? “Daylena said concerned yet still sleepy.

Eliza turned around and looked back.

“Please follow me…and help us! “

Eliza then dashed into the woods her long hair flowing back, the twins looked at one another puzzled and nodded. They grabbed their bags and set chase trying to catch up with the little girl.
The stars lightly light up the woods enough that they could keep track of Eliza who was running rather fast, they soon came to a stop in which seemed to be a small town, Eliza no where to be found. Single buildings were scatted around with old tattered fences around each one, small gardens were here and there and a large fountain sat in the center of the eerie city. Only one building seemed to be lit out of all of them, it was a large barn like building that emitted sounds of commotion that boomed from it so Dave and Daylena decide to investigate. They stepped into which now seemed to be a city hall, rows of seats were filled with many people chatting amongst themselves all adults, the twins decided to take a empty seat in the back and held there pokemon to keep them warm when a large beefy man stepped to a stand in the front.

“Calm down everyone calm down,” said the beefy man trying to get calm over the ruckus.

A random woman stood up.

“All the children of the city are missing how can we calm down! “

Another stood.

“The curse is back! We shall never see are children again!”

Panic filled the room once again, people shouting things such as the children are missing and it’s the ghost. The panic came to a halt when a women yelled in horror and pointed toward a far wall, where a pokemon with red glowing eyes came through it and let off a spine-tingling “Dusssskull,”. The room began to empty when suddenly more and more of the ghost pokemon filled the room shouting and moaning there names. Dave and Daylena shot up and tried head for the exit, which was already blocked by running people. Through all the screaming and running people Dave saw a familiar face in the crowd: Eliza who began to walk toward the twins with a blank look on her face. Dave began to step back while Daylena stared at the young girl who was know inches away from her. Eliza then looked into the eyes of Daylena but there was something different about Eliza’s eyes this time for now they were glowing pure white, Eliza then smirked while holding her small ralts and a halo of energy surrounded Daylena and minun and began to engulf them and in the next second Eliza and Daylena were gone.

“Daylena! “ Dave shouted rushing to where Daylena once was.

Dave looked around confused, the city hall now empty. Yet what he couldn’t understand where was Daylena and minun and that strange little girl and how and why they just…vanished.

To be continued.

Mancetric_Trainer
18th August 2003, 01:56 PM
Thanks for replying deathman.
I will work on the 'and' thing, I noticed it to.

Well I'll post part 2 later today.

Mancetric_Trainer
18th August 2003, 05:11 PM
Episode 4: Ghost of a chance Part 2

The sun is just rising in what is know known as Starlit town, famous for the stars that light it’s nearby forest. Sitting on the fountain in the center of the town is Dave and plusle awake for hours waiting. All through the night Dave went from house to house looking for answers in his twin’s sister disappearance but no one wouldn’t even open there door, still spooked by what happened earlier that night. Stopping to rest on the fountain feeling guilty thoughts for not helping Daylena and minun who were now lost. Plusle walked to with Dave with a look of sorrow on his face and rubbed his cheek against his arm trying to comfort him when he saw an old man with a mud brown robe approaching them.

Stopping a few feet away from them, he began to speak.

“I suppose your looking for someone, “the old man said in a scratchy voice

Dave looked up at the old man whose bald head gleamed from the fresh new light from the rising sun.

“How did you know that, “Dave asked probingly

The old man winced.

“Well about everyone is looking for someone in this town sadly, “

Dave gave the man a puzzled look.

“What do mean? “

The old man came closer and widened his eyes.

“A few days ago people just started to vanish…children…first it was one then it was three, four, five and then ten. That’s when the city started to get in an uproar and panic rushed over the city. People started to think maybe it had to do something with…the curse. “

Dave remembered before when he overheard people speaking of the curse at the city hall earlier.

“Yes I heard of this so called curse but it doesn’t make since…what is this curse? “ Dave said now wanting to no more.

The old man nodded.

“A decade ago a small group of children headed for a cave not to far north of here. They would pretend they were pokemon masters and the such I suppose. Yet something terrible happened up there, a young girl and her pokemon never came back. The kids were in hysteria, they complained of ghost pokemon…and one large eye they could not forget. The kids said something about a curse….they said that the little girl was only the first that would disappear and the one with the single eye would be back for others in time. Yet the town was peaceful…in till now.”

Dave had a terrible feeling in the pit of his stomach from what he just heard. Still he knew he had to do something about Daylena, minun, and those others who vanished. He decided he would venture to the place the man mentioned….the cave to the north.

“You must be careful when you venture there, many have went there and never returned” said the man looking at Dave.

Dave shook his head.

“Im going to get my sister, “he said walking north.

Finding his way upon a path he followed it north climbing a few rocks here and there, time was strangely moving fast the moon already high in the sky it looking down upon Dave and plusle. Dave then came upon a rock face with a large hole in it; Dave slowly approached it when he saw something in the corner of his eye, a small girl.

“Eliza wait!” he shouted.

Eliza then pointed toward the ground, pointing at a few glass like fragments that lay there broken.

“Help us!” Eliza screeched

Dave ran toward Eliza and jumped toward her hoping to stop her from escaping when he strangely flew through her and hit the ground with a loud thud. Lying on the ground he looked back at Eliza who vanished into thin air with her ralts.

Picking up one of the glass shards, he raced into the cave now even more determined to find his sister. After a while of running through the damp cave he came upon a dead end that was well lighted from the starlight flooding into the cave.

“No… “Dave said lightly losing hope.

“Pla pla pla!” said plusle letting out a soft cry, pointing at a strange stone.

Dave examined the stone that resembled that shard he picked up earlier; he then placed the stone next to what seemed to be a slot next to the stone that plusle pointed out. Suddenly the sound of stone grinding filled the cave the dead end strangely moving back and sliding to the side revealing stairs that went deep into darkness. Gulping Dave started to travel down the damp stairs that seemed to twist down forever. Hearing what seemed to be chanting Dave slowed down and peeked around a corner and he shuddered from what he saw.

A dozen duskull floating around chanting there names one after the other, two blue flames floated eerily on the wall, lighting up the small stone room to reveal dozen of small children sitting on the ground with there eyes closed seeming to be sleeping. Dave scanned the area and spotted Daylena also seeming to be in a deep sleep with minun sleeping on her side, without thinking Dave stammered into the room when a line of duskull blocked the children.

“Plusle use thunderwave now! Make it a good one! “Dave said hopping back surprised.

Plusle hopped from Dave’s arm and released a wave of electric energy from his squeezed cheeks that directly hit the line of duskull immobilizing them.

Dave then ran to Daylena and shook her furiously.

“Wake up Daylena wake up! “ Dave said while shaking his twin sister.

The blue flames blew lightly forward and a burst of cold air filled the small room with enough force to push Dave back. Then from the center of the wall a large grey pokemon with a single eye emerged floating out of the wall with ease, plusle hopped into Dave’s arms as he slowly moved back.

“Day…lena….please wake up,” Dave said scared half to death.

“She won’t wake up! Dusclops won’t let it happen, “Eliza said softly

Dave turned to see Eliza standing blankly holding her ralts.

“I’ll be back under his control soon! Escape while you still can,” Eliza said now screaming.

Dave then started to put everything together, thinking back he remembered reading about dusclops, that it has the ability to put people under his control.

“Eliza you have to fight it! You can fight it!” Dave said walking toward Eliza.

Eliza shook her head.

“No no I can’t he’s to strong!”

Dave came next to Eliza, dusclops now angering.

“Eliza I believe in you I know you can do it,” he said know getting louder

“ Pla pla! “Plusle shouted adding in.

Eliza fell to her knees and began to sob shaking her head, dusclops lets out a groan and began to fly at Dave and plusle at a blazing speed; Plusle cheeks began to spark; Dave prepared for dusclops strike when suddenly Eliza tilted her head up, eyes glowing a bright white.

“Im not gonna let you hurt anyone else like you hurt me! “ Eliza said screaming!

Her ralts eyes begin to glow also and together they raised there hands shooting streams of brilliant light at dusclops that struck him with a great force. One of the sleeping kids let out a small cough while another began to move, all the kids began to wake.

“Dave please go! Take my friends with you save everyone before it’s too late! “Eliza shouted

Dave shook his head.

“No Eliza you’re coming with us,” Dave said as he shouted back.

Eliza smiled.

“No…Im already gone….but you freed me in a different way. Now go before it’s too late and take everyone”.

Dusclops screamed in agony while the white light wrapped around his round body. Dave called everyone out of the cave and the kids began to flow out. Grabbing Daylena’s hand he rushed out also following the large group of kids, looking back he saw dusclops starting to grow larger as the white light consumed him. Out the cave, Dave followed the kids a farther distance away when a large beam of light shot out the mouth of the cave lighting up the whole area in a blinding light.

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A sunrise broke over the small city, kids were returning to there parents some after over ten years. Dave and Daylena were walking when the old man and fellow town’s people greeted them.

“We owe you much thanks for you have saved are small town, how may we ever repay you,” the old man said cheerfully.

Dave began to open his mouth when Daylena interrupted.

“How about the direction to the nearest gym! “she said loudly

The old man nodded and smiled.

“The next gym is just over the hill, “said the old man pointing west.

After receiving different gifts from the town people the twins set off west to finally challenge there first gym leader, though Daylena doesn’t remember much of what happened she knows a lot just happened yet Dave knows so much more. Dave then closed his eyes and thought about this grand adventure he just had when lightly in his ears he heard a “ thank you “ in the soft voice that could only be Eliza with her little ralts.

Mancetric_Trainer
19th August 2003, 05:00 PM
Thanks for your reply.

Here's chap 5, it's a little short.

Episode 5: Skit Scat

The tall green grass rustled under the twin’s feet as they cascaded the small hill nearing the gym. A wide grin flushed over Daylena’s face, the gym now a seeing distance away. She made out the name that stretched across the gym and read it aloud “Petalburg Gym ”. Dave picked up plusle and began to run toward the gym hoping to get a head start against Daylena (knowing he would probably be punched aside her wanting to battle first) then without warning he flew flat on his face, plusle flying out of his arms. Dave winced in pain and looked back seeing what could have caused his fall and was surprised at what he saw, a small cat like pokemon.

The skitty was much smaller then Dave usually read about, maybe by a few inches, its brown fur covered its body accept maybe for her yellow face. The small skitty smiled at him while her tail swished playfully from side to side.

“A skitty! “He said with excitement.

He stood up and brushed the dirt off himself and went to retrieve plusle, plusle let out a few peeps of reinsurance letting Dave know he was ok and ready to battle. Setting plusle down he prepared to battle the small skitty who still sat there patiently seeming to know what was going happen next. Moving to a clear area Daylena sat with minun knowing Dave wanted to catch this semi-rare pokemon.

“Ok plusle let’s start out with a thunderwave attack! ” Dave ordered

Plusle jumped a few inches forward toward the smaller then usual pokemon and let out a powerful thunderwave. The small skitty elegantly jumped over the quick wave and let out a growl at plusle who shuddered back from the sharp growl.

“Plusle try a tackle attack! ”

Plusle charged at the pokemon but this time differently, plusle raced toward the skitty faster then ever before, a white streak followed behind him, plusle just learned quick attack. The attack struck the pokemon with considerable force causing it to fall to its side skidding a few feet back. The skitty quickly got back onto its feet and began to wave its tail elegantly back and forth staring into plusle’s eyes. Hearts filled plusle’s eye, he was just stricken with a attract attack.

“Plusle break out of it! ” Dave yelled trying to snap his pokemon out of his alluring trance.

Plusle swayed back and forth deeply in traced by the swooning skitty. Skitty then charged toward plusle connecting directly into plusle’s stomach, sending him into the tall grass.

“Plusle please snap out of it and use a quick attack!”

Plusle shook his head stunned from the tackle attack, lifting his head he saw skitty charging at him with great speed. Quickly hopping back plusle bounced off a tree and flew over the charging skitty, letting her slam into the tree. Landing he released a charging quick attack into the dazed skitty, slamming her harder into the tree.
Dave then grabbed a pokemon ball from his pack and threw it at the skitty, it absorbing into the ball in an instant. The ball lightly jiggled and let out a ting letting Dave know he just caught a new pokemon.

The twins stepped into the gym after coming from the pokemon center where they gave there pokemon a much needed rest. An older looking man turned around glancing at the twins giving them a smile, the twins ready for there first gym battle. Ready to test out there new pokemon.

Mancetric_Trainer
20th August 2003, 03:56 AM
hey xtina thanks for the reply.

I know chapt 5 was kinda short but they get alot longer in future chapters since the story unravels more.

Well I hope you cotinue reading when I catch up to where I left off.

Mancetric_Trainer
21st August 2003, 03:05 PM
Ok here's chapter six.
After this chapter the chapters get alot longer.
Plz read and review.

Episode 6: Just PLAIN slow

The gym seemed to look like a large fighting dojo mostly brown with a large pokeball drawn onto the floor. The gym leader stood tall with a head of dark grey hair, he wore a large red jacket and kept a wide grin over his face. The twins were finally about to have there first gym battle.

“Hello im Norman and this is the normal gym,” he said shaking each of the twins hands.

Daylena pushed Dave sending him flying to the floor, Daylena then stepped up wanting to battle first.

“I see someone really wants to battle,“ Norman said lightly laughing

“Yea I’ve been waiting along time for this I finally get to test out my skills!” she responded nodding.

“Okay two pokemon each no time limit, let’s begin!”

With that Norman picked a pokeball from his belt and let it fly toward the center of the gym it releasing a small grey pokemon. The pokemon had a small oval red nose and it laid flat to the ground it’s short brown fur covering its body, long claws came out of its long arms .Daylena looked at the small normal type and decided she would try to use a her newest pokemon and released poochyena it letting off a menacing growl

“Poochyena use tackle attack now!” Daylena loudly ordered


Slakoth try a scratch attack!” Norman also ordering loudly

Poochyena looked to the small sloth and rolled his eyes and then laid on the floor deciding to take a nap. Daylena jaw dropped and she fumed with anger shouting at her pokemon to attack, Dave plusle and minun looked on, a worried look on there faces. The small sloth then pulled back its long arm and let its claws strike across the napping poochyena’s face it letting out a yelp of pain. Standing to all fours the poochyena growled ignoring orders from the still yelling Daylena; it then tackled the pokemon sending him rolling back.

“Slakoth use your yawn attack!”

“Poochyena you have to raise your attack use howl!”

The poochyena looked back at Daylena and looked at the now recovering pokemon and let out a booming howl causing poochyena’s hair to raise up, almost looking spiked. The sloth then inhaled the surrounding air and let out a sleepy yawn the air rushing over poochyena’s face a then drowsy look instantly appearing over its face.

“Now try a tackle attack poochyena!”

“Slakoth another scratch attack!”

The now pumped up poochyena flew towards the slow pokemon striking it causing it to skid a few feet back. The poochyena rushed towards the hurt pokemon trying to get in a second attack when suddenly his eyes closed causing poochyena to flip on its side, it now in a deep sleep. The yawn took its affect causing poochyena to sleep, slakoth took this chance to swipe poochyena with yet another scratch attack with its sharp long claws leaving red marks across the sleeping pokemon’s face.

“Return poochyena good job!” Daylena yelled returning her hurt pokemon knowing he could not take much more.

“Minun it’s your turn! Start with quick attack!”

“Slakoth yawn!”

The grey sloth began to inhale air once again when it was struck quickly by minun’s swift attack causing the already weaken slakoth to faint a few feet away.

“Return slakoth now it’s your turn vigoroth”

A large pokemon that stood the same height as Norman shot out of the pokeball.The pokemon’s body was covered in white fur except for the two brown stripes that stretched across its back. Its arm hung low making its long black claws touch the ground while its sharp teeth protruded out of its mouth.

“Okay vigoroth use focus energy”

“Minun quick attack”

Vigoroth began to focus its energy it clenched its fist and began to fume. Minun stood back a few steps and looked at the large pokemon almost scared. It then jumped back and flew forward dashing in for a quick attack.

“Vigoroth fury swipes quick!”

Just as minun was about to strike the even larger sloth it let out a barrage of fury swipes that struck across minuns chest making the small pokemon fall to the ground.

“Minun get up!”

“Another fury swipes”

Just as minun got up another barrage of fury swipes struck the pokemon this time making the pokemon fly a few feet back.

“Minun please hop back as far as you can and use thunderwave!”

“Let’s finish it vigroth fury swipes!”

Vigoroth started to charge towards minun it then got in hitting distance and pulled back its long arm letting its claw fly towards minun. Minun then quickly hopped back barely dodging the flying claw it falling a few feet away and letting out a flickering thunderwave that struck the unexpecting sloth.

“Okay QUICK ATTACK”

“Focus your energy vigoroth”

The paralyzed pokemon struggled to move when it was struck by a speedy quick attack which caused the pokemon to fall back.

“Another quick attack minun!”

Plusle hopped up and started to cheer for minun, minun then looked to his small partner and smiled and let out a forceful quick attack at the fallen pokemon causing him to roll over and faint.

“That was a well played battle! You deserve this badge very much” Norman said walking toward Daylena.

Norman pulled out a pure metal badge out of his pocket and placed it in Daylena’s hand. Daylena looked at her newest badge that resembled a rectangle and two arrows in opposite directions. Smiling she jumped into the air minun joining her.

“Congrats Daylena! You got your first badge!” Dave said holding plusle

The twins traveled out of the gym and headed for the pokemon center. Daylena was happy then ever now with her first badge making her even closer to becoming a pokemon master. While Dave couldn’t wait till later that day to test out his skills and maybe earn a badge for himself.

Mancetric_Trainer
21st August 2003, 06:10 PM
Your right.

I just wanted the people who already read it not to miss out
So when I decided to revise it I was only going to fix grammar etc.
Still I can see your point, in future chapeters I just won't revise grammar but add more deatail and such but it won't change the story. I rush since ideas keep popping into my head but I will slow it down and add more detail as I go.

Thanks for the reply glad you think the story is interesting.

Mancetric_Trainer
21st August 2003, 08:25 PM
Here's chapt 7.
I no im still posting kinda fast but I just have a itch to catch up to where I left off.

Episode 7: Battle at LiNOONe

Plusle barely jumped over the swiping pokemon, the battle was already on its way. Dave was also trying to get his first badge since Daylena got it earlier that day. It was noon and the sun shown in through the gym windows as Daylena and minun were busy cheering.

“Vigoroth use uproar!”

“Finish it plusle quick attack!”

Vigoroth tucked in its arms and prepared to release a powerful uproar when plusle tackled it in the stomach causing the pokemon to faint.

“Linoone go!”

The linoone was a long brown pokemon with light brown stripes its body curved from front to back and its soft blue eyes looked at its surroundings.

“Plusle start of with a thunderwave!”

“Linoone mud sport”

Plusle squeezed and let out a thunderwave that sparked towards the sleek raccoon pokemon. Linoone squeezed down and mud shot from under its paws and surrounded the area which negated the thunderwave attack.

“Linoone headbutt!”

“Plusle try growl!”

Plusle started to growl at the linoone but before it could become effective the linoone head butted plusle sending him into a nearby wall.

“Plusle get up!”

Plusle struggled to get up when linoone head butted plusle pinning him onto the wall causing him to faint. Dave ran over and picked up plusle and set him with Daylena.

“Okay skitty go!”

Skitty was released out the pokemon ball and it let out a soft growl.

“Linoone headbutt!”

“Skitty tackle!”

The pokemon charged at each other and slammed into one another the pokemon sending each other back each of them landing on there feet.

“Linoone double team!”

“Skitty another tackle!”

Skitty charged toward linoone its tail swaying back and forth when instantly linoone double then tripled sending skitty into a confusing stop. Linoone continued to make copies as it surrounded skitty.

“Skitty use attract!

Skitty smiled and started to sway its tail back and forth.

“Skitty slowly move around as you do it!”

Skitty began to slowly move around, staring into each of the eyes of the rapidly growing linoone’s. Suddenly linoone’s copies disappeared leaving a dazed in love linoone.

“Okay skitty do it!”

Skitty happily charged toward the attracted linoone tackling causing it to back flip, linoone was out of the match.

Norman gasped.

“Beaten by twins in one day…amazing”

Norman handed Dave the normal gym badge and he quickly slid it into his pocket.
Plusle ran over and jumped into Dave’s arms.

“You two are powerful trainer’s im sure you will succeed in the future” Norman said smiling.

The twins waved goodbye to Norman and stepped out of the gym.

“Now we both have badges I can’t wait till the next gym leader!” Daylena said excitedly

The twins and left the gym and went to the nearby pokemon center. The pokemon center was larger then the ones they were used to, it was about two stories and had couches scattered around the room. The twins went up to nurse joy and handed there pokemon to her, they decided to leave them there to rest. The twins then decided to walk around the small city and began to chit chat.

“I bet mom would be proud of us about know” Daylena said biting into a donut

Dave nodded.

“Yea I miss her sometimes”

“You mean you miss her cooking!” Daylena said laughing

The twins laughed and sat on a bench talking about how good they done so far and how poochyena might need a little work. A girl wearing a green hat speedily road down the sidewalk a pokemon flying by her side seeming to resemble a blue and white sea gull. Without notice the girl ran over each of the twins feet letting out a loud crunching sound, the twins shot up in pain grabbing there feet. The girl continued on not even looking back at the twins whom feet she just ran over. Daylena began to yell profanity at girl as she rode into the distance while Dave watched her ride away blinking.

Later that night the twins picked up there refreshed pokemon from the pokemon center and continued down the small the rod to the next gym. The twins wondered what adventures they would run into this time, Dave wondered would he get to meet the mystery girl that ran over his foot as Daylena wondered if she would get a chance to pummel her in the future.

Mancetric_Trainer
22nd August 2003, 11:55 PM
Um thanks hoppip I would of posted but my internet was acting up. Yet it will still slow down a LITTLE when I catch up to where I left off.


Here's Chapter 8

Episode 8: High sea High jinks

The sun stood high in the sky sending down beams of heat that cascaded all across the region. The twins had been walking for hours, following along the thin dirt road that seemed to attract the heat. In the distance the twins spotted something, a beach with festivities that sent sounds and colors around the area. Balloons filled the sky and beach umbrellas decorated the beach that provided the much-needed shade. The twins walked closer trying to escape the horrible heat that beat down on them; coming up to bikes that lined the entrance of very small beach when Daylena spotted a bike that looked familiar.

“That’s the bike Dave! The run that ran over are feet, ” she said pointing to the blue bike.

“I think your right Daylena, ” Dave said a smile appearing on his face.

“Let’s go find that rude little girl and teach her a lesson! ” Daylena said now fuming.

The twins continued onto the beach leaving footprints as they walked looking for the trainer. Suddenly a burst of water splashed into Daylena’s face sending her flying to the floor causing her to scorch her hands on the hot smooth sand. A familiar girl ran up to her and bent down and began to speak softly.

“Oh im sorry I didn’t see you when I told wingull to use water gun”

Daylena looked at the girl who wore the same green hat as the girl who ran over her foot. Daylena instantly shot up and flew into the girls face.

“You stupid little brat! How dare you try to apologize, you should of apologized when you ran over me and my brother’s foot!” she said screaming

The tomboy looked at her with her dark green eyes that were almost covered by her very short bangs that stuck out her hat.

“What do you mean? And did you just call me a brat? ”

“Yes I just called you a brat what are you gonna do! ”

Dave and plusle jumped between the two arguing girls and tried to break up there fighting.

“Sis calm down please it seems like she doesn’t even know what you’re talking about.”

Daylena clenched her knuckles while minun mimicked her.

“Oh! Please!” she shouted.

“Look I don’t know what’s going on but I must get back to the wingull festival, maybe we can clear this up later.”

A wingull with blue stripes on its wings landed on the girls shoulder and she began to walk away but first looked back at Dave.

“Oh yea and the names Joylene but everyone calls me Jo, ” she said cheerfully.

“Everyone calls me Jo…, ” Daylena said mimicking her in a baby voice.

Daylena looked at her red hands and sneered saying something under her breath when an old man walked up to them, a wingull on his side.

“I hope your enjoying the first annual wingull festival, I started it myself, ” the man said proudly.

The twins nodded.

“So far so good” Dave said lying to the old man.

“Im still waiting to see a wingull in action though I would battle myself but Im a tad to old, ” the old man wrinkled man said grumbling.

“I think you’ll see one alright after im through with that mo!” Daylena shouted.

“It’s Jo, ” Dave said softly.

The twins continued down the beach when they spotted Jo who was talking to other trainers who all seemed to have wingulls. They stepped closer and overheard her conversation.

“One day I will be a great flying pokemon master I love everything about flying pokemon. One day I hope to travel and catch all different kind of flying pokemon and maybe even….., ”

Daylena jumped into the crowd interrupting Jo.

“If you’re so great battle me then! Let’s see what you got! ” she said her voice booming across the beach bringing attention to herself.

Jo blinked at her.

“If that’s what…you want.”

Daylena and Jo walked toward the center of the beach, a crowd gathered around them word seeming to have spread about the battle. Dave sighed holding plusle as he watched Daylena stomp into her position.

“Okay brat one pokemon each!” Daylena yelled.

The sun was burning even more brightly now sending down burning rays on the two mad trainers. The crowd talked amongst themselves as Jo prepared her pokemon, the old man also looked on his wingull on his side.

“Wingull ready for this?, ” Jo said as wingull flew next to her.

“Wingull use water gun! ”

“Minun dodge it and use tackle attack!”

Wingull opened its beak and released a surge of water toward minun which was took quick for the electric pokemon it splashing into its face causing him to slide back on the hot soft sand.

“Minun get up and try a growl attack”

“Wingull supersonic!”

Minun growled at wingull making the pokemon shudder back from the growl. Wingull then opened its beak this time letting out a terrible shriek causing the crowd to cover there ears from the loud attack, yet it didn’t affect minun.

“Wingull go down for a wing attack”

“Minun you know what to do!”

Wingull flew toward minun and extended its wing as it flew lower and quicker getting ready to strike minun with its wing attack. Minun then started to squeeze its cheeks seeming that it was about to release a thunderwave yet this time the electric energy surged around the small pokemon sending sparks off its body. Minun then jumped at the nearing wingull as the electricity spun around its body tackling it causing the electricity to surge through the sea birds body making it let out a shriek of pain. Wingull then fell out of the sky onto the warm sand making the crowd hoot and holler, minun then landed on its feet, sparks still sparking from its cheeks it just learning spark attack.

“Wingull…return, ” Jo said sadly returning the fainted pokemon into a blue pokeball.

Daylena ran to minun picking it up and squeezed it giving it a tight hug. Daylena then began to dance around Jo, minun in her arms.

“I won! I won! You lost hahahaha!, ” Daylena shouted as she danced around her.

As the crowd dispersed, Dave walked toward the two girls.

“Sis don’t you think that’s kinda shallow.”

Daylena stopped and looked angrily at her brother.

“Your taking her side when she ran over are feet like that!”

“Im not taking any sides…, ” Dave responded growing quite.

Jo clicked the blue pokeball to her belt.

“No it’s ok she won fair and square, ” Jo said nicely looking at Dave.

Dave and Jo then smiled at each other, Daylena noticed and took note. The old man from before then walked up to the group.

“Wow! I loved it! That battle was fantastic it was great seeing wingull in battle.”

“But it didn’t win though!” Daylena made sure to add in.

“Yes, I saw that…that was great battling I must repay you guys for such a great battle please come into my beach house and join me for lunch. “

Daylena’s and minun’s stomached grumbled.

“I’ll take you up on that offer old man! Show me the food, ” Daylena said rubbing her stomach.

The trainers walked the short distance across the beach and entered the old man’s beach house. The house was barely decorated, a small rug was placed in the middle and a television sat in the corner, but most importantly a table with all sorts of great looking goodies sat in the center. The trainers flew into the chairs and began to eat the food as the old man set out some pokemon food for his wingull and plusle and minun.

“That was a great battle um I still don’t know you guys names. ”

Daylena bit into a piece of fruit.

“Rim Gralena and thaat’s my ro Davray, ” she said her words muffled by the food.

Dave laughed.

“I think what’s she trying to say is im Dave and she’s my twin sister Daylena”

Jo nodded.

“Oh twins…yea I kinda guessed from the matching outfits…so want brings you to the wingull festival?”

“Well were trainers and one day we hope to be pokemon masters and that’s why we were traveling around that’s when we kinda saw your bike.”

Jo wiped her mouth with a napkin.

“Yea about that im sorry I really don’t remember it happening. ”

Daylena rolled her eyes.

“Where are you guys headed next?” Jo said focusing on Dave.

“Well were heading for the second gym we already defeated the normal gym leader.”

The old man then stepped forward.

“The next gym is not to far away from here but you do have to cross the ocean to get there, ” the old man said petting his wingull.

Daylena spit up her food.

“How are we supposed to get across an ocean?” Daylena yelled.

The old man smiled.

“Well I do have a small boat and I would be happy to take all three of you there.”

Daylena stood up, a muffin in her hand.

“All THREE? I think me and my bro are going…only.”

Jo then stood up.

“Actually I was going to ask…maybe I can travel with you guys awhile I hear there’s great flying pokemon near the next gym…if that’s okay with you…Dave,”

Dave smiled and also stood up.

“I would love for you to come with us Jo, ” Dave said shyly

“Then it’s settled we leave first thing in the morning, you all can bunk here tonight there’s plenty of room!” the old man said nicely.

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The sky was orange and filled with clouds, the sunrise has finally come which caused the weather to cool down considerably. The twins were tucked into there sleeping bags plusle and minun already in a deep sleep. Daylena laid awake mad that Dave made a decision without her to let this new stranger come along with them. Dave laid awake butterflies in his stomach maybe because of his new friend Jo. Jo laid awake happy thinking she finally had friends to call her own. The trainers then all began to sleep getting ready for there adventure the next day.

Mancetric_Trainer
24th August 2003, 04:24 PM
Um, uh. Here's chapter 9.

Episode 9: Stop wailing wailmer!

The large waves rocked the boat as it moved across the boat sending it bobbing up and down. It was about noon and it was another hot day which heated the top layer of the ocean which released its relaxing smell of fresh sea water. The group was on there way to Dewford town a small island city that held there next gym battle. Dave and Jo enjoyed the view, the ocean stretching for miles all around except for a few small islands here and there. Daylena instead held her stomach, her face in a tint of green.

“I think…im seasick,” Daylena said grumbling.

Minun patted her on her back her as she swayed back and forth from the ocean currents. They’ve been traveling for a few hours now still not reaching the coast, but the old man reassured it wasn’t much farther as he steered the boat, his wingull on his side.

“This ocean is beautiful,” Jo said letting her hand skim the water.

Plusle and wingull chatted in there poke language seeming to have a deep conversation.

“Yea your right,” Dave said shyly

After a few minutes of more traveling Jo’s wingull let out a loud “Wingull!” and flew away from the boat to a small island which seemed to have a small blue mound on it. The old man steered the boat near the island to get a closer look of the blue figure now seeming to be a pokemon.

“Oh no it’s a beached wailmer,” Jo said as her wingull flew back to her side.

The old man then steered the boat to the small island that had a few rocks on it and a large palm tree in the middle. He beached his small boat and the trainers flooded out onto the island and ran to the round blue pokemon when the wailmer let out a soft cry of “wail…mer.”

“We have to help it,” Dave said examining the severely weakened beaded eye pokemon.

Daylena shook her head.

“No no no it’s to big and there’s no more room for that thing on the boat!” she said shouting.

“We can’t just leave it here Daylena,” Jo said softly.

Daylena sighed.

“Okay let’s all get on different sides then lift it,” Dave ordered the group.

They gathered around the crying pokemon and all crouched down around it, plusle and minun doing the same. Sticking there hands under it they lifted the fat round whale pokemon and started to carry it toward the boat.

“This thing is heavy!” Daylena said trying not to drop the hurt pokemon.

“Will get it to a pokemon center when we get to Dewford,” Dave said panting.

They dropped the pokemon into the boat it taking up a lot of the much needed space. They gathered into the boat and continued toward Dewford town, much slower then before from the weight of the heavy whale pokemon. The wailer shifted around letting out a loud wail that overpowered the sound of the crashing waves.

“Will you shut up you silly thing!” Daylena said as she yelled at the wailing pokemon.

Suddenly the waves began to rise higher and higher which rocked the small boat back and forth. Dave looked out and saw a large blue figure dive into the water it vanishing beneath the sea and he blinked wondering what it was. Again the figure surfaced once again this time closer then before it causing the waves to crash even louder around the small boat. The wailmer was still crying it almost seemed like it was calling for someone.

“Someone calm that wailmer down if a mother hears that we might be in trou,” The old man was interrupted when the large blue figured flew out of the water and continued to rise into the sky, water dripping off of it’s blue sleek skin. This pokemon was the biggest pokemon they have ever seen almost resembling a blimp, its underside pure white.

“Wailord…,” the old man said gulping.

“I think you guys should hold on.” He said looking back.

The wailord let out a loud screech and began to fall back toward the ocean. The wailord then crashed into the already crashing waves and caused a huge tidal wave that rushed toward the small boat. The wave hit the boat with a tremendous force sending the trainers in all different directions and the boat disappeared under the waves.

“Help! I can’t swim swim!” Jo screamed as she splashed on the surface, wingull trying to pull her up with his feet.

Dave and plusle surfaced and began to look for Jo. He spotted her and began to swim toward her, plusle hopping on his back. Dave grabbed Jo around her waist and started to float in the water.

“Where’s Daylena!” Dave said in a panic.

“Over there!” the old man said pointing to Daylena as he held the capsized boat.

Daylena was trying to wade the water with minun but wailmer was bumping into her crying. A blue figure then surfaced behind her and began to swim toward her.

“Wailord is behind you!”

Daylena looked behind her and her eyes widened in freight.

“Minun use spar..,”

“Daylena don’t you’ll shock everyone!” Dave said stopping Daylena.

Wailord was getting closer and it was charging at extreme speeds. Suddenly Jo’s wingull let out a supersonic at the wailord the old man’s wingull joined in also. Wailord stopped and began to splash around furiously making the waves increase.

“Good job wingull!” Jo said praising her pokemon.

Wailmer continued to cry when wailord stopped crashing around.Wailord then opened its mouth and it sucked in the water starting a whirlpool that whirled around the trainers it sucking them into the water.

“He’s starting a whirlpool!” The old man shouted to the trainers

They began to swim toward the boat but the whirlpool was to strong keeping them from swimming toward the boat.

“Get it in the air Jo, ” Dave said having an idea.

“Wingull supersonic!” Jo ordered.

Wingull flew toward the attacking pokemon and released a supersonic attack which caused the wailord to thrash in the water. Wailord then flew into the air in a confused state. Daylena and Dave then nodded to each other.

“Plusle spark”
“Minun spark”

The electric pokemon hopped out of the twins arms and flew toward the wailord who started to fall back to the ocean. Plusle and minun then struck the giant whale sending electricity all through its body which caused it to let out a loud screech. Wailmer swam to its paralyzed mom and brushed lovingly up against it.

“Let’s get to the boat im sure they will be ok,” Dave said swimming toward the flipped boat.

The trainers all swam to the boat and flipped it back onto its rightful side. They climbed into the boat and the old man started its motor and quickly continued toward the town. The sun was low in the sky and a cold breeze filled the area. The trainers shivered, there clothes still wet from the dip they took earlier. The pokemon were bundled in the corner sleeping keeping each other warm, minun letting out a light snore. Daylena was also asleep tired out from the long day.

“You really took control out there Dave,” Jo said smiling.

Dave blushed.

“I just wanted to everyone to be safe,” he said still blushing.

“I don’t think you sister likes me very much,” she said looking into his eyes.

Dave laughed.

“Oh don’t worry about her im sure she’ll warm up to you.”

“Yea I hope…I like traveling with you guys and im gonna love seeing you guys battle, ” she said pointing to Dewford town that was now a short distance away.

After more talking the trainers started to sleep tired from the excitement from the day. Though the trainers were through a lot much more was in store for them in the small town of Dewford.

Mancetric_Trainer
24th August 2003, 11:47 PM
Here's episode 10!

Episode 10: Crouching meditite Hidden makuhita.

The boat slightly hit the pier just as the sun was rising, shooting light across the small island. The trainers finally made it to Dewford town and were excited to be closer to getting there second badge. Daylena climbed out the boat clenching her stomach, her face still a tint of green. Plusle and minun climbed out of the boat and began to play on the sand when wingull decided to join them. Dave helped Jo off the boat and they observed the area. The town seemed to be very small; it had a few buildings here and there and few large ones. They also saw a gym and a small pokemon center also a small cave to the west. Dave blinked when he saw a small of group of pokemon who seemed to be fighting one another.

“Makuhita has a tireless spirit it will never give up hope. It eats a lot of food, gets plenty of sleep, and it trains very rigorously. By living that way, this pokemon packs its body with energy,” The small machine sputtered as Jo pointed it at one of the pokemon in the tousle.

“What’s that?” Dave asked quaintly

“Oh it’s a pokenavi with a pokedex attachment; my dad gave it to me,” Jo replied smiling

Jo pointed the navi at another one of the fighting pokemon.

“Meditite undertakes rigorous mental training deep in the mountains. However, whenever it meditates, this POKéMON always loses its concentration and focus. As a result, its training never ends,” the navi said in a robotic voice.

The fighting type pokemon continued to fight one another but the two meditite seemed to be out numbered by the four Makuhita who continued to pummel the small pokemon.

“Hey! That’s just out right cheap! We gotta help those meditite,” Daylena yelled madly.

The trainers ran closer to the fight and released there pokemon.

“Wingull get in there”

“Plusle you know what to do”

“Go! Poochyena!” Daylena said as she threw her pokeball.

Jo and Dave ordered there pokemon to attack the Makuhita but when Daylena tried to order her poochyena it turned around and charged at her unknowing minun.

“Poochyena return..minun you get in there,” she said sighing.

Wingull released a water gun soaking all the makuhita’s. Plusle and minun then tackled the wet pokemon while electrically surged around there bodies letting there spark take affect. The makuhita’s screamed from the pain and began to fume looking at the trainers. The makuhita’s know knew they were out numbered and began to retreat but first grabbing one of the hurt meditates. They hustled into the cave as the hurt meditite screamed for help.

The small round eared pokemon ran up to the trainers and urgently tried to speak to them.

“Medi medi! Meditate!” It said as it waved its small arms.

“I think he wants are help,” Jo said feeling sorry for the small monkey looking pokemon.

Daylena grumbled.

“But the gym is so close!” she said pointing to the gym that was a few feet away.

“Daylena what if that was minun they took,” Dave said trying to convince her.

Daylena sighed.

“okay!”

After convincing Daylena they walked toward the cave to rescue the small meditite’s friend. The cave opening was very large as it stuck out of the large rock formation, it appeared dark inside and a small dripping sound emitted from inside. As they stepped inside they glanced around. It was very dark and rock pillars filled most of the cave, the ground was a dark brown dirt and the cave walls were covered in green algae.

“This place is creepy,” Jo said as she looked around with wingull on her side.

“For a tomboy your sure acting like a wimp,” Daylena said as minun walked on her side.

Jo rolled her eyes and they continued deeper into the cave. As they went deeper into the cave it began to get darker and darker since they were getting farther from the entrance.

“Plusle let a few sparks off your cheeks” Dave said hoping it would shed a little light.

Plusle squeezed it cheeks and let off a few sparks that lightly flew off his cheeks it causing a soft glow that lit up the cave.
Daylena then commanded minun to do the same which made it even brighter. They continued down the cave when two makuhita’s ran toward them with there fist raised.

“I go this!” Jo said jumping in front of the group.

“Wingull supersonic then wing attack!”

Wingull opened its long beak and released a supersonic at the charging pokemon causing them stop in there tracks. The pokemon wobbled around and began crashing into each other when wingull swooped down with its wings spread out and struck the two pokemon with each of its wings, causing the pokemon to faint and roll back.

“Great job wingull!” Jo said as Daylena sarcastically applauded for her.

After a few minutes of more walking they came upon a large area within the cave. Large rock formations were scattered around the area and the ceiling was much lower here which gave a uncomfortable feeling. Meditite stopped and a dazed expression flushed over its face, it then closed its eyes.

“Meditite’s isn’t just a fighting type it’s also a psychic type..maybe it senses something” Jo said looking at the meditating pokemon.

Meditite’s eyes flew open and it began to shout pointing at the rock formations, when makuhita’s began to jump from behind them.

“Ambush!” Dave said backing up.

The makuhita’s continued to jump from behind the rock formations with mad looks on there faces. A chunkier Makuhita then came from behind one of the formations holding the stolen meditite who appeared to be hurt. The larger Makuhita then let out a grunt and the smaller ones began to charge at the trainers.

“Wingull supersonic!”

“Pokeball go! Skitty!”

“Poochyena go!”

Plusle and minun continued to illuminate the dark cave so they could battle the wild pokemon. Wingull flew to a group of the Makuhita and let out a bizarre supersonic that put them in a state of confusion. Skitty flew out of the pokeball and tackled one of the makuhita’s slamming him into one of the rock formations. Poochyena looked around was suddenly punched by one of the makuhita’s meaty fist, poochyena growled and bit into the fist; poochyena just learned bite attack.

“Wing attack wingull!”

“Skitty attract! And tackle!”

“Go go go go poochyena!”

Meditite began to glow white when a makuhita punched it causing meditite to slide back a little. The Makuhita went in for another punch and landed it but flew back when the white energy bounced off of meditite sending Makuhita into a rock formation breaking it, meditite just used its bide attack. Skitty smiled and swayed it tail back and forth and attracted two of the Makuhita and then tackled one it then it then hopped off of its big stomach and tackled the other one sending it on its back. Wingull swooped down and struck the two confused pokemon causing them to faint. A Makuhita jumped into the air and flew at wingull ready to punch it when wingull sprayed it with a jet of water sending it into a wall. The Makuhita screamed in pain while poochyena continued to bite into the yellow pokemon’s fist, it then released it and tackled the pokemon causing it to faint on the ground.

“I think that’s it.” Dave said looking around at all the fainted makuhita’s,

Plusle and minun growled at the large makuhita who was still standing grasping the meditite. The makuhita began to run toward them and the trainers ordered attacks. Wingull shoot a stream of water at the makuhita feet causing it to slip and fall back, the meditite flying out of its arm. Skitty and poochyena charged at the fallen pokemon and tackled it at the same time making the makuhita flip back up straight into the stonewall. Meditite jumped into the air and caught his small friend and landed next to Dave.
The makuhita stood up and thrusted its arm into skitty’s face and punched poochyena sending them sliding back. It then curled its fist and began to focus its energy; it then jumped up and tackled wingull causing the bird to hit the ceiling. The trainers gathered together as the pumped up makuhita walked toward them, there pokemon down for the count. Suddenly meditite set his friend down and jumped in front of them his eyes glowing white. He then held out his arm and yelled sending the makuhita flying back hitting two rock formations breaking them both, it just used confusion attack.

The trainers took this time to escape and ran out of the cave and fell onto warm beach sand, panting and sweating from the run. Plusle and minun stopped the sparks and fell back to back tired from the use of energy. The two meditite’s looked at one another and nodded, one seeming to thank the other. One of the meditite then parted ways and left behind one of the buildings it seeming to be a wild pokemon. The other meditite then looked at Dave and pointed to one of his pokeballs.

“You want me to catch you?” Dave said looking at the small pokemon.

The pokemon nodded.

“So you just want me to throw my pokeball at you?”

The pokemon shook his head, he wanted to battle to be caught.

“Ok then plusle start with growl!”

Plusle let out a growl that didn’t seem to affect the pokemon much. Meditite then began to meditate; it folded his arms and closed its eyes.

“Plusle quick attack!”

Plusle charged at the meditating pokemon and just as it was about to hit meditite it opened its glowing white eyes causing plusle to fly back and crash into the ocean water.

“Plusle get up and use thunderwave”

Meditite began to fold his arms and meditate. Plusle hopped out of the water and let a thunderwave attack that flew across the beach sand. The thunderwave struck the pokemon causing him to flip back, paralyzing the pokemon.

“Quick attack and Spark”

Plusle shook the water off itself and bulleted toward the stunned pokemon striking it causing it to slide in the sand. As it slid Plusle quickly front flipped onto it and released a spark from its cheeks. The pokemon continued to slide and Plusle hopped off of it panting, preparing to attack but the pokemon didn’t move. Dave got a fast ball that was given to him as a gift at starlit town and tossed it at the pokemon; the ball shook and then came to a stop. Dave picked the fast ball up and smiled and then placed it in his bag.

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The sun began to set over the small town and the trainers decided to go heal there pokemon at the nearby pokemon center. They also had to prepare for there second gym battle that would test there new skills and pokemon.

Mancetric_Trainer
25th August 2003, 02:57 PM
okay chapter 11! This is where I stopped the first time so im caught up.

Episode 11: Fighting aMAZEment

The early morning air filled the lungs of the trainers as the walked the small trail through the forest. The trees stood tall all along the trail providing shade every so often. As they continued to walk Jo suddenly stopped with a confused look on her face.

“Okay…why are we in a forest when we were just at the beach?” Jo asked confused.

Daylena stopped and turned around.

“Look you idiot just shut your mouth nobody asked you to come with us anyway!” Daylena sneered.

Jo first looked at Daylena confused by her actions and then began to fume.

“Im tired of you I have put up with enough of you rudeness! “ She said picking up a thick stick.

“And what are you gonna do with that?” Daylena said laughing, setting down minun on the ground.

Jo rushed at Daylena and swung the stick upward into Daylena’s chin sending her into a nearby tree, she slammed into it hitting her head. Daylena rubbed her red chin while Jo was rushing at her swinging the stick like a crazed woman. Daylena grabbed some dirt and tossed it into Jo’s eyes causing her to stop and rub them; she then got a small rock and smashed it across Jo’s face and then swung it and hit the opposite side. Daylena tossed down the rock and kicked Jo in the stomach making her roll down a small hill and smack into a large rock.

“This is getting good! “Dave said as he walked down the hill with Daylena.

Jo got up dazed and dodged the incoming fist of Daylena making it smack into the rock.
Jo then grabbed Daylena’s hair and Daylena grabbed hers and they began to swing around slamming into the nearby large rocks. Jo kneed her in the stomach and tossed her into the stone wall and began to scratch her face rapidly. Daylena slipped free and punched Jo in the face and then in the stomach making Jo clench her stomach, Daylena bent down and did a swooping kick making Jo fall on her back onto the small rocks. Daylena coughed and slowly picked up a sharp rock and held it above Jo.
Jo let out a scream as Daylena brought down the stone toward her stomach.

“Nooooooo,” Jo screamed as she sat up in her sleeping bag.

Daylena and Dave looked at one another and then looked at Jo as they rolled up there sleeping bags.

“Um….are you okay?” Daylena said looking at Jo strangely.

Jo blinked as she wiped the sweat from her forehead realizing that it was a dream.

“I just had a nightmare….”

Daylena laughed.

“What did you dream that you lost another battle with me! “

Jo forced a laugh.

“Something like that….., “


After packing up they headed toward the gym that was a short distance away from where they were sleeping. They walked to the center of the small beach town and came upon the small gym and opened the doors. The gym resembled a maze, tall walls were everywhere that led in different directions and dead-ends. As they walked the maze they came upon a large square room with wooden floors. A man stood in the center of the room; he had spiked blue hair and wore an orange shirt with blue pants. He smiled at the trainers as they walked in.

“Hello and welcome to the Dewford gym were I specialize in fighting pokemon, people call me Brawly,” he said as he made fighting poses.

“Im Dave and this is my twin sis Daylena and are friend Jo, me and my sis are hoping to get are second badges. “

Brawly smiled.

“Twins huh? How about we make things interesting and have a two on two battle, me using two pokemon and you each using one?”

“That sounds great!” Daylena yelled.

“Okay then let’s begin”

Brawly grabbed two pokeballs from his pocket and threw them in the center of the gym releasing two pokemon. One of the pokemon was a familiar one, a short chubby yellow makuhita, while the other was a grey muscular pokemon that let out a “machop! “.

“Plusle you’ll sit this one out, “Dave said petting plusle on the head.

Dave threw his pokeball and it released his meditite which went into a meditating position. Daylena decided to use her minun who bounced in next to meditite.

“Let’s begin! Machop focus energy, makuhita bulk up!”

“Meditite meditate!”

“Minun go in for a spark!”

Machop began to fume and focus his energy as makuhita flexed his muscle and began to grow in size. Meditite started to meditate making his attack increase when minun charged at makuhita with sparks jumping from his cheeks, the electricity swirled around minun’s body as minun tackled him making makuhita fly back.

“Machop use low kick! Now! “

As minun landed from the spark attack machop swung around his foot striking minun in the head making him flip on his back.

“Meditite confusion attack!”

Meditite stopped meditating and he threw out his hand and used confusion sending out a white energy making machop fly back next to makuhita. Minun got up and bounced next to meditite ready to fight.

“Okay both of you attack meditite! Arm thrust and karate chop!”

The pokemon got up and raced toward meditite. Makuhita grabbed minun and punched him back sending minun tumbling back. Makuhita then began to thrust his arms into meditite as machop let out a flurry of karate chops on him.

“Meditite use bide!”

Meditite began to glow white as the pokemon continued to let of a barrage of blows on him.

“Keep hitting guys! He won’t be able to release that bide and will faint soon. “

“Minun use thunderwave!”

Minun shook his head and slowly got up and looked at machop and makuhita from across the gym. His cheeks began to spark and he got on all fours then let out a thunderwave that flew across the gym. The thunderwave absorbed into makuhita and machop causing them to be instantly paralyzed. Meditite then began to glow red and released the energy from the bide sending the red energy into the pokemon. The pokemon back flipped several times and slid to the feet of brawly who returned there fainted pokemon to there pokeballs.

Brawly let out a loud laugh.

“That was a great battle! I haven’t had a more interesting battle like that in a while, “

Daylena picked up minun.

“That was a great battle! And minun you did a great job.”

Dave started to pat meditite on the head but he moved away.

“Meditite…you should be happy we just won a battle,”

Meditite gave Dave a serious look and began to meditate.

“Hmmm meditites usually have serious personalities…well here are you guys badges,” Brawly said as he handed the twins metal badges that looked like small punching gloves.

Jo and plusle walked over to the twins and congratulated them on there new badges. After saying goodbye to Brawly they left the gym and started to walk to the pokemon center. As they were walking a small boy walked from behind a building and approached the trainers.

“Dave? Jo? Daylena? “ the small boy said looking at the trainers.

“How do you know are names?” Jo said not knowing who the small boy was.

“Some strange people told me…and he told me to give you guys these,”

The small boy handed each of them a brown envelope with there names on them. Dave opened the letter and began to read it aloud.

“Dear trainers, you have been invited to join strong trainers such as yourself on an adventure to riches. If wish to miss this opportunity for experience and riches do not follow the map below. Please arrive early tomorrow and don’t be late, “

The trainers gathered around the letter and looked at the map. The map showed they were a very short distance away from an abandoned ship that was off the coast of Dewford city.

“This is strange…first how does this ‘person’ know are name? And an abandoned ship? It doesn’t sound right, “Jo said to the twins.

“Where’s your sense of adventure wimp! And it says experience!”

“She’s kinda right Jo…it does sound like it would be fun, “Dave said to Jo.

“Okay I guess, “Jo said looking at the ground.


The trainers decided to get some rest so they could wake up early the next day. Jo was still unsure about the whole idea and what might happen when they get there. She knew there would be more then just experience and riches…something more…dangerous.

Mancetric_Trainer
26th August 2003, 02:39 AM
Hey thanks powarun you gave a nice review and thanks for reading. Your right pointing out pokemon development , I did just focus mostly on minun and plusle. Hopefully you guys can get to know the other pokemon in later chapters because I do have ideas for personalites and will focus on the other pokemon.

Well hope you keep reading and others please read and review.

Mancetric_Trainer
27th August 2003, 04:19 AM
Yea mr.pikachu your right but I improved from the begining from alot of the things you said so thanks for that but I don't think it will ever be perfect, that would take a little more time.

And yea Im pretty sure you don't know who it is *wink*. Well the next chapter will be up soon.

Mancetric_Trainer
27th August 2003, 09:11 PM
I got to writing chapter 12! My longest chapter yet plz read,enjoy and reply....and review.

Episode 12: A! Ban! Doned! ship!

Lighting ripped through the sky, jumping to each grey cloud that covered the sky. The rain started to pour harder as the cold wind whipped around it. The trainers are in this predicament because of what shortly happened after the twins got there second badge. Each trainer got a formal letter inviting them to an abandoned off the coast of Dewford city. After convincing Brawly to borrow his ship they set sail on his tough boat toward the wrecked ship.

“Okay! There it is! The ship! Good luck,” Brawly yelled so the trainers could here him over the crashing waves.

Holding there pokemon the trainers rushed on the deck of the half-submerged ship. Seeing a door the trainers rushed inside trying to get out the thrashing rain. The ship looked over hundred years old, most of the paint on the wooden walls was chipped away. There were a few old painting that were tattered and a few benches that were lined up against the wall. Most of the ship was drenched in water from holes that covered the roof.

“That storm came out of no where! “ Daylena said ringing out her wet hair.

Plusle and minun wiggled sending the water all over wingull, him seeming to enjoy it.

“Your right the storm did come out of no where but at least where out of the rain,” Dave said trying to fix his hair.

Suddenly two trainers came out of one of the cabins soaking wet. One of the trainers was a red headed boy that looked to be a teenager. He wore blue pants and a large blue jacket that went to his knees. The other trainer was more familiar, it was Terren the boy Daylena lost her first battle to.

“Hello we were just exploring the area, I guess you guys must be the other trainers,” Terren said tipping his hat.

Daylena rushed into his face.

“It’s you, that little brat!”

Terren backed up a little.

“Ah! It’s you that maniac!”

Daylena rolled up her fist when the other boy spoke up.

“Hello, people call me Dak; Im guessing you guys got the same letters?”

“Yea we did, I still think it’s a little strange,” Jo said petting her wingull.

A tall figure stepped in from the entrance of the boat and removed its hood. The figure was a tall girl with purple hair and purple eyes to match. She wore a long purple trench coat what almost went to her ankles.

“Hello I didn’t suspect so many people….,” she said stepping by the other trainers.

A sudden burst of thunder and lighting shook the boat slightly as the rain continued to fall.

“Im June and you guys are?”

After all the trainers introduced themselves they began to wonder why they were all brought to this strange ship.

“So anyone have any idea why were here? Im personally here for the money….,” June said unbuttoning a few buttons of her coat.

Another tall figured appeared in the entrance of the boat. A bolt of lighting struck across the sky showing his old face for a few seconds. The figure stepped in and removed his coat. He was very tall and wore a strange top hat; his clothes seemed to be very old fashion much like his shiny black shoes.

“Im sure you all are wondering why I brought you here? ” the man said a slyness in his voice.

“Damn skippy!” Daylena blurted out.

“Tell me about the money please….,” June said stepping forward.

“And the experience!” Terren added in.

The man laughed.

“Slow down my young trainers for you do not even know your mission.”

“What do you mean mission?” said Dave.

The man twirled an expensive looking cane in his hand.

“All I want is a little something…a pokemon… and you trainers are going to get it for me.”

“What kind of pokemon, a rare pokemon are something?” said Dak.

“I guess you could say that….It’s not that much to ask for wouldn’t you guys say.”

“So all you want is for us to get you a pokemon? What pokemon is this exactly?” said Daylena putting one hand on her hip.

“You’ll know when you see it….its at the deepest part of the ship perhaps. Still I want to add excitement so you guys will wear these!” the man said while holding up what seemed to be long rubber cuffs.

The trainers looked oddly at the man.

“What are those for?” Asked Dave.

“Well I call them teamwork bands, you will each be split up into teams and whatever team finds the pokemon first will win the fabulous prize,” the man said revealing three gold nuggets within his hand.

June’s eye sparkled while Terren began to drool.

“How can we trust you?” said Dak.

“Don’t worry im very trustworthy, now I already set up the teams randomly. Daylena and Terren will be together….Dak…..Dave…..and June and Jo.”

Daylena began to fume.

“No! Im can’t be paired up with him!”

Terren laughed.

“Calm down toots! And enjoy the Terren ride while you can!”

The man snapped each of the cuffs on one foot of each trainer making them joined together.

“First team back with the pokemon wins……go!”

All the trainers stared at the man.

“Go! I said!”

All the trainers rushed into different cabins trying to find this unknown pokemon.

“Hey slow down will ya,” Terren yelled as he was being yanked along by Daylena.

Daylena ignored him and continued to rush around the ship while holding minun. Soon the trainers came into a murky room with one large window that wasn’t much help since it was still pouring outside. Terren then sat on the ground and crossed his legs.

“Im not going anywhere in tell you promise to slow down!” Terren yelled.

“Maybe if you weren’t so slow! And could keep up! We are in a race!” She yelled back.

Terren puffed and grabbed one of his pokeballs and released his Mudkip. He then grabbed another pokeball and released a new pokemon. The pokemon looked like a small bird; it had blue and red feathers and let out a “Taillow!”

“Oooo awwww! Not! Check this pokemon out,” she grabbed her pokeball and tossed it, poochyena coming out of the pokeball.

Poochyena instantly turned around and started growling at minun. Minun jumped behind Daylena’s leg shivering in fear as Terren began to laugh.

“That’s not funny you little fu…,” Daylena was suddenly interrupted when a sound of breaking wood filled the room.

“What was that,” yelled terren.

The floor under them began to buckle and the sound of splintering wound continued.

“Don’t…..move,” Daylena said when poochyena pounced at minun.

Poochyena landed near Daylena’s feet when the floor fell from under them, sending them into a deep dark hole.


Meanwhile Dak and Dave were making there way down a second flight of stairs.

“Do you know where were going?” Dak said looking around the old ship.

“Yes of course I know my way an abandoned ship I never been to,” Dave said sarcastically.

The trainers continued down the stairs and came to a long hallway that stretched across the ship. Though something seemed to be blocking the path way.

“Go Mawile!” said Dak throwing his pokeball which revealed a small gray and yellow pokemon that had giant jaws protruding from its head.

“Bite through that thing blocking the hall,” he said pointing at the large blue thing.

Mawile stepped close to the thing and opened its large horn like jaws and snapped into it. A screech came from the thing which they now knew was a large napping tentacrule. The tentacrule slowly turned around and let out a beam of bubbles into mawile sending her flying back into Dak.

“Uh-Oh,” Dak said pushing mawile off himself.

“Plusle use quick attack!” Dave ordered pointing at the angry pokemon.

Plusle charged at the tentacrule when a small shining square came out of the tentacruel's center jewel directly in front of him. Plusle slammed into the barrier attack and fell to its back. Tentacruel then shoot of his tentacles and wrapped the pokemon and there trainers and began to squeeze them, making them unable to escape.



Meanwhile…again.

Wingull was leading the way as the trainers were walking down the slim hallway. Entering into a room the trainers slumped into some old wet chairs.

“We’ve been in this room three times know!” said June slumped in the chair.

“I think we may be lost….,” Jo said quietly.

“Ya think!.......oh sorry I have a temper.”

“No it’s ok,” Jo said faking a smile.

Digging into her purple purse June grabbed a black pokeball and tossed it. A purple pokemon emerged from the pokeball. The pokemon was slouched over with its arms out and had large diamond like eyes. His claws stuck out from his fingertips as it let out a “Sable….eye”

“Sableye use your foresight.”

Sableye began to scan the room and pointed to a beaten up bookcase against the wall. The trainers got up and looked at the bookcase when it suddenly span brining them inside. Next thing you know the trainers were flying down what looked to be a giant slide, screaming.




Daylena came to the surface of the water gasping for air with minun in her arms. She looked around and was in a well lightened room that was half submerged in water,she didn’t seem to see terren.

“Terren where are you?!”

A few feet away terren was splashing around in the water like a magikarp while taillow and mudkip starred at him.

“Help im drowning!”

“Just stand up idiot…”

Terren stood up and realized that the water was actually very shallow and went up to about his waist.

“I knew that…I was just kidding with ya…I saw you were pretty worried about me though,” Terren said smiling.

Daylena walked over to him with her fist clenched when she saw blue glowing eyes across the room.




“Mawile sweet scent!” Dak screamed as he was being squeezed even tighter.

A pink dust flew from atop mawile horns over tentacrule which seemed to calm him down a little.

“Plusle spark!”

As plusle was being squeezed tighter he let a few sparks fly from his cheeks and then let the electric current shoot through his body into tentacrule. Tentacrule screamed in pain as the electricity rushed through him, he then threw the trainers and there pokemon though the thin wall straight into Daylena and Terren. The ceiling then suddenly opened sending Jo and June atop the already down trainers.

“Mil Mil,” the blue eyed pokemon let out in the corner.

The pokemon was a long pokemon with glowing blue and tan scales. Its head was pointed which had two elegant long whiskers growing over it’s eyes. The pokemon and trainers were stunned by the pokemon’s beauty.

“Milotic is said to be the most beautiful of all the pokemon. It has the power to becalm such emotions as anger and hostility to quell bitter feuding.” Jo’s pokenavi let out.

“It’s beautiful,” said Dak staring at the pokemon.

“Wait…that must be the pokemon!” June shouted finally standing to her feet.

“Your right, pokemon attack!” Terren said pointing at the milotic.

Mudkip and taillow flew at the pokemon and was simply tossed into the wall with a simple flick of milotic’s tail.

“Sableye nightshade then scratch,” Ordered June.

Sableye pointed his hands toward milotic sending a purple wave of energy into her making milotic shudder. Sableye then charged at in for a scratch attack when rings of water struck Sableye sending it onto the floor in a hurt and confused state.

“Dang a water pulse,” said June snapping her fingers.

“Poochyena, minun get that pokemon,” yelled Daylena.

Poochyena yawned and began to nap while minun rushed at the milotic.

“Plusle help her attack to!” Dave said trying to help.

Plusle and minun ran side by side charging at milotic when a white twister formed in front of milotic sucking in plusle and minun and then sending them into Jo’s wingull.

“This isn’t going to work…we all have to work together,” Dave said looking back at the trainers.

“And will all split the prize money at the end…right?” said June.

The trainers gathered in a group and Dave sent out his meditite and skitty while Daylena returned her poochyena. They all ordered there pokemon to attack the milotic who was staring at the trainers with its deep blue eyes. The pokemon let out a flurry of different attacks onto the milotic who let out shrieks of pain. Milotic slanted over and looked to be weakened when the whole ship shifted sending the trainers to there feet. As the pokemon continued to hurt milotic every shriek it let out the ship seemed to shift.

“Wait….milotic has something to do with this ship..,” Dave said standing up.

“Well I did hear something about this ship,” said terren.

“Well spill it!” Daylena said yelling at him.

“Well I heard the only way this ship didn’t sink fully is because a long mysterious pokemon protects it from doing so since the ship became the home of so many sea pokemon…but I thought it was just a legend.”

The trainers looked from Terren to there still attacking pokemon and started to call off there attacks. Milotic looked severely weakened and bruised and let out a few peeps.

“So I guess I can keep my nuggets then,” The tall man said as he stood in the hole of the broken wall.

“I love money…but this is just wrong!” June yelled at the man.

“Um don’t care!” The man said as he threw an ultra ball at the pokemon.
The ultraball flew back into the mans hand and he began to run toward the stairs. Suddenly the ship began to shift back and forth and the water began to rise in the ship.

“It’s sinking…what have we done…,” Jo said looking sad.

“We have to stop him!” Dave said angrier then he was ever before.

The trainers set chase for the man who was now at the entrance of the ship. Hopping from the sinking ship he jumped into a large boat with the ultraball in his hand. The boat began to shift away from the sinking ship when mawile’s jaws grabbed it and stopped it from moving.

“Nice vicegrip mawile,” Dak said smiling.

“Okay Mudkip watergun the side of the ship as hard as you can!” Terren yelled.

Mudkip hopped over and shot a stream of water at the bottom of the boat bursting a hole into it, which started to quickly fill with water.

“Meditite confusion!” yelled Dave.

Meditite tossed out its arm making the man fly on his back sending the ultraball into the air.

“Wingull get it!”

Wingull swooped down and caught the ultraball and flew back next to Daylena.

The man hopped out of his sinking boat and swam to the sinking ship.

“Okay okay don’t hurt me! I’ll do anything!”

Daylena slapped the man across the face.

“First get us out of these cuffs!”

The man unsnapped the cuffs of the trainers one by one. Daylena then snapped the cuffs on each of the man’s hands. Wingull dropped the ultraball letting it fall into Jo’s hands.

“Please don’t hurt us we didn’t no and were sorry,” Jo said before throwing the ultraball.

Milotic let out a cry of pain when it was released from the pokeball and then looked at the trainers. It then began to glow completely blue lighting up the dim sky, the light soon stopped and milotic looked completely recovered. Milotic sneered at the man and then smiled to the other trainers it then dived into the entrance of the ship. The ship instantly began to rise out the water back to its previous position.


The sun shown through the clouds for the first time as officer jenny raced off from the ship on her jet ski, the man on the back his cheek still red from the slap. The trainers gathered to say goodbye to one another after the long day. Dak go onto his jet ski and began to race off waving goodbye to his new friends.

“Well it’s been fun guys but I must make my leave!” Terren said pretending he was a hero.

Daylena patted him on the back as his mudkip looked up and watched.

“You did good…,” Daylena said smiling.

“You want me soooo bad don’t you!” Terren said perking up.

Daylena punched him into his canoe when he raced off in it at the speed of light.

“I guess everything isn’t about riches….well do you guys need a ride in my three story yacht?” June said pointing to her giant purple yacht.

The trainers piled into the yacht laughing and giggling, it then set sail for the nearest beach full of fun in the sun. The trainers looked out the window at the abandoned ship and saw it for the last time……but will never forget milotic.

Mancetric_Trainer
28th August 2003, 12:16 AM
Mr.Pikachu: Thanks for your reply im glad you see a slight improvement. Hope you keep reading and replying and I'll work on the homonyms.

powarun:Wound....how did I miss that, I think that's the worst spelling mistake to. And your right about milotic she couldn't just let it sink and he was greedy! And no im no a aussie lol, just have 6 sisters and brothers so this is like the best time I can get on the internet. I actually live in calfornia.

Well the next chapter will be up soon!

Mancetric_Trainer
29th August 2003, 04:01 AM
Hey unregistered, thanks for replying! Well about the sig...well I mostly put that because Im really a twin myself (Fraternal like the characters!) and people always call me the good twin and people always call her the bad twin. Though I kinda base the characters on us(Well my sis isn't as bad as Daylena,just not as bad) so you could be right....who knows....and I'll work on spelling, im really ashamed about the wound, sometimes my brain just sees what it wants to see.

Mancetric_Trainer
30th August 2003, 03:00 AM
Hey I need trainers for a couple of my future chapters so sign up if you want :)

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Pokemon:

Personality:

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Mancetric_Trainer
31st August 2003, 02:22 PM
Powarun: Okay I got your character and thanks for the tip.

Xtina:Thanks for replying. And yea it was kinda animeish.

mr.pikachu:Ok thanks for replying your character seems interesting.

I'll try to get you guys in up coming chapters, maybe two in one chapter.Well laterz

Mancetric_Trainer
31st August 2003, 05:12 PM
Okay here's chapter 13! I just had a brainstorm so I wrote the chapter.

Chapter 13: Tropical Sea Bash?

The purple yacht skimmed across the waves with ease as the sun reflected off the waves. The trainers been traveling for a couple hours now and were enjoying there boat ride from there new friend June. The trainers decided to take a dip in the deck pool and slipped into there swim trunks. Just as they were about to hop in the pool a small white boat pulled up to the yacht with a tall girl standing on the deck.

“Would any of you be up for a battle?” The girl said as she brushed her long hair aside showing her blue eyes.

Daylena grabbed a pokeball from her pack and approached the ship when Jo stepped in front of her.

“I didn’t have a good battle in a while how about me?” Jo said calmly looking at the trainer.

“Okay hop in! Oh yea and im Ann” the girl said cheerfully.

The trainers folded a ladder out to the small boat and climbed on the deck of the ship. Ann seemed even taller close up as she wore a red shirt with blue shorts and a pair of interesting black tennis shoes.

“How old are you?” Dave asked the tall girl.

“Im sixteen, my dad let me borrow his boat,” she said smiling and nodding.

Ann grabbed a pokeball from a small bag and tossed it in the center of the deck.

“Okay I hope you’re ready for this,” she said now serious.

The pokeball let on a small golden looking pokemon. The pokemon sat on the ground with its arms crossed and let out a sleepy “abra…”

“Wingull ready….start off with a water gun!”

“Abra teleport!”

Wingull flew from Jo’s side and let a stream of water fly from it’s beak at the small psychic pokemon. Abra teleported as the water crashed into the deck of the ship and repapered behind wingull.

“Abra hidden power!”

As wingull looked around confused balls of black energy hit it sending on the floor of the deck. Wingull then shook it off and looked at the abra.

“Wingull try a wing attack this time!”

“Abra teleport”

Wingull flapped its wings and spread them out as it flew at the abra. Just as wingull was about to hit abra it teleported once again sending wingull into a pole of the ship and on to the floor.

“Wingull supersonic quick!”

Wingull flew back into the air and let out a loud supersonic at abra confusing the small pokemon.

“Now water gun and wing attack!”

Wingull let out a burst of water at the confused pokemon sending him back into the deck wall. It then flew and smacked abra with its wing slamming it harder into the wall, causing the pokemon to faint.

“Return abra….” She said in a plain voice.

“Let’s see if you can handle this then!” she said throwing another pokeball.

This pokeball let out a round bug like pokemon. The pokemon was mostly red with black dots scattered on its back, it had six round hands on each of its six feet.

“Ledyba tackle!”

“Wingull wing attack”

Lebyba’s wings began to flap rapidly as it flew at wingull. Wingull hit the flying pokemon back with its wing making it fly back a few feet.
“Ledyba supersonic then comet punch”

“Wingull watergun”

Wingull shot a watergun attack at the bug pokemon but ledbya nimbly dodged the attack. It then let out a supersonic at wingull sending wingull in a state of confusion. Ledbya then flew up to wingull and let out a flurry of punches all over wingull sending wingull crashing hard on the deck below.

“He looks out to me!” Ann said smiling when wingull began to glow white.

“Wingull?” Jo said as she stepped closer to her growing pokemon.

As the white light faded in place of wingull was a large white bird with a massive yellow beak and large white and blue wings.

“Pelipper is a flying transporter that carries small pokemon and eggs inside its massive bill. This pokemon builds its nest on steep cliffs facing the sea.” Jo’s pokenavi chirped off as she pointed it at her new evolved pokemon.

“Um, Ledbya supersonic!”

Ledyba fluttered down to pelipper and let out a supersonic at the large pelican looking bird. Five yellow stars then came out of Pelipper’s beak swirling in front of him deflecting the supersonic.

“Hmm protect attack….finish this with wing attack!”

“Ledyba barrier attack!”

The large bird lifted off the ground and flew at ledyba when ledyba swirled his arms around creating a barrier in front of him. Pelipper brought back its large wings and shattered the barrier sending ledyba sliding down a wall.

“Darn I lost…..but that was a good battle!.....but it sucked though….but it was fun!....well not really,” Ann said returning her pokemon.

Pelipper flew to Jo and wrapped its large wings around her.

“Wow your big now!” she said laughing.

A beeping started to come from a small room on the deck.

“There near!” Ann said running into the room.

The trainers followed her into the room that was filled with all kinds of ship gear. Ann was busy looking at a small radar like screen.

“Looks like at least a dozen….”

“A dozen of what” Dave asked.

“A dozen of tropius, its there migrating season and Im hoping to track there migration patterns.

Ann grabbed a pair of binoculars and headed out of the room with them. She placed the binoculars over her eyes and looked into the sky.

“There coming!”

Jo squinted her eyes and saw a couple of the large flying pokemon. These pokemon had very long necks the matched there huge bodies, they had four wings that looked identical leaves protruding from there backs. She then pointed her pokenavi at the pokemon.

“The bunches of fruit around tropius’s neck are very popular with children. This pokemon loves fruit, and eats it continuously. Apparently, its love for fruit resulted in its own outgrowth of fruit.”

“I gotta have one!” Jo said as the tropius approached even closer.

“Pelipper use watergun!”

Pelipper flew up high in front of the approaching tropius and let out a giant gush of water at the bunch of tropius hitting a few. A few of the tropius were angered and let out a barrage of razor leaves at pelipper.

“Pelipper use protect!”
The razor leafs bounced off pelipper’s protect and flew to the ocean below. The tropius then looked at Ann’s ship and let out a barrage of razor leafs at it. Most of the large razor leafs missed but a few chopped into the wood of the boat.

“You’re angering the tropius! It seems like they don’t like being stopped during there migration,” Yelled Ann.

As a few tropius continued to attack pelipper a couple flew down to the boat sending razor leafs at it as they flew down.

“Go Skitty!” Dave said as he threw his pokeball.

“Minun spark!”

Minun hopped on one of the tropius and let a off a spark shocking the tropius making it back off the ship.

“Skitty quick attack!”

Skitty charged at one of the tropius that landed on the ship colliding with the large pokemon. The tropius didn’t seemed to be to affected and began to flap its large leaf like wings causing a large gust causing skitty to flip back

“Skitty attract!”

Skitty shook his head and began to sway its tail back and forth causing the tropius to be attracted to her.

“Tail whip then quick attack.”

Skitty flicked its tail at tropius knocking it off balance at let off a quick attack causing the tropius to fall on its side.

As pelipper was battling in the sky, a yellow tropius flew up to it. This tropius was different then the other brown tropius as it let of a few sparkles.

“Aim a watergun at that yellow tropius pelipper!”

Pelipper shot a stream of swirling water at the tropius from its large mouth when tropius began to create a gust sending the water gun in different directions.

“Pelipper wing attack.”

Pelipper flew at the shiny tropius as it tossed of razor leafs. Pelipper glided up and down pass the razor leafs and let its wing slam into the large dinosaur like pokemon making it flinch back.

“Another wing attack!”

Pelipper brought back both of its wings and slammed the tropius in between them sending the tropius into the seawater below. Jo then pulled a heavy ball from her pack and threw it at the tropius that was floating in sea below. Pelipper then flew down, swallowed the pokeball into its mouth, and dropped the pokeball and a nice amount of seawater onto Jo. Jo smiled drenching wet as she just caught a new pokemon. Seeing that one of the tropius were caught the others flew into the air and continued there migration.

Later that day as the sun was setting and Ann was writing in her notebook.

“I found a lot about tropius today! Like never bother one during migration…,” she said smiling.

“So never do it on my ship again!” she then said yelling.

Dave picked up plusle and sat next to Ann. Jo then raised an eyebrow at him.

“So why are you so interested in tropius migration anyway?”

“Well my father said I have to do something productive if I want to use the boat and I heard that tropius migrate across the ocean about this time so why not.”

June came to the deck of her boat rubbing her eyes after having a good long nap.

“Hey guys! We should get going.”

The trainers gathered there belongings and thanked Ann for the stay on her boat and boarded back onto the yacht.
To celebrate Jo’s new catch they decided to have a deck party. The trainers released all there pokemon, Jo’s tropius let off a few sparkles when it came out and Daylena’s poochyena began to growl at minun.

“I don’t get you poochyena! Why can’t you listen?”

June laughed.

“Poochyena are very wild pokemon, I hear they only obey trainers that posses superior skill.”

“Well poochyena you should have seen me cream Jo in a battle” she said as she returned poochyena.

Meditite went in a corner and began to meditate in silence while plusle and minun climbed on pelipper’s back. Pelipper then lifted into the air and flew plusle and minun around. Skitty hopped in Dave’s lap purring and curling up to lie on his lap. Tropius looked to Jo and picked her up by hit shirt and lightly put her on his back and lifted into the air, flapping its large wings. Jo laughed in excitement as tropius flew around the ship; Dave was looking up at her laughing to.

“You like her don’t you?” Daylena said looking to her twin.

“Huh what? No!”

“Yea…..sure.”

The trainers continued to have a good time late into the night. Jo was happy she had two new pokemon by her side and was even closer to becoming a flying champion. The yacht crashed against the waves as it neared slateport city where the trainers couldn’t even guess what adventures they might have there.

Mancetric_Trainer
1st September 2003, 01:48 AM
Okay thanks for your tips and I do notice some of those things so I will fix them in the future.

PS: Yea I just think it sounds better this way.

Mancetric_Trainer
1st September 2003, 02:26 PM
Thanks for replying rlowerr. Yea I did kinda just toss the twins into the story, maybe I will have a episode where I some how show there story/background. And the thing with the tropius, skitty was a little higher level then it and basically just knocked it on its side, he did't he actually make it faint are anything.

And a few people sent and posted there characters. So it might take a while for your charcter to appear but I will try to fit them all in soon.

Well thanks for replying!

Mancetric_Trainer
7th September 2003, 06:16 PM
Sorry I haven't posted in a while ( busy with school) but I will post chapters more often since I will be getting into the main story soon. Also more of your characters will be making appearenaces soon.

Episode 14: Oceanic Swindle

As the trainers departed the yacht onto the soft beach sand the morning air filled there lungs. They finally arrived to Slateport, a small oceanic city that sat against the coast. The beach led up to slateport market, a small outside market place full of rare goods. Other buildings filled the city including the Oceanic museum, a usual tourist attraction.

“Goodbye Im sure will see each other again!” June said waving as her yacht left the dock.

“Yea maybe at the pokemon league,” Daylena said waving goodbye.

After saying goodbye to June the trainers started chatting about where to go.

“The market looks nice,” Jo said as her pelliper hovered on her side.

“I wanna check out the cool displays in the oceanic museum,” Daylena said while holding minun.

“Yea the museum looks good to me,” Dave said while plusle sat on his shoulder.

“Well there ya go the museum!” Daylena said sneering.

“How about you guys go to the museum and I get back with you guys later.”

Daylena nodded and began to walk to the large green museum.

“Um Im sorry about Daylena,” Dave said looking at the ground.

“You don’t always have to apologize for her, well see you later.”

Jo walked toward the market while pelliper followed, Dave then tried to catch up with Daylena.

“What do you got against her Daylena?” Dave said catching up to her.

Daylena stopped and looked to him.

“I never said I had anything against her! Sorry im not nice to a stranger YOU! Just decided to invite with us,” she then stormed away into the museum.

Jo looked around the large market and walked under a small tent that stood in the corner of the market. Looking around in the tent Jo spotted a few dolls, she then picked up a furry poochyena doll.

“I bet Daylena would like this,” Jo said talking to herself.

“Yes those make great gift!” A short man said wearing a large Chinese hat.

Jo looked at the man startled.

“We have greatttt deals! Buy twenty get one free!” The man said surrounding Jo.

“Uhhhh,” Jo said backing up from the man.


The museum was filled with different kind’s glass casings that stored different models of ships and ocean facts. Kids ran around as guides explained the displays of the museum from the small to the big. The twins were looking at a display of swirling blue water when a yellow hair guide approached them.

“Hello and welcome to the Oceanic museum, Im Shandra and I would be happy to show you guys around.”

The twins greeted the cheerful guide and began there tour

“This is an experiment to create a whirlpool artificially using wind,” she said pointing to one of the displays.

They continued along the tour and made there way upstairs.

“Now this is a valuable replica of the S.S tidal, a ship currently in construction,” she said pointing to an expenses looking model.

Suddenly the group was tossed to the ground by a gust of wind.

“Nice gust attack dustox,” a soft voice said.

The voice came from a black dressed person in the corner. The person was dressed in black from head to toe including there hat and shoes.

“Grab that replica nuzleaf,” the thief said commanding his short plant pokemon.

Nuzleaf was a short stubby pokemon with a leaf growing out of its head and a sharp pointed nose. Nuzleaf grabbed the replica and jumped on the side of the thief.

“Lombre use nature power.”

The lily pad pokemon hopped in front of the thief and held up its long green arms when golden stars flew at the trainers. The stars struck them causing them to cover themselves in pain. The thief then started to head for the door while holding the replica.

“Quick attack plusle!” Dave said yelling while on the floor.

Plusle charged at the thief in a blaze of white speed and struck there back causing them to fall. As the thief fell there hat flew off revealing long ruby red hair and deep blue eyes.

“Psybeam dustox,” the woman said smacking off plusle.

The purple moth began to flap its wings and let off a beam of multiple colors into plusle making him slam into one of the displays.

“Skitty go!”

“Minun spark”

Minun ran at the moth while electricity sparked from his cheeks, minun then tackled the moth causing it to flutter to the ground.

“Come nuzleaf! Dustox, lombre hold them off,” the woman said as her and nuzleaf ran down the stairs with the replica.

Lombre began to swipe at skitty with its short claws when dustox let out a psybeam into skitty making skitty slam into a glass replica, causing the glass to shatter.

“Return skitty, go meditite”

“Meditite use meditate.”

“Minun growl”

Meditite began to meditate while minun growled at the two pokemon causing them to back up.

“Meditite confusion attack!”

Meditite opened its eyes and blasted the pokemon with a confusion sending them both back into the wall.

“Thankyou! But you please get back the replica,” the guide said lying on the ground covering her head.

The twins ran down the stairs in pursuit of the woman and saw a trail of destruction leading to the door. Once outside they spotted the woman running toward the beach.

“Minun thunderwave!”

Minun’s cheeks began to spark and let out a thunderwave that struck the legs of the woman and her lombre.

“Loudred go…” the stunned woman slowly said.

Her pokeball shot out a red beam to reveal a large purple pokemon. The loudred growled as it held open its large mouth.

“Loudred supersonic,” she said now gaining movement.

Loudred’s ears started to boom letting out a supersonic causing the twins pokemon to be confused. Minun began to waddle around and slammed into meditite then let off a few sparks as meditite used confusion causing both of the pokemon to fall to the floor.

“Loudred attack the trainers with stomp!” the woman said smiling now fully unparalyzed.

Loudred began to charge at the trainers throwing his arms around when four larges leafs sliced into the pokemon causing him to skid along the ground. The twins looked and saw Jo on her tropius flying in the air.

“Loudred use uproar”

“Tropius, growth”

Tropius’s wings began to expand in size when a booming sound came from loudred tossing Jo off and tropius to the ground.

“Loudred use stomp”

“Tropius hurry razor leaf”

Loudred charged at the dinosaur pokemon when it quickly released four razor leafs from its back into the charging pokemon making it fly back into the women.


Later that day the trainers rested inside of the pokemon center after the thief was apprehended by officer jenny.

“Thanks for your help out there Jo,” Dave said snacking on some food.

“Your welcome I was just done shopping and I saw what was going on.”

“Yea whatever,” Daylena said petting minun.

Jo pulled a poochyena doll from her bag.

“Uh…um….I brought you this Daylena I thought you might like…”

Daylena grabbed and looked at the doll
“Why would I want a doll of a pokemon that doesn’t even obey me?!”

She then stood up and tossed the doll into the trash and walked out of the pokemon center.


Jo sat there and stared into space.

“Im sorry about her….”

“I said don’t apologize for her!”

Jo got up and stormed upstairs.

“Girls…” Dave said to plusle.


Though they foiled a bank robbery the trainers couldn’t keep calm for a few minutes and they needed for the next gym battle was only a moment away.

Mancetric_Trainer
14th September 2003, 03:07 PM
Oooook I im finally posting a chapter which I haven't done in a while.Sorry If I didn't get to some of you guys characters you sent in but they will by included in future chapters(SOON!) I just have to fit them in the story correctly. Well hope you enjoy.

Episode 15: When Multiplies Clash

The trainers just left the pokemon center bright and earlier and on there way to the near-by gym. Dave walked between the girls who were still not talking to one another as they walked the path. Though Jo wanted to speak to her, she knew Daylena would be more stubborn but her thoughts were soon interrupted by yelling.

“What was that?” Jo said.

“It came from over there,” Dave said pointing to a hill leading into tall grass.

The trainers ran over and saw three tall men snatching a pack from a small girl making her fall to the ground. The girl got up and ran away crying as the men looked through the bag. Something was different about these men though all of there faces were identical and they all seemed to be the same height. One of the men was wearing a blue furry hat with white spots and a large blue coat with pictures of icebergs on it; he wore light blue baggy pants and a large pair of ice boots and finished his outfit with light blue glasses that had icebergs on them. Another one of the men was wearing a brown geologist like hat and a long-sleeve shirt with pictures of rocks falling on it; he had brown pants and brown hiking boots and had a pair of brown glasses with rocks on them. The last man had shiny metallic cowboy looking hat and a silver shirt and dark gray pants, he also had dark silver shoes and a pair of shiny silver glasses.

“He you dirty little thieves what are you doing!” Daylena said yelling at the triplets.

The triplets looked up from the bag and looked at Daylena evilly.

“Don’t tell me you’re talking to us?” the rock-wearing triplet said.

Daylena backed up a little.

“Yea Im talking to you…”

The metallic wearing triplet dropped the bag and stepped forward.

“How are you folks im Tal and that’s Polar and Geo, now you guys can kindly move along….are else,” Tal said smiling.

Plusle and minun’s cheeks began to spark.

“Where not going anywhere in tell you return that bag to that little girl,” Dave said not backing down.

Tal looked at his brothers and they smiled, they grabbed there pokeballs from there waist and threw them up in the air in unison. As they pokeballs fell to the ground Polar’s pokeball revealed a small round seal looking pokemon. The blue ice pokemon rolled around a little and let out a “Spheal!” Tal’s pokeball revealed a very small pokemon with blue eyes. A metal coated its whole body including its small body and feet and it let out in a small voice “aron”. The pokeball of Geo let out a rock-bodied geodude that hovered next to him.

“Ready you guys? Plusle tackle that spheal!”

“Minun help him!”

“Pelipper use water gun on geodude then on aron!”

Plusle started to rush at the small round ice pokemon when minun joined in running next to him dashing at the pokemon.

“Spheal powder snow”

Spheal opened its mouth releasing a flurry swirling soft snow over plusle and minun the cold making them stop in there tracts. Pelipper flew from Jo’s side and let out a stream of water at aron making the small pokemon roll back into the tall grass; it then let out another stream of water at geodude who barely dodged the attack.

“Spheal water gun!”

Spheal rolled forward a bit and shoot a skinny stream of water at plusle, which splashed into his face making it fall back. It then let out another burst sending minun atop plusle.

“Fake tears!” the twins said in unison.

The twins knew there pokemon new attack would make the opposing pokemon lower there defenses for a moment. Plusle and minun began to roll around crying and whining when spheal looked at them oddly and began to feel sorry for them.

“Spark!” the twins said in unison once again.

Plusle and minun quickly shot up, hopped on top of the round ice/water type, and let off a powerful spark the shot electricity into the pokemon’s body.

“Geodude rock throw”

“Aron headbutt”

Rocks began to form around geodude, which then flew into the air falling around pelipper, some hitting causing him to fall to the ground. Aron then skipped out of the bushes and crashed its head into the fallen bird causing pelipper to skid back considerably through the gravel.

“Another rock throw”

“And another headbutt!”

“Pelipper protect and then water gun!”

Rock fell from above falling toward pelipper when five stars hovered above it causing the rock to fall to the side. Aron began to charge at the bird when a stream of water crashed into it, this time carrying the pokemon up and into a tree. It then turned to geodude and shot a stream of water at the rock/ground type causing it to instantly faint on the ground.

“Let’s retreat!” yelled Tal returning his aron.

The triplets began to return then pokemon when a slab of stone fell out of geo’s bag. Jo picked up the slab that had small dots engraved in the stone and then read it “Dessert…,” the fleeing triplets then turned around and looked at Jo surprised.

“She can read Braille…,” Tal said stepping back toward the group.

Jo stepped back a little.

“What are you talking about…..get back…,” she said in a nervous voice.

The triplets began to go toward Jo when Dave stepped in front of her.

“You guys seemed to forget you guys just got your butt kicked,” he said as plusle cheeks sparked.

Tal stopped and looked to each of his brothers and they began to runaway.

“You’ll be useful to us to unlock them, will be back for you,” Tal said as he joined his brothers as they ran into the distance.

“What was the hell that about?” Daylena said petting minun on a good job.

Jo laughed nervously.

“Eh…just crazy thief’s I guess.”

“Yea I guess…..ones with horrible fashion sense…,” Daylena said heading for the pokemon center.


At the pokemon center, Jo sat on the couch by herself sipping cocoa while pelipper was resting up. Daylena and Dave talked in the corner while plusle and minun took a nap and skitty playing with its tail.
“You see what Jo is causing already? Now some guys will probably attack us at any moment thanks to her,” Daylena said crossing her arms.

“She said didn’t know what they were talking about…,” he said leaning back against the wall looking at Jo.

“You know she does, I don’t know what Braille is are whatever but I know she does.”

I man in full archeologist gear looked up at the twins while sitting on a nearby bench. He then got up and approached the twins.

“Sorry to interrupt but did any of you mention Braille?”

“Why do you know anything about it old man?” Daylena said looked at the short man.

The archeologist tipped up his large round glasses.

“Actually I have, I’ve been studying the ancient language for some time now?”

Dave raised his eyebrow.

“Ancient language? Why would those guys want Jo just because she knows a language?”

The archeologist pepped up.

“You know someone who can READ! The language!?”

Daylena pointed to Jo.

“Yea the wimp is right there.”

The short man looked to Jo.

“Astounding! Nobody was able to read this language for hundred of years, please may I speak with her about it.”

“Um I dunno it seems like she’s uncomfortable with it for some reason,” Dave said giving a worried looked.

“Please! Maybe we can find out why these guys are after us!” Daylena said grabbing the man’s arm and pulling him toward Jo.

“Hey Jo, this man wants to talk to you about braywee are whatever.”

“I don’t wanna talk about it…,” she said closing her eyes.

Daylena grabbed her arm.

“You need to talk are your gonna get us hurt!”

Jo shot up still in Daylena’s grasp.

“I said I don’t wanna talk about it!”

Pelipper flew off the couch and shot a stream of water into Daylena’s face. Daylena growled while soaking wet and threw one of her pokeballs.

“Poochyena use bite on this bird! It’s might tasty!”

Poochyena licked its fangs and bit into pelipper’s large wing. Nurse joy rushed from her desk while other trainers looked to the group.

“There’s no battling in the pokemon center!” nurse joy screamed.

Ignoring nurse joy poochyena continued to bite into pelipper’s wing.

“Pelipper supersonic then wing attack”

Pelipper let out an atoning supersonic causing poochyena to fumble off pelipper. Pelipper then brought back both of its large wings and struck them into poochyena sending him into a coffee table breaking it. Poochyena steadily got up and shook the wood pieces off its self when it began to glow white. The white glow grew in size and formed into what resembled poochyena but more larger and fierce. Its jaws were long and sharp while its claws extended from its large paws. It had a mane around its face that trailed along its back to its bushy tail.

“Poo…mightyena come here,” Daylena said to her new pokemon.

Mightyena ignored Jo more then ever and pounced onto pelipper sinking its fangs into its large wing. It the twisted its head throwing pelipper into the wall causing the crowd to ooo and awww. Mightyena then began to jump around shredding the couch’s and chairs of the pokemon center and then looked to the napping plusle and minun. Mightyena lept off the couch and growled as it slowly approached the sleeping pokemon. Skitty suddenly jumped in front of the pokemon and looked to the growling mightyena, scared at first skitty lightly backed up but then stepped forward a little and began to say its name softly. Skitty voice soon formed into a song of soft tones causing mightyena eyes to droop, it then fell onto the floor into a deep sleep.

“Mightyena return…,” she said as she returned her pokemon.

The trainers looked around at the completely destroyed pokemon center that was wrecked by the fight.
“I see this is not a good time…,” The archeologist saying handing Dave his card.

The other trainers and nurse joy looked at Daylena angrily blaming the whole thing on her. Still wet and drenched she fled outside with tears in her eyes. Jo returned her hurt pelipper and walked up to Dave.

“Im sorry this is fall my fault,” she said while tears began to form in her eyes.

Dave gulped and hugged Jo.

“It all was just a mistake….it was no one’s fault.”

Dave continued to confront Jo while Daylena still didn’t return. Though worried greatly about Daylena, he wondered what the triplets and Braille was about. The mystery still surrounding Jo, and maybe that he doesn’t know Jo as well as he thinks he does. Still, only there next adventures will unfold the story.

Mancetric_Trainer
14th September 2003, 07:47 PM
Thanks for the reply means alot!

Mancetric_Trainer
21st September 2003, 07:29 PM
Ack! I didn't edit this chapter before I posted as mr.pikachu noticed below. I will edit it and post it later...im to sleepy now.

Edit again...I lost the whole chapter somehow...it was deleted so I will have to write it again and post it...

Mancetric_Trainer
25th September 2003, 12:01 AM
Here is Episode 16 again...hope it's better. Everyone reply :)!

Episode 16: Shocking Revelations

The clouds hovered in the sky as Dave and Jo made there way to the the next gym leader. Dave still didn’t hear from Daylena since the fight her and Jo had yesterday and was still worried. As they approached the gym the door suddenly swung open to reveal Daylena stepping out of the gym with minun in her arms.

“Daylena where have you been?!” Dave said yelling into her face.

Daylena slowly looked to Jo, rolling her eyes she looked from her and then looked to Dave.

“The gym leader is tough but beatable,…” she said tucking her new gym badge into her pocket.

“Where were yo,” he was soon cut off when Daylena abruptly walked away and headed for the pokemon center.

Dave’s mouth fell open and watched as she walked away toward the pokemon center.

“Im gonna go try to talk to her,” Jo said watching her walk away.

Dave blinked.

“Are you sure that’s a good idea?”

Jo smirked.

“Im sure we won’t tear up any more pokemon center’s…. I think, well good luck on the gym battle.”

“Thanks.”

Dave entered the gym and instantly noticed the slick floor the reflected the sun shining through the large windows. As he stepped further into the gym he noticed several large metallic beams scattered across the gym each one pointed at the tip. Dave was suddenly surprised by the sound of sparking electricity that filled the entire gym. One of the metallic rods was surging with electricity sending sparks in all directions when Dave noticed a man in the center of the gym.

“Um Hello.”

The man turned back and smiled, his brown beard curly and thick. He shuffled toward the center of the gym putting one hand on his large stomach as he walked.

“Hello im Wattson and welcome to the electric gym.”

Dave nodded and smiled.

“Let’s make it simple, three pokemon each. Sound good to you?”

Dave nodded grabbing one of his pokeball's.

“Go voltorb” Wattson said grabbing one of his pokeball’s and throwing it in the center of the gym.

His pokeball released a white light and revealed a small round voltorb that looked similar to his pokeball except for two beady eyes and a smile.

Dave thought of what pokemon he should use and threw his pokeball releasing his skitty. Skitty happily jumped into the center of the gym looking at his opponent when a sound of sparking electricity filled the gym.

“Voltorb use tackle.”

“Skitty use attract.”

Skitty swayed his tail back and forth slowly dazing into voltorb's little beady eyes. Voltorb blinked at the pokemon and began to roll toward skitty; he then slammed into skitty causing it to flinch.

“Hop back skitty and use sing.”

Skitty shook his head and hopped back landing on his small feet. Skitty then opened its small mouth letting off soft tones toward voltorb. Voltorb blinked at skitty and smiled almost seeming to be enjoying skitty’s singing.

“Voltorb sonic boom!”

Voltorb heard its command and instantly began to spin around gaining speed. A booming force then flew from voltorb sending skitty off of its feet and onto it’s back.

“Finish it with a spark.”

“Skitty double slap.”

Voltorb began surge with electric energy and roll at skitty. Skitty tried to get up but failed and was soon struck by voltorb, sending skitty into the wall causing it to bounce off and hit the floor with a thud.

“Skitty return.”

Dave looked at his two last pokeball and grabbed one, tossing it toward the center of the gym. The pokeball bounced and released his pokemon, the white energy formed into his meditite who was seating in his usual meditating position.

“Meditite use confusion!”

Meditite looked back Dave and slowly climbed out of his meditating position. He then tossed out his hand sending a blast of psychic confusion at voltorb, which tossed him back several inches.

“Voltorb thunderwave!”

“Meditite dodge.”

Voltorb released a quick thunderwave from its core that went flying at the meditite. Meditite nimbly dodged the attack flipping over the sparking thunderwave.

“Sonic boom, quick!”

Voltorb began to spin around sending another sonic boom at meditite. This time meditite wasn’t quick enough and was slammed into a metallic rod. Sparking filled the gym and the metallic rod began to spark, the electricity that surged through the rod instantly shocked meditite. As the rod stopped meditite slumped onto the floor and onto his stomach.

“Roll out!”

Voltorb jumped up twice and started to roll at meditite who was still slumped on the floor. Meditite slowly got up and slipped into his meditating position, suddenly white spheres began to swirl around meditite gaining more speed as they swirled. The white spheres then all shot at voltorb who was still rolling at meditite and was unexpected lifted into the air making voltorb slam into the opposite wall, meditite just learned hidden power.

“Roll out!” Wattson said surprised by meditite’s attack.

“Bide meditite!”

The dazed voltorb shot up and began to roll at meditite. Meditite began glow completely red as voltorb struck him making meditite skid back. Voltorb came back rolling quicker then before and struck meditite once again making him skid back further. As voltorb went in for another hit the red energy flew from meditite into voltorb. The red energy hit voltorb with such force voltorb went spinning and slammed into the metallic rod and off into the wall.

Retuning voltorb Wattson grabbed his final pokeball and released his last pokemon. This pokemon looked similar to a dog but was covered in a slick green fur, except for the yellow streaks across its chest and tail. As he growled his sharp teeth were exposed which filled his whole mouth.

“Electrike thunderwave.”

Electrike was quick; it wildly ran past meditite and released a thunderwave that directly struck meditite. Meditite slowly froze as the paralysis from the attack took over.

“Electrike quick attack”

Electrike growled and pounced into a quick attack. In a white streak electrike struck him, meditite slid across the slick floor and to a stop at Dave’s feet.

Dave frowned as her returned his meditite.

“Great job meditite but now to finish this,” he said as he held the pokeball near his mouth.

“Plusle, ready?”

Plusle looked up Dave and smiled and ran toward the center of the gym.

Wattson smiled.

“Plusle thunderwave!”

“Electrike thunderwave”

Plusle cheeks began spark as he clenched his fist and released a thunderwave that flew toward electrike. Electrike growled also releasing a thunderwave that flew toward plusle. The sparking thunderwaves collided in the middle of the gym causing a flash of light to fill the gym. Dave and Wattson covered their eyes from the flash as plusle and electrike growled at one another.

“Plusle spark!”

“Howl and dodge electrike.”

Plusle ran at electrike letting off sparks as he ran. Electrike tilted his head in the air and howled into the air boosting up himself. Plusle went in for the tackle when electrike quickly dodged to the left letting plusle slam onto the ground.

“Quick attack electrike!” Wattson yelled in his burly voice.

Before plusle could even recover he was struck by electrike and sent rolling into one of the metallic rods. Sparking slowly filled the gym once again only meaning the plusle was in trouble.

“Another quick electrike!”

“Hop off the rod and use quick attack!”

Plusle quickly got up and back-flipped onto the rod, pushing off he flipped once again over the charging electrike. Electrike slammed into the rod and was suddenly jolted with a burst of electricity as the rod began surge.

“Plusle spark!”

As the rod stopped electrike dizzily tried to get up plusle then hopped onto electrike sending more electricity into his body.

“Quick attack plusle!”

Plusle hopped back and in a white streak struck electrike slamming him into the rod. Plusle then hopped back and began to pant from the use of energy. Electrike once again tried to get up as his legs wobbled in pain. Just as he rose the rod sparked off sending electrike across the floor and to the feet of Wattson.

“Wow your tough!” Wattson said returning his defeated electrike.

Dave smiled as plusle ran up to him, kneeling down he picked up plusle and walked toward wattson.

“Thanks im glad me and my sister could get the badge.”

Wattson grinned and rubbed his beard thoughtfully.

“Daylena wouldn’t happen to be your sister?”

Dave nodded.

“Wow yea she’s a tough cookie, in more ways then one. Well here’s your badge, you and your sister earned it,” he said handing Dave a metallic badge resembling a thunderbolt.

Dave lightly laughed with glee and stuck the badge into his pocket. After chatting with Wattson he made his way outside and bumped into a short man. The man was the archeologist that confronted them at the pokemon center.

“What are you doing here?” Dave said looking at the short man.

“I tracked you here, I have to learn more about Jo.”

“How about you tell me a little bit about Braille first?”

The archeologist tilted his glasses up and nodded.

“Braille is a very ancient language but it’s not only that, it’s also rumored its magical.”

Dave raised his eyebrow.

“You don’t really believe that do you?”

“Well there maybe no science to it but it said long ago Braille was used to lock the evil powers of rock, metal and ice away. Im sure you can see why im interested in it.”

Dave remembered the triplets each dressed in outfits of rock, metal and ice.

“How would Jo know the language if well…no one knows it?”

“That’s what im exactly trying to find out.”

A sudden burst of yelling erupted from the pokemon center that could only be that of Daylena and Jo.

“Um I have to go, will keep in touch,” Dave said running to the pokemon center.

The archeologist shook his head and watched as Dave ran to the entrance of the pokemon center. As Dave was about to walk in a large chansey stepped out holding Jo and Daylena by each of their collars. Nurse joy then stepped out of the center with her hands on her hip.

“There’s no fighting in my pokemon center!”

Chansey then dropped them on the floor and they both returned to the pokemon center.

“This idiot got me kicked out the pokemon center,” Daylena said standing up and dusting herself off.

“Me? I was just trying to talk to you and you had to be rude like usual.”

“Look bro tell your girlfriend here if she’s gonna be traveling with us she better not talk to me.”

Jo blinked and crossed her arms angrily.

“Ooook, guess we can go know.”

As the trainers walked through the city Dave pondered why and how he got stuck between Daylena and Jo. But more importantly he wondered if more would be revealed about Jo and if she could really be a danger to the group. Still time will only tell what will happen next.

Mancetric_Trainer
27th September 2003, 01:53 PM
Thanks for the replies, im posting this chapter pretty quick because I just brainstormed it. Tell me what you guys think.

Episode 17: Aerial race on there case!

Minun dashed out the way, the flames flickering past him, landing atop a rock minun began to spark with electricity. The trainers were on the large mountain of Mt. Chimney and Daylena was having a heated battle with a small numel. Numel was a yellow camel looking pokemon whose back formed into a smooth large hump, a small hole on top of it. The yellow pokemon slowly lifted its hind legs then quickly brought them down to ground, which began to shake. Minun was tossed from the rock, slamming face first minun continued to roll around as Dave and Jo tried to keep their balance.

“Minun double team!”

Minun climbed to his feet, double then tripling minun began to make copies surrounding Numel. Numel slowly looked at the copies, looking from left to right numel began to growl at the copies making minun lightly flinch from the sound.

“Minun try an encore!”

As numel stopped growling minun began to applaud for the dull witted numel, the numel confusingly looked at the applauding minun then smiled and decided to continue his applauded growl attack. Daylena decided she would take this chance to finish the numel off.

“Quick attack! And make it a good one!”

Instantly one of the copies hopped forward and began to dash at the growling numel in a streak of light, minun then struck the numel in the chest making it fly flat on its back. Hopping back minun dashed in again this time striking numel’s side sending him into a spin. Daylena grabbed a pokeball from her pack, tossing it at the dizzy pokemon sucking him into the confines of the pokeball, clenching her fist Daylena looked on as the pokeball shook and jumped in glee as the pokeball stopped shaking.

“Great job Daylena you caught a new pokemon!” Dave said patting her on the back as Jo blinked at her.

As Daylena clicked the pokeball on her belt, Jo noticed a large banner clinging on two trees.

“Annual Mt.Chimney Aerial Race!” Jo said, her eyes sparkling.

“What the hell is that?” Daylena said reading the large decorated banner.

“It’s an annual Mt. Chimney aerial race, duh,” an unknown voice said.

The trainers looked back and were surprised to see Terren, though Daylena wasn’t too happy to see him.
“Are you freaking stalking me? First the yacht and now this?” Daylena said stepping closer to him.

“Actually im here for the race.”

Terren then grabbed a pokeball from his belt, releasing the pokemon with in side. The white light formed into a large sleek blue bird. Its sharp, beak and claws were noticeable on this swift looking bird and its confidant looked that of Terren’s.

“I’m pretty sure I could win with my newly evolved swellow,” he said rubbing his sleek feathers.

The sound of trumpets bellowed from around the mountain pass, the trainers exigently stepped around it to see a flood of people standing around with their pokemon. One of the trainers was a small girl wearing a red poka-dot dress who looked to be at the most fourteen, she was busy polishing her skamory who seemed to be enjoying it. Another trainer, a tall skinny boy was atop his gyrados straddling his neck, a different older man with a gray beard was flying around on his swellow. As they stepped closer a gush of wind blew over them as a boy wearing all black on a rare aerodactly flew over them.

“If your entering the race please fill out the entry form,” An announcer in a tall stand said speaking in a microphone.

The announcer continued to give direction as the trainers made there way through the crowd. People were filling into the stands that were placed in front of an incredibly large TV screen. Jo made her way to the entry table and signed the necessary forms signing her and tropius into the race.

“Um Dave, how about you use my Pelipper so we have double the chance to win?” Jo said nervously.

Dave smiled as Daylena sneered quietly.

“That sounds great,” said Dave walking to the entry table with Jo not even noticing Daylena.

Daylena growled holding minun and made her way to benches and sat down madly.

“Oh cheer up poor sport, im sure your own twin brother didn’t mean to completely ignore you and go with a stranger he barely knows.” Terren said smiling behind Daylena.

Daylena flicked her fist back, it slamming into Terren’s face.

“Don’t bug me bug.”

Dave came up and approached Daylena with plusle in his arms.
“Hey sis do you mind holding plusle while I race?”

Daylena blinked at him.

“Whatever,” Daylena said rolling her eyes.

“Thanks!” Dave said setting plusle down to minun.

As Dave, Jo and Terren talked, a beautiful woman in a light blue gown walked up to them.

“I’m Claina and I just wanted to wish you guys luck.” She said with a wide grin on her face and a mysterious pokemon on her side.

“What is that?” Dave said looking at the large bird like pokemon.

“Oh this is my Altaria, cute isn’t she?”

The Altaria was covered in a veil of clouds that circled its whole body. It’s white small beak stood out on it’s blue body, two elegant feathers on top of his head flew in the air as his tail feathers poked out of the could.

“Attention everyone the annual aerial race is about to begin. Remember the rules everyone, attacks are allowed while flying but not on one another. The contestants are Terren and his Swellow, Lily and her Skamory, Greg and his Gyrados, Bill and his Swellow, Dave and his Pelipper, Jo and her Tropius, Naimah and her Magneton, Claina and her Altaria, and finally Brian and his Aerodactyl. When I say go the race begins…….GO!”

The audience went crazy in excitement as the trainers lifted off on there pokemon.

“And there off, Terren is starting off first while Brian and his Aerodactyl are close behind, Magneton and Naimah are off to a slow start in last,” The announcer yelled as the excited audience watched on the giant screen.

Jo held on Tropius’s neck as he flapped his large leaf wings, the trees below looking like a green blur as they flew past them. Dave was close behind as he gripped on pelipper’s feathers.

“The trainers are now coming up to the rocky cliffs where the trainers should be careful of the loose rocks.”

The trainers we coming up to two large rock faces with a thin split between them, first Aerodactly flew side-ways and into the thin split, quickly after Terren flew in next with his quick swellow and next Altaria. Dave flew up next to Jo as they approached the cliff, looking up Dave saw a few rocks shifting atop the cliff, a few pebbles flew into the split and then larger rocks.

“Dave speed up quick! Come on Tropius!,” Jo said, her hair flying back from Tropius’s increasing speed.

“Let’s go Pelipper!”

Speeding up Dave and Jo flew into the then split; looking back Dave saw the large boulders bouncing off the wall and plummeting below. As the boulders continued to fall he saw gyrados and his trainer barely pass by the falling rocks, though unlucky, a large rock struck into Magneton. The Magneton dizzily began to slowly plunge to the ground, landing inside a tree below along with its trainer.

“Whoa! Look at that already a trainer out of the match! They should be careful of those rockslides! “ the announcer yelled over the screaming audience.

As Dave turned his attention back to the race a large protruding rock was coming at him fast, pulling back on Pelipper feathers he lifted into the air, pelipper’s feet lightly skidding across the rock.

“That was a close call for Dave and his Pelipper!” yelled the announcer, Daylena stood up with a worried look on her face.

As they approached the opening of the other side of the cliff Dave saw something in the corner of his eye. Looking back he saw a thick black cable fly from one side of the split to the other, it coming to fast, bill and his swellow struck the cord, just as it seemed like the cord was going to break it snapped back sending bill and his swellow into the cliff wall and into the roaring river below.

“Oh my! I don’t know what that was but it looks like another trainer is out of the race.”

Dave and Jo flew out of the opening into the clear sky, now below was a cracked black surface with a red glow gleaming between the cracks. Jo flew close near Dave as the gyrados was close behind, Jo could also see the others a good distance away. Terren smiled as he flew on his swellow, Aerodactyl flying almost directly next to him and Altaria not to far ahead. Terren raised his eyebrow when he began to heat up and could hear the sound of boiling. Suddenly a burst of boiling magma flew into the air directly in front of him sending a wave of heat all around him.

“The trainers are now near the volcano and the nearby geysers of magma are something to look for,” The announcer said dancing around with the microphone.

Dave looked to Jo as she looked to him when unexpectedly another burst of magma flew up in front of her.

“Pelipper use water gun!” Dave said talking to Jo’s Pelipper.

Pelipper stopped in flight and released a burst of water at the flowing magma, steam was released into the air as the water shot through the magma creating a hole that Jo barely slipped through. Jo smiled and looked to Dave as lily and her skamory flew up next to them. As they continued to fly a thick ash filled the air, almost creating no visibility.

“The trainers are now nearing the volcano so the ash in the air is going to get thick!”

The trainers began to slow down in the ash as they were almost blinded by the ash. Skamory began to flap its stubby wings slowly as the ash clinged onto to them, lily screamed as skamory slammed into the wall, blinded by the ash.

“Lily is out!”

“Tropius use gust attack now!”

As Jo clinged onto Tropius’s neck tropius began to flap it’s wings while letting out a screech. The gust blew threw the ash clearing a clear way for Jo and Dave to travel through. Soon Jo and Dave came out of the thick ash and were surprised to see they were now in first.

“Looky there! Daylena and Dave made their way through the ash by using a wonderful gust attack which now put them in first!”

As the announcer continued to talk Daylena saw a figure fidgeting with the electric controls near the stand, suddenly the large T.V. screen went blank.

“Uh oh looks like there’s something wrong with the power!” sighed the announcer as the figure escaped into the bushes. Signaling plusle and minun she got up to follow the figure. Soon Claina and her Altaria soon came out the ash with Terren and gyrados close behind. Dave and Jo were now approaching a large volcano that was bubbling with magma.

“Altaria dragon breath!”

As Claina gripped Altaria it opened it’s small beak and released a green purplish flame that bursted toward Dave and Pelipper. In surprise the dragon breathe struck Pelipper from behind sending Dave off of the unexpecting Pelipper. Dave began to plummet toward the volcano, the heat and smoke flying across his body. Flipping out of control he closed his eyes, as he was about to hit the magma. Realizing he wasn’t being burned to death he opened his eyes and was on the back of tropius who was flying up from the volcano.

“Are you okay?” Jo said while signaling her Pelipper over.

“I think so, but I know your not suppose to use attacks like that,” he said climbing back onto pelipper’s back.

Looking up they saw the pokemon flyby, they looked to one another and nodded and began to fly after the trainers. As they approached the trainers they saw gyrados and Altaria hovering in the air, Claina was grinning and ordered an attack while Greg did the same. Greg’s gyrados released a powerful hyper beam from it’s large jaw that collided with Altaria’s dragon breathe, the dragon breathe cutting right through it and colliding with gyrados. The gyrados roared in pain and quickly fainted with Greg on his back, them falling onto the gravel below.

“Don’t worry people the power should be up shortly!” the announcer yelled with cupped hands.

Daylena braised through the bushes with plusle and minun closely behind, seeing a man they quickly ducked inside of the bushes.

“Claina, what should I do next, I cut off the power like you told me to,” a man said speaking inside of an earpiece.

“Ok you dirty scum what the hell is going on here?” Daylena said hopping out of the bushes.

The man jumped back in surprised and fumbled with a pair of pliers he held in his hand.

“I’m in trouble aren’t I?” the man said backing up into a tree while plusle and minun sent sparks from there cheeks.

Meanwhile Dave and Jo were dodging the dragon breath while Brian and his Aerodactyl plummeted to the ground hit by one of the attacks.

“Altaria use sing attack!” Claina said pointing crazily at Pelipper and Tropius.

“Oh no,” Jo said knowing that her pokemon were going to fall asleep.

Altaria began to sing when tropius began to yell, looking back at Jo on his back he began to yell again and then looked back to Altaria. Tropius then began to flap its wings, this time different then a gust attack, he rounded his wings as he flapped them, them forming a funnel of wind.

“Tropius’s whirlwind attack,” Jo’s pokenavi chirped.

As they funnel grew it flew toward the singing Altaria, the funnel striking them they began to be tossed around, making them crash on the ground and then lifting them up and tossing them forward. As Claina and Altaria laid bruised on the ground Terren and his swellow flew by, the finish line a short distance away.

“Okay everyone the power is back on! And it seems like there’s only three trainers left in the race, Terren, Dave, and Jo.” The announcer yelled as officer jenny put handcuffs on the strange man Daylena caught.

Tropius lifted into the air, gaining speed on swellow. Terren and Jo winced as they wind flew past them almost lifting them off there pokemon; Jo was now next to Terren as they approached the finish line.

“Tropius stick out your neck.”

Tropius extended his neck, Terren and Jo passing the finish line at the same time.

“Woahhhh! This is a close one folks looks like a tie, lets take a look at the snapshot at the finish…wow….and the winner is…..JO! By a neck!”

The crowd went crazy with excitement, balloons and confetti everywhere, people cheering, plusle and minun hugging one another, Daylena surprisingly hopping up and down.




The door slammed on the cop car with Claina and man inside when Officer jenny stepped up to the trainers.

“We must thank you, Claina was a crazed criminal on the loose for many years. It looks like she wanted the prize money so should could pull more schemes.”

Officer jenny then got into her car and drove away, Terren now approaching the trainers.

“That was great race! Jo that’s a nice tropius right there, Dave….it’s okay to be in third place…not.”

“Terren why don’t you scram!”

“Oh Daylena you show love in such crazy ways,” Terren said hopping on his swellow.

“Well bye!” he said waving and flying into the distance.

“Jo, that was a pretty good race, and you did some pretty good things out there,” Daylena said looking to the ground.

Jo smiled.

“Thanks, you didn’t do badly yourself, that’s why im splitting this prize money with all of us, because I couldn’t have done this without you guys.”

All the trainers smiled and talked about all the crazy things that went on today. Though Jo came in first place in the race, all the trainers won in one way are another. Next time there adventures might mean more.

Mancetric_Trainer
1st October 2003, 08:10 PM
Any comments? :confused:

Mancetric_Trainer
5th October 2003, 08:22 PM
Okay here is the next episode! Two sent in characters are in it! Hope you guys enjoy and plz reply.


Episode 18: The Desert is NO Dessert.

The trainers are walking on a mountain path checking out the different views. Happy about Jo’s win they decided they needed a break of traveling and would just check out there surroundings. Dave was mostly happy that Jo and Daylena have not been arguing, at least not yet.

“Doooo you have to walk so far ahead of like that.” Daylena said grumbling at Jo.

“Oh I didn’t know five inches in front of you was ahead,” she said nipping back.

“Hey im the only one allowed be sarcastic.”

As they continued to squabble, plusle began to yell and point at someone running in front of them. It was geo, one of the triplets they had a confrontation with before and he looked like he was up to no good.

“Hey guys isn’t that one of the triplets?”

Daylena and Jo looked from one another and watched the triplet run into what seemed to be a desert.

“That jerk is making trouble let’s go follow him,” Daylena said holding minun.

Jo got a nervous look on her face.

“Maybe we shouldn’t because…um because many people get lost in the desert,” she said quickly making it up.

“Oh please, lets go!” Daylena said running into the desert.

Dave and Jo followed her into the dessert where they came up to her standing. The dessert seemed to stretch for miles out. Little gust lightly whipped up the sand and rocks and cactus were scattered about the area. The sun seemed to beat harder here and the heat was already getting to the trainers. Minun hopped out of Daylena’s arms and started to point at footprints on the ground.

“Footprints! It must be him come on!” Daylena said running along with minun following the tracks.

They continued to track trough the dessert as the sun continued to beat down on them. It seemed like they’ve been traveling for miles while they only have been traveling for not more then ten minutes.

“Nobody in site, guess we can head back,” Jo said turning back.

“Wait I see someone!” Daylena said rushing toward someone.

Daylena pounced the boy causing them to both fall onto the hot sand.

“Daylena get up what are you doing,” Dave said poking Daylena.

“Yea what are you doing?” The boy yelled out as Daylena climbed off him.

The boy stood up brushing the sand off his clothes, he looked about the same age as the others trainers maybe fifth teen. He had black hair and brown eyes and wore a white shirt with blue jeans.

“Okay cough it up who are you?” Daylena said as her and minun stepped toward him.

“Must you be rude Daylena? Hello im Jo and this is Dave, what are you doing out here?”

“Oh um im Justin, nice to meet you. Im actually kinda lost in this desert.”

“Oh we no the way out but did you happen to see someone wearing a rock like outfit?”

Justin nodded with a smile on his face.

“Yea I was about to ask him for help but he just ran passed me and bumped me on the ground, he seemed to be in a rush.”

“Did you see what direction he went?”

Justin nodded and pointed deeper into the dessert.

The trainers continued with Justin and talked as they walked.

“Oh you have a shiny Tropius. I have a shiny myself,” Justin said taking a pokeball from his belt and tossing it.

Out of the pokeball came out a sparkling Poliwhirl that clenched its fist.

“Nice,” said Jo taking her Tropius’s pokeball.

She released her sparkling Tropius who let out its large leaf like wings and landed next to her.

“Cool pokemon.”

Daylena rolled her eyes.

“Who cares, a sparkling pokemon? Peh heh. Check this pokemon out.”
She then grabbed one of her pokeballs and threw into the hot sand. The pokeball released her small little Numel who slowly looked around.

“Nu nu,” the Numel said letting out a large yawn.

Jo and Justin blinked at her confused looking Numel.

“Oh that’s nice…,” Justin said with a smile.

Daylena rolled her eyes once again and looked at a group of cactus that was near them.

“I’m thirsty and I hear that cactus’s have water, Numel knock one of the cactus’s down with a tackle attack!”

Numel slowly nodded and slowly charged at the cactus tackling it. The cactus began to shudder and surprisingly turned around and looked at the Numel.

“Huh?” Jo said pointing her pokenav at the cactus.

“Cacnea lives in arid locations such as deserts. It releases a strong aroma from its flower to attract prey. When prey comes near, this pokemon shoots sharp thorns from its body to bring the victim down.” The pokenav chirped out.

The rest of the cactus’s turned around revealing themselves as Cacnea. They looked angrily at the Numel and let out a barrage of pin missiles into the unexpecting pokemon.

“Numel ember!”

“Tropius gust!”

“Plusle quick attack!”

The Numel cringed from the pin missiles and slowly looked up and opened its mouth, it letting of a stream of flames onto two of the Cacnea. Tropius let out a scream and began to flap its large wings whipping up a large gust, the gust hovered toward some of the Cacnea lifting them into the air as they winced and tossed them back onto the ground. Cacnea slammed its arm into plusle, as he slammed his arm into him a green halo covered its arm, he then began to use absorb on plusle. Plusle hopped back lightly weakened, he then dashed into the Cacnea who rolled back.

“Houndour go!” Justin said taking a pokeball and throwing it.

His black Houndour growled as he came out of his pokeball.

“Houndour ember!”

Houndour barked again, opining its mouth it let out a blast of fire onto the Cacnea causing them to back up from the extreme heat.

As the trainers continued to fight more Cacnea popped up from behind some of the hills.

“Retreat, there’s to many!” Dave said backing up from the Cacnea.

The trainers began to run as the Cacnea set chase, but the trainers soon lost the slow Cacnea. As they continued to run, plusle and minun suddenly disappeared into the sand. As plusle and minun screamed the trainers looked ran back to find them. Jo looked down into a deep hole and saw plusle and minun slowly sliding toward a chomping pokemon.

“Ew what is that?” Jo said pointing her pokenavi at it.

“Trapinch's nest is a sloped, bowl-like pit dug in sand. This pokemon patiently waits for prey to tumble down the pit. Its giant jaws have enough strength to crush even boulders.” Her pokenavi chirped as plusle and minun continued to roll down the pit.


“Plusle, Minun!” Dave and Daylena said in Unison.

Dave ran and dove down the pit, Daylena doing the same. Dave grabbed onto plusle’s legs as plusle grabbed minun’s. Daylena then grabbed Dave’s leg as the Trapinch began to climb up the pit trying to bite into minun. Justin then ran over and grabbed Daylena’s feet as Jo grabbed his. Justin and Jo continued to pull as Trapinch nearly bit into minun.

“Tropius, help!”

Tropius bit into Justin’s shirt and began to pull up the trainers faster; Poliwhirl then grabbed Tropius’s tail and started to help. Trapinch opened its jaw as wide as he could and minun slowly slipped into it. Just as Trapinch was about to clamp down minun and all the trainers were pulled up in a sudden jolt and collapsed on the hot sand. Panting the trainers stood up and continued look for Geo. As they continued to travel trough the desert the wind began to pick up which lifted up the sand.


”What is that?” Dave said looking at a strange rock formation.

The rock formation was something they never seen before several large rocks circled a larger rock that stood in the center of them. As they continued around the rock formation they found geo, but he was in a battle with another trainer. They also saw that the familiar archeologist was lying on the ground.

“Graveler use strength,” Geo said pointing at another Graveler that was of a purple tint.

Geo’s Graveler stomped to the purple Graveler and lifted it straight into the air. It then tossed the Graveler, the purple Graveler soared through the air and slammed into the stone. The purple Graveler began to bubble and transformed into a fainted ditto on the ground.

“Ditto return, Go smeargle!” The older looking trainer said getting out a pokeball from his large cargo pocket.

Releasing his smeargle, it began to whip its tip-colored tail around.

“Smeargle razor leaf!”

Smeargle pointed its tail at the Graveler, his tail began to glow and a dozen razor leafs erupted out his tail at Graveler. Half of the razor leafs missed but the rest sliced into the Graveler making it fall to one knee.

“Geo! That’s enough!”

Geo grinned and grabbed a pokeball.

“Go nosepass!”

A beam of light shot out his pokeball and formed into a square pokemon. The solid rock pokemon had a large orange nose and its size seemed like it would slow it down.

“Graveler, Nosepass, rock throw!”

Rock started to form around Graveler and Nosepass; the rocks lifted into the air and began to fall in random spots around the trainer. A rock fell in front of Dave sending dust into the air and another rock clipped Tropius’s wing. Geo quickly looked at the large rock at the center of the rock formation and took a picture of it.

“Graveler use sand storm!”

Graveler smiled and lifted its four arms into the air, sand began to spew from all sides of Graveler, the sand began to swirl around the whole area blocking out visibility. As the sand subsided, everyone was on the floor covering their bodies but Geo and his pokemon were nowhere in site.

“All that trouble and he got away!” Daylena said pounding her hand into the ground.

Jo stepped up to the trainer as his smeargle stepped up next to him.

“Why were you in a battle with him?”

He brushed his brown hair out of his face and looked to Jo.

“I was tracking through the desert and I came upon that guy roughing up that archeologist over there so I stepped into help and I guess we began to battle.

“So….”

“The names Ryan Lowerr.”

“So Ryan do you know why he was roughing him up?”

“Actually the guy fainted after we began to battle.”

The trainers stepped up and around the archeologist as he lay on the ground.

“Poliwhirl try a water gun,” Justin said commanding his poliwhirl.

Poliwhirl let out a stream of water from its belly that soaked the archeologist. The archeologist hopped up stunned and confused.

“What! Huh! Where!”

Jo backed up from the archeologist.

“Snap out of it!” Daylena said slapping the archeologist across the face.

Minun then slapped his other cheek.

“Oh my, what happened? Is that thug still around.”

“No we ran him off, why don’t you tell us what happened?” Ryan said returning his pokemon.

“Well I was examining these ruin’s and heard something. When I looked back, I saw that thug standing behind me. He started to badger me about opining the ruin and to read the writing inscribed on it. Of course I couldn’t and he was getting angry, he tossed me to the ground and was about to attack me when this guy hopped out of no where and came to my rescue, from all the excitement I guess I fainted in the process.”

Daylena looked to the ruin and began to fill on the dotted writing engraved in the stone.

“I wonder what it says…..JO! Why don’t you help us out!”

Jo cringed when she said that and looked at the trainers staring at her.

“I…I don’t know how.”

“You did before!” Daylena quickly snapped back.

“I guessed…,” Jo said looking down.

The archeologist stepped up.

“Please, This is very important. Think if the wrong power got into those triplets hands.”

Jo gulped and looked at the trainers. She then stepped up to the ruins and began to read the writing.

“It says….right….right…down, down….then use strength.”

“Most interesting! There directions!” The archeologist said perking up.

“Well my smeargle knows strength…why don’t we test it out.”

Nobody seemed to disagree though it seemed like Jo wanted to. Ryan stepped in front of the ruin with his smeargle. He followed the directions and commanded his smeargle to use strength. All the trainers stood there in silence as nothing happened.

“See nothing happened oh well!” said Jo.

The archeologist rubbed his chin.

“Yea but for a reason, there are writings scattered around just like this all over this region, maybe if someone said them in order are maybe even followed the directions exactly,” The archeologist said pausing.

“What would happen,” Justin said looking interested.

“The powers could be released….of Metal, Ice and Stone.”

“He’s talking crazy! Let’s just get outta here!” Jo shouted more angry then she ever been.

Everyone looked at her as she hopped on her Tropius and walked away.

“You have a very important person with you, you guys must find out more.” The archeologist said tipping his glasses up.

“I don’t know about that…” Dave said.

“You must….we all depend on it…who knows what will happen if those triplets got it.”

The wind began to pick up and the trainers decided it was time to leave. Once out the desert the trainers said goodbye to their new friends. The archeologist also went his separate way. The trainer’s set off for their next badge that was closer then they thought. As they continue, will more be revealed about Jo?

Mancetric_Trainer
9th October 2003, 01:43 PM
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Mancetric_Trainer
10th October 2003, 12:36 AM
Hey thanks for reading and thanks for the reply! Glad you enjoy the story and that chapter. But shhhh don't reveal to much for those that don't much about the regi's. Hope you reply to the next chapter!

Mancetric_Trainer
12th October 2003, 05:48 PM
Episode 19: Hot and Cold don’t mix.

It's a chilly afternoon as the trainers and their pokemon make there way down a steep hill. They've been traveling for a while and the cold has been getting to them and it was only going to get colder. As the trainers continued to travel there were happy to see their destantion: Lavaridge Town.

"It sure is freaking cold to be next to a darn volcano," Daylena said shivering.

Plusle and Minun grasped one another shivering at the feet of their trainers.

"Well there's some good news, I hear there's hot springs up here located at the pokemon center," Jo said also shivering.

"Well there's no point standing here," Dave said making his way toward the pokemon center.

The pokemon center was located at the far side of the town. The town had very few houses and a few sprinkles of ash laid on the ground, the gym seem to be located just in front of the pokemon center and the volcano was clearly seen by the whole town. The trainers quickly entered the pokemon center and approached nurse joy.

"Where are the hot springs!" Daylena shouted while shivering.

Nurse joy hopped back in surprise.

"Oh im sorry the hot springs are frozen at the moment," she said as a wide smile spread across her face.

Daylena's and Minun's jaw dropped.

"What do you mean they’re frozen? There hot springs!" she said fuming.

Nurse joy stepped from behind the counter.

"Maybe I should show you."

Signaling the trainers to follow they entered a back room that led outside in back of the pokemon center. In front of them was a large mountain; several stairs were carved into the stone that led to different holes in the mountain. Stepping closer they were surprised at what they saw, the hot springs were indeed frozen into pure ice.

"How could this happen?" Dave said looking confusingly at thick ice.

"No one knows exactly....but there was a couple of reports of a strange man wearing blue lurking around the area."

Dave thought for a while and realized it could only be Polar, one of the triplets.

"Did anyone say the outfit resembled ice?" Dave said.

Nurse joy nodded.

"Um, uh, why are we worrying about this...uh....you guys gym is right there, im sure the hot springs will defrost soon." Jo said stuttering sounding nervous.

"You’re right for once Jo, lets go bro," Daylena said heading for the door.

The trainers made there way out of the pokemon center and headed toward the gym. They entered the gym and instantly noticed the vibrant red colors of the floor and walls resembling fire. As they walked in more they noticed someone sitting in a seat polishing her nails red. She had tall red and yellow hair and a tight little tube top and black bell-bottom pants.

"Hi were here for the badge," Dave said yelling out to her.

The gym leader blew her nails and then looked up at the trainers. Dave and plusle's tongues fell out of their mouths from her beauty.

"Oh trainers," she said hopping out of the seat.

She walked toward the center of the gym blowing her nails.

"What are the girls here for? Your cheerleaders?"

Jo, Daylena and Minun growled.

"Actually I’m here to battle to!" Daylena said yelling.

The gym leader looked her up and down.

"Humph. Don't look like much."

Daylena and Minun growled harder.

"And what about you blondy?" She said talking to Jo.

"Blondy? Um no im not here to battle, just to watch."

"Oh," she said in a none caring way.

Jo growled as Dave and Plusle continued to stare.

"Guess she's hot in more ways then one," Dave said jokingly.

Jo and Daylena shot an evil eye at him, Jo's more of a jealous look then mad.

"Okay will use two pokemon each, yada yada, Im Flannery yada yada, ready to start?" Flannery said with her hand on her hip.

"Why don't you take us both on since you’re so tough," Daylena said with attitude.

"Because this is my gym and my rules." Flannery said almost yelling.

"Fine....if you can't handle," Daylena said turning to go sit down.

"Fine! You guys use one pokemon each and I'll use two, but now I won't go easy on you."

Jo went and sat down with plusle and Minun since Dave and Daylena decided not to use them. Dave grabbed his skitty's pokeball while Daylena grabbed her mightyena’s.

"Your not serious sis?" Dave said looking at her grab the pokeball.

She nodded at him and grabbed her numel's pokeball. The two sent out there pokemon while Flannery took her time. Grabbing two pokeballs at once, two white beams of light shot into the center of the gym. One of the beams formed into a more familiar pokemon, a bright red Slugma. Though the other beam formed into a large tortoise looking pokemon. The brown pokemon had a large shell with glowing red dots surrounding it, white smoke spilled out of the pokemon's nostrils and lifted into the air.

"Lets start! Both of you start off with a smog attack!"

Both of the pokemon opened there mouths and a thick gray smoke shoot out rapidly toward skitty and numel.

"Numel ember that smog!"

"Skitty double slap that Slugma!"

Numel slowly opened its mouth letting out a flurry of flames into the smog. The smog then caught fire and soon disappeared with the flames. Just as the last flames vanished skitty rushed through and did a full turn bringing its tail across slugma's face twice. Skitty then screamed and looked at its tail, which had a small burn on it from slugma's body.

"Slugma tackle that skitty then torkoal use fire spin."

The hardly hurt Slugma pulled its head back and tackled skitty who rolled back next to numel. Torkoal then opened its mouth letting out a flickering red flame, as the flame rapidly shot out its mouth it split in two and began to surround skitty and numel. Skitty hopped around frightened as the flames flickered across her body and numel confusingly looked around.

"Slugma use ember, help torkoal!"

Slugma opened its sludgy mouth and let out a burst of flames into the already burning firespin adding on to the force and heat. The flames began to burn harder and closer to the two trapped pokemon.

"Daylena we have to take out the weaker one first, lets try to take out Slugma!" Dave said yelling to her.

"And how do you suppose we do that!"

"Remember Numel is part ground," Dave said winking to her.

Daylena smiled and nodded.

"Skitty get on numel's back!"

"Numel magnitude!"

Skitty quickly hopped onto Numel, Numel then slowly lifted its hind legs and brought them down to the ground hard. The ground of the gym began to shake knocking Flannery's pokemon around. Slugma slipped back bouncing on the floor as the fire spin ceased.

"Skitty use growl on Slugma!"

"Numel take down attack!"


Skitty hopped toward Slugma and let out a small growl making Slugma shudder back more. As Slugma continued to shudder from the growl numel charged and tackled the Slugma slamming into him hard. As Numel continued to stand on him Slugma quickly fainted.

"Good jobs you guys!" Dave said cheering and looking to Daylena.

Jo, Plusle and Minun cheered of slugma’s defeat.

"Flamethrower torkoal, where not done yet!

Torkoal opened its mouth letting a large concentrated flame fly toward skitty and numel. The flame was so powerful it tossed skitty and numel back from Torkoal a few feet. Skitty and numel both looked badly hurt and could barely stand from the blazing attack attack.

“Numel ember!”

Numel let out a powerful blaze of embers at Torkoal that flew at him from across the gym.

“Torkoal! Protect!”

Torkoal pulled in all his legs and head into his large shell letting the embers crash into it. Almost seeming affected Torkoal pulled out of his shell.

"Skitty hurry use attract!"

"Torkoal smokescreen!"

As skitty stood up she began to sway her tail slowly back and forth gazing at Torkoal when all of a sudden a white smoke shifted in front of the pokemon.

"Another flamethrower!"

"Dodge it!" The twins yelled in unison.

As the smokescreen blocked skitty's view a burst of fire shot through the smokescreen almost hitting skitty.

"Now what!?" Daylena said.

Looking around Dave was out of ideas and torkoal was getting ready for another flamethrower. In the corner of his eyes he saw Jo making movements, looking over to her she was pretending to sing into a microphone trying to tell Dave something.

"Ofcourse! Skitty use sing!"

Skitty sat down and began to let soft tunes hover towards torkoal who was still blocked by the smokescreen. Numel smiled and slowly began to sway back and forth to the music as skitty continued to sing.

"Torkoal flamethrower quick!"

The smokescreen began to clear and revealed a sleeping torkoal with white smoke stilling coming out of its nostrils.

"Now's are chance!" Dave yelled.

"Numel magnitude!"

Skitty quickly hopped on numel's back when numel let out another magnitude, this time the ground shaking harder then before. The sleeping torkoal was tossed around the gym first bouncing up a little and then smacking into the wall where it fell on its back. From all the pain torkoal was snapped awake but was immobilized from being on his back.

"Skitty double slap!"

Skitty hopped off of numel and charged at the stuck torkoal. Twisting around skitty began to slap his tail across torkoal's face sending torkoal spinning around rapidly.

"Numel ember!"

Skitty hopped out the way as torkoal continued to spin, numel then shot a ember into torkoal who was completely engulfed by the flames. Torkoal was now a spinning fireball that was tossing flames around. As torkoal began to stop spinning the flames died down revealing a fainted torkoal.

"Uh wow," was what Flannery could only say.

Plusle and Minun cheered and ran to Dave and Daylena giving them hugs. Skitty ran up to Dave and hopped in his arms purring when numel came up to Daylena giving a goofy smile.

"Wow I got my butt kicked! I’m sorry for being rude earlier, you guys definitely deserve these badges."

As Flannery was about to hand them there badges a loud yelling was heard from outside. The trainers and Flannery quickly ran outside to see Officer jenny being blanketed by snow by a fat round seal like pokemon.

"Good job sealeo!" Polar said praising his evolved spheal.

"Hey stop that!" Daylena said yelling at the triplet.

"Not you guys again! Sealeo IceBall!"

A ball of ice began to form in the seal's pokemon mouth quickly growing in size and was soon released and tossed at the trainers.

"Numel ember!"

Numel shoot out a few flames at the iceball quickly melting it in the air.

"Sealeo use watergun!"

Sealeo opened its mouth again releasing a blast of water straight into numel, the water splashed across his face drenching the weakened pokemon.

"Sealeo wategun!"

"Plusle quick attack!"

"Minun spark!"

Plusle charged at the pokemon in a streak of white light dodging each of waterguns. Minun quickly followed behind him charging up his spark attack. Plusle hopped and tackled Sealeo sending him rolling back, Minun then tackled him sparking with electricity sending it straight into Sealeo who let out a scream. Frightened, polar returned his fainted sealeo and backed up against the wall scared.

Why were you freezing the hotsprings with your pokemon!" Officer jenny yelled at him.
Polar smiled grabbing something from his pocket; slamming two small balls onto the ground smoked filled the area making the trainers cough.

"Tropics come out and use gust!" Jo said throwing her pokeball.

Tropius came out the pokeball sparkling all over, it then began to flap its large wings creating a gust that blew away the smoke to reveal no one.

"He's gone....," Dave said looking disappointed.

"Thanks for you guys help, the guy was pretty strange. I saw him freezing more hotsprings and carving something into the ice."

"What did it say?" Dave asked.

"Well I think he carved a name, Jo."

Jo shuddered back while everyone looked at her.

"I need to take a breather," she said climbing onto her tropius.

Her tropius lifted into the air and she lifted off into the sky.

"Oh well let’s go chill at the hotsprings bro."

"Wait you guys forgot your badges!" Flannery said running up to them.

She handed them each a metallic badge resembling fire and walked back to her gym smiling at Dave.

The twins headed to the hotsprings and took off the stress from the day. Though Dave was worrying about Jo, it seems like things are getting more dangerous for her and only time will tell what will happen and what will be revealed.
Episode 19: Hot and Cold don’t mix.

It's a chilly afternoon as the trainers and their pokemon make there way down a steep hill. They've been traveling for a while and the cold has been getting to them and it was only going to get colder. As the trainers continued to travel there were happy to see their destantion: Lavaridge Town.

"It sure is freaking cold to be next to a darn volcano," Daylena said shivering.

Plusle and Minun grasped one another shivering at the feet of their trainers.

"Well there's some good news, I hear there's hot springs up here located at the pokemon center," Jo said also shivering.

"Well there's no point standing here," Dave said making his way toward the pokemon center.

The pokemon center was located at the far side of the town. The town had very few houses and a few sprinkles of ash laid on the ground, the gym seem to be located just in front of the pokemon center and the volcano was clearly seen by the whole town. The trainers quickly entered the pokemon center and approached nurse joy.

"Where are the hot springs!" Daylena shouted while shivering.

Nurse joy hopped back in surprise.

"Oh im sorry the hot springs are frozen at the moment," she said as a wide smile spread across her face.

Daylena's and Minun's jaw dropped.

"What do you mean they’re frozen? There hot springs!" she said fuming.

Nurse joy stepped from behind the counter.

"Maybe I should show you."

Signaling the trainers to follow they entered a back room that led outside in back of the pokemon center. In front of them was a large mountain; several stairs were carved into the stone that led to different holes in the mountain. Stepping closer they were surprised at what they saw, the hot springs were indeed frozen into pure ice.

"How could this happen?" Dave said looking confusingly at thick ice.

"No one knows exactly....but there was a couple of reports of a strange man wearing blue lurking around the area."

Dave thought for a while and realized it could only be Polar, one of the triplets.

"Did anyone say the outfit resembled ice?" Dave said.

Nurse joy nodded.

"Um, uh, why are we worrying about this...uh....you guys gym is right there, im sure the hot springs will defrost soon." Jo said stuttering sounding nervous.

"You’re right for once Jo, lets go bro," Daylena said heading for the door.

The trainers made there way out of the pokemon center and headed toward the gym. They entered the gym and instantly noticed the vibrant red colors of the floor and walls resembling fire. As they walked in more they noticed someone sitting in a seat polishing her nails red. She had tall red and yellow hair and a tight little tube top and black bell-bottom pants.

"Hi were here for the badge," Dave said yelling out to her.

The gym leader blew her nails and then looked up at the trainers. Dave and plusle's tongues fell out of their mouths from her beauty.

"Oh trainers," she said hopping out of the seat.

She walked toward the center of the gym blowing her nails.

"What are the girls here for? Your cheerleaders?"

Jo, Daylena and Minun growled.

"Actually I’m here to battle to!" Daylena said yelling.

The gym leader looked her up and down.

"Humph. Don't look like much."

Daylena and Minun growled harder.

"And what about you blondy?" She said talking to Jo.

"Blondy? Um no im not here to battle, just to watch."

"Oh," she said in a none caring way.

Jo growled as Dave and Plusle continued to stare.

"Guess she's hot in more ways then one," Dave said jokingly.

Jo and Daylena shot an evil eye at him, Jo's more of a jealous look then mad.

"Okay will use two pokemon each, yada yada, Im Flannery yada yada, ready to start?" Flannery said with her hand on her hip.

"Why don't you take us both on since you’re so tough," Daylena said with attitude.

"Because this is my gym and my rules." Flannery said almost yelling.

"Fine....if you can't handle," Daylena said turning to go sit down.

"Fine! You guys use one pokemon each and I'll use two, but now I won't go easy on you."

Jo went and sat down with plusle and Minun since Dave and Daylena decided not to use them. Dave grabbed his skitty's pokeball while Daylena grabbed her mightyena’s.

"Your not serious sis?" Dave said looking at her grab the pokeball.

She nodded at him and grabbed her numel's pokeball. The two sent out there pokemon while Flannery took her time. Grabbing two pokeballs at once, two white beams of light shot into the center of the gym. One of the beams formed into a more familiar pokemon, a bright red Slugma. Though the other beam formed into a large tortoise looking pokemon. The brown pokemon had a large shell with glowing red dots surrounding it, white smoke spilled out of the pokemon's nostrils and lifted into the air.

"Lets start! Both of you start off with a smog attack!"

Both of the pokemon opened there mouths and a thick gray smoke shoot out rapidly toward skitty and numel.

"Numel ember that smog!"

"Skitty double slap that Slugma!"

Numel slowly opened its mouth letting out a flurry of flames into the smog. The smog then caught fire and soon disappeared with the flames. Just as the last flames vanished skitty rushed through and did a full turn bringing its tail across slugma's face twice. Skitty then screamed and looked at its tail, which had a small burn on it from slugma's body.

"Slugma tackle that skitty then torkoal use fire spin."

The hardly hurt Slugma pulled its head back and tackled skitty who rolled back next to numel. Torkoal then opened its mouth letting out a flickering red flame, as the flame rapidly shot out its mouth it split in two and began to surround skitty and numel. Skitty hopped around frightened as the flames flickered across her body and numel confusingly looked around.

"Slugma use ember, help torkoal!"

Slugma opened its sludgy mouth and let out a burst of flames into the already burning firespin adding on to the force and heat. The flames began to burn harder and closer to the two trapped pokemon.

"Daylena we have to take out the weaker one first, lets try to take out Slugma!" Dave said yelling to her.

"And how do you suppose we do that!"

"Remember Numel is part ground," Dave said winking to her.

Daylena smiled and nodded.

"Skitty get on numel's back!"

"Numel magnitude!"

Skitty quickly hopped onto Numel, Numel then slowly lifted its hind legs and brought them down to the ground hard. The ground of the gym began to shake knocking Flannery's pokemon around. Slugma slipped back bouncing on the floor as the fire spin ceased.

"Skitty use growl on Slugma!"

"Numel take down attack!"


Skitty hopped toward Slugma and let out a small growl making Slugma shudder back more. As Slugma continued to shudder from the growl numel charged and tackled the Slugma slamming into him hard. As Numel continued to stand on him Slugma quickly fainted.

"Good jobs you guys!" Dave said cheering and looking to Daylena.

Jo, Plusle and Minun cheered of slugma’s defeat.

"Flamethrower torkoal, where not done yet!

Torkoal opened its mouth letting a large concentrated flame fly toward skitty and numel. The flame was so powerful it tossed skitty and numel back from Torkoal a few feet. Skitty and numel both looked badly hurt and could barely stand from the blazing attack attack.

“Numel ember!”

Numel let out a powerful blaze of embers at Torkoal that flew at him from across the gym.

“Torkoal! Protect!”

Torkoal pulled in all his legs and head into his large shell letting the embers crash into it. Almost seeming affected Torkoal pulled out of his shell.

"Skitty hurry use attract!"

"Torkoal smokescreen!"

As skitty stood up she began to sway her tail slowly back and forth gazing at Torkoal when all of a sudden a white smoke shifted in front of the pokemon.

"Another flamethrower!"

"Dodge it!" The twins yelled in unison.

As the smokescreen blocked skitty's view a burst of fire shot through the smokescreen almost hitting skitty.

"Now what!?" Daylena said.

Looking around Dave was out of ideas and torkoal was getting ready for another flamethrower. In the corner of his eyes he saw Jo making movements, looking over to her she was pretending to sing into a microphone trying to tell Dave something.

"Ofcourse! Skitty use sing!"

Skitty sat down and began to let soft tunes hover towards torkoal who was still blocked by the smokescreen. Numel smiled and slowly began to sway back and forth to the music as skitty continued to sing.

"Torkoal flamethrower quick!"

The smokescreen began to clear and revealed a sleeping torkoal with white smoke stilling coming out of its nostrils.

"Now's are chance!" Dave yelled.

"Numel magnitude!"

Skitty quickly hopped on numel's back when numel let out another magnitude, this time the ground shaking harder then before. The sleeping torkoal was tossed around the gym first bouncing up a little and then smacking into the wall where it fell on its back. From all the pain torkoal was snapped awake but was immobilized from being on his back.

"Skitty double slap!"

Skitty hopped off of numel and charged at the stuck torkoal. Twisting around skitty began to slap his tail across torkoal's face sending torkoal spinning around rapidly.

"Numel ember!"

Skitty hopped out the way as torkoal continued to spin, numel then shot a ember into torkoal who was completely engulfed by the flames. Torkoal was now a spinning fireball that was tossing flames around. As torkoal began to stop spinning the flames died down revealing a fainted torkoal.

"Uh wow," was what Flannery could only say.

Plusle and Minun cheered and ran to Dave and Daylena giving them hugs. Skitty ran up to Dave and hopped in his arms purring when numel came up to Daylena giving a goofy smile.

"Wow I got my butt kicked! I’m sorry for being rude earlier, you guys definitely deserve these badges."

As Flannery was about to hand them there badges a loud yelling was heard from outside. The trainers and Flannery quickly ran outside to see Officer jenny being blanketed by snow by a fat round seal like pokemon.

"Good job sealeo!" Polar said praising his evolved spheal.

"Hey stop that!" Daylena said yelling at the triplet.

"Not you guys again! Sealeo IceBall!"

A ball of ice began to form in the seal's pokemon mouth quickly growing in size and was soon released and tossed at the trainers.

"Numel ember!"

Numel shoot out a few flames at the iceball quickly melting it in the air.

"Sealeo use watergun!"

Sealeo opened its mouth again releasing a blast of water straight into numel, the water splashed across his face drenching the weakened pokemon.

"Sealeo wategun!"

"Plusle quick attack!"

"Minun spark!"

Plusle charged at the pokemon in a streak of white light dodging each of waterguns. Minun quickly followed behind him charging up his spark attack. Plusle hopped and tackled Sealeo sending him rolling back, Minun then tackled him sparking with electricity sending it straight into Sealeo who let out a scream. Frightened, polar returned his fainted sealeo and backed up against the wall scared.

Why were you freezing the hotsprings with your pokemon!" Officer jenny yelled at him.
Polar smiled grabbing something from his pocket; slamming two small balls onto the ground smoked filled the area making the trainers cough.

"Tropics come out and use gust!" Jo said throwing her pokeball.

Tropius came out the pokeball sparkling all over, it then began to flap its large wings creating a gust that blew away the smoke to reveal no one.

"He's gone....," Dave said looking disappointed.

"Thanks for you guys help, the guy was pretty strange. I saw him freezing more hotsprings and carving something into the ice."

"What did it say?" Dave asked.

"Well I think he carved a name, Jo."

Jo shuddered back while everyone looked at her.

"I need to take a breather," she said climbing onto her tropius.

Her tropius lifted into the air and she lifted off into the sky.

"Oh well let’s go chill at the hotsprings bro."

"Wait you guys forgot your badges!" Flannery said running up to them.

She handed them each a metallic badge resembling fire and walked back to her gym smiling at Dave.

The twins headed to the hotsprings and took off the stress from the day. Though Dave was worrying about Jo, it seems like things are getting more dangerous for her and only time will tell what will happen and what will be revealed.

Mancetric_Trainer
15th October 2003, 09:54 PM
Any replies :wave:

Mancetric_Trainer
19th October 2003, 10:59 AM
Yay Episode 20! Well hope people read and reply.


Episode 20: Swa-blu in the face.

The trainers walk through a grassy path as they talk cheerfully about there new badges. The sun is beaming high in the air as a cool breeze brushes across the long grass that surrounds them. The grass goes up to about their waist as they continue on the thin dirt path that has been carved through the thick plains. Plusle and minun wrestle with one another when Dave spots a tall woman with short blue hair wearing a long white science coat.

“Hello what are you up to?” Dave asked seeing that she was writing stuff down in a small notebook.

The woman hopped back in surprise.

“Oh hello you gave me a little scare there, I’m Dr.Nayla. Um, I’m actually studying the Swablu, Seviper problem.”

“Swablu, Seviper problem?”

“Uh yes, lately the population of Swablu’s decreased dramatically. It is thought that a large increase of Seviper’s in the area may be the problem.”

“Why would Seviper’s in the area be a problem to the Swablu’s?” Jo asked.

“Well it is thought that the Seviper’s are consuming the eggs of the Swablu. Though this usually happen its usually not this dramatic. For some reason a large population of Seviper seem to have shifted into the Swablu’s territory.”

“What’s a Swablu anyway?” Daylena asked when a small bird like pokemon landed on her head.

“Ahhh! Something’s on me!” Daylena said screaming and rushing around trying to bat of the creature on her head.

Dr.Nayla let off a little laugh.

“That would be a Swablu, they’re actually very nice.” Dr.Nayla said smiling.

Jo pulled out her pokenav and pointed it at the swablu that was still on Daylena’s head.

“Swablu has light and fluffy wings that are like cottony clouds. This pokemon is not frightened of people. It lands on the heads of people and sits there like a cotton-fluff hat.”

The swablu was a blue looking bird and its wings indeed looked like cotton like clouds. Two small feathers split atop his head and his small feet gripped onto Daylena’s hair.

“Well can you get this thing off me!” Daylena yelled now irritated.

Jo went up to Daylena and got the Swablu from atop her head. The Swablu chirped in agreement while Jo held it in her arms. The trainers were surprised when they heard a dozen chirps coming from a distance away. Suddenly several Swablu flew out of the grass sounding scared, they all flew and cowered behind the trainers.

“It must be a Seviper!” Dr.Nayla yelled backing up.

The grass nearby began to rustle as the trainers looked on. In a sudden burst a large black and red snake like pokemon busted out of the grass, its red fangs protruding from its mouth. The Swablu’s began to chirp in an uproar when Jo pointed her pokenav at the angry looking viper.

“Seviper's sword like tail serves two purposes - it slashes foes and douses them with secreted poison. This pokemon will not give up its long running blood feud with zangoose.”

The Seviper began to hiss and slither toward the trainers while its fangs sparkled in the sunlight. The Swablu in Jo’s arm began to rustle around and hopped out of her arms and began to chirp at the Seviper. The Seviper looked at the Swablu and licked its fangs with its thin red tongue. Jo watched as the Seviper began to smash back, she knew it was about to attack the swablu, so Jo jumped in the path of the swablu when Seviper came lunging forward, its jaw open. The Seviper sunk its fangs into Jo’s right leg making her scream out in pain.

“Plusle use spark!”

Plusle chargered with electricity, charging at the Seviper he lunged at it sending his electricity through the Seviper’s body. The Seviper screamed in pain and released its bite from Jo; it then slithered back into the tall grass. Looking from the escaped Seviper they looked to Jo and she was a tint of purple.

“What’s happing to her!?” Dave yelled in a concern voice.

“That must have been Seviper’s poison fang attack….not only does it poison his prey the poison continually gets worse.” Dr.Nayla said looking at Jo’s leg.

“Were to far from any pokemon center and we don’t have any potions, what do we do?” Dave said now worried.

Dr.Nayla looked to Jo.

“Well there is a special herb that can cure her of the poison but.”

“But what?
“It’s in the Seviper’s main territory and its very dangerous.”

“That doesn’t matter we gotta help her.”

“Okay but I warned you.”

“Dave….please be careful.” Jo whispered sounding very weakened.

“Plusle you stay here and protect them if any more Seviper’s show up.”

“You to Minun.” Daylena said.

“Okay continue this path and make a right at the large willow tree, you can’t miss it. It will be deep in Seviper territory and they hate people in there territory. Remember the herd is a red star shaped plant.”

Dave and Daylena nodded and made there way down the path. The swablu that Jo protected hopped to Jo and began to cuddle with her making Jo break a smile though she was in bad pain.

“Okay here’s the tree,” Dave said looking at the large willow tree.

The trainers continued down the path, as they went the grass began to turn a shade of brown and the sun began to go down. Soon there was mostly dirt and a few brown shrubs and rocks. Dave released his Skitty and Meditite while Daylena released her Numel. The twins looked around looking for the red herb when meditite stopped and began to go into his meditating position.

“Get ready Daylena,” Dave whispered knowing meditite could use his detect.

Lunging out a shrub a Seviper tackled into Dave making them both fly to the ground. Two more Seviper hopped out of shrubs in front of them.

“Numel ember!”

Numel slowly looked the Seviper and blinked at it.

“Numel! I said ember!”

Numel slowly looked from Daylena and back to Dave whose was struggling with the Seviper who was trying to bite him. Numel then opened its mouth and let out a flurry of embers that slicked across the Seviper making it hop off of Dave. The twins and their pokemon began to cover their ears when the two Seviper’s let out an ear-splitting screech as they slithered toward them.

“Meditite confusion!”
Meditite quickly came out of his meditative position throwing his hand at the Seviper’s. A purple halo surrounded them and they were soon tossed back from the confusion. The other Seviper slithered toward Dave again opining its jaw when Dave’s Skitty quickly tackled it sending it skidding on the ground. The two other Seviper’s quickly slithered toward Daylena’s Numel. One of them unextended its body and wrapped its long body around Numel, squeezing it. Skitty ran toward the Seviper when the other Seviper eyes began to glow a crimson red, glaring at Skitty she instantly stopped, paralyzed in fear. As the other pokemon were being attacked a halo of white energy began to glow around meditite’s head, meditite just learned calm mind.

“Meditite another confusion!”

Meditite began to glow purple, this the time the halo of purple was larger then before, the calm mind not just boosting meditite’s special defense but also his special attack. The three Seviper’s were surround by purple halos and slowly lifted into air. All three were then tossed into the long grass.

“Great job meditite! But lets keep going,” Dave said returning his paralyzed Skitty.

The twins continued, this time climbing up a large hill of dirt and rocks. Once on top of the hill the twins smiled, a large crop of the red herb sat at the edge of the hill. The twins ran to the herb when a large Seviper hopped out of the plants. This Seviper was much large then the other Seviper’s and his fangs were much longer. The Seviper lunged at the Numel and let its tongue lick across Numel’s face. Numel looked at the Seviper slowly seeming to be weakened but not to affected from the attack.

“Numel ember!”

As Seviper stood exactly in front of Numel, Numel let of a burst of flames making Seviper roll back like a tire. Seviper rolled up and let out a screech making Numel and Meditite back up from the sound.

“Numel Magnitude!”

Numel crunched down making the ground begin to shake, suddenly a large crack erupted from in front of Numel and toward the Seviper. The crack struck Seviper sending him even farther back. The very weakened Seviper lunged at Meditite, Meditite began to glow a purple making a purple halo surround the Seviper in midair, throwing his hand forward and letting out a yell Meditite made the Seviper fly into the air making it only become a speck. Seviper flew down from the air and hit the ground with a large thud, fainting instantly.

“Great job meditite!,” Dave said trying to hug him, but he moved to the side and began meditating.

“Can’t you ever enjoy a win and not be so serious?”
Meditite ignored him as Numel went up to Daylena for a hug and made a goofy smile.

“Okay let’s get these herbs”

The twins quickly collected the herb and stuffed it into the there pocket. Making their way back it was already night and they could see a campfire burning brightly letting smoke fly into the air. Dave ran up to Jo and Dr.Nayla.

“How is she doing?”

“Not good, she has a horrible fever and the poison is spreading, do you have the herb?”

Jo looked horrible she was sweating and had blue tint, and her eyes were slightly open. Dr.Nayla took the herb and crushed it into a small ball and stuck it under Jo’s tongue.

“How long will it take?” Dave asked looking worried.

“I’m not sure it’s always different with each person, we should all just get some sleep and hope for the best.”

Everybody unpacked their sleeping gear and went to sleep, except Dave. He was up all night lying in his sleeping bag hoping that Jo would be okay. The Sun began to rise and the chirps of Swablu’s could be heard in the distance. Dave hopped out of his sleeping bag and looked for Jo, she wasn’t in her sleeping bag. Getting up he looked around for her and found her sitting against a tree with the Swablu she saved. He quietly walked up to her and sat down next to her.

“Guess what? Swablu decided she wants to stay with me,” she said kinda smiling.

“Yea that’s great…but are you okay?”

She looked to Dave.

“Yea I feel a lot better, guess I was kinda crazy hopping in front of Swablu.”

“No. I think it was very brave.”

She smiled.

“Brave…heh…Well im okay thanks to you and Daylena…thanks.”

Dave looked at her and they stared at one another, they began to lean in when they heard cracking branches.

“Hey guys! I thought something happened to you guys, stop being idiots.” Daylena yelled while minun pointed at them angrily.

The trainers went back to camp where they found Dr.Nayla making notes.

“Well I guess this is goodbye huh?” Dave asked.

“Yea, I wanna thank you guys for your help you helped me with my research a lot maybe I can make Swablu’s home safe again one day.”

“Yea, Hopefully, and thanks for all your help.”

The trainers said goodbye and continued their journey back on the path leading off from another adventure with a brand new friend.

Mancetric_Trainer
2nd November 2003, 02:52 PM
Episode 21: Quit bugging me

The wind is heavy, blowing across the tall grass and the trees. The sound soothes the trainers as they make there way through the tall grass that is thick and green. Finding a large open field near a small pond the trainers decide to take a small rest to just eat and talk.

“Everyone out!” Dave called throwing all of his pokeball’s into the air.

His pokeball’s spun in the air and softly landed in the short grass releasing his pokemon. His first pokeball let out his Meditite. Meditite looked around just glancing around at the area and found a small tree nearby, stepping near it he sat down and began to meditate. Dave let out a sigh at his serious Meditite and watched his Skitty come out his second pokeball. Skitty hopped around purring and began playing with a small round rock.

“Tropius, Swablu, Pelliper, come on out,” Jo said throwing up her pokeball’s to.

First Tropius came out of his pokeball; it let out a large screech and began flapping its large leaf wings. Pelipper came out second and also let out a squawk it then flew to the pond and began floating on the calm water cleaning its feathers. Lastly Swablu came out of his pokeball and instantly flew to Jo, sitting comfortably in her arms.

“I won’t forget you,” Daylena said grabbing her pokeball.

Holding the pokeball a red beam shot out the pokeball it forming into Daylena’s Numel.
The Numel starred into the space looking dazed out, it then looked to the left then it looked to the right and then smiled when seeing Daylena.

“Sorry Mightyena,” she said whispering to Mightyena’s pokeball.

Jo unpacked her pack and pulled out a blanket and a small assortment of food. She then put the different foods onto the blanket and sat down watching Plusle and Minun walking to Meditite. Plusle and minun began talking to Meditite in there little poke language, Meditite opened one of his eyes and quickly turned away from Plusle and minun ignoring them and continued to meditate.

“Peli! Peli!” Pelipper squawked as he playfully splashed water at Tropius.

As Pelipper continued to splash water at Tropius some of the water splashed toward Skitty. Skitty eyes bugged out from the sight of the water and began panicking and screaming. The panicking Skitty then ran toward the trainer’s picnic messing and thrashing about the food. Suddenly Swablu was freighted by the ruckus it then hopped out of Jo’s arms and also began messing up the small picnic. The trainers stood up as the food flew in different directions, Daylena ducked as a rice ball flew past her causing her pokeball to fall off her belt. The pokeball opened releasing Mightyena who growled and instantly charged toward Plusle and Minun.
“Mightyena no!” Daylena said seeing Mightyena charge toward Plusle and Minun who were still trying to talk to the stubborn Meditite.

As Mightyena neared the pokemon a sparkling dust flew through the air falling over Mightyena. Mightyena slowly stopped, it’s eyes drooping and then fell asleep letting out a loud snore. The trainers looking confusingly at the where the dust came from and saw a small boy and a vibrant butterfly pokemon hovering next to him.

“Uh thanks….,” Daylena said.

“Now who the hell are you?”

The very young looking boy smiled.

“I’m Eric, The insect gym leader.”

“Insect gym leader? I didn’t know there was an insect gym leader.”

“Well that’s because I’m a new gym leader, there a few new ones actually.”

“Still aren’t you a little…young to be a gym leader.”

“I get that a lot, I just look younger then I really am.”

“Well were trainers, where’s your gym?”

“Your in it!”

The trainers looked confusingly around.

“It’s a outdoor gym,” He said pointing to a sign that read Insect gym.

“Now since there’s three of you trainers how about a I use three pokemon and you each use one?”

“Actually she’s not a trainer, just a stalker,” Daylena said talking about Jo.

“Well, how about she battles anyway and I just reward you two badges?”

“Uh,” Daylena said before Dave cut her off.

“That’s would be a great idea!”

Jo backed up a little.

“I don’t know Dave, What if I mess up your gym battle.”
Dave shook his head.

“I’m sure you will do great!”

“Then it’s settled! Let’s begin”

Daylena grumbled as Dave and Jo made there way at the end of the field.

“So what pokemon are you gonna use? I say we use all are pokemon who might have an advantage over Eric.” Dave said.

“Well I guess I will use Swablu…. it’s a flying type and I would like to test it in battle.”

Daylena rolled her eyes and Jo noticed.

“I will use Plusle, Electric is good against most bugs.”

“And I’ll use Numel, fire is great against bugs.”

The Trainers took their places and waited for Eric choices. The rest of the trainer’s pokemon went and sat down looking like a small audience.

“Beautifly you’ll stay in and I’ll also use.”

Eric grabbed one netball and tossed it. The ball bounced onto the grass and released a pokemon that flew into the air. The pokemon was red and black and had small light blue wings. It’s antennae twisted on its head and a glowing light emitted from it’s back. The other pokemon formed into a large red and yellow pokemon with four wings flapping rapidly on it’s back. Jo pulled out her pokenav and pointed it to each of the pokemon.

“Beautifly has a long mouth like a coiled needle, which is very convenient for collecting pollen from flowers. This Pokemon rides the spring winds as it flits around gathering pollen.” The pokenav chirped after she pointed it at the butterfly like pokemon.

“If Ninjask is not trained properly, it will refuse to obey the trainer and cry loudly continuously. Because of this quality, this Pokemon is said to be one that puts the Trainer’s abilities to the test.” It chirped after pointed it at the four-wing bug.

Lastly she pointed it at the illuminating bug.

“With the arrival of night, Volbeat emits light from its tail. It communicates with others by adjusting the intensity and flashing of its light. This Pokemon is attracted by the sweet aroma of Illumise.”

“Okay now if your done analyzing my pokemon we can battle.”

“Fine! Numel ember!”

“You guys dodge that ember!”

Numel slowly looked at the hovering bug pokemon, after a few seconds he blew a flurry of flames at the bugs. The bugs let out a few squeals and hovered out of the way of the flames.

“Plusle quick attack!

“Numel another ember!”

“Swablu gust!”

Plusle dashed at Beautifly, a white streak behind him, leaping into the air Plusle crashed into Beautifly making it fly back considerably. Numel slowly lifted its head letting out another burst of flames, Ninjask and Volbeat dodging them once again. Swablu confusingly looked around as the pokemon continued to attack each other.

“What are swablu’s attacks,” Jo said quietly to herself.

“Let’s take out are weakness first guys! Volbeat use confusion ray on Numel and then Ninjask let out a fury swipes on it.”

“Plusle don’t let them, use spark.”

Volbeat turned around, it’s tail glowing, as his tail continued to glow brighter a bright light shot from it straight towards Numel, making Numel flinch back from the light. Ninjask then flew toward the now confused Numel extending its claws. Plusle charged at Ninjask while electricity sparked from his cheeks.

“Beautifly stun spore!”

Beautifly flew in front of Ninjask and began to flap its wings, a brown thick dust lifting from them; the dust floated and covered Plusle, stopping him in his tracks. Ninjask then reached Numel and began quickly swiping Numel across the face switching his claws from left to right.

“Numel hurry ember!”

Numel looked around confused as Ninjask continued to swipe it, Numel opened it’s mouth looking completely away from Ninjask and released a burst of flames straight into Plusle who was still paralyzed making Plusle roll back.

“Ahh! Jo are you gonna help us here!” Daylena said screaming.

Jo frowned and began to look through her Pokenav looking for Swablu’s moves.

“Beautifly use whirlwind then Ninjask use signal beam! On Numel!”

Beautifly quickly began flapping its wings tossing up dust and grass. The whirlwind grew larger, it quickly flew toward Numel as Plusle tried to break out it’s paralysis, the whirlwind struck Numel lifting it straight into the air, Numel screamed as it was tossed straight towards a tree, as Numel flew Volbeat was already charging up its tail, its tail let out a bright green and yellow beam that struck Numel as Numel just struck the tree, a brilliant light filled the area, as the light faded Numel laid there, fainted.

“Nu…mel, Jo this is your fault.”

“No time to blame people, let’s do this Jo.” Dave said seeing his Plusle finally out of his paralysis.

Jo nodded still unsure what she was going to do.

“Look there probably gonna go after Plusle next so get his back.”

“Ninjask sand attack!”

“Beautifly gust!”

Ninjask flew toward the ground buzzing, its wings kicking up a heap of dust directly into swablu’s and Plusle’s faces. As Plusle and swablu’s rubbed their eyes a large gust of wind picked them of there feet throwing them back causing them to slam on the ground.

“Beautifly stunspore!”

“Swablu, safeguard!”

Beautifly flapped its wings letting out another burst of the brown stun spore, the spore hovered toward the pokemon when a silver safeguard busted from Swablu making the stun spore vanish instantly.

“Wow finally she helped!” Daylena yelled now sitting with the other group of pokemon.

“Plusle thunderwave! Quick!”

Plusle cheeks sparked with electricity, squeezing them making a line of electricity lift into the air from his cheeks straight toward Eric’s pokemon. Ninjask quickly dodged the thunderwave in a blur of speed, while Beautifly and Volbeat were struck by it.

“Okay now that there paralyzed let’s take out Ninjask, it wont’ be easy, he’s fast.”

Jo nodded.

“Ninjask double team!”

Ninjask stopped in the air and quickly made copies of it’s self, them splitting one after the other surrounding Plusle and Swablu.

“Okay, Jo you start with one half and I’ll start with the other, Plusle quick attack!”

“Swablu peck attack!”

Plusle ran in one direction and Swablu went in the other quickly attacking the copies as they vanished when hit. Plusle quickly dashed into one of the Ninjask it vanishing; it quickly hopped into another this time slamming into the real Ninjask, pinning it on the ground.

“Over here Jo, Plusle spark!”

“Swablu, fury attack!”

Ninjask quickly shifted from under Plusle and lifted into the air when Swablu suddenly tackled it. Swablu let out a flurry of bashes; it’s beak slamming into it over and over into its soft flesh making Ninjask crash onto the floor once again. Plusle then quickly dashed into Ninjask, already charging with electric energy, causing the Ninjask to faint.

“Return Ninjask! Volbeat another signal beam! Beautifly gust!”

“Plusle dodge!”

“Swablu peck that Volbeat!”

As Volbeat’s tail began to glow Swablu quickly smashed it’s beak into it causing it to plummet to the ground below. Suddenly a gust of wind whipped up by Beautifly sent Swablu and Plusle rolling back through the gravel.

“Plusle finish Volbeat and Beautifly! Spark!”

Plusle got up and quickly dashed toward Volbeat. As electricity surrounded Plusle he tackled Volbeat sending him screaming and flying back straight onto it’s side. It then jumped into the air striking Beautifly making it also fall onto the ground.

“Volbeat moonlight! Beautifly Morning sun!”

Volbeat didn’t hear Eric’s commanded for he was already fainted but a large beam of light illuminated across Beautifly causing it to rise off the ground looking completely refreshed.
“Volbeat return! Beautifly silver wind!”

Beautifly began to flap its wing letting off a sparkling silver dust that flew quickly toward Plusle and Swablu almost as if it was a hurricane. The dust flew past and on Plusle and Swablu making them cringe from the unexpecting pain. Plusle and Swablu were now very weakened from the attack and looked as if they were about to faint. Plusle began to clench its fist and closed its eyes. Small sparks started to jump from his cheeks them soon gaining in size. Jo pointed her pokenav as they watched Plusle doing something they never seen before.

“Charge. A attack that Doubles the power of Electric Moves by saving and charging electric energy.”

Plusle opened its eyes, which let out a flash from his cheeks, a spark of electricity shooting through his eyes.

“Beautifly another silver wind!”

“Hurry Swablu use take down!”

Swablu quickly lifted into the air and did a complete nosedive slamming into Beautifly making it slam hard into the ground.

“Plusle spark!”

A complete orb of electric energy surrounded Plusle as he ran toward Beautifly. Beautifly struggled to get up when he was struck by Plusle sending Beautifly across the field complete buzzed with electricity. Skidding to a stop Beautifly struggled to get up and then quickly fainted.

“Oh no!” Eric yelled as he returned his Beautifly.

“That was fun! How about a rematch!”

Dave let out a fake laugh.

“Maybe next time.”

“Well okay here are two Sect badges!” Eric said handing Dave and Daylena each a metallic badge resembling a bee.

“You two showed great teamwork!” Eric said laughing from the excitement of the battle.

“What about me!” Daylena yelled.

Eric looked at her.

“You showed…,” he said trailing off.

“UG!” Daylena said marching back and sitting with the other pokemon.

“How about you help us finish are food Eric?”

Eric felt his stomach as it grumbled.

“That battle did take a lot out of me! Why not!”

Eric joined the trainers as they set back up their picnic. Now they one more badge closer to become champions. They also learned new lessons in teamwork and how important it can be.

Mancetric_Trainer
3rd November 2003, 10:08 PM
Hey thanks for the reply! Hopefully as you read on you'll see the diffrent improvements, thanks to everyone replies. You'll proably get a better idea and picture of the twins as you read on. Im still working on my grammar to :). I'll try to slow down I just get these random ideas write the story then post it, so i'll work on that. Also I'll make sure to check out your fic, I think I read the first few chaps already. Well thanks again for the reply!

Venasaur89
4th November 2003, 02:30 PM
Great going! I read all the way to the 7th chapter. The gym battles could be made longer, especialy Dave's. The whole ghost thing could be made longer as well. Well, look out for homonyms, and always use a punctuation mark before the quotation marks. Keep up with the description.

Keep it up!

I'll read more, probably in my keyboarding class!

and thanks for reading my story too. I hope that you will get more ideas from it. thanks

Mancetric_Trainer
5th November 2003, 07:54 PM
Hey thanks for reading more. I hope you continue you. Yea I like reading other fics, helps if I get a reading block.

Mancetric_Trainer
11th November 2003, 12:29 AM
Hey Im gonna need more trainers for upcoming chapters and leagues, so post away!

Name:

Age:

Gender:

Pokemon:

Personality:

Appearance:

SWAMPERT1
11th November 2003, 12:43 AM
How bout this for a sign up?

Name: Sean Seaside
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Pokemon: Walrien, Aggron, Sceptile, Blaziken, Salamence, Golem
Personality: Sean is a nice guy. he is just one of those guys that u would like to be around with.
Appearance: Like the main guy from R/S

Mancetric_Trainer
12th November 2003, 12:10 AM
Okay pretty good sign up. Though proably will end up in a futher epi are league.

venkou2
12th November 2003, 10:42 PM
Name: Venkou Wildes

Age: 16

Gender: Male

Pokemon: Crobat, Blaziken, Tyranitar, Swampert, Manetric, and A really strong Houndoom.

Personality: A very nice and caring trainer and he well travel with anyone for a short period of time, and then go off and find some more pokemon.

Appearance: A tall, Red Head wearing Navy Blue Sweats and a Long sleeve shirt with many different pokemon on it.

Dragon_Claw
13th November 2003, 04:19 AM
Name: Koji Sakira

Age: 13

Gender: Male

Pokémon: A Bellsprout and a Squirl (Squirl is ofcourse a squirrel Pokémon, looking like Rattata but brown with fuzzy tail)

Personality: Quite determined, sometimes gives some dumb reactions and wants to be the hero most of the time

Appearance: About 1.70, black goku-like hairs, a red shirt and grey pants.

Mancetric_Trainer
13th November 2003, 03:09 PM
Great more characters and replies! Venkou will appear a little later and koji will proably appear a little sooner. A new chap will be up soon.

Mancetric_Trainer
29th November 2003, 05:16 PM
Episode 22:Still Steel Stealing!


Another bright day for the trainers as they make they way up a grassy hill traveling to there next destination. A roaring river cascades down the hill that reflects the light from the sun that is high in the sky. Daylena and Dave are looking at there new badges after defeating the new bug gym leader. Not to far away was there next gym and even closer the closely guarded weather instutie.

“The weather institute?” Jo said reading the large letters on a large two story building not to far away from them.

“Wow you can read,” Daylena said laughing.

Jo rolled her eyes and saw a young looking boy being tossed to the ground by none other then Tal, the metallic triplet.

“Guys do you see what I see?” Dave said, plusle nodding.

The trainers agreed and ran toward the two as the boy began to cry.

“Give me back my Wailord!” The boy said crying on the floor.

“I have more important uses for you Wailord little boy!” Tal said smirking.

“Hey give him back his pokemon jerk!” Daylena said yelling.

“Oh look who’s here?” Tal said looking to the trainers.

Tal shoved a pokeball into his bag and brought out another one that was black in color.

“Go Lairon!” Tal yelled as the pokeball spun from his hand onto the ground.

Coming out the pokeball ball was a short silver gray pokemon. It was similar to aron with its glowing blue eyes and strong steel body. Though now it was larger with steel scales across his back that looked like a thick exoskeleton. Lairon grunted as began to dig his feet into the ground getting ready to attack.

“Plusle spark!”

“Minun you to!”

Plusle ran toward Lairon while sparking with power quickly being joined by Minun. The pokemon leaped into the air striking Lairon making it slide back a few inches. Lairon stood there seeming to be completely unaffected.

“Metal claw! Takedown!” Tal said laughing.

Lairon quickly raised onto two feet while it’s claw began to glow, coming down quickly Lairon swiped his claw across Plusle sending him flying back with tremendous force right onto the ground.

“Minun dodge!”

Lairon quickly turned to Minun ready for a take down; hopping forward he slammed onto the ground since Minun quickly hopped out the way. Lairon quickly turned around and went in for another take down this time Minun unexpecting it. Minun flew across the sky and quickly skidded to a stop a few feet away after being struck by the take down. The boy continued to cry on the ground when Jo grabbed one of her pokeballs.

“Pelipper go! Use water gun!”

Pelipper flew out the pokeball flapping its large wings. Looking at Lairon from the air he opened his large beak releasing a burst of water straight toward Lairon. To slow to dodge the water causing him to skid slowly back struck Lairon. From the force of it.

“Keep at it Pelipper!”

“Protect then iron tail!”

Suddenly Lairon was engulfed in white causing five stars to hover in front of him making the water gun spread to all sides protecting him. As the stars continued to illuminate Lairon ran toward Pelipper, jumped into the air, front flipped, tail glowing white, and slammed his glowing tail straight on Pelipper’s back making him slam onto the ground hard kicking up a heap of dust and debris. Jo gasped and ran up to her Pelipper who was fully knocked out.

“That will teach you to mess with steel pokemon!” Tal said as Jo returned Pelipper.

“Steel does have weaknesses! Go Numel!” Daylena said throwing a pokeball.

Numel shot out the pokeball and confusingly looked around slowly looking at it surroundings.

“Numel ember!”

Numel slowly looked to Daylena and smiled.

“Lairon mud slap!”

Lairon opened its mouth when a glob of mud shot out of it straight at Numel.

“Numel I said ember! Now! Now! Now!”

Numel slowly looked from Daylena and opened its mouth when it was struck the mud making Numel flinch.

“Skamory go!” Tal said tossing another pokeball.

The pokeball flew through the air and slammed on the ground releasing the tall steel bird skamory.

“Skamory use swift on them!”

Skamory lifted its wings and released several spinning stars that struck Numel, Plusle and Minun making them flinch further.

“Skamory use sand attack on her!’ He said pointing to Jo.

Jo looked surprised when a burst of sand was tossed into her eyes making her instantly blind. As she rubbed her eyes Skamory flung its head into her making her flip on it’s back.

“Okay lets go!” Tal said screaming.

Tal returned his Lairon and ran across a bridge with Skamory who still had Jo on it’s back. Running further he disappeared into a thick wall of tall green grass.

“Are you okay!” Daylena said running up to Minun.

Minun looked at to her and had several bruises all on its body. Looking to Numel she could also see that he was hurt badly. Grabbing two pokeballs from her bag she held both in one hand.

“You guys better rest up,” she said as Minun and Numel returned into their pokeballs.

“You to Plusle,” Dave said returning his badly hurt pokemon.

Looking around they could see that the boy was still on the ground crying. The twins got up and walked to the crying boy.

“Who are you? What happened? Dave said asking calmly.

“I’m…im…Dwight, I was letting my Wailord take a little swim when that guy popped out of no where. He said he wanted my pokemon so I returned him and tried to run but he pushed me and took my pokeball,” he said still crying and sniffling.

“Well come with us, will get your pokemon back.”
Dwight stood up rubbing of his clothes.

“I’m not allowed farther then this area since my dad works at the weather Institute so can you please save my Wailord, please?”

“Will do are best…he has are friend to.”

“You mean your friend,” Daylena said speaking up.



In a different area Tal and Skamory walked deeper into the thick grass when they found a small damp area. Skamory hopped making Jo fly off onto a rotten log scraping her knee.

“What do you want with me!” Jo said scared.

“I think you know don’t try to play dumb with me girl.”

“Look so I read a few Braille writings! That doesn’t mean anything!”

“Oh but it does! No one can read but you.”

“Why is it so important? Why did you steal his pokemon?”

“From what we know we need certain pokemon to help open to the chambers we also need to be able to read the writing on these chambers to release,” He was suddenly interrupted when he heard something rustle in the grass.

“Skamory guard the area so I can go check it out.”

Skamory nodded and began to peck at the ground as Tal shifted into the tall grass. Slowly looking through her pack she found Swablu’s pokeball. Grabbing it she quietly released Swablu who began to chirp. Motioning it to stop she began to whisper to it.

“Swablu im in trouble so fly up and find the others and try to lead them to me ok?”

Swablu jumped up and down and lifted into the air flying over the tall grass.

“It was nothing.” Tal said coming back through the tall grass startling Jo.

“Heh I already told you to much.”

“You know you are hurting people right? Whatever your going after must be important!”

“Yet it is, I think world control is important.”


The twins continued to travel through the tall grass looking for any signs of Tal are Jo. The sun was begging to set and the twins still didn’t’ see any signs of them. Sitting down to rest in a clear opining they began to think they might not find her today are not soon anyway. A calm chilly wind blew across the tall grass making it all sway in unison looking like a wave from an ocean. Suddenly the sound of rustling grass began to be heard near the twins. Dave stood up as he saw the grass breaking down toward him as if something was about to walk out. Daylena was scared and began to back up and suddenly feel into a shallow pond. The grass continued to bend when it reached the opining where it stopped. Slowly coming out the tall grass was a sleek white sleek dog looking pokemon. It had red beady eyes and a sickle like sword curving out of its head. It tail also seemed to be sharp that stuck straight into the air.

“A Absol!” Dave shouted happily.

“I always wanted one…”

Soaking wet Daylena slowly looked into the shallow water and was suddenly pulled under which went unnoticed by Dave. Dave slowly brought out his meditite’s pokeball and tossed it while Absol gazed at him.

“Meditite use confusion!”

Meditite slowly opened his eyes, which were glowing purple, slowly raising his hand he shot a blast of confusion at Absol who didn’t even flinch from the attack.

“Meditite he’s a dark type use hi jump quick!”

Meditite stood up and ran toward Absol, hopping into the air he brought out his leg getting ready to kick him when Absol hopped to the right causing Meditite to crash hard onto the ground.

“Meditite try again!”

Absol leered at Meditite as he struggled to get up making his striking fear into Meditite. Absol then charged at Meditite with its jaw open getting ready to bite him. Unable to react Absol sunk his sharp teeth into meditite’s body making him shudder and then quickly faint. Dave returned his Meditite and tossed out his skitty’s pokeball. Daylena resurfaced from the water and began to punch at the thing that was pulling her beneath the water. The water began to fly everywhere as Daylena began to kick the thing that was till trashing around. Soon the water stopped and Daylena grabbed an empty pokeball and tossed it the water.

“Skitty use sing!”

Skitty sat down and began to let off a soft melody while swaying back and forth. Absol quickly hopped back then flew forward in a swift quick attack that knocked Skitty off its feet. Absol then quickly closed its eyes making two copies of itself then three then four continuing to use double team.

“Skitty faint attack!”

Skitty knelled down sticking its tail into the air, swaying it back and forth slowly. Absol stopped making copes of it as Skitty continued to its tail back and forth. Absol soon became frustrated and ran toward Skitty making the copes disappear, just as Absol came close Skitty jumped into him tackling him on his back.

“Tail whip! Growl! Double slap!”

Skitty brought its tail around straight into Absol’s feet making its head hit the ground. It then let out a loud growl making it close it’s eyes. Skitty then brought its tail back then let out a flurry of hits across Absol’s face.

“Finish with a tackle!”

As Absol dizzily tried to stand up Skitty charged into it making him fly a few feet back. Dave grabbed and empty pokeball and through it at Absol. The pokeball began to shake furiously around the ground as Dave looked on. The Pokeball hopped a few more times then stopped with a soft ting.

“Yes I caught it!”

“Congrats!” Daylena yelled soaking wet.

“What happened to you!” Dave said looking at her confused.

“I was just attacked by a giant fish! I gave it a nice butt-kicking and caught it.”

“Daylena I think your suppose to leave the battling to the pokemon.”

Suddenly the grass began to rustle again.

“Not again.”

Coming out the grass hopped Swablu.

“It’s a Swablu, no it’s Jo’s Swablu.”

Swablu motited the twins to follow her deeper into the grass. Lifting into the air Swablu began to fly away.

“Let’s go Daylena.”

The twins followed Swablu through the grass as Swablu slowly flew over it. It was now dark and the moonlight flowed through the tall grass. Swablu landed and began to hop and down. Looking through the grass Dave saw Lairon and Skamory guarding Jo while Tal laid sleeping on the ground.

“Skitty go use attract Lairon and Skamory,” Dave said whispering quietly.

Coming slowly out the grass with her tail swaying back and forth Skitty stepped in front of Skamory and Lairon. Skamory and Lairon gazed at Skitty and instantly feel in love with her.

“Okay I will use my new water pokemon against them!” Daylena said grabbing the new pokeball.

“Are you sure that’s a good idea?”

Daylena tossed out her pokeball it bouncing in front of Lairon and Skamory. The pokeball shot out a beam of white light that formed into round red blue and yellow pokemon. The fish looking pokemon had two sharp fins protruding from its head and large red eyes. Looking around it let out a “Carvanha!”

“Carvanha! Tackle those steel pokemon!”

Carvanha hopped up and down and looked to Daylena. It then looked to the steel pokemon who were still be entranced. It then looked to Skitty and tackled her making her skid across the ground.

“What!” Daylena said screaming.

Suddenly Skamory and Lairon were broken out there trance, which also woke up Tal.

“Huh what!”

Jo quickly hopped up and grabbed a thick stick. Swinging the stick back she struck Tal across the head making him slam face first into the ground.

“Tropius go!”

Tropius exploded out the pokeball and lifted into the air as his wings beat through the air.

“Tropius whirlwind!”

Tropius began to flap its large leaf wings kicking up a burst of wind. The wind began to pick up lifting Tal and his pokemon into the air slowly. Tropius began to struggle flapping its wings harder and harder making hurricane winds. Tal and his pokemon were tossed into the sky and flew into the roaring river and were quickly carried down stream, along with Wailord’s pokeball.

“Are you okay Jo?” Dave said walking up to her.

“Yea okay only a few scrapes and bruises.”

Skitty screamed as the hopping Carvanha chased it.

“Carvanha return!”

“Were did that thing come from?”

“Don’t worry about it,” said Daylena having another pokemon that didn’t obey her.

“What did they want from you?” Dave asked.

“Uh, um nothing! Just crazy I guess!”

“So they stole a Wailord and you for no reason?” Daylena asked.

“Yea I guess so,” Jo said nervously.

Dave raised his eyebrow not fully believing her.

“Well as long as your okay, though I’m sure Dwight will be upset.”

“Yea…well the next gym is pretty close we can always tell him later.”

“Gym!” Daylena yelled and began running through the grass.

Another adventure and more revealed would the future reveal more.

Mancetric_Trainer
17th December 2003, 08:11 PM
I have updated this in a while and had no replies in a while but Im gonna stick with this fic ti'll the end cause I enjoy writing it. ENJOY!


Episode 23: Flying never looked so good.

The trainers were up early and excited about their next gym battle. After all the events that have transpired they are ready to break them with a gym battle to take their minds off their worries. With Plusle and Minun in front they entered the gym, and were instantly surprised when a large flying pokemon whooshed over their heads.

“Wow look at that,” Jo said as her eyes glowed in excitement.

“Swa swa, “ Swablu chirped looking at the pokemon as it sat in Jo’s arms.

Jo’s eyes were set on a large Altaria, larger then other ones she saw before. The elegant pokemon floated through the air and landed next to a tall woman who began to pet it.

“Oh look Altaria, trainers,” the woman said as she continued to pet the Altaria.

“Your Altaria is beautiful,” Jo said looking at the woman.

“Thankyou, I’m sure your Swablu will be a great one soon,” she remarked back.

“Okay! Enough with the chitchat, where here for a gym battle!” Daylena yelled.

“My my, I see you really want to battle,” the gym leader said stepping forward a little.

Daylena stepped up and pushed Jo to the side.

“Yes I am, me and my twin bro actually. I ask if we can have a two on two battle,” Daylena said clenching her fist.

“A two on two battle? That sounds interesting but you do know that it takes much teamwork to pull of a two on two battle.”

“Yes I do know actually we already wiped out enough gym leaders for me to know.”

“Okay, I’m guessing the quiet one in the back is your partner,” she said pointing to Dave.

“Uh yea,” he said setting down Plusle.

“Well let’s get this thing started then shall we?”

The twins both nodded.

The trainers took their place across the large gym that was covered in blue marble.

“Dave what pokemon should we use,” Daylena said looking at her pokeballs.

“Well two of your pokemon don’t obey so that leaves you with Minun and Numel,” he said laughing a bit.

Daylena grumbled.

“Well Minun has the advantage but she probably suspects that, so maybe Numel.”

“Are you sure? Her pokemon look pretty strong.”

“Are you saying Numel isn’t strong,” she said raising one eyebrow.

Dave shook his head.

“I have a choice between Plusle, Meditite, Skitty and Absol.”

Both of the trainers began to ponder.

“Well as you said they would expect Plusle, and Meditite has fighting type mixture and Skitty normal type probably won’t go well, so I guess Absol.”

The twins nodded.

“Ready are we,” The gym leader yelled from across the gym.

“Yup,” Daylena yelled back.

Winona grabbed a pokeball from his side and tossed it next to her Altaria, the ball bounced and released a familiar pokemon, a large blue and white Peilpper.

“Nice,” Jo said holding Swablu.

Daylena looked to Jo and sneered making her jump up a bit.

“Ready begin,” Winona yelled.

“Absol quick attack!”

“Numel ember!”

“Pelipper quickly supersonic!”

Pelipper flew high into the air while Altaria watched on. Numel confusingly looked around about itself while Absol charged at Pelipper.

“Numel I said ember!”

Numel looked to Daylena and smiled then looked to the flying pokemon. Opining its mouth he let out a burst of random flames at Pelipper who dodged it easily. Pelipper then opened its beak let out a bizarre supersonic that reached Absol and Numel perfect. As the supersonic hit Absol it was instantly confused aswell as Numel. The confused pokemon began to wobble about and spin.

“Altaria, now! Dragonbreath!”

Altaria quickly lifted into the air after hearing the command and flew to the center of the gym. Opining it’s small beak a greenish purple gas rocked out of its mouth straight at Absol. The Dragonbreath flew through the air and slammed into Absol making it lift into the air and directly into the opposite wall. The Altaria then looked to Numel who was still confused and let out another dragon breath this time making Numel roll back several times.

“Altaria dragon dance!”

Altaria began to slowly zigzag through the air in a strange pattern, as Altaria continued the pattern it seemed pick up speed and its attack power raised. Altaria continued the dance while Absol and Numel struggled to get up.

“Come on Absol get up, use razor wind!”

“Numel us Amnesia,” she yelled wanting to raise his special defense.

Absol struggled to its feet; its razor sharp horn then began to glow a slight shade of green preparing for a razor wind attack. Numel then began to give blank expressions while using Amnesia. As Absol’s horn continued to glow he flung his head forward sending a slicing wind at Pelipper and Altaria. The wind first sliced through Peilpper sending it slamming to the ground. The wind then flew toward Altaria who quickly dodged it making it slam into the wall, which caused an explosion of smoke and debris.

“Altaria takedown!”

“Numel Magnitude!”

Altaria lifted into the air then quickly began to fly toward Absol. Absol began to run the opposite direction when Altaria slammed down upon the pokemon making it skid across the ground. As the hurt Pelipper lifted into the air Numel crunched down onto the ground causing a fairly strong magnitude earthquake only causing Absol to be tossed and not even touching the flying pokemon.

“No,” Daylena screamed.

“Altaria another takedown on Absol!”

“Pelipper use stockpile on Numel!”

Pelipper flew down from above and easily scooped up Numel into its mouth causing Numel to scream in fear. Altaria then did a spin in the air and flew down toward the hurt Absol.

“Absol quickly use slash!”

As Altaria swooped down upon Absol quickly jumped into the air and slashed Altaria right across the chest leaving a deep red cut. The Altaria crashed onto the ground as Absol landed behind it.

“Pelipper use swallow!”

“Numellll!”

“Altaria use fury attack!”

“Absol use double team!”

Absol closed its eyes preparing for a double team when it was struck by Altaria’s beak numerous times making it squint its eyes in pain. Absol began to dodge the hits but was quickly hit by some of the very quick hits. As Absol continued to try to dodge the hits Pelipper swallowed Numel deep into its stomach.

“Peilpper use spit up! Then water gun!”

Pelipper flew through the air and suddenly spit up Numel who plummeted to the ground below. Pelipper then shot a blue stream of water that crashed into the Numel making it crash into Absol, which tossed them both into the wall.

“Altaria Dragonbreath!”

:”Pelipper watergun!”

Pelipper flew up next to Altaria and shot a big burst of water into Absol and Numel who were already badly hurt, Altaria then shot a burst of Dragonbreath straight into Absol and Numel forming with the water into a power burst of energy.

“That’s enough you two,” Mary yelled.

Altaria and Pelipper flew back next to Winona, which revealed a badly beaten and fainted Absol and Numel.

“Numel no!” Daylena yelled as she ran to her Numel.

“I’m sorry I had to be so rough but you pokemon wouldn’t be beaten easily,” Winona said returning each of her pokemon.

“Yea yea yea oh please,” Daylena said petting her fainted smiling Numel.

“Absol,” Dave said falling to his knees next to his pokemon.

“You are strong and smart trainers but you must learn about teamwork it’s the key you guys need. Come battle me again when you guys realize that,” Mary said walking through a back door.

“Whatever!,” yelled Daylena as she walked away.

“Well we lost this gym battle but will try again,” Dave said returning his Absol.

“Yea thanks you to,” Daylena sad under her breath.

“What?” Dave asked.

“Thanks to you I said, you didn’t even try to show teamwork!” Daylena shouted

“Me? You were just doing your thing!” Dave shouted back.

“Oh please you thought my Numel wasn’t going to do good from the start that’s probably the reason,” she said returning Numel.

Plusle and Minun began to look sad as Daylena and Dave continued to argue.

“I just didn’t think it was a good choice, but I did try to show teamwork! Something you should work on!” Dave yelled almost not knowing how too.

Daylena rolled her eyes and picked up Minun.

“Whatever, I’m gonna go help my pokemon lets go Minun,” she said walking away.

Minun began to yell to Plusle who was yelling back.

“You go and do that!” Dave said picking up Plusle who was still yelling to Minun.

Daylena exited the gym when Jo put her hand on Dave’s shoulder.

“It’s okay I’m sure you guys will do better next time,” she said lightly.

“If there is a next time,” he said looking back to Jo and going to the exit.

“This is all my fault Swablu, I broke them up from the beginning…. If I could only tell them about me…my past…. My future.”

“Swa swaaa,” Swablu chirped back.


A gym battle lost, will the twins be able to get it back together, will Jo reveal more to be the group back together? Find out next time on their next adventure.