Rate my Yu-gi-oh deck pls. OH NOES!

[Andrew]

Umm.. .first TcG post ever... this is my deck. I beat CCC with it :) ANd I'm playing the YuGiOh Worldwide edition so any suggestions please keep them relevent to the game

Monsters:

Wood Remains
BEWD
Dark Assailant
Dark Magician
Dunames Dark Witch X 3
Giant Soldier of Stone X 3
Gazelle the king of beasts
Kojikocy
Man Eating Treasure Chest
Millenium Golem
Mystical Elf X 2
REBD
SPirit of the Harp X 2
Summoned Skull

Effect Monsters

Man Eater Bug
Witch of the Black Forrest
Dark Magician Girl
Shadow Ghoul
Penguin Soldier
Magician of Faith
GIant Rat X 2
2 Copycats

Magic Cards

Change of Heart
Dark Hole
Dark Magic Ritual
De-Spell X 2
Exchange
Fissure
Giant Trunade
Graceful Chaity
Goblin's Secret Remedy
Monster Reborn
Mystical Space Typhoon
Ookazi
Raigeki
United we stand
SORL
Sabek's Blessing

Traps

Crush Card X 2
Destruction Punch
Goblin Fan
Magic Cyl.
Magic Jammer
Metalmorph
Negate Attack
Royal Decree
Shadow Spell
Trap Hole
White Hole

Ritual Monsters:
1 Magician of Black Chaos.

There we go.. my deck :) Suggestions please and try keep it so that I can get it in game.

[DarkTemplarZ]

pretty damn bad. Has no theme, ****ty monsters, no high Level 4 attackers outside of Dunames, REBD and Dark Magician, nuff said there.
None of the staple monsters except witch (Cyber Jar, Fiber Jar, perhaps Jinzo).
Too many cards to restore LP, missing Pot of Greed and Card Destruction.
Way too many traps, half of them worthless, and you actually run MoBC outside of a Dark Magician deck, which is impossible to build in the current english enviorment? o.O

[Last Exile]

I drew no monsters in that game Andy, except the one you stole when you used Exchange. Anyway, it was a good win you had. Still, seriously, this deck would be crushed in a tounrye. This advice is your own good.

Wood Remains - Adios
BEWD
Dark Assailant - Adios
Dark Magician - Adios
Dunames Dark Witch X 3 - Bai
Giant Soldier of Stone X 3 - Bai
Gazelle the king of beasts - Adios
Kojikocy - Adios
Man Eating Treasure Chest - Worthless
Millenium Golem - No way
Mystical Elf X 2 - Bai
REBD - No way
SPirit of the Harp X 2 - Bai
Summoned Skul - Bail

Andy, pick a theme if you can. I guess you want a beatdown. 2 more BEWDs. And any 1800 L4 monsters you can get. gemini Elf if you can get it.

Effect Monsters

Man Eater Bug
Witch of the Black Forrest
Dark Magician Girl - Nope
Shadow Ghoul - Nope
Penguin Soldier
Magician of Faith
GIant Rat X 2 - Nope
2 Copycats

Another MoF, a Sangan, a Cyber Jar, 2 Lord of D's, some Kycoos, some Spear Dragons, and Jinzo.

Magic Cards

Change of Heart
Dark Hole
Dark Magic Ritual - Bai
De-Spell X 2 - Bai
Exchange
Fissure - Bai
Giant Trunade
Graceful Charity
Goblin's Secret Remedy - No
Monster Reborn
Mystical Space Typhoon
Ookazi - No
Raigeki
United we stand
SORL
Sabek's Blessing - No

Much better here though. Get Snatch Steal, Mage Power, Heavy Storm, another Graceful Charity, 2 more MSTs, 2 Flutes of Summoning Dragon.

Traps

Crush Card X 2 - Only if you want a burn or gravity bind deck
Destruction Punch - no
Goblin Fan - maybe
Magic Cyl.
Magic Jammer
Metalmorph - no
Negate Attack
Royal Decree
Shadow Spell - no
Trap Hole - no
White Hole - no

Replace with Mirror Force, Call of the Haunted and Torrential Tribute

Ritual Monsters:
1 Magician of Black Chaos. - No ritual monsters! Only Relinquished is worth it.


Your deck isn't the worst, but it needs work. Good luck, Andy. ;)

PS. Get online in the evenings! I want that rematch! You did ask for the rematch. And I did beat you a few times before that. It's not like my deck sucks.

[Andrew]

Yeah, my tactic is to basically use high defenders to make people lose their LP before in turn using them to summon powerful attackers.

And the Wood Remains and Dark Assailant are there for the Crush Card.

Shadow Goul is quite powerful IMO near the end of a duel.

Giant Rats are used to bring in the pitiful attackers with high Defence.

Oozaki and Goblin's Secret Remedy are great starting moves too. lol.

Thanks for your suggestions, they're really quite helpful. Please keep them coming.

And I'm keeping my dark witches. They rule :)

[Wergoheb]

Crap:

Wood Remains
Dark Magician
Gazelle the king of beasts
Kojikocy
Man Eating Treasure Chest
Millenium Golem
REBD
Dark Magician Girl
GIant Rat
Copycats


Giant Trunade
Goblin's Secret Remedy
Traps

Crush Card

Magician of Black Chaos.

and as for the Giant Rats, and why bring in a high defense earth monster (i am assuming giant soldier of stone) when it is summoned on the field in attack mode?

Ookazi is only mediocre, even in a burn deck.

a light deck sounds about right...


Blue Eyes
Dunames Dark Witch X 3
Giant Soldier of Stone X 2
Soul Of Purity And Light x 2
Witch of the Black Forrest
Penguin Soldier
Sangan
Cyber Jar
Magician of Faith x 2
Shinning Fairy x2
Hoshinigin x2
White Magical Hat x2

Magic Cards

Change of Heart
Dark Hole
Swords Of Revealing Light
Pot Of Greed
Raigeki
Harpies Feather Duster
Graceful Charity
Monster Reborn
2 Axe Of Despair
Horn Of The Unicorn
United we stand
Mage Power
2 Mystical Space Typhoon
Sabek's Blessing
2 Luminus Spark

Traps

Magic Cylinder
2 Magic Jammer
Mirror Force
dna surgery


i don't completely remember how a light deck goes anyways...
i think dreamsprite may have been in it. *shrugs*