Drade130
19th July 2003, 12:53 PM
Here's a fic i spent some time on. It not very good. but read it ya?
Chapter 1:
"Vulpix I choose you!" My trusty fox appeared from her pokeball, ready for fight. Across from me, a young boy wth a Croconaw ordered his attack.
"Croconaw, this will be simple, water gun!" He yelled.
Simple huh? We'll see.
"Dodge it and counter with ember," I ordered. Vulpix leapt nimbly into the air easly dodging the jet of water and spurting embers into the crocodile's eyes. He stumbled back, roaring with anger.
"Now, use quick attack!" Vulpix charged forward at lightning fast speed, slamming into the little blue beast's stomach, causing him to wheeze and fall to one knee.
"Now end with OVERHEAT!" I roared dramactically. Vulpix jumped into the air and blew fire around, creating a raging twister of red flames. Croconaw screamed, getting sucked into the tornado and being continully twisted inside the flames. Vulpix barked angrily, coming to halt and sending Croconaw to his trainer's feet, severely charred and unconcious. The young trainer sighed and returned the fried gator, and came over to congratulate me.
"Good battle. That Vulpix is strong! I'm Logan by the way," he said, holding out a hand for me to shake. I took the token a gratitude.
"Yeah me and Vulpix have been together for a long time. I Blaine," I said. Logan's eyes opened as wide as hubcaps.
"The Blaine?" He asked, "from the Cinnabar gym? I thought you were older," He shrugged, making me grin because I got that a lot.
"No, he's my Grandpa, and when I get back from Lavaridge I'm gonna become gym leader. I'm goin there to see my sister, Flannery. She's gotta couple of pokemon for me to take back," I said, seeing the questioning look on his face. Suddenly, a voice came over the ship's P.A. system.
"Attention, the H.M.S Sharon will be arriving in Rustboro Port soon. Please- What the hell?" She screamed loudly and suddenly i saw why. Huge storms appeared. I returned Vulpix and grabbed a different pokeball.
"Go Nidorino," I said, releasing my only pokemon cabaple of swimming.
"Hang tight pal, this looks wick...ed," I said slowly, seeing a gigantic wave coming our way. I yelled and grabbed onto Nidorino. The dark blue wave came crashing down on the deck, sweeping us away in the riptide. I hung on to Nidorino tightly, who was swimming for dear life. We went underwater briefly and I swear i drank half the ocean. We surfaced again and i tried to look around. The rain clouds weren't letting up. People were getting sucked down the the ocean depths the mammoth ship, which was now half way underwater. i saw a life raft with a few people hanging tight and tried to get that way. Suddenly, the raft was struck by a giant pole from the ship, killing all on board and sinking the little raft.
"OH MY GOD!" I screamed. The blood was very horrifying. Nidorino steered (or tried to) toward a very small life raft. Inside it was Logan, who was pierced throught the chest by a large shard of glass, which was still stuck in him. He was dead. Nidorino used his powerful horn to throw him out and we jumped inside. I couldn't believe it was happening. Suddenly something struck me from behind.
"Hey!" I muttered, going unconcious...
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terrible eh? oh well.
Chapter 1:
"Vulpix I choose you!" My trusty fox appeared from her pokeball, ready for fight. Across from me, a young boy wth a Croconaw ordered his attack.
"Croconaw, this will be simple, water gun!" He yelled.
Simple huh? We'll see.
"Dodge it and counter with ember," I ordered. Vulpix leapt nimbly into the air easly dodging the jet of water and spurting embers into the crocodile's eyes. He stumbled back, roaring with anger.
"Now, use quick attack!" Vulpix charged forward at lightning fast speed, slamming into the little blue beast's stomach, causing him to wheeze and fall to one knee.
"Now end with OVERHEAT!" I roared dramactically. Vulpix jumped into the air and blew fire around, creating a raging twister of red flames. Croconaw screamed, getting sucked into the tornado and being continully twisted inside the flames. Vulpix barked angrily, coming to halt and sending Croconaw to his trainer's feet, severely charred and unconcious. The young trainer sighed and returned the fried gator, and came over to congratulate me.
"Good battle. That Vulpix is strong! I'm Logan by the way," he said, holding out a hand for me to shake. I took the token a gratitude.
"Yeah me and Vulpix have been together for a long time. I Blaine," I said. Logan's eyes opened as wide as hubcaps.
"The Blaine?" He asked, "from the Cinnabar gym? I thought you were older," He shrugged, making me grin because I got that a lot.
"No, he's my Grandpa, and when I get back from Lavaridge I'm gonna become gym leader. I'm goin there to see my sister, Flannery. She's gotta couple of pokemon for me to take back," I said, seeing the questioning look on his face. Suddenly, a voice came over the ship's P.A. system.
"Attention, the H.M.S Sharon will be arriving in Rustboro Port soon. Please- What the hell?" She screamed loudly and suddenly i saw why. Huge storms appeared. I returned Vulpix and grabbed a different pokeball.
"Go Nidorino," I said, releasing my only pokemon cabaple of swimming.
"Hang tight pal, this looks wick...ed," I said slowly, seeing a gigantic wave coming our way. I yelled and grabbed onto Nidorino. The dark blue wave came crashing down on the deck, sweeping us away in the riptide. I hung on to Nidorino tightly, who was swimming for dear life. We went underwater briefly and I swear i drank half the ocean. We surfaced again and i tried to look around. The rain clouds weren't letting up. People were getting sucked down the the ocean depths the mammoth ship, which was now half way underwater. i saw a life raft with a few people hanging tight and tried to get that way. Suddenly, the raft was struck by a giant pole from the ship, killing all on board and sinking the little raft.
"OH MY GOD!" I screamed. The blood was very horrifying. Nidorino steered (or tried to) toward a very small life raft. Inside it was Logan, who was pierced throught the chest by a large shard of glass, which was still stuck in him. He was dead. Nidorino used his powerful horn to throw him out and we jumped inside. I couldn't believe it was happening. Suddenly something struck me from behind.
"Hey!" I muttered, going unconcious...
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terrible eh? oh well.