An original Pokémon manga ^_^!

[Pan]

My friend Maddie and I started to work on our own Pokémon manga, in the world of Hoenn. It's about a little girl named Lani who gets her first Pokémon, Eevee, as a birthday present for her 10th birthday. ^_^ Maddie did the odd numbered pages (1, 3, 5) and I did the evens (2, 4). We're still going, so I'll update when we get some more done!!! I hope you like these!!!

Page 1 (by Maddie)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2498815

Page 2 (by me)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2498894

Page 3 (by Maddie)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2498923

Page 4 (by me)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2505823

Page 5 (by Maddie)
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2505858

[SmearGal]

I'm surprised nobody's replied to this yet! ^-^'

Anyway, this is very good. I like how both of you drew the Eevee. I do hope you're continuing this...

I give it...9/10. Oh, and I know this would be a hassle, but maybe some color could liven it up a bit? Lol.

~Smear

[Iveechan]

YES!!! MANGA!!! NOT ANOTHER SPRITE EDITING THREAD!!!

Ahem, anyway.... yes, it's very cute. I hope there's some action soon ;D It doesn't need color since manga's are b/w anyway. Oh, you know what'd be really cool? A color cover!

[geoff]

Oh, this is the BEST! I find it to be funny, especially the "thoughts" (like 'What do I Win?). I LOVE IT!

[Pan]

Thanks a lot for the comments! ^_^ Yeah, I started a color cover awhile ago but haven't been getting around to completing it. Anyway, here are the latest pages:

Page 6 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2513415

Page 7 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2534032

Page 8 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2534085

Page 9 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2539198

Page 10 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2539149

Page 11 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2545443

[Vex 47]

Really nice and enjoyable manga! It's a mix of comedy and action. Can't wait for the next parts!

[Iveechan]

XD

XD

XD

So there's a trainer who questions the cruel art of Pokemon catching! Lol, she's gonna freak when she faces another trainer! I think you got page 9 and 10 mixed up...

[Pan]

Heyo! Sorry for the long wait, here's the next two pages!

Page 12 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2579864

Page 13 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2580388

Thanks for all the comments, it really means a lot to us! ^_^

[Crystal Mew]

Aww, thats a funny/cute manga! =D

Keep up the good work => me like it. lol

[Chicoslavocia's Revenge]

WAHHHHH!!!!! That's so cute!!! Both of your styles are so much alike, I can't tell who's drawing what page Oo

Yay, I likes it a lot!! If you continue it, I'll be sure to be here!!

~Chico

[Iveechan]

Lani shoulda seriously done some research prior... but I guess there wouldn't be any fun in that. And her mom kinda forced her to start the journey. Poor thing.

*laughs some more*

[Katie]

lol, this is one of the cutest mangas I've ever seen ^_^! I love the azurill, and the eevee is adorable too. it looks as though the last few frames were drawn in a hurry, they look a little sloppy :/ otherwise it looks perfect. this is one of those stories that could go on for a loooooong time, you'd better keep posting more of this >:o! ^_~

~Katie

[Pan]

Thanks!! And sorry for the long wait ^_^; Here's the next pages.

Page 14 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2632785

Page 15 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2632814

Page 16 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2632855

Page 17 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2632901

Page 18 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2635281

Page 19 (by Maddie):
http://deviantart.com/view/2635337

Hope you like! :D

[Mew Master]

AWWWWWEEEEE!!!! SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!

ack... sorry, caps lock was on...

Very Cute.... I'd love to see how you draw a Mew ^_^!

[Cheesey]

They are excellent, I love it all! They are really cute and really well done.

I haven't seen much manga stuff before, but I'd love to see more ^^;;;; It's a good idea to post something like this here when it's got so many sprite editing threads =o

Anyway, keep up the good work ^_^;

[Pan]

Thanks ^_^! Got the 20th page for you, here it is:

Page 20 (by me):
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2648293/

Unfortunately Maddie is away at Otakon, so page 21 might be awhile.

[Enile Zemula]

Oh. I wuv comics.:)

*reads*:o

Perty Eevee. I really like the story line. Reminds me of Ash, but way better.;)

:(Wahhhhh! It's not fair. *sniff* I wish I could draw comics. I can't even draw at all...:P

[Vex 47]

That last page is definately one of the cooler ones. I just love the style. I eat up every page you turn out as fast as I can whenever you guys draw new ones. Can't wait for more!

[Mew Trainer Rose]

Aww, how cute! funny little newbie with cute pokemon. ^_^ I can't wait to see more. :)

[Pan]

Sorry for the huge wait! Here's page number 21. ^_^

Page 21 (by Maddie):

http://deviantart.com/view/2716836

Edit: And.. here's page 22!

Page 22 (by me):
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2727841/

[Enile Zemula]

NO! *Grabbs Little and Sugar* *Getts beaten up.* X.x

Next piece, please. I'm adicted to this.^^'

[Iveechan]

Woah... that last oen had very impressive line work and action scenes ^_^

[Pan]

Wheee! Thanks for the comments ^__^ Here's page 23!

Page 23 (by Maddie):
http://www.deviantart.com/view/2761372/

Enjoy~!

[Enile Zemula]

LOL. Cyute.:P I really like this story line. The art is still awesome. Please make the next page soon. Please?

[Pan]

Thanks! Page 24 is here.

Page 24 (by me):
http://deviantart.com/view/2793991

[Iveechan]

Make her catch Shroomish! Breloom is 00ber cute!

[Gravy]

Heh, I'm not usually the kind of person that can read a cute manga, but in this case I've made an exception ;)
Its been great so far, and I love both artwork and storyline (page 22 rocks! That last panel is definatly the best :yes:).
I like the way Little imitates his/her trainer, and how hopelessey...erm, hopeless Lani is at pkmn training ^_^0
Keep up da good woikness.

[Pan]

Thanks ^_^ Well, I'm back at home, and Maddie and I will be able to make more pages now that we're back in the same county and all. But in my spare time I've been making these random comics to make fun of Pokémon Red and Blue-- don't get me wrong, I love the games to death, but they sure say some silly things. ^-^ This comic's entirely by me, like I said, it's just something I do when I'm bored.

Clefairy Boy - page 1:

http://www.deviantart.com/view/2187873/

Clefairy Boy - page 2:

http://www.deviantart.com/view/2861572/

Hope you like ^_^

[ralts_mudkip]

Ahahahahaha!!! That most reacent comic is hilarious! I bet it would be better if I could see the first page though... And I can't wait for an update on that other comic!

Keep up the good work. :wave:

[Pichu]

Originally posted by ralts_mudkip
...I bet it would be better if I could see the first page though...

I've fiddled around devianart and I found the link for the first page...

http://www.deviantart.com/view/2817873/

Anyway, I somewhat prefer Lani's comic better :yes:

erm.. um.. Keep up the good work! :) (can't think of anything else better to say...--; )

[Nuriko]

Yay, it's so great to see something other than Sprite topics and whatnot, I agree. ^^; I hope they're just a phase, though... anyway, I love this manga! I just finished reading it! ^_^ You two are amazing! Your styles are so alike, but enough so I can still tell the difference... like you do different noses, for example. ^^; Lol, leave it to me to actually notice that. O.o; Anyway, the plot is great, as well as the characters and the artwork is awesome! ^_^ I love how Little mimics, that's so cute. ^^ And Sugar and Spice... aaw, great idea. ^_^

Oh, and that Clefairy Boy you posted was hilarious! Those are exactly some of the thoughts I was having when playing Red and Blue, lol. ^_^ I hope you post more of both comics soon... I've become addicted... need... more... x__x

[Gravy]

lol, gotta love that humour in the Clefairy boy manga :D I like it when people poke fun at the logic of the old pokemon games. Hmmm, I was thinking of doing summinc similar ages ago, but with the GS rival and his default name ( ???).lol, keep it up, its great fun to read ^_^

[ChobiChibi]

OMG! So kawaii! ^_^ I need more! I wish i could do manga like that... Keep it up! It's funny!