Chicoslavocia's Revenge
4th August 2003, 05:31 PM
Hello Fanfic Board... It's been so long since I've been here x.x
BUT, I am ready to show TPM my fanfic again, and see if anyone's willing to read it.
It's called The Songs of Eternity, and this is Book 1, The Song of Winds. (I REALLY like the words 'The' and 'Song' ^^)
Yeah.. I wrote this a while ago, and I'm almost finished with the first book... I've just sorta lost inspiration for writing the other books, but hopefully that will change ^^
Neeways, here's the prologue, which now that I read through it.... Uh, don't ask =^^=
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The Song's of Eternity - Part I - The Song of Winds
The small iron bullet was rushing towards Lugia's head in reality, but in his mind he saw the metal slowly creep toward him-- almost not moving at all. He looked past the bullet to see the man who had shot it. A bright crimson 'R' burned memories into his mind, awful memories at that. He could hear a scream... A screeching sound from the bullet... A different scream also met his ears. It was the loud barking of Suicune... Lugia's one and only love. As his fate drew nearer, his lifetime memories broke out of his control-- his control was chain that he was able to keep strong for hundreds of years......
~ "Repeat after me.... 'Aaa, oooee iiooa nnanaaaa.'" Lugia's mother took his small wing in hers, gracefully creating a dance, a dance to go with a crucial song to Lugia's life. The beautiful notes that echoed from his mother's voice were the sad-tuned notes to the Song of Winds. This song was heard rarely by any Pokemon. No human had ever heard of it, so naturally they didn't know that it existed. Lugia knew though, even at youth, that the Song of Winds was used to keep all of nature's weather at peace. When the sad echoes of the song's birthplace faded from the mountains..... oceans.... prairies of the world, disaster struck... Typhoons, volcanic eruptions, hurricanes... They rarely happened at once, but they did almost every hundred years. Lugia had never witnessed this happen, so his knowledge would have to grow before he could be trusted with the melody.
"I'm gonna learn this song so well, I'll be able to out sing you in it!" Lugia triumphantly told his mum, the bright rouge sunset reflecting happiness into his eyes. His mother laughed at his growing ego... She had always taken joy when he told her things like this, it almost made her forget her coming death... Her eyes saddened as she watched the first star appear in the fading sunlight. Bright amber clouds streaked the twilight, but they soon faded to a drab grey. An eerie glow shot out from the mountains as the moon rose. It was breath taking.
"Keep patiently learning, my child. It is time for mommy to go to sleep, as you can see from the moonlight." She took a last glance at Lugia before raising her magnificent wings and gracefully diving into the darkened ocean below. Lugia watched her shadow slowly merge with the calm water. His eyes met with the moon once more.. He stared at the beautiful silver light as it reflected deep into his mind..... ~
Lugia turned to look at the bright moonlight. It looked the same as the moon did on that night, but this moon was different. It gave him a menacing laugh as it watched him die. It slowly took in his thoughts, and his denial. Blinking away, Lugia thought more of the song he had learned on that day. He remembered it well. He knew that in his life he would never forget it, because it was they key to the nature of the world. After his mother passed away, he was the only holder of the key. She knew that she was going away soon, so she rushed in teaching him the song, and the natural balance of singing it was almost lost.
He finally noticed the bullet, inches from his head, still crawling, but slower now. He knew what it meant. He was to let his mind release another memory into his eyes. The bullet slowly faded away from view.....
~ Lugia looked down at Suicune's hunched figure. She was trying to hide something important, but the constant drops on the sand hid nothing. Lugia knew that Suicune brought him there to tell him something that she knew wasn't true. They both knew that it wasn't true. Lugia took his wing and gently wiped a tear from her eye, bringing her face up to look at him.
"Lugia…" her voice was a hoarse whisper, so sad, yet still the most beautiful thing he had ever heard. "I… I… We… We can't be together anymore." She bent her head, staring at the ocean waves behind the two of them. Lugia brought her eyes to look into his once more. Shaking her head, Suicune sat down on the ocean sand, her magnificent tails waving in the wind.
"Suicune… I have loved you ever since I first caught sight of you. You know we are meant to be together." Lugia slowly crouched down, and sat beside her on the cold wet sand, staring out at the dark ocean waves, illuminated barely by the darkened moon.
"Yes, I never thought it would end this way. I thought that they would understand, and that we could live happily, with children…" She stopped abruptly, then continued.
"Lugia. I love you, and I know that you love me. We just can't… Can't be together… I'm sorry." And as she said that last word, her image rose up to meet the moonlight. The word echoed through Lugia's head repeatedly as he watched Suicune stop at the water's edge, foam crawling over her feet.
She gave him one last look of sorrow before she plunged down into the water. ~
The bullet had now crept inches to Lugia's head, a red glow forming on the edge of it. A faint echo of barking burned into his mind... It was Suicune, fiercely fighting with the Rocket's who were shocking her with metal poles, and trying to take her egg from inside the cage she was trapped in. She snarled as she bit one of the poles at the tube, shocking her mouth painfully. Whimpering, she fell onto her face, bitterly giving in to defeat. The Rocket men quickly grabbed the small red egg.
"It is our egg." Lugia thought in his head, a rage forming onto his face. His focus then strayed back to the bullet. He was trying to use his powers to speed it up, but it just crawled slower. "No. There is nothing more to live for. Why can't death come any sooner?" He thought, his mind spinning. He thought of when his mother had to suffer the same death when they had shot her. All he remembered was that it was great pain for him, seeing them raise the gun, then a second later, her limp body.
The bullet was so close to his forehead, he could feel it now. It's metallic surface gouged a hole oh his delicate skin even before it touched him. Within moments of his life, he suddenly turned to look at Suicune once more.
The last thing Lugia saw in his life, was Suicune. The bullet hit him through the side of his head.
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Sorry that it's so short ._. I was used to writing one page chapters back then... But that might change..
So, tell me what you think!! (or don't, I don't mind, either way)
~Chico
BUT, I am ready to show TPM my fanfic again, and see if anyone's willing to read it.
It's called The Songs of Eternity, and this is Book 1, The Song of Winds. (I REALLY like the words 'The' and 'Song' ^^)
Yeah.. I wrote this a while ago, and I'm almost finished with the first book... I've just sorta lost inspiration for writing the other books, but hopefully that will change ^^
Neeways, here's the prologue, which now that I read through it.... Uh, don't ask =^^=
--------------
The Song's of Eternity - Part I - The Song of Winds
The small iron bullet was rushing towards Lugia's head in reality, but in his mind he saw the metal slowly creep toward him-- almost not moving at all. He looked past the bullet to see the man who had shot it. A bright crimson 'R' burned memories into his mind, awful memories at that. He could hear a scream... A screeching sound from the bullet... A different scream also met his ears. It was the loud barking of Suicune... Lugia's one and only love. As his fate drew nearer, his lifetime memories broke out of his control-- his control was chain that he was able to keep strong for hundreds of years......
~ "Repeat after me.... 'Aaa, oooee iiooa nnanaaaa.'" Lugia's mother took his small wing in hers, gracefully creating a dance, a dance to go with a crucial song to Lugia's life. The beautiful notes that echoed from his mother's voice were the sad-tuned notes to the Song of Winds. This song was heard rarely by any Pokemon. No human had ever heard of it, so naturally they didn't know that it existed. Lugia knew though, even at youth, that the Song of Winds was used to keep all of nature's weather at peace. When the sad echoes of the song's birthplace faded from the mountains..... oceans.... prairies of the world, disaster struck... Typhoons, volcanic eruptions, hurricanes... They rarely happened at once, but they did almost every hundred years. Lugia had never witnessed this happen, so his knowledge would have to grow before he could be trusted with the melody.
"I'm gonna learn this song so well, I'll be able to out sing you in it!" Lugia triumphantly told his mum, the bright rouge sunset reflecting happiness into his eyes. His mother laughed at his growing ego... She had always taken joy when he told her things like this, it almost made her forget her coming death... Her eyes saddened as she watched the first star appear in the fading sunlight. Bright amber clouds streaked the twilight, but they soon faded to a drab grey. An eerie glow shot out from the mountains as the moon rose. It was breath taking.
"Keep patiently learning, my child. It is time for mommy to go to sleep, as you can see from the moonlight." She took a last glance at Lugia before raising her magnificent wings and gracefully diving into the darkened ocean below. Lugia watched her shadow slowly merge with the calm water. His eyes met with the moon once more.. He stared at the beautiful silver light as it reflected deep into his mind..... ~
Lugia turned to look at the bright moonlight. It looked the same as the moon did on that night, but this moon was different. It gave him a menacing laugh as it watched him die. It slowly took in his thoughts, and his denial. Blinking away, Lugia thought more of the song he had learned on that day. He remembered it well. He knew that in his life he would never forget it, because it was they key to the nature of the world. After his mother passed away, he was the only holder of the key. She knew that she was going away soon, so she rushed in teaching him the song, and the natural balance of singing it was almost lost.
He finally noticed the bullet, inches from his head, still crawling, but slower now. He knew what it meant. He was to let his mind release another memory into his eyes. The bullet slowly faded away from view.....
~ Lugia looked down at Suicune's hunched figure. She was trying to hide something important, but the constant drops on the sand hid nothing. Lugia knew that Suicune brought him there to tell him something that she knew wasn't true. They both knew that it wasn't true. Lugia took his wing and gently wiped a tear from her eye, bringing her face up to look at him.
"Lugia…" her voice was a hoarse whisper, so sad, yet still the most beautiful thing he had ever heard. "I… I… We… We can't be together anymore." She bent her head, staring at the ocean waves behind the two of them. Lugia brought her eyes to look into his once more. Shaking her head, Suicune sat down on the ocean sand, her magnificent tails waving in the wind.
"Suicune… I have loved you ever since I first caught sight of you. You know we are meant to be together." Lugia slowly crouched down, and sat beside her on the cold wet sand, staring out at the dark ocean waves, illuminated barely by the darkened moon.
"Yes, I never thought it would end this way. I thought that they would understand, and that we could live happily, with children…" She stopped abruptly, then continued.
"Lugia. I love you, and I know that you love me. We just can't… Can't be together… I'm sorry." And as she said that last word, her image rose up to meet the moonlight. The word echoed through Lugia's head repeatedly as he watched Suicune stop at the water's edge, foam crawling over her feet.
She gave him one last look of sorrow before she plunged down into the water. ~
The bullet had now crept inches to Lugia's head, a red glow forming on the edge of it. A faint echo of barking burned into his mind... It was Suicune, fiercely fighting with the Rocket's who were shocking her with metal poles, and trying to take her egg from inside the cage she was trapped in. She snarled as she bit one of the poles at the tube, shocking her mouth painfully. Whimpering, she fell onto her face, bitterly giving in to defeat. The Rocket men quickly grabbed the small red egg.
"It is our egg." Lugia thought in his head, a rage forming onto his face. His focus then strayed back to the bullet. He was trying to use his powers to speed it up, but it just crawled slower. "No. There is nothing more to live for. Why can't death come any sooner?" He thought, his mind spinning. He thought of when his mother had to suffer the same death when they had shot her. All he remembered was that it was great pain for him, seeing them raise the gun, then a second later, her limp body.
The bullet was so close to his forehead, he could feel it now. It's metallic surface gouged a hole oh his delicate skin even before it touched him. Within moments of his life, he suddenly turned to look at Suicune once more.
The last thing Lugia saw in his life, was Suicune. The bullet hit him through the side of his head.
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Sorry that it's so short ._. I was used to writing one page chapters back then... But that might change..
So, tell me what you think!! (or don't, I don't mind, either way)
~Chico