Try at drawing manga... o_o

[Shadow Trainer Ash]

This is a try I took on drawing manga.. or, doujinshi (fan manga) to be exact. Like I mentioned in one of my previous threads, I have a FFVII doujinshi coming out very soon which I'm making with a friend (It's my biggest project ever, and it's taken us over a year to get everything straightened out), so I began practicing putting together manga on the computer. The problem is that they look more like manga than doujinshi X_X oh well

Since this is my first time doing this, it's pretty bad. You also have to realize how hard this was ^^;; Every image was seperate from one another, and had to be put together, plus editted, cleaned, shaded, toned, ect. ect. Plus the text was a pain. Anyway, this is a short doujinshi I'm working on for practice about Cloud and Zack. It's an AU, and is based on Japanese mytholgoy inc ertain aspects


http://tainted-wings.net/page1.jpg


This page was completed... my first ever doujinshi/manga page put together on comptuer. I hope it's alright for a beginner, at least >___o


http://tainted-wings.net/page2_1.jpg


This si part of page 2. The bottom came out... very mutated considering the cut pictures, so I need to redo some of the sketches again. I also need to clean up the picture and shade everything in a bit