Mystic Latios
1st October 2003, 06:02 PM
So what happened to the other fanfic? Well I started to dislike the story, since it just isn't origonal. I wanted to type up an origonal pokemon fanfic story for this forum. I'm aiming for this to be a horror story, since it is October. Plus, This will probably be rated PG-13. Well I hope you'll enjoy this first chapter.
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Spiritual Night
-Chapter 1-
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The sun was slowly starting to hide itself behind the mountainous peaks to the west of the small river valley covered in a lush rainforest. The gigantic trees were stretching their thick branches towards the last specks of sunlight, before the cold night came upon them to form frost on their oval green leaves. The small roses and daisies that covered the forest floor were slowly closing their petals, preparing for the cold night while trapping some insects that were trying to get a small snack of their sugar sweet honey.
Small, silver glittering stars started to sparkle into the quickly darkening sky. The thick clouds were slowly turning into a small mist in the blood freezing atmosphere, and quickly cleared away for the pokemon to get a good view of the night sky approaching. A small gust of wind blew through the branches as the sleeping Beautifly slowly woke up from their slumber to see the soon coming spectacle.
The large group of Beautifly started twitching their antennas and started flapping their rainbow-colored wings to warm them up for their flight. The Beautifly‘s tube-like mouths started sucking a little honey and pollen from the large apple blossoms on the trees, eating all the food they could get before their big trip. Their wings started glowing like a bright aurora borealis as they slowly lifted off of their resting spots and took flight. The small, scaly black flaps around the edges of their wings lifted up as pollen started flowing out of them and floated along in the wind, looking like glowing fireflies riding the wind currents.
They were slowly flying towards the south while their small insect bodies were climbing higher and higher into the air. They emerged out of the forest and above a large field, covered in six inch tall grass. The field was surrounded by the forest trees and had a small river flowing its pure, crystal clear water along the east side of the field.
Near the center of the field was a small village, named Usoitar, that had the same architecture look like nineteenth century Japanese buildings. In the center of the town was a three story building, where the ruler of the town worked and lived. Surrounding it were large food stands and stores, waiting for the last of their customers to purchase their goods and close the shops for the night. Only the medical building stayed open for the night, in case of any late night accidents for the village’s healer to take care of.
The homes, which surrounded the town, had a large peak roofs covered in tube-like shingles and had small, wooden porches surrounding them. Black smoke billowed out of the chimneys as some family members opened the sliding doors made of birch wood and pearl white cloth, like the walls, and sat at the porch steps, admiring the wondrous view of the Beautifly flying overhead. Forming into the night sky over the flying bug pokemon, was a vast aurora borealis, lighting up the night sky with a large arrangement of colors like a light show. The flying bug pokemon’s wings were now glowing the same, vibrant color as the aurora.
Sakura Marla, a small eight year old girl, glazed at the amazing sight in awe with her soft, glistering sapphire eyes. Her long, white blonde hair hanged down to the top of her shoulders, and was waving in the sudden cold wind blowing in the night. She was wearing a silky white, long sleeve shirt along with a small, crimson dress that went down to her ankles. On her small feet were small sandals made from intertwining dried grass and sliced bamboo.
The moon shined its pale light on her tanned face as the entrance door behind her slid open. Her mother, who was wearing a long, silky crimson dress, lightly stepped out of the house, barely making a sound, and watched her daughter making a small smile while watching the spectacle above along with half of the village.
“It’s amazing.” Sakura exclaimed, turning towards her mother.
“Yes it is. And to think that if you missed it, you would have to wait another thirty years for it to happen again.” Her mothered sweetly answered while watching it too.
“Really? I never knew that.”
“Well you’re still young honey.” The mother started. “There is still a lot of things you need to learn.”
“When do I get to learn it all momma?”
“In a few years sweetie. In a few years.” Sakura’s mom dazed off, thinking how proud she would be seeing her studying the positions of the stars.
‘It’s the perfect job for her.’ she smiled to herself as she left her daughter on the porch steps. ‘Good thing she doesn’t know what would have happened tonight if it still occurred.’
Sakura fixed her attention back at the soon ending night show. She suddenly noticed that some Beautifly were flying away from the others and went to the western part of the forest. Curiosity got the better of her as she walked down her front yard and looked at her small Seedot. It had a gray shell on top of its brown, acorn-looking body along with a stem on top. Two small yellow circles were just below the gray helmet with small, topaz pupils that stared at her.
“Hello Seedy, want to take a small trip through the woods right now?” She smiled on the infant pokemon. It started squealing loudly with delight as Sakura wrapped her arms immediately around it.
“No Seedy. You can’t make any loud noises, or mom will catch us and then we won’t be able to go.” She whispered.
The baby Seedot quickly became silent as she trotted down the dirt path, trying to catch up with the speedy Beautifly. Sakura suddenly had no choice but to leave the path and ran down the short hill towards the western forest entrance. Her Seedot started to squeal softly with delight, thinking how much fun it was letting the wind past its face while watching the place where it would have lived if her trainer didn‘t find it abandoned. It turn to look behind Sakura’s back, noticing that wild flowers were growing and blossoming at where she stepped.
Her hair was wavering in the air like the ocean at the seashore as she was now suddenly starting to sprint, trying to catch up, trying to ignore her now aching feet. The moonlight barely lit the forest floor as she almost tripped on a small tree root that a small, hungry Paras pulled from the ground. It started feeding on the tips of the root while Sakura continued to run again in the now frozen ground, now further behind then she was before.
She suddenly felt a fear growing inside her that someone was stalking her right now. Her breath could be seen as a large puff of smoke coming out of her mouth, as the air temperature started to drop like a rock. She started shivering in the cold as she started seeing tons of glowing yellow eyes staring at her from the trees’ shadows with curiosity, which made her spine chill. Sakura quickly made a huge sigh of relief as she saw that the glowing eyes belonged to a flock of Hoothoot and Noctowl settling on the shadow covered tree branches.
‘What am I nervous about? Its just a bunch of bird pokemon that were glaring at me. Not some crazy person.’ She tried to convinced herself while trying to warm her hands up.
She wrapped her arms around her Seedot to keep it from shivering and from catching a cold, since it started to sneeze. It started to make a small whimper while making another sneeze. She started hoping that it wasn’t getting sick as another thought came to her head.
‘Where are they going? Are they going towards some other Beautifly to make them follow them? I can’t turn back now.’
She would soon find out the reason as she ran out of the forest and into a hilly field that she didn’t even knew existed near her home. She started squinted her eyes in the pitch black darkness to see where the dim moonlight was reflecting off of. Slowly, she began to see an outline of a huge village, with no hint that anyone was out tonight. The fairly large buildings looked as if it was slowly decaying like a corpse from the elements of nature over a long period of time.
She now also noticed that a pungent smell of death was in the air. She tried her best to cover her nose to not breath in the strong and aweful stench while holding her baby pokemon. The smell didn‘t go away as Sakura felt like she was going to suffocate.
‘What the hell is with that smell? And what is this place?’ She wondered along with her ever sickening Seedot. ‘Is this the mysterious cursed village that momma kept talking about behind her back?’
She suddenly felt goose bumps all around her arms as she suddenly had a feeling that she was being watched from the pitch black darkness around her. A strong gust of freezing wind, howling like a snarling wolf, suddenly rushed through her and into the field in front of her. It sounded as if it came from behind her and was going to attack at any time. Small , silky white snowflakes started falling down towards the ground, even though the sky was clear of dark clouds. Its as if the snow was coming from the aurora borealis. Or may be from something else.
The torches bordering the large dirt roads in the abandoned looking town started to lit up by themselves, giving the town a haunting glowing look. Candles, large and small, were lighting up by the invisible unknown. She started shivering from fright and from the ever lowering temperature. The stem on top of Seedot’s head started to form frost.
“Its that cold already?” Sakura asked herself, not knowing how to explain what was happening.
Sakura started hearing the voices of people in the village, but they weren’t sounding like they were just having friendly talk. The voices were screaming in agony and in misery, sounding sort of like the dying people in a war movie that could haunt your dreams for eternity. There were even the sound of children crying in agony, but not in pain as in torture. More like crying as if they were emotionally upset from what they were seeing.
“Okay I think its time to go back now.” Sakura shivered.
The baby Seedot in her arms suddenly heard something rustling in the forest behind it and her trainer, and was now squeaking to get her attention. A sudden, loud thump noise from behind alerted her as she quickly turned around and slowly widen her eyes at what she saw. A small, 14 year old girl sat on the now frost covered ground. She had long, very greasy dirty blonde hair and was only wearing a long, white nightgown with small frills on the collar and at the end of the sleeves.
“Are you all right?” She started questioning the girl while shivering from the deep cold that now surrounded her.
The eerie and creepy looking girl said nothing as she slowly started standing up on her bare feet. She had small spots of yellow skin spreading on her frost bitten feet. The girl slowly lifted her face, as Sakura starred in horror at the face hidden in her hair. She started to make a shriek that echoed into the air as the girl started chasing her. Sakura’s exit into the forest was now blocked, and she had no choice but to go into the ghostly village in fright.
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Spiritual Night
-Chapter 1-
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The sun was slowly starting to hide itself behind the mountainous peaks to the west of the small river valley covered in a lush rainforest. The gigantic trees were stretching their thick branches towards the last specks of sunlight, before the cold night came upon them to form frost on their oval green leaves. The small roses and daisies that covered the forest floor were slowly closing their petals, preparing for the cold night while trapping some insects that were trying to get a small snack of their sugar sweet honey.
Small, silver glittering stars started to sparkle into the quickly darkening sky. The thick clouds were slowly turning into a small mist in the blood freezing atmosphere, and quickly cleared away for the pokemon to get a good view of the night sky approaching. A small gust of wind blew through the branches as the sleeping Beautifly slowly woke up from their slumber to see the soon coming spectacle.
The large group of Beautifly started twitching their antennas and started flapping their rainbow-colored wings to warm them up for their flight. The Beautifly‘s tube-like mouths started sucking a little honey and pollen from the large apple blossoms on the trees, eating all the food they could get before their big trip. Their wings started glowing like a bright aurora borealis as they slowly lifted off of their resting spots and took flight. The small, scaly black flaps around the edges of their wings lifted up as pollen started flowing out of them and floated along in the wind, looking like glowing fireflies riding the wind currents.
They were slowly flying towards the south while their small insect bodies were climbing higher and higher into the air. They emerged out of the forest and above a large field, covered in six inch tall grass. The field was surrounded by the forest trees and had a small river flowing its pure, crystal clear water along the east side of the field.
Near the center of the field was a small village, named Usoitar, that had the same architecture look like nineteenth century Japanese buildings. In the center of the town was a three story building, where the ruler of the town worked and lived. Surrounding it were large food stands and stores, waiting for the last of their customers to purchase their goods and close the shops for the night. Only the medical building stayed open for the night, in case of any late night accidents for the village’s healer to take care of.
The homes, which surrounded the town, had a large peak roofs covered in tube-like shingles and had small, wooden porches surrounding them. Black smoke billowed out of the chimneys as some family members opened the sliding doors made of birch wood and pearl white cloth, like the walls, and sat at the porch steps, admiring the wondrous view of the Beautifly flying overhead. Forming into the night sky over the flying bug pokemon, was a vast aurora borealis, lighting up the night sky with a large arrangement of colors like a light show. The flying bug pokemon’s wings were now glowing the same, vibrant color as the aurora.
Sakura Marla, a small eight year old girl, glazed at the amazing sight in awe with her soft, glistering sapphire eyes. Her long, white blonde hair hanged down to the top of her shoulders, and was waving in the sudden cold wind blowing in the night. She was wearing a silky white, long sleeve shirt along with a small, crimson dress that went down to her ankles. On her small feet were small sandals made from intertwining dried grass and sliced bamboo.
The moon shined its pale light on her tanned face as the entrance door behind her slid open. Her mother, who was wearing a long, silky crimson dress, lightly stepped out of the house, barely making a sound, and watched her daughter making a small smile while watching the spectacle above along with half of the village.
“It’s amazing.” Sakura exclaimed, turning towards her mother.
“Yes it is. And to think that if you missed it, you would have to wait another thirty years for it to happen again.” Her mothered sweetly answered while watching it too.
“Really? I never knew that.”
“Well you’re still young honey.” The mother started. “There is still a lot of things you need to learn.”
“When do I get to learn it all momma?”
“In a few years sweetie. In a few years.” Sakura’s mom dazed off, thinking how proud she would be seeing her studying the positions of the stars.
‘It’s the perfect job for her.’ she smiled to herself as she left her daughter on the porch steps. ‘Good thing she doesn’t know what would have happened tonight if it still occurred.’
Sakura fixed her attention back at the soon ending night show. She suddenly noticed that some Beautifly were flying away from the others and went to the western part of the forest. Curiosity got the better of her as she walked down her front yard and looked at her small Seedot. It had a gray shell on top of its brown, acorn-looking body along with a stem on top. Two small yellow circles were just below the gray helmet with small, topaz pupils that stared at her.
“Hello Seedy, want to take a small trip through the woods right now?” She smiled on the infant pokemon. It started squealing loudly with delight as Sakura wrapped her arms immediately around it.
“No Seedy. You can’t make any loud noises, or mom will catch us and then we won’t be able to go.” She whispered.
The baby Seedot quickly became silent as she trotted down the dirt path, trying to catch up with the speedy Beautifly. Sakura suddenly had no choice but to leave the path and ran down the short hill towards the western forest entrance. Her Seedot started to squeal softly with delight, thinking how much fun it was letting the wind past its face while watching the place where it would have lived if her trainer didn‘t find it abandoned. It turn to look behind Sakura’s back, noticing that wild flowers were growing and blossoming at where she stepped.
Her hair was wavering in the air like the ocean at the seashore as she was now suddenly starting to sprint, trying to catch up, trying to ignore her now aching feet. The moonlight barely lit the forest floor as she almost tripped on a small tree root that a small, hungry Paras pulled from the ground. It started feeding on the tips of the root while Sakura continued to run again in the now frozen ground, now further behind then she was before.
She suddenly felt a fear growing inside her that someone was stalking her right now. Her breath could be seen as a large puff of smoke coming out of her mouth, as the air temperature started to drop like a rock. She started shivering in the cold as she started seeing tons of glowing yellow eyes staring at her from the trees’ shadows with curiosity, which made her spine chill. Sakura quickly made a huge sigh of relief as she saw that the glowing eyes belonged to a flock of Hoothoot and Noctowl settling on the shadow covered tree branches.
‘What am I nervous about? Its just a bunch of bird pokemon that were glaring at me. Not some crazy person.’ She tried to convinced herself while trying to warm her hands up.
She wrapped her arms around her Seedot to keep it from shivering and from catching a cold, since it started to sneeze. It started to make a small whimper while making another sneeze. She started hoping that it wasn’t getting sick as another thought came to her head.
‘Where are they going? Are they going towards some other Beautifly to make them follow them? I can’t turn back now.’
She would soon find out the reason as she ran out of the forest and into a hilly field that she didn’t even knew existed near her home. She started squinted her eyes in the pitch black darkness to see where the dim moonlight was reflecting off of. Slowly, she began to see an outline of a huge village, with no hint that anyone was out tonight. The fairly large buildings looked as if it was slowly decaying like a corpse from the elements of nature over a long period of time.
She now also noticed that a pungent smell of death was in the air. She tried her best to cover her nose to not breath in the strong and aweful stench while holding her baby pokemon. The smell didn‘t go away as Sakura felt like she was going to suffocate.
‘What the hell is with that smell? And what is this place?’ She wondered along with her ever sickening Seedot. ‘Is this the mysterious cursed village that momma kept talking about behind her back?’
She suddenly felt goose bumps all around her arms as she suddenly had a feeling that she was being watched from the pitch black darkness around her. A strong gust of freezing wind, howling like a snarling wolf, suddenly rushed through her and into the field in front of her. It sounded as if it came from behind her and was going to attack at any time. Small , silky white snowflakes started falling down towards the ground, even though the sky was clear of dark clouds. Its as if the snow was coming from the aurora borealis. Or may be from something else.
The torches bordering the large dirt roads in the abandoned looking town started to lit up by themselves, giving the town a haunting glowing look. Candles, large and small, were lighting up by the invisible unknown. She started shivering from fright and from the ever lowering temperature. The stem on top of Seedot’s head started to form frost.
“Its that cold already?” Sakura asked herself, not knowing how to explain what was happening.
Sakura started hearing the voices of people in the village, but they weren’t sounding like they were just having friendly talk. The voices were screaming in agony and in misery, sounding sort of like the dying people in a war movie that could haunt your dreams for eternity. There were even the sound of children crying in agony, but not in pain as in torture. More like crying as if they were emotionally upset from what they were seeing.
“Okay I think its time to go back now.” Sakura shivered.
The baby Seedot in her arms suddenly heard something rustling in the forest behind it and her trainer, and was now squeaking to get her attention. A sudden, loud thump noise from behind alerted her as she quickly turned around and slowly widen her eyes at what she saw. A small, 14 year old girl sat on the now frost covered ground. She had long, very greasy dirty blonde hair and was only wearing a long, white nightgown with small frills on the collar and at the end of the sleeves.
“Are you all right?” She started questioning the girl while shivering from the deep cold that now surrounded her.
The eerie and creepy looking girl said nothing as she slowly started standing up on her bare feet. She had small spots of yellow skin spreading on her frost bitten feet. The girl slowly lifted her face, as Sakura starred in horror at the face hidden in her hair. She started to make a shriek that echoed into the air as the girl started chasing her. Sakura’s exit into the forest was now blocked, and she had no choice but to go into the ghostly village in fright.