View Full Version : Another poem. I think Ill add to it later though.

Systematic Revolution
19th January 2003, 02:32 PM
By Nathan Burns

From the shadows of my rage
I turn another page
From the depths of my sorrow
More time I will borrow
In the darkness of my hell
I am locked within my cell
Chaos encircles me
I fall unto thee
To my knees, and I pray
that I live another day
In my pain, I shall break
others shall fall
tasting my hate
finding the truth
forgetting the lies
from darkness, it falls
uplifting the skies
Wrenching pain
Breeding hate
Bleeding me
Falling free
Deadly poison
courses through me
apacolyptic pain
corruption inside me
seeing right through thee

Actually, this is supposed to me more of a song. It would be sung Metallica style, to give you an idea :)


Shadowed Mewtwo
19th January 2003, 09:22 PM
Coolness! :P It sounds like a Char I have in my story... Really nice!^-^ I love the way your poems grasp emotions so well, and can't wait the read the new parts you add to it when/if you do!

Systematic Revolution
20th January 2003, 09:20 AM
Thank you very much. I am adding to it right now.