Gundam Wing: Endless waltz

[Goku_200]

Plot:It is the year after colony 200. Peace has been restored once again by the gundam pilots. But someone was plotting an attack on earth and on the gundam pilots. Peace will soon be disturbed, again.

Name:
Age:
Gender:
Looks:
Side:
Mobile Suit:
Weapons:
Gundam looks:
Place:(Earth,L1-l6)


Mine:

Name:Heero
Age:32
Gender:male
Looks:like heero
Side:Earths (Space Ops)(Yes, you can make an army)
Mobile Suit:Heavy arms kai
Weapons: same as heavy arms kai
Gundam looks:heavy arms kai
PLace:L1 (Leader of the Space Ops)

[MarillTogepi]

Hello and welcome to the RPG Forum :)

You'll need a LOT more in your plot to attract folks. Just that tiny little paragraph isn't going to do it, and you may not want to follow the original plot of Endless Waltz, as the great majority of folks around here have probably seen it. Also, some description for the placements of the suits would be helpful.

[Bulbasaur4]

Yes, you need a LOT more description and plot to your post. That way, the RPG will have more descriptive content and will add to the overall quality of the RPG.

Here are a few helpful tips when writing an RPG. Answer these questions about the plot when you type it up:

Where is the plot happening?
When is it happening?
Why is it happening?
Who is it happening around? (description describing these questions also help.)
How is it happening?
How can it be solved?
What is happening?
What can they do to solve it?
What must they do?

Etc..

Sorry, but I have to close this.