My Friends Yugi/Beatdown/ Dark Paladin themed Deck[YgO]

[SWAMPERT1]

well my friend gave me his deck to post and wants your help to fix it, i can see alot to fix so go at er'. BTW he wants to keep D.M,B.B, and Valkyrion. And remember the theme.

Fusion:
[1]Dark Paladin

[1]Dark Magician
[1]Buster Blader
[1]Valkyrion the magna warrior
[1]B. Luster Soldier

[1]Jinzo
[1]C.C. Magician

[2]Giant Orcs
[2]Archfiend Soldiers
[2]Kycoo
[1]Beta
[1]Gamma
[1]Alpha
[1]Old Vindictive Magician
[2]Magians of Faith
[1]Sangan
[1]Cyber jar
[1]Mask of Darkness
[1]Royal Lybrary
[1]Breaker the Magic Warrior
[1]Skilled White M.
[1]Skilled Dark M.
[1]WotBf
[1]Morphing Jar #2
[1]Gyaku-gire Panda


[5]Staples
[1]Feather Duster
[1]Heavy Storm
[1]Graceful Charity
[1]Mage Power
[1]United We Stand
[1]Poly
[1]Cost Down
[1] Emblem of Dragon Destroyer
[1] B. Luster Ritual


[1]Mirror Force
[1]Call of the Haunted
[1]Imperial Order
[1]Magic Cylinder
[1]Bottomless Trap Hole
[1]Ring of Destruction
[1]Barrel Behind the Door.

[SageofDarkness]

Ack! Far too unfocused. The chances of your friend getting Valkerion are slim. Though I would keep Valkerion as a primary monster.
Try this:

Fusion:
[1]Dark Paladin

[1]Dark Magician
[1]Valkyrion the magna warrior

[1]Jinzo

[3]Beta The Magnet Warrior
[3]Gamma The Magnet Warrior
[3]Alpha The Magnet Warrior
[2]Giant Rat (Yugi EVO deck)
[2]Mystical Sheep #1
[1]Sangan
[1]Cyber jar
[1]WotBf

[1]Monster Reborn
[1]Pot of Greed
[1]Change of Heart
[1]Dark Hole
[1]Raigeki
[1]Feather Duster
[1]Heavy Storm
[1]Graceful Charity
[2]Polymerisation
[2]Defusion Wave Motion
[2]Thousand Knives

[1]Mirror Force
[1]Call of the Haunted
[1]Imperial Order
[1]Ring of Destruction
[3]Waboku

That's a rough outline, i'll leave it to the proffessionals to fix further :wave:
p.s. Please rate my deck on the link below :P

[Last Exile]

Look, this is a mess. Seriously, go straight Dark Magician. Valkyrion is a joke and Dark Paladin is good but near impossible to summon. Only magical scientist fusions are worth it.

Try this:

Monsters: (17)

Dark Magician x 2
Dark Magician Girl
Skilled Dark Magician x 3
Magician of Faith x 2
Sangan
Witch of the Black Forest
Cyber Jar
Breaker the Magical Warrior
Tribe Infecting Virus
Exiled Force
D. D. Warrior Lady x 2
Sinister Serpent

Magic: (16)

Mystical Space Typhoon x 3
Thousand Knives x 2
Harpie's Feather Duster
Heavy Storm
Dark Hole
Raigeki
Monster Reborn
Premature Burial
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Painful Choice
Mirage of Nightmare
Card Destruction

Traps: (7)

Imperial Order
Call of the Haunted
Mirror Force
Torrential Tribute
Ring of Destruction
Magic Cylinder
Waboku


In the future, tell your friend to get hold of Black Magic Curtain and Dimension Magic. They're essential for a Dark Magician deck.

Hope this works. Focus on drawing as much as possible, dump your two DMs and DMG into the graveyard as quickly as possible via Painful Choice and Card Destruction. But if you get a skilled dark out early, use 3 magics ASAP to get DM out.

[The Muffin Man]

Originally posted by Citrus Crush Chikorita
Look, this is a mess. Seriously, go straight Dark Magician. Valkyrion is a joke and Dark Paladin is good but near impossible to summon. Only magical scientist fusions are worth it.


Somebodies never played a good Last Warrior deck...

[Last Exile]

Originally posted by The Muffin Man
Somebodies never played a good Last Warrior deck...


Okay, he could use Metamorphosis, but still, both Fusion materials are L7, so his deck would be hell slow.

Last Warrior is alright. Materials are low level and would go with Metamorphosis. Yeah, it could work. If i saw it work well in action, then I'd agree. Personally i think now tht Invasion fo Chaos is out, the Legendary Ocean/Legendary Fisherman deck is going to be really annoying with all those monsters that destroy magic and traps and can't be destroyed and so forth.

[DarkTemplarZ]

That wouldn't work either way, Black Paladin needs to be special summoned by a fusion. Last Warrior's nice though, he'd be kill in the right deck *lightbulb*

Anyway, deck's too slow, screw Valkyrion, he's useless enough even with a deck built around him. Paladin, feh, he's impossible in the English environment with the lack of fusion substitutes.

[Last Exile]

just remebered something.

Put in Dark magician of Chaos instead of Sinister Serpent. he really goes well with the Dark magician and will give you a necessarye dge if you keep him alive long enough.

[Dark-San]

Lolz... Yugi's deck nv work~ Its too slow and I would hav lots of trouble getting the cards out at the right time. Personally I would very much prefer your friend to stick with spellcasters' deck.

Remove Buster Blader. Though he is an important element in getting out Dark Paladin. He is still a tributed monster. Replaced him with Goddess of the Third Eyes. This would be a better bet.

My recommended deck:

Creatures [15]
Witch of the Black Forest
Sankan
DD Warrior Lady [2]
Tribe Infecting Virus
Sinister Serpent
Skilled Black Magician [2]
Dark Magician
Magic Warrior - Breaker
Fiber Jar
Magician of Faith
Black Magician of Chaos
Goddess of the Third Eyes
Magical Scientist

Magic [17]
Dimension Magic [2]
Pot of Greed
Graceful Charity
Mirage of Nightmare
Painful Choice
MST [3]
Heavy Storm
Harpie's Feather Duster
Raigeki
Dark Hole
Change of Heart
Snatch Steal
Monster Reborn
Premature Burial

Trap [8]
Imperial Order
Mirror Force
Torrential Tribute
Call of the Haunted
Ring of Destruction
Wabuko [3]

Heh one hell of a deck and an annoying one too with 3 Wabuko ;P