The POKéMON Trainer (Poem)

[Volbachutwotlepuff]

did this for english, thought you might like to see, enjoy!

He often stands there
with the wind in his hair
he is the boy called Ash Ketchum

With his Pikachu
He’ll defeat you
he is the boy called Ash Ketchum

he has fought with his heart
right from the start
he is the boy called Ash Ketchum

he goes though all pain
to help them to train
he is the boy called Ash Ketchum

now through Mewtwo he dies
you hear Pikachu’s cries
he was the boy called Ash Ketchum...

like it? if you do dial 9481 1111 (Pizza Hut Delivery ) or just give me feed back...

[soggy_cardboard]

YAY

thats a real good pokemon poem

got a nice beat

[mistysakura]

You actually handed that in? *clap clap*

[Volbachutwotlepuff]

wrote it last night, handed it in today, Miss Grzejszczak (my english teacher, we call her Miss G) said she loved my poem

[Powarun]

The writing was good, he was the boy called Ash Ketchum was a good catch phrase. LIke the part where Ash dies, Pika Cries, just wish it was the other way around, oh well. Cant believe you handed that in, that is amazing

[Volbachutwotlepuff]

whats amazing Powarun? the poem, the fact I handed it in, my teachers surname (Grzejszczak), or that i posted Pizza Hut's phone number (for some strange reason)?
also its great to have all this feedback!