The untold stories... (revised with a better plot)

[Charles Legend]

Hello and welcome everyone, you may remember that I begin to write a story by the same name, however I did not really have any real plot for that Fanfic. A while ago I got an Idea of using the story line from mega with some Anime as a base for this Fanfic however I also put some twist of my own in to this as well namely the genealogy of several of charters…

Pokemon: Clone Wars

Chapter zero: Vs. Horsea

1955

“I still Don’t see the point of coming to Birth Island mother, There is nothing out here but a weird Shrine rumored to be the resting place of a Powerful and evil Pokemon that able to take on four forms.” said a young five year old boy to his mother with his Meowth at his side, As they looked at the triangle shaped shrine, on the face of which were four triangles one Red, one Green, one Blue each with a grove in the middle of them, the final triangle was Black with a Purple gem in the middle of it,

“True, but according to the locals of the Sevii Islands, Mew once battled the Pokemon known to them as Deoxys who they worship as their god. Further more they say to free Deoxys you need the Ruby, Sapphire and Emerald the three sacred treasures of the Sevii Islands. Giovanni my son, I my not have all the pieces to this puzzle yet but it my dream that you well find a way to unlock Deoxys and make him a part of your team." Madam Boss said with an evil grin on her face.

As the Rocket scallop left with Madam boss and Giovanni and there pokemon, a young male rocket grout was left behind as he had been to busy reliving himself on a tree to notice the ship leaving without him that was until he turned around.

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1990

“Happy Birthday Silver my son, I caught this Sneasel the day I met your mother in the Icefall cave on four Island.

I know that he well make a fine starter for your team; As an added bonus his types reflects the fact that you, Silver are not only the son of the Viridian city gym leader who just so happens to run Team Rocket as well; But also the son of Lorelei the Queen of ice and a member of the Elite four.” Giovanni said proudly to his five year old red haired son, As they stood in front of a statue of Giovanni himself.

Giovanni let out a long sigh, and thought as he and silver walked outside the gym.

‘Though Silver chose to live with him, Lance Silver’s older brother chose to live with his mother on Four Island which is her home town.

Giovanni like his two red haired sons was born in Viridian city which is where his mother Madam Boss was also born, However his father was born in Blackthorn city in the Jotho regent.’

“Now Silver I well be sending you…” But before Giovanni could say anther word his cell phone rang.

“I am very sorry to disturb you Boss, but it was very important that I did; for you see The Mask of Ice is on his way to your gym from route 22 on a giant.... Ahhh!!!” A rocket grunt said but then the line went dead…

“Fool, you may have warned your boss of my arrival, however it well not help him that much unless he has gotten what I asked for, other wise…” Chuckled the man wearing black robe and an Icy blue mask riding on a giant Phoenix.

“Damn, Per... The mask of ice is on his way, and I still have not found the Artifact he requested yet!” Giovanni yelled and then crushed his cell phone.

“Who is the mask of ice, and what artifact? Sliver questioned his father.

“The Legendarily Time Flute, the mask of Ice wants it so he can summon the Mythological time traveling Pokemon Celebi. However, I have no clue why.” Giovanni said casually to Silver as if it was nothing to worry about…

“Giovanni you always were a fool, I mean you have become just as weak as your mother was. Since you have failed to find the Time Flute, I shall take your son Silver and his Sneasel as my prisoners! Percy said coldly.

Then the Phoenix Swooped down and Picked up Silver and Sneasel then the Mask of Ice flew south towards the Sevii Islands.

“Damn you Mask of Ice, I Swear I well get my son back, You evil rotten piece of Mankey Crud!” Giovanni angrily shouted after Percy as he shakes his fist in rage at the evil masked man, but could do little against the mighty powers of the Phoenix Percy has under his control.

"Boss, you do realize that the mask of ice is...." but before the badly burnt grunt could say anything else he fell to the ground dead woth a bullet wound in his forhead then faded away in to thin air.

"Fool I don't need a worthless clone to tell me that!" Giovanni said putting away his PP7.

Giovanni then let out a long sigh, and walked back in to his gym. Thinking as he pulled out another cell phone from his pocket.‘Lorelei my have taken Lance away from me, and the mask of Ice may have just kidnappedSilver, But at lest I sill have one Child left to call an hire to Team Rocket, yes I think she well do for the time being…’

A few Seconds later in the countryside of Cerulean city, Meowth picked up his cell phone off his belt.

“Hey yeah Boss!” Meowth greeted Giovanni.

“Shut up Meowth and lesion’ closely, Your first mission as a member of Team Rocket is to go to the Cerulean Orphanage and protect a ten year old girl named Jessie.Oh and one more thing failure is not an option…” Giovanni growled then Crushed the second cell phone.

Giovanni then scratched his Persian behind the ear, and recalled his tenth birthday and how his mother gave him a Meowth as his starter, as well as dragging the both of them to Birth Island.

Then Giovanni gave a chuckle as he looked at the Emerald that he found on five Island. it was on a Shrine dedicated to Celebi in the middle of the Chrono meadow, where he ordered his men built a Training complex for future recruits.

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Meanwhile on four Island…

“Happy birthday Blue.” Lance said as he handed his five year old cousin a Pokéball containing an Igglybuff.

“Ah, how cute, thank you Lance, but I wonder were Silver is?” Blue questioned.

Just then a badly beaten up Silver fell out of the sky on top of Blue.

“Sliver?!” Lance said in surprise as a giant bird landed in front of the three kids.

“Ah, so the rumors are true that Giovanni not only had one son but two, and a niece as well, I wonder if he has any more kids up his sleeve.” The Mask of Ice said, placing a mask on Silver and Blue faces. He then turned to Lance, but he had run away.


“No matter I got what I came for, come my children it is time we set a course for home.” The Mask of Ice chuckled as Silver and Blue climbed on to the bird under the influencet of the masks that they were forced to wear.

Lance watched in horror as both his brother Silver and his cousin Blue were kidnapped by the masked man. ‘I swear I well stop at nothing to rescue you Blue and Silver...’ Lance Thought as he watched hidden behind a rock with his Horsea at his side, which his mother gave him as a starter.
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[color=wheat]So yeah any feed back would be nice

~Charles Legend[color]

[Charles Legend]

The untold stories...

Chapter one: Vs. Pichu

1995

As the sun slowly sank west of Pallet, a small Electric rodent gnawed it’s way in to one of the many moodiest houses in this quit little town dark Thunderclouds gathered over head.

A ten year old boy named Ash Fireweed Ketchum, watched a match between a Nidorino and a Gengar, as small yellow and black mouse silently entered the room unnoticed and hid it‘s self behind the TV.

Then Ash’s mother Deliah Ketchum, walked in the room, and informed Ash to go to bed, but then tuned the Channel to Prof. Oak’s Televised announcement about tomorrow.

“Pichu!” sneezed the Electric mouse, however in doing so it accidentally released a Thundershock which blew up Ash’s TV, just as Prof. Oak was explaining what pokémon he would be giving out tomorrow.

“Pika is that you?” Ash questioned as he got up and checked behind the smoking TV.

Ash felt a small furry rodent that seemed to give off little jots of electricity confirming that it was indeed his pet that he helped his Grandpa create over the summer at his Grandpa’s lab on Cinnabar Island.

As Ash placed his Pichu on his bed, As his mother walked up to him.

“Ash, you should get some sleep, see you boys in the morning.” Deliah said then kissed her son good night and left the room.

Later that night Mimie teleported in to Ash’s room and created several light screens around the damaged TV.

Then Mimie spat on his glove like hands rubbed them together then placed them on the light screen box, The box then stated to glow and within a few seconds the light faded and reveled Ash’s TV looking as good as new.

Mimie Smiled that he had finally been able to practice his newly learnt move. Recycle, then the happy Mr. Mime teleported back to his bedroom.

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“Idiotic fool! I asked you to create me a Super pokémon not some worthless Rat that I can easily find in the Viridian forest” Giovanni Growled at Blaine.

“But Sir, I Genetically modified this Pichu to have Powerful Electoral attacks that can even defeat ground types. Blaine said to Giovanni.

“I don’t give a hoot about this Rat, I only care about the Mew Project.” Giovanni growled then threw the Pichu on the table out his office window.

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Pichu woke up and let lose a Thundershock, and woke Ash up.

Ash let out a sigh that the only thing he regents about creating Pika is that he keeps zapping ash awake with a thundershock every morning.
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Later after breakfast, Ash and Pika walked up to the door of Prof. Oak’s Lab.

However Ash and Pika were bouth knocked to the ground when a girl with long brown hair, dressed all in black came running out.

“I wonder who was that was?” Ash asked Pika.

“That was a thief, she stole the pokemon that I was going to pick! Gramps and Daisy are out at the moment. So if you came to get the last starter you well have to wait outside, On the other hand maybe you did not come for a starter after all. Gary Leafhopper Oak Sneered at Ash.

“Shut up Leafhopper, for your Information, I helped my grandpa create this Pichu.” Ash said as patted Pika on the head who thundershock him again.

“Damn you Fireweed stop calling me that! Anyways, I would love to play with you and your Rat sometime. However I need to get going. Gary Growled Angrily at Ash clutching his fist in rage.

Gary was thinking that Ash had some nerve to call him Leafhopper, It had been bad enough that for the last year he had to endure Chuck from Cianwood calling him by his middle name.

he was about to leave when Prof. Oak and Daisy walked out.

Ah, Ash your here, Gary we well talk about your rotten attitude later but it’s a good thing we caught you before you left, Ash and Gary please come in. Prof oak said then the two boys followed Prof. Oak and Daisy back into the lab.
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So how do you like that twist?

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

That was quite a twist to start a journey. The early description of Giovanni’s story among with Lance’s get this story started up well, although it seems Giovanni’s story seems a bit rushed. I think its weird that the thief got away and is then forgotten quickly by Gary and Ash. It is interesting to see that Ash already has a Pokemon, and the fact that he got it from his grandfather. I wonder if the identity of his father will be revealed? Maybe not, but it would be nice. :biggrin:

My, the spelling and grammars could use some working. A few spelling errors are done, such as ‘well’ instead of ‘will’, ‘woth’ instead of ‘with’ and ‘lesion’ instead of ‘listen’. And there were a bit sentences that I found quite strange:

The Mask of Ice said then placed a mask on Silver and Blue faces then tuned to lance but he had ran away.

It could be put as:

The Mask of Ice said, placing a mask on Silver and Blue faces. He then turned to Lance, but he had run away.

Favourite character so far… I guess its Lance, simply because he is a great trainer. Well, in the anime, anyway…

Well, you got the story starting well. The spelling and grammars could use a bit of improve, but other is good. I hope you can continue writing.:smilie:

[Charles Legend]

Ah yes, thank you for replying darktyranitar. As for Giovanni’s story goes I have only just Scratched the surface of it from what I have planed for him and his family….

Oh and the theft is not forgotten, she well show up around some time after Ash battles Brock but before Ash reaches Cerulean city, oops I said too much already….^_^;; Oh and a part of Pika’s story well becoming up shortly, as well as a gym battle between Blaine and Lance after that... As for Ash's father well let’s just say I have plans for him later on in the story.

Oh and yes I know the starters, the rat and Eevee are a little bit of a turn down, but as I am mostly the Anime/mega/games Charters with little twists in them I saw no harm in following their cannon teams mostly anyways…

Anyways thank for reading my story darktyranitar I really appreciate it, Anyways here is Chapter two, I hope you well enjoy it…

Chapter two: Vs. Bulbasaur

“Now Ash, Gary here are your Pokédexs, Daisy and myself were upstairs putting the finishing touches on them when we heard Gary cursing at a girl who apparently stole Squirtle. Although I still don’t see why Gary picked Charmander who has a type disadvantage.” Prof. Oak said as his Sparrow landed on his right shoulder with mail in his beak.

“Maybe against that Witch I do, however not against Fireweed here, who is my life long rival.” Gary sneered.

“Well with a rotten attitude like that your Eevee might not like you enough to evolve in to what you want him to little Brother.” Daisy kindly said as she handed Gary back his Eevee she had borrowed for a contest that was held a few days ago.

Gary frowned when he let Eevee out, Gary was degusted that his Eevee had won first place in the cute contest at the master rank.

“Thanks for the Pokédex Gramps, thanks Sis for returning my Eevee, however you can keep his ribbon. Gary said then took the ribbon off Eevee, who started to cry when Gary toke his ribbon.

“Gary your such a jerk, even to your own pokemon!” “Pichu!” Ash and Pika said angrily together at Gary.

“Is that a Challenge? Go Charmander!” Gary Smirked since Ash’s lone Pichu was out numbered by his Charmander and Eevee.

However Bulbasaur had been watching from inside his ball on the table, and tried to escape it but no one seemed to notice him.

“Oh for peat’s sake, Gary your so pushy as always. Ash remember what your Grandfather thought you about Pokemon battles.” Prof. Oak said then looked at Bulbasaur bashing around inside his ball, but did nothing about it but roll his eyes.

“But Prof. Oak all my grandpa and I did over the summer was work on cloning Pika from a Raichu’s son, As well as study the creation, I mean sheer we say pokemon Evolve but it‘s more like they are going threw a metamorphous.” Ash explained.

“Fireweed put a sock in that religious garbage, and let your danm Bulbasaur out so we can get this match started!” Gary growled angrily at Ash.

“Although on the other hand Grandpa did tech me a lot about Pokémon battles as well.” Ask said as he let out Bulbasaur, who he just now noticed.

“Eevee take down that Rat, Charmander fry that toad with a flamethrower!” Gary growled.

“Pika Charge up, Bulbasaur Protect yourself, then bash Gary’s Charmander with a skull bash. Ash said calmly.

As Eevee ran at Pika started to absorb static electric from the air, as Eevee hit Pika was knocked out, however Eevee was now moving much slower do to the fact that he was now Paralyzed because of Pika‘s Static ability .

Charmander then took a deep breath then shot out a large flame that hit an invisible force field, Bulbasaur then rammed Charmander hard in the gut with a powerful headbutt which sent Charmander into Eevee fainting them both.

“This is unbelievable, I picked the wrong pokemon!” Gary said as he fell to his knees; Then quickly got up and recalled his Pokemon, and walked out the door saying “Ash your still a losser, anyways Smell yeah all later I got get a move on...”

“Well look who’s taking Leafhopper.” Ash smirked as Gary stormed out of the lab cursing Ash under his breath.

“Congratulations Ash, I knew teaching you over the summer would help you stand to bullies like Gary.” Ash’s Grandfather said as he walked in to the lab followed by a powerful looking Megmar.

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Btw darktyranitar, I saw you joined the ASB smart move buddy…

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

Yeah, Gary got beaten! Such a mean guy, I felt sorry for his Eevee.

Anyway, I hope you don't make this story cliched and similar to the anime. There's a bit of error, and I hope you can get to that. Anyway, Ash seems smart with Pokemon battling, I'm sure he would do well with battles. I find his personality very interesting, I hope he will do well in future matches.

Hehe, yes I just joined the ASB. And the fic TPML is the main factor for me to join it. Anyway, I hope we can meet in ASB. And of course, the next chapter of this fic! :biggrin:

[Charles Legend]

yeah I like Gary being a jerk, and I have plans for his Eevee.

Trust me, I won't not if I can help it anyways. also some examples of what is wrong would be useful, but never the less I well fix any that are pointed out so don't worry.

About Ash being smart about Pokemon battling, it is just like Prof. Oak said Ash's Grandfather taught him about battle skills over the summer, which well be explained in the coming chapters. Also about Ash's personality, lets just say it has a lot to do with what I believe in... Oh Ash well win most of the time but he well also lose as well.

Ah yes Chris Fanfic, I should have known. And is that a Challenge darktyranitar?

Anyways the next chapter is some what of a filler but it dose explain a few things, it also has someone making a catch in it...

Chapter Three: Vs. Roselia


“Prof. Ketchum what a pleasant surprise, what brings you up from Cinnabar Island?” Prof. Oak kindly asked as he greeted the man.

Prof. Ketchum was the man, who first inspired Prof. Oak to become a Pokemon researcher forty years ago, in 1955 when Prof. Oak left on his own Pokemon journey with a Charmander that Prof. Ketchum gave him as his starter.

“Oh well Deliah invited me over for diner. Since I won’t be able to spend any time with Ash or my daughter for the next few weeks, because of a certain project and because of my gym leader duties, although I can’t wait to see how Ash will fair against the master of both riddles and fire types."

"Oh by the way, Ash before I forget I need you to deliver this Letter to Brock flint Stone of Pewter for me. You see I had Sparrow deliver it to Prof. because I was talking to my old friend Dr. Fuji from Lavender Town, it seems he has also been doing research on cloning, and he agreed to help on a cloning project I am doing… ” Prof. Ketchum said as he handed Ash the letter.

“What Project grandpa, can I help with it?” Ash asked as Prof. Oak, Prof. Ketchum Daisy and himself, walked to Ash’s house.

However Prof. Ketchum left his Magmar to guard the lab that he gave to Prof. Oak. who Prof. Ketchum took as his assistant in the year 1965, but soon after gave the lab to when he passed the exam to become an authorized Pokemon Professor. Further more Prof. Ketchum was also the head of the Cinnabar lab among other things…

“I am Sorry Ash but I can’t tell you that for your own safety, that and because I need you to work on your own goals in life. Besides that, the government had put a ban on all forms of cloning experiments over the summer. They say it’s for our own good, you see there have been Rumors around the world about creatures called Poikémorphs, Human Pokemon hybrids. They say the original Team Rocket ran by Madam Boss and her husband, created them in hopes of creating an army of powerful soulless super soldiers, however many either did not survive or were so powerful they broke free and now live in remote areas of the world.” Prof. Ketchum explained as they reached Ash’s house.

“Wow, Ash I did not know your mother has a Roselia, I should ask her if I can borrow it to take on the smart contest coming up in a few weeks in Lavender town.” Daisy said admiring the Thorn Pokemon and changing the subject at the same time.

“I don’t, I been trying to get rid of that pesky Roselia for a week now!” Deelia sighed as she walled out the door.

“Well in that case this Roselia is mine.” Daisy said with an evil grin as she let out her Chansey.

“Chansey use Egg bomb,” Daisy said calmly as she took a friend ball out of her lab coat pocket.

Chansey chucked a rotten egg from her pouch, then quickly laid another one, as the thrown egg blew up in Roselia’s face. Daisy knew that the time was right and threw the friend ball at the weakened Roselia, after a few seconds the Roselia gave up trying to escape the ball.

“And that Ash, is how you Catch a wild Pokemon.” Daisy said picking up the ball winking at Ash with a smile; making Ash feel very nervous to be around her since he thought she was kind of cute, however he just likes Daisy as a friend since she is 8 years older then he is.

“So Deliah what’s for dinner?” Prof. Ketchum asked his daughter as they all walked in to the house and sat at the table.

“Oh Dad your just as bad as Ash, Anyways I made Cinnabar Burgers and to drink we have Moo-moo milk oh yeah I also made a batch of lava cookies as well.. Deliah sighed as She watched both her father’s and son’s mouths water when she said she made their favorite dish for dinner.

After they ate dinner, they went in to the den to relax.

“So tell me dad is it true that you and Ash cloned Pika from a Raichu’s son over the summer?” Deliah asked her father.

“Yes, and since I have time, I well share with you what happened.” Prof. Ketchum said.

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~Charles Legend

[darktyranitar]

You know, there were quite a lot of spelling errors in this chapter. I suggest you re-read a chapter before posting. Just in case you miss something.

Well, based on a few dialogues between Prof Ketchum and Prof Oak, I just guessed that he is Blaine from Cinnabar Island. And that Pichu could be the one he (or Blaine) was about to give to Giovanni. Or maybe I'm wrong?

Yeah, you could say it's a challenge! But then again, I had just battle once, and I'm still not finished. But yeah, I would like to battle you someday!
Keep the chapters coming. See you soon! :smilie:

[Charles Legend]

Yes I changed the title a bit but that was because the old title would not make much since later in the story with the story of one pokemon being created and one gaining a new body and is freedom with the aid of a cretin Gen... besides I saw nothing against it in the rules…

Speaking of rules according to rule seven I must warn you this chapter has some sexual content in it... I am sorry but it was needed as it's part of the plot.

also I know pokemon lay eggs but I have a reasons for the female Pikachu to give live birth.

Also no offence Mr. Pikachu, I know Pikachu is your favorites but what happens to the female Pikachu is a necessary part of the plot line of this Dark story


Chapter four: Vs. Ditto

As Ash Fireweed Ketchum and his Grandfather Prof. Blaine Fireweed Ketchum where walking along the streets of Vermilion city, they noticed a young man in a military uniform walk out of one of the Shops with his Raichu who was reading a copy of Chuchu power a pokemon version of playboy magazine namely for the Chu line.

As the man and his Raichu turned a corner, the man said to his Raichu “Look there she is, let me hold that for you buddy so you can go show her a good time.”

“Raichu!” the Raichu said to his trainer handing over the magazine then pounced on the female Pikachu.

“Pikachu!” the female Pikachu screamed in sheer agony.

“Good work Raichu you certainly did a grate gob on her, now lets go to the bar to and get drunk to celebrate your victory over this female Pikachu who has escaped you before however this time you got her and got her good to,” the man said cheerfully.

“Raichu!” Raichu said in agreement to what his master said.

Ash and Blaine hurried in to the ally and saw a female Pikachu, her body was rapidly quivering.

“Grandpa what happened to her?” Ash asked stupidly.

“Simple Lt. Surge’s Raichu showed this female Pikachu a good time by matting with her.
And judging by her rapid quivering I say that Lt. Surge’s Raichu had flood her good.” Blaine explain to Ash who was oblivious to the fact that Lt. Surge just ordered his Raichu to go rape a female Pikachu.

Blaine let out a sigh knowing that since they only over hared what happened that there was no way to accuse Lt. Surge and his Raichu of the crime, besides that she was apparently a wild pokemon.

“Ash, if this Pikachu had a owner they may have wanted to have Nurse Joy to give her an abortion, however Ash since she is wild pokemon living on the streets that had made her easy prey for Lt. Surge and his Raichu, however I am not saying what they did was right. Blaine said as he picked up the female Pikachu who shocked him with a Thundershock.

“Easy there girl, we wont hurt you I promise, further more I have some fiends on four Island who well take good care of you and your offsprings. Blaine said.

“Chu Pika,” the female Pikachu said softly as she fell asleep in Blaine‘s arms from exhaustion.

“Come on Ash the Ship to Four Island is waiting for us,” Blaine said softly.

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It was dusk when the Scallop 7 reached four Island, Blaine and Ash left the ship with the still sleeping female Pikachu who is still considered a wild pokemon.

When they came to the pokemon day care Ash noticed the sign.

[ This breeding center was created in honor and decorticated to Blue and her Igglybuff who have vanished with out a trace.]

An old man walked out of the house, “Ah, Blaine so this is your grandson you have told me so about it’s a pity my daughter is not still here, I bet they would become grate friends,” the man said sadly looking at the sign.

“What happened to her?” Ash rudely asked.

“Ash, how times have I told you to stop asking stupid questions, if you want to know something ask it in a riddle instead,” Blaine scolded

“It’s Ok Blaine, I get this a lot. Anyways Ash about five years ago a Mask Man riding the legendary bird Ho-oh threw my nephew Silver down on top of my doughier Blue, as my other nephew Lance was giving her a Igglybuff he had caught earlier that day near Mt. Moon. I watched the seen in horror as the masked man placed an Icy blue mask on both Silver and my daughter‘s faces.”

“Then the mask man was going to do the same to Lance, but Lance had ran behind a rock and let out his Horsea for a bit of Protection, although it would not have helped him that much to honest.”

“When the cost was clear Lance came over to me and apologized for not protecting his little brother and cousin better then made a pledge that from that day forward he would become a stronger trainer. And the last I saw of him, he was headed to the ruin valley on seven Island also known as Quest Island.” the old man called Mr. Rose said as the three walked in to the house.

5 days later…

“I am sorry to say that she and her offsprings did not make it threw the delivery,” Mr. Rose informed Blaine.

“I thought as much, however all is not lost, Ash well still get a Pichu,” Blaine said as he

took a DNA sample of the Pichu who died last because he knew that one had been the stingiest of them all.

“You know they just passed that ban on cloning yesterday” Mr. Rose said.

“True, but I well take the risks in the name of science, anyways thanks for your hospitality but I think it’s time for Ash and myself to go, besides that I just got word that a trainer is on Cinnabar,” Blaine said.

Some time during the early morning hours, the Scallop 7 reached Cinnabar Island.

Ash yawned loudly as he and his grandfather Blaine walked into the Cinnabar island Pokemon center.

“Hello Blaine what can I do for you today?” Nurse Joy asked as she looked up from the book she was reading.

Ash looked at the title of the book Nurse Joy had been reading when they walked in “The war of the Worldviews” ‘Interesting, I well have to ask her about it later’

“Hello Joyce, I would like for you to look after my grandson Ash, I have a gym match however it would be best if Ash got some rest,” Blaine said then released his Ditto.

“Hey grandpa since when did you have a Ditto?” Ash asked.

“I caught transform a few days before I went to pick you up,” Blaine said.

Ash gave a shrugged as he watch himself and his Grandfather leave the pokemon center, then went to his room for the night.

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As Blain walked in to his lab with ash…

“Well It’s about time you got back Blaine, I been waiting on this nearly deserted Island for a week now! I have already creamed your underlings and solved your stupid riddles, now battle me you old fossil!” A young red haired teen angrily said and toke a heavy ball off his belt.

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Yeah I know but I was tiring to prove a point that porno leads to sexual auditions, but I am sheer you guys already knew that.

Also Surge and Raichu well pay for there crimes just not yet…

And yes I have a rough Idea where this story is headed, oh and apparently Blaine knows something about ash’s father and it has to do with Ho-oh…

Always Later Darktyranitar and anyone else that reads this I off to bed it‘s three in the morning as I type this sentence…

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

The story is taking a dark turn...

So, it seem that Surge and his Raichu are quite evil... Didn't know they could be that bad. I hope they received what they deserved for their crime.

It's quite interesting to see that Ash's grandfather is Blaine. He seems to be a lot more different than the one in the anime series. He seem to have some agenda of his own. Wonder if he would produce more clone, hence starting a clone war.

Anyway, I am also wondering on where this story would go to. I hope you could come up with a better plot than the last time you wrote this fic. Oh yeah, watch out for spelling and grammars too. Keep up writing this fic!

On different note, do you want to battle me on ASB? :p If you're interested, I'll PM you the detail.

And nice banner for the fanfic. And thanks for sticking to my fic, really appreciated. :smilie:

[Charles Legend]

The story is taking a dark turn...

So, it seem that Surge and his Raichu are quite evil... Didn't know they could be that bad. I hope they received what they deserved for their crime.

It's quite interesting to see that Ash's grandfather is Blaine. He seems to be a lot more different than the one in the anime series. He seem to have some agenda of his own. Wonder if he would produce more clone, hence starting a clone war.

Anyway, I am also wondering on where this story would go to. I hope you could come up with a better plot than the last time you wrote this fic. Oh yeah, watch out for spelling and grammars too. Keep up writing this fic!

On different note, do you want to battle me on ASB? :p If you're interested, I'll PM you the detail.

And nice banner for the Fanfic. And thanks for sticking to my fic, really appreciated. :smilie:

hey darktyranitar thanks for dropping by, yeah I want it it be a lot darker then both the Anime and Mega.

Yes it is very true that Lt. Surge and his Raichu are quite evil, and this was only the tip of the iceberg wait until you see what happens when Ash meets and battles them for the thunder badge, and maybe more... And don't worry they well when the time comes.

I am glad you like the Idea of Blain being Ash's Grandfather, the reasoning why I have him as Ash’s Grandfather is because I felt that if Gary had a Grandfather then Ash should have one to, besides that the Idea fits nicely with the plot. To true Blaine is very different than the one in the anime series namely because I have not watched the episodes he is in I have just read the summaries of them. Now as far as his own agenda goes some of it well be reviled in the next chapter, and he dose make another clone. However all I well tell you it's not for the reasons you may think... And is it even his own agenda to start with Blaine could be working for someone beside Giovanni you know…

oh and about the clone wars part, well it has a lot to do with Genetic and DNA that and all the rocket grunts running around....

Yeah I well watch out for them, yeah I was not planning on quitting on this any time soon, I in fact have plans on a possible sequel to this namely to deal with the true villains of this fic, if you think team rocket of Kanto are evil wait until you see them under the headship of the Mask of Ice and Black Widow...

I have also been thinking of doing a comic to go along with this story, my thinking is it may help explain what's happing a little better like where was that grunt that the mask of ice attacked which was route 22 btw...

Of course I want to have a match with you... I have not had much luck as of late, and I could use the points.... *kicks Cam down below deck to battle all the Rattata and Ratacate.* Oh yeah I forgot to tell you that I have a custom arena called the Phantom Galleon. But yeah any arena is fine by me.

And thanks, the banner has some clues on it if you look hard enough. And no it is you, who I should be thanking darktyranitar. So thank you for being a faithful reader to my fic, really appreciated because it shows me that even if it is only one person that reads and replies to my work, it means to me that I am not as bad as I think I am….

Oh and speaking of the next chapter, here it is...

please take note that the Lance in my fanfic has nothing to do with the lance in ether the crystal league or Lisa the legend other then looking the same and training dragons… --;;

Chapter four: Vs. Magcargo

“Fine Lance. I well battle you however on one condition. You well have to battle my grandson first.” Blaine said as he handed ash a Pokéball and whispered in ash’s ear it’s my Megby. While thinking ‘yeah the one that always causing trouble here on Cinnabar, and who keeps beating up my Magcargo and Rapidash.’

“Fine I well! Go Lavatar, Rockslide!” Lance said coldly.

A ring of seatmates fell around ash trapping him.

“Well there you go you old fossil I have defeated your grandson as well. Now battle me or say goodbye to your grandson!” Lance said coldly then pointed to a lone seatmate above ash’s head.

Then Lance’s Lavatar started to glow then quickly evolved in to a Pupitar.

“I see you have been training hard Since we last met lance. But I thought your home town was Viridian city not Four island? Anyways this well be a one on one since I have stuff to do, Go Yawning sun!” Blaine said.

“It’s true that my home town is Viridian city, however when my parents got a divorce... Wait a second you old fossil stop distracting me, Pupitar use Earthquake!” Lance said in annoyance as he just now realized that Blaine had tricked him.

However Pupitar was fast asleep, and sat there and did nothing but snore as Magcargo was charging up a ball of solar energy in it’s mouth do to a ball off bright fire energy up in the air among the seatmates.

Pupitar then was hit by the powerful beam of grass energy, knocking it out with one hit.

“Pupitar return!” Lance said in annoyance, as he recalled his Pupitar back in to it‘s heavy ball.

“You have a lot of Spunk Lance, are you sheer you are reedy to face your Father when you get to Viridian city?” Blaine asked.

“Of course I am, what do you take me for you old fossil! Go Kingdra Hydro pump!” Lance said knowing full well that he had just cheated but could care less about playing fair he had things to do and need not waste time for the likes of cots like Blain or his very own father.

Magcargo did however and slid back against ash’s Stalagmite prison fainted and wet.

“Very well Lance I commend you on your grate strategy, however I got the last laugh.” Blaine laughed and handed Lance the volcano badge.

“Ha, I think not you old fossil, Kendra Dragon dance hyper beam combo aim at that Ditto trapped in the Stalagmite prison!” Lance said coldly with an evil grin.

Five geysers erupted out of the ground around Kingdra and started to spin around him, they also seemed to have ripples of Dragon energy with in them. After the Geysers reseeded Kingdra quickly formed a ball of Orange and black energy in it’s snout and fired it at Blaine’s Ditto who was impersonating Blaine’s Grandson.

The hyper beam destroyed the Stalagmite prison and fainted the Ditto and reverting it to his true form.

“Ha if that was your best you got you old fossil, then I would hate to see you at your worst…” Lance laughed coldly and returned his Kingdra and left the cave and called out his Dragonite and flew north.

Blaine just rubbed his bold head and retuned his Ditto, and was glad he had made Ash stay the night at the pokemon center. then went over to his computer and made a phone call.

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“Blaine why hell did you call me at three in the morning, it had better be very important.” Giovanni growled angrily.

“Your son Lance just creamed me and is on his way to your gym,” Blaine said.

“Oh is that all, I was expecting a progress report on the Mew project from you and Fuji… Not something I had already known from my three Rocket Elites, Who also had their own butts hand to them at the hands of my very own son.” Giovanni said proudly at what lance has accomplished so far, then crush the cell phone ending the phone call.
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6:00 am

Blaine was fast asleep when the phone rang…

“Blaine, I know you just got off the phone with Giovanni three hours ago. What did he want this time?” asked a man in a red hooded robe, the man’s face was completely hidden only his golden eyes that shown like the sun could be seen.

“Well I just informed him that his son Lance was on his way to his gym, although he did want to know how the Mew project was coming along. However he still has no Idea that Mewtwo has been born already, although he is still just a child, Blaine explained to the man in the red hooded robe..

“Just remember that you and Fuji must allow Amber and Mewtwo to become best friends if the prophecy is to be fulfilled, speaking of which have you acquired the Pichu DNA as I requested yet?” Asked Red robe as he petted his Pikachu on the head who thunder shocked him.

“Yes I did boss, however I just ran a test on it a few hours ago, apparently it’s incomplete and corrupt. Thus if I even attempted to create a clone it would die as soon as it came out of the Pokemon replication unit,” Blaine said.

“It’s just as I foreseen, thus I well send you the necessary Dna samples to complete the Pichu clone, however you must add the boy’s Dna as well if the Prophecy is to come to pass.” Red robe said as a golden feather that seemed to change it’s color depending on what angle light hit it. and a syringe full of blood mineralized in the teleported unit…

“As you wish Boss, it’s just a shame that you can’t be there in August when he leaves on his pokemon journey,” Blaine said.

“Maybe, maybe not, however I have my ways. Anyways I well talk to you later Blaine, a challenger has just arrived here at the Indigo plateau, he has already defeated the other three members… ” Red robe said, then hung up.

Blaine then put the DNA in to the Pokemon replication unit, just as Ash walked in to the cave.

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Who is this Mysterious Red robe who is apparently a part of the elite four and what connections dose he with, Blaine, Ash and the legendry bird Ho-oh, and why is he always wearing a hooded robe, you well find out more next time in VS Magby look for it soon…

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

I noticed a Deoxys and a weird coloured Mewtwo in the sig. Wonder what that could mean?

Sorry to say this, but the grammar and spelling in this chapter are a bit off. A few grammar usages make me a bit hard to understand a few things, mostly on the battle part. I reckon that you spent some times fixing those two things.

Hm, who could the red hooded person is? Could it be some other person who is not originally on the Kanto Elite 4? Someone we do not suspect? I have no clues on who he is.

And have you checked your inbox lately for the ASB rules?

Don't be deterred by the small error, and try to improvise them. Well, that's my advice anyway. Hope to see you in the next chapter! :smilie:

[Charles Legend]

I noticed a Deoxys and a weird coloured Mewtwo in the sig. Wonder what that could mean?

Sorry to say this, but the grammar and spelling in this chapter are a bit off. A few grammar usages make me a bit hard to understand a few things, mostly on the battle part. I reckon that you spent some times fixing those two things.

Hm, who could the red hooded person is? Could it be some other person who is not originally on the Kanto Elite 4? Someone we do not suspect? I have no clues on who he is.

And have you checked your inbox lately for the ASB rules?

Don't be deterred by the small error, and try to improvise them. Well, that's my advice anyway. Hope to see you in the next chapter! :smilie:

You forgot about Ho-oh he plays a an important role in this fanfic to not only when the mask of ice shows up...
take note there is also a Pikachu in front of Ash and not a Pichu


err if you were referring to the lower cased "a" I was using it to show that the ash that was trapped was not really Ash but rather a ditto, further more I was being creative with dragon dance, I see it looking different with what pokemon use it, for example Kindra’s geysers or Dragonite creating balls of multi colored energy.

Oh and about rock slide making a ring of Stalagmite fall, I take it you never played the legend of Zelda ocarina of time before? there in the Ice cave where you get the ice boots there are frozen Stalagmites that fall on link in that mini dungeon.

Please take note I also use stuff from other games not just Pokemon.

A good example of this is the multi colored Tryforce/ the mark of the royal family now fond in chapter zero namely because I felt it to be a lot more convent then a temple, that and a lot easer to draw and describe, and also because it made better since to have mew and to other pokemon trap Deoxys within the confines of a Tryforce then in a temple.

I am not telling but there are hints that I have or well be weaving in this as to who he is based on, as for not originally on the Kanto Elite 4 lets just say your partly right, Red robe was not a part of the Original Elite 4, but the person that he is based on the elite four wanted to join them...

Have you checked yours yet?

I am not letting them detract me , and yes I do improvise them. And about the next chapter, well I need to work on it some more, then start on Chapter six: Vs Sparrow in which Ash is tested yet again by someone riding on a Sceptile... Yeah I know what your thinking but trust me it well be very important soon because well the truth is Ash wont be catching a whole lot of pokemon or rather I should say very many species of pokemon.

then the Pallet chapters are done once Ash reaches Viridian city, then the pewter chapters well begin with Ash's hilarious encounter with Gary is being chased around by a pokemon that he accidentally caught on route 22 for some strange reason. Gary tells Ash he met and battled that female thief on route 22. Also three familiar villains make there debt but they are not after rare pokemon this time but a blond haired girl for some strange reason could it have something to do with a strange blue stone hanging around her neck?

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

That's quite a lot of info to give away... Anyway, I'd like to see what Ash would encounter on his journey with his Pichu, or a soon to be Pikachu.

Haven't checked my inbox :p, but I am checking it after this reply :smilie:.

EDIT: Please read my new PM and reply ASAP. Your arena are a bit... confusing :p.

[Charles Legend]

That's quite a lot of info to give away... Anyway, I'd like to see what Ash would encounter on his journey with his Pichu, or a soon to be Pikachu.

sheer it was, but is that all that well happen in those chapters. and it well be quite some time before Pike Evolves in to a Pikachu trust me I have Plans for Pia which will tie up some lose ends ...

Anyways here is the next chapter it's a little long but their was a reason for it Also you may be surprised to learn some good stuff with in this chapter

Chapter five: Vs Magby

“Man Grandpa that challenger must have had some strong Pokemon to have been able to take you out, Ash said as he looked around the cave and saw all the damage that had been done to it last night.

“Yeah and he certainly dose not respect his elders, sheer I am 90 years old but I most certainly am not a fossil,” Blaine said as cut off a piece of ash’s hair.

“So I take it he found out that Cell was not me trapped in a ring of Stalagmites after you gave him his own ball? Ash questioned as he watched his Grandfather’s Magcargo named Yawning sun fill in the holes left by Lance’s Kingdra.

A week later….

“Very good Ash you and Pia are certainly getting better at battling… Blaine watch Ash and his Pichu he named Pia defeat a wild Slugma.

“Thanks Grandpa, and now I see why you added my DNA to Pia’s it was so we become much more closer, but I still don’t get why Pia keeps shocking me with a thunder shock..” Ash said and asked.

“Oh that, well I told your father about the Pichu DNA I acquired not being complete, thus he sent me the DNA of his Pikachu who by the way refuses to go in a Pokéball or evolve in to a Raichu. I don’t blame it seeing as to what happened in Vermilion city a few weeks ago, ” Blaine explained.

“Wait grandpa you gave my father a Pikachu as his starter?” Ash asked.

“Oh yes, I must have forgot to tell you. It was about forty years ago, back when I ran the Pallet Pokemon lab, I gave your mother a Squirtle her starter, Samuel Oak a Charmand er as his starter, Bulbasaur had been stolen by some one when I was here on Cinnabar at the gym, your father had seen who it was but I have forgotten his name anyways, I gave your father a very stubborn Pikachu as his starter,” Blaine explained to Ash.

As Blaine watch Ash and Pia cream another Slugma he thought ’Ha, like I would forget who stole my Bulbasaur, yeah right even thought I work for him now. I been plotting my revenge on him ever since that day I would have gladly given it to him it at the time, but knowing the evil deeds he has committed now I would have given to Ash’s father who I was planning to in the first place. But now that the pieces of my real boss’s plot are coming together, Ash’s Pichu, and Mewtwo perhaps they can bring some justice to the thief…’

“How was that Grandpa, do you think we are ready to take on that Magby yet?” Ash asked as Pia fainted the hundredth Slugma today.

“That’s very impressive ah but let’s go down to the Pokemon center and refresh Pia, besides that we can grab a bite to eat at the same time, Blaine explained as his stomach growled hungrily.

“Yeah, Pia dose look like he could use a brake besides I am getting hot,” Ash said as a gust of hot sea air blew his hair around. seeing as they were on part of the volcano which is active but has never erupted.

They say a Moltres was born on Cinnabar island and that it used it’s Extrasensory powers to create the volcano to pervade a place for wild fire types to live and made it so that it would never erupted but rather have lava flowing in to the ocean, but not the parts where humans in habit.

Back at the Pokemon center….

“Hey Pia save me some ketchup, man they never put enough souse on pizzas,” Ash said.

“Pichu!” Pia said Shocking Ash with a thundershock as he was guarding his bottle of ketchup.

“I agree you Ash, but don’t put any topping on them even when you order everything including Anchovies,” Blaine said taking his fifth slice of pizza.

At that same moment a Scientist ran in to the Pokemon center and quickly spotted Blaine and Ash.

“Ah there you are, we just received word that the boss well be cutting the funding if he dose not see any progress on the project.”

Tell him, that I well bring him some progress when I take my grandson home in a day or two,” Blaine said and patted Pia on the head who thunder shocked him and his moustache stand on end.

“As you wish Sir, by the way that Magby just came down from the volcano,” the Scientist said then left.

“Grandpa you mean your giving your boss Pia?” Ash asked.

“Well not quite you see he hates the whole Chu line namely Pikachu because your father and his Pikachu would always throw a money wrench in to his plans, I well expect nothing less of you and Pia as well,” Blaine Explained.

“Grandpa what if your boss tries to kill Pia before I have the chance to start my journey?” Ash asked sadly.

“Trust me Ash, I well grantee his safe return to pallet town, now then lets go catch that Stubborn Magby shall we?”

“Yeah, I think we are reedy right Pia? As asked.

“Pichu!” said holding up the empty bottle of ketchup in the air.

When they walked out side they herd screams coming from the mansion owned by Mr. Pokemon.

“Lets hurry Ash before that naughty Magby burns the mansion to the ground, as they proceed they saw the building was engulfed by flames, lucky Mr. Pokemon made it out on the back of his Fearow.

“That’s the lat straw you runt I am moving back to Jotho goodbye!” Mr. Pokémon yelled then has his Fearow fly north-west.

“Well Ash we blew it the riches man on Cinnabar just flew the coop, now he well most likely cut funding for the lab Dr. Fuji and I founded years ago,” Blaine said sadly.

“I am sorry Grandpa, I may not have prevented Magby from making Mr. Pokémon leave but I well prevent it from burning down the Pokémon mansion! “Ash said.

“Pichu!” Pia said angrily and threw the empty bottle of ketchup at Magby who pulsed sating the mansion ablaze and turned around to see what hit him.

“Pia start off with a thunder wave.” Ash said.

“Pichu!” Pia said and ran around Magby creating three rings of electricity around him..

“Good work Ash keep Magby busy while I deal with the fire, Go Gyarados! use Rain dance to put out that fire.” Blaine said tossing a net ball in to the sea.

The net ball opened to revile a powerful looking Gyarados but instead of being a normal colored his body was green and his fins were Orange, and he gave a loud roar and thick black clouds appeared threatening rip the heaves apart which they did as heavy ran fell on Cinnabar island and it even reached to Pallet town and the sea form islands

“Ash have I ever told you how I met Dragon storm?” Blaine questioned his grandson as he watched not only the fire on the pokémon mansion die down but Magby getting weaker by the moment.

“No you have not, but one thing bugs me if you had a Gyarados all this time could you not have stopped Magby?” Ash asked

Blaine handed as a Pokéball, and said “Ash now’s not the time for talk, rather it’s time to test your skills at catching a wild Pokemon.”

“Yes sir.” Ash said and threw the ball at Magby who got sucked in and was apparently to weak to free it’s self and admitted to defeat.

“So Ash you going to name your Magby?” Blaine said as he recalled.

“Err, grandpa no offence but I rather not take Magby with me on my journey he seems a little to powerful for a begging trainer like myself to handle, but I well name him for you how dose Megastar sound?” Ash explained then questioned.

“Congratulations Ash you answered my question Correctly, you have also past your Pokemon handling test with flying colors.”

“What do you mean grandpa what test?” Ash questioned.

“Simple the test that is authorized by the Pokemon league in order for you to get your trainer’s license, You see Ash the board had wanted to have Viridian city gym leader test you, however one of the elite 4 recommended that I be the one to test you, your rival Gary on the other hand had to be sent to Jotho to take under the wing or rather fist of Chuck of Cianwood city. Anyways get your things, we need to go back to pallet town by this evening,” Blaine explained.

After a short ride on Dragon storm, Blaine, Ash and Pia who was drinking yet another bottle of ketchup and made their way to Ash’s house.

“Long time no see boys, so I trust you had a good time Ash?” Deliah asked but then saw Pichu and got vary nervous as Pia cheeks started to spark then hit Deliah with a thunder shock.

“Mom are you ok?” Ash asked in surprise.

“I should have known that both your Grandpa and your father would have you start with a Pichu. Ah yes those were the days your father and I were rivals but on a much more friendlier base then you and Gary. Back then and your father used to have his Pikachu thundershock me every time chance he got and they both loved playing practical jokes on me ah yes those were the days… It’s just a shame that your father is to busy working for the League to come home every few days, ” Deliah said as if she was in her own little world.

“Well Ash you should take your mother inside and pour her a cup of tea, I have some stuff to do, Pia come with me please,” Blaine said and walked on to route One with Pia on his right shoulder.

Just then a Sceptile jumped down from a tree branch and landed behind Blaine, the red robes of the Sceptile’s rider were being blown by the wind coming from the north as a blue blur raced across route one.

Blaine Paused and waited for the man to speak.

“You do realize Blaine under normal conditions that the board would have count that as a failure, however seeing that the boy is need to fulfill his destiny, the board who just received a new member voted in favor of Ash being issued his License tomorrow.”

“I take it the new member would be none other then Lance I presume?” Blaine asked.

“Correct, he now serves as the fourth member as he had lost to me, however I did make him an offered he could not refuse, and now I am the Champion as you are well aware by now Prof Oak gave up his title this year…”

“Yes I remember that during the days he had to be at the Indigo plateau, I would cover for him in the lab, it was also lucky that he had started his radio program around that same time as well, so people thought he was over in Jotho when he was really defending his title.” Blaine said.

“Anyways enough about the past, I see that Pichu survived this time, good now go show Giovanni, and tell him that because you were able to clone a none legendary Pokemon it should be no problem for you to complete the Mew project in a few months. By that time Mewtwo should be old enough to be tested…”

“As you wish Boss,” Blaine bowed before the mysteries red robed elite champion.

A short time later Blaine was in Giovanni’s office.

“Idiotic fool! I asked you to create me a Super Pokemon not some worthless Rat that I can easily find in the Viridian forest” Giovanni Growled at Blaine.

“But Sir, I Genetically modified this Pichu to have Powerful Electoral attacks that can even defeat ground types. Blaine said to Giovanni.

“I don’t give a hoot about this Rat, I only care about the Mew Project.” Giovanni growled then threw Pichu on the table out his office window.
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Blaine then took a sip of tea after telling what happened over the summer. Blaine did however leave out the parts about Giovanni and Red robe for a reason namely because of Ash who don‘t need to know those parts until the time is right…

So what did you think, I know the battle between Pika and Magby was short but perhaps he was not even wild, remember in the games you can't find baby pokemon in the wild save for Wynaut .

However in the Anime there are wild baby pokemon, which I do agree that there would be, seeing as I have planed a gym leader catches a baby pokemon soon, however it won’t very much like his anime counter part …

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

Hmm, I think there something about the red-robe person that is hinted in this chapter. It is stated that that person has a Pikachu that thundershocked him, right? Then I have a guess on who he might be.

Again, you seem to have problems with the grammar and spelling. For this chapter, I seem to have some problem to understand a few things spoken by the characters. You also seem to miss some dialogue mark and comma usage. And by the way, Ash's Pichu name is Pika, not Pia, right?

To me, that is what the fic's weakest point. Hmm, just as a suggestion, but you don't mind if you sent off a chapter earlier to me so that I can edit it, and I sent it back to you to be posted, do you? I can do the job of editing if you want. I'll try to PM an edited version of the first chapter later, and you can tell me what you think.

But still, the story is going pretty well at this point. I hope that Ash's adventure will start off soon. Anyway, sorry if I seem to stress on a lot on the mistake. I'm sure that those can be fix. Keep improving on your writing skill and continue to post this fic. I'll continue to read this fic. :smilie:

[Charles Legend]

Hmm, I think there something about the red-robe person that is hinted in this chapter. It is stated that that person has a Pikachu that thundershocked him, right? Then I have a guess on who he might be.

your right Red robe dose have a Pikachu, however go on take a guess at who Red robe really is.. you never know you maybe right or you may be wrong as to who he really is.

Again, you seem to have problems with the grammar and spelling. For this chapter, I seem to have some problem to understand a few things spoken by the characters. You also seem to miss some dialogue mark and comma usage. And by the way, Ash's Pichu name is Pika, not Pia, right?

that’s true, maybe I should not try to Wright the chapters at night (my time of course) and yes Ash’s Pichu is named Pika, it was a simple typo that can easily be fixed

To me, that is what the fic's weakest point. Hmm, just as a suggestion, but you don't mind if you sent off a chapter earlier to me so that I can edit it, and I sent it back to you to be posted, do you? I can do the job of editing if you want. I'll try to PM an edited version of the first chapter later, and you can tell me what you think.

thank you for being honest about the grammar and spelling being this fic's weak point, thank you for offering to help, but you don’t have to besides you still have your own fanfic to worry about.

But still, the story is going pretty well at this point. I hope that Ash's adventure will start off soon. Anyway, sorry if I seem to stress on a lot on the mistake. I'm sure that those can be fix. Keep improving on your writing skill and continue to post this fic. I'll continue to read this fic. :smilie:

[color=wheat] thank you, I glad you think that this fic id doing good so far, anyways Ash’s journey well start next chapter like I said. That is quite alright, and yes I well try my best to improve on my writing skills and don’t worry I have already have 24 chapters named a few of which I have already started to plan on…

“Mewtwo, why dose that name still hunt me, and also that nightmare, and just who is this Amber?”

~Charles legend

[Charles Legend]

here is Chapter six....

Chapter six: Vs Sparrow

“Well Grandpa I am going to go home an to bed, the Saffron contest is tomorrow and I don’t want to be late for it,” Daisy said with a yawn.

“I heard rumors that you been defending your title as Kanto best co-contender for the last three years Daisy, sheerly you don’t just have a Chancery all this time?” Blaine asked.

“All right you caught me I do have a few others my second most loyal of my pokemon is my female Delicatty Angle who was given to me by Brock Flint Stone of Pewter city, I gave him a Spinda with broken hearted spots and told him I rather just be good friends for now, because he was going way to fast for my likings,” Daisy explained then left as she secretly shed a tear from her eye. However Daisy did not even notice a man sitting on his Sceptile high the branches of a mountain ash right in front of Ash‘s house. At home where Daisy cried herself to sleep as she was thinking about Brock and how mush she miss him.

“Ash I think Daisy had the right Idea you should go to bed you have a long day ahead of you tomorrow,” Deliah said and kissed him on the forehead, Pika then gave both Deliah and Ash a thundershock goodnight.

Outside the man on the Sceptile ginned as he watched threw the window Deliah getting shocked and was thinking ‘Now those were the days, but sadly destiny had called me to do something I really did not to do, I can only hope that Ash dose not have to make the same kind of sacrifices his father made for his children’s sake.’

After a short time both Blaine and Prof Oak left to the lab, and found Magmar had been waiting inside the whole time and had fall asleep on the job.

Meanwhile the man had walked in to Ash’s house and thought ‘If only there had been another way…’ then sat down next to Deliah.

“You sheer Ash is fast asleep dear?”

“Yeah, Mimie used hypnoses on him to make fall asleep when he said he was not tired.” Deliah said with a grin holding the man’s hand that was covered in a thin layer of red feathers.

“Good, that means he won’t bug us, I fell I owe you an apology for not being the father, I am meant to be but if I had not freed Ho-oh from being consumed by darkness then not only would I have lost you and Ash but Team Rocket would be an even bigger threat to the world then they are now.”

“I know dear.” Deliah said and rested her head on Red robe’s chest.

Meanwhile the Scallop 4 docked on four Island and the Elite four walked out of their Personal sea scallop ship and headed to the daycare.

“What I don’t get is how Red robe is so powerful,” Lance said in annoyance.

“Trust me son Red Robe has his reasons for being a powerful trainer,” Lorelei said

“That is true, however it is only now he has chosen to become the Champion, he let Samuel take the title despite the fact that Red robe was the true champion for all these long years,” Agatha said.”

“Nephew, it’s not good to talk of are leader like that, besides he wants us to be training not talking behind his back. Anyways as for me I am going to go mediate,” Bruno said then walked past the fence were he keeps trainers pokemon and climbed the ladder to the cliff over looking the daycare and shed a tear remembering his daughter Blue Orca Rose.

Lorelei and Agatha both looked at him and could tell that he too had suffered at the hands of the Mask of Ice, Lorelei had only lost Silver but as for Agatha she had lost her two grand children Will and Karen.

Meanwhile back in pallet town around six am.

“Ah, I am sorry Deliah it was nice to be here with you again; but if I stay for very much longer Ash well find out about us and he mite think your cheating on Red,” Red robe said then took his hat off from under his hood and gave it to her before leaving the house.

A while later Ash wearing his new hat, was about to go on to route one with Pika when a man in a red robe stopped him in his tracks.

Ash could not believe who it was Red robe the new champion of the Elite four and quickly took out his scrap book he made of all the Elite four members and quickly asked Red robe for his Autograph.

Red robe gave a chuckle thinking ‘If only Ash knew who I really was.’

“Sheer I well kid who should I make it out to?” Red Robe asked as if he did not know who Ash was.

“Oh yeah I am sorry I was so caught up in the fact that I got to met a true Pokemon master, Anyways I am Ash fireweed Ketchum from pallet, ash said but then got shocked by a thundershock “Oh yeah and my buddy Pika the Pichu,” ash said as he watch Pika drink anther bottle of ketchup.

“I see your Pichu Loves shocking people and ketchup as dose my Pikachu Sparky” Red robe said then a bolt of lighting hit Red robe’s right shoulder and formed in to a Pikachu with spiky fur on the top of his head.
“Wow that was incredible what move was that” Ash asked.

“That Ash was teleport, but anyways I well sign your book under one condition catch a Sparrow.” as Red robe said this a Sparrow with yellow colored wings landed between Red robe and Ash.

“No problem, Pika thundershock” Ash said, however as Pika shot a small lighting bolt at Sparrow it flew deeper on to route one.

“I see you still have a lot to learn Ash, anyways you get a hundred tries to catch that Sparrow since there are ninety-nine other Sparrows who live on route one also you must do this with in four days since it took your father that long to get to Viridian city. ”Red robe explained then handed as a bag full of empty Pokéballs

Meanwhile on route 22

“Ah ha! There you are thief hand over that Squirtle you stole and I won’t press any charges against you!” Gary said.

“That’s not going to happen Leafhopper.” the girl said as she took off her latest catch off her belt.

“For crying out load I don’t know who you are, but let’s get one thing striate I well not tolerate it’s people calling me ‘Leafhopper” especially a girl who stole my Squirtle, that I helped hatch from his egg!” Gary yelled at the girl and also grabbed a ball off his belt.

“My name is Blue, and I need Squirtle because I have need of Blastoise’s ability to fly threw the air with out being a bird…”

Meanwhile back on route one

‘Interesting, Ash has decided to pick off and catch the weaker Sparrows before taking on the Shinny Sparrow, and has already caught fifty of them’ Red robe taught as he and sparky rode Red Robe’s Sceptile named Cam

Meanwhile back in Pallet

“So Deliah I take Red came in last night?” Blaine asked as he and Prof Oak sat at the table and were having lunch.

“Yes, Red did stop in for the night, I had to have Mimie use hypnoses on Ash to make him go to sleep because he was to excited about leaving today. I wonder how far he made it up route one he had gotten so far?” Deliah said and asked.

just then Blaine’s Cell phone rang

“Blaine tell Deliah and Samuel that Ash has just about reached Viridian city and has caught 99 Sparrows so far and is about to go up ageist the his 100th a shiny sparrow and the leader of the flock.”

“That’s imposable it took you four days to reach Viridian city!” Blaine yelled.

“I know son, but remember are family was blessed by Ho-oh when I freed him and Lugia from the Mask of Ice’s control.” Red robe said then hung up.

Meanwhile back on route one near the entrance to Viridian city…

“Ah there you are Shinny Sparrow,” Ash smirked.

“Sparrow!” squawk the bird angrily and was now willing to fight Ash and Pika since they caught the rest of his flock.

“Pika use a Shock wave,” Ash said calmly.

“Pichu!” Pika said then formed a small ball of static in front of him on a small static tee then launched it at Sparrow with a tail whip, Nailing Sparrow in the face, who dropped hard on to the ground fully paralyzed. After failing to doge the sparking ball of static by flying around in the woods for a few minutes.

Ash then threw his last empty Pokéball at the sparrow after a few seconds of resistants Sparrow gave in to defeat to Ash and Pika who both fell to the ground in extraction and looked up at the sky as the thick thunder clouds parted as A red and gold bird flew over head followed by a rainbow….

“what’s that?” Ash asked as he quickly pulled out his pokédex and scanned the strange new bird pokemon.

Dexter: “There is no data. There are still Pokémon yet to be identified.”

After ash put away his pokédex Ash fainted.

Red robe then picked Ash and Pika an placed them on Sceptile’s back then picked up the shinny Sparrow placing it on Ash’s belt then picked up the bag of sparrows and together Red robe and Cam took Ash and his pokemon to the pokemon center not that far away.

When Ash woke up he found that Red robe was gone but had singed his scrapbook and had also left him a note and a present

Ash opened up the note and read it.

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Ash, your father would have been very proud of you for being able to make it up route one in just one day, anyways as I promised I have signed your scrapbook, nice to see that you’re my baggiest fan.

Anyways I put the shinny sparrow on your belt and the rest have been placed in your account on the pokemon storage system ran by a guy named Bill Farfetch’d Evolution who you well met later on your journey.

I have also given you a gift, however you must never allow Team Rocket to get their hands on it or Deoxys well be freed from his prison on birth Island this stone I am placing in your care is the legendry Burning Ruby, sadly Team Rocket has already acquired the Eternal Emerald and I have no clue who has the Deep Sapphire if you find the Deep Sapphire try your best to protect it at all cost, however if you are in need of my help my number is 1-1996-383-2626 I well be standing by.

~Your hero Red robe
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Ash then opened the package to find not only the burning ruby but also a cell phone.

However little did Ash know Red robe was watching from on top of a ash tree eating pizza as the blue blur came to a stop as Red robe was thinking ‘They never put enough toppings or sauce on pizza.”

<“Master, I sense the presents of Deep Sapphire is in fact in this very city, however it is not in the hands of Team Rocket, at lest not yet but Giovanni has just sent his top Admins to find the girl who currently owns it.”>

“Thank you that well be all for now Suicune,” Red robe said.

<As you wish master,> Suicune bowed then ran off to met up with the other two legendary beast.

‘Ha if only Suicune knew the truth of his creation, but having been split in to four separate beings dose come in handy, and to think I did want to have to be split in four the likeness of the beast and the creator of the universe…‘ Red robe thought to himself.

Red robe then saw a brown haired girl floating away form route 22 on her Jigglypuff ’Ah yes. Blue Orca Rose the daughter of Bruno Uno Rose. I am so sorry that the Mask Of Ice mask of Ice kidnapped you, but escaped from him about a year ago with your cousin Silver I see. By the looks of it I say you Blue have just beat Gary who hates to be called Leafhopper and, he has just met and accidentally captured a female Psyduck,’ Red robe thought as he looked down and saw Ash walked out the Pokémon center’s door and was knocked to the ground by Gary who was running away from a Psyduck.

‘Ah yes now is the time for Ash and Gary to have a rematch,’ Red robe smirked to himself as another slice of pizza appeared in his hand out of thin air.

“Hey fireweed how about we have a rematch, if I win you trade me your sparrow for this Idiotic excuse for a pokemon.” Gary growled then pouched his Psyduck in the back of her head.

“Oh and before you say anything fireweed no I don’t abuse my Eevee, you see when my sister gave him to me, she made me promises that I would treat him with love and kindness, oh and about me taking the ribbon the other day it was because I did not want it to get damaged while I was out here on my pokemon journey the fact is I am very proud of my Eevee, now about punching my Psyduck just now, I know from my Grandfather’s research that when a Psyduck gets a headache it can unlock it’s Psychic abilities,” Gary explained

‘Now that’s interesting, only that Leafhopper should put his feet where his mouth is and actually show other people the true friendship he shares with his pokemon, but he still carries the scars that hunt the memory that he has of his parents.' Red robe thought to himself as he watched as Ash take off one of his Pokéballs just as the last rays of sunlight faded.
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So yeah please read and reply thanks...

~Charles legend

[darktyranitar]

Hi there, Charles. I know I have read this already, but I decided that more could be commented on this chapter.

First of all, who could the red robe be? For any ASBer, they might think that it’s you, Charles (look at Cam, the Scepticle :biggrin: ) Anyway, what kind of bond that he shares with Deliah; father, uncle, step-father? He has connection with Suicune, wonder what could that make him then? Also, it’s also quite a strange request for challenging Ash to capture 100 Spearow. Well, Ash did get to keep a shiny Spearow, which is quite okay.

Anyway, just a quick comment on error: be on the look for spelling error. You misspelled “Spearow” as “Sparrow”, and also other words like sure to sheer and stuff like that. Anyway, I proposed to edit your chapter, and I would gladly do that to make your fanfic better to be read. No, don’t get it wrong, your fic has the plot and characters already, but only spelling and grammar get in the way.

Well, I ended up talking a lot. Anyway, three votes on this fic poll… Hm, who else could be reading? Come and reply, readers!

Okay, I might be saying too much. Well, see you soon, Charles!

[Charles Legend]

Hi there, Charles. I know I have read this already, but I decided that more could be commented on this chapter.

First of all, who could the red robe be? For any ASBer, they might think that it’s you, Charles (look at Cam, the Sceptile :biggrin: ) Anyway, what kind of bond that he shares with Deliah; father, uncle, step-father? He has connection with Suicune, wonder what could that make him then? Also, it’s also quite a strange request for challenging Ash to capture 100 Spearow. Well, Ash did get to keep a shiny Spearow, which is quite okay.

Anyway, just a quick comment on error: be on the look for spelling error. You misspelled “Spearow” as “Sparrow”, and also other words like sure to sheer and stuff like that. Anyway, I proposed to edit your chapter, and I would gladly do that to make your fanfic better to be read. No, don’t get it wrong, your fic has the plot and characters already, but only spelling and grammar get in the way.

Well, I ended up talking a lot. Anyway, three votes on this fic poll… Hm, who else could be reading? Come and reply, readers!

Okay, I might be saying too much. Well, see you soon, Charles!

Sorry about the delayed reply, anyways thanks for reading this faiz.

As for who red robe is he not me rather his role is sill under wraps but I can tell you this he and Deliah used to traval threw both Kanto and Jotho together, and they they used to have fun in their tent...

about his connection with Suicune did say that he was split into four sepret beings, think of LOZ"the four sword Adventure...

As for his Reqeat to Ash, it was more or less of a test...

I know,

LOL nak talk all you want Faiz I would love to hear your theroyies on where you think I might be taking this fic next......

and her is the long awaited Seventh Chapter
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Chapter Seven: Vs. Psyduck

“Hey Jessie how do you think guy sitting on that Sceptile made that slice of pizza appeared in his hand out of thin air like that?” Asked a young man in his early 20’s with shoulder length blue hair to his female partner as they watched two boys using a golden Spearow and a Psyduck in a match from the roof of the pokémon center.

“James I don’t know but we are here to find the Deep Sapphire not watch two Pre-teens have a dual, sides as the top Team Rocket Admins it’s not are job to steal pokemon like Spearow and Psyduck, that job is better suited for the likes of Butch as Casity, Remember what the boss said we are to find the remaining two gemstones,” said a young red haired woman also in her early 20’s.

“Yeah but the radar says that one of them holds the Burning Ruby and the Deep Sapphire is owned by someone on the western side of Viridian city somewhere near the route 22 exit.” a Meowth wearing a belt said to his two human companions.

“Well lets go get the Deep Sapphire first that way we don’t have to face that guy on the Sceptile.” James said as they jumped off the left side of the roof and landed in a dumpster..
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‘I would hate to spoil a grate match Cam, both Ash and Gary need to go protect the girl named Lilly Thunder Yellow’ Red robe thought as cam jumped off the tree and Landed between the two boys…….
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Meanwhile Brock was in the Viridian forest giving instructions to a large group of young bug catchers and demonstrated how to catch a pokemon by having his Ninetales use an ember on a wild Pineco then caught it with a net ball….
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“Hey why did you interrupt mine and the loser’s battle like that for!” Gary snapped angrily at Red robe.

Ash fell to the ground clutching his head … a girl…. Lily…. the forest … against her own will….
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A female Pichu watched as a red headed woman and a blue hared guy were caring a brown bag with something moving inside of it, there was also a Meowth talking on a cell phone.

For some reason Pichu felt as if the three Villains were taking apart of the Viridian Forest away, and well not stand for it, the young Pichu’s body started to vibrate and sending off high amounts of Eclectic power, with this new speed and power she raced at the three Villains as if she was a shooting star…..
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Brock leading his army of bug catchers south threw the Viridian forest came to a clearing where a young man in his early 20’s with shoulder length blue hair and a young red haired woman also in her early 20’s. and a Meowth wearing a belt were standing around a lag sack that was moving, bock then thought he saw a yellow ball of electricity building up around a small pokemon…
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As Red Robe, Ash and Gary entered the same clearing they saw a teenager with a group of young boys, Pika watch as a female Pichu Slammed in to the three Villains who had Captured Lily as there prisoner, and knocked them away from the bag the held Lily….

The Pichu then tried to chew threw the rope bit it was no good.

“Go Nincada use cut on the rope!” one of the boys said throwing a netball

“Good thinking Rick, Brock said to the boy standing next to him.

The Cicada pokemon made quick work of the rope then started to glow…..

“Ninjask!” “Shedinja!” the two pokemon Screeched.

“Good job Ninjask and Shedinja return! Rick said retuning his pokemon.

As ash helped Lily out of the bag Pika started to flirt with the female Pichu, Ash also thought Lily was a very attractive young Lady…
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~Charles Legend

[darktyranitar]

Hm, it was okay, but I think that the battle scene with Pichu could be made longer- or if that's what you want to call it, as TR is pretty much beaten... Speaking of which, they're still around, right? Unless if Pichu's slamming send them blasting off again!

Now, who could the girl be? I don't quite understand why TR would catch her, unless if she possessed the Sapphire. (re-read) Oh, yeah, Suicine said that a girl had wore it.

Now I'm starting to think about it: I guess you did put some element of Zelda in this fic. Mm, but I'm not too much of a Zelda's game player...