Sinister's End

[Houndoom_Lover]

[Lady Vulpix]

Ok... I couldn't make any sense out of the first 6 images. The last two look like something's beginning to happen, but they don't say much yet. So for now I can only make 3 comments:

1. Multiple-posting is annoying and it's considered SPAM. I've merged your posts. Please don't do it again.
2. You could try saving the images as grayscale GIFs rather than JPG in order to improve the quality and reduce the filesize.
3. You could try working with smaller frames, it's hard to tell what's going on when I have to pan through a huge image just to get a view of the current scene.

Best wishes,
Gabi.

[Houndoom_Lover]

Oh. I'm glad my art work is considered spam.



I have two more pages in this chapter. I saw just going to add them I thought spam was irrelevent. My computer doesn't let me re-work with GIFs for some reason...And...no.

I guess I won't disgrace the boards with my foolish attempt.

Sorry to clutter the boards.

[Heald]

Houndoom_Lover, she wasn't saying your artwork is spam, she was saying it was unnecessary to post them in 6 separate posts when they could all go in one.

[Houndoom_Lover]

What's the difference?

It doesn't matter either way. Why would it matter if they were in one, or if they were in six?

I'm sorry.

[Heald]

Some people may view it as an attempt to increase your post count, although I doubt any one cares about post count any more. I assume it is more likely to do with the mechanics of the board, or maybe LV thought it was more annoying having to look at your name and sig 6 times to read the whole comic. I personally don't have a problem with it, but don't take it as a slight against your work.

Just chill out. No one is saying anything bad about your work

[Lady Vulpix]

Sorry, H_L. I wasn't calling your artwork SPAM. I was just saying that if you have a bundle of (up to 10) images, you should post them together rather than making several posts one right after the other. For one, it would cause less overhead for the forum (not that it's that much of a problem these days, but it will be if it ever becomes very active again), and it's easier to read this way. Now this is more personal, but it gives me an odd feeling to view a topic with 7 replies and find out that all the replies were made by the original poster.

I understand now that you didn't do it on purpose, and I'm sorry if I sounded rude. In the past, when I've seen someone make multiple posts in a row, it was done with the intention of spamming. I hope no one does that again, but if it did, I wouldn't want the spammer to find an excuse in the fact that another member was allowed to do it.

So keep posting your comic, I was giving you suggestions, not trying to bring it down. I'm sorry if I hurt you. It's not what I meant to do.

[Bulbasaur4]

I'm interested to see how it turns out! Your drawing style is awfully cute and I really like hand-drawn things... it just makes it more personal.

Now for the story itself- well, it is really hard to say anything about this point. The mysterious things coming out of the shower head I thought was really creepy and yet creative. The only thing I'd suggest is trying to be more clear on actions and dialogue- the beginning was confusing for me and I didn't quite understand what was going on. Also, I see you uploaded your photos to photobucket! Using their editing software, you can resize the images- which I recommend. I think you can make them a bit smaller while still being able to see and read it. That'll just help it so they load faster here... but then again, the internet here is REALLY slow.

Keep posting! : D

[Houndoom_Lover]

H: I know- Well, I know now I mean. My paranoia about it was hyper-senced that day. It was kinda sickening. You know, those days when you just need a hug. I havn't yet got the handel of having a bad day yet. Maybe because I don't have them very often ^_^.

Lady_Vulpix: Its okay! I just gave a freaky OCD about cluttering. I really hate when things are bundled really tight together- but its easier for others to read to read then that's okay. I wanna share!

I was feeling slightly dour (hehehe) when I came yesterday, and I took it aggersively. ^_^ But its all cool, Vulpix, thanks for putting them all together for me and not making ME do it. *huggles you* All is forgive! Sorry I spazzed on you ^_____^



Bulby: Finally! I get to say how much I love that cat thing!!! ...I loves it~ AAaw! ^-^ Thank you- I was really wreasling (that's nice and spelled wrong) with myself about what media I should do it in. My internet is really slow, also. Really? I was sooo pumped for the new themed backgrounds ^w^ I'll have to mess around with them in photobucker- I never know what size is right.

Do you have a spot that's the most confusing. I can always change it. Its hard for me to tell, since I know what's going on XD

Thanks- Oh man, I love those guys. They came out of nowhere really, since my rough draft looks completely different. I had to keep this thing under ten pages- and my rough draft was larger, and I wasn't willing to foresake the cover ^_^u.

Fun fact for all: This here comic is an audition of sorts. I won't advertise anything here, because no matter what happens, this comic will have its own conclution even if I don't get to the next level.

The next pages will be up soon!

And thanks guy My belly is now fulla joy.

[Houndoom_Lover]

[Lady Vulpix]

This is starting to get interesting.

[Houndoom_Lover]

Why thank you ^w^ Hopefully I can get chapter two up with the same speedy quickness.

[Houndoom_Lover]

Author's Notes: Its been a busy month or something or other. And there was a slight hicup, but never fear! I'll update continuously anyway!