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    Default Spirit's Blossom! (PancaKe's Present)

    Well, it's time for me to make my gift. I want to express a few things, but I'll let my verses say what I mean.

    Spirit's Blossom! (PancaKe's Present)

    It's just kinda hard to write
    A good piece for a cute girl;
    Plus a cold, realistic mind
    makes me anxious and unwell.

    But it's time to make you smile!
    'Cause the spirit of the heart,
    plus some out-of-this-world rhymes
    makes a poem full of art.

    Eagerness is on your mind
    when you touch the keyboard pad,
    and you post these happy comments
    which cheers people who is sad.

    In a way, we are the same
    since our friends are like a gift
    We evade a good night sleep
    'cause we let our mind to drift.

    I don't know you very well
    but you must have many traits
    which includes a real big heart
    and a way to make days great.

    I think you're a crazy girl
    at the same time, you are kind
    since the comments are reflected
    from the blossom of the mind.

    Maybe I'm exaggerating,
    "no one knows why we're like this"
    but if we're born once again.
    I'd like you to be my sis.

    I would like to end this ode
    saying sorry for mistakes
    And with candy canes and "SNOWCONES!!!!",
    I'll give this to you: PancaKe!

    PS: Know that "there are friends
    who may be for you a bother,
    but there are also true friends
    who are closer than a brother."


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    A few side notes:

    PancaKe: I spell it: pan-CAKE (rhyme in the 8th stanza) ^_^
    The last stanza is based on Pro: 18:24.
    I wanted the end to be a strong one, and I believe there was no better way
    than a quote from The Bible.

    *leaves gift on the floor, close to PancaKe and runs away and hides in a safe box, peeking from a hole to see her impression*


    Optimist award 2012.

    “There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate.” (Linda Grayson)

    Thank you everyone... for being so kind and for bringing out the best in me! You are definitely awesome! ^_^

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    Default Re: Spirit's Blossom! (PancaKe's Present)

    OMG

    That is such a beautiful present! I swear ; just ask my boyfriend - I was sitting here going "naw naw naw NAW" at the entire thing! Haha I love the way you mentioned snowcones, and my comments and oh you quoted the bible! You know me better than you think!

    Thank you so so so much! This is a fantastic gift



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    Default Re: Spirit's Blossom! (PancaKe's Present)

    Jejeje, I'm glad that you both like it(you and your boyfriend). I wanted to make sure that you like it, so I did some research while creating it, and I'm glad that it worked, since it impressed two people.

    Well, I feel weird about saying anything else, so once again, I'm glad that you like it. Cheers!

    BTW: PancaKe, one question: can I add this to my sig. (I ask you 'cause I thought that it might be kinda embarrasing...)
    Last edited by Shadow Wolf; 14th December 2008 at 06:43 AM. Reason: Reason for edit: adding a question.


    Optimist award 2012.

    “There is nothing better than a friend, unless it is a friend with chocolate.” (Linda Grayson)

    Thank you everyone... for being so kind and for bringing out the best in me! You are definitely awesome! ^_^

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    Default Re: Spirit's Blossom! (PancaKe's Present)

    Yeah sure! haha why not!



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    Quote Originally Posted by shazza View Post
    Mt. Moon gives me that similar feeling I used to get when I would wake up first thing in the morning as an 11/12 year old and get excited about browsing TPM.

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