Ok, so far this seems really good. I like that it isn't like a normal trainer fic. But lately I have been noticing lots of fics now with schools and stuff about pokemon and its starting to get a little boring. Spelling was ok, it only had a few mistakes but nothing major. Length was ok since its a start and I know you write good lengthy chapters so im not going to say a lot about that. So far this seems intresting with someone after Kojo and they killed his parents so now I am wondering if he is going to go find the person who did it. I will keep reading this cause I like your writing style so keep it up!