don't worry about whining, this really is a problem for some writers every once in a while on the boards. generally, especially around busy times like final exams and end of school year tests and stuff, people can't find time to read. And, if they are writing a fic they find even less time to read. So newer authors don't get the recognition they deserve because busy readers can't be bothered with checking out a paragraph of every story to see if they like it. They look for a popular one or a popular author, so they know it'll be good right off the bat (which isn't always the case btw).
it's not fair, but it really is all a lot of us can go. i haven't been able to keep steady track on a fic for a while now, with graduation yadda yadda, all that end of the year stuff. only skimming really.
in the summer i can guarantee you that readers will increase. summer's always the best time around here to get readers and new stories. i'd recommend maybe re-posting then, because i don't think it's cuz your fic is bad. I looked over Wolf Eternal and it's written very well. and you don't come off as a jerk to me, so it's not that.
what it also could be is how your fic is already really long, and people would rather pick up something that just got started so they can keep up with the updates.
it's awesome to hear ya like writing so much though. more than video games?! ya me too, except for maybe super smash bros. =)
and congrats on bringing a story that far. that's more than a lot of writers can say about their stories.