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5th August 2003, 12:37 AM
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~>) The Agents (<~(PG-13 I think)
This is a chapter 1, but im not sure if I should keep going. This is my first time, so please help me out a bit. Also, I need a name for this. The Agents doesnt seem right. Anyways, here goes;
~>) The Agents (<~
Chapter 1 - It starts
"Zan, get over here! Now!" yelled the boss of the whole service, Bryan.
"Yes, boss?" says Zan, curios what his boss would want. Walking into the chamber of Bryan, he marvels at the paintings. Hi-tech equipment lay on the table near Bryan. A chart, showing the productive agents and the less productive ones. He didnt see his name on the list anywhere, although he didnt see any of the YAS on the list.
The YAS is a new program in the agentcy. It stands for Youth Agent Service, almost spelling out what it is all about. The big agentcy, the OAS, or Official Agent Service, had a theory. When people are up to no good, and suspect the OAS will be looking for them, suspect an adult. Any tough looking adult will be ambushed, or killed. Well, maybe they will try. But sending a kid in is different. If they kill a kid, everyone will know what they are doing, or everyone will suspect. Jason is new to the YAS, and just learning how things went. Never being been in Bryan's room, he was amazed.
"Zan, we have your first mission. We have already sent Jason to the coast of Liberia to stop what we suspect is Pokemon Labor and the making of illegel weapons and drugs. However, we have lost contact of Jason. Last we heard was Jason saying that he has found one that he loves, but will still be on the case. Nothing afterwards. Your mission is to go find Jason, help him, and stop all suspections. If you fail however, come back immediatly. No harm done, except maybe a drop in the rankings. Good luck, Zan." Bryan said that almost wanting Zan to go. All the YAS agents arent here he thought. Now its Zan's turn.
"But sir, we are in California here. How will I get to Liberia? Im completely broke right now!" Zan questions with a worried look in his eye.
"Ah son, you underestimate us. However, I would suggest you get a job, get used to working in the real world. Now, back to the matter at hand. A jet is waiting for you at our private airport. It is near the building, ask anyone who has been here long for directions. It will take about 16 hours. However I could be totally wrong so sorry. However I think it will be about 8000 miles from here. Your pokemon are ready to go."
"Oh my god i forgot about my pokemon! Are Zephyr and Brawler okay? I hope they dont feel bad." worries Zan.
"Zan stop this! Your Pidgey and Meditite are fine! The OAS are capable people if you havent figured that out. Now, out with you. Get your gear on floor 3."
A quick '"Yes sir!"' and Zan is out. Walking through the hall, Zan sees a window. Not noticing coming in was because of the rush. Now, as he looks out, he can see training happening. Two OAS agents brawl. They are both veterans it seems; one with a great-looking Rhydon, the other fighting with a sturdy Nidoking. Rhydon and his trainer suddenly fall to the ground, on knees first. The building that Zan is in starts shaking. It abruptly stops, and Zan sees somebody exploding at the Nidoking user. It seems earthquake isnt the best move considering that a huge building s near. Rhydon doesnt care. He gets back up and suddenly his whole body starts crackling. Sometimes, a faint yellow can be seen. Then, a large bolt of lightning flys at Nidoking, although in vain. The large beast seems un-touched by it, making the Rhydon madder. The large horn on Rhydons head starts spinning out of control. He lowers his head and charges. Nidoking, looking at the last moment, get pummeled by the spinning horn. Rhydon lifts his head, with bloodstains all over it. Mostly at the top though. The Rhydon looks victorious, and the Nidoking looks horrible. A huge gash can be seen on his stomuch. Blood flows freely through. Zan quickly walks away, not wanting to see anymore. He finds the elevator and takes it to Floor 3.
He walks out of the elevator to a dimly-lit storage room. Papers are scattered everywhere. A sign on the door says 'Back in 5 minutes'. Another door is at the end of the room. Walking through, he opens the door, and instantly becomes amazed. Selves after shelves stacked with walky-talkys, watches, smoke bombs, everything you can think of! The manager, or well it seems, of all this taps Zan on the back, startling him.
"So, your the last YAS to leave, eh Zan? Well, I guess youll be needing this." Offers the manager, pointing to a vest on the table.
"It has a watch, walky-talky, a radio, a compass, and much much more. Here, try it on." The manager says, picking up the Vest and holding it to Zan. Zan takes it and slips it on. A perfect fit!
"Its great, I love it. Thanks alot!"
"Just stay safe, have a nice trip!"
And so it begins Zan thinks to himself while walking out the door and to the elevator. Lets hope it ends...
So, is it worth continuing? Im a new guy, so im not really sure. If you could help the name thatd be nice to. OKay, feel free to stomp me into the dust on this one 
PS: That chapter was really short because im not sure if i should keep this up.
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