It's interesting. I guess I'm out of the job if humans don't exsist (I'm studying to become an Anthropologist, and hopefully go into Egyptology). lol!
Anyway, it's good. I'm lost because I have no clue about these pokemon...well some of them. Description can be a little bit better, but how you mention how they feel is a plus. That's always good. I also like it that you are writing a story mainly on pokemon instead of the normal trainer fics.
The length can be a little bit better, and maybe a prolouge so we know what year it is, location, the starting of the plot, and maybe why the jewels are so important to pokemon. Maybe start off the history of the jewels that can catch the reader's attention. Something like that for example.
Keep up the good work! I would like to read the next chapter please.![]()