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    hi guys, I have finally done the story...here it is.


    Expect the Un-Expected

    The legend leads……




    Prologue


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    4 June, 1804


    “I am writing this in a cave near Halletown…the huge monsters are destroying everything! My farm, house, and my family have been killed by these monsters. I was in Fallabor Town when the flying monster striked. Our Rhino Tanks and the 7377 Helicopters have failed us….we have no shelter…The strange, old saint’s predictions have finally come true….now he is saying that there is no end to this….unless we push the red monster in the Fallobor Volcanoes and the blue monster in the Pacifidic Ocean….but there’s nothing against those monsters… the saint also said that if we can find the three twin legends, they can help us….but how? Nobody knows anything about them.. What are we going to do? My nuclear inventions have also failed me… I cannot do a thing here but watch the two monsters destroying Hoenn and pray for my life!”


    6 June, 1804


    “Today, as I awoke I saw heavy smoke coming from the Chamber Factory….the monsters have destroyed that factory as well….that’s my guess…I am now really starving and there’s no sign of food around here. As I went deep into the cave this afternoon, I was surprised to see something written on the wall…..in strange language consisting of different types of tiny squares….wait, I have seen that before…yes, that looks like the prescribe the old saint had shown us…..to find the way to the three legendary twin pokemon…..I cannot read the strange language….I have to get the old saint here, somehow…but what if he is dead? No, I must go, and find him, if he is in this world…”


    10 June, 1804

    “After many difficulties, I have finally found the old saint…he was in the Pokemon Center near Fallobar Town. The Pokemon Center was safe from the hungry pokemons as it was located deep in the forest. I took the old saint and went to the cave….he read the prescribe easily and it said, “The Rock Legendary twin is asleep in the Chamber of Treasure.” Our hopes were alive again. Both of us explored the whole cave but found nothing.”



    20 June, 1804

    “Yes! Hoenn is free! It all seemed a nightmare. But now, everything is normal, except every family has lost someone in the war between the two unknown pokemon. The General Stores have been destroyed; The World Trade Center building in Rustboro has been shattered into pieces. All of Hoenn is damaged. It would take decades to recover. My Laboratory is nowhere to be seen. After we found the Rock twin pokemon the cave was beginning to fall down, but we escaped as I used my Charizard for help. Then at the speed of light, the Rock Legendary pokemon escaped the cave and vanished in the forest. Then, after few days some people saw the three twin legendary pokemon, with their special powers, forcing the red pokemon to fall deep into Fallobor Volcanoes. Then the flying pokemon also disappear in the Pacifidic Ocean. Then, the three legendary twin pokemon headed towards their unknown destinations. The President of Hoenn, Sam Misher, announced the new Pokemon League which enabled kids of 12 or older to join the Pokemon League and fight with their pokemon in order to protect Hoenn. Now, I am looking for a rising future ahead of me………”




    8 April, 2004


    The lovely, fresh winds of the spring are passing through the small town of Little Root. There is a blue, flat board in front of the town which reads ‘Little Root Town, Your journey Awaits You!’. Little Root, the smallest, but indeed, the most beautiful city of Hoenn. It perfectly fits the requirements of a growing city with no over population, pollution, or other social problems. It is the best place for people who are passive and wants to live in a peaceful life. There are only few buildings in the town, including the Pokemon Center, a Poke Mart, the Sheraton Hotel and the famous "Prof.Birch's Laboratory,” a famous pokemon researcher’s Laboratory. Many green forests surround the town on east and west sides. On the northern side, there is a, smooth prostrate road known as Road 101, which leads to the town of Oldale. There is also a river south of the town known as "Carvanha River". It is obvious that the river is always full of Carvanhas. It is also an ideal place for fishing and to enjoy the fresh air. Across the River, lay the Johto region, which is smaller then Hoenn.

    There are only few houses in Little Root. One of them belongs to Mr. Kamil, the local businessman who owns the Poke Mart. He usually buys his Poke Mart utilities from the big cities such as Rustboro and sometimes Oldale, and then provides them to the people of Little Root. Mr. Kamil lives with his four children and his wife, Ms. Ruby. His oldest son, Wasif, used to be a pokemon trainer, but he quit after winning in the Hoenn League. His second oldest son, Nabeel, is 13 years old and is waiting for Prof. Birch to give him his starter pokemon so he can join the Pokemon League. His other two brothers, Ashar who is 7, and Hammad, who is 6, are attending the local Pokemon School. Nabeel is a high moral kid and too determined to be a Pokemon League Champion. This story revolves around Nabeel, his journey, his goals, and his dreams.......


    THe 1st chapter will be up soon...
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    Nice Prologue. Can't wait to read more. The only thing I saw wrong was the following sentence:

    "His oldest son, Wasif, used to be a pokemon trainer, but he quitted after winning in the Hoenn League."

    Quitted shouldn't have been used there. You should have just said "quit". Also, Pokemon should be capitilized, but now I'm being picky.

    Great job though. I'm looking forward to seeing what comes next. I hope this isn't just a story that is the same plot as the one in the Ruby/Sapphire games. Trainer trains Pokemon, beats gym leaders, becomse master.

    Again, great Prologue.

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    Okay, Nefarious Pokemon, only needs to be capatilized if your a specific craze mutant who slaughters any one who does not capatilize things right. But As I capatilize it I see no wrong with it but it really doesn't matter.

    Anyway...

    YES IT'S BACK!!!!!!! One of the greatest fics to ever hit the boards (out of the many ones out there) Oh yeah, I can't wait till we get where we leave off. I've been a silent reader and I just signed up, but I have been following this fic for a while.

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    BTW, for those who know Zee Sage, and his use of the character Soni Savage. I must insist this upon anyone reading, as my first post on the boards. SONI SAVAGE is copyrighted and officially mine and mine alone! Zee Sage has had my full permition in the past to use this name. For those who do not believe me and think I am him, YOU ARE WRONG!

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    Venasaur, I am sorry its just I had to make a few things clear, I am sorry and good fic.

    Goodbye, and Always Remember, Evil is Out There

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    Well, I surely didn't expect 3 replies in less than a hour.

    Nefarious: Thanks for reading the story and correcting the error. Actually, this isn't a new fanfic. I started about 6 months ago and I was at chapter 10, then I moved to my home country, Pakistan from the US. And now, I planned to revise the story....

    Soni: Hey, nice to hear from you. Hey, what about the many un-finished fics you have made??? Are you planning for more? And this is I think your 3rd nick...right? Well, thanks for reading the fic, and keep replying..

    Immortal Dreams: Hey Dan, I wasn't visiting TPM regularly, so didn't knew about the changes. My PM box is full?? thanks for letting me know. You could have emailed me. Well, I am having a few problems with my Dial up connection here, so I didn't know If I double posted..anyways, I deleted the thread...the fanfic may seem boring right now, as some of you have already read the fanfic, but I will try to post a couple of chapters a week...

    well, the next chapter will be up, sometime this week.

    keep reading!
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    BTW, for those who know Zee Sage, and his use of the character Soni Savage. I must insist this upon anyone reading, as my first post on the boards. SONI SAVAGE is copyrighted and officially mine and mine alone! Zee Sage has had my full permition in the past to use this name. For those who do not believe me and think I am him, YOU ARE WRONG!
    I quote myself, for as my second post, I will tell you again.

    I AM NOT ZEE SAGE!

    I gave Zee Sage full permission for MY character. It is not my fault for any unfinished fics he did not fufill!!!

    Srry, I thought I made myself clear before!

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    Cool fic so far. Used to read the other one but never replied. I am looking forward for more chapters! I am glad you started back up! Also Soni, you said your not Zee Sage, for the heck of it, I looked at both your profiles and they are the same pretty much plus they have the save screen name, Papa Smurf 2697. It's kind of strange to say your different with so many similarites in profiles. But it looks like Zee erasd it just a few minutes ago.

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    ohh crap...hi guys....sorry for the absence...actually my VGA card busted...so I got it fixed today.....

    the next chapter will be up pretty soon.
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    Yay! It's back. I read this a long, long time ago, waiting for you to update... you finally did! Keep it up!

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    Author's Note: FusionSonicX, thanks for the reply. ANd because these chapters are just reviewed and revised, I will post two chapters a week, and when I will finish revising the chapters, I will post one chapter a week.
    thanks.


    Chapter 1:
    AN UN-EXPECTED MATCH!



    It’s another pleasant morning in Little Root as the door bell rings of the Siddiqui Residence. The door opens, revealing an 18 years old boy, who receives the mail and then closes the door. Upstairs, Nabeel is busy dreaming about his forthcoming pokemon journey.

    “What the....” Nabeel shrieks as he wakes up because of the Electrode alarm buzzing. He turns the alarm off, and peeks at the clock. “Ohh, its just 8,” he thinks while lying down on his bed. He thinks about his pokemon journey, which is the only topic he can think of.
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    Nabeel is a 5"2, little fat, 14-year old boy with short, black hairs and black eyes. His skin color is light brown, and he looks like a mixed boy. He graduated from an educational school in April, 2002. He then attended a pokemon school for two years, and graduated on 14th April, 2004. He is a really smart student with a great attitude. He is a cricket-lover, a sport that is similar to baseball. He loves to read books, hang on the computer, play cricket, and play with his brother's Skitty. He has an amicable personality.

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    Meanwhile, Nabeel gets up from his bed and walks toward the bathroom. As he closes the bathroom door, he brushes his teeth, takes a shower, and then changes into his white Nike shirt and blue jeans. He exits the bathroom, and come across the mirror, placed above his studying table. He combs his hairs, mostly on right, and some to the left. He then fixes his bed and put his watch on his left wrist. As he races downstairs, he sights his parents and his older brother eating breakfast. On the breakfast table are some apple pie, mix fruits, some omelet, and two jugs half-full of Orange and Apple Juice.

    "Hi dad, hi mom!" he exclaims as he sits on the white plastic chair.

    "Hi son!" His dad welcomes him back. He is eating mix fruit and some Apple Pie.

    "Hi honey!" His mom greets him. She is drinking some Apple Juice now that she just finished her Omelet and Apple pie. Nabeel sees an empty chair beside his brother. His brother is eating, and also feeding his perky Skitty.

    He then looks up at his favorite dish, Mixed Fruits. He thinks about it for a moment. It is his mom's original, and latest recipe. She discovered it, and it is pretty popular around Little Root because of the fact that it is really healthy for older people. It consists of as many fruits you want to add. But, his mom usually uses apples, oranges, pineapples, bananas, guavas, mangos, and papayas. She then cut them in tiny pieces. Finally, she adds some sugar and salt in the bowl. It is his favorite dish out of Ms. Ruby’s hundreds of recipes.

    Nabeel slightly takes the omelet bowl and puts some omelet in his plate with a large size tablespoon. He takes a piece of thin bread, round in shape, and eats his omelet with it.... “Ahh... delicious” he exclaims. After a few minutes, the plate is empty, and then he eats Mix Fruit. He really likes the apples and the bananas in the nutritional meal. After a few minutes, his brother, Wasif, and his dad leave the breakfast table, after finished their drinks. He then hurries up and drinks his apple juice. His dad leaves the house toward his Poke Mart, while Wasif leaves the house to train his pokemon. His mom is busy reading a new recipe book that she ordered from Rustboro.

    After finishing his breakfast, he washes his hands and starts doing his daily chores, which includes cleaning his room, washing Breakfast dishes, and feeding his brother’s pokemon. He hurries up and finishes the first two chores, and then heads toward the backyard, to feed his brother’s pokemon. Wasif is a pokemon trainer, competed in the Hoenn League in January, 2004, which continued for over two months. He was rated among top 25, which was a great honor. He started his journey two years ago, in 2002, and now he is at Siddiqui residence, training with his pokemon. He will soon leave for the Johto region, to collect the badges their and participate in the league. His pokemon include Swampert, which once was his starter pokemon Mudkip, Skitty, the cutest in the team which won him many Contest medals. Then are Swellow, Duskull, Crawdant, Nidoking, Golbat, and several others. He quickly fed the Crawdant in the pond, Nidoking, lying beside a tree, and Golbat, playing with other Golbats.

    He then heads outside so he can help his dad run the store. As he walks outside, he feels the cool breezes of the spring winds. The little town just looks like a big village, with houses on both sides, and then a forest on the north. As Nabeel exits the door, he sights his brother training with his Swampert and Skitty. Swampert is shorter than Wasif but is more powerful for sure. He is blue in size, standing up on his two feet, with dark blue rubber horns on his head, and at his rear end. This pokemon has orange sides on his face. Skitty, on the other hand, is pretty small, but is cuter than Swampert. Her body is a mixture of orange and pink colors. She has a long, thick tail. She has small horns on the side colored the same as her body.

    Suddenly, Nabeel sights a trainer, who looks almost the same as Nabeel, coming toward him. He is almost as tall as Nabeel, with black hairs and brown eyes and is wearing black T-shirt, along with white shorts, which read "Adidas" on the bottom. He has his name on shirt, which reads “Dan.” Suddenly, he clamors at Nabeel’s brother and yells, "Hi, you over there," he points to Wasif, as he looks back and locates him

    "I challenge you to a pokemon battle... what do you say?" he asks, violently.

    “Uhh, I don’t feel like battling right now, so find someone else,” he calmly replies as the trainer looks at Nabeel.

    "Okay, what about you over there." Dan yells to Nabeel as he gets pretty nervous.
    He vacillates a bit, but then answers, "I don't have any pokemon.”

    "What? Okay then.... I will find another trainer," he comments as he continues walking by the side walk.

    ”Uhh...thanks god... What would happen if I had any pokemon to battle with.. I wouldn't stand a chance against that trainer,” Nabeel anticipates as he hears his brother shouting...

    "Hi! Wait a minute" he bawls the trainer as he quickly turns around and answers, “What is it?” he asks.

    "How about you battle my brother Nabeel" Wasif suddenly squeaks as Nabeel’s heartbeat crosses 100.

    "Me, how can he…? I don’t have any pokemon," Nabeel says, innocently.

    "Oh, don't worry, you can borrow some of mine," Wasif offers him.

    Nabeel is totally confused; if to accept the offer or not.

    If I have to be a pokemon master, I have to fight challenges and build confidence in myself,” he thinks like a trainer and then replies, “Okay, but make it short, will ya?”

    “Okay, how about 2 on 2 battle?" The trainer asks.

    "Okay... No problem with me!" Nabeel replies, confidently. He thinks that his brother’s pokemon must be tough. They are standing in the middle of the road, which is clean from the traffic. The street ends on the far right, after two houses. Nobody is seen in the street, which merges into another one going east to west.

    “Let’s go then, it would be a piece of cake for Dan,” he comments aggressively. Wasif quickly hands Nabeel two pokeballs.

    "Ready?" The trainer asks Nabeel as he nods.

    "You can go first," he suggests as Nabeel picks up one of the two pokeballs Wasif gave him, and then throws the gray colored pokemon thinking that the pokemon inside must be a staunch. With a gray beam of light, the pokeball lands on the ground as a dog-like pokemon covers the area.

    "Aaaaoooow," the pokemon howls in a deep voice.

    "Ohh! A Pocheyna, lets go Butterfree" the trainer orders as he throws a white and purple pokeball which lands on the ground, opening, and then releasing a butterfly pokemon, with enchanting wings and a beautiful body.

    ”Ffree," she cries.

    "Nabeel, that my newest caught Poocheyna" My brother says conveniently.

    "What? Newest caught? Does that mean that you have not trained it yet?" He asks unbelievingly. He was actually shocked.

    "Yup! That's right. I want you to work hard and then win," He nods as he encourages him.

    "Well, let's go then. Butterfree, start off with your Confusion attack!" Dan orders impatiently as the butterfly pokemon looks at the howling pokemon. After a few moments, several blue ultrasonic waves penetrates, thumping Pocheyna, who falls down, but quickly retrieves.

    "Pocheyna, use your bite attack," Nabeel commands quickly as Pocheyna runs up to Butterfree and then jumps up with his mouth open, ready to bite her. But, suddenly Butterfree flies up in a matter of seconds, dodging the attack.

    "Butterfree, use your wing attack," Dan says steadily. The flying pokemon flies toward Pocheyna and then as she gets close to Pocheyna, her wings glows, and then she strikes Pocheyna. He tries to dodge the attack, but barely succeeds.

    "Pocheyna, hurry up and use your Take Down," Nabeel orders as he thinks of an attack.

    "Butterfree quick, fly up," Dan says. But, Butterfree got really close to Pocheyna when she used the wing attack, and Pocheyna is pretty fast as well. The attack results in a direct hit as Butterfree falls down to ground, but after a few moments, she recovers.

    "Butterfree, use your sleep powder," Dan authenticates devotedly.

    "Pocheyna, lie down and cover up your face,” Nabeel thinks quickly as he remembers that sleep powder only works when the powder enters your nose, eyes, or mouth. The attack fails as Butterfree gets back to her normal position.

    "Pocheyna, use your take down,” Nabeel orders confidently. Pocheyna runs toward his opponent, but surprisingly, by the time it gets there, Butterfree moves out of the way and then uses a hard tackle

    Pocheyna falls down and faints, eventually. Nabeel examines him for few moments.

    “Return, Pocheyna," he says as he points the pokeball to the pokemon and then presses the white button on it. With a black beam of light, Pocheyna returns to his pokeball, resting.

    "Yay! Great job Butterfree," Dan exclaims as he hugs the female pokemon, who cheers as well. Nabeel tenses a bit, and then throws the second pokeball with a lot more courage, “Pokeball go," he vows as he throws a green pokeball in the air, revealing a pokemon which stands a bit shorter to his shoulders, with a green body. She is holding two flowers colored blue and red.

    "Rose..rose," the pokemon cries her name as her beautiful eyes arouses the sweet looking Butterfree.

    "Ohh! I caught Roselia for the garden in the backyard. I barely had a chance to train it. But I bet, she’s stronger than Pocheyna,” he comments as the beautiful pokemon looks ready to battle.

    “What, another untrained pokemon? Crap...,” he thinks as he thinks that the pokemon would be a grass pokemon, his favorite type.

    "Roselia, use your Magical Leaf," he orders as he read this attack in a book, and knew that Roselia learns it at an early stage. Roselia spins her body around, and then green colored leaves transpire out from her green body and pits Butterfree. She tried to dodge it but since the leaves were scattered through a high range. Butterfree falls down, which proves that the attack was a critical hit and the bug pokemon faints.

    "Wow, Roselia is really powerful," he exclaims as he looks at the experienced Roselia, adorably.

    "Butterfree, you were great. Return," Dan returns his Butterfree to her pokemon with a white and light bluish beam of light.

    "Go Totodile, the battle has just started," he orders as he throws a blue pokemon, revealing a blue colored small-Alligator like pokemon, with red zigzags on his back. The hyper pokemon suddenly starts to dance around.

    "Toto...dile," he cries as he dance even more.

    "Is this a dancing pokemon?" Nabeel asks he bursts out of laughing, causing mayhem around the field as Totodile looks at him vigorously. The pokemon then runs toward Nabeel as he notices danger, and when the pokemon almost reaches him, he starts running. These two are running around, wildly as Totodile finally reaches Nabeel, biting his right leg. Dan and Wasif bursts out of laughing as Nabeel gets embarrassed.

    "What... the... leave my leg you little alligator," he angers the pokemon some more as the blue pokemon holds onto his leg, biting him with his sharp teeth.

    "Totodile, stop it right now," Dan orders as he stops laughing. Totodile obeys and then leaves Nabeel, returning to Dan. Totodile didn’t damaged Nabeel’s leg much, but still, it hurts.

    "Okay Sucker, I am gonna teach you a lesson. Roselia, magical leaf," he says challengingly, but feeling pain on his leg. Roselia spins as several green leaves burst out from her body, slamming Totodile.

    "Totodile, use your water gun," Dan says plainly as Totodile sprays water from his mount toward Roselia, who manages to dodge it.

    "Roselia, use your Mega Drain," Nabeel adjures. Roselia obeys his command and then focuses on Totodile, running toward him, and then drains his energy as she holds him.

    "Totodile, skull bash attack," Dan authenticates, dexterously.

    "Roselia, Magical Leaf attack" Nabeel orders as well. Totodile focuses on Roselia and then jounces on her as she begins to spin around, releasing dozens of green leaves. The attacks collide as there’s a big flash in middle of the field. Roselia seems to have an upper-hand since she’s a grass type, meaning she’s superior to water pokemon. But suddenly, both pokemon falls to the ground, fainting. The match results in a tie.

    "Ohh! Return Totodile...I sure didn’t expect that," Dan comments shockingly.

    "Return Roselia," Nabeel calls the pokemon back as he feels a bit proud of himself, almost winning the battle against an experienced trainer.

    "That was great, Nabeel," Wasif comments as he pats him on his back.

    "Yeah, that was a good match. I didn't even have a chance against Dan," Nabeel says, resistibly. He then returns the pokeballs to his brother.

    "Yeah, well I gotta go. See yall later...do you know the way to Johto region?" he asks Nabeel.

    "Of course. It’s just 2-minute of walking from here,” Nabeel replies as he starts walking toward the Docks Dan follows him after saying bye to Wasif.

    "So, where’s your home town?” Nabeel asks as he quickly replies, “Uh.. I used to live in Rustboro.”

    “Ohh, it must feel great to be in such a big city," Nabeel says as he always dreamed of going somewhere else in Rustboro besides the pokemart, where he and his dad used to get the groceries from once every two months. The pokemart there is about three times larger than Mr. Kamil’s.

    "Yes it does, but its way too crowded. I like smaller cities. But there, everything you need is right away," he says as they reach the docks.

    "Well, thanks for everything, I will never forget our match," he says as he continues his way toward the small boat, which is capable of taking 4-5 people at a time.

    "Bye...," Nabeel says as Dan accelerates the speed boat.

    "Bye..," he calls back as he sails toward the Johto region.

    Nabeel waves him back and then continues back to Little Root, toward his dad's Poke Mart...
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    thanks for reading...
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