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[Pokemon_Master_Jesse]

Cold Steel: The Enforcers

Cold Steel: A secret society of the worlds most powerful trainers who's purpose is to enforce the ballance between Pokemon and Humans. Cold Steel has excisted for over three hundred years and has power over even the government, they use the Pokemon Leages to seek out new members.

Plugue: An evil syndocate that pulled the strings behind the sence of Team Rocket, Team Magma and Aqua, Chipper, and Team Snaggem in order to gain power throughout the Regions. They are now trying to obtain the worlds legendary Pokemon using their secret weapon: Dyoxis.

Six years after the reawakening of Groudon and Kyroge and their catyclismic battle that almost destroyed the Hoeen region Cold Steel members, Steven, Lance, and Wes, were reported to have been found dead in their respective regions. Their deaths were apparently "accidents", however cuts and bruses found on Lance's corpse have lead to speculation that he was murdered and did not infact drown as stated in the news. Two of Cold Steel's best were sent to each of the three regions to investegate into the deaths of the three members who had all helped to put an end to high criminal activity in their regions (Wes: Chipper/Snaggem, Lance: Rocket, Steven: Magma/Aqua) around the same time.
Meanwhile Plague, who over the past 30 years have become the head honchos of orginized crime in the pokemon world, have recently stolen Dioxys from the the space center in Mossdeep (where he was cloned from DNA found on a space rock) and inslaved it to do there bidding. Plague's leader, <Insert name here>, plans to use Dioxys to inslave the other legendary pokemon and use their power to concure the world. Aside from that he has also ordered his best Hit man to whack the people responcible for the downfall of his/her/father's little pet products over the past couple years. <Insert leader's name here> Does not understand the consicunces of disterbing the Balance of the legendary pokemon and could, without meaning to, destroy the world he/she seeks to own...

(I'm not sure if thats good enough but it's probibly fine fornow... God it's been such a long time since I've made an RPG)

Players needed:
Six members of Cold Steel. Eight members of Plugue including it's leader.

Profile Setup:
Name:
Age:
Gender:
Appearance:
Side: (Cold Steel/Plague)
Personality:
History:
Relations:
Pokemon:
Other:

Cast:
Cold Steel:
Hoeen Investegation:
Jesse Sternen - Me
Open
Orre Investegation:
Open
Open
Kanto/Sevie Investigation:
Alex Sprakler - Sidrous
Open
Extras:
Only if everything else gets filled

Plague
Leader - Open (charecter must be at least 50 years of age or the son/duaghter of the original leader, will have Dioxys on team)
Hoeen Executive - Open
Orre Executive - Open
Kanto/Sevie Executive - Open
Hit man - Open
Grunts - Need at least 3

Name: Jesse Sternen
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Side: Cold Steel
Appearance: Average build, about 6'1" tall, about 162 Lbs. Wears a grey suit with a pair of gold cufflings, a black tie, and of course a white dress shirt (He looks very very profesonal ). His short black hair hangs just below his eyebrows. He has hazil brown eyes which are almost always covered by shades. He has taned white skin and a small tatoo of a Skarmory, wings wide open head pointing straight up, on the back of his neck.
Personality: Jesse is a bit rough around the edges and not exactly the easiest person to get along with but he is also very kind and loyal, he loves pokemon and often has a far away look in his eyes during battles.
History: Jesse was born and raised in Mossdeep City, he looked up to Steven and wanted to be a Pokemon trainer just like him. For Jesse's thirteenth birthday Steven gave him a Deldom and made him an official Pokemon Trainer. Two months after his birthday, he and his friend Rose, who had been given a Ralts by her Mother, set off to Challange Gyms and Eventually the Pokemon Leage. Jesse and Rose went there seperate ways three years later when Rose's parents moved to the Sevie Islands. She gave him her Milotic before leaving. After two years of trying Jesse Finaly became the Pokemon leage Champion and was then Recruted by Cold Steel to be an Inforcer. A year later he got a job as an engineer at Silph Co. and after six years was promoted to an Executive. The next year he moved to the Sevie Islands and opened a Pokemon gym specializing in steel types in the waters between Six and Seven Islands which is a cover for The Cold Steel headquaters. Nothing of any signifagence has happened since then.
Relations: None yet. I'll add some later
Pokemon:
Metagross -Genderless- Cold Steel (It's a total coinsidance. That was the name of my Metagross before I thought this up)
Charazard -Male- Deaboros
Alakazam - Male - HocusPocus
Tyranitar -Male- Hellfang
Milotic -Female- Leviathen
Salamence -Female- Sharptooth
Other: Nothing

I'll fix it again if it still sucks... I guess

[VirtualPlay]

Hm, alright, it looks like a good start, but there are a lot of things missing, a lot of questions that aren't anywhere near answered.

The plot is a good base, and you could start it with that, but, as it stands right now, it is very simple and detail-less. Details are what attract RPers.

Conversely, your blank sheet is very detailed, your filled-out forms are good. However, I have no idea what you are trying to say with this "alias" form. That might be a good thing to add to the plot, or at the very least something that you should describe before the form.

Also, if you're planning on having PC (as opposed to NPC) Plague members, you might want to expand on what Plague is all about. You can't just have a group of people with absolutely no direction.

Don't get me wrong, your idea is a good one, there are just too many holes and unanswered questions to make it a very interesting one.

P.S.: It's spelled "Enforcers"

[Pokemon_Master_Jesse]

Yeah sorry about that. I was really tired when I made that and it was a bit of a rush job. I'll fix it up now... alot...
Also the alias thing was supposed to be for when they went under cover but now that I think about it, it isn't that good an Idea as they are already a secret society and it doesn't need to get much more secret then that...

There.. Better... I hope...

[Siderous]

Name: Alex Sprakler
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Side: Cold Steel
Appearance: Average build; 5'9", and 160 lbs. He wears blue jeans and a black t-shirt with an open blue dress shirt over top of the t-shirt. He has short, curly brown hair and blue eyes.
Personality: He loves Water type Pokemon, but that hasn't stopped him from catching others. Alex cares for all Pokemon; this attitude reflects towards people as well.
History: Alex was raised in Cerulean City. His parents were able to get a hold of a Super Rod when he was young, and when he went fishing for the first time, he caught a Staryu; a Pokemon he still uses. Alex caught many different Pokemon around Cerulean, and adopted some from his own parents, who are the owners of the Pokemon Care Center, the place where unwanted Pokemon are brought. With the help of his parents, Alex soon was able to be the proud owner of over 70 Pokemon. After careful studying, Alex set out when he was twenty to become a Pokemon Master. It took nearly five years, but Alex was able to expand his Pokemon collection to 120 types, and beat the Elite Four. Cold Steel recruited him to gather and study all the Pokemon in Kanto. For the last three years, Alex has studied them, and was even able to put together a tremendous team of Pokemon. It's unfortunate that he has no Pokemon from the other regions; he has little knowledge of the other Pokemon.
Relations: None yet.
Pokemon:
Starmie [F]
Lapras [F]
Alakazam [M]
Dragonite [M]
Magmar [F]
Machamp [M]

[Pokemon_Master_Jesse]

Your in. thats 1 member 12 to go...