Incognegro: A Brother's Quest To The Advance League (My returning fic) PG-13

[Reborned-Dragon]

I'm gonna set ya'll up with my first fanfic in years. The story involves a 17-year-old brother from the gutters of New York questing to the Advance League Championship not only for the $10,000,000 dollar cash prize but to also prove he isn't just a street kid from the ghetto. There will be action, adventure, friendship, betrayal, seduction, language and alot of hot ass thrown in :biggrin:. I'ma hit ya'll with the Prolouge to begin with.

Incognegro: A Brother's Quest To The Advance League

Prolouge
Here goes love, hate, pleasure and pain, real street nigga and I'm bringing the pain, I'm livin' the grand hustle of life, you can't see this on TV, BET or MTV, if you reppin' New York South Jamaican Queens than follow me. Gunshots and screams fill the streets, if you were here for a day, the only beef you'd want is with your baby mama. Blood is like rain and dirt's like blood, 90% of mainstream rappers ain't this hood, and when my get rich quick schemes fail to get me out of the hood, how come my momma and siblings get mad at me for bein' who I am and doin' what I say I am and just cause my plans are bigger than J. Lo's booty and I'm cooler than a BK Icee, that don't give you the right to dislike me, I'ma get my family outta the hood and when I'm done, I'll finally have my place under the sun...

A quick rap for an prolouge but you'll learn the brother's name and how he found out about the Advance League and what not once I write Chapter 1 so peace ya'll. R&R and I'm out!

[Darien Shields]

This is... well, I've never seen anything of its ilk before, so I guess it's original. I like the gutter-born idea. Have you played Colosseum? There are some cool rapper characters in that, it would be cool if they made cameos, or were referenced.

Oh, and it's spelled Prologue.

And, err, you realise that Newbark is in Johto, which is in... Japan?

[Zcade0]

This is original to say the least. Whats wrong with Newbark? I see no problem there. This might need to be rated pg-13 though