I think even making it a two part would explain some things for meIts late at night, I haven't see Igor or whatever it is you were watching/reading that inspired you, so I don't 100% get the plot of it, but I enjoyed reading it all the same. The interraction between characters and the way you word your words is lovely and it makes it enjoyable to read your writing. I liked Claud, I get the feeling that he isn't so worried about the sun being out and the evil being locked away, but I'm not sure if that's the impression I was meant to get!
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