Becoming a Hoenn Master

[Dragon_Claw]

I don't even know how much far I'm gonna go with this fic, I just want to see if it has more succes then P.S.F

Chapter one - Goal: Dragon's Den

Hi, my name is Brad. I live in Blackthorn City. I am currently 10 year old. I already got official permission to go on my Pokémon quest, but I promised my best friend Jason to wait until he was old enough en got official permission. We both study in the Blackthorn Academy, where we have to learn everything about Pokémon before going on our Pokémon quest. Well, class is starting, and I not better get another foul grade.

‘Well everybody, I think we’ll not open the books today.’ The teacher said.

‘Wow, this is great!’ Daisy, a girl from the class said!

‘Not really Daisy, seeing we’ll say goodbye to three people today.’ the teacher sighed.

‘Huh? I thought only Brad and I where leaving on a Pokémon quest.’ Jason said confused.

‘You wished!’ a voice from the back off the class came.

‘That’s right, Alicia will be leaving on her adventure too.’ The teacher said.

Ever since the kindergarten Alicia and Jason hated each other, but I think her heart would be broken if she couldn’t come with us.

‘You want to come with us Alicia?’ I asked her.

‘Come where?’ she replied ignorant.

‘On our adventure!’ I yelled excited.

‘Oh boy’ Jason said.

‘Sure, I’ll go with you guys.’ She said like she didn’t care.

‘Oh yeah, by the way you three, the principal asked if you could come by. I’ll write you a note for the Den keeper.’ The teacher said.

Nobody ever spoke to the principal, only some of the people who left to go on their journey. That is mostly because he lives in the Dragon’s Den, where it’s very tough getting there. Of course this means that we don’t have to visit him when we get punished.

‘Take this’ the teacher said while giving me a box. ‘Use this if you’re in trouble.’

When we got outside Jason and Alicia immediately snatched the box, and they found a Pokéball inside. ‘Pokémon, go!’ Alicia yelled while throwing the Pokéball at the ground.

‘Altari…aaah!’ a blue cloud bird said.

‘Altaria, the dragon/flying Pokémon’ I said.

‘flying? Let’s fly to the principal’s office!’ Jason said.

We climbed on top of Altaria, and we gave the note from the teacher to the Den keeper. ‘Allright kids, you may enter the Den.’

When we got in, we saw trainers training their Pokémon. We flew over them, and then we crossed the water. All of the sudden Altaria fainted, and we all fell.

‘This isn’t that bad, we can just swim further’ Alicia said while returning Altaria to his Pokéball.

‘Is it me or are we moving?’ I asked Alicia and Jason.

‘Brad, don’t look now, but we’re being sucked into a giant whirpool.’ Jason said to me.

We all started screaming, but all of a sudden Jason and I saw Alicia being dragged away by something, and we got lifted in the air.

I opened my eyes and saw a guy standing over me. I jumped up, and looked around. We were in a building, and Jason and Alicia where already awake.

I screamed: ‘Oh my god, it’s the Dragon Master, Lance and Claire!’

Alicia said: ‘Don’t be stupid, they’re simple Pokémon trainers.’

‘I’m sorry to disappoint you little girl, but we are the three strongest dragon trainers.’ Claire said.

‘Yes, and you where lucky Claire and I where back in town, you better thank our dragons.’ Lance said.

‘Then who saved who?’ Jason said.

The Dragon Master said: ‘Salamence saved you, Kingdra saved you little girl, and Dragonite saved him.’

I said: ‘Wow, I got saved by a Dragonite!’

The dragon master then said: ‘We have a starting Pokémon for all of you.’

Alicia whispered to me: ‘Do you think we’ll get dragon Pokémon?’

[pokemonrule13]

WOW! The life of a pokemon can be tough. I like how you descirbed things so well. You make your storys at a good length so it does not take forever to read. I like the luxuary ball thing. That was really neat. You are a very good writer.

[ralts_mudkip]

I'm pretty sure that it's same thing as Shock Wave, the move i requested. But oh well...

[Dragon_Claw]

Originally posted by ralts_mudkip
I'm pretty sure that it's same thing as Shock Wave, the move i requested. But oh well...

Shockwave WAS used!

'Pikachu, climb on Bayleaf and use Shockwave!', Wattson yelled. Pikachu ran at Bayleaf, and jumped on her leaf, which was standing on her head. Pikachu started using Shockwave, and Bayleaf fell threw her for-knees.

[ralts_mudkip]

Originally posted by Dragon_Claw
Shockwave WAS used!

My point is that Eletric Swift (in the video game) is cald Shock Wave.

... here i go, geting all nit picky again. ;o

[Diamondlance]

Great story so far! I'm interested to see what happens next. I'd be glad to be in your fic if you want to use me.
Name: Joe

Sex: Male

Looks: 5'8'', kind of skinny, short spiky brown hair, brown eyes, dark blue hooded sweatshirt, blue jeans

Personality: Uses brains before brawns. A bit quick tempered, but tries to control it. Not very athletic, but super smart.

Pokémon (Nicknames in parentheses): Houndoom (Pyrodoben), Starmie (Neptune), Magneton (Magnet), Crobat (Venobat), Tyranitar (Rexsaur), and Machamp (Fisticuffs)

Experience: Beaten the Elite 4 (Several times over)