Yu-Gi-Oh! the millenium adventure

[goldenzigzagoon]

PART ONE:the first chapter


DOMINO HIGH SCHOOL

At a lunch table two juniors were dueling. A huge crowd was around them cheering.


One boy was the school bully named Richard Toad but everyone (even his teachers) called him Frogboy. He always had a trio of seniors following him around. He was the only kid in the school who beat Yugi Mouto (without losing a single lifepoint). One rumour about him was that he was raised by frogs and taught to duel. He had naturally green hair and wore a leather jacket, a sleeveless green shirt, and blue jeans. He had full lifepoints and a card in defence mode.


The other boy was Willian Rakon the 17th, the richest kid in the school. He had a distant relation to the king of a foreign country. He wore a tuxedo with a carnation on it and fancy pants. He had 4000 lifepoints and had Earl of demise(2000) on his Field.


"attack" William ordered.


"you destroyed my toad master which when flipped lets me summon frog the jam(750)" Frogboy said discarding toad master. He took out frog the jam from his deck and placed it in attack mode.


"Oh no! I left a monster on Frogboys Field and he has two T.A.D.P.O.L.Es. Anyone who does that loses even the legendary Yugi Mouto" William thought.


"from the look on your face I guess you noticed your hopelessness" Frogboy laughed. "I sacrifice frog the jam to jam to summon Des frog, I activate its ability to play another Des Frog for each T.A.D.P.O.L.E in my graveyard letting me play two more now I use Des Croaking to destroy every card on your Field now time for triple direct attacks"


Williams lifepoints fell to zero. Then William and Richard heard a feint buzzing noise- a fly. Frogboy caught it with his long tongue and swallowed it without chewing.
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After the duel almost every student was taking about Froboys technique. Almost.

One boy was reading a book silently like he was supposed to. He was wearing his school uniform like he was supposed to. His name was Alex Wazzle. He always followed the rules making him the least popular kid in the school. He was short had black hair and wore glasses.


"Hey shrimp, whatya reading?" Frogboy asked and took Alex's book."Oh Harry Potter" he mumbled and tore a page in half.


"Hey, give it back!" Alex shouted.


"No way shrimp" Frogboy laughed.


"I'll tell the teacher if you dont" Alex threatened.


"HA! are you threatening me?" Frogboy asked.


Alex got up and told the teacher.
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DING!the final bell rang. Alex went to his locker.


"YO, nobody rats on Frogboy and gets away" Frogboy said. Next thing Alex knew a senior punched him giving him a black eye.


"Hey Frogboy" Alex said "how about we duel in the playground tonight at 5:00, I win and you leave me alone"


"OK,lets raise the stakes the winner takes one card that the loser used within the duel, we will use duel disks that is assuming you have one"


"of course I do" Alex said
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ALEXS HOUSE

"Oh no, I dont have a duel disk" Alex thought when he got home.


DINGDONG! Alex's doorbell rang. Alex opened the door. William stepped in followed by two bodyguards. He was carrying a suitcase.


"what are you doing here?" Alex asked.


"No time to explain William said opening the suitcase revealing stacks of hundred dollar bills."I heard you have a duel in a mere hour so lets get down to business"


William gave a very surprised Alex a hundred dollar bill.


"why are you giving me this?" Alex asked.


"No time to explain" William said closing his suitcase.


"How did you find out about my match?"


"everyone in town knows, do you mind if I invite a few people?"


"OK, but just a few, I want this match to be really private"
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A half-hour later Alex was in a collectors shop. He had just bought a duel disk but had some extra money so he bought a pack of cards.


He gasped at one of the cards he got.


"Hey that's the rare Black luster soldier, Envoy of the beginning" the shop owner said."it is a every collectors dream, guard it with your life"


"Oh, well I have a better card" Alex said showing the shop owner his deck.


"That's amazing"the shop owner gasped."that's even better than my deck"


"oh" Alex mumbled


"I cant believe you didn't already have a duel disk, you must be rich to have those cards"


"I am just lucky"Alex shrugged.


"you must be unbeatable"


"no I lost three times, I never underestimate my enemy" Alex explained."Twice it was to the guy I am about to face"


"I wish ye good luck"
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THE SCHOOL PLAYGROUND

Frogboys watch ticked onto 5:01 P.M.


"He is late" he mumbled.


"OH WAIT, WAIT I AM HERE!" Alex shouted while he tried hopping the fence. He fell to the ground,scraped the dirt off and ran over to the baseball diamond whrere a full stadium of people waited. Alex panted.


The crowd cheered.


"Well atleast the crowds on my side this time" Alex murmured.


"Oh hi Alex!" William shouted.


"I thought I told you not be bring a big croud!" Alex shouted.


"your lucky" William told him."I could have invited every citizen of Monazoo"


"Just get on with the duel!" Frogboy screamed.


"Fine" Alex said drawing six cards."I play White Magician Pikeru"


A cute young pink haired witch wearing a cute white dress and a yellow hat appeared(1200).


"I play a card in defence mode" Frogboy said and did so."end turn"


"Now that my turn beginns due to Pikerus ability I gain 400 lifepoints for each card on my Field" Alex said and his lifepoint meter went up to 8400. "now I play Eb on Magician Curran in attack mode"


A White Magician Pikeru look-alike with the same stats wearing a black costume with bunny ears on it.

"Baton twirl blast" Alex ordered. Curran slammed her baton into Frogboys defensive card. A tan colored frog with a long tongue appeared (100/100) then shattered.


"Since you destroyed my poison draw frog I can draw a card" Frogboy said and drew a card.


"Pikeru attack directly with baton beam blast" Alex ordered. Pikeru twirled her baton and fired a blast of energy slamming into Frogboy and reducing his lifepoints to 6800.


"my turn" Frogboy said drawing a card."another card in defence"


Alex drew."you remember Pikerus effect dontcha" Alex said. Pikeru twirled her baton and pixie dust came out increasing Alex's lifepoints to 9200."and Curran makes you lose 300 for every card on your Field" Curran winked then bonked Frogboy on the head reducing his lifepoints to 6500."now I play fire princess"


A witch wearing a red dress with a wooden club appeared (1300).


"Pikeru attack" Alex commanded. Pikeru blasted Frogboys defence card. A black tadpole with a red design on it appeared(0) then shattered.


"You destroyed my T.A.D.P.O.L.E which lets me take another one from my deck and puts it in my hand" Frogboy explained.


"fire princess inferno spell and Curran baton twirl blast" Alex said. After the attacks Frogboys lifepoints fell to 4000.

"I will just play the T.A.D.P.O.L.E I got in defence and set a card facedown" frogboy did so.


"My turn, now my witches do your stuff" Alex said. The score stood at 10,400 to 3700. "Now due to fire princesses ability when I gain lifepoints you lose 500" Frogboys lifepoints fell to 3200."now I sacrivice Curran and Pikeru to play Dark Magician"

The familiar magician with his ovesized wand appeared (2500). The audience cheered, Frogboy smiled.

"I dare you to attack me" Frogboy dared.


"your bluffing, use Dark Magic attack" Alex shouted.


"Activate Magic cylinder" Frogboy flipped his facedown card and Dark Magicians attack hit Alex reducing his lifepoints to 7900.

"yipee, I still have almost full lifepoints, fire princess attack"


"Draw" Frogboy said and drew a card."I activate graceful charity" Frogboy drew three cards and discarded two. he laughed "activate Cost down to let me play Des frog and due to its effect I can play two more"

Three frogs appeared(1900x3)


"now I use Des Croaking destroying all cards on your side of the Field" musical notes came out of the frogs mouths destroying Alex's monsters "now triple direct attacks" Frogboy said. The three frogs smacked Alex with their tongues decreasing his lifepoints to 2200.


"DANG! I bet money that Alex win" William mumbled.


"My turn" Alex drew a card and smiled."by eliminating a Dark and Light card from play I can special summon this card-Black Luster Soldier Envoy of the Beginning"


An armored warrior appeared surrounded by a ring of gold (3000).


"WHAT!?" Frogboy shouted."a no tribute 3000 point attacker" He was clearly sweating now.


"Now I activate Double Attack, by discarding a stronger card from my hand Black Luster Soldier Envoy of the beginning can attack twice and due to his ability he can attack four times" Alex smiled.


"That's inpossible!,you have an even stronger monster in your hand" an amazed Frogboy gasped.

"Uh-huh, now do your stuff" the armored warrior sliced through all three frogs and his sword through Richard winning the game.


Frogboy croaked, no he did not die he croaked like a frog.


Alex walked up, picked up Frogboys deck and took Des Croaking out, he showed it to the audience then tore it in half.


"you will never be defeated by this card again" Alex shouted to the audience and threw the pieces into th audience.
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In the next chapter Alex duels a guy with a deck theme I never think anyone used before. Dont miss "snake bite" coming soon.
Ok, I am excepting user characters, dont use the Personal Messager just write it to me in the review.
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[Shuppet Master]

Hello there, goldenzigzagoon! I'm one of the few Yu-Gi-Oh author elites! It's nice to see someone starting up another Yu-Gi-Oh fic. However, if you want to be great, you should take some advice from us. Brian, aka Dark Sage, is the expert on Yu-Gi-Oh duelist-fics.

I read this chapter and it's interesting because there are new characters, but there are some things which would make this story a lot better. Please don't take this as an insult, you have a good story, but you need to fix it up a lot before you can reach the caliber of Dark Sage's fics.

(1) First and foremost, I suggest you read my fic, Sister of Anansi, and Brian's fic, YGO: The Thousand Year(which is now in its second act) to get some idea of what you are aspiring to. People love stories written our way instead of your way. This isn't an insult, it's a fact. For example...

(2) I hate to break it to you, but your story's formatting is HORRENDOUS! You've got a lot of poor capitalization and the duels are hard to pick out from the rest of the story. Also, when you have a monster summoned, you need to list both attack and defense, even if one of the stats isn't used. For example, White Magician Pikeru is (1200/0) as is Ebon Magician Curran.

(3) It's interesting to see a nasty bully duelist, but please, don't drag Yugi into it. First off, even without his other self, Yugi's not easily defeated by a card like Des Croaking - he would have some counter measure against it. If you want to make this guy unstoppable, you should set this story somewhere other than Domino City and bring it to Domino, don't have the guy beat Yugi like a jerk.

(4) Also, Curran and Pikeru's effects only work for monsters, not every card. Even Dark Sage made an error of the effect of these girls. Even I did. Please do your research on some of the cards.

(5) Finally, I don't think that Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning's double-attack ability stacks with Double Attack. I don't know for sure though. If you are going to do something like have the Envoy attack four times, claim artistic license so you don't get the game purists enraged.

Otherwise, the whole underdog story is neat. It's nice to see someone try a Yu-Gi-Oh story.

[Mystic_clown]

Listen to Shuppet Master, he knows what he's doing.

I'll stick around, mainly because like Shuppet here, I've decided to play guardian angel and give you some good advice. I'll also throw in my own user character.

good luck with the further chapters.

[goldenzigzagoon]

OK, I love your advice. I am new to yugioh fanfiction, I have played the card game ever since it came to America and went to all sorts of events. I run a Black Luster Soldier Envoy of the Beginning but dont know if it works with Double Attack like that since I dont have any stronger cards in my deck.

[goldenzigzagoon]

The following chapter is rated PG for mild language
PART TWO: Snake Bite


Alex was once again the most hated kid in school. Everyone in the whole school except Alex himself and William (even the teachers) bet Alex would lose to Richard Toad. Needless to say he won. He buried his head in his Harry Potter book every chance he could so angry mobs would not attack him. Luckily for him it was the last day of school.


"At least you made me even more filthy stinkin' rich." William said whenever Alex rambled on about how hated he was.


DING! The final bell rang. Every person in the school ran out of their class rooms shouting in joy except for Alex.


"Hey William, you wanna walk home with me?" Alex asked.


"Ok." William answered.
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Half way to Alex's house Alex asked "So, now that you have the time can you tell me why you helped me?"


"Hey Alex," William said. "Did you ever hear of the duelists pride?"


"Yup," Alex answered. "But I do not belive it or Heart of the Cards or any of that mumbo-jumbo."


"Well," William said."When Frogboy beat me it hurt my pride a lot so I used you to get revenge."


"WHAT!?" Alex shouted. "You used me!"


"It was nothing personal." William said.


"I guess you are right." Alex said. Both boys stayed quiet untill they reached Alex's house. Alex took the mail out of his mail box. He gasped at one of the letters.


"What is it?" William asked while leaning over Alex's shoulder. The sender was Maxamilion Pegusus and it was sent from Industrial Illusions. Alex tore it open and read the letter.


"Dear duelists, I am throwing a new tournament. I will be sending one of my employees, Venom, to duel you at the Domino City Zoo at midnight tonight to see if you are worthy of participating. Bring a duel disk, your deck, and one guest. Sincerely, Maxamilion Pegusus."

"Hey William, you wanna be my guest?" Alex asked.


"Ok," William answered."One thing, Our parents will never let us go."


"We just will not let them find out." Alex said slyly.


"What!" William shouted. "I thought you always followed the rules."


"Any one can make acceptions when you just got a letter from 'ol Max Pegusus."
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That night the two boys snuck out of their houses and met up at Barry's Collectables. They both bought sodas and started walking to the Domino City Zoo.


The zoo was open 24/7 but it was rare for any body to come in after ten especially two high schoolers but the Ticket Man was trained to let any body in at any time. Right when the boys came in they saw a paper sign nailed onto a pole tellings them to go to the Reptile exibit. The paper signs continued on untill the boys reached the Venomous Animals section.


Then the boys heard a lound hissing. William twirled around to see a huge snake in a cage. He started dialling his bodyguard's phone number on his cell phone but Alex snatched the phone out of William's hands and pressed the end call button.


"Don't give us away." Alex hissed.


"Where is this Venom guy any way?" William asked. Then the boys heard a motorcycle. They stared around to see where it came from. Neither boy could see it. Then Alex got a crazy idea about where it came from, he looked up.


"Oh crap." he mumbled. A dot in the sky was getting bigger by the second. It started taking shape. It was a man on a motorcycle, it was incredibly muscular, and it was only wearing a leather jacket and torn jeans.


'It' landed with a thump and got off his motorcycle. 'It' was the most intimidating man either boy had ever seen. He was as tall as both boys stacked up. He had a mohawk and his eyes seemed to have an evil glare. He was covered with tatoos of reptiles.


"Hello my name is Venom." the man said politely and stuck out his finger. Alex shook it.


"I am Alex, the duelist, and this is William, the guest." Alex said.


"Good." Venom said while taking out a duel disk and a deck of cards."So, why delay the test?"


"Fine." Alex said and he put his deck in the deck slot.


"Lets Duel!" both duelists duelists shouted. They drew five cards while their life point meters went up to 8000 each.


"I play Balloon Lizard in defence mode and activate Abyssal Designator." Venom announced.


A balloonlike lizard (500/1900) and a demon appeared. The demon sucked energy out of Venom and Venom wispered something into the demon's ear. The demon walked up to Alex and said "Please give me a Dark Spellcaster.". Alex gave it Dark Magician and the Demon went back to where it came from.


"You see Abyssal Designator is a deal with demons, at the cost of 1000 lifepoints I may discard one of your cards of a certain type and attribute." Venom explained.


"Draw." Alex announced. "I summon Witches Apprentice."


A sinister looking witch with angel wings appeared. (550/400)-(1050/400)


"Now I use Coffin of Dark Magic Revival to discard one card on each of our feilds to re-summon a Dark Magician from my graveyard."


A coffin appeared. Balloon Lizard and Witches Apprentice hopped in and Dark Magician (who looked a little roughed up from being dragged into hell) appeared. (2500/2100)


"Unfortunatly I can not attack on the turn I use this card."


"I play a card in defence mode." Venom announced. "End turn."


"I play White Magician Pikeru in attack mode and play two cards facedown." Alex said.


A cute little witch in a cute outfit appeared. (1200/0)


"Pikeru attack!" Alex ordered. Pikeru attacked the facedown card. An orange winged lizard appeared.(1400/700). It blew a gust of wind a shattered. The wind blew Dark Magician back into Alex's hand.


"HA!" Venom laughed. "My Gale Lizard's flip effect returns a card on your feild into your hand."


"End turn." Alex mumbled.


"I summon Grandora!" Venom shouted.


A fat bubbly spiked lizard appeared.(1900/700)


"And listen to this, when I summon him I gain 1000 lifepoints." Venoms lifepoints rose to 8000. "Now Grandora attack!"


Grandora bit Pikeru's head off. A circle of light appeared around Alex and he lost no lifepoints.


"Pikeru herself might be gone but at least I have Pikeru's Circle of Enchantment to remember her by." Alex said. "Now, I summon Gemeni Elf and I equip it with Black Pendant."


Twin witches wearing pendants appeared.(1900/900)-(2400/900).


"Attack!" Alex ordered. The witches blasted curses at Grandora making it explode. Venom's lifepoints fell to 5500.


"The dumb lizard makes me pay an extra 2000 lifepoints when it dies I might as well tear it in half." Venom said. This seemed to get William mad. "I playGagagigo in defence mode."


A half lizerd/ half man appeared. (1850/1000).


"I play Fire Princess in attack mode." Alex announced.


The Fire Princess appeared. (1300/1500)


"Fire Princess, ATTACK!" Alex commanded. Fire princess burt Gagagigo into Ashes. "Now Gemeni Elf direct attack!"


The twin elves blasted curses at Venom. His lifepoints fell to 3100. "Dumb sluts." Venom mumbled. This completely ticked off William.


"They are not sluts!" William shouted. He ran up and started punching Venom, Venom did not even flinch.


Alex ran up to William and Venom gave William a chicken wing (incase you do not know what I meen its that thing that the police to criminals to block off their arms, somebody in my class did it to me today and it hurts a lot.)


"William!" Alex shouted. "They are only holograms!"


"They are more than just cards, you are practically insulting your own children!" William screamed.


"They are not children!" Alex shouted. "Go home!"


William stormed off. That was the end of Alex and williams freindship.


"Lets just pretend that never happened." Venom suggested. "Hey Alex. arent you a Harry Potter fan?"


"Yeah," Alex answered. "So."


"The card I am about to play is called The Basilisk, all I have to do is play the ritual card Voldemorts Call and diiscard cards who's levels equal five of higher."


The feild turned into the chanber of Secrets. A Gogiga Gagagigo appeared then shattered. A giant serpent replaced it. (3000/0)


"Death gaze attack!" Venom ordered. The Balisk stared at Fire Princess Killing it. Alex's lifepoints fell to 6300. "HA! you can not win now, Punk!"


"I knowthe Basilisk's weakness- it can't attack when I have dards in defence mode so I play a card in defence mode." Alex said.


"I'll pass." Venom announced.


"I sacrivice my cards to play Dark Magician." Alex said. "Now I sacrivice Dark Magician to play his up-grade Dark Exicutioner."


Dark Magician was replaced by a taller more intimidating one wearing a blood red cape and carrying a funky weapon of some sort (2500/2100).


"This version does 1000 damage to you everytime I play a spell card and I will use Gather Your Mind to take another one out of my deck and use that one to take another one out of my deck."


"HA!, theres a problem in your math, I have 600 lifepoints left." Venom laughed.


"Not any more, I use my facedown Hidden Book of Spells to get two spells from my graveyard back into my deck and now I use Gather Your Mind again!" Alex said triumphantly. Dark Exicutioner jabbed Venom with his weapon decreasing Venom's lifepoints to zero. "Yipee!"


"All right the tournament will de on Frongle island, the boat will be coming Friday at 9:00 PM, bring your deck and some money." Venom said and rode away.

Alex sipped on his Sprite.
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That morning Alex asked his mom about the tournament and she agreed as long as they keep in touch.
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I need more user characters
Next Chapter: Alex faces off against somebody who is as unnemotional as his monsters. Dont miss: The Boat Trip Coming soon

[Mystic_clown]

not bad, better then the last chapter. You were right, there hasn't been many reptile decks used, ever. However, there are some problems.

-Why'd you end the friendship between Alex and William? It just doesn't make sense.

-You could've done a lot more with this duel. And at least put some description about the made-up cards at the end of the chapter.

Apart from that, it was ok. There were a few minor spelling erors.

Yay, my user character's coming up. BTW, you didn't my question about if you'll give my user character a decent part or not (you dont have to, I'm just asking).

[goldenzigzagoon]

I tried sending this to you on the personal messager but it says that they could not find your name. Yes, he will have a semi-main role. I think he will be in five or six chapters.

[Shuppet Master]

Okay, goldenzigzagoon, I won't comment on your formatting since you explained why it's so bad. But one thing I detest is THIS:

Alex ran up to William and Venom gave William a chicken wing (incase you do not know what I meen its that thing that the police to criminals to block off their arms, somebody in my class did it to me today and it hurts a lot.)

No author's notes in the middle of the story! If you must explain something, footnote it(put a symbol and then mark the symbol with a note at the end of your story) - author's notes in the middle of the story tend to distract the reader and a lot of people at a certain sight would lynch you if they read that(or severly snark you).

The story's kinda of random, but it's okay I guess. I wonder how Alex is going to convince his parents to let him go. They'll likely call the police when they find out he snuck out, and since this is a big tournament, there's no way Alex will get away with sneaking out again.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Ok, I will make sure never to do that again. Anyway since I did not put the fake card descriptions up I guess I,ll just do them now and remember to do them at the end of the story from now on.


Voldemorts Call
ritual spell
Sacrivice cards who's levels equal up to 5. Summon one 'The Basilisk' from your hand.

The Basilisk
5
Dark
Reptile
ritual
effect
(3000/0)
This card can only summoned by the card Voldemorts Call. As long as your opponet has facedown defence position card on their feild this card can not attack.

[Mystic_clown]

If you wanted to send me a pm, just click on my name and it will take you to my profile, then go to the pm option and you'll b able to send me one. It's simple.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Ok, I have to say some stuff that I forgot to say
1. I messed up, the boat leaves at 9:00 AM, not PM

2:This story takes place 5 years after Yugi's adventures

3:I ruined Alex and Williams freindship for story reasons. You will see what I mean in every chapter after this.

4:I need big help if I want this to be a respectable fan fiction. I know how TERRIBLE the first two chapters have been but I hope the future chapters will be better.

5:I hate sushi!

[goldenzigzagoon]

PART TWO:The Boat Trip

Alex was nervous for the next week. He was the worst person at keeping secrets. Surprisingly he kept all the information about the tournament in all week. But on the day of the tournament he made a terrible mistake.
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It was the day of the tournament. Alex had just finished breakfast.


"Hey Alex," Alex's mother said. "Go do your summer reading- I want you to read five chapters of your book."


"But mom," Alex whined. "I have to hurry up for the big tournament."


Alex did not even notice the terrible mistake he made.


"What tournament?" his mother and father asked at the same time.


Alex's big mouth leaked out almost every secret, he explained about Venom and the zoo, he explained about sneaking out at midnight, almost every secret he had kept in for a week came out. Then Alex noticed what he had done.


"You are grounded for a month." his father said.


"But!-"Alex shouted.


"-But nothing!" his mother shouted.


Alex did the only thing that came into his mind. He scooped up his cards and ran. His mother and father chased after him. Alex hopped on his bike. His parents went in their car. After about half a Kilometer Alex took a sharp turn into an allyway. He hopped off his bike. His parents car zoomed by. Alex breathed a sigh of relief. Then he noticed the huge shadow over him, he looked up.


Towering above him was Venom on his motorcycle. Ussually people do not like to meet ten foot tall men with six packs who hates their guts but this time it was any thing but ordinary.


"Hey Venom," Alex said. "Can you give me a ride to the boat?"


"Ok shrimp." Venom said. He scooped Alex up and drove him to the boat.
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Alex's parents stopped the car at Turtle Games.


"Where is he?!" Alex's mother shouted. Then William came out of the shop carrying a suitcase.


"It looks like I made perfect timing," William said. "I know where Alex is."


"Ok hop in." Alex's father said. William gave them instructions. The car stopped at the boat. The trio got out and ran up to the boat's crew members.


"Let us in!" Alex's father shouted.


"No." a crew member said."You are obviously not duelists."


"My runaway son is on that ship and I demand enterance!" Alex's mother screamed.


"I will give you half a million dollars!" William shouted. He opened up his suit case and showed the crew members the money.


"No." the crew members said.


"To my mansion!" William shouted.


'How will that help us?" Alex's mother asked.


"Theres soda machines, beanie chairs, a clown, an arcade, and a radar." William answered.


"That clown will sure be helpfull." Alex's mother said.
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Meanwhile Alex was on the ship. There was about a thousand duelists. He stared around. Suddenly a girl who looked almost exactly like Blue from the pokemon adventures seires*ran up to him.


"Hi my name is Death." the girl said. "Death And Destruction, Death is my first name, And is my middle name, and Destruction is my last name."


"I am Alex Parsoni Wazzle." Alex introduced himself. He was a bit freaked out of Death's name.


"Look at all my new freinds!" Death shouted. She grabbed Alex's hand and weaved through the crowd quickly leaving Alex off his feet bumping into everyone. She stopped at a boy Alex's age. He hair seemed to be made of straw. He wore a tan shirt and jean shorts.


"This is Dan Bickford." Death said. Alex was about to say him when Death grabbed his hand again and pulled him through the crowd. A few angry crowd members that Alex bumped into tried punching him but Alex went by so fast their punches hit other crowd members who fought back. Death stopped infront of a familiar boy with green hair- it was Frogboy.


"This is Richard Toad." Death said. Frogboy noticed Alex immeadiatly. He grabbed Alex by his shirts collar.


"Ok four eyes prepare for a wooping!" Frogboy shouted. Death picked Alex out of Frogboy's hands and dragged Alex through the crowd again.


"I think he wants to be your freind." Death said. She stopped in front of another person. This person had long white hair that went down to his waist. He had green eyes and pale skin. He wore a leather trench coat, leather pants with metallic kneepads, black boots, and black gloves.


"This is Forte," Death said. "He never told me his last name." Forte stared at Alex with a blank face.


"Attention!" a voice shouted. The crowd immeadiatly looked up at a platform. A man in his thirties stood there. He had gray hair, hazel eyes, and was six feet tall. He wore a white and gray tuxedo with a carnation on it, fancy white pants, and penny loafer style shoes. "My name is Charles Carzion." the man introduced himself.


"In this tournament we will use the Duel Point system." Charles explained. "You start out with one and bet one per duel, if you get six you go to the finals, if you run out you are eliminated. There will be seven eliminators, one of which is myself, if you beat one you get two duel points if you lose they get to take all of your duel points."


"As you all know we recently merged with Kaiba Corp." Charles said. The crowd cheered. "So we will be using new duel disks." Charles reached into a hole in the platform. He took out a golden mix of an original duel disk and a battle city style duel disk.


"Now I see that there are 960 of you." Charles said. "Please get in a single file line."


The contestants lined up. Alex, Death, and Forte were first in line. "Numbers one to one hundred please come up." The first hundred people came up. He gave each a key and a duel disk. The one hundred of them went back into the crowd. When all 960 people got their supplies Charles explained where the rooms were. There was three people per room, you went in the room your number matched.


Alex, Death, and Forte went into room 1-3. Forte left immeadiatly and Death kept trying to make out with Alex so Alex went outside too.


"Hey Forte!" Alex shouted. He ran up to Forte. "You wanna' duel?"


"No." Forte said. His voice had no emmotion to it. He walked downn the hallway towards the bar. Alex followed him. They sat down.

"Hey Forte do you want a Coke, I have plenty of money." Alex said.


"No." Forte said and took the last sip of his wine. He got up and walked to the information center/food court.


"Hey Rapunzel!" Alex shouted. He ran up to Forte."C'mon just a little duel."


"Ok but do not expect to win." Forte said and he activated his Duel Disk. Alex activated his. They each drew five cards and their life point meters went up to 8000. A croud immeadiatly formed.


"Lets duel!" Alex shouted. Forte said the same thing except bladly and with no emmotion.


"I'll go first." Alex announced. "I play Magicians Valkyria in attack mode."


A witch that sort of resemled Dark Magician Girl appeared. (1600/1800)


"End turn."


"Draw," Forte announced. "I play mechanical chaser in attack mode and I set a card facedown."


A circular mechanical torture device appeared. (1850/800).


"Now I activate Limeter Removal." Forte announced. Mechanical Chaser's attack rose to 3700. "Attack."

Mechanical Chaser sliced Magician Valkryia in half. Alex's lifepoints fell to 5900. The crowd cheered. Mechanical Chaser exploded.


"End turn." Forte announced.


Alex drew a card, he smiled. "I play Premature Burial to revive Magicians Valkryia."


"Now I sacrivice her to summon Dark Magician Girl and I use Sages Stone to summon Dark Magician." Alex smiled.


The duo of spellcasters appeared. (2000/1700)(2500/2100)


"Now I use Dedication Through Light and Darkness to sacrivice Dark Magician for Dark Magician of Chaos!"


Dark magician placed his hand on a book. He transformed into a cooler looking spellcaster. (2800/2600)


"Now my new monsters effect lets me take a spell card from my graveyard," Alex explained. "Now I re-activate Premature Burial to summon Dark Magician."


Dark Magician re-appeared and Alex's lifepoints fell to 4300. "Triple Darkness attack!" The three magicians blasted Forte reducing his lifepoints to 700. The crowd went wild. Forte just looked at Alex blankly.


"What!?" Alex shouted. "Do you need a reality check- I just blasted you down to 700 lifepoints."


"I prefer not to show emmotion." Frote said.


"WHAT?!" Alex shouted. "Why?"


"Pain, anger, fear, hate it is tearing the world apart." Forte said.


"What about happiness?!" Alex shouted. "Don't tell me you don't express that either."


"Happiness only leads to misereableness."


"Explain." Alex said.


"Years ago I was like any other person, I even experianced happiness and love." Forte explained. "But the woman I loved loved someone else. I was depressed for months untill I finnaly learned how to put away my emmotions."


"Oh well," Alex said. "If thats what you belive then your mistaken but its your move."


"I play a card in defence mode." Forte said.


"Dark Magician, Dark Magic Attack!" Alex commanded. Dark Magician blasted the defensive card. A futuristic jar appeared (900/900). It sucked up Alex's magician trio then exploded.


"Destroying my Cyber Jar destroys all monsters on the feild, it also lets us draw five cards and we summon all possible monsters." Forte explained.


A fur ball (300/200) appeared on Alex's side. It was a Kuribo.


A mechanical quarter back (1000/2100) and a funky fortress (800/2200) appeared. It was Battle Footballer and Gear Golum The Moving Fortress.


"I use multiply on Kuribo and end my turn." Alex announced. Four more Kuribos appeared.


"I sacrivice my monsters to play Perfect Machine King." Forte announced.


The king of the machines appeared (2700/1500)


"Now I flip DNA Surgery." Forte announced. "I'll turn all your Kuribos into machines."


Perfect Machine King's attack rose to (5200/1500)

"Now I use Stop Defence on one of your Kuribos." Forte said. Alex gasped. "Attack."


Perfect Machine King destroyed Alex's Kuribo in attack mode. Alex lost. He suddenly remembered Williams Pride of the Duelist crap. He then noticed how true it was. He almost felt pain from his loss. The crowd cheered. Alex stomped away.
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He could not sleep well that night. The image of his Kuribo being blsted apart played over and over again in his mind.


The even worse thing was that it was nobodys victory, Forte was not even happy because he won. He decided that his goal would be to get Forte's emmotion back. He finnaly fell asleep.


When he woke up Death was waiting for him.


"Hi Death, did you duel anyone today?" Alex yawned.

"No." Death answered. "Anyway the ship stopped." She said and ran out the door. Alex followed untill they came out the door. At first Alex was too sleepy to pay attention to the island. Then he finally looked around. He was in a small town that made it seem like it was the 1700's.


Forte walked by him. "Good bye." he said.
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I NEED USER CHARACTERS!
In the next chapter Death duels Bandit Keiths plant loving daughter. Dont Miss The Plant Problem, coming soon.

[goldenzigzagoon]

I do not know if you would call this Double Posting since my last post was a chapter but any way I forgot the footnote. *when I say Blue I mean in the japanese version. In the American version Blue was a guy (the rival).

[Mystic_clown]

Way to go Fotre! Yeehaaww!! That was probably the best duel yet (and I'm not saying that beause my character won).

As for Death, well, it would help if you gave a description of your own, instead of copying someone elses (noone knows what Blue looks like).

but, either way, nice story. keep it up.

[Shuppet Master]

So basically, Alex ran away from home to join the tournament, and now his parents are hunting him down. Great. Even more great that Alex lost a duel. Things are just looking peachy(sarcasm).

[Mystic_clown]

Hey, lay off ok. He's trying his best.

zigzagoon, if you want me to, I could send in another user character (since noone else is).

[goldenzigzagoon]

Ok, that would be great. Just to tell you this will not be one of those fics where the main characters always win, sure they will win more than lose but they will all lose at least twice.

[goldenzigzagoon]

The following chapter is rated PG for violence
PART FOUR: The Plant Problem

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At William's mansion Alex's parents were forcing information out of a clown.


"Where is my son?"


"Do you know Venom?"


"I don't know anything!" the clown cried.


"Your right," Alex's mother said. "You don't know anything."


"Come on," William said. "I am the one you should be questioning. After all I was with Alex at the time."


"What were you doing in the zoo at midnight?" Alex's mother asked. William giggled nervously.
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Meanwhile Alex was in the colonial town called Town. The name of the town was Town. Town was a town.


Then Death and her newest victim, Dan Bickford, ran up to him.


"HI," Death said. "This is my second favorite person, do you remember him?"


"Yes." Alex said. "Aren't you Dan Bickford?"


"Yes." Dan said.


"I am Alex Wazzle." Alex introduced himself.


"I gotta go." Dan said and tried escaping Death's hands.


"Ok," Death said and let go. "The Porti-Potty is right over there." she pointed. "That is unless you wan to go in a bucket."


"No!" Dan shouted and started running. "I gotta go get flowers for my girlfriend!"


Death started blowing steam out of her nose but then calmed down. "Now I can be with my favorite person, to Make Out Beach!" she shouted and pulled Alex through the crowd.


They stopped at an abandoned beach. A sign said 'CLOSED FOREVER'. Death moaned and then dragged Alex into the town square so she could make out with him near the fountain.


Then suddenly a man stopped them. He was wearing penny loafers, a tie, Knickerbockers, and a shirt that seemed to come out of a 1700's shopping magazine if they existed. He had muscular arms, un-brushed hair, and was covered with dirt and mold from head to toe. He looked a lot like the main villain from "Attack of the Colonial Zombies".


"Making Out next to a fountain to somebody you barely know is no fun." the man said.


"I know." Alex mumbled.


"So head on over to the most popular place in town." he said. He suddenly grabbed onto Alex and Death and started dragging them through town. His grip was twice as hard as Death's and his hand was moldy. When he ran little specks of dirt flew off him and into Alex and Death's eyes.


He stopped in front of a greenhouse with two attachment buildings. The sign said "Town Greenhouse" He dragged them in. It was very crowded. There was a stage in the middle and lots of people were seated there. The best description for the rest of the green house would be a jungle. It even had its own animals and a river.


A beautiful woman was on the platform in a kimono.


"You see this is a green house/ duel arena/ restaurant and that is Meg." the man explained. "She is the best duelist/ gardener/ chef in this place."


"What's your name?" Death asked.


"Hank." the man answered.


"She is not the best duelist here." a voice said. That voice belonged to a teenager. The girl was also wearing a kimono and also had an excessive amount of jewelry on. "My name is Diane Howard and I am the best duelist here."


"Diane Howard?" Death mumbled. "I think I know who this girl is."


"Hey young gal!" Hank shouted. "Look at Alex."


Death looked at the stage. Meg was putting on her makeup and Alex was talking to her.


"Get off the stage," Meg said. "My show starts in a minute."


"Only if you kiss me." Alex said. Meg shoved him off the stage.


"Well shes rude." Alex mumbled. He walked away and Death followed.
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LUNCH TIME

Alex and Death went to the Town Greenhouse restaurant. They had a vegetarian meal that had a lot of broccoli. "Ah, my favorite food." Alex said.


"What?" Death asked.


"Broccoli." Alex said.


"Sushi is much better." Death sid. "Veggies make me puke."


"Broccoli is way better!" Alex shouted. "You actually like seaweed."


"Broccoli is disgusting!" Death shouted. Soon the teenagers were having a fierce mashed potato flinging contest. They were then kicked out of the resteraunt.



Alex went to Ye Olde General Store while Death went to the library. She looked up Diane Howard. ' The daughter of Bandit Keith Howard. She agrees with is ways in every way except one. When Keith tried opening a factory that he would have to cut down a whole forest to make she started a Plants Rights gang and closed the factory.'


She ran to the greenhouse. Alex, Hank, and Meg were tied up by giant Venus fly traps. Diane stood there laughing evilly.



"Diane you are going down!" Death shouted.


"What!?" Diane shouted. "How did you find out?"


"I figured Bandit Keith's daughter would want revenge on Pegusus."


"Well since we both have one point and the losers are kicked off the island we will solve this by dueling. I win, you leave so I continue my revenge, you win and I am kicked off the island."


"Fine by me." Death said and turned on her Duel Disk, Diane did the same. Their lifepoint meters rose to 8000.


"Lets duel!" the two shouted and drew five cards.


"I play Mystic Tomato in defence mode." Diane announced. A fiendish veggie appeared (1400/1100).


"I summon Regenerating Mummy!" Death shouted. A bloody mummy missing several limbs appeared (1800/1500).


"Mummy's curse attack that vicious veggie!" Death commanded. Her mummy's gauze wrapped around the tomato and made it splat into tomato juice. Out of the juice rose a four legged, four eyed, mutated bush (600/1300).


"From my tomato's juice rises a dark monster with low attack- my Bio Plant!" Diane smiled. "I sacrivice it to summon Fairy King Truesdale!"


A man wearing white robes and a funky green thing around his neck appeared (2200/1500)-(2700/2000)



"You see," Diane said. "Truesdale increases the attack and defence of all my plants by 500!, now I activate Banner of Courage."


A banner appeared on Diane's feild. "You see this card increases all my monsters attack by 200."


"Now destroy her mummy with Chloroblast!" Diane commanded. Tuesdale raised his staff. He fired a green beam of energy at Death's mummy. Death's lifepoints fell to 6900.


"I can never win when her cards get a 700 point boost." Death thought. "I play Pyramid Turtle in defence and I set a card face down."


A turtle with a pyramid on its back appeared (1200/1500).


"I activate Forest to further increase my flower power and now I summon Vampire Orchis." Diane announced.


An evil tree appeared (1700/1000)-(2600/1700)


"Plant Poison strike!" Diane hollered. The tree spit out poison that killed the turtle. A Skull Servent (300/200) appeared in its place.


"Chloroblast!" Truesdale tried attacking Skull Servent.


"Drain Sheild!" Death shouted. She absorbed the blast and her lifepoints rose to 10000.


"I now use Call For Family," Death said. "At the cost of 1000 lifepoints I can summon two more servents."


"I play Des Dendle and equip it to my orchis." Diane announced.


"Wait a second!" Meg shouted. "Des Dendle is a monster."


"Hey Meg." Alex said. "Its called a union monster,"


"It can be used as an equip." Hank finished.


"Now attack!" she commanded. The two plants destroyed two Servents. A creature that seemed to come out of Little Shop of Horrors appeared (800/800)-(1700/1500). "That new card is a vicious plant token, it is summoned when orchis, while being equiped by Des Dendle destroys a monster, now use Chloroplast Blast!"


The token obliderated the last servent.


"With a 900 point boost Death is doomed!" Meg stated the obvious.


"Oh yeah," Death drew. "I play King of the Skull Servents!" Death announced. A more powerful looking Skull Servent appeared (3000/0). "This cards attack is 1000 for each servent and king in my graveyard however I must eliminate a servent in my graveyard from play when he dies."


"Fool!" Diane laughed. "Next turn Truesdale will blow it away."


"Your the fool Diane!" Death shouted. "Use skull smash to destroy Truesdale!"


Diane's lifepoints fell to 7900.


"How did she do that?" Hank, Diane, Meg, and Alex asked.


"Banner of Courage only works on your turn," Death smirked. "Now it will be over soon. To end my turn I use Pot of Greed."


"I play a card in defence and shift my other cards into defence." Death announced.


"I play the ritual card Revival of Dokurider to summon Dukurider!" Death announced. An evil biker riding a skull-like motorcycle appeared (1900/1850). "Attack the token and Orchis!" Her creatures destroyed Diane's.


"I use Monster Reborn to re-summon Truesdale and I summon Wodan the Resident of the Forest, it gains 100 attack for each plant on my side of the feild."


A pink warrior appeared (1300/1100).


"Now I flip Rigras Leever, when its flipped we each discard a card from our hand," A wooden creature with a sythe appeared (1600/100)-(2500/800). "Now I use Card of Sanctity so we both draw 'till we have six cards in our hands."


"Truesdale use Chloroblast on her king, Rigras use super sythe on Dokurider, now Wodan attack directly with your wooden sword!" Diane commanded. Death's lifepoints stood at 7000.


"I summon another king to attack Truesdale." Death announced. Diane's lifepoints stood at 7800.


"I play another Orchis and I'll give it a black pendant." Diane said. Another Vampire Orhis with a pendant on it appeared. (1700/1000)-(2600/1700).


"Rigras use super sythe on the king!" Diane commanded. Rigras slashed at King of the Skull Servents but it did not even flinch. The king beheaded Rigras. Diane's lifepoints fell to 6800.


"Yes!" Meg shouted. "Diane is already losing it."


"Nope," Diane smiled. "The card that kills Rigras loses 500 points making it easy prey for my Vampire Orchis."


The terrible tree blew apart the king. Death's lifepoints fell to 6900.


Death was sweating. "I play Pyramid Turtle in defence."


"I play Woodland Sprite and I'l give it a Black Pendant." Diane announced.


A funky little plant boy appeared (900/400)-(1800/1100). "Now I use its ability to offer an equip card on it to do 500 damage to you and since my pendant does 500 damage when its destroyed so you have 5900 lifepoints left."


"Now I attack with my my Vampire Orchis!" Diane ordered. The orchis destroyed the turtle and another king appeared. "What!?" Diane shouted.


"King of the Skull Servents has 0 defence so it is summonable by the turtle." Death laughed. "Now I summon another Rgenerating mummy."


"And now I use Atanomous Action Unit to reveive Truesdale!, triple attack!" Diane's lifepoints fell to 2100.


"I surrender." Diane announced.


"Yay!" Meg, Hank, and Alex shouted.


"But I have to give you one last gift before my departure." she said and started walking away. She threw a card at Death. Death put it in her Duel Disk. Her Duel point meter went up to two. But then suddenly vines wrapped around Death's feat. A huge Venus Flytrap attacked her.


Then Dan ran in armed with gardening supplies. He killed all the evil plants.


"Thank you." the four victims said.


"I will dedicate my life to protecting you from now on." Dan said to Death.


"What about your girlfriend?" Death asked.


"She dumped me for giving her a man eating flower." Dan explained. Death kissed him on the cheek. Dan went into dreamland imagining them making out on a hill. Death slapped him.


"Do not get any ideas." she said.
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In the next chapter the gang goes to Mt. Abouttoerupt where Dan duels a girl who calls herself "the Dragon Lady" Do not miss Duel of the Dragons.

[goldenzigzagoon]

AH! I just put a sticky note on my computer reminding me to show info for fake cards, anway


Call For Family
Spell
Pay 1000 lifepoints. Select one level three or lower normal monster on your side of the feild, you may take up to two cards of the same name from your deck and play them in face up defence position.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Part Five: Duel of the Dragons


At William's mansion Alex's father was trying to turn on a radar.


"I know how to make it work." the clown said.


"If only I knew how to make it work." Alex's father mumbled.


"I know how to turn it on!" the clown shouted.


"If only I knew how to turn it on!" Alex's father screamed. The clown pressed the ON button.
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Meanwhile Dan, Alex, and Death were climbing up a volcano.


"I hope this volcano is active." Death hoped.


"It is active." Alex told her.


"I wish it is not extremely active." Death wished.


"It's extremely active." Alex told her.


"I will beat the crap out of the person closest to me if this is the legendary Mt. Abouttoerupt." Death threatened.


"It is the legendary Mt. Abouttoerupt." Alex gulped. Death became furious until a new emmotion came in.


"I am so hungry." she mumbled.
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At six 'oclock that night the trio stopped at a small town, they immediately went to a Chinese restaurant.


"These wontons are good." Dan said.


"Ya," Alex said. "But if we do not get a waitress soon I am leaving."


"Oh," a lady , the restaurants owner, said. "Where is Daisy when you need her."


Then suddenly, a teenage girl ran in. She had a hairstyle similar to Vivian Wong's except it had a line of green hair dye in each pigtail. She wore a Japanese schoolgirl outfit.


"Oh hi mom," the girl panted. "Sorry I am late."


"Oh come on Daisy," the woman said. "This is the fourth day in a row."


"Ok, two things." the girl said. "1. I have told you a million times call me the Dragon Lady, 2. The reason I am always so late late is because I am in the new tournament."



"What Daisy!!!" the woman shouted. "You joined the tournament, I am not afraid to fire my daughter."


"I told you, call me the Dragon Lady." Daisy said. She then served the trio.
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"Hey guys," Dan said. "You wanna do a bit of sight seeing?"


"Where?" Alex asked.


"No time to tell you, the last bus is probually already picking up." Dan said.


"Ok." Alex said.
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The trio ended up being the only ones on the bus. They ended up watching the crater of the volcano hoping they do not fall asleep of boredom and fall in. They ended up hoping they never went on the bus.


Then Alex noticed somebody besides him, Death, and Dan. It was Daisy, the waitress. She was meditating.


"Oh hi Daisy!" Alex shouted.


"Hi!" Death shouted.


"Call me The Dragon Lady!" Daisy shouted.


"I heard you were in the tournament," Dan called over. "You wanna duel?"


"Fine," Daisy said. "But I warn you, I already have two points!"


"Lets duel!" the two duelists shouted. They drew five cards and their lifepoints went up to 8000. "Ladies first." Dan said.


"I summon Luster Dragon in defence mode!" Daisy shouted.


A beautiful dragon made out of jewels appeared (1900/1600).


"What kind of idiot plays a Luster Dragon in defence mode?" Alex asked Death.


"I do not know how she won." Death said.


Fools, I want it to be destroyed Daisy thought.


"I play Armed Samurai Ben Kei !" Dan announced.


A samurai in a white hood appeared (500/800). He had at least ten different weapons strapped on to his back.


"Now I will equip him with Lightning Blade and Legendary Sword." Dan said. Instead of having the equip cards appear out of nowhere like most times Ben Kei merely unstrapped it from his back. His attack rose to 1600. "Now I will equip him with warp sword!"



Ben Kei's attack rose to 1900 and Dan drew two cards. "You see warp sword lets me draw two cards with a setback- it is eliminated from play when it is destroyed." Dan explained. "Now I will attack!"



Ben Kei started charging forward. He first used his normal sword to slay Daisy's dragon, then he stabbed Daisy with Legendary Sword and Lightning Blade. Daisy's lifepoints fell to 4200.


"What!?" Daisy shouted. "There must be a flaw in these Duel Disk Micro's, your samurai attacked two times to much."


"There was no error," Dan laughed. "Ben Kei can attack an extra time for every equip card on him."


"What about your Warp Blade?" Daisy asked.


"Yeah," Death said. "I guess Dan's disk did have an error."


"No," Dan said. "Warp Blade is a continuous spell card."


"I will just play Masked Dragon in defence." Daisy mumbled.


A red and white not so fierce looking dragon appeared (1400/1100).


"Do your stuff Kei!" Dan shouted. Armed Samurai Ben Kei beheaded Daisy's dragon. But then where Masked Dragon once was another one appeared, this time in attack mode.


"You see because of Masked-" Daisy explained.


"-I know." Dan interupted. Ben Kei slayed the new Masked Dragon and the next one. Finally a wimpy little dragon (1200/900) appeared. Daisy's lifepoints fell to 3200.


"I will evolve my Armed Dragon LV. 3 into Armed Dragon LV. 5." Daisy announced. A more powerful looking Armed Dragon (2400/1700) appeared.


"So Daisy is bringing out the big guns now." Death said.


"Call me the Dragon Lady!" Daisy shouted. "Now I will use its ability, I can discard Curse of Dragon to destroy your samurai since it has less attack."


"Now lifepoint direct strike!" she ordered. Armed Dragon struck Dan reducing his lifepoints to 5600.


"Oh no!" Death shouted.


"I'm okay," Dan said. "I play Female Warrior of the Wilderness!"


A female warrior from the wilderness appeared (1100/1200).


"I will discard Luster Dragon 2 to destroy it, now I will attack you directly!" Daisy announced. Dan's lifepoints fell to 3200.


"Dang!" Dan shouted. "I activate Junk Dealer to revive Ben Kei and my female warrior with half their points."



"Now I offer them to summon Gilford The Legend!" Dan shouted. A samurai that looked a lot like Gilford The Lightning appeared. "When I summon him I can take my Lightning Blade and Legendary Sword and equip it to him."


The new monster had 3700 attack and 2300 defence.


"Legendary Strike!!!!" Dan commanded. Gilford beheaded the dragon reducing Daisy's lifepoints to 1900.


"I will play a defensive card." Daisy announced.


"Attack!" Dan ordered. Gilford killed a Lesser Dragon. Next up Gilford slayed a Petite Dragon. "You can not defend forever."


Daisy drew. "I don't have to first I use Graceful Charity, now I play Red Eyes Black Chick which I can sacrivice to play Red Eyes Black Dragon and I will sacrivice that to play Red Eyes Darkness Dragon."


A giant Red Eyes Black Dragon appeared.


"It usually has the same stats as a red eyes but it gains 300 points for each dragon in my graveyard." Daisy explained. "Giving it 6000 attack points now I will attack."


Red Eyes flew into the volcano and charged up with fake lava. It then blasted Dans lifepoints down to 900.


"Oh no Dan is doomed!" Alex and Death shouted.


"Not yet." Dan drew. "I play Amazoness Swordswoman and I attack your dragon. An amazoness warrior appeared (1500/1300). It suicidally attacked Daisy's dragon.


"Well too bad, your such an idiot." Daisy said. Then she noticed her lifepoints were at zero.


"Due to Amazoness Swordswoman's effect you take the battle damage." Dan smiled. The Duel Point exchange activated.


"Come on!" the bus man shouted. "This is the last bus!"


Dan started walking away but he stopped a foot away from the bus, he turned around.


"Do you want to join us?" he asked.


"Of course." Daisy said.
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Warp Sword
Continuous spell
Select a warrior type monster on your side of the Field, increase its attack by 300 and draw two cards. When the selected monster is destroyed this card is eliminated from play.
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So now the gang is complete is complete. It is time for Daisy to duel. She doesn't duel just anybody. She duels one of the legendary gumball brothers Greg. Do not miss Countdown To Doom


A giant

[Shuppet Master]

Nice chapter, but you need to watch out, you've got a couple of times when you type the same words twice. Also, the whole series of scenes is disjointed and the actions make no sense. Why would a woman fire her own daughter for being in the tournament where she was working? And what's with the climbing the volcano that's about to erupt? If you are trying to be funny, say so.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Woah! I have not got a review in a while, anyway I am not sure how A Giant got in there 'cuz I did not even write that. BTW, Mt. Abottoerupt was just the name. The valcano was not about to erupt and the store owner threatened to fire Daisy because the tournament makes her late for work.

[Mystic_clown]

hmm, not bad. It was annoying though how Daisy wanted to call herself "Dragon Lady". Honestly, how can you take a character like that seriously?

The clown joke at the beginning was alright, although it only succeeded in making Alex's dad look like a total idiot.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Alex's parents are idiots. In the beginning of each chapter there will a scene at William's mansion.

[goldenzigzagoon]

PART SIX: COUNTDOWN TO DOOM


At William's mansion Alex's mother, the clown, and William were looking at a radar.


"Ok guys this radar is very special," William explained. "It can find people, all you need to to is put a photo of somebody in and the dot on the radar that represents them will glow." William put a photo of Alex into a hole in the machine.


A green glowing dot was on the screen.


"Hey what is that glowing green dot thingy ?" Alex's mother asked.


"I just told you, thats Alex." William said.


"Who is Alex?" Alex's mother asked.


"Your son." William told her.


"Oh that kid," Alex's mother said. "He has been gone for at least a year."


"It's only been a day." William told her.
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The next morning Alex, Dan, Death, and Daisy were eating breakfast at The Breakfast Hut resteraunt in Ragajon City. The smell of bacon filled the air.


"This is good." Death said with her mouth full. The waitress came with their bill.



"Okay," she said. "Here at The Breakfast Hut we are supposed to tell you about upcoming local events, today there is an art show at the Art Gallery and Happy Happy Happy Smiley Land opens."



After Dan payed for the food him, Daisy, Death, and Alex voted where they should go. Everyone except Death voted for the art show.
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The four of them went to The Art Gallery. They looked at all the amazing art. They soon became bored.



"I know what to do," Death said. "Lets go to Happy Happy Happy Smiley Land!"


"I know what to do," Daisy said. She ran up to a man in his fifties. "Lets Duel!"


"You could probually crush me in a turn." the man said. "If you want a challenge I can call my son."


"Okay, your on!" Daisy shouted. Then Alex dragged her backwards.


"Do you know who that guy is !?" Alex shouted.


"No." Daisy answered.


"He is Geezer 'Gumball' Garyson." Alex shouted. "Father of the three legendary Gumball Brothers!"


"What are they legendary for?" Daisy asked. "Gum ?"


"NO!" Alex shouted. "Dueling."


Then they noticed a crowd of eight year olds was forming. A boy walked in. His hair was dyed all the colors of the rainbow, he wore square glasses with images of smiley faces in them, shoes that were twice as large as his feet, green and red gloves with no fingertips, a pinky ring, purple shorts, and a baby blue shirt with a smiley on it. Daisy noticed the Duel Disk Micro on his arm with two Duel Points.



"Hey." he said with a mouth full of gum. "Your the big girl my daddy said was hungry for a duel."


"Yes I am." Daisy said.


"Alright babe I might look little but I have a big appetite for love so when I win we go on a date." the kid said.



"WHAT !?" Daisy shouted. "Your like eight!"


"Actually I'm nine tuts." the boy said. "The name's Greg Garyson but you can call me Gumball Greg 'cuz soon this gum with be in both our mouths."


"EW!!!" Daisy shouted. "Then if I win you have to give me your rarest card."



"Alright with me Baby Girl lets get it on!" Greg shouted.


"That just sounds wrong." Daisy mumbled. "Lets Duel!" they shouted and drew five cards. Their lifepoint meters went up to 8000.


"I'll play Luster Dragon!" Daisy announced. Her buetifull dragon appeared (1900/1600).


"Okay Chick lets see you stand up to the defensive power of Big Sheild Gardna!" Greg shouted. A muscular man with wild hair appeared behind a sheild (100/2600).



How will I defeat that muscular monstrocity Daisy thought.


"Attack it !" Dan shouted.


"Why ?" Daisy asked.


"It would be against the rules for me to tell you why but make sure you have two monsters on the feild when you do it !" Dan shouted.


"Whatever," Daisy said. "I play Twin Headed Benemoth." A blue dragonlike benemoth appeared (1500/1200).


"Luster Dragon attack with diamond dust shoot !" Daisy ordered. Luster Dragon blasted Big Sheild Gardna reducing Daisy's lifepoints to 7300. Then, Big Sheild Gardna's sheild crumbled. "Oh I get it, your Big Sheild Gardna switches to attack when it's attacked making it easy prey for my Twin Headed Benemoth."



Twin Headed Benemoth's two heads tore Greg's Gardna head in half reducing Greg's lifepoints to 6600. "EW!" the eight year old's shouted.


"Your good sugar darling but I am much better."Greg said. "I play Gear Golum the Moving Fortress in defence and I'll also use my Dian Keto the Cure Master to increase my lifepoints to 7600." A giant flying fortress appeared (800/2200).


"Oh yeah!" Daisy shoted as she drew. "I sacrivice my Benemoth to summon Luster Dragon 2."


A bigger version of Luster Dragon appeared (2400/1400). "Attack !" Daisy commanded. Luster Dragon 2 destroyed the fortress while Luster Dragon attacked Greg directly reducing his lifepoints to 5700.


The eight year olds in the audience gasped.


"It is not over yet." Greg said and drew. He smiled then started laughing. "I activate FINAL COUNTDOWN !"


Twenty torches appeared around the two duelists. One torch was lit. "You see on each of our turns a flame starts, at the end of turn 20 you lose."


"If the duel keeps going on the way it is Greg will lose in only a few turns, that card is no threat." Dan said.


"And," Death added. "It costs Greg 2000 lifepoints." Death added.


"And," Alex added. "Greg is wide open."


"Not for long!" Greg shouted. "I use Soul Exchange to offer your Luster Dragon 2 to play my Millenium Sheild in defence mode."


A giant sheild with a Millenium Eye on it appeared (0/3000).


"I end turn." he said.


"Well this changes everything." Geezer said.


"I play Masked Dragon." Daisy announced. Her Masked Dragon (1400/1100). Another torch lit.


"I'll just play a card in defence." Greg smirked. The third torch lit.


"I'll sacrivice my Dragons to play Red Eyes Black Dragon!" Daisy shouted. Her amazing black dragon (2400/2000) appeared. "Inferno Fire Blast !"


Red Eyes destroyed Greg's facedown monster. It was a little witch (300/400).



"By destroying my Magician of Faith you let me take my Soul Exchange back." Greg announced. A fourth torch lit. "What my little Jalepeno pepper, is it getting hot in her?"


"No way Jose!" Daisy shouted.


"Your right this isnt as hot as us making out will be." Greg said. "I'll use my Soul Exchange to offer your dragon to play Labyrinth Wall."



A giant stone maze appeared (0/3000).


"This is double trouble." Dan mumbled.


"I set a card face down." Greg announced. A fifth torch lit.


Daisy drew a card. "Alright Greg your strategy is over, I'll play Winged Dragon Gauardian of the Fortress 1 and I'll use Stamping Destruction to destroy Final Countdown."


"Alright chickorita I'll use my Spell Jammer to destroy your Stamping Destruction." Greg announced. The audience cheered. A sixth torch lit.


"I'll play Card of Sanctity and a card in defence." Greg announced. A seventh flame lit.


"I'll sacrivice my guardian of the fotress to play Curse of Dragon." Daisy announced. A cursed dragon appeared (2000/1500). "Attack!"


Curse of Dragon blasted away a pixie on a branch (1300/0).


"Since you destroyed Pixie Knight I can show you the spells in my graveyard and you tell me which one to move to my hand." Greg announced.


"I'll pick Card of Sanctity." Daisy announced. The eighth torch lit.


"I'll set two cards and use Card of Sanctity." Greg announced. A pink ball with antennas appeared (200/300). "My Watapon is automatically played when I draw it outside of my draw phase."



"Now I flip Inpenetrable Formation so I can increse my sheilds defence by 700 as long as I have two or more monsters in defence mode on my feild, now I'll also flip Yellow Luster Sheild to increase my monsters defence by 300 and oh baby my lust for you is just as strong." Greg said. The ninth torch lit.


"I'll summon Troop Dragon and attack your Watapon," Daisy announced. Bullets shot out of Troop Dragons mouth. Watapon exploded. The tenth torch lit.



"I play the spell card Ojama Trio to play three Ojama tokens on your feild now I'll use my Shadow Balance card to even out our feids." Greg announced. "And when the Ojama's are destroyed you lose 300 lifepoints."


Daisy's lifepoints fell to 6400. The eleventh torch lit.


"I'll use pot of greed!" Daisy shouted. She drew two cards. "Now I play Lord of D. and I'll use Flute of Summoning Dragon to play my second guardian of the fortress and Red Eyes Black Chick." Eight turns left.


"I'll pass." Greg laughed. The therteinght torch lit.


"How will she beat a monster with 4000 defence in seven turns ?" Alex asked.


"She can't." Geezer said.


"I'll sacrivice my Chick to play Red Eyes Black Dragon." Daisy said. "And that is legal because it's all from my Chick's ability." Torch 14 lit up.


"Your doom is like a poem o' sweet Daisy, you are my candy girl." Greg said. "Not even your Red Eyes can break my sheild and I'll pass again." Torch 15 lit up.


"I'll use Monster Reborn on Red Eyes." Daisy announced. Torch 16 lit up.


"Pass." Greg smiled. Torch 17 lit up.


Daisy drew. She smiled. If I draw the right card next turn I'll win she thought. Torch 18 lit up.


"It's getting hot in here so-" Greg started while torch 19 lit up.


"Don't you dare finish that sentence!" Daisy interrupted. Torch 20 lit up. Daisy gasped, the heat was super strong. Black mist swirled around her. "C'mon lady luck I need a winer."


While Greg thought about going on a date with lady luck Daisy drew a card. Yes she thought.


"I activate card United We Stand to increase Red Eyes attack by 800 for each face up monster on my feild." Daisy announced as one Red Eyes's attack went up to 5600. She imagined Dan, Alex, and Death standing behind her.



"That cards like Ultra Rare, well you still can't win so now I get a babe with ultra rare cards, I love my life." Greg said.


"Now I'll use my Equip Duplication card to give the same power to my Lord of D." Daisy anounced. "Attack the little freak!"


Greg's lifepoints fell to 0. "I will take your Card of Sanctity." Daisy told him. Greg moaned and gave her the card.


"Thanks for United We Stand." she told Dan.


"Now kiss the guy!" the kid shouted. "I wanna see some action!"


"Are you thinking what I'm thinking?" Dan asked. Alex, Dan, and Daisy looked at Greg evilly.


"What are you thinking?" Death asked.
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"Make sure to be happy happy happy smiley." a man in a smiley costume said to a miserable Greg Garyson.


"I hate this place !" Greg shouted.


"Have a happy happy happy smiley day." the man said.
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In the next chapter a user character reapeers. Don't miss The Maze of the Mind coming soon.

[Shuppet Master]

Okay, I'm losing interest in this story because it's too badly formatted and I didn't understand the duel between those two. And something's seriously wrong with that Greg kid, he's horny as a toad.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Okay, I admit that last chapter was a sloppy mess but I'll try better next chapter and in the chapter after the next the main story starts. I'm not sure what to do now since barely anyone is reading this story anymore but I will try as hard as I can to make it better. I need flames! Do not feel sorry for me and not give me flames because that makes both of us miserable, me because everybody's ignoring my terrible story and you because you'll be reding a terrible story. I want flames so badly I hope Master of Paradox reviews this (Ok, maybe not that much).

[Mystic_clown]

Dude, seriously, if Greg was around Daisy's age, I'd let the sex jokes slide, but...HE'S NINE YEARS OLD!!

Apart from that, the duel was ok. But as shuppet said, you need to work on the formatting.

So, forte's back huh? that is unles someone else made their own user character. I can't wait for this.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Ya, it is Forte. He's my only user character so far and from how little people reviewed I think he's my last unless you send in that extra user character you told me about.

[goldenzigzagoon]

If anyone is anti-double-posting tell me and I'll never do it again.
Since this seemed to work with Blademasters story I guess I'll do it. Can all you silent readers review (I'm okay with flames)?

[goldenzigzagoon]

PART SEVEN:The Maze of the Mind
At Maxamillion Pegasus's castle 'ol Max was having a meeting with three of his eliminators.

One eliminator was very old, he was bald, and he was wearing something that looked like a Rare Hunter's outfit but just without the millennium eye symbol on it. His name was Chaos.

The second eliminator had dirt all over him, he was tall, and he was covered with cuts and bruises. He wore boots, camouflage pants, and a camouflage shirt. His name was General Hampton.

The third eliminator had neat black hair that partially covers his right eye. He wore a black turtleneck, a white overcoat, white pants, and fancy black shoes. His name was Gabreal Leon.

"So my freinds," Max told the eliminators. "I called you here to tell you that the threat of the shadow realm has returned."

"But I thought that the threat of the shadow realm ended five years ago by that little dude who beat you?" General Hamton said.

"Nothing ever completely ends," Max explained. "Somehow the millennium items are hidden on this island and I found one."

"This is unfortunate," Chaos said. "We started this tournament to fix our reputation."

"Gabreal, I want you to find shadow users and get them off this island." Max told one of his eliminators.

"What!?" General Hamton shouted. "I'm an ambush master and he's a poet."

"Those who live by the sword die by the sword." Gabreal said and started to walk away.

Then Max got a phone call. He picked up the phone. "Hey Chaos Alex's parents want him home." Max told Chaos.

"We will not let the one from the prophecy return." Chaos said.
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Meanwhile Forte was walking around in an empty feild. If he had emotions he would be miserable, hungry, and tired.

Then out of nowhere a man wearing a red robes appeared. His head was buried in his hood but Forte could still see a millennium eye symbol on the man's forehead.

"I will give you a meal for a price." the man said.

"Okay." Forte said weakly. The mysterios man made him noodles.

Forte gave the man a dollar.

"Fool," the man said. "My price is not in dollars- I REQUIRE YOUR SOUL!"

The man pulled the millennium puzzle out of his robe and stole Forte's soul with it. His evil laughs echoed through the feild. Four teenagers named Alex, Daisy, Dan, and Death heard his evil laughter. They immeadiatly ran to the scene of the crime.

"Holy crap!, that things a duel monsters card." Death shouted.

"Yes I am Man With Wjat." the man said. Alex started laughing.

"Your a man with a wedgie!" Alex laughed.

"No I'm a man with a wjat." the Man With Wjat shouted. "If you can't handle that call me Fredrich."

"Alright Freddy." Alex said.

"No Fredrich!" Fred shouted.

"Sorry, the thing is you look just like Freddy Kreuger except for the hands and your robe." Alex laughed.

"I'm the most handsome guy in my city!" Fred shouted.

"You must live in a city of Change Slimes!" Alex shouted.

"That's the last staw!" Fred shouted. He sent the four teenagers to the shadow realm.
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The four teenagers entered into the shadow realm. They were inside of a labyrinth wall.

"Welcome to the shadow realm where the monsters are real!" Fred's voice echoed.

"Well this sucks." Dan mumbled.

"We have to find the end of this maze." Death said.

"Thanks for stating the obvious." Daisy said and the group continued untill they reached a Castle Gate (0/2300).

"This will be easy!" Dan shouted. "I summon Gilford the Legend!"

Dan's swordsman appeared. "Attack!" Dan commanded. Gilford bounced off the gate.

"It must be battle-proof." Daisy told him.

Then a catapult appeared on top of the gate. A Giant Soldier of Stone hopped in.

"He's using it's ability to launch monsters at us." Death explained.

"Activate Divine Wrath!" Alex shouted. A beam of energy shot out of the sky and destroyed the Castle Gate.

The four of them walked forward. They soon found a soulless Forte and Fred.

"Hey Fred!" Alex shouted.

"How did you survive?" Fred asked.

Alex showed Fred his Divine Wrath card. "What did you do to Forte?"

"I merely stole his soul." Fred said.

"Well I know his soul is not permenatly destroyed because you must beat people in duels to do that." Alex said. "So I challenge you to a shadow duel!"

"Fine." Fred said. He took Forte's duel disk and slid it on his arm. He took his deck and put it in side. "It looks like this fool had four duell points."

"Lets Duel!" Fred and Alex shouted.

"I'll go first." Alex announced and drew a card. "I play Mystical Elf in defense position and set a card."

A chanting blue elf appeared (800/2000).

"End turn."

"I'll draw." Fred said. "I'll play a card in defense as well."

A horizontal card appeared.

"Your move fool."

Alex drew a card. "I'll sacrivice my elf to play Magical Marionette."

A marionette holding two knives appeared (2000/1000) .He stabbed Mystical Elf. The puppet laughed.

"Phsyco Swords Slash!" Alex ordered. The puppet stabbed into the facedown card. An eygeption spy with his hair tyed in a ponytail appeared (1200/2000). It shoved the puppet away.

"The defense of my Gravekeeper's Spy is the same as your Stupid Puppet's attack." Fred explained. "And since he was flipped I get to summon a Gravekeeper with 1500 or less attack to the feild."

A man in a robe holding a staff appeared (800/800). "I select Gravekeeper's Curse."

"When Gravekeeper's Curse is summoned you lose 500 lifepoints!" Fred shouted. Gravekeeper's Curse blasted Alex with a curse using his staff. Alex's lifepoint's fell to 7500.

"OW!" Alex shouted.

"You see in the shadow realm you feel pain when you take damage." Fred told Alex.

"Dang." Alex mumbled. "I'm doomed."

"Just finish your turn!" Fred shouted.

"Your move." Alex mumbled.

"Good." Fred drew. "I'll offer Gravekeeper's Curse to summon Gravekeeper's Chief."

Gravekeeper's Curse vanished and a tall man in clored robes with a larger staff appeared (1900/1200).

"And when I play him I can revive a Gravekeeper so welcome back Gravekeeper's curse." Fred laughed. Gravekeeper's Curse appeared. "You know what happens now."

Gravekeeper's Curse blasted Alex again reducing Alex's lifepoint's to 7000.

"Now I activate Necrovalley!" Fred announced. The feild turned into a valley. Gravekeeper's Curse's points went up to (1300/1300), Gravekeeper's Spy's attack went up to (1700/2500), and the chief's points went up to (2300/1700).

"Ugh," Alex mumbled. "Like I didn't have enough to worry about. Now your Gravekeeper's points rise by 500 and I can't use any cards that effect the graveyard."

"You got it." Fred said.

"But by using a spell card my Magical Marionette gains 200 points." Alex explained.

"It dosent matter, I'll switch my spy into attack."Fred said. "Now attack my eygiptian army!"

The Chief destroyed Magical Marionette and then the spy attacked directly. Alex's lifepoints fell to 5200. Alex fell to the ground but quickly got up.

"Why didn't you attack me with your curse?" Alex asked.

"I like watching my victims suffer." Fred said. "I'll set a card and end my turn."

Alex drew a card. "Your about to feel the wrath of my Black Luster Soldier Envoy of the Beggining!" Alex shouted.

"My Necrovalley won't let you!"Fred shouted.

"I'll flip World Wide Suppresion to negate all feild spells for a turn." Alex explained.

"No!" Fred shouted. The ultimate warrior appeared (3000/2500).

"I flip Curse of Aging to reduce its attack by 500." Fred shouted. The warrior's attack fell to 2500.

"Without your Necrovalley your monsters lose 500 points." Alex explained. "Now I'll attack your curse and spy."

The black Luster Soldier beheaded the two gravekeepers. Frank's lifepoints fell to 5000.

"AH!" Frank screamed.

"End turn." Alex said triumphantly.

Fred drew a card. Forte started waking up. "I can't be beat by a mortal." he thought. "I'll set a card and play a card in defense."

"Alright Freddy!" Alex shouted as he drew a card. "My move."

"I play Kasier Colliseum!" Alex announced. A colliseum replaced Necrovalley. "Now you can't have more monsters on your feild then me."

"Now Black Luster Soldier Attack!" Alex ordered. Fred fell down in pain while Black Luster Soldier killed the curse. Fred discarded a card from his graveyard to stop the attack on his facedown.

"By discarding my Gravekeeper's Sheild Master from my graveyard I can negate an attack on a turn that a Gravekeeper was destroyed." Fred shouted.

"End turn." Alex mumbled.

"My turn." Fred drew. "I flip my Owl of Luck to put my second Necrvalley on top of my deck." Fred said. An owl wearing a crownlike thingy appeared (300/500). It chirped. "

"Now I'll use Curse of Feind to switch our cards into defense." Fred announced. "Now I'll summon-" he started. The colliseum started rumbling.

"Did you forget my Colliseum?" Alex asked. "You can't play another monster."

"Your move." Fred mumbled. "But after I play a facedown card."

"Draw." Alex announced.
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Meanwhile Gabreal was walking around when he saw shadow mist. He chanted something and entered the mist. He soon passed through the dimension barrier and walked into the shadow duell.

"It's the one from the prophecy." he gasped when he saw Alex.

"Hi." Daisy said.

"Um," Gabreal said. "Hello."

"So who are you?' Daisy asked. Gabreal kept stuttering.

"My name is Gabreal Leon." he said after a minute of stuttering.

"I'm Daisy." Daisy said. "That's my freind Alex duelling that freaky guy."

"So how do s-stay so c-calm in the middle of a shadow duell?"Gabreal asked.

"I think of it more as a freindly duell." Daisy answered.

"Mr. Pegasus has sent me here to stop shadow duells." Gabreal explained.

"Well bye." Daisy said and walked back over to Dan and Death.

Gabreal tried thinking about how to stop the duell but all he could think about was Daisy. "Why do I lose it infront of girls?I know! I'll write a poem about her.

He took out a pencil and paper and satarted making a poem.
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Meanwhile it was Alex's turn.

"Attack!" Alex ordered. Black Luster Soldier killed the bird and attacked Frank. Frank's lifepoints fell to 2000. "End turn."

"I use Card of Sanctity to draw untill I have six cards in my hand, now I use Necrovalley."

The colliseum shattered and it was replaced by a valley.

"Now I flip Right of Spirit to re-summon Gravekeeper's Curse from my graveyard." Fred announced.

"Fool," Alex laughed. "Necrovalley won't let you."

"Actually Rite of Spirit ignores Necrovalley." Fred explained. Gravekeeper's Curse re'appeared (1300/1300). "Now use your curse!"

Alex's lifepoints fell to 4700. He grunted.

"Now I'll sacrivice him to play my second Chief." Fred said. The second Gravekeeper's Chief appeared (2300/1700). "Now I'll use its ability to reborn Gravekeeper's Curse in defense."

Gravekeeper's Curse reappeared (1300/1300).

"Not again." Alex mumbled. His lifepoints fell to 4200.

"I'll set a card and end my turn." Fred announced.

"My turn." Alex announced.

"I flip Tower of Babel!" Fred announced. "Now the player who uses the third spell after this card is played takes 3000 points of damage."

"Attack!" Alex ordered. Black Luster Soldier killed the two Gravekeepers. Fred's lifepoints fell to 1300. "End turn."

"You have seven cards in your hand so you must discard one." Fred told Alex. Alex discarded a card. Fred drew. "I play a card in defense and I'll set a card."

"Your move."

Alex drew. "I play Cost Down to play Chaos Command Magician." he announced.

"I'll use Trap Hole to destroy it." Fred announced.

The crowd moaned. "Attack!" Alex ordered. Black Luster soldier destroyed a fat guy (1000/1900).

"Destroying my Gravekeeper's Watcher returns your Soldier to your hand." Fred said.

"Oh no!" Alex shouted.

"Whats so OH NO he can just re-summon it." Death asked.

"Necrovalley stops him from uliminating cards from play." Dan told her.

"End." Alex mumbled.

Fredrich drew a card from his deck. "Meet Gravekeeper's assailant."

A gravekeeper in a cloak appeared (2000/2000).

"Attack with arm of the night!" Fred announced. The gravekeeper grabbed Alex by the neck and threw him. Alex's lifepoints fell to 2200.

"I have all most won!" Fred laughed. Then Forte woke up. He mumbled something.

"Your turn mortal!" Fred laughed. "But first I'll use Pot of Greed."

Alex weakly drew. "I'll use Dian Keto the Cure Master." he announced. The tower of Babel blasted him reducing his lifepoints to -800 but Dian Keto increased his lifepoints to 200. Alex screamed.

"Fool you set off the Babylonians famouse ziggurat." Fred laughed.

"I meant to," Alex said. "I use Mystical Space Typhoon to destroy Necrovalley."

The crowd cheered. "Now I'll activate Temporary Rebirth to re-summon my Dark Magician for a turn."

Dark Magician slid out of the ground (2500/2100).

"Dark Magic attack!" Alex ordered. The assailant died and Fred's lifepoints fell to 300. Fred fell on top of Forte. Forte ran into the crowd.

"Hey," Death said. "Your that guy who beat Alex."

"And your that annoying girl." Forte said.

"I'll play a card facedown and end my turn." Alex announced. Dark Magician dissapeared.

"Draw!" Fred announced. "I play Gravekeeper's Vassal."

A man with a big nose appeared (700/500).

"Finish him!" Fred ordered.

"Activate Divine Wrath to stop your Vassal!" Alex shouted.

"Huh?" Dan asked.

Gravekeeper's Vassal died. "Gravekeeper's Vassal's attack is counted as effect damage." Alex explained.

"End." Fred mumbled.

"I draw!" Alex shouted. "Kuribo, beat him!"

a little furball appeared (300/200). It ran up to Fred.

"Stupid hair ball." Fred mumbled. Kuribo finished him off.

"AH!" Fred shouted. He dissapeared.

"Goodbye Freddy." Alex said. He picked up the millennium puzzle.

"Hey Daisy." Gabreal said. "Heres a poem."

He gave Daisy the poem he made.

"It's great." Daisy said.

"I hope we meet again." Gabreal said and walked away.

"At least he's not a pervert like Greg." Daisy said.

"Goodbye fools." Forte said and walked away.

"Who wants mexican take out?" Dan asked.
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In the next chapter Forte duells a shadow duelist. Don't miss "The Second Shadow Game" Coming soon.
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Gravekeeper's Sheild Master
4
Dark
Spellcaster
ATK/DEF 500/1800
Uliminate this card from play on a turn that a monster with 'Gravekeeper's' in its name was destroyed to negate one attack. This card's effect is unnafected by Necrovalley.

Temporary Revival
Spell
Reveive one monster from your graveyard untill the end of your turn.

[Mystic_clown]

Hmm, not a bad chapter, but it needs a bit of working out. I really didn't think a bad guy would have the millenium puzzle (the ring maybe but the puzzle, I dont think so).

Your righting needs a bit of work, but it's bearable.

Hmm, the duel was actually a good one. good job zigzagoon. These are the kind of duels that interest people.

Overall, not a bad chapter. You just need a bit of work on yuor writing and formatting.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Right now there is no good guy items and bad guy items. Theres just a few of them scattered around an island for any one to take. I would just like to update my new chapters name to 'An Unfortunate Vision'. You'll find out why soon.

[Shuppet Master]

Against my better judgement, I read the next chapter of this fic.

It's surprisingly good, with the shadow duel and all(and by the way, it's spelled Wdjat), but the duel sort of broke down at the end with monsters exchanging blows, and Alex throwing a Kuriboh in the end. (But you must admit, it is funny to see a man get defeated by a furball.) Gabreal got a crush on Daisy, and I think the character is a nicer one than Greg(which had been given a hormone shot in his infacy, please).

[Mystic_clown]

Well, what did you expect, Kuriboh's the coolest! *laughs* but yeah, why did you call the man with a wdjat Fred? why not just call him wdjat?

I think I'll tell you guys now that Gabrael and Forte were created by yours truly. All others were made by zigzagoon.

[goldenzigzagoon]

Wdjat is the actual name for the millennium eye symbol. The reason why I had Alex beat Fred with a Kuribo was because its was Alex's form of making fun of him, being beat by a Kuribo is pretty stupid. So did that chapter make you decide to keep reading?

[goldenzigzagoon]

I decided to change the name again
Part Eight:Battle In the Boneyard
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It took a while for William to explain that the dot on the screen was Alex. Then Alex's mother and father went insane. They hopped at the radar and tried to smash the screen.

"I'll get you out of that terrible machine!" Alex's mother shouted.

"I just hope you are not a dot forever!" Alex's father screamed.

"This could take a while." William mumbled.
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Meanwhile Alex, Dan, Daisy, and Death were walking through a graveyard.

"It's getting close to midnight." Death said. "This is creaping me out!"

"Come on you chicken." Dan said.

Then through the fog two poisonous green eyes appeared, they were staring at Dan.

"Ah!" Dan screamed.

"Come on you sissies." the voice of whatever had the green eyes said. Then the owner of the eyes stepped forward.

"Hi Forte." everyone except Forte said.

"What were you telling me again?" Death told Dan who was still freaked out.

"L-look behind y-you." Dan stuttered. About fifty feet behind Forte two people were walking toward the teenagers.

One wore the same clothes as The Crocidile Hunter. He had brown hair that stuck out from below his straw hat. He had a Duell Disk Micro and the Millennium Necklace.

The other was about three feet tall and wore a rare hunter uniform.

"Hey boss you want more Kangaroo Tail Soup when we get to the base?" the shorter one asked.

"That is cruelity to kangaroos," the boss said, he had an Australian accent. "Just because I am Australian does not mean I like that dreadful soup. Even you should not be stupid enough to ask me Plotsky."

Then the five teenagers and the two rare hunters bumped into eachother.

"G'day." the boss said.

"This is Joey." the small one said. "He's the wunduh' from down unduh' who joined the Rare Huntuh's."

"Shut up Plotsky." the one named Joey snapped.

"You are a Rare Hunter!" Alex gasped.

"Oh come on Plotsky!" Joey shouted. "That was top-secret."

"We are back and better than ever!" Plotsky shouted and then laughed like a maniac.

"Shut up Plotsky!" Joey shouted. "I just happen to be a nice rare hunter so I challenge Rapunzel over here to a semi-freindly duell."

"Semi-freindly?" Forte asked.

"If you win you get my Millennium Necklace but if I win I take two Duell Points." Joey explained.

"What?" Forte asked. "All I have to do is bet an extra Duell Point but you are willing to give me a millennium item if I win."

"Thats because I know I'll win, now are we gunna duell or not?" Joey asked.

"But boss," Plotsky said while he tugged on Joey's shirt. "We nead ten more souls to feed to the shadow beast to awaken it from its resting place in Mt. Abouttoerupt."

"SHUT UP PLOTSKY!" Joey shouted.

"OK, lets duel." Forte said. The two duellists drew five cards while their lifepoint meters went up to 8000.

"Shadow beast?" Alex asked. "I don't think it was smart of Forte to accept."

"Yeah," Daisy said. "And my family lives on Mt.Abouttoerupt."

Joey drew a card.

"I play a card in defence mode and I'll set a spell or trap facedown." Joey announced. A vertical and a horizontal face down card appeared.

"End turn."

"I am not falling for your bluff." Forte said as he drew a card. "I summon Gradius!"

A jet plane appeared. It was hovering over the feild (1200/800).

"How will a normal monster with 1200 attack beat me?" Joey asked.

"I built my deck around it." Forte told him.

"What a stupid card to base a deck on!" Joey laughed.

"This will teach you," Forte said. "Cyclon Laser Strike."

The jet plane launched a missile at the facedown card. Joey laughed and flipped over his trap card.

"Activate Cross Counter!" Joey shouted.

Gradius's missile slammed into the monster in defence mode. A koala appeared (1100/1800). The missile did no damage. Then the koala put on bowing gloves and smashed Gradius into bits. Forte's lifepoints fell to 6800 then 4800.

"What!?" Death shouted. "He lost way too many lifepoints."

"You see the card I activated was called Cross Counter, it doubles the damage when you attack a card with a stronger defence then your monster's attack and it destroys it." Joey explained. Gradius exploded.

"What about the extra 2000?" Death asked.

"The card Rapunzel attacked was Des Koala who does 400 damage to him for each card in his hand." Joey explained.

"My name is Forte," Forte said. "I set a card facedown and end my turn."

"I'll draw." Joey announced. He drew a card. "I will use Tribute Doll, this card lets me offer one of my monsters to summon a level seven card and I choose Big Koala."

Des Koala dissapeared and a larger blue koala appeared (2700/2000).

"The set back is that it can not attack this turn but my Quick Attack spell card will change that." Joey said. "Now attck Forte with knock out punch!"

The overgrown koala punched Forte reducing his lifepoints to 2100.

"Activate Nutrient Z." Forte announced. His lifepoints went up to 6100. "An expert like you should know this card boosts me by 4000 lifepoints when I lose 2000 or more."

"Your move ol' chum." Joey said.

Forte drew a card.

"Too bad he really got ya there boss." Plotsky said.

"Shut up Plotsky!!" Joey shouted.

"I will simply play a card in defence and end my turn." Forte announced.

"My turn." Joey said rudely and he drew a card. "Attack!"

Big Koala punched the face down card. It was a red orb (1400/1400). It clamped onto Big Koala.

"The card you attacked was Blast Sphere, at the end of my turn your Big Koala blows up and reduces your lifepoints by its attack." Forte explained. Joey gasped.

"Loser!" Plotsky shouted.

"Shut up Plotsky!!!" Joey shouted.

"Your move." Joey mumbled.

Forte made a draw. "I play Robotic Knight in defence and set a card face down."

A metal pirate appeared (1600/1800).

"Your move." Forte smiled.

"Forte smiled! Forte smiled!" Alex shouted. "He is so close to becoming normal."

Big Koala blew up and chunks of it fell on Joey reducing his lifepoints to 5300.

"Ew." Joey mumbled while he drew a card. He smiled. "I play March of Koala, this lets me revive a koala from my graveyard and I can summon another one!"

The graveyard started rumbling. A Big Koala crawled out of the ground (2700/2000). It then shouted. This attracted another Big Koala (2700/2000).

"Now my koala army ATTACK!" Joey shouted.

The first one destroyed Robotic Knight. The second one ran at Forte.

"You are full of mistakes arent you?" Forte asked. "I flip Sakuretsu Armor."

The second koala fell backwards and died.

Plotsky started saying some thing but before he could get it out of his mouth Joey said "Do not even think about it."

"Your move." Joey mumbled.

"Draw." Forte drew a card. "I play Monster Reborn."

"Oh no he is gunna do a suicide strike." Joey gasped.

"Not exactly, I'll revive Gradius." Forte said. Gradius shot out of the sky and landed (1200/800).

"That bucket of bolts." Joey laughed.

"And I will summon another one." Forte announced. Another one appeared (1200/800).

"Yippee, what will two wimps do?" Joey asked.

"When I summon him I can play Gradius's Option." Forte announced. Another different looking ship appeared (?/?)-(2400/1600). "It's attack is equal to the combined attack and defence of every Gradius on my field."

"Actually it only works on one." Dan said.

"Industrial Illusions changed the effect AGAIN." Forte told him.

"Are they allowed to do that?" Plotsky asked.

"They changed Toon World, why not that?" Forte asked.

"It can't beat my Big Koala anyway." Joey said.

"I will attach the equip Cyclon Laser to one of my Gradius." Forte announced. "This gives it 300 extra attack and lets it do damage even when your card is in defence."

One of the Gradius's attack went up to 1500 and Gradius' Option's attack went up to 2700. The three jets hovered over Joey.

"Get 'im." Forte said. Gradius' Option blasted Big Koala who punched it back. Both cards blew up. Then the two Gradius blasted Joey reducing his lifepoints to 2600.

"That's gotta hurt." Plotsky mumbled.

"SHUT UP PLOTSKY!!!" Joey shouted.

"Your move fool." Forte said.

Joey drew a card. "I play Pot of Greed."

A with a sinister smile appeared. Joey reached in and pulled out two cards. "I play Tribute To The Doomed to destroy your Gradius with the Cyclon Laser."

The jet blew up.

"Two down, one to go." Joey said. "I play a card in defence and end my turn."

"Draw." Forte announced and drew a card. "Attack with Cyclon Laser!"

Gradius blasted the monster. A shaved kangaroo wearing shoes, a belt, and boxing gloves appeared (800/700). It was blown up. The Gradius turned on its sheild generator.

"Not a Kangaroo Champ, it shifts my monster into defence." Forte mumbled. "Well your move."

Joey drew a card. "I play Des Kangaroo."

A green kangaroo wearing boxing gloves, shoes, and a purple vest appeared (1500/1700).

"Now I'll use Sheild Crash to destroy a monster in defence, LIKE YOUR GRADIUS!" Joey shouted. A blast of energy blew up Forte's last Gradius.

"Now attack with rush punch!" Joey commanded. As quick as a race car Des Kangaroo punched Forte in his stomach reducing his lifepoints to 4600. "End turn."

Forte drew a card. "I play Premature Burial to summon Gradius."

A Gradius came out of the ground (1200/800). Forte's lifepoints fell to 3800.

"Now I offer him to play B.E.S Crystal Core." Forte announced.

A long battle ship with chunks of ice surrounding it appeared in the place of Gradius (2100/1000).

"You see this card has three counters on it and it can not be destroyed by battle but every time it attacks it loses a counter. At the end of a turn that it battles if it has no counter on it it explodes." Forte announced. "Now attack."

The ship blasted a missile at Des Kangaroo destroying it and reducing Joey's lifepoints to 2000.

"End turn." Forte said.

Joey drew a card.

"Your in for it." Plotsky said.

"SHUT UP PLOTSKY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Joey shouted.

"I will just play a card in defence and end." Joey mumbled.

Forte drew. "Attack."

The ship blasted the card in defence mode and destroyed it. It was a mole (1100/1300).

"The card you killed was my Eucalyptus Mole and when its killed I can special summon a koala from my deck." Joey explained. His last Big Koala appeared (2700/2000).

"I'll attatch the monster Heavy Mech Support Platform to my Crystal Core to give it an extra 500 attack and defence now I will end my turn." Forte announced.

"I feel lucky." Joey said while he drew his next card. He tried to hold in an evil laugh. "I use Polymerization to fuse Big Koala and Des Kangaroo into .......... Master of OZ!"

A huge boxing koala/kangaroo appeared (4200/3700).

"HOLY CRAP!" Alex, Dan, Death, and Alex shouted. Forte smiled.

"Attack with Dynamo Punch!!!!" Joey commanded. Master of OZ punched B.E.S Crystal Core reducing Forte's lifepoints to 2200.

"You go boss!" Plotsky shouted.

"SHUT UP PLOTSKY!" Dan, Daisy, Death, and Alex shouted.

"End turn." Joey announced. "And I beleive time is up for your space ship."

"Actually I can discard my platform to save him." Forte said and he discarded his equip.

Forte drew a card. "If I shift to defence he can just use a Sheild Crash" he thought. "End."

Joey drew. He looked at the Sheild Crash card in his hand. "You catch on Forte." Joey commented. "But to bad I have to crush you, now attack!"

B.E.S blew up and Forte's lifepoints fell to 100.

"What your not scared, worried, freaked out? What is wrong with you?" Joey asked.

"Whats wrong with you is that you depend too much on one monster." Forte said as he drew. "I use Soul Exchange to offer your dread from down under to play Jinzo."

Master of OZ toppled over and a machine with a funky face (2400/1500) replaced it.

"What?" Joey gasped.

"Your master has been killed, now I end turn." Forte announced.

Joey drew a card. "Oh no, I play a card in defence and end." he mumbled.

"I will use my Mechanical Chaser to attack it." Forte announced.

A torture robot (1850/1000) appeared. It killed the Des Koala Joey set. Then Jinzo finished off the duel.

"Croykey!" Joey shouted. "Just take it!"

He dropped the necklace and ran. Plotsky followed. Forte picked up the Millenium necklace.

"I think this belongs to the chosen one." Forte said and he gave it to Alex. "I heard you can see the future with it."

Ignoring the fact that Forte called him the chosen one Alex used the millenium necklace. A blinding light surrounded him as he looked into the future.
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A man was telling him that he would like to hire him for the rare hunters. "No way." he thught.

Then the next vision came. It was a creature made of black mist rising out of a pit surrounded by chanting rare hunters. It destroyed everything in sight except the rare hunters. Then Alex noticed one of the people it killed-Dan. "What, is that the shadow beast? Does that mean the rare hunters win?" he thought. Then the vision stopped.
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"Do we have a bright future?" Dan asked.

Alex stood there wondering what to say.
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ARE YOU CONFUSED? Do not worry it will be explained in the next chapter called 'That last Chapter Was So Darn Confusing So Heres The Chapter That Clears Everything Up'

[Shuppet Master]

You're doing better, but you made a mistake - namely, the Des Koala. Since Forte only had 100 life points left, he would have lost the duel because of Des Koala's effect, unless Forte had no cards in his hand. (If he didn't, ignore this.)

[goldenzigzagoon]

Forte had no cards in his hand. I was planning to make it Des Kangaroo so now I had to go back and check to see if he had no cards in his hand. Luckily for him he had none.

[goldenzigzagoon]

INTO THE BASE
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Alex, Dan, Daisy, and Death just entered a big city.

They were near 57 Orioze St. when a fat man grabbed Alex's arm and started dragging him into a restaurant.

"GET OFF ME!" Alex shouted. "KIDNAPPER! GET OFF!"

"Welcome to the Oreos Diner," the man said. "We have a fine selection of food."

"FREAK!" Alex shouted. "SAVE ME GUYS! A FREAKY FREAKIN' FREAKAZOID IS DRAGGING ME INTO A FREAKING TORTURE BUILDING!"

"Dude chill out, it's a restaurant." Dan told him.

"I WILL NEVER EAT HERE! YOU CAN BRING A HORSE TO WATER BUT YOU CAN'T MAKE IT DRINK OR SOMETHING LIKE THAT!" Alex continued shouting.

Soon the four teenagers were in the Oreos Diner. The walls were covered with posters of Oreos and every thing on the menu had to do with Oreos.

"Whoa." Death said.

"What is with you!?" Alex shouted to the guy who dragged him into the restaurant.

"Listen, Master Pegasus told me to bring you four here." the man said.

"What is he planning to do to this?" Alex asked.

"I'll tell you when you have finished, now will you eat or not?" the man asked.

"Is it on the house?" Alex asked.

"Yes." the man answered.

"Then OK." Alex said.

When he was done eating he asked what Pegasus wanted him for.

"Find out yourself." the man said. He opened the back door and the four duelists walked in.

They were greeted by an old bald man in robes. The old man held a wooden staff.

"AHHHH!" Death shouted.

"CREEPY!" Dan shouted.

"Hello young ones, I am Chaos." the man said.

"What kind of name is that?" Death asked.

"That is my real name." Chaos said.

"What did you want us for?" Alex asked. He was the only one who was not freaking out.

"Master Pegasus wanted you, being very powerful duelists, to help me attack the Rare Hunters base." Chaos explained.

"I don't trust him!" Daisy shouted.

"Me neither!" Dan shouted.

"Listen," Alex said. "If we want to find that Joey guy we need to do this."

"What if he's a Rare Hunter who's trying to suck out our brains!?" Dan shouted.

"Hey, I might not know whats going on but I am The Chosen One and you should listen to me." Alex said. "If you want to be a sissy go travel with somebody else."

"Well said." Chaos said.

"Oh well." Dan said. "I'm in."

"I guess." Daisy mumbled.

"N-" Death started.

"Hey three is better than one." Daisy interupted.

So the five people went to an Out House in the middle of a creepy forest.

"So," Alex said. "The Rare Hunters are in a Portie-Potty?"

"Look in the toilet." Chaos said. He opened the door.

"Oh no, the Out House of doom." Dan said sarcastically as he walked in. The toilet was twice as large as a normal toilet. Death looked in.

"Holy Teddy Bear!" Death shouted. "That's not a potty, that's a secret base."

"It ain't gonna' be secret for long." Dan said. Inside where the middle of the toilet was there was a ladder.

"Come." Chaos said. He crawled down the ladder.

"Aw Crap, I hope there isn't crap in there." Alex said. He followed and then the girls and Dan went down.

They were soon in a creepy room with a creepy door.

"Alright Chosen One, it is your destiny to go in." Chaos told Alex. Alex opened the creepy door and walked in. The new room looked exactly like the last one.

"All clear." he said. The other four people walked in.

"I sense a dark presence ahead." Chaos said. "Only you can continue."

"You mean ME?!?!" Alex asked.

"Yes." Chaos said.

"No one is scared of a four foot kid with four eyes." Daisy said. "Time for a make over."

"Eek!" Alex shouted as Daisy and Death hopped on top of him.
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Ten minutes later Alex walked into the next room. He wore sun glasses, he wore a black cape, black boots, a black shirt, and black pants.

"Alright who is there?" Alex asked. "I can't see when I wear these sun glasses."

A tall man in Rare Hunter robes was standing in front of him. He was in a room that was empty except for a chair and the other man.

"Take those off." the man said. He took off Alex's sun glasses and gave him real glasses. "I can recognize you where ever you are Alex."

"Let me guess, your the leader of the Rare Hunters?" Alex asked.

"Yes, have you ever used that Millennium Necklace to look into the future?" the leader of the rare hunters asked. For some reason Alex was as very calm, like he was talking to his parents before he snuck out.

"Yes." Alex said.

"Then you know that it is your destiny to join us." the Rare Hunter said.

"Yes sir, I mean yes master." Alex said.

"Me and you will take over the world." the leader said evilly.

"I also saw that the shadow beast kills Dan, I do not want to hurt any of my friends." Alex said.

"I am your only friend." the evil leader told him. "They are trying to lure you to the wrong side."

By now it seemed like Alex had know this man forever.

"I am not powerful enough now," Alex said. "I have seen the fools duel at a much higher level than my own."

"Then take this." the Leader of the Rare Hunters said. He gave Alex a card.

"Goodbye." Alex said. He put his sun glasses back on and left.
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"Did you have any success?" the fat man asked Alex when he returned.

"Yes," Alex said. He was trying to hold in an evil laugh. Then he realized that the Rare Hunters were trying to use him for evil. "Now if you excuse me I have a prophecy to fulfill."
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In the next chapter Alex's family arrives and they are planning to teach Alex an ultimate lesson in manners. Don't miss Family Feud(1).