Well, I finally got around to posting my own fanfic. This is the first large fic attempt I've made before, so I constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. Although, I have some experience, so this isn't say the first thing I've ever written.
Anyway, here's what you came for.
Chapter 1 :
Again, for the first time.
Sean lay on his bed, his short pink hair being pushed back and forth gently by the cool breeze from the open window. It was hot this afternoon, but now at almost eleven-thirty in the evening, it was getting a little cold. Sean sat up and turned, placing his feet onto the floor. He looked out the window at the field of lights that dotted the Saffron City skyline.
“It’s getting a little cold,” Sean thought to himself as he stood up. He walked over to the window, and closed it quietly as not to awaken his sleeping friend. Sean turned his back to the window and looked around the room. The walls were white, and had yellow trim. The door was also yellow, and the floor was covered with white tiles with a diamond pattern. Sean’s eyes scanned the room taking in various familiar sites. First was his bed which was still made and had a yellow (although of a lighter color than the trim and the door.) bedspread covering the top. (The yellow motif was standard throughout the building. All of the students’ rooms were like this.) Next was the small wooden dresser which contained Sean’s clothes, and had some pictures of his sister and mother sitting on top of it. Then looking on past the computer desk his eyes stopped at the small bed across the room from his. This bed was about half the size of Sean’s and a little lower to the ground. On it was a small birdlike pokémon dreaming happily in its sleep. It was white and had red and blue triangular markings on its abdomen, although currently they were hidden under a small and also yellow blanket.
Sean smiled at his friend, “Maybe I should go to sleep too?” As Sean pondered this question in his mind a strange feeling suddenly came over him. It seemed very familiar, but he had never felt anything like it before…
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“So, you’ve come?” A voice reached out from the mind of this well known woman across the roof to a figure cloaked in shadow. There was no response, but she knew her message had been heard. Sabrina turned around to face the mysterious figure. There was silence as Sabrina looked on. She was wearing her usual red dress and black pants, and her long dark purple hair, looking almost black in the dim moonlight, was flowing slightly in the night breeze.
“You had a purpose in calling me here. What do you want?” A deep psychic voice broke the mental silence. The voice came from the figure, but its body remained in the darkness.
“Something has been bothering me ever since that boy came here… He has something very different about him. He’s different from the other students here,” Sabrina continued the silent conversation. After she said this, she turned her gaze to the streets below. She watched as far below people we walking and driving around, completely oblivious to what was going on up here on the roof.
“Different?”
“His powers… They aren’t like the others, or even my own. His powers are more like that of a psychic pokémon than a psychic human. Although the end results are the same, the energy used by a psychic pokémon differs form that of a psychic human. It’s indistinguishable to normal people, but most experienced psychics can tell the difference even though it’s small,” Sabrina stopped for a second, watching the people below. She then turned back to her “friend” and continued, “But even between pokémon there’s a difference. But his powers don’t seem like that of any psychic pokémon I’ve seen either… Except for one.”
The figure could feel Sabrina’s gaze fix on him. He knew what she was going to say before she said it.
“Except for you.”
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“Hey, Toby! Wake up!” Sean tried to get his friend to wake up by shoving him lightly and calling to him. The togetic stirred and opened his eyes. He looked up at Sean with an annoyed expression.
“What time is it?” Toby chirped in his own language. Oddly enough, Sean had no trouble understanding Toby’s speech. As for any other pokémon however, Sean just heard the same chirps and growls as everyone else. Toby looked over to the clock on the desk, which read 11:28 PM. “What are you doing still up this late!? Don’t you remember what happened last time? And you have class tomorrow you know…”
“Yeah, I know it’s supposed to be lights out at ten. But this is more important than that. There’s something here. Can’t you feel it?” Sean looked at his best friend, and only pokémon, with a serious expression.
“…I don’t really feel anything. Except tired,” Toby still didn’t seem convinced that it was anything worth losing sleep over, especially his sleep.
“I know there’s something… It’s up above us, and I’m gonna go check it out!” Sean then got up, and got his shoes, and began to put them on.
“You’re just asking for trouble you know. What are you going to do if Sabrina finds you sneaking around again? She was pretty bothered that you were breaking the rules last time. I’d hate to see her get angry…”
“Okay, so last time I didn’t have a good excuse. But the rules didn’t say anything about getting a midnight snack… But this is a whole lot bigger than that. Whatever’s up there is something or someone I’ve met before. I know it. I have to find out what’s up there,” Sean said in a determined tone as he turned and headed toward the exit.
“Fine, I’ll go with you. Just to make sure you don’t get in over your head.”
“You just don’t want to wake up tomorrow to find out you slept through the coolest thing ever,” Sean looked back to Toby with a grin. Toby then glided over to Sean as they prepared to leave. Toby, like most togetic, hover above the ground instead of walking or flying. Toby could fly if he so chose, but in a building there’s usually not enough room for that kind of thing.
After the two friends exited the room, Sean closed the door quietly, as not to alert others to their presence. The hallways were white as the rooms were, and had matching yellow trim. As this floor was designed as a dormitory area for students who had come to train here at the Saffron City Gym, but lived in other cities or regions. It’s understandable, as the Saffron Gym was one of the foremost places for psychic training across Japan. There was another psychic gym somewhere to the south west in the Hoenn region, but it was a lot smaller. Sean made sure to walk quietly down the dimly lit hall towards the stairs; he went as fast as he could while maintaining his silence, but his speed was limited. “Too bad I can’t float like Toby does,” Sean complained mentally to himself. Finally after passing about six other doors both of them reached the stars leading up to the next floor.
“You know… It’s not too late to go back and not get in trouble…” Toby quietly chirped, being (as usual) the voice of reason.
“I told you already. I have to know what’s up there. If it’s really someone I’ve seen before then they might be able to tell me about what happened that day…” Sean whispered in response. Even though he spoke quietly, his voice was filled with determination.
Toby now knew that this wasn’t just Sean going out because he was told not to. If there really was someone from his past, maybe Sean would finally know why he can’t remember anything from before that day six years ago. Well, Sean remembered things like who his family was, and all of the things that he learned in school and such. But he couldn’t remember any events that happened before that day. He knew that his mother was his mother, but had no memories of doing anything together with her. He remembered various things learned in school, but didn’t actually remember learning them. If there really was an answer as to why this happened, Toby knew that Sean would do anything to find it.
Sean took the first step as he and Toby began to ascend the stairs. After they climbed up the three flights of stairs, Toby spoke up.
“Sean, this is the top floor. Whoever it is has to be here,”
“No… It’s still higher. I think it’s on the roof.”
“But, the door to the roof is locked… How do you plan on-“ but before Toby could finish his statement, he was interrupted.
“Actually… The roof door isn’t locked. Someone must be up there.” Sean said as he turned the doorknob that lead to the stairs for the roof.
Toby didn’t have anything to say. It would be useless to mention that they would get into even more trouble if the were caught out after curfew and on the roof, since Sean wouldn’t care either way. So Toby just followed as Sean headed towards the roof.