A Crazy Orginal: The Four Elemental Rods

[Crazy]

PROGULE: Legend told of the four elemental rods. These ancient rods had the power to control the forces of nature. The rods were the Geo Rod,Aqua Rod,Areo Rod, and the Piro Rod. Many people have searched for these rods but all of the people who sought them were never seen again. Now in the year 2030 a young man has set out for the rods.

But he was not the only ones who wanted the rods. A evil organization is also looking for them,and they will stop at nothing to get the rods first. This organazation has killed thousands,and they will not hesitate to stop anyone in their path. Now a tale of destruction,power,and adventure unfolds.

THE END. P.S. Yes I know it was short but trust me it will get much longer. It was kind of like a teaser.

[DannyBoy]

This seems interesting even though I think you could have said some more about what it will be like. You spelt organization wrong. Not much else to say with just this. I will keep reading to see how this goes.

[Chris 2.1]

So, this is a prologue to a story? Well it sounds pretty good. I suppose you should spellcheck everything, but most spelling was Ok. Good work

[mistysakura]

Not bad... weatch the typos (spellcheck's good), and put a space after each comma. It makes it easier to read. Although the plot seems pretty "good vs. evil" so far, I hope that you'll put some nice tists in it.

[Crazy]

Yeah I need to watch the typos. Oh and yes there will be quite a few twists. Sorry the first chapter hasn't been posted but I wrote it once and hated it so now I am rewriting it.