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    I think I know what's coming in the next chapter, too. There isn't much I can say, except that I liked Twilight's bit about her deck, and I also liked the bit about apprenticing with Arlia. (I bet you know why, too.)

    See you next chapter.
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    Maybe he figured he 'sold out' when he accepted a modding position and hanged himself. At least, that's what I would do.

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    Right,I forgot to give credit to those who deserved it. Sonja was contributed by none other than Venusaur himself,and Jeff was contributed by TheBlueAvenger. Sorry if I didn't have him duel the girls,but I already had Arlia with her Harpies,I hope you like his role,BlueAvenger.

    Oh,and I apologize for not understanding the cards Total Defense Shogun or Reckless Greed. It's been a while since I checked the Yu-Gi-Oh cardlists lately. Thanks for pointing out errors. As you can see,I went into the text and fixed all formatting and typos. If there are any I missed,PM me and I'll fix them.

    Anyway,Venusaur,don't worry,your character WILL show up again. I won't say where,though. The tournament is still young.

    By the way,this isn't a trivia contest,but it's a sort of "guess the duelist" mini-contest I'm going to hold until the chapters where the finals begin. I will give them much of a spoiler - Diane and her friends have a good chance of entering the finals. However,if all three get into the finals,there will be five more slots(it will be an eight-way elimination tournament). Whoever can guess the duelist campers who are going to be in the finals correctly will get the chance to create their own card for later characters. PM me with your guesses,though,I don't want to clutter up this thread.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Quite all right; I completely understand. It would have been really redundant. As it was, I enjoyed his role.
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    Maybe he figured he 'sold out' when he accepted a modding position and hanged himself. At least, that's what I would do.

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    Well,Chapter 18 is ready to go. I talked to Venusaur about a certain monster card used here and he demanded I use it. Honestly,this card will surprise anyone who's seen a certain film named after another term for "maze." Oh,and it features a relative of Venusuar's Terone. Enjoy!

    PS: Comment on the new siggie!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yeah, bring it on!

    And try to make that picture larger.

    - Venusaur

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    Well, where to begin?

    I was ROTFL at all the Harry Potter references. They really spiced things up.

    The connection to my fic was well done. I know where it's going, of course, but my lips are sealed.

    A few words though.

    One, you are forgiven for referencing the Tsunami, but this timeline is 37 years in the future, not twenty.

    Second, who says Yata-Garasu can't be brought back from the Graveyard with Monster Reborn? Spirit Monsters can be revived just like anything else. (I might be wrong though - I'll look it up)

    Anyway, good going. As a big fan of Labyrinth including Jareth was a good idea. You could have made him an effect monster, but pickers can't be choosers.

    See you around.

    - Venusaur

    EDIT: I looked it up. I was wrong. Spirits cannot be special summoned in any way. Sorry.

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    Just a question .hack, isnt chapter 18 supposed to show up the son of red-eyes or something ?

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    I apologize for not showing the card that I was going to in this chapter. It slipped my mind when I wrote it because I was obsessed with that other card. Don't worry,it will appear in the fanfic - Shanna will duel again.

    EDIT: I looked it up. I was wrong. Spirits cannot be special summoned in any way. Sorry.
    Good thing you caught that mistake you made before I had to correct you,Venusaur. Spirit Monsters cannot be brought back from the graveyard - it balances out their constant returning to the hand and making them almost untouchable. I highly suggest you do LOTS of research on them before a certain duel with Yugi in the future. *hint hint*

    EDIT: Just wanted to add something...

    I'm no longer accepting reqjuests for reader contributions of duelists as of this time. I've already planned out what duels will happen before the finals and who will be in them,so I need no more dueling campers for the story. Sorry if you haven't contributed yet,but you might still get a chance!

    Guess who will be in the finals! So far,it looks like Diane,Gwen,and Beth will be in the finals. If this is the case,there are five more slots open. Opaltiger guessed who one fo the finalists will be,but I can't spoil it right here. However,if you guess the same one,I'll let you and give yuo another chance to guess. If you guess right,you are eligible to contribute a card idea for a future duel.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yesh, fear my guessing skills of doom.

    Anyway, there was a mistake I noticed in the duel - at the start, when Koumuro Dragon destroyed the Ancient Elf, Diane should have lost only 50LP, not 100. Also, I'm pretty sure Yata is (200/100). That's all the mistakes I noticed though. Hopefully next chappie done soon, I can't wait!

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    Oops,my bad. Should be visiting my Yu-Gi-Oh pages more.

    Anyway,I've put up a Pokemon trainer fic thread. More chapters will come up there soon.

    EDIT: Chapter 19 is up. Enjoy!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    I'm going to see if Chapter 20 will stick too.

    EDIT: Oh geez, I forgot to add that Gwen's opponent is a contribution by Loupiteak. Kudos to him on creating this duelist,even though I had to reduce the age a bit and couldn't show off all the cards. I'll show off his special card in a later chapter. Sorry,Loupiteak!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 20: Chaos Theory


    "Ah, I got it!” said Persephone. “Ta da!”

    She held up a frightening looking Monster card.

    “That’s really Chaos Emperor Dragon, Envoy of the End?” asked Yugi.


    - Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.,The Mandate of Heaven;"Fiend Comedian"


    Gwen was having the worst luck. It was already three and she and her friends would have to meet soon. And she didn't have a single challenger yet. "Oh well, there's always tomorrow," she mumbled. She pulled out her card. "I only need four more star pins to get into the finals...too bad I can't challenge Lina. But I see the point in the one elite duelist for each person rule. I'm sure Lina would be dead tired each day if she had to duel everyone in camp!"

    Suddenly, a sob broke the air. "Huh?" Gwen walked over to a huddled mass on the ground and recognized the cape. "Katnappe?"

    Kate slowly got up, wiping the tears from her eyes. "Call me Kate from now on," she sighed, removing her cat ears. "My life of dueling is now over." She held up her card, which was riddled with holes.

    Gwen let out a gasp. "You...you're OUT? But you had five star pins! Don't tell me you lost to Lina?!"

    "Okay, I won't," said Kate with a sigh. "Seriously, I did. Your counselor was much more than I expected. I was doing pretty well in the duel. I had Super War-Lion out and was planning on summoning Cat's Ear Tribe to take out her next monster, but then she summoned a powerful warrior that wasn't a Toon and his weapon totally massacred me. When I tried to spring my Staunch Defender card, the warrior just ignored it! It was horrible!"

    "A warrior? With a Keyblade?" asked Gwen, concerned.

    "What's a keyblade?" asked Kate, confused. "This warrior had a ebony sword that decimated my monster and dropped my life points to nothing. I was devastated..." She sighed. "I tried to get back up to speed by challenging this kid from the Vampire Lord troupe, but I was unprepared for his powerful monsters! I let my guard down and...you can see the results."

    "You wagered your final star pin while you were in distress?" gasped Gwen in shock. "That's stupid!"

    "I didn't challenge him right after I battled your counselor," said Kate, sniffing. "I waited a day and spent hours studying the best challenges. I thought he was weak because his favorite card was the Dark Magician..."

    "You mean, Yugi's monster?" gasped Gwen.

    "Yeah, I thought my Super War-Lion with Beast Fangs would take it out, but I was wrong. He pulled a combo that destroyed it. I was forced to defend, but when I summoned Cat's Ear Tribe to take out his monster, he brought up a stronger one..."

    "Where is he now?" growled Gwen.

    "Probably at his cabin," said Kate. "But you don't understand! His strongest monsters..." Gwen ran off without a word. "Oh great, now she's going to lose star pins! Why did I even bother talking about that guy?!" She clutched her head in rage.

    ~~+~~

    A young man with stringy brown hair was admiring her card. "What an idiot," he smirked. "Acting all tough when she was just a mewling kitten. I didn't want to take her lone star pin, but she demanded it. Maybe she'll be humble now."

    "HEY! YOU UP THERE!" roared a feminine voice.

    "What now?" groaned the boy, peeking his head out the window. He saw a black-haired girl from the Dark Magician Girl troupe wielding her Duel Disk. "Not another poser! Oh well, maybe after taking my monsters, she'll be humbled too." He sighed as he took his Duel Disk, slid it on his arm, and went outside, shuffling his deck. "What is it, poser?"

    "The name's Gwen," hissed Gwen. "And I have a bone to pick about how you treated one Kate Ashley!"

    "Oh, you mean 'Katnappe?'" grinned the boy, marking the name with his fingers. "A complete loser. Her deck wasn't even worth my time. I warned her about my deck, but she refused to listen. It was like she was desperate. I humbled her by kicking her out of the Camp of Duels."

    "Yeah, about that," said Gwen through clenched teeth. "Did you know that she's a nervous wreck now? What did you do, gloat over her like some loser villian from Hades?"

    "I did nothing of the sort, she probably put on an act to lure you into dueling me," grinned the boy. "I just told her that she had learned her lesson and left. It's not my fault that she ran in recklessly like a wild boar into a lion's den!"

    "Still, I want you to apologize," said Gwen. "Whatever you did to her left her shattered in mind and body."

    "I only defeated her in a duel, and she must be acting like the Second Coming is here and she's going to Hell," sighed the boy. "Oh, I'm sorry, I didn't introduce myself. My name is Peter."

    Gwen paused. "Peter...how interesting. That's the name of one of Yugi's pals!"

    "Oh, you mean the shutterbug with an Archfiend deck?" smirked Peter. "Well, it's not my fault my folks named me after him. Peter is a common name. Call me Pete if you must."

    "I don't care what your name is, but it'll be mud when I'm through with you!" said Gwen, activating her duel disk. "You've kicked a weakling in the butt, let's see you deal with a stronger foe."

    "You are such a silly girl," grinned Peter. "I warned your friend that my monsters are no joke." He shuffled his deck.

    "Oh really, I don't think I'll have too much problem against your Dark Magician," said Gwen. "Kate told me about it."

    "So, she told you that much," said Peter. "Did she mention the details of any other monsters I used?"

    "Well, she mentioned a combo..." said Gwen, realizing that she should have stuck around to listen to Kate about Peter's deck. She shrugged. "It doesn't matter. Once I defeat you, I'll take back that star pin you stole from Kate and three more! Then I'll qualify for the finals!" She held up her star card.

    "So, you got Arlia's badge," snickered Peter. "Seems all Harpie Lady girls are wimps, even their counselor!"

    "You take that back, brat!" snarled Gwen, putting her card away and shuffling her deck. "Arlia was a lot harder than you think!"

    "If you defeat me in a duel, I'll publicly apologize to Kate and her counselor at dinnertime," said Peter. "But trust me, I've defeated stronger foes than you." He activated his duel disk.

    "Let's duel, slimeball," said Gwen angrily as she and Peter loaded their decks into the disks and the life meters reset.

    ~~+~~

    Diane reached the cafeteria, where the three promised to meet, and sat down with a sigh at a table. "I wonder how Beth and Gwen are doing. I know they've found duelists by now." She looked at the wall clock, which read 4:30. "It's late. I hope the others get here on time."

    ~~+~~

    Diane was right in Gwen having found a duelist, as a crowd began to form in eager anticipation. "Since I'm going to trounce you anyways," grinned Peter. "You go first."

    "How gentlemenly," said Gwen sarcastically as she and Peter drew their hands. She drew a card. All right, my first draw is my best! All I need now is to bring my Horus the Black Flare Dragon to the field...and this card will help me out. "I set one monster face-down and end my turn." The card appeared before her.

    "Well, not very impressive for a first move, Gwen," said Peter with a smirk as he drew. "Well, look here. I just found an interesting little magic card..." He played it. "Change of Heart!"

    "What? No!" cried Gwen as the card switched sides.

    "That's right, now your monster is mine...let's see what it is," laughed Peter. "I flip-summon it!" The teal chest with tentacles appeared. (100/1000) "Well, Dark Mimic L1. How original. Too bad I am the one who is getting its effect!" He drew another card. "And this little baby I drew will help me get rid of it so you can't level it up."

    "You know about my level-up monsters?" gasped Gwen.

    "I've been researching your decks since I came here," said Peter. "I knew there was a duelist who used level-up monsters. They are all pretty weak unless you can kill monsters with them, like anyone would let you do that!"

    Gwen snarled. "My strategies are flawless! If you had destroyed my Dark Mimic, I would have drawn the card!"

    "Too bad you didn't," said Peter. "And now I'm getting rid of him, by tributing him for this beast!" The Dark Mimic melted into light. "Tell me, are you scared of snakes?"

    "No, why should I?" said Gwen.

    "Then you won't mind if I bring out my snake, Giant Spitting Cobra!" Peter watched as the huge green-scaled cobra rose up and hissed menacincly. (2000/1900)

    "You have a G.S.C.?!?" cried Gwen in shock.

    "True, Siegfried Kaiba loves that card, but it's not that rare, so I managed to get it easily," grinned Peter. "Now Giant Spitting Cobra, attack Gwen directly with acid spittle!"

    The cobra opened its fanged mouth and vomited a large stream of acid that slammed into Gwen, dropping her to 6000.

    "Great..." she mumbled.

    "I know you have nothing in your deck strong enough to handle Giant Spitting Cobra without requiring special conditions," said Peter. "Even your powerful Mythic Dragon requires five dragons to be on the field, and I won't let you summon them!"

    Gwen scowled. He's right. I have to stall until I get a powerful monster on the field. She drew and then played her cards. "I set one monster in defense and put two cards face-down and end my turn."

    Peter draw a card. "I see you can't do anything but defend," smirked Peter. "That's fine with me. Makes defeating you as easy as it did with that Katnappe girl. I summon Skilled Dark Magician in attack mode!" The black-robed sorcerer rose up. (1900/1700) "And I think I'll take out some more life points. Skilled Dark Magician, attack!"

    The sorcerer powered up a dark energy on his staff and fired it at the card, which exploded into smoke. But when it cleared, Gwen's Big Shield Gardna sat there, unharmed. (100/2600)

    "Big mistake, tackling my Big Shield Gardna!" laughed Gwen. "You lost life points instead!"

    Peter's life points dropped to 7300. "Not as much as you did, girl," said Peter. "And as you know, your Big Shield Gardna now has to shift into attack mode because of its effect!" The shield warrior stood up. "And as you know all that pathetic attack he has is erased with my Cobra's deadly glare." The cobra hissed and Big Shield Gardna went to (0/2600)

    "That's what you think!" said Gwen, pressing the duel disk button. A trap card flipped up. "I activate my trap card, Ready for Intercepting! This forces all our monsters to assume defense mode for this turn!" All three monsters crouched.

    "That's only going to save you for one turn, Gwen," growled Peter.

    "My turn then," said Gwen, drawing. "I play three cards face-down, and summon Horus the Black Flare Dragon L4!" The metal-skinned dragon rose up with a cry. (1600/1000) Its attack dropped to 1200. "That ends my turn."

    "You lost it, girl!" laughed Peter as he drew. "I play Pot of Greed, allowing me to draw two cards." He drew his cards as his magician's staff glowed copper. "And now I'm going to end this duel! First I shift my Skilled Dark Magician back into attack mode." The sorcerer stood up again. "And then I sacrifice my Giant Spitting Cobra to summon Great Maju Garzett!" The snake melted into a puddle of dark ichor, and a hideous hairy demon climbed out of the pool. (0/0) Horus' attack returned to 1600.

    "That thing is supposed to scare me?" grinned Gwen. "It's got no attack!"

    "That's true, but if I tribute for it, its effect gives it twice the attack score of the monster I sacrificed!" The demon glowed with a dark aura. (4000/0)

    "Holy..." gasped Gwen in shock.

    "And that's not all, I play the magic card Negative Energy, doubling the attack scores of BOTH my monsters, since they are both dark-element," said Peter, playing the card. Dark electricity crackled around the Skilled Dark Magician and Great Maju Garzett. (3800/1700) (8000/0) The Skilled Dark Magician's staff changed luster to silver. "Just one attack from my Garzett should finish you off! Great Maju Garzett, Slimy Sludge Blast!"

    The monster inhaled and ichor vomited from its mouth.

    "Hold it right there, cowboy," said Gwen, flipping up her trap card. "I'm not about to let you claim this duel easily! Activate trap, Sakuretsu Armor! This trap card automatically destroys an attacking monster!"

    The spiked armor clamped itself on Horus and the sludge blast was deflected. Then the spikes shot out and impaled the demon, destroying it. Peter's life points dropped to 5300.

    "You really shouldn't have powered up your monster so high, Peter dear," grinned Gwen. "Now you suffered big damage!"

    "Hmph," said Peter. "My Skilled Dark Magician will take you out." He made to call out an attack, but paused. I can't risk losing my other monster too, and once I use its power to call out my Dark Magician, I can wipe the floor with her.

    "Well?" asked Gwen.

    "I set one card face-down and end my turn," said Peter as the card appeared before him. "Doesn't matter, because once I play one more magic card, you're finished."

    Gwen then remembered something. That's right! That Skilled Magician has the power to summon Dark Magician by absorbing the essence of three magic cards, and he's already played two! Not like it'll matter anyways. "Well then, it's my turn. And even though this is a risk, I'll play it. I activate Brain Control!" The magic card flipped up. "What?" cried Peter in shock.

    The hideous brain appeared and shot two clawed hands out. "You know how this works, right? It's similar to Change of Heart. I believe Yugi Senior used it a few times." The Skilled Dark Magician was grabbed and slammed into Gwen's side of the field as its staff glowed gold. "But I'm not about to let you sacrifice it to summon Dark Magician, so I'll get rid of it!" She flipped up another trap. "Reveal Altar For Tribute!"

    "Ergh!" said Peter angrily.

    "I see you know what this does, Pete," smirked Gwen. "I select one monster on my side of the field and sacrifice it, gaining life points equal to half of the attack of that monster! So I regain 1900 life points!" The altar appeared and devoured Skilled Dark Magician, raising Gwen's life meter to 7900. "I bet you're upset that you pumped up your magician!"

    "You've barely seen the surface of my deck, Gwen," hissed Peter.

    "Oh yeah, like I'm SOOOO scared!" mocked Gwen. "Horus! Attack directly with Flames of Demise!"

    The dragon belched purple flames that engulfed Peter and dropped his life points to 3700. "Well, two can play at that game," said Peter, flipping up his trap card. "This card wasn't going to hurt you, it was going to help me."

    "A Numious Healer!" said Gwen, watching as the angel floated down and sprinkled Peter with sparkly dust and his life meter rose up to 4700. "So what, you gained back 1000 life points. You're already on the ropes!"

    "Oh, there is a lot more to my deck than you think," said Peter. "My turn now. I'll just set a monster face-down and end my turn." The card appeared.

    "Hmmmm..." said Gwen, rubbing her chin. She shrugged. "Horus, get rid of that thing now!" The dragon blasted the monster with flames and a witch appeared and exploded. "A Witch of the Black Forest!"

    "That's right, and now that you sent her to the graveyard, I get to choose one from my deck with a defense of 1500 or less. And I know who to choose." He removed the card from his deck and shuffled it before replugging it back into his disk.

    "Well, unfortunately for you, my dragon will now become stronger because it destroyed your witch," said Gwen as she swapped cards. "Behold my Horus the Black Flare Dragon L6!" The dragon glowed and evolved into its stronger form. (2300/1700)

    "I'm afraid you won't be able to destroy me that easily," said Peter as he checked over his hand. "Is that all?"

    "Yep," said Gwen. "Let's see what you've got."

    "Fine, I set one monster face-down and end my turn," said Peter.

    "No traps to protect it?" asked Gwen. "You sure seem to put all your faith in one lousy monster!"

    "I'll have you know I've been dueling since I was seven, Gwen!" snapped Peter. "I know if I need traps!"

    "Oh, so why are you here?" demanded Gwen. "Your parents needed to someone to babysit you while they went off to Duelatopia?"

    "I have no parents," said Peter bluntly. "They abandoned me like garbage two years before I started dueling."

    Gwen gasped in shock. "They got rid of you? How sad."

    "Don't pity me, I hate people who pity me because my folks dissed me," growled Peter. "I've learned to live on my own. A kind old man was the only parent figure I ever had." He recalled the memory. "I remember that day as if it were yesterday. My folks pretended to take me on a picnic, but when I took a nap, they ran back home and left me in the desert to die. But my mentor came and saw this, he was a great person, an Indian shaman who saw potential in me. I learned that his people believed in a great warrior who would come to their tribe and bring salvation to the oppressed. I was trained in shamanistic magic and herbal medicine. However, when a foreigner tumbled into the reservation and showed me his deck, I desired to become a great duelist. Surprisingly, my mentor accepted this, saying that if I had faith in my skills, I would be capable of anything."

    "I see," said Gwen. "But that doesn't give you a right to push people around."

    "Hmph, like I need lessons in manners from you," snorted Peter. "Just go."

    "Fine! I attack your face-down monster!" cried Gwen. "Flames of Devastation!" The dragon spewed blue flames at the card, but then a warrior appeared and blocked the flames with his sword. (1400/1200) "What the...?"

    "Oh yeah, that's my Obnoxious Celtic Guardian," chuckled Peter. "It can't be destroyed by monsters with 1900 or greater attack, and your Black Flare Dragon has over 2000 attack points!"

    "Great," mumbled Gwen. "Fine, I end my turn."

    "And I begin mine." Peter drew a card. "First, I play Graceful Charity, which lets me draw three cards and discard two." He drew and discarded the required number of cards. "Next, I'll play a card face-down and sacrifice my Obnoxious Celtic Guardian to summon Dark Magician Girl!" The elf warrior was replaced by the blonde sorceress. "Surprised that I own this?"

    "Huh, not really," said Gwen. "Since you love Dark Magician, I bet you had his apprentice too. You must have spent years gathering all the cards."

    "Yes, I told you I've dueled longer than you have, Gwen," said Peter. "And now to give you another surprise! I play Curtain of the Dark One!" A bony frame with a black curtain appeared. A skeleton was perched on the top.

    "Oh no!" cried Gwen. "By paying half of your life points, you get to summon your Dark Magician without tribute!"

    "That's right," said Peter as his life points droped to 1750. "Behold!" The curtain opened and out stepped the sorcerer. "But that's not all...I activate Monster Reborn to bring back a third spellcaster, one of the cards which I discarded through Graceful Charity!"

    The ankh appeared and Gwen sweated. What could be worse than staring down a monster which can wipe out Horus as he stands right now?

    "I revive...Time Wizard!" The ankh exploded and the clock-faced magician appeared with a ticking noise. (500/400)

    "What?" gasped Gwen. "What are you up to?"

    "Simple," said Peter. "This is a combo I used to take down your friend's Super War-Lion! Time Roulette!" The Time Wizard's staff began to spin. The two watched as the spinner slowly stopped...and hit a skull!

    "Ha, you lose!" said Gwen, thumb down.

    "Not so fast, girl," said Peter, pressing a buttong. "I activate my magic card, Second Coin Toss!" The card flipped up, showing the Avatar of the Pot greedily picking up coins dropped by a nobleman. "I know Time Roulette is way too risky, so I had this card just in case. Now the Roulette will begin again... and my luck doesn't fail TWICE!"

    The spinner whisked around the dial rapidly, and sure enough, it finally stopped on the bottom crown. "Time Magic!" shouted the Time Wizard as he glowed and blurred, sending a wave of blue energy out and twisting reality and the time/space continuum.

    "Your dragon may live long, but unfortunately, not a thousand years!" laughed Peter. "And your Big Shield Gardna can't live that long!" Horus aged rapidly and it looked like he had a L20 evolution. Its attack dropped to 1800. Big Shield Gardna was old and bearded and barely hanging onto his shield, and his attack hit zero again. "But my magicians are capable of living long and prosperous lives...and they've gained much power!"

    The two sorcerers had aged considerably and looked haggard, but then they glowed and exploded into light, revealing an old crone floating on air and wearing beautiful rainbow-colored robes and a wizard with a white beard, wearing regal robes. The crone's stats were at (2500/2000) and the other wizard's stats were (2800/2600).

    "Behold! Dark Sage and Dark Seer!" said Peter.

    "Oh no, that Sage is strong enough to pierce my defenses!" gasped Gwen.

    "Dark Sage, wipe out that geezer barbarian!" shouted Peter. "Dark Sorcery attack!" The sage fired a beam of darkness that tore apart Big Shield Gardna. "And now Dark Seer, annihilate that aged dragon with Dark Magic Blast!" The crone waved her staff and a blast of darkness erupted, shattering Horus. Gwen's life points dropped to 7200.

    This is bad, really bad, thought Gwen.

    "You see, that combo destroyed your friend Kate's Super War-Lion...and I'll show you the monster which defeated her soon." Peter smirked. "Of course, you could always give up right now."

    Gwen scowled. "Not on your life!"

    "Okay then," said Peter. "Oh, by the way, Dark Seer has a special ability when she destroys a monster. She gets to look at the three top cards on your deck - no peeking! - and remove all monsters from play, then I get to rearrange the cards the way I like. So, let's see them!" Gwen drew three cards and showed them to him. "Too bad, your Armed Dragon L5 and Mystic Swordsman L6 are history!"

    Gwen sighed as she slid those cards into the removal slot and put the last card back on her deck. She then drew it and smiled. I'll set two cards face-down and set a monster in defense mode." The cards appeared before her. "Your move."

    "Really, I had expected more from you, Gwen," tutted Peter. "Well then, let's see what you think of this! I sacrifice my Time Wizard..." The clock-faced magician vanished in a shower of light. "To summon Dark Ruler Ha-Des to the field!" A hideous ram-horned fiend wearing regal robes rose up. (2450/1600) "And since I know that monster you have on the field might have an effect, I'll have Ha-Des take care of it. Attack with Tartarus Curse!" The fiend fired a beam of blood-red energy from his crooked finger at the card.

    "No way! Negate Attack!" shouted Gwen. The card flipped up and halted the blast by sucking it into a black hole.

    "You sure are pulling on strings here, Gwen," chuckled Peter. "Very well, I end my turn. Let's see what you can do to save your hide."

    Gwen drew. "All right, since you've got me on the ropes, how about spinning some more yarn with my wool? I play Scapegoat!" The card appeared and revealed four colored goats. "Now you'll have to tear down my defenses before you can do any damage to me, you loser!" She waved her hand to end her turn.

    Peter drew a card. "How pathetic, hiding behind goat tokens. Oh well, I'll just have to rid myself of all of them!"

    "You have a Raigeki?" cried Gwen in horror.

    "No, but I know YOU do," said Peter wickedly. Gwen blushed and hung her head. "Aw, you feeling moral qualms? I strongly suggest stuffing it, because Duel Monsters is a matter of power, not what's right or wrong."

    "Hmph, sounds just like something Seto Kaiba would say," said Gwen, looking up. Just then, a golden-scaled dragon which was a head taller than the cabin towered over her. "What the heck...?!"

    "I just summoned the first monster of your defeat, my friend," said Peter with a sly smile. "CHAOS EMPEROR DRAGON - ENVOY OF THE END!" (3000/2500)

    "But...how did you do that?" asked Gwen.

    "I summoned it by removing one creature of light, my Time Wizard, and one creature of darkness, my Skilled Dark Magician, from play," said Peter. "That's how all Chaos monsters are summoned. And now, prepare to be defeated."

    "You still have to destroy my goats," said Gwen, glad she was hiding behind them. She felt cowardly, but knew that few could have courage in the face of such a monstrosity! Only her Mythic Dragon was scarier!

    "Oh, I don't intend to waste my time with goat tokens," smirked Peter. "I'm activating Chaos Emperor Dragon's effect now!" The dragon roared and the Dark Ruler and his sorcerer allies cringed in horror.

    "What is this power?" asked Gwen, not sure she was going to like the answer.

    "Simple," said Peter. "Chaos Emperor Dragon can absorb the power of all the cards on the field and in our hands and destroy them! And what's more, his blast can inflict 300 points of damage for each card destroy in this manner! That means your goats and face-down monster are toast. Of course, it means destroying my monsters too, but that doesn't matter, because each of them will slam you for 300 points of damage, and all the cards in our hands will damage you as well!"

    "You're...you're insane!" cried Gwen. "You'd sacrifice your OWN monsters to destroy my life points? That's cruel!"

    "If it takes that," said Peter wickedly. "Now Envoy of the End...unleash your mighty Ragnarok Flare!"

    The dragon inhaled and blasted a white light that ripped through everything. It shattered, as did the monsters on the field, and Gwen felt her cards being yanked away from her hand. When it ended, the battlefield was clear, and both her and Peter had no cards in their hands. Her life points dropped to 2700 and her face was covered with sweat.

    "How did you like that?" laughed Peter. "I end my turn. Go ahead and bite me with a monster's jaws, it's a small price to pay for your defeat."

    Gwen was pale. That was brutal! He doesn't even care about his monsters! But now we're back to square one, and I don't have any cards to stop him!

    ~~+~~

    Bethany came in. "Oh hi, Diane!" She ran up and sat by her friend.

    "So, you got here...ableit a little late." Diane giggled. "So, did you get a duel?"

    "Yep, and you won't believe the duelist I faced!" said Bethany with a sly smile. "I dueled Jackie!"

    "No way, the cafeteria lady?" asked Diane in shock. "Well, Machus said that some of the other staff was playing stations like our counselors, but I didn't expect sweet Jackie to be a duelist!"

    "Who did you duel?" asked Bethany.

    "Would you believe the second Duelist of Hogwarts?" laughed Diane. She began to tell of her meeting with Shanna.

    ~~+~~

    The crowd that had formed was whispering and murmuring, and Gwen wondered if they were talking about her demise. She was seriously on the ropes. Her life points had dipped to a low point because of that Chaos Emperor Dragon's effect, and now she had no hand! She slowly drew a card and grinned. "I play Card of Sanctity! This allows us both draw six cards each, now that your dragon destroyed our hands!"

    "Fine," said Peter as the two drew six cards each.

    "And to end my turn, I'll play a monster face-down and end my turn." Gwen watched as the card appeared.

    "Then I'll make my move," said Peter. "And I remove my Mystical Elf and Dark Magician to summon another Chaos Monster, Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning!" A golden-plated warrior with a golden blade appeared. (3000/2500)

    "Yipes," said Gwen.

    "And I'll activate its special effect, allowing me to remove the monster it destroys from play!" said Peter. "Black Luster Soldier, Chaos Blade attack!" The soldier slashed the card and destroyed Silent Swordsman L3 and it was sent to the removal slot. "Go ahead and make your next move, Gwen. It doesn't matter, because soon my mighty soldier will tear your remaining life points to bits and your star pins will be mine!" He laughed wickedly.

    Gwen sweated. She was close to losing the duel and the Black Luster Soldier was staring her down eagerly, ready to tear her a new one. She drew a card and looked at it. "I play my own Pot of Greed!" She drew two cards and cursed. Great, why did I have to draw these cards? Polymerization is useless here - I can't summon Mythic Dragon because my DNA Surgery was banished to the graveyard by that stupid dragon! And this other card...what in the name of the Nine Hells was I thinking putting such a craptastic card in my deck?

    Then she looked over her hand, and it hit her hard why she had put that weak non-effect spellcaster in her deck. That's right! Mythic Dragon isn't the only fusion monster I have! Because of the card I got from Siegfried! She recalled her duel with Katnappe and what she had said to Diane earlier...

    "What did you get?" asked Diane.

    "I can't reveal all my deck right now," smirked Gwen. "Maybe you'll see it if I make the finals."


    I said that because I hope to spring this little surprise on Di if we ever dueled each other in the finals, but I think that this BRAT can see my other fusion for himself... She smirked. I just will relate the duel to Di and alter how I won, saying I summoned my Mythic Dragon or something.

    "What's the matter, Gwen?" taunted Peter. "Losing it now that you're as good as finished? Or are you stalling for time so that what happened to your friend Bethany when she dueled Jake will happen here and we'll end inconclusively?"

    "I'll finish this duel, and I'm not going to lose to the likes of you and your stupid warrior!" laughed Gwen. "I summon Dryad to the field!" The beautiful green-robed maiden rose up onto the field. (1200/1000)

    "Are you nuts?" laughed Peter. "That girl won't save your hide! And now that you summoned a monster, my Black Luster Soldier will destroy it and wipe you out with a direct attack as well due to his other special effect!"

    "Not so," said Gwen. "I play Monster Reborn!" The ankh appeared.

    Peter gasped. She wouldn't dare bring back my Chaos Emperor Dragon!

    "And I'm reviving your..." Gwen paused melodramatically. "DARK MAGICIAN GIRL!" The blonde sorceress re-appeared, with a boost gained from Peter's Dark Magician in the graveyard. (2300/1700)

    "Hmph, I was scared for a moment," sighed Peter. "I thought you were gonna bring back my Chaos Emperor Dragon and activate its effect to wipe my Soldier out, but you ended up bringing back a monster who will only shield your life points."

    "Oh, really?" said Gwen. "Perhaps I should educate you on Duel Monsters mythology. This is my favorite story."

    "Who are you, Mother Goose?" snapped Peter. (A/N: Guess who said THAT line?)

    Gwen envisioned the story as she told it. "Ages ago, in the world of Duel Monsters, twin sisters of blonde hair were born. They were both enticed by the mystic powers of magic, so they went on a quest to find wizards to tutor them. One eventually met up with the legendary Dark Magician and became his apprentice, Dark Magician Girl. The other met a druid and became Dryad, the healer and white mage. But one day, a horrible incident forced both sisters to return and save their home, which was ravaged by dragonfire. Fearing that their attempts would be in vain, somehow they tapped into a power that fused their souls into one mighty magic-user, and they saved their
    home town from destruction and become heroes!"

    "What's the point of this story?" demanded Peter. "It's not gonna save your butt from my mighty Chaos soldier!"

    "I think it will," said Gwen, sliding in her card. "I play Polymerization to fuse Dark Magician Girl and Dryad! The miracle will begin once again!" The two monsters melted into colorful lights.

    "That's impossible, you can't fuse those two!" shouted Peter.

    "I just did," grinned Gwen. "Behold...Sorceress of Conflict!" A beautiful sorceress with a silver gown and witch's hat emerged. In each hand, she held a Grecian drama mask. One was a frowning black mask, and the other was a grinning white mask. (2400/2400)

    "You expect me to believe that monster will destroy mine?" said Peter. "It's only as strong as a Red Eyes Black Dragon!"

    "That's going to change, because I play this magic card...Yin-Yang!" She slapped the card down and it appeared, showing the ancient Chinese circle with a black part and a white part. "This magic card increases the attack power of a dark or light monster equipped with it by 600 points...but my Sorceress gets a real boost!" (3600/2400)

    "What...impossible! You cheated!" shouted Peter.

    "Nope," said Gwen. "While Sorceress of Conflict is a dark spellcaster, she also gains the benefits that affect monsters of light too! So Yin-Yang increased her power by 1200! Now Sorceress, wipe out that Envoy! Conflicting magic!"

    The sorcerss put both masks to her face and beams of blue and red light shot from the eyes, shattering Black Luster Soldier. Peter's life points dropped to 1150.

    "And next, I'll play Tremendous Fire!" cried Gwen, slapping the magic card down. "At the cost of 500 life points, I get to do 1000 life points of damage to you!" A great blaze erupted from the card and burned both duelists. Gwen's life points dropped to 2200 and Peter's dropped to 150. "And that's it. The duel's as good as over."

    "Nonsense, I still have life points left!" said Peter angrily.

    "Wrong, you have none, because now I am activating Sorceress of Conflict's special ability," said Gwen. "You see, her magic is both destructive and healing. She has stored the magic in her masks, which let me either raise my life points by 700... or inflict the same amount to you!"

    Peter paled. "You wouldn't..."

    "Sorceress, end this duel!" shouted Gwen. "MASK OF DARKNESS!" The enchantress raised her black mask.

    "No...NO!" cried Peter in horror as the mask slipped onto the sorceress' face and fired beams of red light. He screamed as his life points dropped to zero and fell to his knees. "I lost."

    The disks shut down. "Now, are you going to apologize to Kate?" demanded Gwen, hovering over him.

    "I didn't realize you were serious," whispered Peter, getting up and brushing himself off. "Okay, you win. I'll find her and make it up to her. Oh, and here are your star pins." He removed his card, removed four pins from it, and gave them to Gwen. "I hope we have a rematch in the finals. Or maybe I might duel your friend, Diane. If she's as good as she was in defeating Terone's cousin, I will have a real challenge on my hands!" He chuckled.

    "Thanks," said Gwen as she walked off, slapping the pins to her card. "At last, I'm in the finals! I can't wait to tell the others..." She then realized something. "Oh shoot! It's already five! What an idiot! They'll kill me!" She ran.

    ~~+~~

    Gwen burst into the cafeteria and panted. "I'm sorry I'm late!" she panted, doubling over in exhaustion.

    "Hey, chill," said Diane. "I was just showing off my duel to Beth."

    "And I was showing the mini-CD of my duel to Diane," grinned Bethany. "Jackie was so nice to record our duel."

    Gwen's head snapped up. "Wait...you dueled JACKIE the CAFETERIA LADY?!" she gasped.

    "Yep, and she got her own badge too," giggled Diane. "Now you're not the only one with a badge. So, did you find a duelist and kick his butt soundly?"

    "Did I EVER?" smirked Gwen, sitting down. She explained the duel with Peter, carefully altering the end of the duel.

    "Wow, what a rude boy!" snorted Bethany. "And Kate's out? That's too bad. I wanted to see her cat deck in the finals."

    "Hmmm, it's okay," said Gwen. "I'm sure Pete will apologize to her later."

    Diane got a suspicious look. She said she used Bronze Knight Legion and Mythic Dragon to win the duel, but something's rather fishy about that play. I wonder if she's hiding something from me.

    "So, I heard you defeated Terone's cousin," grinned Gwen. "You've GOT to show me the duel!"

    "Sure," said Diane as she started up the PDA video player again, brushing off her suspicions for the time being.

    "I'm done with the prelims," said Gwen, showing off her card.

    "Wow, you're already in the finals!" gasped Bethany. "That's great! Me and Diane still need more pins."

    "We'll get them," said Diane as the three watched the duel on the PDA. "I'm sure of it. If Gwen can handle a Super War-Lion, a bunch of Harpies, AND the legendary Envoys, WE can take down any duelist!"

    "Wow, that card is awesome!" said Gwen as she saw Shanna summon Jareth the Goblin King. "I didn't know there was a fifth Pop Icon card on the circuit!"

    "Shanna told me that it had been given to her by an anonymous person," said Diane. "Even she doesn't know who gave it to her. But it was pretty tough. Had it not been for my Darkflare Valkyrie, I'd have lost."

    They then played Bethany's duel. "And I see Beth's gotten better too," said Gwen. "I'd be a little worried if we had to duel each other in the finals."

    "Thanks," said Bethany with a flush in her cheeks. "I was lucky that I got those cards in my hand."

    "It wasn't luck, it was your heart that brought the cards to you," said Diane. "You see, you had faith in your deck."

    "You're right, we don't need any legendary dragons to win," said Bethany. "I feel guilty for using Critias on Jake."

    "It's okay, we'll do fine," said Diane. "We will get those last star pins and enter the finals, all three of us!"

    The three then looked at each other. "You know," said Gwen. "If we all get in the finals..."

    "We'll be enemies," said Bethany somberly.

    "But only for those duels," said Diane. "We'll still remain friends no matter what." She held out her hand and the others grasped it. "We're D..."

    "...G..." said Gwen.

    "B!" cried Bethany. "All for one and one for all! Promise we won't hate each other after the finals!"

    "PROMISE!" cried the others, shaking their hands.

    To be continued...

    NEW CARDS

    Dark Seer
    Type: Dark/Spellcaster/Effect
    Level: 9
    ATK: 2500
    DEF: 2000
    Effect: This card can only be summoned by having a [I]Time Wizard[I]'s effect get called correctly when you have a Dark Magician Girl on the field - you may then sacrifice that card to summon this card. When this card destroys a monster, pick up the top three cards from your hand and remove all monsters from those three from play, then put the remainder of the cards back on the top of the opponent's deck. The opponent cannot look at these cards during that time.

    Sorceress of Conflict
    Type: Dark/Spellcaster/Effect
    Level: 7
    ATK: 24
    DEF: 24
    Fuse: Dark Magician Girl + Dryad
    Effect: This card counts as both DARK and LIGHT and gains the effects of both types. If either of these types is hinderded by a card effect(i.e. Hoshingen), ignore the penalty inflict on that type. Each Main Phase 2, you can either increase your life points by 700 or inflict 700 points of effect damage to the opponent.

    This card is property of Oakbark and was debuted in "Mandate of Heaven."

    Yin-Yang Symbol
    Type: Equipment Magic
    Effect: Any DARK or LIGHT creature equipped with this card gains 600 attack points while equipped.

    NEXT CHAPTER: Gwen has made it to the finals, but her friends are just a few star pins behind! Can they make it or will one of D.G.B. be left out of the finals? Find out in the next chapter...Cross-Union Madness!
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Okay, where to begin?

    I based Jackie on a waitress I knew when I was kid when I lived in urban Connecticut. When I found out you had included her in this fic, I was anxious to see her duel. You handled her upgraded deck pretty well, as did Bethany's response (You made a few mistakes with a couple of cards, which I won't get into now. I'll PM you about them.)

    Pete was indeed a worthy foe, and the creation of the Dark Seer was... well, she made sense. If Dark Magician evolves when exposed to Time Wizard, it makes sense that Dark Magician Girl can do the same. One mistake however that I will get into - When Dark Sage is summoned, the controller gets to chose any Magic Card he desires from his deck (and reshuffle). Dark Sage might be appearing in my fanfic - not telling when.

    Anyway, see you around. Expect the next chapter of my fic soon.

    - Venusaur

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    Yayness, two chapters! Very nice dueling going on here, I didn't even guess from the title that Peter would use the Envoys. How embarassing. XD

    Anyway, looking forward to the nest chapter, update soon! =D

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    Don't worry, I'm working on the next chapter as we speak. There's a guest character from Venusaur's "City of Souls" appearing(nope,it's not who you expect) and we see the Augery again. Lina and Twilight talk with both characters and Lina learns about what's going down in Duelatopia,even before Yugi does! Also,there's a return of a reader character for a couple of scenes,and he cheers on Bethany as she tackles another reader contribution!

    Then,in the chapter after that,Diane gets her own badge,but who is she dueling? Well, it might be a little too obvious,but I won't spoil anything here.

    Also,the Peter Gwen duels isn't connected to Peter Ramset. Loupiteak named him Peter and didn't know about Venusaur's character,and Peter's a common name.

    Oh,and to Venusaur...what makes you think that Peter didn't get a magic card when he summoned Dark Sage? Maybe he just didn't use it.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    *coughIwonderwhatthenewreadercontributioniscough*

    Unless I'm very silly, that chapter title couldn't be ANYTHING else. XD

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    The above poster was responsible for the creation of the duelist in this next chapter. (Luckily I was able to find his character description on one of my floppies, or else I would have been pretty inaccurate.) I hope you like this chapter, opaltiger.

    Oh, and though the duel is pretty short, this chapter fills up the gaps with some discussion between the other characters and a guest anime character shows up! Enjoy!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 21: Cross-Union Madness


    “We don’t even need the Fusion Gate to fuse our two Monsters this time!” said Stalt. X-Head Cannon and Z-Metal Tank, combine!

    The X-Head Cannon lifted itself up and lowered onto the Z-Metal Tank, and the two fused together with a burst of steam. (2400/2100)


    - Yu-Gi-Oh,City of Souls: "Duel At 1,450 Feet" -


    Deep inside another dimension, seperated from Duelist Camp and Duelatopia by walls of time and space, a turbaned Egyptian rose up from the floor of a golden-walled room. He approached the center of the room, which held a cage suited for holding hamsters or other rodents. He knelt down and examined it carefully.

    "As I had feared," he murmured. "She has escaped. I sensed the magic but I had thought it was a fluke. Had I been more careful, I would have been able to act sooner. I must speak with Ishizu's daughter about this. Surely she knows by now."

    And with that, Shadi, the Guardian of the Milennium Items, sank back into the floor of the prison room..

    ~~+~~

    The sun drearily trudged across the sky, over the trees and buildings of Duelist Camp. In Lina's station, a fierce duel was taking place between Jake Forester and Lina Mystara. But it was winding down.

    "I sacrifice my Toon Masked Sorcerer..." said Lina, as the goofy masked gremlin crumbled into light. "To summon my favorite Toon! Toon Dark Magician Girl, come out!" There was a pop and puff of smoke, and out of the book hopped a super-cute version of the legendary sorceress. She let out a giggle and squeal. (2000/1700) "Now my sorceress, attack Jake!"

    The sorceress fired her magic into Jake, who screamed as he was flung back. His life points dropped to 1300.

    "I hate to say it, but you're as good as dead," giggled Lina as her super-deformed self floated down and laughed. "When my Toon sorceress hits you again, you're finished!"

    Jake sighed. She's right! My Solar Flare Dragon lock won't work against Toon Monsters! I have to get creative. He drew a card. "I play Pot of Greed to draw two cards." He drew two cards from his deck and smirked. "This should finish you off." He slapped down a card. "First, I'll summon Ultimate Baseball Kid in attack mode!"

    A young red-clothed baseball player appeared in a puff of smoke. He spat lava on the ground and tapped his bat to the ground, taking a batting stance. (500/1000)

    "What? Are you serious?" grinned Lina. "That thing can't even stand a chance against my Toons!"

    "That is going to change, with this magic card!" said Jake, showing it. It showed a pair of Gagagigos clasping hands. "Bond of Brothers! By playing it, I sacrifice 1000 life points to summon two cards with the same element from my hand or deck." He played the card and his life points dropped to 300. "And I'll summon two fire monsters, Fireyarou and Darkfire Soldier 1!" The two flaming warriors appeared. (1300/1000) (1700/1200)

    "Hmph, big deal, you still can't handle me," said Lina. "None of your monsters are stronger than my Toon."

    "Well, if you knew better, you would know that when Ultimate Baseball Kid hits the field, it gains 1000 attack points for each fire creature on my side of the field, and I have a full field," said Jake as his Kid rose to 4500 attack.

    "Oh no!" said Lina in shock. "My Toon's toast!" Toon Dark Magician Girl squealed in terror.

    "That's right, it's toasted, roasted, and burnt to a crisp!" laughed Jake. "Ultimate Baseball Kid, use Homerun Slammer!"

    The boy summoned a fireball and threw it into the air, then whacked it for a homerun right into Toon Dark Magician Girl, shattering her into a million pieces. Lina's life points dropped to 1800.

    "And now I'll activate my Kid's second effect," said Jake. "Your Toon Cannon Soldier did a dent on my life points by throwing monsters at me. Ultimate Baseball Kid can do the same thing! By sacrificing a fire creature, I can inflict 500 points of damage to you!" Each of the monsters around the Kid turned into fireballs. "That will weaken him a lot, but since you have few life points left, that doesn't matter! Go Kid, send her to the showers!"

    The boy monster leapt behind each fireball and whacked it into Lina's face. After the fourth one, she was covered with soot. Her life points hit zero.

    "I won!" cried Jake, pumping his fist in the air.

    Lina dusted herself off. "Well, you're pretty good, Jake. I didn't expect one of Arn's campers to defeat me. I thought you were a poser too, just like Norus."

    "Heh, that jerk doesn't deserve to duel," laughed Jake, helping her dust off. "So..."

    "Yeah, I know, you earned the Shadow Badge," said Lina, removing a box from a niche and opening it. It revealed a black disk with a wicked face on it. "Put it on your card with pride."

    "Yes, I'm in the finals!" laughed Jake. "I can't wait to show Bethany!"

    "You mean Beth?" asked Lina. "She's in my cabin. She said she only has six more pins to get. I heard she defeated Jackie too, I'm a bit surprised myself." She smirked. "I wouldn't be surprised if she were wandering around and looking for a duel to get into. Why don't you go find her?"

    "Thanks!" said Jake, nodding. "I'll do that right now!" He waved and left.

    "Well, seems I'm losing my touch," laughed Lina. "Already three duelists defeated me and got my badge. Jake, Sonja, and then that girl from the Shining Friendship cabin. SHINING FRIENDSHIP...I can't believe she owns such a powerful deck!" She snickered. "Well, better get ready for my next pponent." She took a broom and swept the floor of the cave.

    ~~+~~

    Bethany sneezed.

    "You okay, Beth?" asked Diane as the girls wandered the campsite.

    "Yeah, I swear something was talking about me, though," said Bethany, sniffling and wiping her nose.

    "Maybe it's Lina," said Gwen. "She was excited to see you get Jackie's badge. I was surprised to hear that too! I mean, come on, Jackie? Since when could she duel?"

    "She did work for Anastasia Pegasus," said Diane. "So I wouldn't be surprised if she had dueled before. I guess she does it rarely, as a hobby. Unlike us girls, who duel professionally!"

    "Yeah right, we're as professional as can get," said Gwen sarcastically. She rolled her eyes. "We're not even close!"

    "Uh huh, we could never defeat Team Supreme," laughed Bethany.

    "Well, we don't really have to worry about dueling them now," said Diane. "All we need to do is get into the finals with Gwen and then we can meet the Fearless Four." She smiled.

    "But who's gonna duel us now?" asked Bethany. "I bet that there aren't very many duelist left."

    "Hey there," said a drawling voice. The three girls turned to see a girl with a black mullet and wearing a rainbow feather boa, a shiny plastic jacket, and two-inch platform shoes. Her pale face was accented by extremely dark eyeliner and shadow. "Did I hear you say were up for a duel?"

    "Not me," said Gwen, flashing her card. "I'm in the finals already. But one of my friends will duel you."

    "Great," said the kid, showing off his card. It had a bat-shaped badge and many star pins. "I'm almost ready for the finals myself. The name's Johnathan Slade, and I'll be glad to duel your pals."

    "Wait...did you say Johnathan?" asked Diane. "That's a boy's name! Did your parents name you wrong or something?"

    "Nope, I'm a boy," grinned John. "I just happen to like wearing dresses."

    "Ewww...a cross-dresser!" gagged Gwen. "Just great! I didn't think they allowed drag queens, or in your case, drag princesses, into the camp."

    "Hey, that's not nice!" said Bethany. "Even if he is weird, he can dress however he wants, isn't that right Di?"

    Diane felt ill, but nodded slowly. "Suuuure..." She turned to Bethany. "Say Beth, why don't you duel him?"

    "Huh?" asked Bethany, but Diane skittered to Gwen's side. "Urrr...okay!" She turned to the transvestite. "How about we duel for six star pins? Whoever wins goes to the finals!"

    "Fine with me, missie," said Johnathan. "Just let me check my makeup." He took out a compact and opened it, pattig his cheeks with some rouge. "There, all ready to go!"

    "Errrr..." said Bethany, starting to feel ill herself because a guy was wearing makeup like a girl. "Okay. Let's duel!" The two shuffled their decks and then activated their disks. With a snap, the two put their decks into their disk and their life points rose to 8000 each.

    "Just be careful, I may be a pretty face," grinned John. "But my deck is ruthless!"

    "Ha, she's beaten Exodia!" laughed Gwen. "She can beat you anyday!"

    ~~+~~

    As Bethany and Johnathan began their duel, Lina was approached by two figures. She looked up. "Eh? Two duelists?"

    "No," said Twilight. "You should know me by now."

    "Oh! Twi!" said Lina. "Who's that with you?"

    The man smiled and spoke in en Egyptian accent. "I thought you would recognize me, considering what Miremei told me of you and Pegasus."

    Lina looked over him, then recalled a painting and a story. "You--you're Shadi, the one who gave Max his Milennium Eye, then you showed him the chamber with the God Card tablets!"

    "Exactly," said Shadi. "I must commend your friend, Bethany, from defeating Obelisk one final time. Few can stand against the might of an Egyptian God Monster. And thanksfully, it is gone forever. But I fear Slifer and Ra will appear soon."

    "We must not talk about these things here, Shadi," said Twilight. "Lina, come with us. I've arranged for us to abandon our stations early to talk to Sibylla about something we talked about yesterday." She narrowed her eyes.

    "Huh? Oh, your dream," said Lina. "Okay. Is it okay if I put on a coat, it's freezing today." She removed her wig and hat.

    ~~+~~

    "Why don't you start first?" said Bethany. "Ladies...first, after all!"

    "Gladly," said John as the two drew their hands. He drew a card. "I'll
    start by playing X-Head Cannon in attack mode!" A purple suit of robotic armor with shoulder cannons appeared. (1800/1500)

    "Uh oh," said Diane in shock. "I know about this card! It's part of two other cards which can create a deadly monster!"

    "I hope that Beth can take it out quickly," said Gwen. "To lose to a cross-dresser...urgh!"

    "And I'll set a card face-down," said John, slapping down a card. It appeared before him. "Your move, dear."

    Bethany sighed and drew a card. "I'll set a monster in defense and a card face-down." The cards appeared before her. "And that will end my turn."

    "Well then, love, this should be a pretty easy win," grinned John as he drew a card. "I'll summon Y-Dragon Head to the field to join its brother!" The metallic red pterodactyl-like robot appeared. (1500/1600) "And then I'll destroy that face-down monster! Use Electric Blast!" The dragon spewed lightning from its mouth.

    "Not so fast!" said Bethany, flipping up her trap card. "Gravity Bind will take care of that attacker!"

    "I was sure that card you had face-down was a trap, dear," said John. "So, here's a counter!" He flipped up his own card. "7 Tools of the Bandit!" The card exploded into light.

    "No!" said Diane in horror.

    "I lose 1000 life points," said John as his life points dropped to 7000. "But I get to disarm your trap card!" The Gravity Bind card exploded and left Bethany shaken.

    "Oh no," said Bethany.

    "This is not good," said Gwen. "She's wide open to attack!"

    ~~+~~

    The Augery greeted the three as they appeared in a disk of light. Greetings, Shadi, Guardian of the Items.

    "Greetings to you, oh great Phoenix," said Shadi, bowing. "I am honored to meet you. We have much to talk about."

    Yes, we do. The bird preened its glowing blue feathers.

    Lina was amazed to see the thing again. She hoped that Sibylla hadn't spooked the girls too much with his appearanace two days ago. "So, what's this all about? Some silly dream that makes no sense?"

    Twilight's vision through the Milennium Necklace was no mere dream, said Sibylla. When she receives a vision from the Necklace, it is an omen of the future.

    "What bothers me is Lady Circe's return," said Shadi. "Sadly, she has escaped."

    "What? You mean she broke out?" asked Lina in shock. She paused. "Well, she probably wriggled out of her cage. She won't get very far as a black rat."

    "Had it been a rat's escape, I would not be concerned," said Shadi. "But I felt a wave of dark magic a couple of nights ago. I did a cursory scan of the prison where I held all the Rare Hunters, but there was no breach. The magical wards were all in effect. I admit I let my guard down, thinking I was overworking my job as warden for the Rare Hunters I had locked up until their redemption, but recently, I sensed a familiar dark magic...that of an ancient spell that should have been forgotten."

    "The Seal of Orichalcos," sighed Lina, who explained what happened. Twilight filled in some details and Sibylla added a couple of things like his warning to the campers.

    ~~+~~

    "Sorry, love, but your monster is toast," said Johnathan. "Where was I? Oh yes...attack with Electric Blast!"

    Y-Dragon Head fired its beam of electric death and shattered the card, which revealed itself.

    "Agh! A frickin' Cyber Jar!" cried Johnathan, clutching his hair.

    "That's right!" said Bethany with a sly grin as the metallic pod sucked up both robots and exploded. "You know the rules."

    The two duelists drew five cards and put down all their monsters. Johnathan was blessed as two yellow four-legged robots with one "eye" alongside two X-Head Cannons and another Y-Dragon Head appeared.

    "A Z-Metal Tank pair!" gasped Diane. "This is really bad! He's now got all the monsters he needs for his combo!"

    Bethany slapped down her cards and a Petit Dragon joined Hurricail, Mokey Mokey, and Emissary of the Oasis. "You're one up ahead of me, Johnny."

    "True, and I really hate to have to wipe your life points out by taking down all those wimpy monsters," sighed John.

    Petit Dragon snarled and hissed. "My monsters may seem weak outside," said Bethany. "But they are a team that works together to make you mincemeat. And if you even try destroying them, you can't touch my life points because of Emissary of the Oasis over here." The blue-skinned spirit winked seductively. "And don't bother trying to take her out, the others will protect her from your army of battle-bots."

    Johnathan chuckled. "You sure seem confident, dearie. But let me give you a secret - my monsters are skilled team workers too. In fact, they have a special power. You ever watch Transformers?"

    Bethany shrugged. "A few times, when I was bored."

    "Well, those transforming robots aren't just cartoons in this game," said Johnathan. "You see, my robots can transform too! You'll see the process in just a while, unless you have something to do."

    Bethany shook her head. "I place a card face-down and end my turn."

    Johnathan drew a card and smirked. "Well then, it's about time I show you my robots' power," he grinned, sliding three monsters out and into the removal slot. "I fuse together one of my X-Head Cannons with my Y-Dragon Head and one of my Z-Metal Tanks and remove all three monsters from the game!"

    "I knew it!" cried Diane.

    The three robots clanked and whirred as they fused together into a giant tank with the dragon head, the cannon's lasers, and the tank's treads. (2800/2200)
    "I present XYZ Dragon Cannon!" said Johnathan.

    "Yikes," gasped Bethany, paling.

    "And what's more, it has a special power," said John, taking a card from his hand and tossing it into the discard slot. "By discarding one card from my hand, I can obliterate one of your monsters, magic or trap cards on the field! And I'll destroy your Emissary! Go, XYZ Dragon Cannon! Annihilation Phaser!"

    The spirit screamed as the tank fired twin blasts from its turrets, shattering her to bits. Bethany's life points hit 7850.

    "And that doesn't count as an attack," said John. "So...obliterate her dragon with Vaporization Beam!"

    The tank turned its sights on the squealing drake and zapped it. Its destruction dropped Bethany's life points to 5250.

    "And Z-Metal Tank, use Retina Rez to disintegrate that whirlwind!" ordered John. The tank fired a beam from its "eye" and dissipated the Hurricail. Bethany's life meter dropped to 4650.

    Now what do I do? thought Bethany in despair.

    ~~+~~

    "So, the Seal has returned," whispered Shadi fearfully. "Then it is out of my hands. Whoever owns that magic obviously has the power to spirit away one of my prisoners, and also has the power to remove Yugi's penalty game if he so desires. This sorcerer, Pisaro, is very dangerous and something tells me that he is more dangerous than the evil in Duelatopia."

    "You think there is evil in Duelatopia?" asked Lina in shock.

    "It was my vision that warned Shadi," whispered Twilight. "I did not notice it until I had a vision the night before you were attacked on the plane here. I didn't tell anyone for fear of being mocked. I then saw the demon in my dream over the island, eagerly licking his lips, and a silver disk under the waves."

    "I decided to examine this thing myself, using my Milennium Key," said Shadi, showing the glowing golden key. "This is another Milennium Item, allowing me to become invisible and alter the perceptions of all who see me. I can also enter people's minds and alter them. I have been altering the minds of the Rare Hunters to erase the evil from their minds, but I have left the Dark Four and Skackle alone because Yugi inflicted the Penalty Game."

    "Wow, that's amazing, you can actually reform a person to good?" asked Lina.

    "It doesn't work like that," stated Shadi. "But in a way, yes. To continue, I went to the island and hide under my Key's power, and then I saw them - the robed ones. They were like the old Rare Hunters under Marik, only much more evil and inhuman. After a bit of investigation, I knew something was up, so I went to the ancient libraries and researched legends, and learned about the legend of a fallen angel who was defeated by my Key, Miremei's Necklace, and four more of the Items."

    "This vision I had about the demon, Saurius," said Twilight. "I saw it with my own eyes. It was a vision of Battle City, thirty-five years ago! I saw my mother dueling the demon, and in the end, he was defeated by my mother's Exchange of Spirits card. Saurius never knew what hit him."

    "So...Saurius is this guy's name," said Lina in concern. "Is he THAT dangerous?"

    As powerful as Pisaro in magic, and as greedy, stated Sibylla. I have existed before humanity and saw with my own eyes the destruction he wrought that made him fall from the Blessed Realm. However, the owner of the Milennium Ring put a curse on him - if he is defeated by all seven Milennium Items, his soul will shatter into a million pieces and he will be no more than dust.

    "So, Ishizu and this other guy defeated him while holding the Necklace and Ring," said Lina. "Speaking of the Ring, I think my foster dad mentioned some guy called Bakura who owned the Ring..." She shrugged. "Any other defeats?"

    "I cannot say who defeated him with the Milennium Key, Scales, Rod, or Eye," said Shadi. "But he was defeated by the owners of those items too. Every aeon, he came to seek out the Mandate of Heaven, and every time he was defeated. Now, only the Milennium Puzzle owner remains to defeat him before the curse takes full effect."

    Lina gasped. "That means...Yugi's got to fight him!"

    "Exactly," said Twilight. "And I know the outcome of that duel...but it will never be if we do not stop Lady Circe and Pisaro, for they plan to ambush Yugi and kill him before then."

    ~~+~~

    Bethany looked up at the huge robot tank gunning her down and felt smaller than her monsters. Only Mokey Mokey remained on the field, and it would so be toasted. She had no idea what to do.

    "I hate to say it, but she's not going to win this one," whispered Gwen.

    Diane felt the same way. How can our friend defeat a monster which can annihilate any lock-down with its effect?

    Bethany drew a card and looked at it, then flipped it over. "I play Pot of Greed." She discarded the card and drew two more, then looked over her options carefully.

    "I hate to say it, dear, but the finals are as good as mine," grinned Johnathan. "I've never lost a duel thanks to this baby, and I've even defeated the Vampire Lord counselor. He was a tough one, but once I got this girl out, my opponent was begging for mercy when I finished with him." He chuckled.

    "If you think I'm going to beg for mercy too, you're dead wrong," scowled Bethany. "Even though I won't question your weird nature and the cross-dressing you do, I'm not going to hold back!"

    "What can you do, love?" said John. "You're no match for my cannon."

    "We'll see," said Bethany. "I play Polymerization to fuse my Mokey Mokey with the two Mokey Mokeys in my hand to form Mokey Mokey King!" The little tofu pixie vanished and the giant tofu fairy appeared. (300/200)

    "I see where this is going," said Diane, recalling Bethany's last duel.

    "That bugger isn't even any better than its friends," sighed John.

    "That's what you think?" grinned Bethany. "Mokey Mokey King, attack head-on!" The fairy shot forward.

    "What's she DOING?" cried Gwen in horror. Diane smirked.

    With a sigh, John waved his hand. "Counterattack, XYZ Dragon Cannon." The tank blew it away and Bethany's life points dropped down to 2150.

    "Are you OUT OF YOUR FREAKING MIND,BETH?!?!" cried Gwen in shock. "You just lost a ton of life points!"

    "It was worth it, because now I can activate Mokey Mokey King's effect!" said Bethany. Three Mokey Mokey appeared.

    "Huh?" asked John and Gwen together.

    "When Mokey Mokey King gets destroyed in battle," said Diane. "It can summon the component Mokey Mokeys to the field!"

    "Well, that's nice and all, but you haven't done anything but waste your life points for nothing," said John. "My Cannon will blow one of them away and take out your remaining life points."

    "I'm not through yet," said Bethany. "I play Monster Reborn on Petit Dragon!" The little dragon reappeared.

    "You're not really helping youself, ya know," said John.

    "And then I summon..." She paused and looked at her card. She shivered.

    "Come on," said John. "We haven't got all day!"

    "What's wrong?" asked Diane.

    Bethany swallowed and slapped the card down. "I SUMMON KOZAKY IN ATTACK MODE!" she screamed.

    The card spewed a monster forth, which cackled wickedly. It was a mad scientist with long claws and fangs, wild black hair sprouting all over his head. He turned to the girls and flashing a wicked grin, his glasses gleaming menacingly. (400/400)

    "It looks like a cross between Mr. Hyde and Dr. Tomoe!" gasped Gwen.

    Diane felt a chill down her spine. No wonder Beth was scared to summon it. If I had that card, I'd have nightmares!

    "Typical girls," laughed Johnathan. "Scared stiff of a mad scientist!"

    "Tough talk for someone who dresses like Madonna, and I DON'T mean the Virgin Mary!" hissed Gwen.

    "Sticks and stones, love, sticks and stones," said Johnathan. "Finish your move, Bethany. I want to hurry to the finals."

    "Fine," said Bethany, slapping down a magic card. "I play Law of the Normal!"

    "What?" cried John. "What the flying fig does THAT do?" He didn't see Diane giggling in her hand.

    "It's your demise, pretty boy," said Bethany. "This card can only be activated when my field is filled with two-star non-effect monsters. When activated, all monsters stronger than those monsters are DESTROYED."

    John backed up. "No!"

    "That's right, your robots are scrap!" said Diane, recalling Bethany using that same tactic on Jackie.

    The five monsters focused their energy and formed a star pattern which flung bolts of lightning that shattered XYZ Dragon Cannon and the Z-Metal Tank with it. Johnathan's life points dropped to 5925.

    "And now I equip this magic card to Kozaky, Sword of the Soul Eater!" A black-bladed sword with a blood-red gem appeared in the mad scientist's hands. "This card can only be equipped to a three-star or weaker monster, but it has a powerful effect. I can sacrifice all the other monsters on my field to power up my Kozaky by 1000 attack points per monster tributed, and I'm tributing all four of my remaining monsters!" The drake and Mokey Mokeys turned into light and were sucked into the bloodstone on the sword's hilt. Kozaky cackled as his attack rose to 4400.

    "Oh no!" cried John in horror.

    "Kozaky, attack Boy George with Soul Slash!" shouted Bethany. The fiendish man lunged and sliced a hole into John's chest - not literally, as John was fine, but he was flung mercilessly to the ground as his life meter dropped all the way down to 1525.

    "All right!" said Diane, high-fiving Gwen. "She's gonna win this one!"

    "Yeah, she's going to the finals!" laughed Gwen.

    Bethany paused. I know better. I still have several life points to chop through. She then smirked. "Give up?"

    Johnathan got up slowly and dusted himself off. "Well, dear, that was a lovely strategy. I never thought your wimps had such gumption. Now I have a powerful wimp to deal with."

    "Not actually, because once my turn ends, Kozaky dies because of Sword of the Soul Eater's drawback. But don't think I'll be defenseless...reveal my trap card!" She flipped up her trap, showing a bunch of Mokey Mokey in a crowd. "Human Wave-Tactics!"

    "What?" asked Johnathan.

    "This trap card revives all the monsters I lost during this turn." Petit Dragon and the three Mokey Mokey reappeared in a flash of light. "So even when my fiend dies, I'll still have monsters on the field!" She waved her hand and the sword shattered, making Kozaky scream as he was devoured by a blob of shadow and vanished.

    "I hate to break it to you, darling," laughed Johnathan. "But they are still wimps, no matter how hard you look at 'em."

    Bethany smirked. That's what he thinks! If I get my hands on Thousand Energy or Pyramid Power, I can pump up these 'wimps' to wipe his drag princess butt all over the ground! Then I'll get into the finals!

    Johnathan drew his next card.

    ~~+~~

    The conversation between the characters in Sibylla's clearing continued.

    "But even so, the Oath the Heir made prevents Circe from harming Yugi," said Shadi. "And the Milennium Scepter made it impossible for anyone connected to Pegasus to harm Yugi."

    That will not stop either Circe or Pisaro, said Sibylla. I sense Pisaro's magic from here. It is very evil and dark. His hatred for human beings has come with him across the worlds and he will not stop until Yugi is dead and his 'lover' is avenged.

    Lina curled her lip in disgust. "Great..." She then asked a question. "Say, if old Pisaro is capable of yanking people out of your jail, why didn't he yank ALL the Dark Four out and overwhelm Yugi with them?"

    From what I know, stated Sibylla. He is not stupid. He knows that using spells to rescue all the Dark Four would drain him, and he wouldn't able to grant all their powers back. He also knows that Shadi would have been alarmed and contacted Yugi with a warning, ruining his plans. I suggest we play his little game a bit longer, and move when he strikes. I believe that time will come soon. The more assurance we give him, the easier it will be to ambush him when he isn't looking. In the meantime, I will keep watch over the campgrounds in case something is up.

    "It doesn't matter how many he brings back," stated Shadi. "From what I know, Yugi and Remi made an oath. When Yugi won, the oath took effect - none of the Dark Four can harm Yugi, Jade, Kaiba, or Yugi's friends as long as they live due to that oath."

    "Circe will not be stopped, she is forming a plan to bring that other woman into her fold and use her as a weapon," whispered Twilight fearfully. "We must stop her before it is too late."

    I do not think Circe will strike Yugi now, when the tournament on that island is in full swing, said the Augery.

    "The bird's right, Twi," said Lina, getting a glare from Sibylla. "She's probably going to wait a bit, maybe until after the finals, when everyone's guard is down, before lashing out. Relax, after our finals, we'll keep our eye on Yugi."

    "I hope you are right," muttered Twilight somberly.

    Shadi nodded. "We can only wait and hope that we won't be too late when
    she makes her move against Yugi."

    "Well, I'll keep watch over my campers," said Lina. "The finals are approaching. I believe that whoever this Pisaro creep is, he won't make a move until after the tournament is over. Except for that Balzack, it's been quiet."

    Balzack was not acting under Pisaro's orders, he was acting on his own free will, stated Sibylla. I am sure that Pisaro had not intended for him to duel you. Pisaro is laying low until the time is right. If you are right, he will only strike when this tournament's finals are over. Those who are in the finals may be the most vunerable.

    Lina paled. "Gwen's in the finals...and so is Jake! He just got into the finals after getting my badge!"

    "Then you had better keep a close eye on those two," said Twilight softly. "I fear they are in grave danger."

    "Right," said Lina with a sigh.

    I must go and start my sweep of the camp for anything unusual, said the Augery, opening his wings. Shadi, if anything comes up about Circe, we will let you know. He let out a cry and shot into the air in a blue blaze of light. The clearing grew dimmer with his passing.

    "I must return to the prison myself to keep watch, in case Pisaro tries to rescue any more of the prisoners," said Shadi. He bowed. "I wish you all good fortune and may we all live to see the next full moon." With that, he sank into the ground in a disc of light.

    "Nice exit," muttered Lina. "Well, Twi, let's hope for the best. I sure hope Beth and Diane don't enter the finals, but..."

    "Their fate has been decided," said Twilight sadly. "Bless them and hope that their hearts remain strong." She left.

    "Hoo boy..." sighed Lina, sweatdropping. "Anne, you stupid girl, you've sure got me in a web of danger and mystery!"

    ~~+~~

    Johnathan smirked. "I'll play Monster Reborn to bring back the beast I discarded to use XYZ Dragon Cannon's effect, Metallizing Parasite Lunatite!" A creature that looked like a silver slug emerged. (1000/500)

    "What's he up to?" asked Gwen. "That guy won't do much damage if it destroys Beth's monsters."

    Diane frowned. Sis warned me about this monster, about a powerful effect it has if it merges with a monster...

    "And then I'll summon my third X-Head Cannon," said Johnathan, and the purple armored robot appeared once more. "And equip Lunatite to it! Union Merge!" The silvery slug leapt onto X-Head Cannon and coated it with a silver sheen of metal coating.

    "Nothing...happened," said Bethany.

    Diane then recalled what the Lunatite did and shouted at Bethany. "Beth! Don't waste your magic cards on it! When Metallizing Parasite Lunatite merges with a monster, magic cards can't affect it!"

    "She's right, love," said Johnathan.

    Bethany sighed and looked at her hand. And I had Creature Swap in my hand! Now I can't switch our monsters!

    "It doesn't matter now, because I'll take this duel by storm!" said Johnathan. "X-Head Cannon, make that dragon extinct!"

    The robot powered up its lasers and blasted the dragon out of existence, dropping Bethany's life points to 950.

    "She'd better pull something out of her butt fast, or she's done for!" whispered Gwen.

    Diane nodded solemnly. Once again, her friend was in danger of losing the duel, and with the prelims so close to ending, Bethany would have a hard time recovering if she lost this duel.

    Bethany closed her eyes. I should have called for Critias... She then shook her head. No. Diane's right. Using that dragon is just asking for trouble! I should only use Critias if I need to. Right now, I know I can win this duel. If only my deck can show me the way... She drew the card and opened her eyes before it. Her lips pursed.

    "Well, are you gonna give up or are you gonna just waste our time?" asked Johnathan. "I ain't got all day, love."

    Bethany smirked. "I intend to end this duel. Now." She slapped the card she had drawn down. "I sacrifice all three of my Mokey Mokey to summon my strongest monster!"

    "WHAT?!" cried Diane and Gwen in shock, surprised that she had a monster that required a tribute.

    "You're sacrificing THREE monsters?" gasped Johnathan in shock. "But only the God Cards..."

    "Sorry, but there are two more monsters which you can sacrifice three monsters to summon," said Bethany. "Of course, they are only eight-star monsters, but by sacrificing a third, you can activate their special effects."

    The three fairies vanished into light and a storm cloud formed overhead. Thunder crashed and lightning flashed.

    "I summon...GILFORD THE LIGHTNING!" cried Bethany as a bolt of lightning slammed into the ground. A golden-armored warrior with a red mask appeared and let out a battle cry! (2800/2600)

    "She has GOT to tell us where she got that monster!" whispered Gwen.

    "Yeah, she never used it in her last duel, and I haven't seen her use it before then either," said Diane under her breath.

    "Big deal, it's 1000 points stronger than my Cannon," said Johnathan meekly.

    "Oh, but there's more," said Bethany as Gilford unsheathed his sword. "Your Lunatite may protect your monster from magic cards, but it won't save it from monster effects, and when I sacrificed my three Mokey Mokey for Gilford, I activated his effect...DESTROYING ALL YOUR MONSTERS IN ONE BLOW!"

    "No..." said John, wide-eyed in horror.

    "Show this cross-dresser what you've got, Gilford!" commaned Bethany.

    The warrior raised his sword and a bolt of lightning struck it. The lightning shot out and annihilated X-Head Cannon. Johnathan's life points dropped to 1075.

    "And now to end this duel once and for all!" said Bethany. "Gilford...DIRECT ATTACK!" The warrior shot forward and lanced John in the gut, dropping his life points to zero.

    "YEAAAAAAAH!!!" cried her friends, dancing a victory jig. "She won!"

    The disks deactivated. "Well, that was an...interesting match, Bethany," said Johnathan with a sigh. "I was surprised at that trump you pulled. But a deal is a deal. Here are your star pins." He removed the six star pins from his card and handed them to Bethany. "You've earned them."

    "Thank you. You are a bit weird-looking, but you are a nice girl...I mean, guy," said Bethany, blushing. She turned to the others and stabbed the pins onto her card. "What do you think?"

    "You're in the finals now, like me," said Gwen, hugging Bethany tightly. "Now all we need is for Di to get five more pins and D.G.B. is all going to the finals!"

    Diane laughed a bit sheepishly. "I've got all day and until noon tomorrow, so don't sweat it."

    "Well, I'm off," said Johnathan. "I've got duels to attend, try to get back up to speed and hopefully into the finals."

    "You know," said Gwen. "Despite what I said about you before, Johnny boy, you're pretty good as a duelist. That XYZ combo is something not to be sneezed at. I hope you get in the finals, even if you...er...dress strange."

    "Thanks love, I'll remember that compliment," winked Johnathan. He checked his compact. "Oh dear, my makeup's running! Better get back to the pad and get it fixed. A nice shower might be nice." He waved. "Ciao!" He left.

    "Well, that's an interesting duelist," giggled Diane. "But personally, I hope that he doesn't wear that dress to the finals. He'll stick out like a sore thumb." The others joined in her laughter.

    To be continued...

    NEW CARDS

    Bond of Brothers
    Type: Magic Card
    Effect: Select one monster on the field, and pay 1000 life points. You may special summon two monsters from your deck that have the same attribute as the monster selected.

    Note: This card is used in the anime, in the Memory Arc. All credit goes to the writers for that card.

    With her friends in the finals, Diane's still got a long way to go. But when she gets slighted, she risks a big chance on the duel of her life. Can she win her own badge and maybe a chance at the finals, or will she lose and be doomed to rush for more star pins in time? Find out when Diane faces the...Battle of The Badge!
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Well, that was... intersesting.

    I never expected a drag queen to show up in this tournament, but the XYZ Machines are always interesting Monsters to use.

    So Bethany has a Gilford the Lightning? That card is rare even in Japan! Wonder why she even put it in her deck? He can't function in a Gravity Bind.

    But what truly made the chapter for me was the subplot with Shadi. I suppose it is to be expected - Pisaro probably knew that Shadi would notice and contact help. I liked the references to my fic, and they will work well with what I have planned.

    Beth is in the finals, now only Diane needs to qualify...

    Dueling a councelor would probably do the trick...

    Oh, and it was nice to see that Jake was able to defeat Lina.

    - Venusaur

    EDIT: A word of advice, since Jake is in the finals - Unlike what Jake implied, Ultimate Baseball Kid gains power from all Fire Monsters on BOTH sides of the Field, your opponent's included (except himself). He's kind of like Goblin King. A useful combo using him is to use DNA Transplant to turn all Monsters summoned into Fire Monsters.

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    *dies laughing*

    You pulled it of better than I expected. For any random people interested, I got the name from a character in a movie, Brian Slade, and the actor who plays him - Jonathan Rhys Meyers (Yay!). Also loosely based on Brian Molko (Double yay!).

    Anyway, nice duel! I love the XYZ monsters, they're so useful. XD

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    Okay everyone, here's the next chapter. I must give you a bit of a disclaimer, though. Norus does and thinks some VERY bad things about Diane! If you are under thirteen, you may want to get parental supervision for this. It's PG-13, but I try not to go too far in Norus' evil here. Oh,and if anyone has complaints about it, please PM me privately and say what is on your mind.

    It's also a big chapter, so it's in two parts again, unlike the last two chapters.
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    WARNING: Rated PG-13 for implied sexual content and profanity.

    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 22: Battle For The Badge


    The young cowboy whipped out his six-shooters and pointed them at Peter. "Okay, varmit,” he said, “freeze and put your hands in the air!”

    Peter gave him a look and got up as a few onlookers watched.

    “Um, excuse me, pal,” he said. “Technically, it is impossible for me to both ‘freeze’ and put my hands in the air. ‘Freezing’ implies a lack of movement, whereas putting my hands in the air would in fact create movement, and furthermore…”

    He paused as the onlookers started to chuckle.

    “…if you don’t put those things away right NOW, I’ll scream for a Centurion. Who do you think you are, anyway?”


    * Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.,Mandate of Heaven - "Arsenal Summoner"


    Norus smirked as he watched his latest victim run off in tears. He cackled as he planted the star pins on his camp card. "Just three more pins to go. Maybe I'll challenge that lab assistant who was running about with the clipboards on our first day. I hear his Science Badge is only three pins and it's easy to win off of him."

    He then noticed three familiar figures approaching and grinned. "But first, I think I'll have a bit of fun..."

    ~~+~~

    Diane felt a chill in the air, and she knew it wasn't just the climate. Something bad was stalking her.

    "Say, Diane," said Gwen. "Now that me and Beth have all the pin values needed to enter the finals, what about you?"

    "Yeah, who are you gonna challenge next?" asked Bethany. "We don't need to challenge anyone anymore, but you do. You still are five star pins short of getting into the finals."

    "Well, I'm thinking about it," mumbled Diane. "I could try to challenge Lina...or maybe Jackie or some other counselor. I'd like a nice shiny badge to grace my card like yours."

    "They're pretty tough," said Gwen. "But if you want, you could try for the Magic Badge that Twilight has. I heard it's five star pins, and I bet you could whip her easily. You know about her true deck now, thanks to the Gemini Sisters!"

    "Yeah, and I don't want to do that," mumbled Diane. "I want a challenge worthy of the sister of the Black Widow. Besides, I bet that Twilight could be too challenging. She didn't show me all of her deck and those Gravekeepers have interesting secrets about them. I might get wasted and then fall way behind."

    "Well, who should you challenge?" asked Bethany, curious.

    "I've got all of today and five hours tomorrow to decide," grinned Diane, waving her hand. "It's not a big deal."

    "Well well well," said a snide voice. The girls turned to see Norus stride up. "If it ain't the Three-male Stooges!"

    "Norus..." growled Gwen.

    "What do you want?" whined Bethany in pain.

    "Heh, still a crybaby as much as ever," chuckled Norus, getting Bethany ticked off. He turned to Diane. "Well, how are you doing, rival? You still high and mighty after kicking my rear end weeks ago?"

    "Stuff it, Norus, I'm not playing your mind games," hissed Diane through clenched teeth. "I could kick your butt again at any day of the week. You wanna duel me right here, right now?"

    "I could snuff you out any old day," laughed Norus. "Why should I waste my time with you? You're not even going to get to the finals, unlike me." He showed off his card. "I'm almost there. I just need to find some sucker staff member to take down to get their badge, and I'm in."

    "Read it and weep, loser!" said Diane, showing off her card.

    "Oh yeah...but wait! You have two less star pins than me!" said Norus.

    "So? I can get them all in two hours!" shouted Diane, losing her cool.

    "Oh yeah, just like how you kicked the butts of a Hermione Granger fangirl and some loser from Brandon's cabin," said Norus with a low chuckle.

    "You take back those things, you monster!" shrieked Diane. "Shanna and Donnie were good duelists! I wouldn't be surprised to see them in the finals!"

    "Oh truly, I shudder before your lies and cheating deck!" mocked Norus.

    "You take that back too!" said Diane. "My deck is completely fair!"

    Norus then had a wicked idea. "You wanna make a wager on that?" he said.

    "I don't like the sound of that," hissed Gwen.

    "You stay out of this!" snapped Norus. He turned to Diane. "You wanna prove you're hot stuff? I bet you can't take down my counselor, Arnold. He's even tougher in Duel Monsters than I am. I should know, he helped my deck!"

    "Yeah, old Arnold Snobbonator," growled Gwen, recalling how Arnold and Lina had wagered a pizza party on the duel between Norus and her friend. "If I recall, he's still sore about losing that bet over a month ago."

    "Well, he's cooled down now," grinned Norus. "But Arnold's still one tough cookie. If you got what it takes, go face him. And we'll make it interesting. I'll be watching you from the shadows - if you win, I'll promise never to bother you ever again and make a public apology to Shanna and Donald. But if you lose..." His eyes flashed. "Diane has to be my girlfriend for the finals!"

    Diane paled. "You cad!"

    "Oh, scared already?" said Norus. "I was sure you wouldn't back down, being a headstrong donkey, but I guess you're nothing more than a cowardly little girl like your little pal Bethany..."

    Diane turned red in the face and steam erupted from her ears.

    "Well, I'll see you around...not!" cried Norus, cackling as he walked off. He then hid behind a tree and watched.

    "Don't let that jerk get to you, Di," said Bethany. "He's egging you on. I hate how he called me a coward, but..."

    Diane turned to her. "You still have that map from Jake?"

    "You wouldn't dare!" cried Bethany in horror.

    "Give me the map," growled Diane coldly.

    "Diane, please...don't do this," said Gwen. "You're losing it. That idiot Norus WANTS you to go and get your ass kicked!"

    "Give. Me. The. Map." Diane advanced towards Bethany, who squealed and ran off. The girls raced after her.

    Norus chuckled as he watched from some bushes. "I can't wait to see this...she'll lose for sure, because Arnold's the best duelist in the camp and Diane will make a ton of mistakes out of rage!" He followed the girls.

    ~~+~~

    Elsewhere, on the lake bordering the camp, a duel was winding down. A woman dressed in a toga and wearing a halo on her head fingered the bow on her back as she waited for Donald Krump to make his move. "Come on, already!" cried Jessica, the counselor of the Shining Friendship cabin. "Like, you've been pausing for so long! Are you going to forfeit or are you, like, gonna make your move?"

    The situation wasn't good for Donald. He had no monsters on the field and 600 life points left, while his opponent had a Wingweaver with Silver Bow and Arrow on the field and a Mudora with 2300 attack and had 4000 life points left.

    "Geez!" said Donald as he drew his card. He smirked. "I set a monster in defense." The cards appeared on the boat where the two were dueling.

    "Bad mistake," said Jessica. "Mudora, destroy that monster!" The fairy warrior lunged and sliced through the card, and a penguin in armor appeared.

    "You're the one who made the mistake, Jessica," said Donald. "I had a 99% assumption that you'd attack if I set a monster, so I set one which would harm you the most...Penguin Soldier!"

    "No, now you can, like, send two monsters back to the owner's hand!" cried Jessica in shock.

    "That's right, and the only monsters are yours," said Donald as Jessica's fairies vanished. "Now it's my turn. I play Monster Reborn to bring back Pengo the Emperor Penguin!" The giant regal penguin rose up. (2700/3300) "And then I'll summon Nightmare Penguin to the field!" The tuxedoed penguin appeared. "And not only does Pengo gain 200 attack points, but my Nightmare Penguin gets 200 attack points as well and an extra 500 attack points from Pengo!" (2900/3300) (1600/1800)

    "Oh no..." said Jessica in horror.

    "Now my penguin pretties, attack Jessica!" cried Donald. The royal penguin smacked Jessica on her buttocks with his mallet and...well, you can guess the icy fate that awaited her when Nightmare Penguin attacked. Her life points hit zero and the duel disks deactivated, as was typical at the end of a duel.

    "Like, that was a total bummer!" moaned Jessica, getting up and rubbing her backside. "Well, you totally ruined me, so I guess you earn this Pixie Badge." She went downstairs and came back up, handing him a bronze badge shaped like a moth.

    "Awesome! That gets me into the finals!" said Donald, putting the badge over his collection of ten star pins. "I can't wait to tell Diane." He blushed.

    "Whatever," said Jessica, shrugging. "Let me, like, take you back to the shore." She went downstairs again and the boat turned around and headed for the dock.

    Donald went to the railing. I can't wait to tell Diane the good news! I wonder where she is right now?

    ~~+~~

    After a scuffle with Bethany, Diane finally got her mitts on her friend's map and followed it to the site of Arnold's station. When she arrived, she was greeted with an amazing site.

    It was like a medieval fair, with noble lords and ladies watching knights in armor joust, astride horses with magnificent coats of arms emblazoned on their saddle blankets. The sounds of cheers and whinnies filled the clearing, as did the clash of lance to shield and mace to helmet. It was like she had stepped into Merry Old England itself.

    "Wow..." she whispered. She had a feeling that this was all a setup of holographic displays, but she didn't care, it was beautiful. She looked around for her target, and found him sitting on a box seat near the jousting pit, wearing the armor of the Marauding Captain. He stood and waved his hand.

    "And so the joust has been decided, the great Sir Peregrin has defeated the fine Lord Barovia!" he shouted in a commanding voice. "All hail the great Hawk Prince!" The lords and ladies clapped eagerly.

    Diane decided it was time to make herself known, but then Bethany and Gwen grabbed her. "Are you SERIOUS?!" hissed Gwen.

    "You can't go out there!" cried Bethany.

    "Chill, it's only illusion," sighed Diane.

    "Not that! I mean dueling Arnold!" said Gwen. "Our counselor's SWORN ENEMY! You must be mad to challenge him!"

    "Look, I know it's a big risk," whispered Diane. "But it's a matter of pride. I'm not about to let Norus..."

    "Forget Norus, he's a big jerk and Arnold's a bigger one," said Bethany. "If you get defeated by him, Norus will make you go out with him and kiss him and..." She groaned in disgust.

    "Okay, I get the point! But I'm not about to lose to Arnold!" said Diane. She grinned. "I defeated Norus."

    "That was then, this is now!" shouted Gwen. "Who KNOWS what Arnold's got in his deck!"

    Just then, Arnold spotted them. "Well well well," he smirked. "If it isn't Lina's little Girl Scout troupe."

    "Uh oh," said Bethany, cringing. The girls smiled sheepishly.

    "So, what brings you here, girls?" asked Arnold. "Here to be the court jesters?" The nobles laughed.

    Diane scowled and wriggled out of her friends' grips. "I challenge you to a duel, Arnold Masters! If you lose, you must hand over your Combat Badge to me!" She took off one of her fingerless gloves and waved it in the air, then flung it down harshly. The nobles gasped and murmured.

    "Well, seems you have of guts, Diane," said Arnold, getting up and leaping down to the grass. "But trust me, Norus is nothing to me. My deck is probably one of the greatest decks in existence. If I wanted, I could take on all of Team Supreme with both hands tied behind my back and win. But I choose not to, it makes no sense dealing with children."

    "Well, this kid's gonna kick your butt!" growled Diane.

    "We'll see," said Arnold. He waved his hand and the knights vanished. "An elaborate holographic image stage. As you can see, Machus granted ME the most elaborate station, while your dinky counselor got stuck in a cave. Pitiful."

    "My counselor can kick your butt!" shouted Diane. "And I'll prove it." She powered up her duel disk. "Let's duel."

    "Fine, so be it," said Arnold with a firm expression. "But I prefer not to use duel disks. Since my station is the best, I can also afford to duel without the harassments of Duel Disk technology." He clicked his fingers and something resembling an old Dueling Arena was wheeled in by two serfs. "Since this is a match to remember, I want to duel in the more traditional ways."

    "A duel arena," said Gwen. "I guess you prefer to remain in the past, Arnie."

    Arnold snorted. "I prefer not to waste my energy being thrown about by duel disk rumble packs! This is a more favorable method to duel for me. It resembles a battlefield, and this is going to be an all-out WAR!"

    "You're on," said Diane coolly, taking off her disk and handing it to Beth. "Take care of this for me, will you?"

    "B..Be careful, Di," whispered Bethany in fear.

    ~~+~~

    Norus was watching through a pair of binoculars as the two got onto the arena platforms. "I've got a balcony seat to the biggest duel in the camp's history!" chuckled the boy. "And I can't wait to rub her defeat in her face!" He envisioned Diane giving her a passionate kiss and then removing her shirt. "Heh heh heh..."

    Arnold turned to his illusionary audience. "All of you, witness the sheer power of my army! Be amazed at my power and know now why I am the Commander of Ceremonies in this tournament!" The nobles clapped and cheered.

    "Stage hog," whispered Gwen.

    "I hope Diane defeats him," mumbled Bethany. "I hate to see what he's got in store for her."

    "We're about to find out," sighed Gwen.

    Arnold turned to Diane. "Since you challenged me, according to the rules, you may choose who goes first."

    "Hmph," said Diane as the two placed their shuffled and cut decks on the deck zones. "I'll go first, if you don't mind."

    "Fair," said Arnold. "Let's duel!"

    The life meters on the arena rose to 8000 each and both duelists drew their five-card hands.

    Diane drew a card and checked her options. "Well, a good war starts with scouting the enemy, so here's my scout. Celtic Swordgirl!" The green-haired elf girl appeared. (1000/800) "And I'll equip her with Butterfly Dagger." Celtic Swordgirl sheathed her sword and gripped the fluted dagger. (1300/800) "And that's it for my turn."

    Arnold smirked. "Well, getting off to a pathetic start, are we?" He drew his card. "Let's see how you handle my deck. I set a monster in defense mode and a card face-down." The cards appeared on the dueling arena.

    "You think she can win?" whispered Bethany as she and Gwen were sitting in the stands alongside the illusionary crowd.

    "Beats me, but Arnold's not a counselor for nothing," said Gwen. "He's probably got a ton of good monsters."

    "Shhhh!" said an illusionary noble girl who was next to them. "I can't hear what they're saying!"

    Gwen did a double-take. "What the...? No, I was just imagining things."

    Diane sighed and drew another card. Her mouth flashed a smile. "Well, this will fix things. I summon Guardian Elma to the field, now that I have her weapon on the field." The beautiful maiden appeared and flashed a smile at the Celtic Swordgirl. (1300/1000) "And I equip her with Gravity Axe!" The axe appeared before her and she put away her dagger and hefted it. (1800/1000) "Now Elma, destroy that face-down monster!"

    The woman howled as she flung herself at the card, slashing it with the giant axe. A rat appeared and exploded.

    "Thanks for destroying my Giant Rat, Diane," said Arnold, chuckling. "Rats are a common pest who enjoy devouring the flesh of the fallen."

    "Ew, too much information," said Gwen, grimacing.

    "Shhh!" said the noble girl.

    Beth did a double-take. "What was that?"

    "Ignore it," said Gwen.

    "But this rat helps me," continued Arnold, taking his deck and looking through it. "When it's killed, I can special summon an earth-element monster with 1500 or less attack." He took a card, shuffled his deck, and put the deck back. "And here is my monster! Hayabusa Knight, in attack mode!" A falcon-headed knight rose up, holding a sword. (1000/700)

    "I'm afraid you need glasses," grinned Diane. "That knight is far too weak to defeat either of my monsters!"

    "Yes, all good warriors need a good weapon," said Arnold. "By themselves, they can't do jack."

    "Too bad your knight is about to get defeated before it gets a good weapon!" said Diane. "Celtic Swordgirl, destroy the Knight with Butterfly Slash!" The elf girl lunged, dagger out.

    "I told you that a good army doesn't leave any soldier by himself," grinned Arnold, flipping his card over. "Activate trap card, Reinforcements!" The card appeared. "You see, armies always have backup in case trouble erupts. And this card gives my Knight a temporary boost of attack!"

    "No!" said Diane. "Celtic Swordgirl, stop!"

    "Too late to call off the attack," said Arnold. "Hayabusa, counter that Girl Scout!" The bird-headed warrior squawked and slashed the girl down the chest, shattering her into bits. Diane's life points dropped to 7800. "If you keep up idiot moves like that, you'll be eaten alive."

    Diane scowled. "Fine, I end my turn."

    Norus chuckled. "Sweet."

    Arnold drew a card. "Remember what I said about good warriors needing good weapons? Well, this is the best out there! Fusion Sword Murasame!" He played the card. "It increases the power of the equipped warrior by 800, and not only that, it can't be destroyed by magic cards." The knight replaced his short sword with a sharp steel katana. (1800/700) "Now, Hayabusa Knight, take down that Guardian!"

    The knight shot forward and sliced apart Guardian Elma, destroying her. Then he did a backslash on Diane's face.

    "OW!" cried Diane, covering her face and watching her life points drop to 6000. "What the...?"

    "Oh, that's Hayabusa Knight's special ability," chuckled Arnold. "It can attack twice each turn!"

    "No," said Diane in horror.

    "Oh no," said Bethany. "If he keeps attacking Diane, she'll lose quickly!"

    "Then let's just hope that Di can stall until she gets rid of that thing," sighed Gwen. "Or else she'll..."

    "SHHHHHH!" hissed the girl angrily. "I can't hear them!"

    Gwen looked at the girl, then sighed and turned back to the duel at hand.

    "To end, I'll set a card face-down," said Arnold. The card appeared on his field. "Your turn."

    Diane drew a card, then grinned. "Let's see how you like it! I play Change of Heart to steal your Knight!" The angel flew into Hayabusa Knight and he appeared on her side of the field.

    "Nice try, but you've got a lot to learn about army tactics," said Arnold. "My warriors have means to avoid being taken prisoner! I activate Remove Brainwashing!" He flipped over his card, which showed a girl's tiara being shattered while she was wearing it. "This counter trap restores control of a stolen monster back to its owner!" The knight reappeared on his side of the field. "Any more idiot moves you want to make before I tear into you?"

    Diane sighed. "A monster face-down and that's it."

    Arnold drew a card and grinned. "I'm not about to play into your hands, girl. I know that card might have a flip effect that will activate the instant I attack it, so...activate Nobleman of Crossout!" The silver-armored warrior appeared. "This card automatically destroys your face-down monster and, if it is foolish enough to have an effect, you'll have to remove it and any copies of it you have from the duel!" The warrior slashed the card and it exploded.

    "No!" cried Diane as her Mystical Elf appeared and exploded. Her life points dropped to 5800.

    "Well, good thing it wasn't an effect monster," said Arnold. "Unfortunately for you, that means you lose more life points! Hayabusa Knight, double slash attack!" The knight slashed Diane's face twice again and her life points dropped to 2200.

    Norus laughed. "This is rich, just rich! My counselor is gonna take her to school, and then I'm going to take her to the woods and have my way with her. Ha ha ha!" He drooled as he thought about taking off Diane's clothes in the dark. "And she won't be able to stop me, because I'll just make up something and she'll be looked on as a bad girlfriend who couldn't handle a bet properly. Loser!" His mind went into even more vivid and R-rated imagery, so much that he had lost his attention on the duel before him.

    "I'm not about to lose to the likes of you," scowled Diane. She drew a card. "First, I play Graceful Charity, drawing three cards and discarding two." She discarded Guardian Tryce and Grarl. "And next, I'll equip your knight with this!" She showed the card to Arnold.

    "Oh no!" cried Arnold in shock, recalling the Shooting Star Bow as it appeared on Hayabusa's back. (800/700)

    "That's right, I'm sure you remember me using it on Norus' Dark Necrofear," smirked Diane. "Not only did I remove the bonus you got from your sword, but it loses another 200 attack points as well! And it allows me to play this card, Guardian Ceal!" The red-scaled reptilian appeared. (1700/1000) "And I'll equip him with Butterfly Dagger to give him a boost." The dagger appeared at Ceal's belt. (2000/1000) "Now, Ceal, Shooting Star Blaze!"

    The creature drew his bow back and fired a beam that ripped apart Hayabusa Knight. Arnold's life points dropped to 6800.

    "Now where is all your boasting and posing?" said Diane sweetly. "Or are you just being a bigot?"

    Arnold scowled. "You'll pay for that, missie." He drew a card. "But for now, I'll just keep myself in the defense. I summon Marauding Captain in attack mode!" The warrior which represented Arnold's cabin appeared, his blonde hair swaying in the breeze. "And its effect lets me summon another warrior from my deck, so I summon another Marauding Captain!" He pulled a card from his deck, shuffled it, and slapped the card down. A clone of the first Captain appeared. (1200/1000)

    "Well, Arnie," said Diane, drawing a card. She looked at it. "It's been fun, but I'm about to take the offense. First I'll play Monster Reborn to bring back Guardian Elma!" The maiden re-appeared in a flash of light. "And then I'll play Polymerization to fuse her with the Dark Magician Girl in my hand, forming Shade the Enchantress!" The spirit of the dark sorceress infused itself into Elma and she melted into light, forming the beautiful silver-robed witch. (2300/3000) "And since it gains 300 attack points for every Guardian in my graveyard, and I have three so far, she gains 900 attack points!" Shade's attack rose to 3100.

    "Awesome, she'll wipe out a lot of life points!" grinned Bethany.

    Gwen frowned. "I dunno, something is wrong here..."

    "Shade! Wipe out his Marauding Captain...to the left!" cried Diane. "Shadow Enchantment!" The sorceress hurled her daggers.

    Arnold smirked. "Fool." The other Marauding Captain lunged and deflected the daggers before they could hit.

    "What the...?" asked Diane in shock.

    "You see, that's my Marauding Captain's special ability," grinned Arnold. "As long as he is on the field, no Warrior can be attacked, and with two Captains on the field, NEITHER can be attacked. You just wasted your battle phase!"

    "I end my turn," groaned Diane.

    "Fine, now it's my turn," said Arnold, drawing a card. He looked it over. "Well, while I admit that there's no way you can attack my monsters, a good army general always has a back-up plan, so...activate Swords of Revealing Light!" Glowing swords slammed down around Shade and paralyzed her, much to everyone's horror. "These magical swords aren't Excalibur, but they'll do the trick for a while," grinned Arnold. "For three turns, you can't attack me. So you might as well just surrender now."

    Diane scowled. "I'm not about to let some stupid blades stop me from defeating you, Arnold!"

    "We'll see," said Arnold. "To end, I'll play Banner of Courage!" The strange banner appeared and a loud trumpet was heard. "This magic card grants me a special power. From now on, my monsters will gain 200 attack points each turn that passes!"

    "Oh no," said Bethany. "If Diane doesn't get rid of those Captains fast, that Banner will make them stronger than Shade!"

    "And then I'll summon Goblin Attack Force and end my turn," said Arnold, putting another card down. The goblin army emerged from the card in droves - actually, it was just six goblins crowding one space. (2300/0)

    Diane drew, then recognized the card. She smiled and put the card down. "A monster in defense and that ends my turn." The card appeared next to Shade the Enchantress.

    Arnold smirked. "Well then, if that's all, then I'll move." He drew a card and his Goblin Attack Force rose to 2500 attack and his Marauding Captains rose to 1400 attack. "I'll set a card face-down, summon Throwstone Unit in defense mode, and end my turn." The catapult appeared next to the Goblin Army. (500/2000)

    "What's he thinking?" asked Gwen. "That monster isn't going to do much with Shade! It's defense is weak."

    "Yeah, but Di's got both those swords and the Marauding Captains to deal with, and she can't harm that thing without getting rid of those Captains or negating their effect," said Bethany sadly.

    Diane sighed. "I'll set a monster face-down and end my turn, but next turn, I'll get rid of your monsters and end your lock. Just you wait." The card appeared next to the other face-down monster.

    Arnold chuckled. "I'm afraid that won't be happening. Activate trap card, Micro Ray!" He flipped his card over and a beam cannon appeared behind the monsters. "This card allows me to reduce one of your monster's defense score to zero for this round, and I'm targeting it on your Enchantress!" The cannon fired a beam that slammed into Shade and she shrank to the size of Celtic Swordgirl. (3100/0)

    "I don't get it, why did you do that?" said Diane. "I'm not going to defense with my monster!"

    "No, but it's key to destroying your monster," laughed Arnold as he drew a card. "But first, my Banner will increase all my army's attack by another 200 points!" The banner glowed and his monsters gained power. Throwstone Unit rose to 700 attack, Goblin Attack Force rose up to 2700 attack, and both Marauding Captains rose to 1600 attack. "First I'll summon Warrior Dai Grepher in attack mode." The leather-clad warrior emerged, gripping his sword. (1700/1600) "And then I'll sacrifice it to destroy your Enchantress! Warrior Dai Grepher, lock and load!" The warrior leapt into Throwstone Unit's catapult.

    "What the...?" asked Diane.

    "It's Throwstone Unit's special effect, girl," said Arnold, grinning wickedly. "You see, I can sacrifice monster on my side of the field to destroy any monster on your side of the field which has a defense lower than the monster I sacrificed, and now that your Shade has zero defense, my warrior will end up destroying her!"

    "No!" cried Gwen in horror.

    "Ready...aim...FIRE!" cried Arnold, pointing at Shade. The catapult launched its cargo at Shade, who shrieked as she was impaled with Dai Grepher's sword. Both people exploded and Diane's life points dropped to 1475. "Now you see why I'm undefeated, girl. None can stand against my army deck!"

    "Urgh," said Diane in disgust. "All that effort wasted."

    "And to end, I'll play A Warrior Returning Alive to recover a warrior from my graveyard, so I can play him again next turn," said Arnold as he took the monster from his graveyard and put it in his hand. "And I'll set a card."

    (To be continued...)
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    I also wanted to include the two cards mentioned by Hannah in her recollection of the duel with Arnold vs. Peter,even though they didn't see play in this chapter. One of them was the contribution of Loupiteak as well.

    Black Luster Dragon - King of Envoy
    Type: Dark/Dragon/Fusion/Effect
    Level: 12
    ATK: 4000
    DEF: 3000
    Fuse: Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning + Chaos Emperor Dragon - Envoy of the End
    Effect: You may pay 500 life points to destroy one of your opponent's monsters. You can also flip a coin each turn. If you call it right, this card can attack your life points directly. If you call it wrong, this card cannot attack this turn.

    Pomegranate Juice
    Type: Normal Magic
    Effect: Restores 800 of your life points.

    This card was used by Jackie in "Legacy of the Duelist."

    Also, before anyone of you flame me for not including Remove Restraints and Gear Fried the Swordsmaster in my new cards because it was seen in the anime, let me explain: Those cards are REAL. They just came out in the newest Japanese booster pack, Flaming Eternity, so it's likely that they'll show up here eventually. I found this out by checking out a respectable Yu-Gi-Oh site.
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Man, I used to hate Norus before, but now I really hate him. Talk about sick.

    At least Arnold showed he was the bigger man in all this. He has a lot more honor in him than I previously believed.

    The references to the manga were interesting.

    Anyway, I await what's coming next. See you soon.

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    Actually, Flaming Eternity comes out February. I can't wait for the Swordmaster! Anyway, that was one excellent chapter. Norus was quite sick, but he got what he deserved. I hope Peter gets into the finals...^_^<--(Chaos Deck).
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    Ooh, Arnold turned out to be much "nobler" than I thought. XD

    And... OMG, I'm 12 and I read this ALONE! Noooooo! O.o Erm yes. Anyway, can't wait fort he next chapter!

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    Don't worry Opal. My whole fanfic is rated PG-13.

    I won't tell your parents if you don't.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Venusaur
    Don't worry Opal. My whole fanfic is rated PG-13.

    I won't tell your parents if you don't.

    - Venusaur
    Deal. XD

    Anyway, there was something I wanted to comment upon earlier. Oh yeah, IMO the King of Envoys is slightly overpowered. I mean, direct attack chance? Monster destroying? 4000 Atk? Man...

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    Uhm, I apologize. I didn't realize you were 12.

    I'm not going to justify my actions, because I know that I went a little overboard with Norus' behavior in that chapter. However, I guess I jumped the gun by making my warning too ridiculous. If you can handle Mandate of Heaven, I guess you can handle Norus' behavior.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    By the way .hack, something you should also do before you edit; this is being picky, but the Monster Diane used is called "Gearfried the Iron Knight", not "Gear Fried". One word, not two.

    Another thing I worry about is your inconsistency with Fusion Monsters. In some of your chapters, they have to wait a turn before attacking, while in others (most), they can attack immediately. I suggest you settle on one system for Fusions and stick with it, because it is getting confusing.

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    *gasp* *pant* *wheeze*

    After days of reading combined with intermittent loss of the internet (grrr...), I've finally caught up! I tell you, month-long vacations can really make you miss a lot.

    Well, these last two chapters (which were the ones I just now read) were... um, interesting? It's kinda odd that a young kid would be a cross-dresser, but I suppose I can almost see it. I just think that usually people don't realize that sort of thing about themselves until they're older. (I have heard some sad exceptions, however, which usually involve cruel bullying and abuse. It's a pity.) And Norus... whoa. That was way, way worse than I thought he'd turn out. What a dastardly character. Let's just hope his antics don't start up again when the finals begin, or else there'll be a lot of trouble at Duelist Camp.

    Your duels have been pretty good for the last several chapters. You've used quite a few novel decks and shown great strategies on both sides of the game. I am pleased that the girls set aside their legendary dragons for now, though. That was beginning to be very cheap. It will be interesting to see how they handle the toughest players at the camp in the finals without them, though. And we know that at least two of them will fall by the conclusion. I can't wait for the dramatic clashes between friends! (I'm assuming you'll show them, because that would make for great tension. It seems too obvious for you to decide to do otherwise. Of course, I could be wrong and be surprised by something even better, as I have been in the past. We'll see.) These next several chapters should be superb.

    One thing I've noticed, though, is the slacking you've been doing in your editing lately. I've seen all sorts of little errors in your past few chapters: typos, punctuation errors, possession mistakes, switched names, missed italics tags, incorrect life point and monster scores, and others besides those. This is a great fic, .hack. Don't let it get cluttered with errors that I know you're good enough to see. If you just edit each chapter a few more times, I'm confident that you'll be surprised at how many things you correct. Relax, take your time, and be sure to polish this fic. You've worked so hard on it; why let it be tarnished even in the slightest now?

    But overall, as I've said, this is a great fic. I'm impressed with the ingenuity of your characters and plotlines, and I look forward to seeing what twists you have in store for us yet. It should be exciting to find out what you have left up your sleeve. So, I'll see you then!
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    Quote Originally Posted by mr_pikachu
    Well, these last two chapters (which were the ones I just now read) were... um, interesting? It's kinda odd that a young kid would be a cross-dresser, but I suppose I can almost see it. I just think that usually people don't realize that sort of thing about themselves until they're older. (I have heard some sad exceptions, however, which usually involve cruel bullying and abuse. It's a pity.)
    Talk to Opaltiger about that guy,it was his idea for a character. I only reduced his age so he could fit into one of the younger cabins,because I already had had a couple of boys for the Marauding Captain and Penguin Knight cabins and I didn't want John to associate with them.

    And Norus... whoa. That was way, way worse than I thought he'd turn out. What a dastardly character. Let's just hope his antics don't start up again when the finals begin, or else there'll be a lot of trouble at Duelist Camp.
    Don't worry. The last act of villiany he pulls will be in the finals,and it will be against a girl,but I swear,nothing perverted happens. After that 'talk' from his counselor and subsequent lectures,his only revenge against Diane will be to humiliate her by kicking her out of the tournament in a rematch(which will never happen,as you'll soon see).

    Your duels have been pretty good for the last several chapters. You've used quite a few novel decks and shown great strategies on both sides of the game. I am pleased that the girls set aside their legendary dragons for now, though. That was beginning to be very cheap.
    I did that because Timaeus,Critias,and Hermos were called forth in the anime only when Yugi,Joey,or Kaiba was forced to duel under the Seal,and I felt a little guilty for writing the girls in a corner where I had no choice but to call upon the dragons. However,they will show up again during a very critial time after the tournament,when their duels have much higher stakes. The next time the Dragons will show up again will be at the exhibition duel with Machus.

    It will be interesting to see how they handle the toughest players at the camp in the finals without them, though. And we know that at least two of them will fall by the conclusion.
    Of course! With all three girls in,one of them will have to overpower the others. It's fate.

    I can't wait for the dramatic clashes between friends! (I'm assuming you'll show them, because that would make for great tension. It seems too obvious for you to decide to do otherwise. Of course, I could be wrong and be surprised by something even better, as I have been in the past. We'll see.) These next several chapters should be superb.
    Not to worry,Mr. Pikachu! I promise that the duels will be epic battles. And yes,there will be better duels in the future,starting with the duel vs. Machus.

    One thing I've noticed, though, is the slacking you've been doing in your editing lately. I've seen all sorts of little errors in your past few chapters: typos, punctuation errors...
    I sincerely apologize. I know I've made a few mistakes about monster scores because I didn't check the right sources. Also,I'll run each chapter through a spellchecker and get all those typos edited out.

    But overall, as I've said, this is a great fic.
    Thank you! I promise not to disappoint.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Quote Originally Posted by .hack//BELLOSSOM
    Talk to Opaltiger about that guy,it was his idea for a character. I only reduced his age so he could fit into one of the younger cabins,because I already had had a couple of boys for the Marauding Captain and Penguin Knight cabins and I didn't want John to associate with them.
    He was originally 16, I swear! *shifty eyes*

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    I apologize for changing the age,Opaltiger,but you said "random" for the cabin,and there weren't many of the younger duelists dueling the girls.

    To everyone else: I've finished the next chapter. I apologize for any mistakes,I try to edit the text so it doesn't look like crap,but I have to leave for classes soon,so I put this up quickly. Don't bug me about formatting mistakes until later,when I get back this afternoon and edit it. THEN you can whine.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Ooh, secret double agent. XD And no Hermos or Critias? Nice twist. Can't wait to see Circe duel, I have a feeling it'll be good. Anyway, hope you update soon!

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    Very interesting...

    Who is Pisaro's new spy? This can't be good for Gwen!

    I loved the e-mails Diane recieved from Sheena and the other two Eliminators (one of which you made up yourself). The Gatekeeper's explanation of his past was well done.

    The next chapter should be quite interesting...

    - Brian

    P.S. You made an error in The Gatekeeper's story. The Grecian Sphinx figures in the myth of Oedipus, not Bellephron.

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    I apologize for that. It's been a while since I read the myth,but you are right.

    As for the new spy,I'll say this much,he was a reader contribution by Shadow Djinn,but sadly,I had closed the whole reader contribution thing because there was no further need for dueling campers. I didn't want to forbid his idea,so I checked it and got an idea of my own which led to the character becoming Pisaro's double agent. I won't spoil any more,but Shadow Djinn,expect your character to appear next chapter and his fate will be decided as I see fit(it won't be a bad one,though).

    As for the e-mails, I wanted to expand a bit on Venusaur's setting. As Siegfried says in my story,he was planning on hiring ten Eliminators total. The "Black Adder" character was just something that popped into my head - I was writing up an idea for a reptile duelist and when I named it "Black Adder",the idea of a Jack Sparrow pirate character came to mind,considering that Black Adder sounds like a rogueish name. You might see her if I decide to plan out a future Duelatopia tournament story concerning D.G.B.

    (PS: I might edit the part in the e-mail about the sharks to harmless sharks. I heard there were some species of sharks that don't attack humans on sight. Dolphins...well, considering that they make beeping noises when they cry,that might ruin the mood.)
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    So the finalists have been decided, huh? I guess we can only wait to see who will face off in the quarterfinals. The loss of Hermos and Critias isn't a biggie, though, because Bethany and Diane weren't going to use them anyway. I guess this'll make them hold back the dragons for certain.

    Good job with the introduction of our mystery spy... who could this kid be? And nice idea in showing Machus's thoughts. It really gives us some perspective on what's coming, though not enough to give everything away. I liked the part about Jake's celebration, too. And Twilight said that Slifer was close... why do I have a feeling I know exactly where that Egyptian God card is? Hmm... this should be very intriguing.

    I do feel, however, that you went overboard with a few characters' dialogue. Lina especially seemed semi-drunk, especially since I have a picture in my head of her laughing insanely thinking of the kids kissing and of her own... past experiences. It just seemed kinda off.

    But otherwise, this was nice. Although it was fillery, you did a good job making it exciting enough to enjoy. There are a lot of things going on in the shadows, and our heroes are about to meet them all head-on... Anyway, I'll see you next chapter!


    P.S. I sent you a PM before I saw this chapter or your replies following it. You can disregard it if you wish. Sorry about the inconvenience, and for being too late.
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    Next chapter is now, Mr. Pikachu. I've just finished it. Not only that, I've finished the chapter after that one too! (I wrote out the duel in a class and put it on Notepad when I got home, spending all night to type it up! :roftl: )

    Anyways, here's the first chapter. The second chapter will be given in a couple of hours, just to add some suspense. Enjoy!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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