The negative:

1. Too many reused quotes from your older stories.
2. The Aussie-Beast Deck has lost its flair from many repeated uses.

The positive:

1. A new type of deck (The Monarchs rock!)
2. A new Monarch to join the deck.
3. Next is gonna be a big turning point in this story - I can feel it...

All in all, not a bad chapter - I was almost expecting that Demiurge (sp.?) that Shup told me about to appear, but it didn't...

(grabs idea)

Anywho, nice recollection of the Jaden VS. Jinzo fight, though I wonder how Fortunado changed it so much... from 1 Duel Spirit to another I can understand, but a Norse God? He must've been pretty crafty...

Well, I guess that's about all I can chip in for now - I'm looking forward to Cleo's deck theme (and Cassius' and Sebastian's, of course). So, until then...

Later!

-Blade