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12th April 2003, 04:13 PM
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Pokémon Safety Federation
I'm the writer of destiny of 2, I thought that one was becoming boring, trainers fics are no news. So I decided to try something new
Hello, I am Iroko, a pokémon trainer, 18 years old. I already had the eight Hoenn badges, but on my way to the Pokémon Leauge in the middle of Victory Road, my life took a strange turn. I will tell everything about it.
Chapter one - Follow me please
'So you think you're so tough, huh?' A trainer said. I replied: 'I didn't say anything, but if it's a PokéBattle you want, I'm up for it!' The trainer threw out a Safari Ball, and a pokémon appeared. It was a Donphan. I had the perfect pokémon to handle this match. I took my Safari ball too, and threw it on the ground! It revealed a Heracross.
Trainer: 'Donphan, Rollout!'
Me: 'Heracross, try dodging!'
Trainer: 'Donphan, yet another Rollout!'
Me: 'Heracross, keep dodging!'
Trainer: 'You must be a rookie. Don't you know that a Rollout keeps getting faster and stronger every turn? Donphan, another Rollout!'
Me: 'Yes, I'm using your advantage to my advantage. Heracross, throw him up with your horn!'
Trainer: 'Oh no, Donphan, try to keep on rolling on the ground!'
Me: 'Don't let him escape Heracross, Mega Horn!'
Heracross: 'Heraaaa....cros!
The over-confident trainer called back his Donphan, and threw yeat another Pokéball. He yelled: 'Slaking, come out!' I withdrew my Heracross, and threw my Snorlax out of his Pokéball!
Trainer: 'I get the first turn! Slaking, Tackle!'
Me: 'Snorlax, Curse!'
Trainer: 'Slaking, Take Down!'
Slaking: '*moans* Sla SlaKing.'
Trainer: 'Slaking, why won't you move?'
me: 'Slaking has a bad condition, causing it to not attack every turn. Snorlax, Curse!'
Trainer: 'Hmm, fresh caught Pokémon suck, thank goodness that Snorlax can't attack! Slaking, Hyper Beam!'
Slaking: 'Sla...king!!!!!!!
me: 'Time is ripe Snorlax, Hyper Beam, you too!'
The Hyper Beams hit eachother, and both pokémon where fainted. Now I had to choose a pokémon first. 'Zangoose, come out!' The trainer, with a little more fait now yelled: 'Seviper, your turn!' Both Pokémon started to attack eachother without getting commands.
me: 'Zangoose, Slash!'
trainer: 'Seviper, Constrict and don't go easy on the squeezing!'
me: 'Zangoose, Bite!'
Zangoose: 'Zang...oose!
trainer: 'That was good, he can't move for one bit! Poison Sting!'
me: 'Zangoose, I see that you're not strong enough! Come back!'
trainer: 'Come back Seviper. Hey dude, last round?
me: 'sure!'
trainer: 'Sandslash, I choose you!'
me: 'Come out Tyrogue!'
trainer: 'Hmmm, not even an evolution! haha, Sandslash, dig!'
me: 'He doesn't want to, Tyrogue, use Dig too!'
trainer: 'Sandslash, come back up and use Earthquake to get him out of the ground!
me: 'Tyrogue, dig your way up and use Cross Chop!
trainer: 'Sandslash, Agility!'
me: 'Tyrogue, Tackle!
the Sandslash was too tired so I won the game. The trainer continued his way to the end of the Victory Road, but a strangely dressed man came to me. He said: 'I saw the whole battle, may I ask which other 2 pokémon you have with you?' I said: 'You saw four Pokémon of me, the 2 that you didn't see where Sneasel and Charizard!' The man said: 'A Charizard, wow, how did you get it?' I said: 'It was my first Pokémon, but he was a Charmander back then.' The man threw a Pokéball, containing a Rapidash. He said: 'Would you please follow me, you can go on your Charizard.' I replied: 'sure, Charizard, come out! Charizard, follow that Rapidash!
Writers note: 'Well this was my first chapter of this new fic, to me I did it pretty good, but those die hard fans are pretty hard to impress, so please give me tips. P.S. Silent Readers, come out, come out where-ever you are, I would love to hear other opinions too!
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