Allright I am reposting this story in this forum-so here's part one with the plotline and the first installment-I will add the next segment soon

Plotline: This is the adventure of Ryan, (and if anyone else wants to join in I really don't care) a pokemaster who is going to the Gortook Isles. The Gortook Isles Challenge are held on the Gortook Isles (obviously) a scarcly populated chain of Islands. The challenge happens only once a decade and the rules are simple. First, to get in you must have placed in the top three in two of the four main Leagues. (Indigo, Johoto etc...) So the invite list is very small. If you are invited you are usually a top trainer for that decade. Anyways the second rule is you are only allowed to bring 3 pokemon from your winning teams, and once you select the three you cannot change you picks throughout your journey (you may capture up to six more pokemon on the journey to complete your team) . As for the point of the challenge, the top 10 pokemasters from the previous challenge are roaming the Isles a random. The task is to track down each master, defeat their teams to earn a piece of a golden circle. A completed circle has six parts and a completed circle enable you to go onto the most prestigious tournament in pokemon. If you can train your new pokemon well enough, you will be recongnized as an outstanding trainer.

Ok that's the overall plot-I havn't really smoothed it out yet-I just want to get some reaction to it-now for part one of the story.....

The boat sailed through the ocean with ease, compared with last night's storm and choppy waters, this was like a hot knife through butter. Ryan stood at the front of the boat. He liked the ocean at night, it made him feel small but it put him in his place. Ryan breathed in deeply. The ocean air was so relaxing....his thoughts turned to the task before him. There was allot of secrecy behind this challenge. In fact, the only thing he had ever heard about it before was the tournament at the end of the year, which usually was on television. He remembered watching it on TV when he was six, the trainers were all very very skilled, and some of them went on to be in the Elite Four. He turned thoughts about the challenge over and over in his mind, wondering exactly what he had to do. Ryan had only recieved the invitation to the challenge last month, and so did the various other trainers on board. Ryan knew a few of the trainers on board, he had battled a few of them a couple times. Ryan was a surprise trainer, no one knew of him before he won the Indigo league, and after allot of fanfare his life returned to basic normalcy. He got third place in the Johoto league tournament after he lost to Eva, a trainer who was on the boat. Eva was beautiful, intelligent, and the love intrest of Ryan.
Ryan turned and headed towards his cabin. There were not very many people out at this time of night (Ryan's a night person). He looked down at his pokeball belt. He was dissapointed that there were only three balls on his belt. He had put in allot of training and his team was very solid. Now he had to scrap it and start over. He kept his three top pokemon, the ones that were permanent members of his team, because it was the most logical choice. His long-time comanion and first pokemon, Charizard, was his number one. His combination of strength, flight, and fire abilities made him a tough combatent. Charizard was his fighter, the pokemon in his team that does allot of the dirty work. His next pokemon was Hypno, while physically weak, his Hypno's phsychic ability was increadibly strong. Ryan had been working on Hypno's defense recently, and even though most of the time it was not needed because he was rarely struck, it was getting better. Hypno was his specialist pokemon, one who he usually used to take out pokemon that were strong against his Charizard's physical attacks. His last pokemon was another that has been with him from the start. Jolteon was his speed pokemon, his agility was his strongest defense, and Ryan would us Jolteon in situations where he needed to buy time to devise a plan in the middle of battle. Ryan grew up in Frond Bay, the world famous city where Eevee's are breed. He recieved an Eevee when he left as well has his Charmander.
The next morning would bring answers to his question.