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30th June 2007, 12:59 AM
#3
Im your sheild and sword

Junior Trainer
Re: Urban Chaos (Pokemon ASB fanfiction)
srry about all the trouble, but really guys if u veiw plz post your thots.
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Chapter 2
Free Ride
Croagunk and Noah looked circled the truck trying to find a way in. Croagunk gave a quite but clear croak. As Noah went around to the right of the truck where Croagunk was patting the passenger side door with his webbed hands. The rusty red door was sligtly cracked open.
Noah bent down to look in the dusty side mirror attached just infront for the window. Noah never did worry about apearences but it wasnt his face he was looking at, It was his right hand. The scar didnt look anymore healed then it did 1 hour ago. Croagunk began to glare at Noah, a sign that he had to focus.
Noah blushed a bit as he quickly took his hand and his face away from the mirror. Then refocused he wispered to Crogunk still emotionlessly awaiting instructions from his huiman partner. "Use poison jab to squeze your hand thru the opening and force the door open." Croagunks hand glowed purple and forced itself thru the opening. He then used his strength to open the door. "Yes!" Noah wispered.
Noah then assesed what had happen so far. Noah did have the tendency to think stratigily when a reward was on the line. They had spent to much time trying to get in, the driver would be coming back in a few minutes. Noah and croagunk got in the truck. The passenger seat had stains on it and hamburger rappers, and cups where littered across the floor.
Noah surveyed the area for a way to get in the back. He saw a steel door. Connecting the drivers area to the storage area in the back . He opened it and him and Crogund jumped into the snack filled heaven.The back was about the size of a car with rusted steel with one giant grey tarp over the floor, a couple tarp covered objects, and the snack machines that Noah craved. Noah couldnt believe that he had made it this far. Noah's mouth drewled at the sight, even Croagunk leeked purple poison from his mouth. Right as Noah went over to a machine containing fried chicken, to find a way to get the chicken from the machine to his mouth the truck rumbled.
Enginges roared to life. Noah new the truck must be starting, and he was not going to leve the blessing that had been bestowed upon him. Then he becan to sweat intensly and his pulse beated up. The metal door conecting the back of the truck to the front, he hadnt closed it. He didnt belive in god, but he prayed to somone that the driver wouldnt notice. He and croagunk crouched behind a tarp covered object. The truck becan to move. After about 10 minutes he poked his head out from behind the tarp. The door was closed. Noah and Croagunk let out deep sighs of releif. Noah wondered, was it possible for croagunk to of understood what was going on?
Noah cralled over to the fried chicken maching he had had his eyes on since he first peered insided the truck. He found a place that croagunk could use brick break on and get the food out. "Crogunk i ne-".
The truck took a sharp turn and the machine tipped over, the shadow of it grew larger and larger over Noah, Noah couldnt react, he was to stuned, sudenly croagunk jumped sprang and tackled Noah out of the way. Noah and Croagunk flew threw the air. Noah didnt know why but he wispered "Thank you, Friend" It seemed like they where in the air forever, finaly they hit somthing, somthing hard. Noah's felt as if somone had punched him in his head, he was not having trouble breathing though, and he could still feel his legs and arms, but he felt tired. Noah's vision lasted long enogh so that he could see Croagunk who apeared to be sleeping on the floor with blood coming out of his mouth. The blood was bubbling though, that was good, it meant Croagunk was breathing. Then Noah's vision faded from blurry, to black.
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Thank you to the following people for suporting me, giving me feedback, or helping me learn the rules: mr_pikachu , Charles Legend.
Keep the feedback coming
I will be adding more main charecters soon and if u would like me to make you a main charecter just reply saying what you think of my fanfic, and what kind of charecter you would like to be
Last edited by Unsolved Puzzle; 30th June 2007 at 01:36 AM.
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