Well well well... welcome back

Nice to see some Ash bashing "His skills were all he had" And "Ash could only read to a 5th Grade level and still had problems with his times tables" Lol. Poor poor simple Ash, sure he may be able to thundershock something into next week, but can he fill out a government form? lol.

I loved the cute little Sakura and Pikachu part, wonderful! Poor Sakura and Crystal being Targeted but Come on Madison! Damn Ivy's annoying, do you think she does that to the Postie? Or perhaps the corner store? Or her children "I can see you kids! ARE YOU MISBEHAVING!" lol....

Heh, another Nurse Joy, I'd laugh if they were actually a variety of women and men paid to dress up. More likely they're clones... like in Gattica....

Woah, Ash is turning gay? lol. That's an interesting plot twist. His newfound hate for women. Sure I know its Ivy induced but it'd be funny. *HUGE GRIN* Yay! Madison and Meowth's sideplot! Excellent! This'll be great, those two get on really well... and where is Togepi eh? With Sakura? And will we get any backstory on What happened to Misty's Pokemon?

Oh well. I still think of Ivy as Ivy from whatchamacall it, Batman. Nice move on behalf of Ash with Phanphy, Yay for Madison! So what exactly does she wear now? I keep thinking of her in black three quarter pants and a white top. Is that right? lol. And Meowth wasn't in costume!

Great work by Ash, he figured out Muk's weakness. Yay for Phanphy's evolution! That was great, but the killing of Muk

Speaking of next chapter, The Time Wizard is your fav YuGiOh Card if I remember correctly. It is pretty kickass But Sakura will de-evolve Phanphy and it'll win against Muk in its cute way But where abouts is Crystal? That's confusing me...

And why won't Sakura perhaps send a card like Windy to help out Madison. Although I'd LOVE to see an adventure with Meowth, Pikachu, Kero and the Flower Card. Perhaps some drunken fun in a club, the three want to get in and cause Kero is the keeper of the cards convinces Flower to come along and get them in. ^^;

Anywho, another good chappie. Will we see Jessie and James again? Will ash battle other trainers that AREN'T Gym Leaders and what exactly does Madison wear? Thanks