Wow. Just, wow.

I'm ashamed to say that I've never read anything other than your poetry before, but I'm enjoying this so so much. I really love it when people take characters and transform them. I'm adoring the way you've taken contests (which I never really got into in DP) and then you have all these other plot lines happening and its just so interesting and I can actually SEE it happening and wow.

Yeah. Sorry lol.

I really hated Milo for a while there though, but by about chapter 5 and 6 his character improved The addition of Morty was good for that. I'm not a fan of the way he's irritating the Eeveeloution sisters though. But the fact that his father has something to do with the gyms is a great plot twist

Yay