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12th September 2009, 12:28 AM
#32
Dream

Junior Trainer
Re: Morphic (PG-13, possibly offensive to some)
Love Mia's rant about how human time is arbitrary. Dave's silly, Mia's argument is backed by scientific fact and not "philosophy". XD
Poor Gabriel >_> It's like he's living one big nightmare. It's like a targeted Murphy's law. Everything bad always happens to Gabriel.
I particularly liked this sentence, especially the parts in bold: "With the reddish darkness still covering his vision, the world soon became nothing but the gun, the noise of the car engine and his heavy breaths and thumping heartbeats, each of them sending more chilling terror pulsing through his veins."
I don't know what else to say, except creepy church fanatics =/
Looking forward to the next chapter!
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