Well, the pacing was a bit slow at first, but it picked up when the group was teleported. Nice turn of events, by the way. And I also liked the way they noticed the jungle wasn't natural in origin. Take 8 stamps. ¢¢¢¢¢¢¢¢
By the way, please let me know if you're interested in spelling/grammar corrections. Some people want them while others feel offended by them, so I prefer to ask and do whatever is best for everyone. I personally would like readers to correct any mistakes they find in my writings, so that I can fix them on the archived version.