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22nd December 2003, 08:59 PM
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The Story of Pokemon Wars: Allies and Foes
Well the beginning started out interesting then you kinda went into someone catching a pokemon and it just, I don't know. I think if you just left it wothout the capture it would be a good start even though it was short. Im not saying it was bad but you really didn't need that. The whole war thing really did catch my attention and it seems really interesting. Not much to say on beginning but I would like to see how you go with this fic.
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