Well done on beginning this thread WFM!
Now...
(I may repeat previous comments)
Lack of story:
Must I say more? Some fics are so plotless that I wonder if it's just a monkey-typed script. Fics are anime-spin offs, sure, but that doesn't mean a story should be bland or unoriginal. At least be honest with yourself - are you able to write stories or not?
Crappy titles:
I say this every time I post - please think up an imaginative title that's eye-catching and interesting. People sometimes bypass fics that are good because of this. You might have written the best story ever about a young poke trainer named Louise, but you won't get anyone to look at it 'cause the title of the fic says "Louise's Pokemon adventure". Please people, USE IMAGINATIVE FIC TITLES!!
Grammar
I'm saying this again to drill it into prospective fic writers - please get your grammar correct. People don't mind a couple of typo's (everyone makes mistakes), but a page full of gobbledegook is a turn-off.
That's it for now - later!
Oaky.