Rudy: Faolans knight in shining armor! ^v^ Your in of course ^-~

Kendo: Oh yeah! Ragged woman skills lol Only my characters not going to be 'sidekick' this time XD Accepted!

RikiTikiTavi: Im attaching one of the only pics I could find of what the Tsuful may look like. Considering we dont have much to go on, lets say this: Based on the attached pic and what is seen on Vegeta when he goes bebi ( I know Im ignoring GT but for basic appearance reference Im using this) Im assuming the majority of Tsuful have hair in very light shades (Im giving you all freedom to pick what color, just make sure its in a very pale, pastel shade) And eyes in bright blue, green or yellow. They seem to have peach colored skin, about 2 or 3 shades lighter than saiyan skin. King Kai had said that they are much shorter than saiyans (Id say about half their size, ranging from 3'-4'6") but looking at the pic they are very well proportioned (they are small, like compairing hobbits to humans if that helps). I hope this gives you a general idea to build on ^-^

DarkTemplarZ: Not a bad profile, just need to alter a few things. 1) He can hate saiyans, but in the beginning Friezas true motives are unknown, so he needs to be a little subdued about how he acts until Frieza gives the order for anything to be done. He can mutter things under his breath about them, but if Frieza hears, he may punish him for 'giving too much away' or 'talking out of turn'. This is basically something to keep in mind for the future when its time to post. 2) In your history you had Muyu reguard Frieza as a god, but then he attacked Frieza and hurt him causing him to bleed. In the Namek Saga of DBZ Frieza comments to Goku after an especially hard punch connects to his face: "Your the first one to ever hurt me, except for my loving parents of course." Considering it was the FIRST time he was hurt by anyone but his parents, Muyu couldnt have hurt Frieza, and Frieza would never keep around anyone who could even come CLOSE to hurting him (thats why he destroys planet Vegeta in the first place). A suggestion: Muyu could be in awe of Frieza and find it his duty to serve the 'god from above with extreme power', or Muyu could be reluctant to go and Frieza could threaten, 'Work for me or die with your wasteland of a planet'. Muyu could be one of Friezas elite fighters, but not THE strongest, Zarbon and Dodoria were said to be the strongest Frieza had. Once you make these changes, your in ^-^

Some things I forgot to mention earlier:

Kalah: Zarrs red tinted hair, blue eyes and albino tail are a physical mutation, and therefore very rare. In a tribal system like the one the Saiyans currently have, this is seen as deformed, so its likely if his father wasnt the leader of this band of Saiyans, and Zarr wasnt his only son, that he would be killed. Obviously hes not dead lol ^-~ but Id expect hed get a lot of dirty looks from other Saiyans when his fathers not around, just to make it even more interesting ^v~

Kalah and Mike: Since Garvom is the current leader of the Saiyan forces, and has a hairstyle much like Vegeta, if its ok with you two how about making Garvom the older brother of what will be King Vegeta? Just tossing around ideas ^-^()

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