This was ok. Good seeing its in a different place and you had different starters. The whole proffessor thing is uverused but you made it a little bit different so its ok. Matt seems to be a really cool person. He took a while to think though on what pokemon. The only big problom I see that you can fix real easy and a lot of people sometimes have trouble with is description. You could have described what it was like on the way to Zuta, what Pidgeot looks like, what the new starters look like is a big one because we never seen them before. Are they red? Blue? Green? Description really helps people make a mental pic of whats going on. Other than that it was ok. I knoew you can do it, just take your time. Keep it up! I will look out for the next chapter to see how your doing.