I told you that you'd get more readers

Great work Oni, Strider's a nice name. It seems Beedrill (when it evolves from Kakuna), Butterfree or Ponyta can survive a Nosepass, surely? I'm sure Micky has a strategy, a winning one, at that...

Looking forward to the next chapter. Maybe give dates to when you post a chapter, like every monday and Thursday or something. You've got to ration your chapters, posting so many so quick can be bad.

Anyway Kerri's part was amazing. Very good.