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28th June 2004, 10:26 PM
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Elite Trainer
A Bond in Dark Times (A Fic by Me and RJ)
Good stuff, loved the flashback. It seems so strange how Angel was keeping the city crime-free practically single-handedly. The spread of drugs after his death became clearer though. And nice stuff about Marco's ignorance about battling and catching Pokemon. "Darn, a Tackle!" :tongue: And he used Fingame's attacks in the order the Pokedex showed, heh. Although I did notice Josh did the same.
It shows that Josh, although wanting revenge, isn't a dark person... nice touch on the Rattatas.
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