Not bad. I liked the displays of emotion; that's always good. It'll be interesting to find out what Kikyo discovers regarding the "plague", as well as her reaction to it.

Try working on your grammar a bit. There were several cases where you left out critical words like helping verbs, connecting words, and others. Also, try not to stray from your past tense format. On occasion you would use present tense in your narration, as in this case:


But how Absol is considered the Pokemon that warns humans of danger, dose that mean more is to come?


I've underlined the verbs for you. As you can see, every verb in this sentence is describing something that is happening presently. Thus, the term "present tense" applies. But in the majority of the chapter, you refer to things that have already happened with words such as "was" and "warned". (btw, those would be past tense replacements for the underlined words in this sentence.) You need to keep your narration in one tense or the other. Past tense is usually more prefer, so I suggest that you go with that.

Just watch the tenses and make sure you don't leave out words. Well, see you next chapter!