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    Default Yu-Gi-Oh: Sister of Anansi

    NOTICE: The title is a working one,anyone who has a better idea can PM me.

    Like Snakes N' Legends' fanfic,Shadows of the Past,this is also a spin-off fanfic of Venusaur's Yu-Gi-Oh Junior series. Unlike Snakes' fanfic,there won't be as much appearance from the main characters(except for maybe Siegfried) because this is an event that happens around the time of Mandate of Heaven,in another location. It also will feature one of the characters that will be in my upcoming fanfic series,Yu-Gi-Oh Solar. Her first appearance will be in the first story,Heart of the Dragon. Don't worry,I'll give you ample warning as to when this fanfic will be posted.

    The first duel will use the rules of Venusaur's first two fanfics,the second will use Battle City Rules,but the rest of them will use the rules from Venusaur's Mandate of Heaven,so be sure to check out his author's notes for that story if you need help understanding it. Please do not complain about my inaccuracies of the game.

    Also,if I mess up with the comma and don't put a space after it,be merciful. I'm trying to wean myself of not putting spaces after the comma in my story,because I tend to type all my writing with closed commas. Improper grammar,I know,but I've had it as a quirk for so long it hurts.

    Anyways,enjoy the ride.

    EDIT: Found out that another fanfic was already titled "YuGiOh Advanced",so I had to change the title of my series.
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    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Default Yu-Gi-Oh: Sister of Anansi

    Notice: First,please don't complain if you see a mess in the beginning - I am cut and pasting this from text files on my hard drive,so it's a pain to edit. Second,I'm still new to posting stories on the forum. Thank you for your patience. Also,I'll have quizzes like Venusaur's,and the winner gets a fanfic prize,like his stories. I'll send a notice as to when the first quiz will happen.

    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    DISCLAIMER: Some characters and most of the cards from this fanfic are the property of Brian Corvello, aka "Venusaur" of the Pokemasters fanfiction forums. His "Yu-Gi-Oh Jr." stories are the setting of this fanfic. Lina Mystara is my own creation and part of the "Yu-Gi-Oh Advanced" stories. Diane Arachne is also my creation. Yu-Gi-Oh and the cards that are there are property of Konami Inc. and Kuziko Takahashi. No credit has been stolen from the proper creators.

    Prologue: A Pegasus of a Different Color



    "Me? Up to something? I suppose it might be possible. It may well be Yugi, that I lured you and your friends into some inescapable death trap here, with every intent of tearing your souls from your bodies and casting them into the fiery depths of Hell...But one would think that THAT is the least likely scenario, and I’m really just a harmless woman who loves to play Duel Monsters."

    Anastasia Pegasus, "Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Legacy of the Duelist"



    Long ago, a young man by the name of Maxmillion Pegasus created a beautiful trading card game where players pitted their wits against each other by unleashing monsters, magic, and traps. This game was called "Magic and Wizards," but he dropped the name for a more flamboyant one - Duel Monsters.

    Few knew the method to Maxmillion's madness - that he was trying to use the darker version of this game, played aeons ago, to revive his dead wife or some semblance of her. When he learned about seven magical items called the Milennium Items, he tried to steal one of them, a pendant called the Milennium Puzzle, from a boy called Yugi Mouto.

    By forcing Yugi to duel for his grandfather's soul, Pegasus thought he would win, because he also owned a Milennium Item, the Milennium Eye, which let the user scan minds and bare open the soul. But each Item could be countered by the other, and Yugi defeated Pegasus at his own game. Pegasus' item was stolen by another Milennium Item owner shortly thereafter.

    Two scenarios formed, and two timelines were created. Two dimensions, all the same in every aspect save their destinies, and two characters, one from each destiny, would be brought together to face a greater destiny...

    ~~+~~

    A red-head woman in a spiffy suit was checking over the devices. "Are you sure that this is legal, Phoebe? I mean, you went through so many channels and red tape to get the technology from KaibaCorp..."

    The woman in a black suit and wearing shades bowed her head. "Don't look at it as stealing, Miss Pegasus! I did make sure that the company didn't inquire as to who wanted the Virtual World prototype and the networking computer. Besides, this prototype WAS on auction..."

    The red-haired lady put her hands on her hips. "Phoebe, stop calling me 'Miss Pegasus', okay? I don't like being associated with my DAD too much, especially since Kaiba sort of has a nasty grudge against him."

    "O-Oh!" cried the woman, standing straight. "Sorry, Mi--I mean, Lina. I know you don't like formalities that much."

    Lina Mystara - Pegasus was her adopted last name - giggled. "Calm down, Phoebe. It's okay. So, old Kaiba sold this junk on auction, did he? I wonder why? Doesn't look like a good idea."

    "I dunno, just that he has wanted to get rid of it. Guess since he's putting up his new 'Virtual World...'" Phoebe marked the quotes with her fingers. "He doesn't feel a need to carry this old beta-prototype of his former Virtual
    World program. Especially now that his new program is going to turn the players into Duel Monsters."

    "Yeah, what a hoot," sighed Lina, caressing the tarnished steel chair. "So, this is the old Duel Monsters World device that Kaiba used to try out fifteen years ago? I can't wait to try it."

    A crack of thunder was heard outside.

    "Why not try it out now? I could get the system operational in an hour, " grinned Phoebe devilishly.

    "I dunno...I heard on the TV that there were supposed to be heavy thunderstorms tonight," said Lina, biting her lip. "What if something shorts out the system while I'm jacked in?"

    "Don't worry, I'll log you off if the computers warn of a prominent blackout," said Phoebe, grinning. "C'mon, try it!"

    "Weeeell..." mumbled Lina. She looked at Phoebe, then smiled. "Okay, just for a short time. Set it to automatic logout in twenty minutes." She took her Duel Monsters deck and shuffled it, stopping at her Toon World card, a copy which her father gifted her with on her 'graduation' from Duel Monsters training. "I can't wait to try out this card for the first time. From what my dad told me about it, it's gotta be good! Soon, the empire of Toons will be mine to command! Ha ha ha!"

    ~~+~~

    Lightning flashed and rain battered the windows of Pegasus' mansion in the southern part of Japan as Phoebe called down Lina an hour later. The adopted girl came down, wearing a more casual outfit. "I want you to send me into the virtual world like this, since I won't be very long," she announced.

    "Okay, Miss...I mean, Lina, " said Phoebe, typing something on the computer. "Everything's set, just get in the pod and insert your deck in the armslot there."

    "Good job, Phoebe," said Linal. "Okay, here I go!" She slid her deck into the armslot and closed it, then sat down in the chair and placed the helmet over her head. Gripping the armrests, she nodded. "I'm ready. Do it!"

    "Here goes!" said Phoebe, pressing a few keys. The monitor flashed.

    VIRTUAL TRANSPONDER ACTIVATING
    MENTAL FREQUENCY: 36.8%
    PROCESSING MENTAL DATA NOW...


    A bolt of lightning streaked through the air and slammed into the generator outside the manor which powered it. The electricity streaked through and siphoned itself into the device.

    The monitor went haywire. "OH NO! WHAT'S HAPPENING?" cried Phoebe. "Miss Pegasus!" She saw Lina spasming painfull as the device was crackling with energy. "AH!" Phoebe tried to log off, but then the lights went out. "OH NO!"

    "AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!" Lina's scream echoed through the small room.

    "MISS PEGASUS!!!" cried Phoebe, who flicked on a flashlight and aimed it at the direction of her boss' daughter. She found that the woman was unconscious and gasped. "Oh dear...Pegasus isn't going to like this!" She ran over and pulled off the helmet. "Miss Pegasus? Are you okay?"

    The moonstone pendant around Lina's neck flared with white light, blinding Phoebe briefly. When it faded, Lina rubbed her head. "Huuuuuh..." said the woman, opening her eyes. They seemed...different somehow.

    "Phew, I was worried," said Phoebe. "I'm sorry. I didn't know the generator would get hit..."

    "It's okay," said Lina in a deeper voice. "I'm fine." She rubbed her head.

    "Lina?" asked Phoebe, concerned.

    Lina flung out her hand and the pendant flared with light. Phoebe collapsed. Lina...or the woman who looked like her...walked over to the monitor and looked in the reflective surface. "So, this is the one I was given to," mumbled the woman. "Well then, I'd better start figuring out how to act in this new body. I can't allow anything to go wrong in my quest to find my brother...and the others."

    The pendant's crescent moon gleamed.

    =+=

    Lina rubbed her head as he opened her eyes. "Ugh...what happened? Last thing I recall was being hurtled through the virtual portal. Then I...blacked out." She got up and dusted herself off, then noticed her cards scattered about her. "Shoot! What happened? This shouldn't have happened! I thought that Kaiba made it so your deck was inserted into a digital protodisc on your arm or something!" She sighed and picked up the cards, then jumped back as water was splashed on her by a truck. "What the...?" She looked around and found herself on a street corner in a city.

    "What IS this?" grumbled Lina angrily, hands on her hips. "This isn't Duel Monsters World! It's a Terran world! What is Phoebe thinking sending me to such a boring place?" She sighed and, seeing people nearby, quickly ducked into an alley and held up a card. "Ryu-Ran!" Nothing happened. "Huh? Why didn't the monster come out?" She then noticed that her pendant was gone. "My moonstone pendant, the one I got from that strange merchant! What happened to THAT?"

    She tried another card. "Eye of Truth!" Nothing. "The Stern Mystic!" Nothing. "Gah! This isn't working! The cards are supposed to activate when I hold them up!"

    "What's the matter, missie?" said a sneering voice. "You wanna be like She-Ra?"

    "Huh?" Lina turned slowly about to see three nasty punks standing at the entrance to the alley. "Uh oh."

    "Hey, why don't we help ya?" grinned the leader of the punks, who reeked something awful and had both ears pierced and a mohawk painted in garish colors. He cracked his knuckles. "By giving ya a bikini! Ha ha ha!" The punks came forward,eager to tear Lina's shirt off her body.

    "Grrrrr...don't mess with me, punks," hissed Lina, balling a fist up. "I'm a blue belt in twae kwan do!"

    "Yeah, like we BELIEVE ya!" laughed the leader punk. "Come on, boys, playtime!" The three uglies advanced.

    Lina sighed and put her cards away. My cards aren't responding, so...guess I'll have to do this the HARD way! "HYA!" she cried, lunging forward. In an eyeblink, her foot connected with the punk leader's jaw, dropping him. The others gasped and backed up a little, but not fast enough to avoid Lina's fist and he ended up like his buddy. The third screamed and ran off like a frightened child.

    "Hmph, told you," grinned Lina, cracking her knuckles. "Now...somehow I ended up on this world, and this doesn't look like the Virtual World that Kaiba made in his prototype...so, either this is an alternate virtual world or..."

    She stepped out of the alley and looked at her arm. She sighed. "Nope, the world program is all wrong." She recalled the instructions that she gave to Phoebe before she had left the girl to fix the device - when Lina ended up in the virtual world, Phoebe would put a special communicator device on her wrist to communicate with. Sadly, it wasn't there.

    "Okay, two scenarios," mumbled Lina. "One, and the more likely one, Phoebe did a REALLY good job of screwing up the program so my mind is trapped here in this virtual Earth and it'll be who-knows-how-long before I get rescued. The less likely scenario...the machine projected my mind into a REAL Earth-like world and created a body for me. I'd pick scenario number..."

    "Two?" asked a voice.

    "Yeah that's...nah, couldn't be right. There's...huh?" She turned around to see a young woman standing there. She was dressed up in a business suit and had long platinum-blonde hair, and wore a pair of shades. Lina blinked and scanned the woman cautiously. "What the heck?"

    "Come with me, Lina," said the woman. "We have much to discuss. Very much to discuss."

    ~~+~~

    "Okay, this is getting too creepy for my tastes, " grumbled Lina as she was led into an abandoned warehouse. It looked like it had seen better days. "Okay, Miss Dad-Impersonator, who the heck are you? And how did you know...?"

    "Your name? Ah yes, that," said the woman, leaning on the wall and crossing her arms with a smirk. "I can explain. You see, I was the one who brought you here from your own dimension."

    "What? You mean this is another DIMENSION?" asked Lina in shock. She got skeptical. "I don't believe you."

    "Oh really? I thought you were the one who used to live with two brothers, one who loved dragons, the other who loved magic. Both are fantasy material, I'm sure you wouldn't deny that."

    Lina was stunned. "You knew about my childhood and my..." She hung her head in confusion. "But how...? Is this real?"

    "Look," said the woman, frowning a bit. "I know it's hard to believe, but you are no longer in your dimension, but mine. Trust me, what I did was merciful. Had that electric surge hit you without my help, your mind would have been rended to pieces by the lightning. Sending your consciousness out-of-body isn't really a smart choice in a heavy thunderstorm."

    "I...I know," mumbled Lina with a guilty sigh. She lifted her head and walked up to the other woman. "Who are you?"

    "I'm afraid I can't reveal my name to you," smirked the woman, lowering her shades to reveal a pair of green eyes. "It wouldn't do. If you met...certain individuals...and they knew I was walking about on the good green Earth, they would be pestering you with questions and my mission would be compromised. Just call me..." She paused and then smirked. "Excelsia. That is a fine name."

    "Okay, miss Excelsia," said Lina, marking the quotes with her fingers. "What happened? If this is another dimension, why is my body solid? I'm just a conscious mental stream of data, right?"

    "Well, not actually," said the woman, smirking as she slipped the shades back into position. "You see, I formed an exact clone of your physical body for this dimension. Once your mission here is complete, you can return to your own world, but don't worry about going back to your old body, the one I gave you is just as good, if not better, than the one you were born with. Oh, by the way, I think you might have to explain why you have another body and the first body is dead. I sure hope that you don't end up walking in on your funeral, like I did!" She giggled.

    "Funeral...you mean you're...?" Lina reached out and passed a hand through the woman's torso. She paled. "A GHOST!"

    "Yeah, that always freaks 'em out," giggled Excelsia. "Ha ha ha ha!!!"

    "NOT FUNNY!" shouted Lina hotly. "If you're dead...how come are you walking about here? Are you restless?"

    "Well yes, in a way, " said the woman. "You see, how I died really isn't important to you...suffice it to say I commited some very evil acts and tried to kill an innocent soul. I did so because I made a deal with Death himself."

    "You mean, Thanatos?" gulped Lina. She was a big fan of the Piers Anthony series called Incarnations of Immortality and Thanatos was the name given to the Grim Reaper. "He really exists?" She then recalled that Excelsia was the name of the horned pegasus-riding maiden who was in the second book of the series. Curiouser and curiouser...

    "Yes," said Excelsia, waving her hand sadly. "And I sold my soul to him, all for this stupid scepter." She held out a hand and a golden glow formed around it, transforming into a golden scepter with an Eye of Horus on the tip. "I made another deal with the Reaper, and this time I did it to repay Yugi for what he did to save my soul."

    "Wait, Yugi Mouto?" asked Lina in shock. "How did Yugi...?"

    "Oh yes, I almost forgot that our worlds have the same King of Games," grinned the woman. "I don't mean THE Yugi, but his son, Yugi Mouto Junior. I won't go into details - I still shudder about that day - but Yugi Mouto the Second saved my soul from being devoured by Death and destroyed completely."

    "That's impossible, souls cannot be destroyed," said Lina in disbelief.

    "That's what Yugi Jr. said when he faced the Reaper," said the woman, smirking. "But anyways, be that as it may, he saved my soul, and I spent a couple of years in redemption camp to make up for my crimes. Of course the crimes I commited were far fewer than my father's, but they were much more terrifying. I used this scepter to turn people who opposed my way into cards."

    "Whoa!" said Lina. "That's REAL magic!"

    "Yes, but then, there is nothing the Milennium Scepter cannot do, my friend," said Excelsia. "The reason I dealt with Death yet again is because I fear that something terrible is about to happen. When New York City was sealed off by the Shadow Realm, I did a little recon and found about..." She paused thoughtfully.

    Seeing that her host was preoccupied, Lina spoke up. "Uh, what does this have to do with me? And how did you...?"

    "Give you a body?" finished Excelsia. "As I said before, there is nothing the Scepter is incapable of. If I wanted, I could annihilate this entire universe and yours as well." She gave a feral smile which spooked Lina. "But I am no longer the wicked type, so I won't do something so sinister. Besides, in my soul-being form, I don't have the power to activate the Scepter's full power, and Mr. Reaper firmly established what powers I could and could not use when he lent the scepter to me again for the time being."

    "That's a relief," said Lina sarcastically. "So, are you saying...that you created a clone of me and shoved my soul into it with this rod of yours?"

    "Yes, that's the gist of it, and I did it for a reason," said Lina. "One, because you would have died if I hadn't saved your mind from the zap of lightning that hit your device. And two, I need your help."

    "And what if I refuse?" asked Lina.

    "Then you're stuck here forever," said Excelsia with a non-chalant wave of her hand. "I'll return the Scepter and you can kiss your world goodbye!"

    Lina gasped. "You wouldn't dare..."

    "Please understand, the Reaper is very strict," said the woman in a serious tone. "He let me use this for a few more days so I could get help with this little problem I'm having. If not stopped, it will not only send many
    innocent souls to the Shadow Realm, but then it will attack Yugi Jr. and his friends, and I can't let them die after what Yugi Jr. did to rescue me from oblivion! I can't..." She began to sob.

    "Oh...I'm so sorry," said Lina sadly. "Don't feel bad. I know how important your friends are. But...could you at least tell me a little information on the problem? Like why you chose me instead of someone else."

    "Because we are related, in a way, to Maxmillion Pegasus," said the woman. She sighed. "In Purgatory, there is a well that lets you see into other timelines, other possibilities. I usually went there to see what could have
    happened, had I not been in the picture. One of these possibilities showed me you, a young girl adopted by the great Maxmillion Pegasus and who rescued him from depression and sorrow. I feel envious, you know."

    "Of me?" asked Lina, cocking a brow.

    "You are the daughter I should have been," sighed Excelsia.

    "Wait,back up...you're Pegasus' daughter?" said Lina, taken aback.

    "Yes, but not an adopted one, no, I was his true-blood," said the woman. "You know, if I had given my father the love and attention he deserved, instead of bile and venom, I might have turned him around and then I..." She sobbed. "I wouldn't have ended his life in a mercy killing. My whole life was filled with hatred towards Yugi, unnecessary hatred because it was my father who was to blame for his own depression..."

    "Calm down, it's not your fault," said Lina, who was a little scared after hearing this confession, but held a brave face. "I learned about Max's scheme and felt anger towards him too, but I realized that he really loved his wife and wanted her back, as impossible as that seemed."

    Excelsia nodded and then put up a brave face herself. "You're right...anyways, I saw your history and how you became a great duelist, and I thought to myself This girl is a powerful duelist, I should ask her about her strategies some day. But, as you know, interference in the timelines is strictly forbidden unless it's an emergency...and boy, did I find an emergency!"

    "What do you mean?" asked Lina.

    "Well," said Excelsia, taking off her shades and pocketing them. "You see, Lina, a year back, some nutcase called Remi Harikof sealed New York City in a dome made of Shadow Energy." Seeing Lina's face, she smirked. "I guess you don't understand much about the Shadow Realm - this wacko actually summoned a Castle of Dark Illusions into the real world and used it to form a dome of matter taken from the Shadow Realm, a dark place of void energy, to seal the city from the rest of the world. He kidnapped everyone who lived there, except Yugi Jr. and his friends."

    "WHAT?" cried Lina in horror. "WHY?!"

    "Simple," said Excelsia, smirking. "This nut job was trying to release the ancient Egyptian God Set from his prison. Heaven and Hell were in an uproar when Set got released! Whoo boy, you should have seen the chaos in Purgatory!" She chuckled. "I learned about this whole thing from rumors and investigation. Luckily, some guy called Shadi helped Yugi Jr. send that evil being and his nutso minion Remi to the Shadow Realm forever."

    "This is so much to handle," said Lina. "What does this have to do with me?"

    "Well," said Lina. "I felt a little sympathetic for Remi. I was alerted to that fiend's machinations when he tried to use my evil side, which got cast into Hell, for his own evil plots. I snuck out of Redemption Camp a few times to check up on Yugi Jr.;I had to see if I could help him like he had helped me, even if all I could do was contact him in a dream sequence and give information. Luckily, I needn't have worried - he has pretty much improved in the past few years after he dueled me."

    "I see," muttered Lina.

    "I heard Remi's revelations and how he had lost his soul. I wanted to help him so he could be like me, turn good and stop worshipping that wretched demon Set. So I tried to search for his soul in an attempt to plea bargain with him. I found his soul, but..."

    "But what?" asked Lina.

    "I can't get it, I'm a soul-being, remember?" said Excelia in disgust. "No hands and I couldn't even appear to the person if I wanted to without spooking them. So I decided to bring you here to get it for me."

    "That...doesn't sound like a crisis to me," said Lina,deflated.

    "It gets better, or worse, depending on your take," grinned Excelsia. "You see, as I was studying the person who had the soul, I was stunned to learn that some dark evil was going to take out poor Sieg."

    "Sieg?" asked Lina.

    "Siegfried Kaiba, son of Mokuba and nephew to the great Kaiba himself," smirked Lina. "He was one of the people I had sealed in a card. I knew I would get old Seto PO'ed at me, Kaibas and Pegasuses were never good friends, but I wasn't thinking right in the head that day." She smirked.

    "You mean...Seto Kaiba has a nephew in this dimension?" gasped Lina.

    "Yep, a lot of info, isn't it?" chuckled Excelsia. "I did a bit more recon and found out the nature of this threat. Worse, I hear that whoever it is, they're planning to send a minion to find Remi's soul and steal it so that they can make the boy their servant. If that happens, we can kiss this whole world goodbye!"

    "So you want me to be a bodyguard?" asked Lina. "Why don't you use that scepter thingie to zap the evil? You said it could do anything."

    "Duh, weren't you listening?" growled Excelsia, banishing the Milennium Scepter. "I can't! I'm not even powerful enough to use the powers I had when I was ALIVE! And if YOU tried to use it, it would fry your brain! I did plenty of research on how the item worked before I tried to invoke its powers for the first time!"

    "Okay okay, you don't have to yell," moaned Lina, holding her head. "Please, I didn't know. I'm sorry."

    "It's okay, just listen," said the woman, tapping her foot impatiently. "I saved your soul from being deleted when the machine blacked out, you owe me." Lina cocked a brow. "And you won't ever get home if you don't cooperate. I'd love to not ask your help, but desperate times call for desperate measures."

    "I guess," said Lina, realizing that she was up against a wall.

    "And I know that the job I gave you seems minor, and isn't related to the main conflict, but I fear that if something isn't done, then Yugi Jr. will be in a lot more trouble than just facing the evil itself. He and his friends might be ambushed by the minion and Remi and might get killed! I can't let that happen!"

    Lina took this all in, then nodded. "Okay. Cut off the minor evils at the pass. I'll do it. But I have a bit of a problem..."

    "I know, you're financially deficit," said Excelsia. "In other words, you're broke."

    "Yeah, that's it," said Lina. "I can't help you if I can't feed myself or find a base of operations."

    Excelsia smirked. "That tends to happen when you get dumped into a new world. All you have on you is your dueling deck, which I also used my Scepter to transport. I don't want you to rebuild your deck from scratch, especially not your...Toon World card." She shuddered a bit. "Don't worry, I made arrangements for this liability. However, this is the last thing I can do. After that, you are on your own. I've already used up the limit of my duration with the Scepter a second time and I have to return it to its guardian. I also have to go and do something else, so I won't be able to contact you again. But don't worry...once you stop the evil minion's plan, then higher powers will assure that you get back home safely."

    "Okay,but how will you know that it'll work?" asked Lina. "If you are making me do this stuff on my own, how can you be so sure that I won't fail?"

    "Because I have...a hunch," said Excelsia, grinning. She pointed to some crates. "I've made provisions for you to survive for one and a half weeks on what's in the crates. There's also a job opportunity there. I'm sure you'll
    do well in getting the job - I've established your credentials." She smirked. "And I've made a few contacts so you won't have to worry about NOT getting the job. Well, that's it for me. Farewell!"

    And with that, Excelsia vanished.

    "Weird..." said Lina. She paused. "Why should I believe that ghost? Maybe this was just a weird dream..." She then turned to the crates and sighed. "But I guess it wouldn't hurt."

    She went over and opened the crates. Inside was a briefcase and a manilla envelope. She removed both and opened the suitcase, then gasped. "Whoa!" she said, looking at the cash inside. "I guess she really was serious!" She then opened the envelope and found a job resume form and an address to mail it to. "Well, I guess it won't hurt. I really need a job right now, even with the money I have, and if that ghost was right, I'll need to take this job to stop the evil that is going to ambush Yugi's son."

    ~~+~~

    Using the money she had obtained, she rented a room in a nearby hotel and purchased a backpack and enough supplies for a week. She then settled down and waited. During that time, she checked out the local game shops for information on Duel Monsters, her passion, and was surprised to find a whole set of new cards which she had never heard of before.

    I wonder if Max could make these if I get back to my world, thought Lina. Some of these are just plain powerful! This Shield of St. George, for instance, would make any dragon duelist think twice about attacking. If my little brother ever became a duelist...I wonder what he's doing right now?

    Three days after she had sent in the job resume, a letter came back to her and requested her presence at an interview on that very day. "That was quick," she muttered. "Well, better get ready." She spent the rest of the morning primping and fixing her interview outfit - a white suit that was similar to her foster father's outfit that she had purchased along with some other clothes yesterday.

    She arrived at the place of the interview and met with the secretary. "I'm here to meet with a Mr. Greeton," said Lina to the woman behind the desk.

    "Ah yes, Miss Mystara," said the secretary, nodding. "Sit down, he'll be with you in a minute."

    Lina sat down in a nearby chair and waited. She had decided to use her old surname, Mystara, instead of her current one, Pegasus, because she had a feeling that the people working at Industrial Illusions would be shocked to hear that she was related to Maxmillion, and she didn't want to have to explain why she had that surname and jeopardize the whole thing.

    After a few minutes, the secretary stood. "Miss Mystara, Mr. Greeton will speak with you now. Third door to the right."

    "Thank you," said Lina, getting up and entering the door. She made her way down a hall and entered the door that she had been directed to. She entered the office, which was posh as all hiring recruiters' are. Inside, a stout man sat at his desk, looking up when Lina entered.

    "Ah, you must be the young dame who asked for a job with us!" said the middle-aged man behind his bushy beard. He laughed. "Come in, sit down!" He motioned to the chair and Lina sat in it. "Nice to meet you, name's Alazar Greeton, I'm one of the company's biggest recruiters! I decide who gets hired and who gets fired, and all applicants have to go through a special interview test at the end to see if they are qualified. Are YOU qualified?"

    "Uhm, yes," said Lina.

    "I'll be the judge of that, Miss," said the recruiter with a laugh, picking up the resume and going over it. "Sit down, and let's begin the interview."

    ~~+~~

    Needless to say, the interview went well in Lina's eyes. Mr. Greeton seemed to be a kind person, but he was wary. He tried to trip Lina up with some illegal questions like her martial status, but Lina had spent a few years working for her father's company as a hiring recruiter herself and evaded the obvious dangers. Greeton laughed every time she answered and admitted how he had tried to trick her into blowing her top.

    Soon, the questioning ended and, after a short salary question, Greeton put down the papers. "Well, Miss Mystara, seems you've proven yourself to be a pretty good negotiator and communicator, which is what we need in this job you've applied for. You're also pretty good with children."

    "Yeah, my father..." Lina paused, then continued. "I worked at his company at some odd jobs, one was a booth worker at a gaming convention, so I had to interact with a few kids." She smiled innocently.

    "Good good," said Greeton, nodding. "We need more people like you. To be honest, I don't think that the boss was too happy with who we hired in the other positions. Oh well, what can ya do?" He shrugged. He got up.

    "So, is the interview over?" asked Lina, getting up. "Will I hear from you soon?"

    "Hold on, missy!" said Greeton, his eyes flashing. "Who said the interview was over yet? You've got one more test."

    "Oh yeah, you mentioned a test to ferret out anyone who wasn't qualified," said Lina.

    "Yep, anyone who refuses to take the test is immediately dumped from consideration," said Greeton, hands on his hips. He reached down into his desk. "You DO know that Industrial Illusions' biggest product is the game of Duel Monsters?"

    "Yeah, of course, who doesn't?" grinned Lina, patting the pocket which had her deck.

    "I see you've got a deck," said Greeton, smirking as he pulled out his own Dueling Deck and shuffled it.

    "You're challenging me to a duel?" grinned Lina. "Very weird way of hiring a person."

    "Well, normally I go easy on average applicants," said Greeton. "But anyone who doesn't want to have a friendly duel doesn't deserve to be hired by us! They'd have to interact with Duel Monsters daily, and if they hate the game, then it's THEIR loss. However, I'm sure you wouldn't mind a match?"

    "Sure, but I can't believe you hire or not hire a person depending on if they win," said Lina.

    "Ha ha ha, very funny!" laughed Greeton, putting his deck down. "But to be honest, I usually duel with the amount of skill depending on the job applied for. Anyone who isn't related to the game directly, like our secretarial staff,
    gets an easy duel. But I believe I don't have to hold back for your sake, do I? We got a reference from you saying that you are a pretty good duelist, miss."

    "That's a challenge to my rep if ever I heard it!" grinned Lina slyly. She whipped out her deck. "But I must warn you, I've never lost a duel ever since I got trained in the game by my father!"

    "Then, let's duel," said Greeton. "We'll use the special dueling arena in the back."

    ~~+~~

    The lights flashed on as the two platforms rose up and locked into position. The two shuffled their decks and placed them into position. "Since this is only a test of your skill, " said Greeton. "Let's use the Mark-2 rules."

    "Mark-2?" asked Lina, curious.

    "It's simple, really," said Greeton. "We start with 2000 life points each, and no sacrifices are needed to summon high-level monsters. Also, no life point payments will be needed for certain cards. If you lose a monster to an
    effect, magic, or trap, you lose 1/4 of the attack power of that monster from your life points. Finally, if your field is empty, your opponent gets to do a direct attack."

    "Hmmmm..." said Lina. She took in everything. "Okay, fine. But I'm sure to defeat you, even with these stipulations!"

    "Fine, then let's duel!" said Greeton. The holographic lamps lit up and the life meters were reset at 2000 as both duelists drew their hands. "And since this is like the interview, I'll go first!" He drew a card. "Ah, this will work! I summon The Stern Mystic in attack mode!" A wisened elf sage wearing glasses rose up from the floor of the arena, carrying an old tome under his arm. (1500/1200) "And then end my turn."

    "Should have put it in defense mode, Greeton, that was a sloppy move," grinned Lina as she drew. She smirked. "This is a good combo. I'll place a monster in defense mode and two cards face down." The tiles flashed as the cards were placed. "And that should end my turn."

    "Okay then, since you didn't attack, I will," said Greeton, drawing a card. He put it in his hand. "And I'll equip this magic card, Mage Power, to my Stern Mystic and put two cards face down. And since there are now three magic
    and trap cards on my field..."

    "You get 600 attack to your Stern Mystic," grinned Lina. Greeton gasped. "I'm not stupid, Mr. Greeton. I have been playing Duel Monsers so long that I know the effects of almost every card."

    "Hmph," said Greeton as his Stern Mystic was bathed in rainbow light. (2100/1200) "Well, now it's strong enough to take out whatever you have in defense. Attack!"

    The Mystic opened his tome, chanted a spell from it, and flung eldritch energy from his hand, which shattered the monster - a black-robed woman. "Thanks for wiping out my Witch of the Black Forest, Greeton," said Lina with a
    smirk. "Now I can pull a monster with a defense of less than 1550 from my deck!" She pulled out one of her loveable Toon Monsters, the Toon Summoned Skull, or as she and her foster dad enjoyed calling it, "Toon Skull", and then shuffled her deck before placing it back on the deck zone.

    "So what?" asked Greeton. "That didn't you much good, considering that I didn't activate your traps!"

    "Oh, but you did," said Lina, flipping her trap card. "Enchanted Javelin! This card will steal the attack power of your Stern Mystic's attack and convert it into life points for me, so now I gain 2100 life points!" The meter on Lina's side rose up to 4100. "So, you only helped me."

    "Oh," said Greeton. "Well, I end my turn."

    Lina chuckled. "It only gets worse, Mr. Greeton. Because now I'll activate this magic card I had set earlier, which you may recognize, since the former owner of this company made it!" She flipped it. "Toon World!"

    "Yikes!" cried Greeton as the book emerged and opened with a comical bang as distorted music came out. "I didn't know you had a TOON Deck!"

    "Ha, I modeled after The Man!" said Lina, smirking. "And now you know what's next? I'll summon the monster I got from your foolish attack...the lovable and cuddly TOON SKULL!" The funny-looking demon popped out of the book and did his usual funny-face routine, then giggled. (2500/1200)

    "Oh no!" said Greeton.

    "And guess what, my Toons can bypass your monster and attack your life points directly!" laughed Lina. "Go my Toon Skull, hit him with all you've got!" The mockery of the Summoned Skull launched its lightning attack.

    Greeton quickly flipped a card and a wall of crystal rose up around the Stern Mystic, absorbing the lightning. "Ha ha ha!" laughed Greeton as the Toon Summoned Skull was covered in energy webs. (1100/1200) "Thank goodness
    I had that Mirror Wall ready to activate, or else you would have finished me off in one blow!"

    "Uh oh," said Lina, worried.

    "And now I'll just wipe out that annoying Toon before it defeats me again," said Greeton. "Stern Mystic, attack again!"

    Once again, the Mystic chanted his spell and blew away the Toon Summoned Skull, dropping Lina's Life Points to 3100.

    Drat, I'd better be more careful, thought Lina. I got too cocky last time.

    "I'll just put one more card face-down and end my turn," said Greeton, smirking as she placed the card face down, raising Stern Mystic's power higher. (2300/1200) "It's your turn, let's see you try to attack again."

    "Don't think I'm stupid enough to attack again," said Lina, drawing a card. "Hey, but this might work. First, I'll summon Toon Magician Girl in attack mode!" The book spat out another mockery, this time it was a cute super-deformed version of the Dark Magician Girl. (2000/1700)

    "Bah, unless you have a Dark Magician in your graveyard, it's too weak to defend against Stern Mystic," said Greeton.

    "That's about to change," said Lina. "You do know that Toon summons ARE considered Special Summons, right? That means I can summon as many of them as I wish, or I could do a normal summon...like this one!" She slapped down a card.

    A large falcon with deep-pink plumage tipped with purple feathers rose from the ground with a screech. (1100/1000)

    "Meet Tornado Bird, Greeton," said Lina with a smirk. "When I summon him, his powerful wings send two magic or trap cards back to your hand, so I activate his effect to blow away your Tornado Wall and your Mage Power!" The bird flapped its wings with a cry and the Mirror Wall vanished. Stern Mystic also grew weaker. (1500/1200)

    "Big deal, you won't defeat me," said Greeton.

    "Oh no?" asked Lina. "You forgot that Toon Magician Girl can also attack directly! Toon Magic Attack!"

    The girl grinned and flung her staff out, launching glowing stars...which rebounded off a mirror.

    "Nice try, but my Mirror Force will..." laughed Greeton.

    "Fail," said Lina, flipping her other card. "I activate counter trap, Seven Tools of the Bandit!"

    "No!" shouted Greeton in horror.

    "Since I don't have to pay 1000 life points, I get to use this effect, " said Lina with a cackle. "And it destroys the trap card that you activate, meaning your Mirror Force is toast!"

    The stars flew back towards Greeton, smashed through the window of light, and slammed into him, dropping his life points to zero. The arena deactivated and the duel ended with Lina the winner.

    "Amazing...I never had the chance to stand against a Toon deck," gasped Greeton. Looking at Lina, he laughed. "Wa ha ha! You sure showed me up, Miss Mystara! You're more than qualified for the job!"

    "Great, when do I start?" asked Lina as she packed up her cards.

    "You'll get a package tomorrow morning with instructions," said Greeton, putting away his cards. He walked up and shook Lina's hand. "Welcome to the company, Lina Mystara!"

    "Thanks," said Lina. "I hope that my future duels are a LOT more exciting than that."

    "I assure you, they will be," grinned Greeton. "Great duelists have been hired into the other positions and I'm sure they'll give you more than a challenge!"

    After Lina left the building, Alazar Greeton went up to his secretary. "Who was that girl?" asked the secretary.

    "Our new Duelist Camp counselor, Maria," grinned Greeton. "Contact Lillith, our boss. She deserves to know that the reference she gave to us was perfect - this woman is an excellent duelist."

    "As you wish, Mr. Greeton," said Maria, picking up the phone and punching in a number.

    ~~+~~

    As promised, the next day, Lina got a package which had instructions. According to the instructions, she would go to a place called Duelist Camp to train for a counselor job. Camp counselors would control a dorm of kids who
    were to be taken care of for two months.

    "Well, I don't know why I'm doing this, but if that ghost was honest," said Lina. "Then she couldn't be wrong with this opportunity, even if it is just a camp counselor job..."

    Little did she know that it wasn't going to be an ordinary job...

    To be continued...

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    IN THE NEXT CHAPTER: We meet the second child of destiny,the younger sister of one of Venusaur's characters from his newest fanfic,Mandate of Heaven! You'll learn a bit of background of this strange character,and you'll also see how my character gets connected to the other. Find out the revelation in the first chapter...The Black Widow!
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    I'm on the edge of my seat...

    And this is very flattering.

    Look forward to my PM. You'll get it soon.

    - Venusaur

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    I don't know how that message go in there. Sorry.

    Venusaur: Thanks for the message. I knew you mentioned that Anastasia would be in the fanfic,so I tried not to give her too much of a big role in this story. The reason I had her loan the Sceptre was because I couldn't think of any possible alternative to the situation I had written myself into,considering that Lina was going to get zapped. I could have written out something else,but I wanted someone to explain the situation,and that Sceptre was sort of a 'deux ex machina',along with Anastasia. I'm glad I didn't screw up the whole timeline, but I could edit part of it so that she goes back to the boot camp.

    Oh,and later,Lina discovers her ghost savior's TRUE name. She duels a nasty kid who is hurting her charge and halfway through,she mentions being Pegasus' daughter,causing everyone to freak and shun her. Diane then explains what happened and why Pegasus was a taboo name.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Good.

    By the way, her name is spelled "Anastasia". I am very surprised why no has yet discovered where I got that name from, by the way.

    My last name is "Corvello", not Corvoli, so I'd appreciate if you'd edit that.

    Incidentally, the quote in your signature is wrong. When Pegasus meets Kaiba:

    Pegasus: "Well, if it isn't my old friend Kaiba-boy!"
    Kaiba (annoyed): "We were never friends, Pegasus, so don't pretend that we were."

    Incidentally, I have to wonder what the rest of our heroine's deck is like. She seems to favor the Toon Monsters that her father had, but I have to wonder... is Relinquished in her deck? That doesn't seem like the type of creature that one of the good guys would use (heck, Toons are pretty nasty creatures themselves).

    But if she IS going to set herself apart from Pegasus, she might have to decide on a new theme entirely to keep herself from being shunned...

    Will any of my predictions prove correct? Only time will tell.


    Later.

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    By the way, her name is spelled "Anastasia". I am very surprised why no has yet discovered where I got that name from, by the way.
    I apologize. I fixed that error in my second chapter. As for the name origin,I think I knew all along that Anastasia was the daughter of one of the Russian Czars during the Communist overthrow - she got herself drawn and quartered or something equally grisly.

    My last name is "Corvello", not Corvoli, so I'd appreciate if you'd edit that.
    I'm sorry,Brian. I'll fix that part right away.

    Incidentally, the quote in your signature is wrong. When Pegasus meets Kaiba:
    Man,I can't even get a quote from a movie which I saw only days ago! I hate me! I edited that quote out and put in a new one. The Pegasus-Kaiba rematch was the best part of the movie!

    Incidentally, I have to wonder what the rest of our heroine's deck is like. She seems to favor the Toon Monsters that her (AN: FOSTER)father had, but I have to wonder... is Relinquished in her deck? That doesn't seem like the type of creature that one of the good guys would use (heck, Toons are pretty nasty creatures themselves).
    To answer you,no,that one-eyed horror show reject is NOT in her deck. In fact,in Heart of the Dragon's climax,those cards are...well,if I spoiled it for you,I'd have to kill you. :gun:

    But if she IS going to set herself apart from Pegasus, she might have to decide on a new theme entirely to keep herself from being shunned...
    Didn't you have a duelist use a Toon Deck,and didn't you mention that Toons were in an article that Mary read? I'm sure that just because she uses a Toon Deck doesn't mean that everyone will hate her. Besides,you didn't have Anastasia use a Toon Deck,and very few people knew what her deck was(only Yugi and his friends) so I'm sure that nobody will connect Toon monsters with Anastasia. Besides,that incident I'll put in the story will only last for a short period of time,before it's forgotten.
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Well,I promised to update and I have. Here's chapter one of the story. Please note that I don't plan to update EVERY day - sometimes I'll get in a slump and won't update for days! But I did promise I'd update at least once a week,okay?

    BTW,if anyone is interested,Pokémon FireRed and LeafGreen came out today.

    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 1: The Black Widow


    “Okay, Yugi. Two possible scenarios. The less likely one is Shelob is a man-eating predator that I caught in the jungles of South America, and whom I offered a chance for easier meals if she were to work for me here…”

    “You’re creeping me out, Sieg."

    “The more likely scenario is that she’s just an elite member of the Centurions with some special technological accessories who’s trained in the art of intimidation. Now, I won’t confirm or deny either scenario, but you know me pretty well, Yugi. Draw your own conclusions."

    - Siegfried and Yugi Jr., "Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: The Mandate of Heaven" -



    The young Asiatic girl with twin brown pigtails and brown eyes stood in awe as she watched the final Duel Monsters match of the Golden Scarab Cup come to a finale. Her big sister, as usual, was beating the snot out of the opponent, who was a frumpish middle-aged man with a bowl-cut of cerulean hair and horn-rimmed spectacles.

    The man sighed as he drew a card. "Give it up, Weevil," laughed the Asiatic young woman with short black hair tied back in a tight braid. She wore a purplish sweater with a blood-red hourglass on the front. She flicked her wrist with a sinister smirk. "Your Ultimate Great Moth has been destroyed before it could even hatch from its cocoon! It's only a matter of time before I crush the rest of your pathetic life points."

    Weevil Underwood, once a mighty Duelist, trembled as he examined his card, but put on a brave face as he slid it into his withered hand. "You may act tough, Black Widow," wheezed the fallen regional champion. "And I may be no match against normal duelists...but I am still the greatest Insect Duelist in the world! Not even you can defeat me, what you did to stop my Great Moth was mere serendipity!" He pulled out another card.

    "Ha! My big sis is gonna kick you across the field, you has-been!" laughed the little girl.

    "Shut up, vermin, I'll deal with you soon enough," hissed Weevil, slapping down the card onto the dueling console. "I play Monster Reborn to bring back my Hunter Spider!" A hideous striped spider rose up onto the field. "And now, I'll play Insect Imitation to sacrifice my Hunter Spider and summon my rarest card...INSECT PRINCESS!"

    The spider crumbled back into pixels as a beautiful fairy princess with gossamer wings and butterfly feelers emerged.

    "Now watch as her special effect activates, forcing all of your Insects into attack mode!" laughed Weevil, pointing as Sheena's Man-Eater Bug and Kumotoko rose up. "Ha ha ha, those two weaklings are nothing. Finish it, my princess!"

    The Princess flung out her hands and sparkling dust flew across the field.

    "NO!" cried the pre-teen.

    But her sister made a small smirk. "Fool." She flipped over a card.

    Without warning, a giant spider web erupted from the center of the field and ensnared Weevil's princess. "MY INSECT PRINCESS!" cried Weevil in horror, watching its attack drop.

    "My Entangling Web trap card activates when you attack," said the woman across from him on the area. "It not only prevents all your monsters from attacking, but it drops each of their attack power by 500!"

    "Noooo...my trump card..." wailed Weevil, tearing at his hair.

    "And even though you negated my Man-Eater Bug's special effect, I can still use it," said the woman, switching her monster for another. "I sacrifice Man-Eater Bug and Kumotoko to summon Insect Queen!"

    The two bugs vanished and Weevil screamed as he saw the giant half-insect freak which used to belong to him emerge. He calmed down. "You can't attack because..."

    "I know, I need to sacrifice a monster to do so," said the woman, smirking. "But that's about to be rectified." She flipped over another card. "With this little magic card."

    Weevil paled. "No...not Snatch Steal!"

    "That's right, Weevil," said the woman as two ghostly hands appeared. "And you know what that does! I equip it to your monster and it comes to my side!" The hands grabbed Insect Princess and yanked her free from the web. "Then I think I'll with both monsters. First, Insect Princess will attack directly!"

    "AAGH!" cried Weevil as he cringed from the silver dust flung at him. His life points dropped.

    "And then I'll sacrifice Insect Princess to attack with Insect Queen!" laughed the woman. "Bon appetit!"

    The spidery half-woman grabbed Insect Princess and chowed down on her flesh, much to many people's aversion. Then it belched a beam of acidic spit that slammed into Weevil's pillar, dropping his life points to zero.

    "I...I lost again!" whined Weevil, grasping his head.

    "And the winner of the Golden Scarab Cup is...Sheena Arachne! " shouted the referee.

    Weevil sobbed, a broken man. He pulled something out of his pocket. It was a syringe filled with various insect venoms that were concentrated for potency. "I...I swore...that if I lost...my third duel, I would end it." He lifted his arm and rolled up the sleeve of his grimy shirt, pressing the needle to his flesh.

    "No, Weevil! Don't!" shouted Sheena angrily.

    "GOODBYE CRUEL WORLD!" he wailed, plunging the needle into his arm and injecting the golden fluid inside. He spasmed once, rolled his eyes over, and collapsed on the pillar, much to the shock of the spectators.

    "Uh..." said the referee, sweatdropping.

    "What a sore loser," snorted the little pig-tailed girl, turning up her nose.

    A long moment of silence prevailed.

    "Oh well..." sighed Sheena, shrugging. "Dibs on his deck!"

    Watching the scene unfold was a figure in a trenchcoat and fedora. "Interesting...she may be what I need..."

    ~~+~~

    In a nearby mini-mall food court, surrounded by Chinese food, the two girls were divvying up the deck. "Okay, so I get Insect Princess, of course," said Sheena. "And DNA Surgery...man, that card almost cost me the duel! It'll be a great combo with Insect Princess and Insect Queen. And those two Flying Kamikari cards would be great!" She tossed the rest of the cards to her sister. "Enjoy, Diane. Consider it an early birthday present."

    Diane sighed as she picked up the cards and flipped through them. "Nothing I want, except maybe these two." She pulled out a magic and trap card and shoved the rest into her pocket. "I'll hawk the rest at the local gaming shop. We could then get a bit more spending money so you won't have to work so hard next Monday."

    Sheena looked at her sister in pity and nodded. "I guess." She recalled the early years of their life with great sadness. Seems like yesterday when Diane was born, and yet she's become so mature...

    The two girls were the children of a young Chinese woman who had immigrated to the States twenty years ago. When she first arrived, she was approached by a smarmy rich man who offered her a job at his manor. Accepting, the girl was treated moderately well, but the truth was revealed when the man asked her to marry him. She accepted, because he was such a gentleman, and they proceeded to get drunk and...one thing led to another and when the woman woke up, she was naked and lying next to her naked fiancé. Two weeks later, she was diagnosed as pregnant.

    The jerk who had slept with her fired her when she covered it up because her illness and nausea was too much for him. Kicked out, the woman was on the streets and forced to stay at a homeless shelter. Luckily, the money she had saved was enough to pay for a quick trip to the hospital as she felt herself go into labor, and soon Sheena was born. Unable to support the two of them, the woman was close to exhaustion and always sick. Sheena was forced to become mature at the age of two, because the shelter refused to help them with medical care.

    Luckily, Sheena found a nice young blonde man when she turned three. He took the two to his home in the suburbs of Los Angeles and nursed the woman back to health. Two months after Sheena's mother came back to full health, the blonde man, called Karl, offered to marry her and give her and Sheena a true home. The two agreed and Sheena attended her mother's wedding three months later. Sheena's mother didn't want another child for a while, but after three years, Sheena asked for a baby brother, and the woman melted and agreed to conceive a boy with her husband.

    She became pregnant again a year later, and the child was born...another girl, much to Sheena's dismay. But she soon began to care for the girl and called her Diane after the name of a TV show hostess by the same name. (Ten guesses on who the hostess was.) The two hit it off and when Sheena reached puberty, Diane was like a best friend to her big sister. However, tragedy struck one night, during a storm.

    Sheena's parents went to the beach to swim, and a bolt of lightning hit the water, killing both of them outright. The horrible scene was relayed to the two Arachnes(Arachne was the last name of their father) and soon the two
    girls found themselves in an orphanage. The people treated them nicely, but Diane kept having nightmares about losing her mother and father, which made Sheena sad. She did everything to cheer the girl up.

    After eight years passed and Sheena graduated from high school, she took Diane from the orphanage and bought a dinky apartment in South Arizona, where they lived sparsely, but well thanks to Sheena's odd jobs which brought in some good money. Once in a while, a good job would pop up and net them a big gain, but this was rarer than a blue moon. Most of the time, they lived in semi-poverty.

    Sheena was saddened that she couldn't give her little sister big presents like the other kids at her school had, but she couldn't afford the rich prices that they boasted. She barely made enough each day flipping burgers at some greasy short-order joint or delivering magazines to make ends meet. She sighed.

    "I hope you like it, sis," said Diane sadly. "I wish there was a better way..."

    The trenchcoat figure smirked. "Hmmm...interesting..." He got up and approached the girls' table slowly, so as not to attract any unwanted attention.

    Sheena looked up and saw the figure approach. It's a creditor from the landlord, come to take Diane away! she thought in a panic. I tried to stave them off, but... She got up quickly. "What do you want?"

    "I have no ill intentions towards you, Miss Arachne," said the man, waving his gloved hand. "Sit down. I just wish to speak to you about your future."

    "Yeah right, I know what FUTURE you're talking about, and I won't let it happen!" shouted Sheena, fists up. "You'll have to fight me tooth, claw, and nail to send my sister to another orphanage!"

    The man chuckled. "I see you are as intimidating in your real fights as you are in your duels, Sheena." He smirked. "Relax, I have no intention of taking your sister away from you. In fact, I plan to make it so that you two never need to fear creditors ever again."

    "What?" gasped Sheena, lowering her fists in shock.

    "You're kidding, right?" asked Diane in doubled shock.

    "I kid far less than my uncle does, and he NEVER kids," grinned the man, removing his fedora to reveal a foppish sandy-brown head of hair and purple eyes that pierced to the bone.

    The two were stunned. "It can't be..." whispered Diane.

    "Siegfried Kaiba, top executive of KaibaCorp?" gulped Sheena. "Uh...sorry I threatened you there." She had heard stories of what happened to the fools who tried to hurt or kidnap Siegfried.

    "It is forgiven," grinned Sieg. "After all, I need someone with spunk and powerful duelist skills like yourself. I've been studying you ever since the Golden Scarab Cup ended its preliminaries, and your dueling skill in the
    Insect sub-type is unmatched. Even Weevil, who was once one of the greatest duelists in his day, perished." He chuckled. "Both figuratively and literally. What a sore loser."

    "You can say that again," shuddered Sheena. "But what does the great Siegfried Kaiba, who was once part of the Duelist Labyrinth tournament and got to the finals, want with me?"

    "I'm afraid I can't speak freely here," said Siegfried conspiratorially, looking about. "However, if you two wish to finish off your meal and come to my limo in an hour, I believe I can be more thorough there. If you don't wish
    to visit, that is fine, but I have a meeting I must attend in a few hours, so I cannot be delayed too long." He turned his back to them. "My limo is in the back alley, behind the parking garage."

    Slipping the fedora back on his head, he walked off.

    "Hmmm...I wonder what he wants," said Sheena cautiously.

    "Let's go see him after dinner!" said Diane eagerly.

    "You're right, it's rare that the head executive of KaibaCorp himself would approach a simple person like me or you," said Sheena, smirking. She slid into her seat. "Come on, let's eat quickly." With that, she dug into her rice plate.

    ~~+~~

    The two girls reached the back alley and found the beautiful black limo parked out between the trash cans and discarded boxes. Sheena looked at Diane, who looked back at her sister.

    "Well, let's see what this guy wants," said Sheena, cracking her knuckles and walking up to the limo's back window. She rapped on it. "Hey, it's us, the girls you approached in the food court!"

    The window slid down. "Oh good, you made it. I was worried you might forget about meeting me here. Come in, I don't think you'd like talking through the window, and the walls have ears." He smirked as the door opened up. "Bring your sister."

    The two girls slid into the back seat with Sieg. Sheena whistled loudly. She had never seen the back of a limo before, and she was quite impressed. It more than dwarfed all the stories she had heard about rock stars and their limos. The door clicked shut as Diane closed it. "Quite an impressive car you've got, Mr. Kaiba."

    "Please, call me Sieg, my friends do," said Siegfried, pressing a button. "Jensen, take us for a roundabout of the city."

    "Yes sir," said the gruff voice on the speaker. The limo lurched out of the dingy alley and out into the traffic, blending in with the myriad of cars that were making their way to and from places.

    "Okay, you've got us alone here in this limo," said Sheena, crossing her arms. "I suggest you start talking. Why do you want someone as insignificant as me?"

    "Insignificant? Hardly, at least in the dueling circuit," chuckled the brown-haired teenager. "I think you dueled quite well up on that dueling arena. Few could even match your skill."

    "Flattery will get you nowhere," said Sheena, a slight blush creeping up her cheek. "You avoided the question."

    "Yeah, why do you want my sis?" scowled Diane.

    "Oh, you two are putting the pressure on me!" laughed Sieg. "Okay, I give up. I had to bring you here so that we could be in private. What I am about to show you is a secret that nobody else must know about until I'm ready to spring the whole thing on the world. It's a little pet project I started right after New York got released from that dome of shadow a year ago. I'm sure you remember that little incident."

    "Yeah," said Sheena. "Every public, cable, and Direct TV channel canceled their evening shows to bring news of the event for a whole week! Not a single broadcast was allowed until the crisis was averted. It was like the world had ended."

    Sieg smirked. "Not really, but the world had almost died."

    "Huh?" asked Diane.

    Sieg lowered his voice to a whisper after turning off the speaker so his chaffeur couldn't hear him. "Listen to me, I am going to entrust a very dangerous secret to you two. It's a test - if your sister can stomach this revelation, then I am assured that she's more than qualified for the job I plan to give her." His smirk never wavered.

    "You plan to blab a secret to us?" asked Sheena, confused. "Of what?"

    "What really happened during that incident, below the dome of shadow," said Sieg. "But on one stipulation. You must never let anyone know the truth about what happened that week. If you are unsure of keeping your word on this matter, then we will speak no more of this and I'll drop you off at the nearest bus stop. However...I think I can trust you two."

    "You are putting a lot of faith on us, and we've barely even met," stated Sheena.

    "Oh, but I do know a lot about you, my dear Arachne," said Sieg, running a hand through his short mane of hair. "You see, I've had the pleasure of hacking into your file during the tournament and learned a lot about you. It's only fair that you know a bit about me as well, so that we can work on an equal footing. I know your dark secrets, you should know one of mine. But if Yugi, Shadi, or anyone else discovers that I told you, they would mindwipe you and then rend me like the wolves that I had almost be devoured by when I was dragged into that horrible place a year ago!"

    "What?" cried the girls in shock.

    "So, are you going to accept my terms, then?" grinned Siegfried.

    Sheena nodded. "Very well, we swear by the blood of our parents that we will not breathe a word of this secret of yours to anyone else outside of this back seat." She nodded to Diane.

    "Uh...okay, I promise not to tell anyone!" said Diane, biting her lip. "Come on, spill! What happened back there?"

    Siegfried smirked. He looked down and checked his computer. It blinked blue twice. "Good, I guess I can trust you then," said Sieg. "But be warned, this secret will shock you to your core. If you don't feel good after hearing this, then I guess you aren't qualified to be one of my minions."

    "Minions?" asked Sheena. "Sounds like we're being recruited to be assassins."

    "I meant you only, Ms. Arachne," said Sieg, chuckling. "Your sister will have to wait for you. But more on that later. And don't worry, you will not be asked to kill anyone. KaibaCorp isn't THAT cutthroat of an organization." He rubbed the back of his neck nervously, flashing a smile. "Now let me explain what really happened during that time." He coughed and cleared his throat. "You see, around the time that the shadowy dome encased New York City, I was busy at my job. I was in the office when four evil people broke in, slaughtered my bodyguards, and then knocked me unconscious."

    The girls shuddered, but Sheena recovered quickly.

    Sieg smirked. Good, she's recovered. That proves she is a brave soul. But it gets worse... "When I woke up, I found myself being confronted by Anastasia Pegasus, the one who had caused much grief for me and the rest of my friends in the Duelist Labyrinth. You see, she had conspired with dark forces, in order to get revenge on Yugi by killing his son."

    "You mean, Yugi Jr.?" asked Sheena. "I heard about him, he won the last New York Championships."

    "Yes, that was him," said Sieg, nodding. "He's as every bit a duelist as his father."

    "Whoa," said Diane in awe.

    "Anyways, onward," said Siegfried. "Anastasia laughed in my face and told me that she will make me wish that Yugi had lost that duel against her when she was done with me. Her minions chained me to a chain which was linked to a wench on the top of a cage and suspended me over a bit of vicious wolves which were rarely fed. She stole my deck and then proceeded to use it against Yugi...when I mean Yugi, I am talking about his son, Yugi Jr., who is my friend."

    "Oh," said Diane.

    "How disgusting!" shouted Sheena angrily. "But...wasn't Anastasia dead by that time? I heard in the news that she had died from a heart attack or stroke or something after the Duelist Labyrinth tournament ended."

    "Uh uh, one secret at a time!" grinned Siegfried, waving his finger. "Yugi defeated the monster...who was revealed not to be the true spirit of Anastasia, but a demonic part of her soul, corrupted by dark forces during the Duelist Labyrinth tournament. The rumors about her dabbling in dark magic are more true than you think." He winked.

    Sheena paled, as did Diane. "But...what happened next?"

    "Yugi rescued me," continued Sieg. "And then we worked together to reach the source of the evil who had brought Anastasia's evil soul back to life - a young man called Remi Harikof. He was the one responsible for covering the city in shadow and kidnapping the quarter-million residents and sealing them in a place called the Shadow Realm. You may not believe in magic, my friends, but the Shadow Realm is magic and it exists!"

    "Whoa," said Diane again.

    "I helped Yugi and our friends in fighting off Remi's evil," said Siegfried. "I even participated in a couple of duels. One was against a dragon duelist, and another was against a corrupted servant of Remi's. We played Dueling Chess."

    "Really? Dueling Chess?" gasped Sheena. She waved a hand. "It's pretty big in the area here, third only to Dungeon Dice Monsters and Duel Monsters itself. I tried a match with that game, but I stunk at it and lost badly."

    "Oh really?" grinned Siegfried. "Maybe I could teach you a bit in how to play that game...if you accept my job offer."

    Sheena froze. "Job offer? You...you're trying to hire me to work for you?"

    "She stinks at clerical work, and her secretarial skills aren't that hot," giggled Diane. "Once, she got a job at a place called West Telemar--"

    "That's quite enough, sis!" snapped Sheena, slapping her upside the head playfully.

    Sieg laughed. "Ha ha ha! Funny! No, I didn't want you for your business-related skills, Ms. Arachne."

    "Call me Sheena," said Sheena.

    "Right, Sheena," said Siegfried. "As I said, I'm not hiring you for your clerical skills. I want your duelist skills."

    "You want me to...duel people?" asked Sheena, stunned.

    "Don't you want to hear the rest of my story first?" asked the boy, rolling his eyes with a grin. "I might go off track, and I prefer to finish my story before I get into what I want of you."

    "Go ahead," said Diane. "I want to know what happened to that evil Remi guy!"

    Sieg chuckled again. "Okay, fine. We reached the slimeball and he forced Yugi to duel for our lives. It seemed hopeless near the end, but Yugi pulled out some card called Trap Jammer - I've heard of it, but never saw it in Yugi's deck until now - and won the duel and saved us. But then Remi summons this evil god called Set..."

    Diane choked. "You mean that Egyptian baddie who killed his own brother?"

    "You know about Set?" asked Sieg, cocking a brow.

    "My sister read everything in the local library, Siegfried," said Sheena, smirking. "She's pretty talented for her age." Diane blushed. "I've heard about Set too, I took a Egyptology class elective. Set was the god of storms and chaos, and Osiris was murdered by his hand. I remember a myth where Isis disguises herself as a poor woman and fools Set..."

    "Yeah yeah, we can talk mythology for ages, but I have only a couple of hours left," said Siegfried, looking at his watch. "Trust me, Set was NO myth, I saw the evil god with my own eyes - he is very scary! And he smelt like donkey dung!" He wrung his nose up. "Anyways, Yugi defeated Set in a duel and then this Shadi guy emerges - Shadi gave us crowns earlier which protected us from Set's evil power - and with Yugi's help, the two banished that god and Remi to the Shadow Realm."

    "So, that's when the dome crumbled, right?" asked Sheena. "Interesting."

    "We swore never to let anyone know the truth, for fear of causing mass hysteria," said Siegfried. "I don't mind not being famous for saving New York, but I'm sure the others felt a twinge of anguish. A twinge, mind you."

    "That's odd," said Diane. "I thought a big guy like you loved the spotlight!"

    The seventeen-year old chuckled. "Very observant, kid," he stated. "True, people in my position would bathe in glory, but I prefer to be humble, unlike my uncle. I don't like fame and fortune as status symbols." He shrugged. "But I don't mind being rich and famous as one of the head executives for KaibaCorp."

    The car turned a corner into another intersection and stopped for a red light.

    "Well, time to explain why I did that," said Siegfried. "I had to see if you would freak. We swore to keep the whole thing secret because we knew everyone would freak if they had known that some evil dude and some mighty god tried to take over the world and turn it into an Egyptian nightmare. But you didn't, so I know you're both brave."

    "Me and my sister have undergone much tragedy," sighed Sheena. "We lost both our parents and my mother was betrayed and got sick for many years before she was rescued."

    "Wow, both your folks dead, huh?" remarked Sieg. "Reminds me of my uncle and dad. They both lost their parents decades ago, and spent their childhood in a mean orphanage, like Little Orphan Annie. Then they got adopted by some cruel businessman and Uncle Seto got tortured beyond belief, losing his heart. But enough of my family, your family is more interesting. And I know that you want a better life than the one you have now."

    "We make it by," said Sheena with a chord of guilt.

    "Yes, but you wish for a better life, don't you?" grinned Siegfried. "Don't lie to me, your voice betrays you. You want your sister to be happy, and you want to live better. I can help you in that dream, making you rich beyond anything."

    "Impossible!" gasped Sheena.

    "Not if you work for me," stated Siegfried.

    "But I told you..." said Diane.

    "Let me reinstate what I said earlier," interrupted the young Kaiba. "I have NO interest in clerical skills, even though KaibaCorp hires many talented engineers and white-collar workers. I am interesting in your skills at Duel Monsters."

    "Why do you want me to duel?" asked Sheena, curious.

    "I am holding a tournament," said Siegfried, grinning. "But not just any tournament, it will be similar to Anastasia's Duelist Labyrinth. This is my secret project that I've been working on. I got the idea from Duelist Labyrinth and
    worked on it, but Remi interrupted my work. Luckily, I was able to finish it in record time, even with that distraction."

    He popped a DVD into the back-seat DVD player. "Watch this," said Siegfried, activating a remote. The two girls watched as Siegfried appeared on the screen, wearing a fancy Italian suit, and explained the whole situation. Sheena and Diane watched the video to the very end.

    "So...you want me to duel for you in this tropical resort which you created specifically for this tournament of yours," said Sheena, cocking both brows in intrigue. "This...Dueltopia place."

    "Yes, but not just as ANY duelist," grinned Siegfried. "I also took a cue from Anastasia's late father, Pegasus. When he threw his Duelist Kingdom shebang over thirty-five years ago, he hired certain duelists to be 'Eliminators', elite duelists who attacked the tournament participants by ambush and forced them to duel for all of their Star Chips. If the duelist lost, and he usually did, he lost all his Star Chips and was out of the tournament. Some of the Eliminators, like Panik - who I personally met - used fear and intimidation to spook the duelist and make him lose his nerve and the duel."

    "That's mean," said Diane angrily. "That's not fair either!"

    "True, but don't worry, I'm not like Pegasus was," grinned Siegfried. "I will warn the people who participate of the danger that awaits them, and if they are smart and doubt their abilities, then they won't bother dueling my Eliminators. However, some are reckless and will face them, regardless of the danger. Anyone that foolish deserves to be terrified, and those who are that brave won't be spooked by mere threats." He smirked widely.

    "Wait...are you offering to hire me as one of these 'Eliminators?'" asked Sheena.

    "Of course," said Sieg, chuckling. "Guess the cat's out of the bag."

    "So...you want me to scare the living ghost out of a few duelists?" asked Sheena, rubbing her chin.

    "That's right, but I don't expect the intimidation part to be the main part of the job, just window dressing," said Sieg. "What I want you to do is try your hardest to defeat and eliminate any duelists who challenge you. Those who win will win a great prize - a rare card from a pack which I would give you when you start your job, as well as gaining two levels to their gem luster." He paused. "I'd better explain that part - duelists will have a gem which starts with an orange luster. This will be upgraded through the spectrum as they win duels, from orange to yellow to green, and so on up to Gold. If they get a Gold Luster, they get to enter the finals at the last day of the tournament. Of course, it works in reverse as well, losing duels drops them to red and then to black - if they're black, they're out of the tournament and can not duel any more officially. They can stick around and watch or leave."

    "I see," said Sheena. "So, if they beat me, I give them two levels instead of one, like if a duelist was in the Green if he defeats me, I upgrade them to Violet?"

    "Correct," said Sieg. "You're catching on. And they get a rare card related to your deck. A double-prize, you might say. However, if they lose...no matter how good they've gotten, they are automatically dropped to black and are kicked out of the tournament. That's why we call them Eliminators - they eliminate losers from the tournament."

    "Hmmm..." said Sheena, rubbing her chin again.

    "Of course, you'll have to undergo some heavy training first," said Sieg. "First, you'll spend a month in Centurion Training. Centurions are the elite police force who will patrol the city to make sure that nobody tries anything funny, like cheat or use physical violence against another duelist. You'll be trained in martial arts, swordplay, and tactics I got permission to teach from the local Coast Guard."

    "After your training ends, normal Centurions undergo some serious training for the next month, but you will be taken straight to your 'lair', so to speak, and given training in your new job - I think I have something in mind, and it will require a lot of work in cybernetic technology and make-up, not to mention serious acting classes." Sieg waved his hand. "But, once you're done, I promise that you will become an excellent Eliminator."

    "But scaring people is so mean!" cried Diane.

    "Well then, perhaps THIS will change your tune!" said Sieg, taking out a silver briefcase and snapping it open. The girls gasped as they saw all the money inside, in rich crisp American dollars. "That's fifty thousand in advance, plus another thirty thousand if you accept the job. You'll get five thousand for each duelist you defeat, a bonus of two thousand if you do a good job is spooking them silly, and let's not mention the thirty-five thousand at the end of the tournament, once your job is accomplished. Did I mention perks and medical benefits?"

    "Fifty grand...in advance?" gulped Sheena. "But...how many Eliminators are you hiring?!"

    "You're the second I have talked to," said Siegfried. "I plan on speaking to another today, and seven more later."

    "That's fourty thousand bucks you're throwing away!" cried Diane in horror.

    "Ha ha ha, cute," said Siegfried. "But I don't think of it as 'throwing money away.' Instead, I think of it as an investment which will, in the long run, net me great profit."

    "Great profit in the long run?" parroted Sheena, confused.

    "Think of it this way," said Siegfried. "If you do your job right, we both win. Once the tournament is over, every duelist who has the cash will swarm to this place for their Spring Break and summer vacation! I'll make a load of dough off of them and they will enjoy a wonderful place which duelists will enjoy. You'll win too, because if you do your job well, I'll hire you on a more permanent basis, and you and your sister can live near Dueltopia. I've set up a place for most of my Centurions to live when Dueltopia becomes a permanent resort, you are also free to live there."

    "No way..." whispered Sheena, thinking about the possibilities.

    "Of course, I'll have to place your sister somewhere during the tournament, out of the way so she cannot distract duelists," said Sieg. "It's a small price to pay. But I've made arrangements to take care of your sister and any children of the Centurions."

    "But...I can duel too!" cried Diane. "I have a deck!" She held up her cards.

    Sieg took the cards and looked through them. "Well, I am most impressed," he stated. "Your sister taught you the game well." He gave the cards back. "Sadly, I can't change my mind. I can't hire you, because of child labor laws, and you would have no place to stay save your sister's lair, and you'd probably get bored. Don't worry, my company is allied with Industrial Illusions, and they've made a place where you can stay while your sister is eliminating duelists."

    "Aw..." moaned Diane.

    "Siegfried is right, Diane," scolded Sheena. "You can't go around distracting duelists, and I'm sure nobody would want to duel you because you wouldn't be in the tournament."

    "So, does this mean you'll take the offer, Sheena?" grinned Sieg.

    "Give me time, I need to think about it," said Sheena.

    "Why?" asked Sieg, pouting.

    "Well, this is all so sudden," said Sheena. "What if I refuse?"

    "Then I will be glad to drop you off. You can take the case of money as a charity gift, and we will never see each other again or speak any more of this," said Sieg. "But I beg you not to take this option, Sheena. You would be throwing away your ticket to a paradise of wealth and luxury, all in exchange for spooking duelists for a couple weeks."

    "Hmmmm..." said Sheena, wondering whether her host was right. This could be her big break! But something bothered her. "Yugi Jr.'s your friend, right?"

    "Yes," said Sieg slowly.

    "And I assume you're going to invite him to this tournament, along with any of his dueling friends?" asked Sheena.

    "Yeah," said Sieg. "I'd be a fool not to. Yugi is my friend and I'd want him to share the enjoyment I had when I created Dueltopia. Mary Wheeler, the son of the legendary Joseph Wheeler, will also be a part of the tournament. And they have two high school buddies called Peter and Clive. I'm inviting them too because they have became duelists after Anastasia's tournament - they have some pretty good cards in their decks."

    "Then...what if one of those four challenges me to a duel?" asked Sheena, smiling wickedly. "What if they ALL challenge me?"

    Sieg shook his head. "I made a stipulation that prevents anyone from dueling more than one Eliminator, and I've made sure that the locks to the Eliminator lairs will not admit Yugi and his friends again if one of them wins against one of you. That way, each of them may only duel different Eliminators. But you are right, one of them MAY duel you, Sheena."

    "And if I eliminated them..." said Sheena.

    Sieg scoffed. "Don't count on it! Yugi, Mary, Peter, and Clive are all excellent duelists! They've proven themselves time and again, Mary and Yugi in Anastasia's dungeon, and Peter and Clive in that incident with Remi! All four of them defeated the Dark Four, those thugs who dragged me into New York during that nightmare incident, and those four were terrifying duelists! I'm sure Yugi and his friend won't lose against you, no matter how skilled you are!"

    "Are you sure?" grinned Sheena. "You want to make a bet on that?"

    "No...but I see your point," said Siegfried. "One of them might be eliminated. But if I were to nix the Eliminators, I'll have to go back to that other person and tell him that the deal's off, and that would cost me!" He seemed a bit livid, but slowly recovered. "It's not like I..."

    "Okay, just seeing if you were serious, Siegfried," interrupted Sheena. "Just give me time. I need to think carefully before I decide whether or not to accept your offer."

    "At least take the case of money," said Siegfried. He turned on the intercom. "There's a bus stop ahead, Jensen. Stop the limo there."

    "Yes, Mr. Kaiba," said Jensen, pulling up to the curb.

    Siegfried handed Sheena a business card. "My e-mail address and work number, if you have any questions or decide to take the job offer. There's an info packet under the money, which will explain everything in detail. The offer becomes void in two weeks, so I suggest you decide quickly. Women duelists like you are a rare breed."

    Diane opened the door and climbed out. "You're a flatterer, Sieg," giggled Sheena, climbing out after her sister.

    The door closed shut and the limo drove off, leaving Sheena and Diane on the corner holding a briefcase. "So...are you gonna go take that job, sis?" asked Diane.

    "I might," said Sheena, mulling over her decision. If I take the job, then we might have enough money to live the good life until Diane graduates from high school, and I could send Diane to good schools and give her private tutors and she would become a pillar of society! But...what if I have to duel Sieg's friends? From what he said, they aren't pushovers, and I might lose my nerve if I face them...

    "Sis?" asked Diane, worried.

    "Let's go home, Diane," sighed Sheena. "And hope that nobody tries to mug us on the way." She hefted the case up.

    ~~+~~

    For the next two weeks, Sheena spoke nothing more about the money they got from Siegfried or the offer he had made to Diane. However, a few days before Diane's thirteenth birthday, Sheena had quit her job at the fast food joint she had worked, much to Diane's shock. "But how are we to survive if you won't work and you gave the money we got from Mr. Kaiba away?" cried Diane. Sheena told her sister last week that she had given the case of money to a good and charitable cause.

    Sheena just smiled and smirked. "Maybe we won't," she said wickedly. She spent the next hour comforting a weeping sister.

    When Diane's birthday came two days later, she stayed in her room for the whole day, sure that she would not get to celebrate it. "Come down here, you have to see this," said Sheena.

    "No! I don't want to come out. I'm just staying here, playing Dragon Warrior VII because the people in the game are happier than me," said Diane angrily. "I hate you!"

    "Okay, but I wouldn't be too sure about that if I were you," said Sheena creepily. "There's a brown recluse in your bed..."

    "EEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!" wailed Diane, dashing out into her sister's arms. "NO!" She then gasped as Sheena put a beautifully-wrapped package in her hand. "Huh? What's this?"

    "Surprise! Gotcha!" grinned Diane. "Happy birthday, sis!"

    "What's this?" cried Diane, letting go of her and ripping open the package. She gasped. "A Nintendo DS-X with sixty games downloaded onto it!?! But those cost an emperor's ransom!"

    "So I lied about giving the money away," giggled Sheena. "Actually, I used some of it to buy your present, and I stored the rest in the account I got when I took up the job offer. You'd better get ready to go to Duelist Camp."

    "Duelist...?" Diane then recalled the info packet. "You're going to Dueltopia?!"

    "Yep, meet the second of the new Eliminators, Shelob," said Sheena, grinning as she held out her arms. "Siegfried came up with the idea of expanding my 'Black Widow' moniker into a really frightening theme. Of course, I'll have to leave you for a while, but he told me that they are going to have someone come over and watch over you until you go to a special Duel Monsters camp in a month. This camp is supposed to make kids like you learn Duel Monsters tips that will make you a great duelist."

    "Like you, sis?" smiled Diane.

    "In a way, I guess," giggled Sheena, hugging her sister again. "But dueling isn't the only thing you get to do there. It has the regular camp activities like hiking and camping and swimming and crafts. Sieg managed to pull a few strings. The person who will be watching you for the next month will be arriving tomorrow, you'll meet her in the airport."

    "Okay," said Diane. "And I'll see you off, will I?"

    "You sure will," grinned Sheena. "Don't worry, I'll be fine. I'll send you e-mails when I can. Right now, let's go get some cake. I got your favorite ice cream cake, strawberry sherbert!"

    "Uhm...yum!" cried Diane, licking her lips.

    "And I even had them decorate it with your favorite Duel Monsters," said Sheena, winking. "Then we can spend the rest of the day at your favorite amusement park, Kaiba Land Las Vegas!"

    "Oh boy! You're the best big sister in the whole wide world!" sobbed Diane, cuddling up against Sheena's leg.

    "I know, and I'm glad you're so happy," grinned Sheena. "Just be a good girl while I'm gone, okay?"

    "Okay!" said Sheena. "I wonder who will be my guardian..."

    ~~+~~

    Meanwhile, in Duelist Camp HQ, Lina Mystara entered the office. "You summoned me, sir?" she asked. She was wearing a camp counselor T-shirt which had a picture of a Dark Magician Girl on the front.

    "Yes," said the reedy-voiced man who sat at the desk, shuffling his files. "Siegfried Kaiba, the head executive of KaibaCorp, has asked us a favor." He pulled out a photo and handed it to Lina. "He's asked someone to look after one of the campers before camp starts, because her guardian will be away in training for Dueltopia, and cannot afford to have her taken care of. She is a special case, you see."

    "Ah, I see," said Lina, looking at the photo. "Diane Arachne...cute kid."

    "She's lived alone with her sister for most of her life," said the camp boss, organizing some papers. "Her sister hasn't the heart to put her in a child's hospice until camp begins and she doesn't want to hire a professional housesitter, since they will be moving out of their place after the tournament. So Sieg pulled some strings and now I must send someone to watch over her or lose my job. You've proven yourself to be a good person to ask, considering how well you did in training."

    "Thank you, I'm honored," said Lina, bowing.

    "I am willing to increase your pay by 20% if you do this for us," said the man softly. "Sieg is as nasty as his uncle when he gets denied, and I know some of the other counselors have...issues, so I cannot trust them with the girl."

    Lina smirked. "Thirty percent, pluse all-paid expenses to go there, take care of the kid, and bring her back via jet."

    The man sighed. "You are a shrewd bargainer, Miss Mystara! Very well! I'll pay for the extra expenses out of my own pocket if I have to, but you must help me with this task!"

    "Fine, I'll do it, maybe the kid will be interesting to deal with," grinned Lina.

    "You will leave for the airport in two hours," said the man coarsely. "We need you there by tomorrow morning, to meet the girl as her sister is leaving for her training."

    "Okay, I'll be there!" said Lina, turning her back and leaving.

    "Shrewd woman..." sighed the man, shaking his head and holding it.

    To be continued...

    IN THE NEXT CHAPTER...

    Diane,meet Lina. Lina,meet Diane. The two girls hit it off and become great friends,but little does Lina know that a duel on the last day before camp causes tension between her and many duelists,due to a slip up! Can she recover from the shock? Find out in...


    Chapter 2: The Story of Anastasia
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    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    What can I say?

    You've taken a one-shot character from one of my fanfics and given her a great backstory.

    One little mistake you made though - To qualify for the finals of Duelatopia, a duelist needs Gold status, not Silver. Gold comes after Silver.

    But otherwise, great work! I can't wait to see what happens!

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    The plot of this has been interesting so far. I liked the unique background of the soon-to-be Eliminator and her sister. Things like that really help a fic. It's a good start in that regard.

    I do think you've taken the characterization a bit too far, though. If you look back at it, Sheena was completely uncaring about Weevil. I haven't seen someone take death so lightly since Ivan Drago in Rocky IV... and I think this was even more extreme than that. Surely she would've shown some emotion other than her desire to take his deck.

    Other than that, this is pretty good. Work on your characters, and remember to make them not only unique, but realistic as well. I'll see you next chapter!
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    Well... Weevil was a jerk anyway.

    Anyway, I am really liking this story; you have characterized the three main characters very well. It is obvious that you did some good research, since from what I can see, this ties almost seamlessly into Venusaur's fic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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    mr_pikachu,you're right,I didn't really treat that scene very well. I should have done a little better,like maybe have Sheena,try to jump across the arena to wrest the hypo from Weevil's hands,but she's too late,and then she gets all stunned and horrified or something, feeling a tinge of regret for taking his deck.

    Or maybe not.

    Anyways,I'll probably edit that part a bit to give a bit more emotion to Sheena there,if you want. But enough about that,I've got an announcement to make...

    In this fanfic,I intend to introduce three magic cards which will be shown in the new Yu-Gi-Oh that just aired,Waking The Dragons;this series introduces the premise that Duel Monsters are REAL living beings which exist in the Shadow Realm. And their Gods are three mighty dragons,with powers that can transform Duel Monster cards into even more powerful cards. I won't spoil the series,but suffice it to say that an evil gang is trying to steal a horde of human souls for their own evil purposes.

    The cards which I will introduce will be described briefly in the next chapter in a dream sequence that Lina has,and one will be given to Lina in the fourth chapter,next she faces off against a dangerous situation on the way to Duelist Camp with Diane.
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    Sounds interesting.

    And the next chapter of "The Mandate of Heaven" will be up tomorrow, and it will feature a duel starring everyone's favorite co-star - Jade Valentine!

    And wait until you see the new villain I've created as her opponent!

    Be there!

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    I've finally banged out the next chapter of the Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic,Sister of Anansi. Again,deep apologies for not getting this done sooner.

    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 2: The Story of Anastasia


    "Toon Decks can be very dangerous. Look. Clover spent 1,000 Life Points to summon Toon World in the first place, and an addition 500 Points to have her Mermaid attack. But in just one attack, she’s caused an even greater Life Point loss to Mary. Mary is going to have to be very careful..."

    - Yugi Jr., "Yu-Gi-Oh Junior: The Mandate of Heaven" -


    The small jet which was one of the jets that would ferry campers to Duelist Camp flew over the Rocky Mountains. Lina watched as the snow-capped peaks passed below her.

    "Well, this will be an interesting endeavor," mumbled the young woman to herself. She turned her attention back to the catalog she was bought in the camp's gift shop before heading out. It was a catalog of all the new cards
    she had seen in this world. Many of them were created by Industrial Illusions and had interesting abilities, like the Crescent Moon Queen, which could attack twice and had the same attack as a Buster Blader;or the Quicksand
    Trap card, which could paralyze all your enemy's monsters which were active.

    "I should purchase some of these cards and then make plans to create them when I get home...if I get home," mumbled Lina to herself. "Oh well, no sense in crying over spilt milk. Just hope Phoebe and the others think of me as dead. I wonder how they are doing while I'm out of it..."

    She put the catalog away, leaned back, and closed her eyes for a nap. "I'm a bit tired...might as well sleep off the remaining leg of the journey. I can't wait to see what sort of girl Diane Arachne is...*yawn*..." She then dozed off.

    ~~+~~

    Meanwhile, back in Lina's world, her body - possessed by a strange spirit - was sitting in the game room, slipping an unusual card into a folder. "Sorry, Sir Pegasus, but I need your company to make my plans into reality. Interesting how your name is that of one of our fabled beasts, the winged horse. Reminds me of my former life."

    Phoebe came in. Her eyes were glazed over behind her shades, as if she was in a trance. "Master, we've completed phase one of your plan. We've almost finished work on renovating the former Duelist Kingdom island."

    "Good, I am glad to hear that," grinned the spirit. "How is phase two going?"

    "The advertisements were sent, using the gimmick you demanded. I am sure that your fellows will no doubt be interested and come running like flies to honey."

    "Very good," said the woman. "You did well. Soon, my other sister and my family will be in the island, and then I can find a way to take their hosts out and capture their Items." She chuckled. "You did well, Phoebe. Report to me if there is anything I need to know of great importance."

    "Yes, Master," said Phoebe, walking out of the room.

    "Soon, I will have the Astral Items," grinned the spirit. "And then I will give them to Hades, and he will release my brother and me from our prisons and give us true bodies. Ha ha ha..."

    ~~+~~

    Lina had a very disturbing dream. She found herself in a Roman palace with silver pillars and paintings of Roman soldiers fighting against other Roman soldiers while the crescent moon shone on them. "This is a weird place,"
    mumbled Lina. She then heard a small mewl and saw a young boy wearing a cat-eared helmet with two kittens also in cat-ear helmets, one blue-furred and one white.

    Lina gasped. "A Cat's Ear Tribe? Alive and real? But...why?"

    The boy mewled and grabbed Lina's pant leg, pulling on it and pointing to the doorway.

    "You want me to...come with you?" she asked. The boy nodded. "That's odd. Okay, I'll follow you."

    The three cat-helmeted creatures raced out the door as Lina followed. Lina bit her breath back in awe. "Whoa..."

    The environs outside the palace were beautiful. The place looked like something from the Valley of Eden, with beautiful trees and bodies of water, and tiny villages with Duel Monsters fleeing for their lives. Mountains ringed the valley.

    "What is this place?" cried Lina. She then looked up and gasped in horror. She saw a dark cloud and, from it, bolts of lightning were raining down from it and striking the Duel Monsters, turning them to stone. One bolt hit the Cat's Ear Tribe and turned the three to stone as well.

    "NO!" cried Lina in horror. "What is going on?"

    Suddenly, a young girl wearing familiar clothing emerged and spoke in a childish voice. "It's the Darkness, come to destroy Shadoria and wipe us Shadorians out. It seeks to rule both our worlds."

    "Who...?" Lina whipped about and gasped. "Toon Magician Girl? You can SPEAK?"

    "All Shadorians can speak, Lina Mystara, one of the Chosen," whispered the Girl.

    "Shad--you mean, this place? Where you Duel Monsters live?" asked Lina.

    The Girl nodded. "You call us Duel Monsters, and this place the Shadow Realm, but in truth, it is another world like yours. Long ago, when the ancients unlocked the means to summon our souls from Shadoria, they created the Shadow Games. And now, something evil wishes to take control of us all and use us to destroy your world. You must stop them."

    "But how? How can I...?" She felt her body fading away. "Wait, I have questions!"

    "Save our world...Chosen One..." whispered the Toon Magician Girl as everything went black.

    Lina woke up in a cold sweat. "What WAS that place? And what did she mean by me being a 'Chosen One?' Darn, too much Tales of Symphonia!" The speaker crackled on.

    "Miss Mystara?" asked the pilot. "We're landing in the airport right now. Buckle your seatbelt."

    "Guess I'll never know now," mumbled Lina with a sigh, clicking her seatbelt on.

    ~~+~~

    In the airport, Sheena was saying goodbye to her sister. "I'll miss you, Diane," said Sheena, hugging the girl again. She was wearing a green sweater with a spider on the front.

    "You'll write, won't you?" asked Diane with a sad face.

    "I don't think I'll be able to send a postcard when the tournament starts, but we can still e-mail," said Sheena with a smile. "And I promise that I'll bring you a souvenir when the tournament is over."

    "Okay!" said Diane happily. "You take care, big sis!"

    "You too," said Sheena with a sigh. She heard the chime that meant that the plane had arrived. "Well, I'll be off. See you in about three months, sis." She hugged her sister one final time, tight as she could, and then left for the terminal while Diane waited behind, tears in her eyes.

    "Goodbye for now, big sis," whispered Diane. A bell sounded and Diane sighed deeply.

    A woman with short red-orange hair came up the hallway, dragging a suitcase dolly behind her. She looked over a photo and scanned the crowd of people, then spotted Diane and grinned, making a beeline to her. Diane sensed this and turned around. The woman checked a photo she held in her hand. "Excuse me, are you Diane Arachne?"

    "Yes," said Diane. She made a realization. "Are you the one who was sent to be my caretaker while big sis is away?"

    "Yep, that's me," said the woman, putting the photo in her purse. "Name's Lina Mystara, nice to meet you. I'm one of the camp counselors at Duelist Camp, where you will be staying in a month." She held out a hand.

    Diane took Lina's hand and shook it. "Nice to meet you, Miss Lina."

    "Just Lina," said Lina, chuckling. "So, your sister left already, did she?"

    "Yep, off to train for a full month and then scare duelists silly in a big-name tournament," said Diane, smiling.

    "Interesting concept," said Lina. "Maybe I should try it when I get home." She covered her mouth. "Oops, sorry! I didn't mean to say that out loud. I have a bad problem with keeping secrets."

    Diane giggled.

    "How about we go get my bags, then we'll go rent a car and head out for lunch before we head to your place, okay?" said Lina. "My treat, I'll even buy you your favorite dish."

    "Oh boy!" said Diane, licking her lips. "Yum!" She then recalled something and took out a key ring. "Here, you don't have to rent a car - my sister say you could borrow hers for the time being!"

    "Whoa," grinned Lina, taking the keys. "She won't mind?"

    "Nah," said Diane. "My big sis once caught me eating goldfish, but she didn't spank me. She just made me spit it out and told me why it was wrong. I sure believed her when I got sick the next day!" She blushed. "She may have some scary behaviors when dueling, but she can be a softie in real life."

    "Oh, I see," said Lina. "Well, I'll try not to mess up the car too much." She laughed her head off and Diane giggled.

    ~~+~~

    "Wow, what a tight ride," said Lina as she drove the red Porsche, which was painted up to look like Spiderman, through the street. She turned into a local drive-in burger joint.

    "Yeah, my sister used some of the money she got from Mr. Kaiba to buy that car and make it look neat!" said Diane.

    "Your sister got a lot of money from Siegfried?" asked Lina, cocking a brow.

    "Yep," said Diane, who explained how Siegfried hired Sheena to be an Eliminator. "He liked my sister's insect deck."

    "I see," said Lina, recalling how her foster dad showed her some of the security videos from Duelist Kingdom and the duels that took place - it was part of the planning stage of working on the Duelist Empire project. The first one Lina had seen was one about a duel between Yugi Mouto and an insect duelist called Weevil. "You know, my foster father showed me a duel between Yugi and Weevil back in Duelist Kingdom."

    "Did you say Weevil?" gasped Diane. "I know about him! He dueled my big sis just a week ago!"

    "Really?" asked Lina, cocking a brow.

    "Yeah, in the Golden Scarab Cup," said Diane. "It's a big tournament which is held in San Fransciso for all insect duelists. You have to use insect decks to be in the tournament." She described what had happened.

    "Oh, I see," said Lina. "So, this Weevil is dead." She paused to think. I wonder where the Weevil in MY world is now..."

    ~~+~~

    Some on Lina's world, in a place called Hachi Mitsu Ranch, Weevil Underwood sneezed. "I must be having pollen allergies."

    ~~+~~

    After having lunch, Lina drove the car into the apartment parking lot. Lina sighed and scrunched her nose up at the smell. The place was in an awful neighborhood, which didn't have pooper scooper laws or garbage laws. Garbage was piled all over the street and flies were swarming them. "It's garbage day," grinned Diane.

    "Ugh," said Lina. "I hope Sieg gives you a nicer home."

    "Oh, I think he will," said Diane. "Come on, let's get into our place, it's much nicer than out here."

    Sure enough, Diane's apartment was a much prettier place than the streets outside. However, it was hot. "Oh dear, the air conditioner must be on the fritz," sighed Diane, wiping the sweat from her brow. "This always happens."

    "Ugh," moaned Lina, following her charge's action. "Say, you have any cold sodas? We can drink them and watch a bit of TV before I give you some help in Dueling."

    "You mean you'll teach some advanced strategies?" grinned Diane as she connected a big electric fan and it started up.

    "You betcha," said Lina, winking.

    Some time later, Lina and Diane had finished watching cartoons. "I love cartoons," sighed Diane. "I never thought a big girl like you cared much about kiddie shows."

    "Let me clue you in on a little secret," whispered Lina conspiratorially. "You know Maxmillion Pegasus?"

    "Yeah, the former owner of Industrial Illusions," said Diane sadly.

    Lina grimaced. Upon hearing that her foster dad's counterpart in this world had been murdered, she went into fits. She still couldn't believe that Pegasus was dead. "Well, he loved cartoons too!"

    "Really? A big CEO like him?" gasped Diane.

    "Of course," said Lina, pulling out her deck and shuffling it. "Would a big stuffy CEO who didn't have a kid in his heart make a card like...THIS?" She whipped out Toon World, the copy that her foster father had given to her. After her training was complete, Lina received a copy of the Toon World card. Pegasus had copied it himself, putting all his heart and love into the card. He even made amenities so that it couldn't be torn or damaged easily.

    "Wow...Toon World," said Diane. "I heard that they're coming out with a whole set of Toon cards now!"

    "And I have them all," grinned Lina. "I loved Max, so I emulated his very deck."

    "Aweseome," said Diane. "I wish I were as good as you."

    "Let me see your deck," said Lina. Diane went to her room and came back with her cards, which Lina shuffled through. She shook her head sadly. "This isn't very good."

    "You...think my deck stinks?" asked Diane sadly.

    Lina laughed. "I'm not saying that, kid. You have a lot of good trap and magic cards, but the monsters...ech. They need some work." She put the cards down. "You don't have a theme."

    "A theme?" asked Diane, cocking her head.

    "Yeah, how you duel," said Lina, nodding. "Every duelist has some sort of theme in his cards, no matter how erratic. Yugi Mouto doesn't have a true theme, but he has a card - the Dark Magician - that he focuses on. Weevil had an deck focusing on insect monsters, Rex had a deck focusing on dinosaurs, Seto--I mean Siegfried Kaiba, who probably has his uncle's deck--utilizes the three Blue Eyes White Dragons. You need a theme in your deck to duel well."

    "Can you help me find a theme, Lina?" asked Diane.

    "Oh, don't worry, I've got you covered." She pulled out a pair of cards, showing an axe and a pair of swords. "Demon Axe - Grarl, and Twin Flashing Swords of Light - Tryce. Two Guardian cards. I bet we could make your
    deck into an excellent Guardian deck."

    "Really?" grinned Diane. "Thank you, Lina. You're the best!"

    Lina blushed. "Come on, let's get to work."

    ~~+~~

    The weeks passed swiftly for Lina - too swiftly for her liking - and still she couldn't find out if Diane was the one who the strange ghost had told her to protect or not. She spent some time going over e-mails and postcards with
    Diane. The first week, Sheena sent a postcard telling Diane about her training. The Centurion training had been hard for the woman, but she held firm and refused to let it break her spirit. Luckily, this harsh training was only for a week, then the rest of the month was spent training in Dueling, attending workshops based on Duel Monster tactics and mock-dueling with the fellow Centurions. The next three postcards told about these things and Diane really thought it was cool, so did Lina - she made some notes about her Duelist Empire Tournament, if she ever got back.

    Then the cards stopped and Sheena started to send e-mails. The last card said that she couldn't send any more cards for the fact that it might give her away as one of the Eliminators. So the little sister started getting e-mails from "ItsyBitsy", Sheena's secret e-mail handle while in her Eliminator guise. The first e-mail spooked Lina, because it had started off with a creepy intro:

    I will come and devour your flesh in the night,
    Sucking the blood from your veins with my fangs.

    None, not even you, little girl, can resist my venom!
    Lina had nightmares after that for the next two days, especially since she had taken Diane to the movies after Diane asked about why Sheena chose "Shelob" as her name. The movie: Lord of the Rings, the Two Towers. The scene with Shelob, the giant man-eating spider, attacking Frodo, was scary. Strangely, Diane was not spooked.

    Lina was okay for a week after that, but then she accidently stumbled on a fanfic site where the main characters tied up a "Mary Sue" and left her for a hungry Shelob, and she broke down into tears for an hour.

    Returning to the e-mails, Diane was pleased to know that her sister was now in Eliminator training. Sheena didn't give many details, but promised to bring back a DVD recording of all her duels for Diane's enjoymoent. Lina wanted to see that too - she was eager to see what this Dueltopia was all about, even if it was only an Eliminator.

    From what she read, Sheena was making friends with the other Eliminators. She didn't give any names, but mentioned their titles. One particular Eliminator she was buddying up with was a woman whose title was "Echidna." She was a female duelist who played a Dark Magician deck. Lina was intrigued. She recalled how Yugi Mouto loved the Dark Magician, the most popular spellcaster of the entire game. She smiled as she recalled her toon version of the Dark Magician's apprentice, the Dark Magician Girl.

    Diane was pleased that Sheena was making friends, and she told Lina that after Duelist Camp, she would move out of the apartment and into a special development for Centurions and Eliminators. She was hoping to participate in the next Dueltopia tournament, or maybe the third! Lina was proud of Diane's determination.

    Of course, Lina knew that Diane had no chance in Siegfried's tournament event if she wasn't up to snuff, so she decided to give Diane a bit of advance training before the camp officially began. After all, the headmaster DID say she had the potential to improve Diane's skills! So, one a week, the two would study up on Duel Monsters cards and their effects, or have an unofficial duel with each other. This helped both Lina and Diane.

    Lina decided to help Diane with her deck theme. After some heavy research and searching through the cards Diane had gotten as "hand-me-downs" from her big sister, Lina used some of her "Inheritance" to make an excellent deck, one which would work pretty simply for Diane, but also one which had a good chance of winning many duels.

    ~~+~~

    It had been a few weeks since Diane and Lina got together and Lina moved temporarily into Diane's home. She got to use Sheena's computer, as long as nothing was tampered with. Lina didn't really mind - she would just put stuff on a floppy and bring it back when she got back to her world. She and Diane loved to snark bad fanfiction.

    One author was being so lame. She gave this note at the end of one chapter of her terrible fanfic:

    Author’s note: I know the last chapter didn’t contain much, but I just had to set things up. This chapter will be better.... Read on...AND REVIEW!! It’s the only thing that keeps me alive! Keep me alive! I DON’T WANT TO DIE!!!

    "Maybe we should send the Reaper of Cards to kill her?" giggled Diane.

    Lina burst into howling laughter. "You're a typical barrel of monkeys, Diane," she giggled, wiping tears from her eyes. She checked her watch. "Oh, it's almost noon. You know, Diane, tomorrow morning we'll have to leave for Duelist Camp. Did you get your stuff packed for the trip?"

    "Uh huh," said Diane, nodding her head.

    "Well then, nothing more to do," said Lina. "Say, how about we go to the mall and have one last fast-food meal, then we can see a movie and play a few video games at the arcade?"

    "Oh boy, sure!" said Diane. "Then we can come back home and make fun of more badfic before bedtime!"

    Lina rubbed her hair. "Sure thing, and I'm going to prepare a tasty dinner for the both of us, our last meal here."

    The two hopped in the car and drove over to the mall. Everything went well, and Lina felt a little sad that this would end soon. I don't really want to leave her behind, but how can I explain that my life isn't here?

    That was answered when they were in the arcade, their final stop before going home. Lina was surprised to see a dueling arena in the arcade. "A dueling arena? Here?"

    "Yeah, they've just gotten distributed all over the world," said Diane. "After the Duelist Labyrinth, Industrial Illusions bought out the rights to the Dueling Arena from KaibaCorp and distributed it all over the world."

    "Huh?" asked Lina. "What about the Duel Disk?"

    "Duel Disk? You mean that disc toy that was shown off in New York before the Shadow Incident?" asked Diane.

    "No, I mean..." Lina paused. "The Battle City Duel Disks, the ones which snap in place."

    "Oh, the ones Sieg's using in Dueltopia!" said Diane. "I don't think he's got plans to bring them to the public."

    "Oh," said Lina sadly. I guess that KaibaCorp decided to reclaim all the Battle City Duel Disks and have everyone use the clunky arenas my foster father used way back when. That's odd, considering this is two decades in the future from my time! Surely they would have made Duel Disk technology more prominent.

    Just then, someone grabbed Diane's purse. "HEY!" she cried, running towards the punkish boy who had swiped her purse. "Come back here, you jerk! Give that back!" She raced towards the boy, who twisted about and landed a blow in her gut. She collapsed and began wailing. "WAAAAAAAH!!!"

    Lina hovered over her. "You did that on purpose, you freak!" hissed Lina, her eyes narrowing at the boy.

    "What if I did?" grinned the boy, taking out the deck of cards in Diane's purse and shuffling carelessly through them. "Wow, some of these cards could make me rich!"

    "Those are not yours!" roared Lina. "Give them back!"

    "Oh?" grinned the boy. "Make me. You punch me, I'll scream for the police and you'll get in trouble!"

    Lina looked about and cursed under her breath. She knew that she would be in trouble if she got into a fight here and Sieg would fire her for being violent. She knew that Dueltopia would frown upon violence, and Duelist Camp would probably be the same way. She then had an idea. "How about this instead? You were looking over the cards, you must be a duelist. We duel. If you win, you get to keep the purse." Diane gasped. "If you lose, you hand it over and turn your sorry buttocks over to security, got it?"

    "Heh, like I'm going to lose against an old lady like you," laughed the boy.

    "Old lady...?" hissed Lina, her eye twitching. She smirked. "I'm not old. I'm pretty young, and I will show you how young I am, once I kick your butt on the arena!"

    "Fine!" grinned the boy. "We'll use the Battle City rules! You're going down, woman!"

    ~~+~~

    The two took their places at the arena, shuffled, and placed their decks on the deck zone. "Let's duel," said Lina. The life meters set themselves at 4000 life points each as they drew their hands.

    "I'll go first," said the boy. "And I play Vorse Raider in attack mode!" The giant beast-demon warrior rose to his side of the field. (1900/1200)

    "Good play," said Lina. "But I've got a better one. Behold the magical mayhem of...TOON WORLD!"

    She slapped the card down and her life points dropped to 3000 as the bright colorful cartoon book popped open.

    "No way!" cried the punk. "You have a TOON DECK?!"

    "Of course," smirked Lina. "I told you I was a young girl at heart." She giggled as she placed another card down. "And I'll summon this monster...Toon Gemini Elf!"

    The twin elf girls appeared with a flash. (1900/800)

    "And now they'll attack," said Lina as the two elves leapt into the air, much to the amazement of the crowd.

    "Ha, they have the same attack as my Vorse Raider, they'll destroy themselves!" laughed the opponent.

    "Oh, who said I was attacking that Raider?" grinned Lina. "I'll have them attack YOU!"

    With a cry the two elves teleported behind the punk and kicked him in the scalp, making him cry in pain. His life points dipped to 2100. "Oh, and they have a special effect, forcing you to discard one card from your hand when they inflict life point damage." The elves grabbed a card and cackled as it vanished into the graveyard. They then flipped back to their position on the arena floor.

    "You go, Lina!" grinned Diane. She had seen Lina's deck and knew what surprises it had.

    "Grrr...you'll pay for that," hissed the boy.

    "Whatever," said Lina. "To end, I'll set a card face-down. Your turn." The card appeared behind the elves.

    The punk drew a card, then grinned. "Say goodbye to your freaky elves! I equip my Vorse Raider with Sword of Dark Destruction to increase its attack by 400!" The demonic warrior's sword changed to a wicked black blade. (2300/1000) "And now I'll have him wipe out your elves! Attack the elves with Sword of Demise!" The Vorse Raider charged forward...

    ...and was crushed by a cartoon safe. "Boring," yawned Lina.

    "WHAT?!" cried the punk in shock as the safe opened to reveal a dazed Vorse Raider, which exploded.

    "You activated my trap card, Plummeting Safe," grinned Lina. "This card works like Sakuretsu Armor, but requires Toon World to be on the field. Not very efficient, but fun to watch!" She giggled.

    "You'll be laughing out your butthole when I finish with you," hissed the punk. "I place two cards face-down and end my turn." The cards appeared before the boy.

    "Really? Two monsters face-down? That's the lamest move I've ever seen, leaving yourself wide open for an attack," grinned Lina. She drew a card and smirked. "Very well, I also lay two cards face-down, and summon Toon Sorcerer in attack mode!" A goofy cartoon wizard popped up on the field. (900/1400) "When he does his direct attack, I get to draw a card. Now, my Toons, wipe out the rest of his life points!" The cartoon characters charged.

    "Not so fast, loser!" laughed the punk, flipping his card over. "You've set off my trap, Mirror Force! This card will destroy all your attacking monsters and spare my life points!"

    "Oh no, a trap!" cried Lina in mock fear. "Not Mirror Force! Whatever shall I do?" She put her hand on one of the cards she had laid down earlier. "Oh wait, I know...how about I activate THIS!" She flipped the card over. "TWISTED MIRROR!"

    "NO!" cried the punk. "I know what that does!"

    "Yep, it destroys your Mirror Force and shatters the monster you have on the field as well, inflicting 1/4 of its attack power to your life points! Say bye-bye to your Vorse Raider!" The wicked demon-man shttered and the punk's life points dropped to 1625. "And now you're very vunerable! Toon Gemini Elf, finish him off!" The elves kicked at the opponent again.

    "OFFERINGS TO THE DOOMED!" shouted the punk. White light enveloped the elf twins and they screamed as they vanished. "This card destroyed your twisted elves before they destroyed me!"

    "Tut, you are obviously a desperate man," said Lina, smirking. "But you forgot I had another monster on the field. Toon Sorcerer, attack directly!" The sorcerer cast a funny magic spell that slammed into the pillar, dropping the punk's life points to 725. "And now I get to draw another card, but...you won't be allowed to, because you used that Offerings to the Doomed - it forces you to skip your draw phase!"

    "Grrrr," hissed the punk. He took one of his cards and played it. "Goblin Attack Force!" A horde of goblins appeared. "Now you're in for it! Say goodbye to some of your life points! HA HA HA!"

    "Oh no, I'm doomed," whispered Lina with a smirk on her face.

    "Huh?" said Diane. "Why is she smiling?"

    "...or I WOULD be, if you hadn't activated this trap!" grinned Lina, flipping her trap card. It showed a goofy grimaced green head wearing a top hat and shooting green light from its alien-like ears. "Toon Mask!"

    "What?" asked the punk. "I never heard about THAT card before!"

    "It's a useful card when facing certain monsters," smirked Lina. "When you summoned your monster, I was able to activate this trap! I sacrifice my Toon Sorcerer..." The goofy sorcerer was sucked into the Toon World book. "And special summon a Toon version of your own monster!"

    "No way," said the punk in shock.

    "Yes way," said Lina. "Mmet the goofy brigade of...TOON ATTACK FORCE!" Toon World jostled and a horde of funny-looking cartoon goblins wearing the same armor as the punk's Goblin Attack Force. "And now you can't touch my life points."

    The punk freaked. I have to wipe these guys out or I'll lose the rest of my life points in a direct attack! Even if it means destroying my monster! "Goblin Attack Force, suicide yourselves on those crummy toon goblins!" The two armies came at each other with howling war cries, but the Toon Goblins had funnier cries.

    "Uh uh, you don't understand the power of Toons, do you?" smirked Lina. "Don't you realize that if a monster attacks its Toon Version, the Toon Version ALWAYS avoids getting destroyed because of Toon Physics? Fool."

    Sure enough, the Toon Attack Goblins were stabbed by the other Force's swords, but they didn't bleed, they just did really bad melodramatic death scenes as they chopped up their non-Toon counterparts. When the 'war' ended, the Goblin Toons got up with silly giggles and did high-fivers.

    "Yay!" said Diane. "You're the coolest!"

    "No..." moaned the punk. "I'm finished..."

    "That is what you get for messing about with the daughter of Pegasus!" laughed Lina. She then stopped. "Oops!"

    The thief paled. "No way! No frickin' way! You're...you're Pegasus' daughter?!" He immediately ended the duel by grabbing his cards and shook like a leaf in the wind. "Here, miss, take your dang purse! Just don't send me to Hell!" He tossed the purse over the side and leapt off the platform, twisting his ankle with a cry of anguish, limping off.

    The others in the crowd paled and backed away from Lina. "Wh-what did I say?"

    "Anastasia..." whispered the crowd, backing off and leaving in fear.

    "Who is...what the...?" cried Lina. She got off the platform, picked up the purse, and went over to Diane, who was on her knees and crying. "Diane? What's wrong? Why are you scared?"

    "Don't kill me!" sobbed Diane, grabbing her skirt. "Don't hurt me, Anastasia!"

    "Who the hell is Anastasia?" demanded Lina.

    ~~+~~

    It was a quiet ride home, and Diane locked herself in her room as soon as they arrived. "Okay, open up," demanded Lina.

    "No, I don't want to die!" wailed Diane.

    "Look, if I wanted to murder you, you'd be long dead and buried," sighed Lina, rolling her eyes. "I wouldn't have wasted my time trying to be your friend."

    "That's what Anastasis did to Yugi Jr. before he tried to kill him!" said Diane. "Act like his friend!"

    "I can't help you or explain myself if you won't explain," demanded Lina. "Look, I promise to stay arm's length from you if you tell me who this Anastasia person is and why she tried to kill Yugi Junior!"

    Diane popped her head out. "You promise?"

    "I swear on my deck," said Lina, nodding. "May the cards burst into flames if I am lying."

    Diane tip-toed out and went over to the computer in the other room, looking up a bio. Lina entered and watched the bio appear from the doorway. "This is Anastasia Pegasus."

    Lina dropped her jaw. "NO WAY!"

    "Huh?" asked Diane, turning around.

    "That face...I recognize it!" cried Lina, pointing at the photo of the platinum-blonde woman with shades. "She's the ghost who helped me get my job and survive in this world! She's a KILLER?!?"

    "Well, it's mostly rumor," said Diane. "But I'll tell you what I know from the Net and word-of-mouth." She sighed. "That woman, Anastasia, was the daughter of Maxmillion Pegasus. Maxmillion died mysteriously, and Duelist Kingdom was destroyed."

    Lina gasped. "Duelist Kingdom is no more here?"

    "Yeah," Said Diane. "Then Anastasia created the Duelist Labyrinth and had a tournament on it, inviting Yugi Jr. and his friends. He also invited Siegfried Kaiba and other people. The duel ended with Anastasia's death. Rumor had it that she had consorted with the Devil and, when you said you were Pegasus' daughter, everyone thought you were Anastasia returned from the dead like a zombie, sent to kill the innocent."

    "That's sick," said Lina. But then, old Ana told me that she was serving time in Purgatory for her crimes. I bet that Yugi Junior was the innocent soul she mentioned. Poor thing, no wonder she wants my help.

    "So...you're not Anastasia?" asked Diane.

    "Of course not," said Lina. "Do I LOOK like her?"

    Diane switched her gaze between the photo on the screen and Lina. "Nah, your hair is shorter and cuter. But you said you were the daughter of Pegasus."

    Lina sighed. "Hoo boy...how can I explain?" She rolled her eyes. "Well...I'm the adopted daughter of Pegasus, but not this one. You see, I come from an alternate universe, where Max is very much alive and well and made me his daughter and heir to Industrial Illusions. We were working on a new Duelist Kingdom tournament when I got zapped to this world. Anastasia begged me to help her redeem herself by protecting a certain someone."

    "Me?" asked Diane, curious.

    "I have no idea, but whoever it is, he or she is important," said Lina. "So, until I complete this task, I can't go home. Even now, I'm sure that my foster father is worried sick about me." She sighed.

    "I see," said Diane. She smiled her usual smile. "It's okay, Lina. We can still be friends, even if you are a Pegasus."

    "No, while I'm here, my last name is Mystara. That used to be my last name until I was adopted, so I'm now Lina Mystara, not Lina Pegasus, got it?" Lina winked.

    "Ah, I see. Our little secret," grinned Diane, putting a finger before her lips. "I can keep the secret!"

    "That's right," said Lina with a smile. "Well, come on, let get you to bed. Tomorrow's a big day!"

    "Okay," said Diane, stretching. "I do feel a bit tired. Good night, Lina."

    "G'night, my friend," smiled Lina gently. Her mind wandered back to her foster father and Phoebe. I hope that they don't think I'm dead or something!

    To be continued...

    NEXT CHAPTER: It's time to go to camp! The two girls meet some of the other campers and the plane gets hijacked by strange guys! Lina must wager her soul to save the future duelists from them! Can she survive,or will she need a bit of help to fight this dark force? Find out next time in...

    Chapter 3: The Curse of Orichalcos

    ORIGINAL CARDS

    PLUMMETING SAFE
    Trap Card

    This card can only be activated when you have "Toon World" on the field,and is activated when your opponent declares an attack. Destroy the attacking monster.

    This card was used in "The Mandate of Heaven",by the harlequin duelist Clover.

    Property of Brian "Venusaur" Corvello

    TWISTED MIRROR
    Trap Card

    This card activates when the opponent activates "Mirror Force." Negate "Mirror Force" and destroy all the opponent's monsters,inflicting 25% of their attack power to the opponent's life points as effect damage.

    Anastasia used this card when dueling Yugi in "Legacy of the Duelist."

    Property of Brian "Venusaur" Corvello

    TOON MASK
    Trap Card

    This card activates when your opponent summons a monster. Sacrifice one of your monsters on the field to summon a Toon variation of the opponent's monster.

    This is an original anime card. As of this writing,the episode where this is used has not be aired yet. A fake Maxmillion Pegasus uses this against Seto Kaiba during a duel in Duelist Kingdom.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Very good, that was an excellent chapter.

    Sadly, I must point out some mistakes that occur in game mechanics.

    1. It seems Diane is going to build a Guardian deck. The english name for "Demon Axe: Gnarl" is "Gravity Axe: Gnarl." Stay with english names to avoid confusion. (PM me if you want the website with the cardlist; oh wait, you already know about it.)

    2. The most serious violation you made: Toons cannot attack on the round in which they are summoned. All Toons follow this restriction. If you saw the movie, you'd have seen that even Pegasus had to follow this rule.

    3. I'm not sure about this, but I believe when Toon Gemini Elf damages your opponent's Life Points, you get to take one of his cards at random, not make him discard one.

    But otherwise, the plot is thickening. I can't wait to see what happens.

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    Sadly, I must point out some mistakes that occur in game mechanics.
    Understood. Since these stories are connected,your criticism is appreciated.

    1. It seems Diane is going to build a Guardian deck. The english name for "Demon Axe: Gnarl" is "Gravity Axe: Gnarl." Stay with english names to avoid confusion. (PM me if you want the website with the cardlist; oh wait, you already know about it.)
    Whoops! I don't know HOW I ended up using the wrong name for the Axe. Sorry.

    2. The most serious violation you made: Toons cannot attack on the round in which they are summoned. All Toons follow this restriction. If you saw the movie, you'd have seen that even Pegasus had to follow this rule.
    Okay,I'm NOT going to get into a winded debate about how you play Toons. PM me and I'll give you a link that shows a specific ruling about the various Toon Monsters that exist. If you want me to play all Toons the same,fine. I'll rewrite both chapters where Lina duels.

    Let me one thing clear though - Toon Gemini Elf,Toon Cannon Soldier,Toon Goblin Attack Force,and Toon Masked Sorcerer are special Toons that do not require Toon World to be on the field to summon,and I will make that point clear next time Lina plays those Toon monsters.

    :end rant about Toon Monsters:

    3. I'm not sure about this, but I believe when Toon Gemini Elf damages your opponent's Life Points, you get to take one of his cards at random, not make him discard one.
    Uhm,I guess I didn't have Lina say the effect properly. When Toon Gemini Elf damages your life points,you get to discard one of the opponent's cards at RANDOM,sending it to the graveyard. I'll fix that error.

    Sheesh,more work for me...oh well.

    TO EVERYONE: My first trivia contest will be posted soon!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Okay,I'm NOT going to get into a winded debate about how you play Toons. PM me and I'll give you a link that shows a specific ruling about the various Toon Monsters that exist. If you want me to play all Toons the same,fine. I'll rewrite both chapters where Lina duels.

    Let me one thing clear though - Toon Gemini Elf,Toon Cannon Soldier,Toon Goblin Attack Force,and Toon Masked Sorcerer are special Toons that do not require Toon World to be on the field to summon,and I will make that point clear next time Lina plays those Toon monsters.
    I'm very sorry. I thought the rules were the same for ALL Toons, including the ones that were not released in English yet. My bad.

    I guess I don't know as much about the card game as I should.

    - Venusaur

    P.S. Look for my PM. I have a suggestion.

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    Hmm. This is pretty good. The training was nice, and I liked how Lina and Diane bonded. Why does that one Author's Note look familiar, though? ...I have the strangest feeling that I've seen it before.

    I do think, however, that Diane accepted Lina's explanation far too easily. I mean, if someone you knew as an acquaintance (since really, Lina and Diane haven't been together for long) said she was from an alternate universe, what would you think? Role-playing can be a very useful trick for writing believable characters and scenes.

    Otherwise, this was pretty good. It was a little fast, but you got your point across well. I'm looking forward to seeing what danger is in store for our two heroes next... and what's going on in Lina's world! See you next chapter!
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    Holy crap ... I'VE become a grammar nazi, too.

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    By the way, Hack, I like how you use quotes from my fics to open your chapters. Do more!

    And check your PMs again, by the way.

    - Venusaur

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    Well,this was quick...we already have a winner!

    I apologize for everyone who wanted to get in,but the winner had a wealth of knowledge over the famous Duel Monsters creator,so don't feel bad. Here are the answers to the quiz for those who didn't get the questions:

    Q1: What hobby did Pegasus indulge in after meeting his future wife,Cecilia?

    Pegasus became a painter,and almost all of his works were focused on his wife,who posed for him as he painted her image on canvas. Later,he went back to painting to paint the images of the three Egyptian God cards.

    Q2: Which monster does Pegasus use which is called a Toon,but is not really a Toon Monster itself?

    Toon Alligator,which was the first monster Kaiba destroyed. Oh,and for the record,old Max put it in defense mode.

    Q3: In The Gauntlet Is Thrown,Pegasus uses a card with his Illusionist Faceless Mage to stop Yugi's Dark Magician and turn it against the Celtic Guardian(which was not dubbed and called by its Japanese name). What was the name of this card?

    It was Eye of Illusion,which he called "a rare card."

    Q4: In Kaiba's flashback of The Scars of Defeat,Pegasus calls a boy over to take his place for the final turn of the duel with Bandit Keith. What is the boy's name?

    I was unsure of this myself,but the winner did get it correct. It was Sam.

    I won't reveal who won the grand prize YET,because I don't want you to all gang up on me for favoritism. However,you'll see his works in Chapter 6.

    Also,he got the Bonus Question right,so I'll indulge him a bit,but next time,there will be a new rule: YOU CANNOT GET BOTH THE GRAND PRIZE AND THE QUIZMASTER PRIZE! If you answer all the questions,then you will be given the Grand Prize and disqualified from the bonus prize. The reason I gave this winner both prizes is because I have a hunch I know what person he'll write for,and I don't think many people will get the bonus question right. Don't worry,future bonus questions will be a LOT easier to get.

    The second Quizmaster Prize is up for grabs,and I'll let you know whose card isn't written for,so getting PM'ing and maybe you might win the second prize! Until then...
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    To everyone participating in the contest: The first quizmaster prize has been decided - the first card will be for Lina's deck. Don't panic,though! If someone else answers the bonus question correctly,then I will personally describe Diane's deck theme for the second winner.

    Anyone else who knows the answer to the bonus question above,PM quickly! Don't let Diane feel left out!

    EDIT: Sorry folks,but the contest is now over! We've found the second bonus question winner,who will be creating Diane's trump card. Thanks to all who participated,and keep watching this space for the next chapter,where Diane and Lina head to Duelist Camp and have trouble with plane-jackers on the way! :badsmile:
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    I'm very disappointed that not many people are replying to this thread,as many people are replying to this thread,as Venusaur is getting more attention. Come on,people! I didn't waste hours of my life to sextuple-post! Anyways,here is the third chapter(not counting the prologue) of my story,Yu-Gi-Oh: Sister of Anansi. Some familiar monsters are going to show up here. Oh,and this part is longer than my last parts,so part of te beginning is a bit rushed. Give me feedback,okay? Enjoy!

    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 3: The Trip to Duelist Camp


    “You sure don’t talk like Mai did, from what I heard,” said Mary.

    “My parent and I are as different as night and day,” said Jade. “She was boastful, arrogant, and prideful, at least until her duels with your fathers. I have chosen a different path – the way of the warrior. And its discipline serves me well. Watch.”

    She turned her head, and paused. A leaf fell from a tree above. With a flash, she drew her sword, and cut it in half.

    “Your skill with a sword has nothing to do with your ability at Duel Monsters,” said Yugi.

    “True, yet both require discipline and focus, honor and concentration,” she drew her sword and pointed to Mary. “Are you willing to accept my challenge, Mary?”


    - From "Legacy of the Duelist"


    The morning after the fateful duel that revealed Lina's secret to Diane, Lina got up early, washed and dressed herself, and quickly cooked a good breakfast. She had heard(and experienced) the horrors of airplane travel and didn't want Diane to get nauseous or worse on her first real flight.

    As she was cooking some eggs, the doorbell rang. Putting the spatula aside, she went to the door and opened it. A Fed-Ex carrier was holding a giant manila envelope and a clipboard. "Are you Miss..." He checked his clipboard. "Mystara?"

    "Yeah, that's me," said Lina, nodding. "Is that for me?"

    "Well, it says it's for you and your friend, Diane, but I can't open it," said the man. "I was given strict orders not to open it before I delivered it to you. Please sign."

    "Okay," said Lina, taking the clipboard and signing it swiftly. "There you go."

    "And here you go," said the man, smiling as he handed the package to her. "I must say, though, you are quite popular with KaibaCorp."

    "Huh? Did THEY send me this?" asked Lina.

    "Well, yes, they gave it to us," said the employee. "I don't know what's in it though, but I have a good idea. Well, I've got more deliveries to make - Fed-Ex overnight delivery people NEVER get a rest." He laughed a bit, then left.

    "Good luck!" cried Lina, who shut the door and went back to the kitchen. Sensing that the eggs were starting to burn, she rushed over, dropping the package on the table, and finished her egg-flipping as Diane came down, yawning. She was still in her PJs.

    "Who was at the door?" asked Diane with a yawn, rubbing her eyes out.

    "A package," said Lina, serving the eggs on two plates - one for herself and one for Diane - before she started to cook the bacon in the same skillet. "You can open it, the delivery guy said it was for both of us, and it came from KaibaCorp."

    Diane suddenly perked up. "Oh, I wonder...!" She opened the envelope with the joy of a kid tearing open a Christmas present. She dumped out the contents of the envelope: A pair of sealed packets and a letter. "Lina, come read this!"

    "In a minute, dear," said Lina, serving the bacon on the plates she put the eggs. The toaster popped out two pieces of toast, which she placed with the other breakfast foods after buttering each of them, and she then poured juice into two glasses. Then she put a plate and glass before Diane and put one on the other side of the table before cleaning her hands off and taking the letter. "Eat your breakfast, we have a long plane flight ahead of us."

    "Okay," said Diane, taking the fork next to her plate and eating some of the eggs. Lina looked over the letter, which read thus:

    Lina Mystara and Diane Arachne,


    I hope that you two are doing well. Diane, your sister is doing well - she has proven to be one of the greatest of the characters we have employed, and I am certainly glad she took us up on that offer to hone her skills. I cannot risk anyone finding out about her real nature, so I am being ambigious about Sheena's whereabouts and her position in Dueltopia.

    Because of this, I decided to grant Diane a special and very rare card created by Industrial Illusions. Only six of these cards remain. I also heard about Lina being a Toon duelist, which intrigued me. Seto Kaiba never liked Toons, but I have no such distaste - in fact, with the new Toon rules coming out, I decided that it would be much harder for Lina to prosper in the dueling environment, so I had a rare card that is only usable in such decks sent to her as well. Consider it a gift as thanks for taking care of Sheena's sister until Duelist Camp.

    I hope these cards will find much use in your deck, and wish you luck in your own dueling adventures, as Sheena will hopefully do in her job at our resort.

    Sincerely,
    The Master of Games

    Interesting, thought Lina as she broke open the silver packet. She took the card out and looked at it, then smirked. Well, this is interesting. I think it might be useful! She slipped it into her deck. "Say, Diane, can I see your card?"

    Diane had already torn open her packet. "Sure," she said, a bit out of it.

    Lina looked at Diane's card and gasped. "Wow! This IS a good card, and it fits your deck well!" She handed it back. "Put it in your deck ASAP and don't lose it! I think it might make your chances of being a great duelist MUCH better!"

    "Okay, Lina!" said Diane, nodding as she took out her cards and slipped the card into the deck, shuffling it for good measure.

    "Now finish your meal, we've got to leave for the airport by 7:15 AM to catch the jet," said Lina, who dug into her meal. Diane did the same, wondering about her future duels.

    ~~+~~

    In a dark chamber, lit by torches and decorated by weird serpentine statues, a young man wearing a white hooded robe was praying before an altar which was also decorated by snakes. "Oh great Leviathan," he whispered. "Please hear my prayer and help me destroy the wretched ones!"

    Two figures in familar robes stepped forward. "Boss, plan one is set. We've got Lars and Toushei situated on the spot where the ones who are heading for Duelist Camp are heading. They'll board the plane before the others and then bring it here." They bowed gracefully.

    "Good, very good," grinned the man. "You two know what to do if they fail. You are to proceed with Plan B. You are dismissed."

    "Yes, Boss," said the two robed figures, bowing again before they left.

    "Soon, Yugi," whispered the man. "Soon, you will know the pain I have felt, when I lost the one I loved, thanks to you!" He chuckled wickedly, then his laugh grew into an insane cackle that echoed in the room.

    ~~+~~

    The airport terminal buzzed with activity like it had when Diane saw her big sister off. But this time, she herself was leaving the city, to high adventure in Duel Monsters with her new best friend and guardian, Lina Mystara.

    "We're going to have lots of fun, aren't we?" grinned Diane.

    "Well, sure, but I can't promise that we won't be seperated," stated Lina. Diane frowned. "I know, you want me to be in your cabin, but the truth is, I don't know which cabin you will placed in. I myself as the counselor who runs the Dark Magician Girl cabin."

    "Really?" asked Diane. "How many cabins are there?"

    "Well, there are eight of them," said Lina. "Sieg hired a lot of people to work in his smarmy resort, not to mention the many Centurions. Half of them have children who need a place to stay, so Sieg worked with my company to create a summer camp for them to stay in until the tournament ended and arrangements could be made for the kids to stay near their families. I'm sure he's thought of everything."

    "What are the names of the cabins?" asked Diane, curious as the two reached the terminal and checked in their carry-on luggage.

    "Well, besides my cabin," said Lina, rubbing her chin. She handed her ID over to the person who manned the terminal. "There are four boy cabins and three girl cabins. For the girls, there's the Shining Friendship, Witch of the Black Forest, and Harpie's Lady cabins. For the boys there is the Marauding Captain, Penguin Knight, Luster Dragon, and Vampire Lord. Figures they'd give the creepy names for the boy cabins." She smirked.

    Diane giggled. "So...will I see you often?"

    "Depends," said Lina with a gentle smile. "There are two group schedules. I know that the Dark Magician Girl, Witch of the Black Forest, Marauding Captain, and Penguin Knight cabins are for children 12-17, so they will all be put together in one schedule where the children do more physical activities and study advanced strategies for Duel Monsters. The rest are for children under eleven, but they'll be doing simpler activities and just enjoying the game basics, like how to play." She smiled. "I'm sure you will be in the former group, but since the cabins have individual activities as well as group activities, we may not see each other that often."

    "Unless you were my counseler," grinned Diane.

    Lina laughed. "As if THAT will ever happen." She sighed. But I do hope you are in my cabin...I really want to stay with you as much as possible...

    "Ah, Miss Mystara," said the worker, giving her back her ID. "We'll have someone pick you up and take you to the plane. Please enjoy your trip."

    ~~+~~

    In the small private jet which would ferry the campers of Duelist Camp from Nevada to the campsite, a pair of plain-clothes individuals looked out of the closet where they were hidden. One was a stout-bodied muscleman wearing a sleeveless shirt and biker's cap. The other was a tall man with short blonde hair, wearing a decent suit. "They're coming," said the tall man.

    "So, Lars," said the stout man. "When do we attack?"

    "Soon," said the tall man, narrowing his eyes. "But we can't strike until we are out of range of the airport's line of sight."

    "All right, you call the shots," said the stout man, Toushei.

    ~~+~~

    The two females got on the plane. "Welcome to Duelist Camp Airlines," said the pilot through the speaker. "Please remain seated until we are at 30,000 feet. We appreciate your cooperation. Enjoy your flight."

    As soon as Lina and Diane sat down and buckled up, the plane took off. Ears popped as the plane reached its top altitude. "Whoa, this is awesome!" said Diane in awe. She looked at the lands below her.

    "Yeah, it's cool, but you get used to it," grinned Lina.

    "Attention, we have reached top altitude of 30, 000 feet," said the pilot. "You may now leave your seats and visit with the others. We will be descending in two hours. Thanks and enjoy your flight."

    Diane got up. "I'm going to visit with some others, okay?"

    "Sure, just don't wander around too much, you'll get jet lag." She then felt a pain in her belly. "Ugh...I think that high altitudes don't mix with early meals." She quickly undid her buckle and walked to the front, bumping into a man getting out of the lavatory. He was a stout guy with a stubble beard. "Oops, sorry."

    "No prob," said the man, smirking wickedly.

    ~~+~~

    Diane walked around the jet and talked with a few of the campers. Her last meeting was with two girls her age. "Are you going to Duelist Camp too?" asked a girl with short brown-red hair and glasses.

    "Yeah," said Diane. "You too?"

    "Uh huh," said the girl. "My name's Gwen, and this is my next-door neighbor, Bethany. You can call her Beth, if you want."

    "Why did mom and dad leave me alone?" whimpered Bethany, a girl with short blonde hair and blue eyes. She let out a wail. "WAAAAAAAAAH!!!"

    "She's a crybaby," sighed Gwen, shaking her head. "Whines about EVERYTHING."

    "Oh," said Diane. "I never cry. I'm strong."

    "That's nice," said Gwen, smirking. "So, your folks get hired by KaibaCorp for that big resort thingie in the Bikini Atoll?"

    "Dueltopia?" asked Diane. She nodded. "Yeah, my sister got hired. We have no parents, they both died in a storm long ago."

    "Oh, I see," said Gwen. "I'm sorry."

    "It's okay," said Diane. "So, what about you two?"

    "My dad is the only one who cares for me, he got hired as some Centurion because he's tough," grinned Gwen. "Beth's parents and big brother got hired all at once."

    "Wow, Sieg sure loves to hire a lot of people! This resort must be big!" said Diane.

    "Sure is, I can't wait to visit it myself after the tournament," said Gwen.

    The two continued to talk about Dueltopia, their families, and other stuff, unaware of the danger that was about to appear.

    ~~+~~

    Lina got out of the lavatory. "Phew," she said. "That was close." She saw the stout man from her earlier encounter standing there. "Hey, you need to use the john again?"

    Without warning, the man turned and pulled out a gun. "Don't move."

    Lina backed up in horror. "Oh my..."

    "Back to your seat," hissed the man, aiming the gun at Lina's temples. "And no funny stuff."

    Lina was forced to return to her seat as the man led her there and roughly slammed her down painfully. He then aimed the gun at Diane's forehead. "We're jacking this jet! Everyone stay seated!"

    Screams erupted from some of the campers as Lars emerged from the back. "Oh my gosh!" cried Bethany, who began to cry. "It's happening again! The same thing that killed my mother!!! AAAAAAAAH!!!"

    BANG! The gunshot rang out. "SHUT UP, BRAT!" shouted the ruffian. This had the opposite effect it was intended to have, causing Bethany to wail louder and cower in Gwen's arms.

    "There there, it's okay," whispered Gwen, glaring at the men angrily.

    "I'm going to make the captain land," said the gruff man. He pulled out another pistol and tossed it to the tall lanky man. "You keep the passengers real quiet, Lars."

    "Okay," said Lars, aiming the gun forward with a smirk. "This should be fun, he he he."

    The gruff man made his way to the pilot's cabin and put the gun point-blank on the pilot's head. "Land this frickin' thing, bub. This plane's ours now!"

    "I can't do that, sir!" cried the pilot. "Lillith would kill me if these campers are late to the opening ceremonies by one minute! I'll lose my job!"

    Click. "You'll lose more than that if you don't obey me," hissed Toushei, pushing the barrel in harder.

    "O-O-Okay, descending now," choked the pilot, pulling the stick up and making the plane descend slowly.

    "And don't try anythin' funny, got it?" hissed the boss. "Unless you like to have this plane crash, 'cause you've got a bullet in your skull! Har har har!"

    ~~+~~

    Lars paced back and forth across the aisle, gun up. "Why are we landing?" demanded Lina angrily. "Why is this plane being hijacked anyways?"

    "You wanna know why, missy?" grinned Lars. "Okay, I'll tell you. TO get revenge on KaibaCorp after their dang leader, Siegfried, helped Yugi destroy our leader!" He pulled his jacket back to reveal a golden eye.

    Diane gasped. "The Rare Hunters! Oh no!"

    "Rare Hunters?" asked Diane. "But...I thought that Yugi had defeated Marik. Or was it...?" She paused, not sure what would happen if everyone in the plane knew about Remi.

    "It was the Heir of Marik," said Lars with a smirk. "Thanks to the Heir, we were almost succesful in taking over the world, until Yugi and Siegfried ruined everything. They should have just died by our master's hand, but now he's gone and we almost lost our lives and freedom. Me, Toushei, and a few other terrorists in the organization were the only ones who managed to escape and even then, we were hunted like dogs. But then we met someone who gave us another chance to rule the world...and to start, we're holding all of you hostage until Siegfried Kaiba meets our demands...ha ha ha!"

    "Oh no," wailed Bethany. "This can't be! AAAAAAAAAAAH!!!"

    BANG! A bullet grazed her head, making her break down. "Shut up, kid! If any of you even PEEP before we reach our hidden base, you're all dead!"

    Lina scowled. I have to stop them,she thought. She got up and pulled out her deck. "Wait!"

    "Sit back down, miss," hissed Lars, aiming the gun at her. "Else you'll regret it. It would be even more tragic for Sieg to find out that one of his counselors DIED."

    "Oh really?" asked Lina. "You hide behind that gun...I bet you can't even defeat me in a duel!"

    "What?" hissed Lars.

    "Yeah, only cowards hide behind guns," shouted Diane. "You could kill us all, but that would only show the world what a wuss you are. How about a fair battle?"

    "Eeeer...I am not a coward!" cried Lars, lowering his gun to mid-level with a scowl.

    "Then prove it," said Lina, shuffling her deck. "You used to be one of the Rare Hunters, correct? I'm sure this 'Heir' had you trained in Duel Monsters, right? Can you play a match?"

    "Hmph," said Lars, turning up his nose. "I can duel with the best of them. I may not have been much of a duelist as the Dark Four, but when this new person gathered us up, we were trained in special dueling techniques. In fact, I was made one of the elite duelists, the Soul-Snatchers!"

    "Soul-Snatchers?" said Lina, not liking the sound of that.

    "Yes," said Lars, grinning wickedly. "An elite group of duelists who have one mission and one mission only - to steal innocent souls and give them to our Master! He wants us to collect souls. In fact, when we land, I plan to take half of the hostages' souls to our Master. That is not only just for the needs of that person, but also to give Siegfried something to chew out on. When he finds out that half of the hostages are nothing more than soulless beings, he will get enraged and we will get our revenge!"

    "You're sick!" spat Diane.

    Lina nodded. "Well then, I don't think you'll have too much problem dueling here. This jet plane isn't soo small that we can't duel with our Duel Disks." She pulled out her compact Duel Disk and slid it on her wrist. "You want to duel, or are you going to back out?"

    "I don't back out of a challenge," hissed Lars. "You want to duel, fine." He pulled his own Duel Disk from under his seat and slid it on his wrist.

    "Then let's duel, but I propose a wager," said Lina. "You win, you surrender yourself and your pal to the authorities." She clamped the Duel Disk on her wrist.

    "Fine, but if I win, you surrender your soul," grinned Lars, doing the same.

    "Then let's do this!" shouted Lina, activating her Duel Disk. The sides clicked into place.

    "Prepare to lose your soul, woman!" laughed Lars, raising his arm up. The disc activated, but not in the way that Lina's did - instead of two sides clicking together, a black scythe-shaped dueling platter slid out from the wristband and formed a creepy metallic cry as the holographic generators shot out and clamped to the walls of the plane. Lina's holographic generators did the same thing.

    "Let's duel!" the two shouted as they slid their decks into the disks and their life points came to 4000.

    ~~+~~

    "What the frick is goin' on back there?" hissed the boss, turning his head. "Hey Lars, what's goin' on?"

    "Don't worry, I'm just going to steal the soul of an insolent little girl," called Lars back.

    "Well, don't play for too long!" shouted the boss. "We're going to land in an hour, and I don't want our boss to find out we've been messing around!"

    "He'll be pleased when I hand over a tasty soul," said Lars.

    The boss turned back to the scared pilot, then noticed the pilot's hand inching towards the radio. "No, you don't, #%@&*#@!" snarled the boss, shooting the radio dead. Sparks flew from it. "Don't ya get any ideas about calling for help, got it?"

    "Y-Y-Y-Yes sir," gulped the pilot, who silently prayed to his God.

    ~~+~~

    Lars smirked. "Ladies first." The two drew their hands.

    "How gentlemanly of you," growled Lina, drawing a card. She frowned. ~Blast! I don't have Toon World! I could summon my Toon Cannon Soldier, but not my Toon Mermaid. I will just have to defend for the time being - I don't know what this guy has!~ "I'll set one monster in defense mode, place one card face-down, and end my turn." She slid her Red Archery Girl face-down onto the Disk and a card appeared before her, face-down. Then she slid another card in the magic-trap slot and another card appeared between her and the other card. "Let's see what you've got."

    "Gladly," said Lars, drawing a card. "First, I'll play Graceful Charity." A beautiful golden angel appeared in the air and showered golden energy on his deck. "This allows me to draw three cards in exchange for two." He drew three cards and discarded two from his hand, slipping them into the discard slot.

    "Hmph," said Lina. "Is that all?"

    "Not quite," grinned Lars. "Next, I'll play this magic card, called A Warrior Returning Alive!" He pushed it into the magic zone and it appeared as a body-sized card besides him. "This magic card allows me to revive a warrior that I sent to the Graveyard, and thanks to my Graceful Charity, I discarded a warrior...Mataza the Zapper!" The card turned into light and disgorged a dark-skinned ronin warrior with a short shock of black hair tied back with a bandanna and wielding a katana. (1300/800)

    "Well, I'm sorry to say, but your little samurai is too weak for my tastes," grinned Lina.

    Lars snickered. "That's what you think, my friend. You see, I have a card which will change that!" He pulled out a card and lifted it up, showing off the card - it looked like a hexagram made of green light. "Behold a powerful
    field magic which precedes the dawn of time! THE SEAL OF ORICHALCOS!"

    "What is that?" said Diane in awe.

    "You are about to find out!" laughed Lars, sliding the field magic card into his field magic slot. The airplane chamber grew dark and sickly green light signaled the descent of a spinning green circle which came down around both duelists. When it landed, a glowing hexagram formed on the floor.

    "What the...what is this?" cried Lina in horror.

    "Our arena, and your tomb," smirked Lars. "The winner of this duel will be freed from the circle, the loser will be consumed by its power and her soul will be trapped in the seal forever!"

    "LINA!" cried Diane, ignoring the danger and jumping out of her seat. She slammed into an invisible barrier marked by the circle. "Lina! No!" She pounded on the wall.

    "Your friend cannot break this barrier," grinned Lars. "And neither can you, Lina. Only by the resolution of this duel will the Seal be destroyed. And there's more...the Seal grants my monsters a power boost when they are on the field, so my Mataza gains a 500 attack power boost! Observe!"

    Lina watched in horror as the ronin's eyes glowed a baneful red and the hexagram branded itself on his brow. (1800/800) "No," she whispered. "It can't be..."

    "Yes, now observe your monster's death!" laughed the villian. "Mataza the Zapper, cut down that face-down monster with Searing Shogun Slice!" The possessed warrior dashed forward, gripping the blade in both hands.

    "Activate trap card, Draining Shield!" shouted Lina as the trap card she had set flipped upwards. It showed a soldier parrying a tiger-man's claw attack with his shield, forming an energy barrier around it. "This card negate's the attack of your Mataza the Zapper and grants me life points equal to the attacking monster's attack, namely 1800!" Her life points jumped up to 5800. "And now you wasted your battle phase."

    "That would be so," grinned Lars. "If you didn't recall Mataza's special effect! ATTACK AGAIN!" The ronin sliced the Red Archery Girl in two, and she screamed as she exploded. "You see, Mataza the Zapper can attack TWICE per round."

    "Oh no," said Diane in horror.

    Lina scowled as she drew her next card. "Well, if you think that your stupid warrior is going to destroy me, guess again!" She saw the card she had drawn and smirked. Great, I can get rid of that annoying seal! "But first, I'm going to wipe out your little magic card!" She slid her card into the disk and it appeared.

    "All right! Mystical Space Typhoon!" cried Diane, watching the tornado engulf the playing field. "That seal is toast!" She then noticed that Lars wasn't angry...in fact, he was smirking. "Why is he so smug?"

    The whirlwind faded...and the seal remained.

    "What? NO WAY!" cried Lina in shock. "That field magic should have been TOASTED!"

    "Foolish woman," said Lars with a chuckle. "The Seal of Orichalcos existed before Duel Monsters. Do you think that a simple magic card could eradicate such power?"

    "Not really..." mumbled Lina, downcast. She sighed. "I'll put this monster on the field, face-down, and end my turn."

    "You are a fool if you think that you can defend against my empowered Mataza the Zapper," smirked Lars. "Mataza, attack!"

    The ronin warrior sliced his blade at the card twice, and it got tangled in a bunch of harp strings.

    "Thanks for attacking my Spirit of the Harp," chuckled Lina. "And since you attacked twice, you lose 400 life points!"

    Lars scowled and his life meter dropped to 3600. "This isn't over yet, girl," said Lars. "I'll just sacrifice my Mataza to summon a monster strong enough to take out your Harp! I sacrifice Mataza the Zapper to summon Robo-Ronin!"

    The bushido warrior vanished and a flash of light signaled the appearance of a robot shaped like a suit of red samurai armor, with red laser eyes and a deadly light-saberish katana that glowed red as well. (2000/1000)

    "And thanks to the power of Orichalcos, he gains a boost that will overpower your wretched Spirit next turn!" Lars laughed as the hexagram branded itself on the creature's metallic forehead. (2500/1000) "Be lucky it doesn't gain the double attack ability of Mataza, or you will surely lose the life points you gained next turn! Ha ha ha!"

    "Go ahead, yak it up," snorted Lina, drawing a card. She smirked at the card. "My turn. It worked for you, so...I play my own Graceful Charity!" The card did its special effect. "Now I'll draw three cards and toss two." Diane watched her guardian as she drew three cards and smiled. "Good cards! I must be having the luck of the draw." She tossed two cards into the discard slot. "And now...for some fun! Lars, you said you wanted me to lose the life points I had gained from my trap card, well I'll give them up!"

    "Huh?" asked Lars, confused.

    "Have you ever watched cartoons in your life, dear?" inquired Lina innocently. Lars grunted. "I'll take that a no. No wonder you fell in with the bad crowds."

    "Shut up and make your move," hissed Lars. "Stop babbling about cartoons!"

    "But Lars dear, that IS my move," grinned Lina, taking a card from her hand and slapping it on the disk. Her life points dipped to 4800. "Behold the magical mystery of...TOON WORLD!"

    Cartoony stars and clouds exploded from her duel disk and, in a crash of an explosion bubble, the giant pop-up book, pages open, appeared in all its glory. Lars was aghast.

    "Whoa!" said a camper.

    "Yeah, this is so cool!" shouted another. Cheers erupted from the seats.

    "SHUT UP! SHUT UP, YOU FRICKIN' KIDS!" shouted Lars, firing his gun into a baggage carrier-thingie. The crowd shushed.

    "Oh come on, Lars," grinned Lina. "Kids should have some enjoyment in their petty lives. And my Toons bring happiness and joy to those who are deprived of it. Who knows? Maybe after this duel, I might make YOU laugh."

    "Highly doubtful," scowled Lars. "I'll only laugh when I steal your soul! Just finish your turn."

    "I will," said Lina in a mock pout. She switched her monster on the field with her other monster and discarded Spirit of the Harp. "I sacrifice my Spirit of the Harp into Toon World, say goodbye to it!" The harpist giggled as thin smoke covered her and sucked her into the pop-up book's world. "And summon the lovable and cuddly...TOON SKULL!"

    The book, which had slammed shut, burst open to reveal the goofy caricature of Summoned Skull. (2500/1200)

    "Of course, I can't attack this turn, but next turn, you're going to feel a lot of pain!" Lina waved her hand. "Your turn."

    Lars drew his card and put it in his hand. That wretched monster is blocking my way, but I can't destroy it because I'd only waste Robo-Ronin in doing so! And who knows what the Toon Skull could do to me! I'd better put a monster in defense for now, so I can sacrifice it later. "I place one monster in defense mode and one card face-down and end my turn." The first card appeared next to Robo-Ronin, and the second appeared behind them.

    "Well, if that's all," said Lina. "Then it's time for me to take the offensive. First, I'll summon Toon Cannon Soldier to the field!" The clunky pastel-colored Toon robot appeared on the field. (1400/1000) "And next I'll attack!"

    "Are you nuts?" asked Lars, laughing. "You're going to destroy your own monster to wipe out mine!"

    "Who said I was attacking your monsters?" grinned Lina. "I'm attacking YOU! Lightning Strike!" The Toon Skull powered up and flung a bolt of lightning that slammed into Lars, dropping his life points to 1100. Her life points dipped to 4300.

    "What the--?!" cried Lars. "But I had monsters on the field!"

    "Toon Monsters love warping the rules of the game," grinned Lina. "And that means they can attack directly once they get the chance to attack. Of course, since I summoned Toon Cannon Soldier to the field, I cannot attack with it yet, but who says I HAVE to? I activate its special effect, sacrificing itself to inflict 500 damage on your sorry arse!"

    The cannon crouched and then fired jet rockets and propelled itself into Lars' chest, dropping his life meter to 600.

    "Grrrr..." hissed Lars, rubbing his chest.

    "Give it up," grinned Lina. "Next turn, Toon Skull will wipe your blood off of the floor!"

    "If you think I'm about to lose to the likes of you, girl...you've got another thing coming!" shouted Lars, who whipped out a card. He smirked. "Perfect, just what I need."

    ~~+~~

    The headmaster of Duelist Camp looked at the clock. "The planes should be here soon. Better send the buses to pick them up." He picked up his phone. "Yes, Miss Sariel? Send out orders for the buses to pick up the campers - their planes will be coming in twenty minutes. What? You say that the plane with Lina and Diane isn't responding? I see...I trust you can find a way around this situation. Goodbye." He hung up and rubbed his chin. "What in the blazes is going on there?"

    Little did he know that there was a duel for the fate of all those on that very plane.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Lars drew a card, then smirked wickedly. "Just what I had hoped to obtain!" He switched his monsters. "I sacrifice my face-down monster to summon a great warrior!" The card melted into light. "A samurai of the greatest power! Behold the terror which is...YAMOTO THE NOBLE SAMURAI!"

    The card appeared and out stepped a handsome samurai wearing a crescent moon helm and wielding a dual-handed katana. Beautiful silver armor adorned his body. (2200/2000)

    "And that's not all," grinned Lars. "Since I summoned him, he too gains the boost of the Seal of Orichalcos!" The samurai grunted in pain, trying to resist the dark magic, but it did no good and his forehead was branded with the
    glyph as his eyes glowed an evil red. (2700/2000) "And there's more!"

    "What?" cried Lina.

    "Yamoto gains a boost of 500 attack points when it battles Fiends, being their natural enemy!" snickered Lars. "And your Toon Skull, even though it is a toon, is still a Fiend! Yamoto, slashing blade of honor, destroy the Toon Skull!"

    The twisted Summoned Skull copycat howled in horror as the samurai lunged at it and cleft it in two with his blade. Lina grimaced as her life points dropped to 3600. "Ouch!

    "Oh cry me a river," laughed Lars. "Oh, and by the way...ROBO-RONIN, ENERGY BLADE THE BEE-YATCH!"

    Lina felt the robot's blade slice across her chest and clutched it in pain. Her life points dropped to 1100.

    "You see, my dear?" said Lars. "You cannot win! No monster you have in your deck can stand up to my empowered Yamoto!"

    Diane was horrified. She screamed bloody murder. "YOU MONSTER!!!! YOU $*$#@#$*!!!!"

    Lina was stunned to see Diane react so violently. "Diane...I'm okay."

    "It's not you, it's THAT!" cried Diane, pointing a shaking finger to Yamoto. "HOW DARE HE USES A SAMURAI FOR EVIL!"

    Lina looked at Yamoto and nodded. "Yeah, now that I think about it...samurai are warriors of honor, at least from what I know from high school. Seeing a villian use them is odd. Tell me, Lars, why did you put those cards in your deck?"

    Lars scowled. "Why do you care?"

    "Look, either way, it won't matter whether I know or not," said Lina crossly. "I win, your soul goes to Hell and it won't matter if you have secrets. You win, I go to Hell and your secret is safe. Either way, it doesn't matter. So spill!"

    Lars growled ferally, but then sighed. "I'll tell you only because by defeating you, your soul will be gone and I will not worry about my secret being safe - all the others will end up dead or slaves." He then took a deep breath and
    explained his plight. "I was in love with a woman who owned this very monster. A woman called Jade Valentine."

    "Jade? You mean, the daughter of Mai?" asked Gwen in shock.

    "The very one," grinned Lars. Lina was stunned to hear about Mai having a daughter as her opponent continued. "I met Jade when I was in the Duelist Labyrinth years ago. The Lady of Night invited me because I was once the champion of the Netherlands, my warrior deck was unstoppable...until I met Jade. She trashed me and took my Duel Jewel, and I was out of the tournament. I vowed to get a rematch with her one day. I joined the Rare Hunters when I learned that they have rare and powerful cards, and during my service under the Heir was when I met Jade again...this time, our prisoner."

    The campers gasped. "No," said Diane in horror.

    "Oh yes! You see, it was my idea to lure Jade into a trap, and the Dark Four defeated her easily," grinned Lars. "I was so impressed by her beauty and her power, I wanted more than a rematch...I wanted to steal her heart. I spoke to her once, when the Heir made me guard her while he was busy. She didn't recognize me, I guess...I was wearing my cowl to hide my face. I told her that if she married me, I could help her escape. She spat in my face and told me that she'd rather die than give her soul to a Rare Hunter. I guess someone as pure as her despised evil like me. I never got to speak to her again before our leader took her away to face Yugi. When I learned that she had escaped and was helping Yugi and his friends, I felt sad because she would hunt me down after Yugi defeated our boss. And defeat him Yugi did!"

    "So...the Rare Hunters came back and covered New York City in shadow?" asked Bethany in horror. She wailed louder than before. "WAAAAAAAH!!!"

    "Shut up, Beth," sighed Gwen,sweatdropping.

    "Yes, we did," grinned Lars. "It was beautiful, but Yugi stopped all that! We were forced to flee, but I raided the vault of rare cards that our group stole from others...and found a couple of interesting cards, this was one of them. I spent the next month stealing and bribing to get the rest of the cards to emulate Jade's deck."

    He paused. "Then I met our new leader. He wasn't as bold as the Heir, but he promised me that I could get another duel with Jade, if I did his bidding. I agreed and thanks to him, I am now unstoppable! Ha ha ha!"

    "Yeah, keep telling yourself that," growled Lina. "Just because you beat my Toon Skull doesn't mean you can win. And when I beat you, that card is going to a better duelist than you! Samurai should never serve evil masters!"

    "And female samurai should NEVER be lusted after by slimeballs like you!" shouted Diane with a ticked-off face.

    "Ha, like you can stop me and my Seal of Orichalcos!" laughed Lars.

    "Whatever, but it is my turn now," said Lina, drawing a card. "Okay, first I play Pot of Greed to draw two new cards." She drew the cards and discarded the Pot of Greed she had drawn. "Next, I'll play Stray Lambs to create two Lamb Tokens." Two giant pink sheep appeared. (0/0) "And then I'll place two cards face-down and end my turn." The cards appeared before her.

    "Well, it seems that holding a defense up is all you can do," smirked Lars, drawing a card. He replaced a card in his hand and put the card down. "So here is my move...I summon Yamoto's faithful apprentice, SASHIA THE SAMURAI SQUIRE!"

    A beautiful ronin female appeared from the card, carrying a quiver of arrows and a bow on her back and a wakiwashi in her hand. She wore cloth armor and had black hair that was tied up in a tight braid. (1700/1500)

    "What the...?" said Lina.

    "Grrr...!" hissed Diane, angry that another oriental warrior was being used like this.

    "And now, with no monsters to protect you, prepare to be destroyed!" laughed Lars. "Because Sashia is Yamoto's loyal apprentice, she becomes inspired to fight with him, and her attack goes up by 300 points!" (2000/1500) "And she is also corrupted by the Seal of Orichalcos!" Sashia's eyes glowed red as the mark appeared on her forehead. (2500/1500) "Now, my two loyal warriors, destroy Lina's Lamb Tokens now!"

    Yamoto and Sashia dashed forward and sliced the two sheep to bits.

    "Sheepskin anyone?" chuckled Lars.

    Lina was very pissed off. Now what? I was hoping to summon Toon Magician Girl... She then drew a card and grinned. This might work. I have to be wary of traps though. "I summon Toon Goblin Attack Force, attack mode!" The goofy gang of goblins gallanted out of the green grimoire and gaggled at the groupies. (Say that five times fast! ^_^)

    "You fool, your stupid monster is far too weak!" laughed Lars.

    "Well then, I'll play a card face-down and end my turn," grinned Lina. Wait until he runs into my Curse of Aging trap! They'll lose their little boost and one of them will die and I'll gain another turn to live.

    "What a foolish mo--" Lars paused and saw the card. "That's a trap, isn't it?"

    "Maybe," said Lina in a voice and pose that mimicked her favorite anime character,the one she renamed herself after,Lina Inverse of Slayers.

    Lars chuckled, then laughed wickedly. "HA HA HA! You fool! You think that you can stop my warriors with your stupid trap! Well, I'll trigger your trap, but don't think that you can stop my warriors so easily!" He drew a card. "First, I'll summon Sasuke Samurai #2 to the field to bolster my army!" A block-headed swordsman rose up. (200/300) "Weak, but with the Seal of Orichalcos, he gets a boost as well!" The brand appeared on the creature's brow. (700/300)

    "Great, more troublesome samurai," sighed Lina.

    "And then...I'll use the special attack of Yamoto and his pupil!" shouted Lars.

    "What?" cried Lina.

    "You see, I can order them to forego their normal attacks and use a powerful cooperative attack which is like if they were a 2600-attack monster!" He waved. "Yamoto! Sashia! Destroy the twisted armies of cartoon! Cooperative Chi!"

    The two crossed swords and a blast of light shot from the blades, incinerating Toon Goblin Attack Force. Lina and the others were horrified to see the monsters blow up like that as Lina's meter dropped to 800.

    "And now my Sasuke Samurai #2...direct attack!" The bushido warrior charged.

    "Activate trap card, Curse of Aging!" roared Lina, flipping up her trap. A black mist spewed from the card.

    "No..." hissed Lars, clenching his fist.

    "That's right, my trap card weakens all your monsters by 500, which means they LOSE the Seal's boost!" laughed Lina. "Not a very nice card, but useful against stupid cards like your Seal." The three samurai aged rapidly, becoming wrinkled and ugly. Their attacks dropped back to before the Seal was applied. (2200/2000) (2000/1500) (200/300) "Of course, I forgot to trigger it because I was surprised by the fact that you could do that special attack!"

    "It wouldn't have mattered if you triggered it then or now!" sneered Lars. "You see,that cooperative attack ignores traps - it would have NOT been weakened by your trap because the two warriors channel their chi into one powerful blast! That means it would have still been as if they had been a 2600-attack monster,regardless of your Curse of Aging!"

    "It doesn't matter," grinned Lina. "I lost my goblins, but next turn, I'll take you down big-time!"

    "Ha, you are a fool if you think that!" shouted Lars. "Sasuke! Slash her!" The block-made samurai stabbed Lina and dropped her life points to 600. "And to end, I shall play Dian Keto the Cure Master, increasing my life points by 1000!" The card glowed as sparkling light covered Lars, increasing his life points to 1600. "And since your trap only works for the end phase of my turn, I end my turn." Sure enough, the aging wrinkles of all three monsters vanished and they regained their boosted attack powers. (2700/2000) (2500/1500) (700/300)

    Blast, he's right...I can't summon anything to protect myself, even without their Seal power-boost. She sighed as she checked her hand over. All I have left are Toon Magician Girl, Change of Heart, and Blue Eyes Toon Dragon! I could play Change of Heart and use it on Yamoto and sacrifice him for Toon Magician Girl, but then I'd have to wait a turn, and he could easily bring back Yamoto with Monster Reborn! And I can't tribute for Blue Eyes Toon Dragon because I don't have any monsters to set on the field! Blast it! She slowly made her way to her deck, her hand shaking in fear. She hated to admit it, but she was sure that this was one of those duels she was going to lose.

    "I see you are going to lose, and your hand betrays your fear," grinned Lars. "Too bad. You fought a good fight, but this duel is over, and your soul will be mine! Ha ha ha!"

    "Shut up!" cried Diane. "Lina will NEVER lose to the likes of you!"

    "Yeah," said Gwen. "She'll kick your butt!"

    Bethany sobbed a bit.

    "You aren't helping, you know," hissed Gwen.

    "Sorry," mumbled Bethany.

    Lina sighed. They all mean well...but I'm finished. If only I could draw a card to save my hide...

    Just then, her deck glowed with a bright sheen! Everyone gasped as Lina was engulfed in green light!

    ~~+~~

    Lina found herself floating over a beautiful castle. She watched the dark cloud zapping Duel Monsters. "Oh great...What am I doing HERE again?" mumbled Lina in disgust.

    The Toon Magician Girl appeared before her. "Lina, you are in grave danger! I know what is happening to you!"

    "Really?" asked Lina, confused.

    "Yes, the Seal of Orichalcos was the symbol of our greatest enemy, who tried to destroy our world thousands of years ago," said Toon Magician Girl. "Come with me." She floated to the castle and Lina felt herself being dragged along behind, like she was tethered to her monster's book. The two floated into the main hall of the castle, where three statues of ice stood in the middle. Standing around the statues were handsome samurai and ninja warriors of all kinds.

    "What the heck...?" said Lina. "What are all these guys doing here?"

    "They are noble warriors who fought to protect Shadoria in many times of crisis," whispered Toon Magician Girl. "But two are missing...you know which two I mean."

    "Yamoto...Sashia..." said Lina softly. She saw an aged bald man in tears. "And that...?"

    "That is Master Yoshi, their sensei," whispered Toon Magician Girl. "He is sad because his former pupils are being corrupted...you must rescue them from the evil one who is controlling them!"

    "But...how?" cried Lina. "I'm going to lose! Even if I pull you out of there, that jerk might..."

    "There is a way, but you must be strong," said the sorceress. She pulled Lina up to the statues. "These were once the Guardians of Shadoria, the three Dragons who protected us like gods. They sacrificed themselves to destroy the Dark Evil, and ended up becoming ice." She led Lina to a sword embedded in one of the statues. "Legend has it that three noble warriors will arise to release the Dragons. I believe one of them is you."

    "Me?" asked Lina in shock. "But..."

    "If you are the chosen one," said Toon Magician Girl, looking down at the blade. "You can pull this sword out."

    "Great, shades of Arthurian Legend," sighed Lina. "Oh well, what have I to lose?" She gripped the sword and pulled. After heaving and straining, the sword came free and suddenly, Lina found herself standing before the ice dragon with the blade in her hands. The ice crumbled and exploded, revealing a giant green-scaled dragon which roared!

    "You've released Timaeus, wonderful!" grinned Toon Magician Girl. "Now, to bind his soul to yours, you must call him by name. Only then will he aid you in this fight!"

    This is silly, but... Lina sighed and closed her eyes, shouting out the name of the beast. "TIMAEUS!!!!"

    The dragon screeched and suddenly Lina felt pain ripping through her body. She screamed in anguish, then blacked out.

    ~~+~~

    "Lina! Lina!"

    Lina slowly came to and found herself lying on the floor of the jet, her hand gripping a card.

    "Hmph, you woke," said Lars with a sneer. "I thought you had passed out and thus I could have won by forfeit."

    Lina stood up. "You've got a lot to learn...I don't faint easily." She then looked at the card in her hand. It showed the green dragon from before. She smirked. Somehow, I know what this does...maybe by binding my soul to that thing...I know its powers! No matter, old samurai boy's about to get a rude awakening!

    "Are you going to end your turn, or what?" snarled Lars. "We're landing in ten minutes, and I want to give your soul to my boss before he gets edgey!"

    "Sorry, but my soul is already commited!" grinned Lina. "To a monster which will wipe your life points out!"

    "Try me," grinned Lars. "You have nothing which can stand against my soldiers!"

    "Oh really?" grinned Lina as she played a card. "We'll see! I play Change of Heart to take control of one of your monsters." The card appeared besides her.

    Lars was shocked. What's she planning? Is she taking control of Yamoto?

    "I know what you're thinking, Lars dear, but I'm NOT going after Yamoto! I'm going after...SASHIA THE SAMURAI SQUIRE!"

    The half-demon, half-angel spirit entered the young female ronin and she screamed a bit before going into a trance. With a leap, she was standing against her former master.

    "What a fool!" laughed Lars. "You don't realize that Sashia is too weak! Sure, you may blow away my Sasuke..."

    "I'm not going to attack yet," grinned Lina. "Instead, I'm going to use this card I drew...The Eye of Timaeus!" She showed the card that she had drawn and the green dragon within.

    "What? Another monster?" gasped Lars as the campers whispered and gasped.

    "No, not a monster, but a powerful being which can merge with other cards and unlock hidden powers in them," grinned Lina. "Let me demonstrate...I merge the Eye of Timaeus with Sashia the Samurai Squire!" Sliding the card into the magic zone, she watched as the darkness grew stronger and cloak the entire jet in darkness.

    ~~+~~

    "What the...?" said Toushei, turning his head. This gave the pilot the chance he needed. Bolstering up the courage, he grabbed Toushei's wrist and slammed it hard on the console hard. The pain made Toushei scream as he dropped his gun. The pilot snatched it up and aimed it at his attacker.

    "I'm not about to change my flight course for anyone," grinned the pilot. "Even now, we're landing at the airport we were supposed to land at, where the cops will surely take you in for custody. You thought I was going to do what you want? Now sit and be quiet, like a good terrorist."

    "Ergh," moaned Toushei. "LARS! END THE DUEL AND GET OVER HERE NOW!"

    ~~+~~

    Unfortunately, Lars wasn't listening...he was watching as a green form flew through the clouds outside and into the jet. It seemed to merge with the plane...but shrank until it became as big as a human. Timaeus, the green dragon, let out a screech as it appeared in full glory in the Seal of Orichalcos.

    "And now, I'll merge its power with your Sashia," said Lina as the dragon flew down and grappled Sashia from behind. "And unleash her true power...the power of a samurai who took up the blade after her master perished in battle!"

    The two glowed bright green and exploded with light...and Lars watched as a beautiful lithe woman with skin-tight dragonscale armor and a dragon-shaped helm emerged from the light. Her bow and arrows gone, she now wielded two jade-hilted katanas with dragonscale gloves. Draconic wings sprouted from her back.

    "Ladies and gents, adults and kiddies!" announced Lina. "May I present...SASHIA THE DRAGON PRINCESS!" (2300/1800)

    "What?" cried Lars. He then noted the stats and smirked. "He he he...you are a fool. Even with that powerful warrior, your attack is no match for my Yamoto! Yamoto will destroy her!"

    "Oh really? I don't think he wants to," grinned Lina. "Look there."

    Lars turned and gasped as he saw his samurais kneeling. "What is this?!" He watched in horror as the two stabbed their guts and exploded into a million pieces. His life points dropped to 750. "H-H-HOW?!?!"

    "It's Sashia's special ability," grinned Lina. "You see, now that she's the most noble samurai in the world, blessed by the spirit of Seiryuu, the Dragon God, no samurai would dare try to harm her. In fact, the instant she hits the field,
    all opposing samurais immediately kill themselves via seppeku and their souls are banished from the game! Which means you won't get them back!"

    "NO!" cried Lars in horror. "This cannot BE!"

    "That's right, and you lost life points, since your two monsters were destroyed due to a monster effect," grinned Lina. "Gotta love those new life point damage rules!"

    Lars was besides himself.

    "Oh, and one more thing...I can still attack," grinned Lina. Lars paled. "Sashia the Dragon Princess, double blade of honor!"

    "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!" screamed Lars. "NEGATE ATTACK!" The woman was halted in her attack.

    "Ha, you're wasting your time," grinned Lina. "Nothing you have can save you!"

    "We'll see," said Lars, pulling his next card out. "One card and one monster in defense mode."

    Lina shook her head. "Please, if you're going to bluff, at least be CONVINCING!" She drew her card. "Well well, look what I have here! Monster Reborn!" She slapped the card down.

    "Oh no..." moaned Lars, holding his hand on his face.

    "Welcome back, Red Archery Girl!" grinned Lina as the cute mermaid rose up. "I think it's time for some girl power!"

    "All right!" said Diane. The others cheered.

    "You know what happens next, dear Lars?" grinned Lina wickedly.

    "No," said Lars, but he had a bad idea.

    "This is the part where you LOSE!" laughed Lina. "Sashia, destroy the face-down monster!" The winged princess dashed forward with a battle cry and slashed apart a green-armored samurai. "Geez, Masaki the Legendary Swordsman. You should have tried harder! Red Archery Girl! Finish him off!" The mermaid giggled as she drew back her bow and impaled Lars' chest with an arrow!

    Lars' life points dropped to zero, and the two monsters vanished with the end of the duel. The Seal, however, remained, and began to glow brighter as it contracted around Lars.

    "Curse you!" screamed Lars angrily, shaking his fist. "You'll regret this! I may have lost, but there will be others! We will hunt you down and destroy you, girl! You and all your little friends!" He started to spasm as the Seal completely contracted around him alone. "JAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAADE!!!!" With that cry, his eyes turned blank and he collapsed.

    The Seal vanished and the Seal of Orichalcos card appeared. Lina gasped as she and the others saw Lars' horrified visage appear, trapped in the glyph. Then it vanished in a flash of light.

    "Whew...that's over with," sighed Lina, who began to swoon. "Whoa...too much moving about in mid-air...getting woozy..."

    Diane grabbed her and sat her on the floor. "You okay?"

    "I'll be fine...I think," said Lina, rubbing her head. She looked at the Eye of Timaeus. "Wow, this thing saved my butt!"

    "I know," said Diane, grinning.

    "Uh...what happened here?" asked Gwen, confused.

    Just then, the intercom went on. "This is your pilot speaking. We're about to land at Duelist Camp airport. Please return to your seats and buckle up for the landing. Thank you."

    "Well, seems that the pilot got the situation with that goon under control," said Lina. She slowly got up and walked over to the now lifeless body of her opponent, then knelt down and picked up the cards. She pulled out two cards - Yamoto the Noble Samurai and Sashia the Samurai Squire. "These two will remain with me for now, until I find a better owner for them. They don't fit my deck, but maybe I'll be able to use them again someday." She slid them into a pouch on her belt, where she held her side deck. "And as for the rest of the
    cards...I guess I can divide them up with the others." She smirked.

    "Descending," said the pilot over the speaker. "Please, I repeat, get seated for the landing."

    "Well, not a very pleasurable flight," grinned Lina. "But a good one. Duelist Camp, here we come..."

    The plane approached the landing strip, lowering its wheels.

    To be continued...

    UNIQUE CARDS

    Robo-Ronin
    Types: Earth/Machine
    Level: 5
    ATK: 2000
    DEF: 1000
    Description: A robot invented as a bodyguard for an emperor, its energy sword can slice through metal.

    Courtesy of Brian "Venusaur" Corvello

    Yamoto The Noble Samurai
    Types: Light/Warrior/Effect
    Level: 6
    ATK: 2200
    DEF: 2000
    Effect: This monster gains a 500-attack bonus when battling Fiend sub-type monsters. Also, this card can be tributed to special summon "Yamoto the Celestial Avatar" if a Time Wizard is successful in using its effect.

    Courtesy of Brian "Venusaur" Corvello

    Sashia The Samurai Squire
    Types: Light/Warrior/Effect
    Level: 4
    ATK: 1700
    DEF: 1500
    Effect: This card gains a 300-attack bonus for each "Yamoto the Noble Samurai" you control on the field. In addition, if this card is on the field with a "Yamoto the Noble Samurai", you can forego both their normal attacks and battle one of the opponent's monsters as if both warriors were a single warrior with 2600 Attack.

    Courtesy of Brian "Venusaur" Corvello

    Sashia the Dragon Princess
    Types: Light/Warrior/Effect
    Level: 8
    ATK: 2300
    DEF: 1800
    Effect: This card can only be special summoned by using the "Eye of Timaeus" while "Sashia the Samurai Squire" is on your field. When summoned, all the monsters which have the word "Samurai" in their names(or "Mataza the Zapper" or "Legendary Swordsman Masaki") that are controlled by the opponent immediately get destroyed and removed from play. (For the special rules in Venusaur's fics, the opponent loses life points via this effect.)

    Eye of Timaeus
    Type: Spell Card
    Effect: When used with a certain monster on the field, can change it into a stronger form.
    Note: This card was used by Yugi in the Dragon season.

    NOTE: I apologize to Venusaur for mangling his Toon monster rules in my last two chapters, I will revise those and have them finished once I complete this story and send it to the Completed Fiction Archive.

    NEXT CHAPTER: It's the opening ceremonies! No dueling in this chapter as the gang enters the campgrounds and meets with their new counselors. Also,the camp schedule is discussed and we learn a bit more about Gwen and Bethany,as well as a mysterious counselor called Twilight. Stay tuned for Chapter 4: Getting Acquainted!
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Wow. That was intense.

    You've given one of my star characters and given her even more of a history. I salute you Hack.

    I'm sorry you aren't getting more responses... perhaps I can help you with that...

    But don't give up. Keep writing, and somebody will take notice.

    - Venusaur

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    Pretty good. It's interesting how you're bringing the Doom saga into this, but I suppose it makes sense, seeing as that's the third main section of the Yu-Gi-Oh anime. I'm curious as to who the third person could be... after all, there are three dragons...

    I do think you need to work on your characters, though. Even the temporary ones should be believable. No real terrorist would tell his plans or his history, no matter what the situation. Try to think of what the characters would really do if they were placed in that situation. If you can, try to role-play them so that you can get a firm grasp on their personalities and goals.

    Otherwise, this was alright. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, where the camp will begin!


    P.S. I believe Robo-Ronin is a real monster. You might want to check your card lists, because I think I've actually used it before in the video games.
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    Critias and Helmos,the other two dragons,will show up in the future. I can't tell you who will get them,though.

    I do understand why you were upset that my bit characters were portrayed so badly. First off,I was feeling rushed,I had barely gotten the part where Diane meets her new friends out and I feel like I rushed into it too much. For that,I understand and I'll try to fix that and give more detail in the revised chapter.

    As for Lars,I admit that,being a terrorist,he probably wouldn't go about boasting about his plans or how the girl of his dreams rejected him,like some soap opera star. However, first,Lina asked why he had a samurai deck. Of course,as you see,he was wary about telling them his sordid past,but when Lina said "Your secret will be safe",he got boastful and arrogant,thinking that these inferior beings might as well know. He thought of the hostages as inferiors who deserved what they got. If you want,PM me and tell me how YOU think the whole exchange should have gone,but try to include the backstory I had made.

    Finally,about Robo-Ronin,you are probably thinking about Yaiba Robo or Patrol Robo,and neither of these are Robo-Ronin,which is Venusaur's creation. Thank you.

    EDIT: Since nobody's posted yet,I didn't want to double-post,so I decided to add onto this post. I wanted to introduce the first of several new cards I will be introducing in my next story,which is the first true "Yu-Gi-Oh Advanced" story in the series,called Heart of the Dragon. It's about Drake Mystara,Lina's little brother,and it's sort of like Venusaur's "Legacy of the Duelist" story. (Venusaur,if you want to ask me not to copy stuff on your story,PM me and we'll discuss it. I'll even e-mail you the chapters if you can handle RTF WordPad files. ) Here's the card.

    Lady Luck,Mistress of Chance:
    Attribute: Light
    Type: Spellcaster/Fusion/Effect
    Level: 6
    ATK: 1900
    DEF: 1000
    FUSE: Goddess of Whim + Time Wizard
    EFFECT: When successfully summoned,flip a coin. If you call it right,destroy all destroy all the opponent's monsters,face-up or face-down,and inflict 1/4 of the total attack power of the monsters in damage to their life points. If you call it wrong,destroy all your monsters and inflict 1/4 of the total attack power of the monsters in damage to your life points.
    APPEARANCE: Looks a lot like Lady Luck Yuna from Final Fantasy X-2.
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Since I am going to be heading to my class in twenty minutes, I am going to post up my next chapter right now. I'll try to edit it before I leave,but I must warn you not to get angry if it's messed up. I'll try to fix it later,after I get home.

    This is a dry chapter,it doesn't have any dueling in it. However,it is essential to put this up so that you know what the character will be going through in the rest of the story. It's basically where everyone enters Duelist Camp and get settled in. Enjoy!
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    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 4: Getting Acquainted


    He drew a card from his deck.

    "Blue Winged Crown, in Attack Mode!" he said, placing a card down.

    A huge, violet bird, surrounded by blue fames with red fire on its forehead appeared in the sky in front of him. At the same time, a set of numbers appeared right next to it. (1,600/1,200)

    It was indeed quite real. The heat from the downdraft was felt by the whole crowd.

    "Hmm," said the Master. "Not a bad start, but I think my Blue Winged Crown looks a little lonely... so..."

    He drew another card.

    "Whiptail Crow, in Attack Mode!" he said, placing it down.

    Another Monster appeared, this one a fiendish vulture-like creature with a long tail. (1,650/1,600).

    "Of course," said the Master, drawing a third card, "the key to winning under these rules is bringing out your stronger Monsters so..."

    He put down a third card.

    "I Tribute the Blue Winged Crown and the Whiptail Crow to bring forth Hyozanryu!" he said.

    The first two Monsters vanished, and a huge dragon made of crystal with huge wings and a horn on its snout appeared! It breathed a blast of blazing light at the crowd! (2,100/2,800)

    "Of course," said the Master, "this is only a simulation."


    - From "The Mandate of Heaven"


    The robed man growled as he saw the card with Lar's soul in it. "So...Lars fell in a duel of Orichalcos..." He sighed and plucked the card out of mid-air. "Bah, he was too weak. I should have been careful in training him. His obsession over that woman samurai friend of Yugi's was his downfall. No matter, his soul will feed the Great Beast nicely!" He tossed the card into a green flame and a loud roar shook the room as the card disintegrated and a blood-curdling scream was heard.

    He snapped his fingers and the two robed figures from before appeared. "Toushei and Lars have failed. You know what to do."

    "Yes," said the two, bowing. "We shall spy on the camp and see which campers' souls are worthy of feeding our Great Master!"

    "Don't underestimate the one who defeated Lars," said the robed one. "Whoever it is, he or she has awakened Timaeus."

    "You mean that big dragon guy you learned about?" asked one of the figures.

    "One of three Guardians of the Duel Monsters," growled the man. "Its power is capable of unlocking the hidden talents of Duel Monsters. It was one of the three which defeated Leviathan...we cannot afford to let the others awaken."

    "Don't worry, none can defeat us," chuckled the other figure. "But we will be wary." The figures vanished back into the shadows, leavint the man to his thoughts.

    "Who dares to stop my plans in avenging my beloved?" hissed the man, bowing his head. "I will destroy them all!"

    ~~+~~

    The plane landed safely in the beautiful rustic village which was in the Colorado mountains. After Lina's life-or-death duel, the pilot had managed to get the radio fixed - the damage caused by Toushei's gunshot hadn't disabled the radio, oddly - and a couple of police cars were on the scene to pick up the hijackers. They shackled Toushei and dragged Lars' lifeless body off the plane. Lina told a fib and said that the other guy had a heart attack from being unable to handle high altitudes. She smirked as the police promised to do an autopsy at the police lab in Denver for more info. They didn't know the truth.

    With that awful incident behind Diane and Lina, the two boarded a bus painted like a Blue Eyes White Dragon along with Gwen and Bethany as other planes touched down and more campers were herded to buses painted like various Duel Monster dragons. Lina let Diane sit with her new girlfriends as the buses started to roll out of the village. She sat to herself, collecting her thoughts. This is going to be a long and exciting adventure,she thought. She looked at the Eye of Timaeus in her hand. And something tells me that, somehow, this card will be the key to bringing me to my own world...

    Just then, a voice spoke. "Are you alone?"

    "Oh, it's you," said Lina, recognizing the voice and the dark-skinned woman who owned it. She was wearing shades and had short brown hair curled up at the bottom. "No, Twi, you can sit next to me."

    The woman sat down and smirked. "I see you are confused with what has happened."

    "Um, yeah," said Lina. She explained what had just happened on the plane. Her fellow counselor, who wore a white shirt with the Duelist Camp logo and the Witch of the Black Forest on the front, acted surprised.

    "Your plane was hijacked?" she asked.

    "Yeah," said Lina. "And those creeps were trying to take us to their boss. It was scary."

    "But you defeated them and saved the plane," said the woman, smirking. "You are very brave."

    "I didn't feel that way," sighed Lina, looking at the woman. Lina smirked as she recalled her first few days in orientation. She met the other counselors, and one of them was this woman, called Twilight. When asked if Twilight was her real name, she said "Does it matter if this name is real or not? As Shakespeare once said through the lips of Juliet...'A rose by any other name would smell just as sweet.'" Nobody bothered to ask about her name again.

    Twilight was a mysterious woman, who sometimes quoted from sources like Shakespeare and the Bible. She never told anyone what her family or life was like before Industrial Illusions hired her. Also, Twilight never really dueled, and when she died, she always used different decks against each opponent, so as to confuse her future opponents. One duelist faced a Dark Magician deck, and the next, packing his deck with spellcaster-killing cards, would find them useless as Twilight used an Archfiend deck. This confused a lot of people on how she owned so many powerful and rare cards. It was as if she was
    hiding her true deck for the right time.

    Lina dueled Twilight once, during the mini-tourney meant to place each counselor. She had faced off against Twilight's newest theme - a deck of ninja-type monsters. It was a difficult duel, and it ended in a draw when Twilight played Curse of Pain to counter a Wave-Motion Cannon Lina had activated, bringing both their life points to zero. In the end, the headmaster decided to put Twilight in the Witch of the Black cabin and Lina in the Dark Magician Girl cabin.

    It was during this duel that Lina discovered Twilight's secret - the woman was blind. She had found this out after using an Exchange card to steal Twilight's Sangan and realizing that all the card text had been carefully raised so that she could feel it. After asking about this, Twilight removed her glasses and showed cloudy eyes of purple, revealing her secret to her. Everyone but the headmaster had been shocked at this, but decided not to say a word.

    The card text had been raised so that Twilight could feel the text and know what it said. Having been raised on Braille since the time when she became blind due to her grandfather's foolish experiment - he had been a great scientist - she learned how to 'read' raised text like Braille. This way, she was able to duel, even though she couldn't see the monsters that appeared before her in virtual-monster duels.

    "I, too, was afraid once," grinned Twilight. "When my grandfather's project went wrong and I ended up like this, without my sight, I freaked and panicked, sobbing rivers. I thought I was doomed to a life of darkness and solitude. So I changed my name to reflect my dark world - Twilight. However, over the weeks and months, under the care of loving parents and kind siblings and cousins, I became brave. And soon, I was no longer afraid of my dark world. However, soon, I discovered that my world wasn't dark after all." She smirked.

    "Thanks for the pep talk," chuckled Lina. "Maybe one day, you could tell me what happened to make you go blind."

    "Maybe," said Twilight, smirking wryly.

    ~~+~~

    Meanwhile, Diane was having her own little talk with her new friends, Gwen and Bethany. Bethany had calmed down somewhat, but was still concerned about being without her parents. However, once she stopped whining, she became happy and talkative. Diane talked about decks and showed her own deck, the one Lina had helped her make.

    "Wow, a Guardian deck!" said Gwen. "I heard those decks are one of the hardest to play!"

    "I know," said Diane. "The Guardians are interesting monsters, but they cannot be summoned until their weapons are on the field, and since magic removal is a problem, you have to use strategy to get the Guardians to appear. But once you do, they can kick a lot of butt! I mean, look at this guy!" She showed the girls a card called "Guardian Baou." The card showed a hideous purple-skinned demon with spiked hair. "His attack is REALLY weak, but if you can equip him with his weapon, he gains 500 attack points! Not only that, but if you destroy a monster with him, he gains another 1000 attack!"

    "Wow, if he destroys enough monsters, I bet he'd be REALLY powerful!" said Bethany.

    "Yeah, if he isn't wiped out first," said Diane. "But the other Guardians have special powers too. I bet you'd love to see what they do. She giggled. "So, what about you guys? What decks do you have?"

    "Well," said Gwen. "I really don't want to tell you yet, but I've got a few surprises for you in my deck!" She giggled.

    "And what about you, Bethany?" asked Diane to the other girl.

    Bethany blushed. "I...uhm...I don't really have a theme..." She showed all her cards. "In fact, I don't even have any magic or trap cards. Just wimpy monsters."

    "Oh gosh, you're right!" said Diane. "Holograph? Oogachi? Unhappy Maiden? That's terrible!" She then had an idea. "I know, maybe Lina can help you put together your theme! She helped me with my own."

    "Thanks," said Bethany. "You see, I just yanked out a bunch of booster packs and got the worst luck."

    "There's supposed to be a gift shop at camp," said Gwen. "After the opening ceremonies, we can go visit it!"

    "Thanks, you two are the best," grinned Bethany.

    "Hey, what are friends for?" giggled Diane. "I think we'll enjoy this camp experience."

    ~~+~~

    As the bus drove up a mountain road, two figures were watching from a helicopter flying overhead, just high enough to stay out of the bus convoys' sight. One of the figures in the copter was watching through special binoculars. "So, those are the little brats our boss wanted us to watch, eh? Not much of anything."

    "Yeah, but one of those brats defeated Lars and awakened Timaeus," said the other figure, who was piloting the helicopter. "We can't afford to attack now. We'll have to watch and find out who was the twerp that made Lars lose his soul. Then we'll find a way to get that dragon out of her deck and take her soul."

    "Not to mention the others' souls," said the first figure. "The more souls we have, the happier our boss is."

    The copter trailed the bus until it entered the campgrounds.

    ~~+~~

    "Wow, we're here!" said Gwen, looking out the window. The buses pulled into a side road as a huge gate shaped like Toon World opened up with a loud creak, the page-like doors swinging open as the bus drove through. The gates closed behind them as the bus joined several others and came to a stop. The bus doors opened.

    "Everybody off!" said the driver. "Welcome to Duelist Camp, your home away from home!"

    "Yay!" cheered the campers as they got up and left the bus, pouring out like molasses from a jar.

    "Please, children, single-file," said Twilight, standing.

    "Yeah, we don't any camper to get trampled on her first day here!" laughed Lina as she also stood and found Diane. "You ready to begin your camp adventure, kid?"

    "You bet," said Diane.

    The two left the bus with everyone and Lina and Twilight worked to keep the crowd of girls from wandering off. Already, the other groups were coming out of their buses and soon the groups consisted of two groups of girls and two groups of boys. One stout little boy snorted as he saw Lina and Twilight's group. "Snickering little girls," he said.

    "Hey!" snapped Gwen. "That's not nice you know!"

    "Come over here and say it to my face, then!" laughed the boy.

    "Gladly!" hissed Gwen, rolling up her sleeves. Lina stopped her. "Hey!"

    "Come on, let's not fight," said Lina. "Let's be friends here."

    "Friends? With you? Hardly," said a voice. Lina stiffened as she heard that voice and turned slowly to face a tall red-haired man who, while handsome on the outside, was utterly vile on the inside. He wore a tee-shirt marked with the figure of the Marauding Captain Duel Monster and a cap that was like a white tennis cap. "Well, Mystara, I see we meet again. I thought you had run off and abandoned us."

    Lina ground her teeth. "I was taking care of a camper."

    "Oh?" said the man, slicking his hair back. "And why did the headmaster send you to give SPECIAL treatment to this girl?"

    "Shut up, Arnold!" shouted Lina, clenching a fist. Arnold had been getting on Lina's nerves ever since they first met. At first, he had tried to make advances on her, but when that failed, he started to treat her like dirt. Maybe it was because Arnold got a black eye from trying to steal a kiss from her that triggered the mood change. Whatever happened, Lina soon became a target for Arnold to tease and mock, getting a high in seeing her get teed-off. In other words, a verbal bully. "The reason I had to take care of this girl was because she had nobody to stay with! You wanted her to go a hospice?"

    "Cut it out, Arn," said a younger boy who had a boyish face and short dark blue hair. His shirt had a Penguin Knight on it. "You know what the headmaster said. Me or Twilight might have gone, but we had duties. And we all know why Machus didn't choose YOU as the caretaker."

    "Hmph," said Arnold, scrunching his nose. "Like I'd CARE about babysitting a little brat!"

    Diane scowled and clenched her fist. "I am that BRAT, and if my sister heard you say that, she kick your behind!"

    "Like she could," grinned Arnold. "Violence is forbidden in Duelist Camp, and I'm sure her petty deck wouldn't stand a chance against my powerful army deck!"

    Lina sighed. Arnold had a point, his deck consisted mainly of warriors and spellcasters that worked together on the field, and had Magic and Trap cards to support them, like The A.Forces. However, she wondered whether Sheena's insect deck - which had defeated a former champion - could be taken down by such a deck.

    "Just be glad your big sister is working as a Centurion, my dear," said Arnold with a smirk. "And can't duel me now."

    "Oh yeah, wanna bet?" grinned Diane. She knew Arnold didn't know what Lina's job REALLY was, and had been given a false job title to keep everyone from know about her 'alter-ego', Shelob.

    "Hey," said a woman wearing a Shining Friendship t-shirt. "Come on, you guys! Brandon, Arnold, get your group together! The opening ceremonies are going to start in ten minutes!"

    "Oh yeah," said Brandon, the younger man. "Arn, come on, we can talk our ears off all day, but that won't help if Machus finds out we were late to the opening ceremonies. He's officiating them."

    "Okay, whatever," said Arnold, glaring at Lina. "This isn't over. Sooner or later, I'll have the pleasure of kicking your little charge's body about with my army deck!" He sniggered as he and Brandon went and corraled the group.

    "I'd love to take her on myself," said the stout boy with a wicked grin. "Ha ha ha...my deck has never failed me!"

    "We'll see, in a duel," said Diane through clenched teeth.

    "That was close," sighed Lina. "I didn't want to get into a bickering match now. I don't get paid for this." She turned to Twilight, who nodded. "Okay, girls, everyone follow us to the Camp Stadium!"

    To be continued in the next post...
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    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    This was alright. A bit longwinded, but alright. I like how you've got a clear grasp of what everything looks like. It's always helpful to completely understand the setting you're trying to portray.

    Some of the speech seemed a little unnatural, though. For instance, Twilight's monologue about what happened when she went blind had a few different tones to it, as if she was a young, playful person in one sentence and very solemn the next. Make sure your characters don't change moods too rapidly, unless there's something specific to change them. Also, make sure the dialogue uses good dialect.

    On the other hand, you're doing a good job with characterization. It's pretty easy to see what kind of attitudes everyone has. Poor Beth, though... it's gotta be hard to be young and away from your family!

    This was pretty good, though. It's quite obviously a filler, but almost every fic has to have one of those somewhere. You did a decent job with this one. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter, where (I hope) the action will really begin! See you then!
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    You got my attention. Twilight seems to be an interesting character. I have GOT to see her in a duel eventually.

    It seems that Lina and Diane both have rivals now. This could prove interesting.

    I'm quite curious to see what kind of deck Gwen has...

    And these two twin sister villains... seems familiar to those who play the game. Gemini Elf? I wonder.

    Anyway, good job, and I can't wait until Chapter Five.

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    mr_pikachu: I apologize if Twilight conversation was jumping about. I'm not really that good at portraying characters properly. I will try to revise it in the future - maybe I can edit all the chapter posts later if I have the time.

    By the way,your Quizmaster entry will be up soon.

    Venusaur: Don't worry. Twilight,Gwen,and Bethany will get to duel. In fact,when the camp tournament(in the later half of the fic) takes place,Lina and the other counselors will be given special jobs to do in the tournament. I can't say right now,but they will be dueling campers. You'll learn more about the tournament in future chapters.
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    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Yu-Gi-Oh Jr.: Sister of Anansi
    A Yu-Gi-Oh fanfic-crossover fanfic by .hack//BELLOSSOM

    Chapter 5: Diane's First Duel


    “Then first things first, ” said Remi. “Consider this a gift.”

    He waved his Rod, and a package appeared at Yugi’s feet.

    “Open it!” said Remi. “It isn’t a bomb…”

    Yugi unwrapped the package and lifted a device out. It was a dueling disk console, just like the magical ones Cassie had conjured up.

    “No more archaic dueling stations, folks, ” he said. “Now we move up to the big leagues.”


    - From "City of Souls"


    It had been five days since Duelist Camp had started. For two people, the experience had been pleasant so far. For Lina, she was pretty proud of herself for keeping a bunch of giggly schoolgirls in line. Normally, she didn't have much trouble with running the show. After all, her foster dad had taught her how to run the company when the time came for him to retire. To the casual observer, to run a company and keep a bunch of kids in line seemed synonmous.

    To Lina, however, it was completely different. For one thing, company workers didn't whine(like Bethany tended to do at times) or get skinned knees(like the Harry Potter fangirl did at times, especially when she was trying to keep up with the others). Another thing was that company workers always knew what they had a problem with and told the boss up-front. Girl campers, on the other hand, tended to be ambigious. Bethany, whenever she whined, always had a various number of reasons - she was hungry, she was tired, she was homesick for her parents, and so on. It was enough to drive even Muhatma Gandhi, the role model for non-violence, into a killing rage. Luckily, Lina had a ton of patience.

    Diane, on the other hand, felt giddy and excited. And she knew why. The announcement came that morning that, after their weekend visit to town, the girls would be granted their Duel Disks. She had been on pins and needles as the day grew closer. She had taken the workshops with stride. At first, she was bored to tears by the workshops showing campers how to play Duel Monsters. She didn't need it, her sister had taught her on how to duel by practicing with her. She was able to grasp the rules well, especially the complicated Mach-3 rules which were going to be used in the parallel tournaments of both Duelist Camp and Dueltopia. However, she knew that some campers didn't even know what the game was about, so she bore the lessons with the patience of Hercules.

    The first two days of workshops had been on basic rules for the game. The next two days were special rules for various deck types, like Archfiends. The last day's workshop was basically a run down on the technology of the Duel Disks that the campers would receive and how to operate them. Bethany tended to whine a lot in the workshops, crying "I don't understaaaaand! My head huuuuurts!" when a tricky concept was explained, but luckily Lina and Diane were there to ease the pain by simplifying it or analogizing it. In some ways, they were better tutors than the assigned workshop instructors.

    Now she was good and ready to take on the responsiblity of owning and maintaining a real live Duel Disk. She had heard romantic stories about how the Duel Disks worked in Battle City, and had gotten some e-mails from Sheena about how the Duel Disk she would be using made everything seem real. She couldn't wait to try it out! Of course, she had seen the four dueling arenas used in the game room, but never had a chance to try them out herself, mainly because of a certain someone who kept hogging them for himself.

    "Hey, spider girl!" shouted a familiar voice as the group were entering a hamburger joint. Diane turned and saw who it was, it was the boy who had been hogging the dueling arenas, the stout boy who made fun at her in the beginning of camp. He had short brown hair, grey eyes, and wore the camp t-shirt, bearing the Marauding Captain picture of his cabin. "What's up?"

    "Spider girl?" asked Diane.

    "Yeah, I read somewhere that Arachne is a mythological figure who was turned into a spider, so I decided to call you SPIDER GIRL!" He snorted with laughter as a couple of boys around him did the same. "Guess it fits, huh? You're so willowy and weak."

    Diane scowled. "Say that to my face, you--"

    "Now now," said Lina. "No fighting!" She glared at the boy. "Norus Rygar, you take back what you said about Diane!"

    "He doesn't have to take back anything if he doesn't want to, Lina," said Arnold, walking up. "I take all responsiblity for my cabin."

    "You stay out of this, Arn," hissed Lina, clenching a fist subconsciously with gritted teeth.

    "I don't need anyone sticking up for me, Lina," said Diane, glaring at the boy. "He's going down, oh yeah!"

    "You think you can take me on, spider girl?" grinned Norus, cracking his knuckles.

    "Norus, please!" whispered Arnold. "The rules..."

    "I know, but I'm not gonna punch her," grinned Norus. He whipped out his cards. "How about a duel? I bet I could send you back to the camp crying like a little baby!"

    "Takes more than that to make me cry," Diane hissed.

    Bethany suddenly broke down. "WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! I don't wanna hear any more arguing! WAAAAAAAAAAH!"

    "Calm down, calm down," said Lina, comforting Beth.

    "Well, seems there's a problem here," said Arnold, smirking.

    "Shut up," hissed Lina.

    "Only stating the obvious," grinned Arnold. "Say what, let's have a little wager, shall we? Norus will duel Diane. The loser has to order pizza for the winner and pay out of their own salary."

    "You're crazy, I'm not making a bet with you, Arn," said Lina.

    "Oh, scared?" grinned Arnold. "I didn't think you would want to. You're just a wimp. I'm surprised that you even survived in that terrorist attack on your plane..."

    Lina hissed and slammed her fist into her hand. "OKAY! YOU JUST MAED ME FURIOUS!" She snorted steam. "I'll take your bet if it gets you off my back." She slammed a hand down on Diane's shoulder. "My little friend here is a prodigy, she won't lose to the likes of anyone, especially one of your whiny cabin members!"

    "Hey, you take that back!" growled Norus. "My deck has NEVER failed! I've already beaten the crud out of six campers this week!"

    "Arena hog," said Diane. "I'm gonna teach you some respect!" She took out her cards and scowled angrily.

    "Let's make this interesting, shall we?" said Norus. "The instant we get our Duel Disks, meet me outside the game room and we'll have an epic battle there with all the trimmings! The first Duel Disk duel will be you against me!"

    "That's reasonable," said Lina. "After all, we don't want to get grease on our palms or lose our appetite."

    "Fine, I can't wait to kick your butt!" said Diane. She went into the fast-food place and the others followed.

    Arnold smirked. "I hope you're ready to fork over some of your cash. We will send over the list of all the pizzas we want ordered, as well as drinks." He chuckled as he left.

    "Fine, but I'll PERSONALLY deliver our list of preferences when MY champion defeats yours, you bigot," hissed Lina. She sighed. Blast it, what a way to ruin a good meal... "Okay kids, let's go inside and hurry. We've only got an hour before the bus comes."

    ~~+~~

    Far away, on the tropical resort of Duelatopia, Sheena was having a lunch of her own with a woman her age. "So," said the woman. "You never really told me much about your sister, other than the fact that you have one. What's Diane like?"

    Sheena chuckled. "Oh, Diane...she really wants to be as good as me. Last time we dueled together, she really had a lot of spunk. Of course, I totally dominated her with my insects, but she told me she would keep trying. Anyways, in the last e-mail, she told me about all the perks she got in her camp cabin. Not like the time I went to summer camp. It was a very rustic affair."

    "Well, from what Sieg told us, he said he wanted to make sure that the Duelist Camp where our children stay for the tournament is very comfortable. I'm sure she would get perks. Look at us!"

    Sheena laughed. "Well, there's a difference, Merisa. WE are Eliminators. Our job will be to take down any duelist who has the foolishness to think they are hot stuff. Personally, I can't wait to wipe out the first fool who thinks that he's got what it takes to defeat the Master of Games."

    "Yeah, I see what you're talking about," grinned Merisa. "I'd love to see those fools try to put their cards where their mouths are. You know, I really wish we COULD do nasty things to them."

    "Yeah, but then we might end up being outcasts," said Sheena. "I'm certainly glad I WON'T eat the losers of my duels! I'm not really a cannibal. But the poor fools will THINK I'm gonna eat their bones and then...poof, they find themselves out of it for an hour and their Duel Disks deactivated for good."

    Merisa giggled. "Well, it will certainly slice down their ego a bit. Remember that Etna Prometheus chick?"

    "Yeah, the 'daughter of Mt. Etna?'" giggled Sheena. "I bet she just had some special make-up on to withstand extreme heat so that every person in the world would worship her as a fire goddess. Idiot. Not like my sister. Diane may be spunky, but she knows her limits." She sighed as stirred her noodles about with her fork. "I only hope she isn't doing something stupid right now..."

    ~~+~~

    The lunch hour passed and, at 1:30 in the afternoon, the buses returned the campers to their cabins, where they rushed in and found the boxes on the desks with glee.

    "Now kids," said Lina as her cabin-mates rushed to their rooms. "Don't rush! These are not toys! Well, technically they are toys, but..." She sighed as she found herself alone. "Oh boy..."

    Diane squealed as she ripped opened the box and sent a spray of styrofoam noodles all over the place as she pulled out her Duel Disk. "My own Dueling Disk," she giggled, slipping it on her arm.

    Gwen and Bethany came into the room, brandishing their own Disks. "We got ours too!" said Gwen, showing off her Duel Disk. "I can't wait to duel someone with it. Too bad you got the first duel."

    "Don't worry, you'll get to use the Disk too," said Diane.

    "Even though my deck sucks," said Bethany. "I can't wait to see the cards I play come ot life!"

    "Don't worry, your deck won't suck for much longer." She winked.

    Lina came in. "So, how do you girls like your new Duel Disks?"

    "AWESOME!" cried the three in unison.

    "Well, I hate to be a bore, but Diane has a duel to attend," said Lina. "Are you ready to take down that kid?"

    Diane brandished her Duel Disk. "More than ready!"

    ~~+~~

    The clock rang out two tones as dust blew in the wind. It was like an old spaghetti Western as the girls arrived at the area in front of the game room, where Arnold and his troupe awaited. "Well well," said Arnold with crossed arms and a sneer. "I didn't think you were going to make it. We've been waiting for you."

    "You think I'd back down from a challenge, beaver boy?" grinned Lina. "Diane, you show this jerk what you've got."

    "Gladly," said Diane, stepping forward. "Norus! Let's duel!"

    Norus smirked as he stepped forward, his Duel Disk in position. "Just watch! I'm going to make an example of you!"

    "As if!" said Diane. Daggers shot between their eyes.

    "I'll officate," said Lina, stepping between the two. "After all, I did learn a few things about refereeing Duel Monsters matches." She turned to Arnold, who nodded. "Okay, here are the rules - you each get 8000 life points. You must sacrifice weaker monsters to tribute stronger ones. Also, I'll know if there is any cheating."

    "I'd never cheat against a brat like her," scoffed Norus.

    "You're gonna pay double for that insult!" snapped Diane.

    "Shuffle and load," said Lina. "And good luck." She stepped away, but remained on the sidelines just in case.

    The two shuffled their cards and then slid the decks into the disks. "Go holo-projectors," they both cried as the little projectors flew out of the disk sides and landed on either side of each duelist, lighting up to form an invisible arena for the first Duel Disk match of the camp season. Both had their life points rise to 8000, the life point total which would be used for Mach-3 rules.

    "I wanna go first!" shouted Norus.

    "No way, I'm going first!" snapped Diane.

    "ME FIRST!"

    "ME FIRST!"

    "ME!

    "ME!"

    Lina blew her whistle very loudly. "Okay, that's enough, you two! We'll flip for it!" She took out a coin. "Call it!"

    "Heads!" said Diane.

    Lina flipped the coin into the air and, despite grazing a bird's wing, it landed in her hand, which she slapped onto the back of the other. She checked it. "Heads."

    "All right, I go first!" cried Diane, leaping in the air.

    "Now now," scolded Lina. "Just because you go first doesn't mean you'll get an advantage. Your opponent might be able to learn your strategy."

    "Hmmm...you're right, Lina," said Diane as the two drew their hands. She drew a card and then smirked. "Okay, let's start this party! To start, I think I'll set a monster in defense and a card face-down."

    The cards appeared before her like tiny mats, their faces down.

    "And that's my turn," said Diane. "Go."

    Norus growled and drew a card, then smirked. "All right! This will work." He slid the card into the disk slot. "I activate the magic card Painful Choice!" Five cards appeared before him.

    "What does that do?" asked Bethany, confused.

    "Simple, crybaby," grinned Norus. "I show five cards from my deck, and your friend has to pick one of them to add to my hand! The rest get sent to the graveyard."

    "Hmmm..." said Diane.

    Lina frowned. "Be careful, Di. I have a bad feeling that he WANTS you to send monsters to the graveyard." She pondered. I've heard of a monster which requires monsters to be in the graveyard to summon, but I can't put my finger on it...

    "Choose carefully, because the wrong choice might HELP me," grinned Norus wickedly as the cards showed themselves to Diane.

    Diane looked over the cards. Four monsters, mostly fiends and spellcasters, and a magic card. I bet that his deck is full of these dark monsters. Oh well... "That one." She pointed to the Sword of Dark Destruction card.

    "Fine," said Norus, taking the equipment card and sliding the rest of the cards in the discard slot. "And now, you're about to regret sending my fiends to the graveyard!" He chuckled.

    "Huh?" asked Diane.

    He slid out three cards from the discard slot. "I'm removing them from the game!" He slid the fiend monsters into a removal slot. The monsters briefly appeared - a Mystic Clown(1500/1200), a La Jinn Genie of the Mystical Lamp(1800/800) and an Octiclops(1800/1000) - and then they vanished in a flash of light. "By doing this, I can summon one of my most powerful monsters...DARK NECROFEAR!"

    The sky turned dark and three dark wisps of smoke came down from the sky, forming into a wicked monster. This monster looked like a bald blue-skinned woman who held a bundle in her arms and wore a sari, a Hindu toga. Her dead eyes burned with malice. (2200/2800)

    "I knew it," sighed Lina.

    "And now, Dark Necrofear, hit that face-down monster with Doom Glare!" cried Norus. The demonic being's eyes flared with light and beams of dark energy slammed into the card, shattering it and the Ancient Elf(1450/1200) that resided beneath it.

    "Oh no," said Diane.

    "Don't worry," said Gwen. "It's just a minor setback."

    "To end my turn, I'll play two cards face-down," said Norus. Two cards appeared in a flash between him and his monster. "Your turn."

    Diane drew a card, then smirked. "This should work. I'm activating my face-down card, Bow of Shooting Stars - Ceal!" She tapped the button on the side of her disk and the card flipped up, revealing an altar with a bow and arrow. The card vanished and the very bow and arrow appeared in Dark Necrofear's hands. "Since I have no monsters on my field to equip my Bow of Shooting Stars to, I'm equipping it to YOUR Dark Necrofear!"

    "What? You're giving this to me?" asked Norus in shock. He smirked. "What a generous gift! Thanks!"

    "Oh, it's not a gift, more of a curse," grinned Diane. "You see, when I equip a monster with the Bow of Shooting Stars, its attack drops by a whopping 1000 attack!" Dark Necrofear's attack went to 1200.

    "What? No!" cried Norus. "My Dark Necrofear!"

    "And not only that, but now that I made the Bow appear," said Diane, sliding a monster card into the disk. "I can summon its owner! Guardian Ceal!" The card appeared and disgorged a red-scaled lizard like creature wearing burlap clothing. (1700/1400)

    "What's that?" cried Norus in shock.

    "One of the Guardians, a group of special monsters who own powerful weapons," said Diane, grinning. "Long ago, when the creatures of the Shadow Realm were summoned by the ancient Egyptians, a great civil war broke out between the owner of the Milennium Rod and the great Pharoah. Fearing the destruction of their world, a group of smiths forged six powerful weapons that could protect them from the armies of evil. However, fearing that the evil ones would seize the weapons for their own desires, they took further measures and bound their own souls to the weapons, sacrificing their lives to make these weapons into powerful Shadow Weapons that could only be used by the monsters formed from their souls - the Guardians."

    "Wow, that was an awesome tale," said Gwen.

    Lina smirked. "Yes, and what's more is that, because the Guardians and their weapons are linked due to the spells placed on the artifacts, it's impossible to summon a Guardian onto the field without first equipping their weapon to a monster."

    "Sounds like a lot of hard work to play these monsters," said a male camper in awe. "Diane must be determined to make it work."

    "I know," said Lina, smirking. And I gave her all the help I could give. Let's just hope she doesn't blow it.

    "Ha, your stupid Guardian fairy tale is a joke," said Norus.

    "Well, you are about to see Ceal's power," said Diane. "Guardian Ceal, destroy that fiend with your Shooting Star Spray!" The monster took out a bow similar to the one being held by Dark Necrofear and fired into the air. A beam of light disappeared into the clouds and then came down as a meteor shower, blasting Dark Necrofear and the Bow it carried into bits with a loud explosion. Norus' life points dropped to 7500. "Of course, destroying the Bow doesn't mean that Ceal vanishes, because the weapon only has to be there to summon him. I guess that's that for your monster!"

    "That's what you think," grinned Norus. "Dark Necrofear has a deadly effect that activates when you destroy her with a monster!"

    Suddenly, a black nimbus covered Guardian Ceal and his eyes grew dead and pupiless. He then jumped over to Norus' field.

    "What?" cried Diane. "My Guardian!"

    "Ha ha ha!" laughed Norus. "You see, when you destroy Dark Necrofear with a monster, her ghost possesses the monster that destroyed it and I get to control it until the next end phase!"

    "No," said Diane in horror.

    "Yes!" said Norus. "And now it's my turn." He drew a card. "Now I'll sacrifice your little monster to summon one of my own! King of Yamimakai!" The reptilian beast vanished and was consumed by a dark mist that created a hideous eyeless fiend. (2000/1530)

    "Oh no!" said Lina in horror.

    "And now that you have nothing to defend yourself with," grinned Norus. "KING OF YAMIMAKAI! DIRECT ATTACK!" The hulky fiend lumbered over and slammed a fist in Diane's gut, making her scream and double over in pain as her life points dropped to 6000. "Hertz donut!"

    "Her--oh, I get it," hissed Gwen in disgust. "Very funny." She turned to her friend. "You okay, Diane?"

    "Yeah...just shocked at the rumble pack feature," coughed Diane. "This is the first time I've ever felt it before."

    "Why don't you just give up then, you wimp?" laughed Norus.

    Diane scowled. "Never! You just got a head start, that's all!"

    "Way more than you know," grinned Norus, pressing his button. "I activate the magic card Sebek's Blessing!" A card showing a crocodile priest appeared and exploded in light. "This lets me gain the same amount of life points that you lost from that attack, so now my life points go up!" Sure enough, his life points went up to a grand total of 9500. "That ends my turn."

    Diane scowled as she drew her card. She saw it and nodded. "Okay then, since your LAST monster liked my gift, I'm giving your next monster one as well!" Sliding the card in, two daggers appeared in the demon king's fists. "Twin Flashing Swords of Light - Tryce!"

    "Ha ha ha, you are way too kind, girl!" said Norus. "Thanks!"

    "Once again, you misjudge me," said Diane with a smirk. "These weapons also reduce your monster's attack, but only by half the amount of the Bow." The King's attack dropped to 1500. "And I'll set a monster in defense mode. End turn."

    "Grrr...you're going to pay for that!" shouted Norus. "I know for a fact that the Twin Swords allow me to attack twice! So I'll destroy your monster, then hit you for another direct attack! King of Yamimakai, take out that face-down monster and make her feel pain!"

    The demon roared as it charged and stabbed the face-down monster, which grabbed the dagger and forced the demon back. It revealed itself to be a chanting elf priestess. (800/2000) The King stabbed again, but was forced back by the elf's magic shield.

    "You struck my Mystical Elf," grinned Diane. "And since you attacked twice, you suffered 1000 life points of damage."

    Norus' life meter dropped to 8500. "This isn't over yet, Diane! I'll make you scream in pain when I'm done with you!"

    "Try it," said Diane, doing a raspberry.

    "I can't do anything," scowled Norus. "But end my turn."

    "Great," said Diane, drawing a card and switch it in her hand. "Next, I'll sacrifice my Mystical Elf..." The elf vanished in a cloud of light. "To summon the second Guardian, Guardian Tryce!"

    The light parted to reveal a VERY handsome man with the twin daggers in his hand. He wore a beautiful golden toga. (1900/1700)

    "Great!" said Lina. "Go and get rid of that jerk!"

    "Gladly," said Diane, flashing a smile. "Tryce, take down that oversized behemoth with Double Blade of Light!"

    The handsome warrior charged forward, blades out.

    "Ha, you stupid brat, fell right into my trap!" laughed Norus, flipping up one of his face-down cards. "SHADOW SPELL!"

    "What? NO!" cried Diane in horror, watching the dark chains shoot out of the card and bind Tryce.

    "This trap card not only prevents your monster from attacking," grinned Norus. "It also reduces his attack by 800 points!"

    Diane watched in horror as the Guardian was infused with dark energy. (1100/1700)

    "And what's more, he can't change his position!" said Norus.

    "I end my turn," said Diane sadly.

    "NO!" cried Gwen. "He'll kill you!"

    "Of course I will, sissy," grinned Norus, drawing a card. "Ah, a good one! I summon Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer to the field!" A bald monk holding a chain of beads in one hand came out of a card. (1800/800) "Now, King of Yamimakai, let's try this again! Fist of Fury!"

    The monster lunged and stabbed Tryce in the heart. He screamed as he exploded into bits and Diane's life points dropped to 5500.

    "And hit her again!" roared Norus. Diane screamed and covered her face as the blade bit into her face, dropping her life points to 4000. "And now Kycoo, use your Spell of Banishment on her!"

    The monk chanted in a strange tongue and launched a green energy at Diane, flinging her back painfully. She moaned in pain as her life points dropped to 2200.

    "And that's not all, Di," chortled Norus as the disk pulled an arm out and yanked two cards from Diane's discard slot and shoved them into the removal slot. "When Kycoo does life point damage to you, I get to remove two of your monsters from the graveyard from play, and I'm removing those two sissy Guardians so you can't bring them back with Monster Reborn. Ha ha ha!"

    "What a waste," said Diane, getting up painfully and holding her chest. "I couldn't bring them back. ALL summons of the Guardian require their weapon to be on the field, so it would have failed if I had tried to revive Ceal with Monster Reborn, since his Bow is in the graveyard now."

    "Doesn't matter, I prefer not to take my chances," grinned Norus. "You might as well surrender, one more hit from my King and you're finished! And even if you got rid of the Swords, I could still take you out with both my monsters!"

    Arnold smirked. "Say, why don't we have Lina deliver the pizzas to us personally? She might look sexy in one of those delivery hats."

    Lina scowled and steam shot from her ears. "Diane's not down yet!"

    Diane sighed. "I dunno, it seems hopeless."

    "Don't give up, Diane!" said Bethany. "I'm sure you can pull through. Even though I can't see a way out, I bet you can win!"

    "If even BETH, the PESSIMIST, is rooting for you," grinned Gwen. "You're sure to win this duel!"

    "Oh give it up," said Arnold. "As you see, my champion has the advantage. Yours has no monsters on the field and even if she did summon one, it wouldn't protect her from defeat."

    "Heh, I've got a big fanclub! I'm the best!" boasted Norus.

    Diane scowled as she drew her card. "I'm not about to lose to a jerk like you, you big bully! Your stupid fiends and spellcasters don't scare me!" She looked at the card, then grinned and showed it. "I have Pot of Greed, which means I can draw two new cards." She discarded the Pot of Greed and drew two cards, then looked at them. "All right, just what I wanted! Prepare to lose your advantage!"

    "Yeah right," said Norus.

    Diane slid a card into the magic slot and it appeared, showing a wicked monk surrounded by ghosts. "I play Eternal Rest!"

    "What? NO!" cried Norus in horror. "That...!"

    "Destroys all monsters who are equipped with weapons," smirked Diane. "And there's only one...your King of Yamikamai!"

    The King roared in anguish as evil spirits shot from the glowing card and tore him into pixels. Norus' life points dropped to 9175.

    "Wow, I didn't know you had such a card," said Lina.

    "Well, since I tend to equip weapons to my enemies to weaken them and those weapons have deadly side-effects, I have to have a means to destroy them. If Norus had gotten off an attack of his Dark Necrofear, I would have taken direct damage thanks to its special side-effect. Luckily, I had Guardian Ceal in my hand."

    "Whoa," said Gwen.

    "Hmph, thanks for nothing," said Norus. "You only delayed your demise by another turn. Once I strike two times with Kycoo, your life points are all but history!"

    "That's what you think, jerk!" said Diane, shoving another card into the magic zone. "I play another magic card, SNATCH STEAL!" The card appeared, showing a robber mugging a man.

    "No, that's like Change of Heart!" cried Norus.

    "That's right," said Diane as a tentacle slithered out of the card. "I get to equip this to your monster and it becomes mine as long as its equipped." The tentacle wrapped itself around Kycoo's neck and he was yanked over to Diane's field. "Your monster is now mine!"

    "No, I know what's coming next!" screamed Norus in horror.

    "That's right...KYCOO! ATTACK DIRECTLY!" commanded Diane. The monk chantted and fired his spell into Norus' body. Norus screamed in agony as he was flung back a few feet. His life points dropped to 7375. "And you know the rules...since I damaged your life points, I get to remove two monsters from your graveyard, and I choose your King of Yamimakai and your Dark Necrofear!" The robot arm transferred the cards from the discard slot to the removal slot.

    "No, my Dark Necrofear," said Norus in sorrow.

    "I know about how you can revive Dark Necrofear by sending three more fiends from play," said Diane. "And I'm not about to let you summon that THING again!"

    "Heh," said Arnold. "You are obviously an idiot, Diane. Don't you realize that those life points you took away will recover in turns, thanks to Snatch Steal's special drawback."

    "I know all about that," grinned Diane. "Every time Norus gets a turn, he gains 1000 life points...but I'm not going to keep this guy around before that happens!" She switched cards. "I tribute your Kycoo the Ghost Destroyer to set a monster in defense mode!" The monk was devoured by light and the card went back to Norus and was placed in his discard slot, and a monster card appeared before her.

    "Argh!" cried Norus. "Oh well, I'm still way ahead of you!"

    "We'll see about that," grinned Diane. "Your turn."

    Norsu drew a card, then played another. "I summon Three-Headed Geedo to the field." A fiendish monster with three masks appeared. (1200/1000) "And I'll equip him with the magic card I got from Painful Choice, Sword of Dark Destruction!" The dark jagged blade appeared in the monster's hands. "This raises my monster's attack power by 400 at the cost of 200 defense!" (1600/800)

    "Like that's gonna help," grinned Diane. "But go ahead."

    "Attack, my monster!" cried Norus. The fiend charged and slashed at the card, which flipped over to reveal a golden porcupine. "What?!"

    "You just hit my Two-Thousand Needles pet," said Diane. (2000/1800) "And not only did you lose two hundred points, but you also activated it special effect!" The blade cracked and shattered. "When it gets attacked by a weaker monster while in defense mode, it destroys the monster!" The hedgehog squealed and shot golden spines that pierced the fiend, destroying it.

    Norus' life points dropped to 6775. "Shoot," he snarled.

    "Don't worry, you'll get rid of her soon enough, she can't defend forever," said Arnold with a sneer.

    "That's right, you know," grinned Diane. "So, end your turn."

    "Huh?" asked Norus. "Uh, okay."

    "Good," Diane grinned as she drew a card. "Now it's my turn. I'll sacrifice my Two-Thousand Needles to summon Ghost Knight of Jackal!" The hedgehog vanished and a loud whinney was heard as a jackal-headed warrior charged onto the field, riding a horse wearing armor the same color as it. (1700/1600)

    "Ha ha ha!" cried Norus, holding his head in laughter. "THAT was what you tributed for? You tributed a strong monster for a weakling? You're completely whacked!"

    "I had my reasons," grinned Diane. "And now, I'll equip him with not one, but TWO weapons! Demon Axe - Grarl and Parasite Bow!" The jackal warrior's lance vanished and a black crossbow appeared on his back and he gripped a two-bladed axe. "Demon Axe, unlike its precedessors, raises the equipped monster's attack!" (2200/1600)

    "Oh shoot," said Norus, bugging out.

    "But...I won't attack," said Diane. "I'll simply place one card face-down and end my turn." The card appeared behind the horse rider.

    "Don't worry, you've got a chance," grinned Arnold. "You've got a monster stronger than that hoser horseman."

    Norus calmed down, then smirked. "Yeah." He drew and grinned wickedly. "I've got you now!" He flipped the card he drew over.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Hey, it's finally out! Great! Nicely done with that duel.

    I like the attitudes of the characters. I kinda think that Norus was a tad overboard (what little kid knows the word "slut"?), but it's better for them to have too much character than too little. Gotta love Lina's bit of revenge there. It's great how Arnold's revenge was turned against him. But he seems downright vile, really... how did he get a job as a caretaker of these kids, and what's the root of his anger? I guess we'll find out eventually.

    I do think you should have done more editing, though. I noticed numerous places where letters were swapped or missing altogether in words. Also, it's not a good idea to make sarcastic comments or smileys in the narration. (The bit with the seven years of bad luck would have worked much better as dialogue.)

    Still, this was pretty good. Diane's first duel was done very well. I only hope Arnold doesn't give her too much hell...

    Well, see you next chapter!


    EDIT: Venusaur makes a very good point. Or bad point, as it were. Boy, wouldn't that be freaky... Tristan's legacy may not be as bright as his friends'...

    And indeed, what about Serenity? *pauses* .hack's stealing your world from you, Venusaur! This could change everything!
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    Interesting.

    That was a great duel, and I loved the humor aspect. One small point. As I've said before, the American name of Grarl's weapon is "Gravity Axe", not "Demon Axe"

    But something troubles me...

    Arnold's uncle's favorite card was Cyber Commander? That was Tristan's favorite card! Is Arnold Tristan's nephew?! Is Tristan dead? If so, it couldn't have been from old age - this isn't THAT far in the future.

    Suddenly I'm worrying about what has become of Serenity in this world...

    Whoa, this puts a whole new spin on things. I never went into the fate of Tristan Taylor in my fanfics, but I just know this means something.

    Oh, and that was a great card you made up, Pik.

    - Venusaur

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    To mr_pikachu: I'm glad you liked it. I didn't use the other ideas,but I may put them in other stories.

    I admit I made a lot of errors. One was the over-characterization of Norus. That's a common badfic error - the fanperson goes overboard on a "bad guy",demonizing him. Luckily,I can take criticism in stride and use that to better my chapters. Also,I admit that I rushed this chapter again without double-checking the whole thing. At least I didn't end up get cut-off sentences - I changed WordPad ot "Wrap to Ruler" so I could get an idea of what it would be formattied in the thread. (Don't worry the rest of the stuff will be fixed ASAP)

    Also,I will take time to fix each chapter and replace it in the posts I made. And I didn't intend to steal Venusaur's world for any reason.

    To Venusaur: Whoops! I screwed up again! Somehow,I keep thinking of Demon Axe and not the other thing.

    But something troubles me...

    Arnold's uncle's favorite card was Cyber Commander? That was Tristan's favorite card! Is Arnold Tristan's nephew?! Is Tristan dead? If so, it couldn't have been from old age - this isn't THAT far in the future.
    I apologize - I should have PM'd you with a discussion on that. I'll send a PM to you later about Tristan and Serenity.
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    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    Quote Originally Posted by .hack//BELLOSSOM
    Quote Originally Posted by Venusaur
    But something troubles me...

    Arnold's uncle's favorite card was Cyber Commander? That was Tristan's favorite card! Is Arnold Tristan's nephew?! Is Tristan dead? If so, it couldn't have been from old age - this isn't THAT far in the future.
    I apologize - I should have PM'd you with a discussion on that. I'll send a PM to you later about Tristan and Serenity.
    *JAW HITS FLOOR*

    So it IS true? Oh, man... this is unbelievable... the legacy of one of the good guys... is a chauvenistic, enraged pig. Who's up for some barbeque!

    *punches arm*

    *winces*

    No, this isn't a dream... O_O
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    Don't worry,I assure you that old Arnold will realize the error of his ways later in the story. I NEVER intended to make everyone look like a jerk when they are related to the canon characters,even though Tristan was sort of the black sheep.
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    I thought I wouldn't like this after reading Venusaur's fics but I was dead wrong. This is really good and I can't wait for more of it. The two dimensions is an interesting concept and Lina and the Arachne sisters are great characters. I was hoping to see Norus getting smacked around or getting kicked out but whatever

    Of course, there are the few mistakes, grammatical errors, switching names, but that's minor. Keep it up
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    Ooh,cool! A new reader! Welcome to the boards,The_Missing_Link! You too could have a chance to contribute to the story!

    Anyways,to everyone,I usually don't post chapters quickly,but I managed to write up this chapter long before I finished Chapter 5,so please consider it a blessing for making you wait so long for Chapters 4 and 5! Also,my next trivia quiz will be coming out soon. Speaking of which,this chapter contains the contribution of the winners of both the second Quizmaster prize from the first quiz contest and the contest itself! Enjoy!
    Quote Originally Posted by Zorak
    Ever wonder what it'd be like if a person who could barely speak English were to rom-hack one of the Pokemon games, replace the characters, plot, and Pokemon with ones of his own creation, while at the same time making a terrible mockery of the English language as a whole?

    Of course not. Because that'd suck really, really hard. Unfortunately, even though you didn't think about it, this guy did.

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    YAY!

    The result of my contest winnings are up!

    You couldn't have done better, Hack. I commend you. Katherine was even scarier than I imagined her to be when I sent you the info!

    Having Twilight tell the ghost story in the first place was a stroke of pure genius. I'm really starting to like this charater - sort of the sage of the group. I can't wait to see an actual duel involving this young soothsayer!

    Look forward to the next chapter!

    - Venusaur

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    Heh, I never would have imagined her as a villain! Excellent job with the idea, Venusaur, and nice portrayal, .hack! That was a good twist.

    I liked the "overcoming impossible odds" theme, though it may have been a bit over the top. I don't think even Yugi's ever faced those kinds of odds so many times in a single duel before! Regardless, though, it was good. Good description of Katherine and her monsters, and nice background. The campfire story scene was pretty good, too.

    I do think the dueling action could have been done a little bit better. I see too often fics that just have a bunch of actions in a row. This didn't reach that extreme, but it still could have used more nuances like description and tricky writing techniques. Not too many, mind you, but enough to make it really interesting. Remember to edit a little bit more, too! Those typos aren't fun to deal with, but they've got to be handled.

    This was good, though. I'm looking forward to your next chapter to see just how this will continue! Until then!
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