Well, Charlotte's right about one thing: a human and the mother being together is probably not a good thing in this case. I doubt a trainer would want a second Hoppip, after all. Though she might want a Jynx, which would be really disastrous. This has the potential to end badly, which is kind of surprising when you consider how the fic started. Very good mood shift here, and great work with adding that bit of uncertainty. I guess we'll just have to wait to see how it all works out.

Watch the length of your sentences, though. I noticed several cases where you combined two thoughts into one, and it got confusing at times. One example of this was the sentence that ended with Charlotte mentioning that the Skitty was in hibernation. There was a lot of material in that sentence especially, and it kind of got tangled up. It would have been easier to understand if you'd broken the single sentence up into several smaller ones. Also, you may want to cut your description back just a little. Some things don't need to be described too much, like the eating utensils or the girl's clothing. Unless they play a big part in the fic later on, you don't need to go overboard with information about them.

But otherwise, this is turning out nicely. The potential conflict could be very interesting, and everything is very clear. You've done well with the characters, as well. Good job with this. I'm looking forward to the final installment of this. Well, see you then!