Nice. I liked how Shane became a friend with Charlotte, and how he hoped to find his mom. The ending is really suspenseful, and I wonder what'll happen next. The girl with the Hoppip might be a nice person, but she could be an evil one too... I wonder. I'll just wait for the last part.

As always, awesome description. And it'd be wonderful to see you write more, as you used to. It'd be just too good if you continued "Somewhere out there", because I liked it a lot! Whether you do it or not, I'll be willing to read anything you come up with.

See you next chapter!